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Ye ek gareeb parivaar hain.

Rajendra (Father)- Age 48 hain aur ek majdur. Aur monthly 10 hajar rupees kama lete hain

Kusum- Rajendra ki wife hain aur age 38 hain. Ye ek housewife hain.

Dono hi pade likhe nahi hain par ache log hain.

Neel- ye hamara hero hain. Neel ki age 19 hain aur ye abhi study kar raha hain. Mind me thoda sharp hain aur jyada baat nahi karta lakin dimag bhale hi tej ho. study me iska dimag nahi lagta. Ye sabki kahani hain ap me se kon kon hain jo exam se ek din pahle hi kitaabe khol ke baithta hain ye bhi aisa hi hain.

Nikita- ye Neel ki chhoti bahan hain. Lakin sirf age me ye chhoti hain. Ye Neel ko jyadatar aise treat karti jaise Nikita badi ho. Lakin pyari bhi bahot hain. Bhai bahan wala jhagda aaye din hota hi rahta hain.

ye family ek Normal family ki trah hi hain. Yaha sirf ek baat strange hain vo hain Neel.

Vaise me bata du me pahli baar likh raha hu kuch. To koi galati ho jarur bataye.

Iska pahla update Aaj raat ko 10 baje aa jayega.

:congrats:for starting new thread bhai.

Intro toh mast hai. Short and sweet family.
 

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Neel subah ke 5 baje uthkar meditation kar raha hain. Kareen 6 baje meditation se free hokar Neel bad par letkar mobile chalane lag jaata hain. Chalate chalate subah 8 baj gaye. Neel ke papa Rajendra subah 5 baje hi apne kaam par chale gaye the.

bahar Neel ki mummy Kusum awaaj lagati hain.... Lala utha kab tak mobile chalata rahega utha ja ab.

neel bolta hain... Ha mummy bas uth raha hu 5 minute aur.

iske thodi der baad hi Neel uth jaata hain aur naha dhokar Neel apne exam ke liye ready ho jaata hain. Aaj Neel bsc ka last year ka first exam hain to Neel aaj college jaldi ja raha hain.

mummy me ja rahu... Itna bolkar Neel apni mummy ke pair chhuta hain aur nikalne ke liye apni 7 saal purani atlas ki cycle nikalta hain. Itne me hi Nikita aa jaati hain.

bhaiya mere bhi pair chhiyo tumko punya milega... Nikita itna bolkar apni ankhe badi aur chahre pe smile le aati hain.

hatt me aur tere pair chhiyu shakal dekhi hain....


ha tumse to achi hi hain..


peper hain uska aaj ladayi mat kar Nikita...... Mummy bich me aati hain aur Nikita ko dantne lagti hain.


neel bhi cycle lekar nikal jaata hain apne college jaha use exam dena hain. Aaj ka exam dene ke baad Neel ka agla exam 4 din baad hain.


Subah 10 baje college


neel yaha college ke bahar khada hain. College ke andar entry 11:30 pe milni thi to kuch college ke bahar khade the to kuch yaha vaha ghoom rahe the. 8 ladkiyo ka group bhi ek jagah khada tha. Jo apas me gappe mar rahi thi. In ladkiyo me ek ladki thi. Ladkiyo ka ye group kaaafi khubsurat ladkiyo se bhara huwa tha. Par inme se aisi koi ladki nahi thi jo neel ko pasand aa jaye.

Kuch der baad college ke andar entry hona suru ho jaati hain. Uske baad exam bhi start ho jaata hain. Sab log exam kar rahe hote hain.


exam Neel ke liye bahut hi easy tha. Kyuki lockdown hatne ke baad ye exam suru huwe the aur jo log is waqt exam de rahe hain unko pata hi hoga exam kyu easy hain. Akhir ek subject ke 3 part ko mix karke ek hi paper bana diya voh Multiple choice questions.

exam Neel ne half hour me complete kar diya. Ab Neel ne socha ye log time up hone ke baad hi answer sheet lenge to kyu na kuch der so liya jaaye.

kuch der hi huwi thi ke ek jor ka thappad Neel ke gal pe padta. Neel hadbada ke uthta hain aur zor se bolta hain ... Teri ma ki chuuuuu

Itna bolte hi Neel ruk jaata hain aur use hosh aata hain ki voh exam hall me hain aur thappad marne waala Shaqs uska examinar hain.

Examinar- tujhe sone ke liye kisne kaha tha. Pad kar to aate nahi hain tum jaise log aur yaha aake sone lag jaate ho. Answer sheet pe ek 500 ka note chipkake tum jaiso ko lagta hain pass ho jaoge.

Neel (gusse me) - aisa hain sir ye exam gayi baad me pahle ye batao aapne mujhe thappad kyu maara. Me abhi police apke khilaf complent karne ja raha hu. Voh laga hain camra jisme recording hain ki apne mujhe maara aur dusri baat maine mera paper complete kar liya hain.


examinar ki to dar ki wajah se hawa tight ho gayi. Examinar aaj ghar me Biwi se ladkar aaya tha aur yaha akaar apni frustration nikalna chahta tha. Jab usne Neel ko dekha to use aur gussa aa gaya aur Neel ko ye sab bolne laga tha. Examinar ne Neel se maafi mangi.


lakin Neel ki himmat dekhkar exam hall me baithi ladkiyo Neel se kuch kuch impress to ho gyi thi.


Neel ghaar gaya is shaam ke 4 baj rahe the. Aaj ke din isse jyada kuch khaash huwa nahi isi trah raat bhi ho aur sab sone chale gaye. Neel ne bhi kuch der mobile chalaya aur so gaya.


is raat me kahi aur prathvi se koso dur ek planet pe is waqt kuch log baate kar rahe the.

anajan 1- kya voh din aa gaya hain.

anjan 2- ji, asur mantri ji voh ghadi najdeek aa rahi hain bahut kam samay bacha hain jab hame hamare maharaj mil jayenge.

Asur mantri- jald hi hame hamare maharaj mil jayenge aur ham log ek fir se un insaano pe raaj kar payenge asur guru.

Asur guru- lakin mantri ji me us ghatna ko yaad karta hu to chinta ho jaati hain. Ki kahi koi gadbad na ho jaaye. Maharaaj milne ke baad me ham fir se shaktishaali ho jayenge. Aur ho sakta hain ek fir se ham hamare asur zinda ho jaaye.

Asur mantri- sab theek hoga hamare maharaaj burai aur kaali takato ke Badshah honge. Koi achhai unka kuch nahi bigaad sakti.
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Neel ne toh Examiner ki mast tarike se bajai. Saala biwi ka gussa kisi aur ke upar utarega. Neel ne sahi kiyaa. Exam uska hai woh soye yaa paper fhaad ke fhek de. Woh uska future hai woh jo chahe kare. Examiner ka koi haq nhi hai examinee pe haath uthane ka.

Udher Asuro ko unka naya Raja milne wala hai. Kyaa woh Raja Neel hai yaa koi aur.

Dekhte hai aage kyaa hota hai.
 

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Introduction
Ye ek gareeb parivaar hain.

Rajendra (Father)- Age 48 hain aur ek majdur. Aur monthly 10 hajar rupees kama lete hain

Kusum- Rajendra ki wife hain aur age 38 hain. Ye ek housewife hain.

Dono hi pade likhe nahi hain par ache log hain.

Neel- ye hamara hero hain. Neel ki age 19 hain aur ye abhi study kar raha hain. Mind me thoda sharp hain aur jyada baat nahi karta lakin dimag bhale hi tej ho. study me iska dimag nahi lagta. Ye sabki kahani hain ap me se kon kon hain jo exam se ek din pahle hi kitaabe khol ke baithta hain ye bhi aisa hi hain.

Nikita- ye Neel ki chhoti bahan hain. Lakin sirf age me ye chhoti hain. Ye Neel ko jyadatar aise treat karti jaise Nikita badi ho. Lakin pyari bhi bahot hain. Bhai bahan wala jhagda aaye din hota hi rahta hain.

ye family ek Normal family ki trah hi hain. Yaha sirf ek baat strange hain vo hain Neel.

Vaise me bata du me pahli baar likh raha hu kuch. To koi galati ho jarur bataye.

Iska pahla update Aaj raat ko 10 baje aa jayega.
congrets for new thread bro
hope you will try to complete this story
 

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Neel subah ke 5 baje uthkar meditation kar raha hain. Kareen 6 baje meditation se free hokar Neel bad par letkar mobile chalane lag jaata hain. Chalate chalate subah 8 baj gaye. Neel ke papa Rajendra subah 5 baje hi apne kaam par chale gaye the.

bahar Neel ki mummy Kusum awaaj lagati hain.... Lala utha kab tak mobile chalata rahega utha ja ab.

neel bolta hain... Ha mummy bas uth raha hu 5 minute aur.

iske thodi der baad hi Neel uth jaata hain aur naha dhokar Neel apne exam ke liye ready ho jaata hain. Aaj Neel bsc ka last year ka first exam hain to Neel aaj college jaldi ja raha hain.

mummy me ja rahu... Itna bolkar Neel apni mummy ke pair chhuta hain aur nikalne ke liye apni 7 saal purani atlas ki cycle nikalta hain. Itne me hi Nikita aa jaati hain.

bhaiya mere bhi pair chhiyo tumko punya milega... Nikita itna bolkar apni ankhe badi aur chahre pe smile le aati hain.

hatt me aur tere pair chhiyu shakal dekhi hain....


ha tumse to achi hi hain..


peper hain uska aaj ladayi mat kar Nikita...... Mummy bich me aati hain aur Nikita ko dantne lagti hain.


neel bhi cycle lekar nikal jaata hain apne college jaha use exam dena hain. Aaj ka exam dene ke baad Neel ka agla exam 4 din baad hain.


Subah 10 baje college


neel yaha college ke bahar khada hain. College ke andar entry 11:30 pe milni thi to kuch college ke bahar khade the to kuch yaha vaha ghoom rahe the. 8 ladkiyo ka group bhi ek jagah khada tha. Jo apas me gappe mar rahi thi. In ladkiyo me ek ladki thi. Ladkiyo ka ye group kaaafi khubsurat ladkiyo se bhara huwa tha. Par inme se aisi koi ladki nahi thi jo neel ko pasand aa jaye.

Kuch der baad college ke andar entry hona suru ho jaati hain. Uske baad exam bhi start ho jaata hain. Sab log exam kar rahe hote hain.


exam Neel ke liye bahut hi easy tha. Kyuki lockdown hatne ke baad ye exam suru huwe the aur jo log is waqt exam de rahe hain unko pata hi hoga exam kyu easy hain. Akhir ek subject ke 3 part ko mix karke ek hi paper bana diya voh Multiple choice questions.

exam Neel ne half hour me complete kar diya. Ab Neel ne socha ye log time up hone ke baad hi answer sheet lenge to kyu na kuch der so liya jaaye.

kuch der hi huwi thi ke ek jor ka thappad Neel ke gal pe padta. Neel hadbada ke uthta hain aur zor se bolta hain ... Teri ma ki chuuuuu

Itna bolte hi Neel ruk jaata hain aur use hosh aata hain ki voh exam hall me hain aur thappad marne waala Shaqs uska examinar hain.

Examinar- tujhe sone ke liye kisne kaha tha. Pad kar to aate nahi hain tum jaise log aur yaha aake sone lag jaate ho. Answer sheet pe ek 500 ka note chipkake tum jaiso ko lagta hain pass ho jaoge.

Neel (gusse me) - aisa hain sir ye exam gayi baad me pahle ye batao aapne mujhe thappad kyu maara. Me abhi police apke khilaf complent karne ja raha hu. Voh laga hain camra jisme recording hain ki apne mujhe maara aur dusri baat maine mera paper complete kar liya hain.


examinar ki to dar ki wajah se hawa tight ho gayi. Examinar aaj ghar me Biwi se ladkar aaya tha aur yaha akaar apni frustration nikalna chahta tha. Jab usne Neel ko dekha to use aur gussa aa gaya aur Neel ko ye sab bolne laga tha. Examinar ne Neel se maafi mangi.


lakin Neel ki himmat dekhkar exam hall me baithi ladkiyo Neel se kuch kuch impress to ho gyi thi.


Neel ghaar gaya is shaam ke 4 baj rahe the. Aaj ke din isse jyada kuch khaash huwa nahi isi trah raat bhi ho aur sab sone chale gaye. Neel ne bhi kuch der mobile chalaya aur so gaya.


is raat me kahi aur prathvi se koso dur ek planet pe is waqt kuch log baate kar rahe the.

anajan 1- kya voh din aa gaya hain.

anjan 2- ji, asur mantri ji voh ghadi najdeek aa rahi hain bahut kam samay bacha hain jab hame hamare maharaj mil jayenge.

Asur mantri- jald hi hame hamare maharaj mil jayenge aur ham log ek fir se un insaano pe raaj kar payenge asur guru.

Asur guru- lakin mantri ji me us ghatna ko yaad karta hu to chinta ho jaati hain. Ki kahi koi gadbad na ho jaaye. Maharaaj milne ke baad me ham fir se shaktishaali ho jayenge. Aur ho sakta hain ek fir se ham hamare asur zinda ho jaaye.

Asur mantri- sab theek hoga hamare maharaaj burai aur kaali takato ke Badshah honge. Koi achhai unka kuch nahi bigaad sakti.
superbb jabardast update bro
nice start
yee herooo ki kahani bdi dilchasp h
pdta nhi h phir bhi intelligent h
wese ye asur mantri bhi tpk gye phle hi update m
dekhte h kon h inka maharaj
or kha se inke milega
or kya ye puri duniya pr raaz kr payenge
agr nhi to kon rokega inhe
konsi acchai ki takat h jo inke raste ki badha banegi
let's wait for next update
 

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Neel ne toh Examiner ki mast tarike se bajai. Saala biwi ka gussa kisi aur ke upar utarega. Neel ne sahi kiyaa. Exam uska hai woh soye yaa paper fhaad ke fhek de. Woh uska future hai woh jo chahe kare. Examiner ka koi haq nhi hai examinee pe haath uthane ka.

Udher Asuro ko unka naya Raja milne wala hai. Kyaa woh Raja Neel hai yaa koi aur.

Dekhte hai aage kyaa hota hai.
ju to neel ko asurraj hi bna diye Jaguaar bhai
 

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ju to neel ko asurraj hi bna diye Jaguaar bhai
Ab isme meri kyaa galti. Sirf Neel ke baare mein hi bataya gaya aur phir sang sang Asurraj ki khoj. Ab mujhe laga aisa isiliye boldiyaa
 
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