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Waiting bhai
Wizard king kya huwa abhi tak update nahin aaya
Waiting for the next dhamkedaar update bro!!??
Bhai log down mein aap ki kahaniyan padh kar hi Time Pass Ho Raha Hai please please update thoda jaldi De aapke Kahani bahut badhiya hai aise hi Jari rakhen
Waiting for next
Waiting for the next dhamkedaar update bro!!??
Update Posted Guys
 

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Great update bhai
Sandarrrr updates bhai
Superb update dear....
superb update bro
Awesome update
Excellent..
That's too much interesting
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:yourock::yourock::yourock::yourock:
Gjb update bhai
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
Shandaar update bhai
Excellent birrilant fantastic good update

Hamesha ki trha behad shandar
Very Nice, Fantastic update ...................
Keep it up bro ...................
Waiting for next update ...................
Superb update
Hmm hero fight achi karta ha magar mujhe lagta ha ap ko improvement ki bhi zarorat ha abhi keep it up
Mast update bhai
Very nice update
Amazing Bhai
Thanks Guys for your feedback and support....
keep supporting.....
 

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Update10:

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Main ghar k andar aa gaya. Komal bhi fresh hokar saaf kapde pehan kar aa gayi thi. Jab mene Komal ko dekha to socha dikhne buri nahi hai. Sarir thoda patla hai, rang bhi utna gora nahi hai, par dikhne mein achhi hai. Phir hum sabne khana khaya. Khana khake Panditji ghar chale gaye. Wo kal nahi ane wale the. Kal Mandir me badi pooja hai to wo nahi aa sakte the. Payal aur Paras Komal se baat karna chahte the par mene unhe ye bol diya ki Komal bahut lamba safar tay kar k aayi hai, usko aram karne diya jaye. Wo dono bhi maan gaye aur apne room sone chale gaye. Komal ko mene apna room dikhaya aur agar kuchh jarurat hi yo mujhe bulane k liye bol diya. Wohi sone chali gayi. Main bhi apne room ake ,bed par let k aaj k din k bare me sochne lag gaya. Aise hi sochte sochte main so gaya.


Aab Aage:

Agle din main toda jaldi utha aur nasta banane lag gaya. Uske baad Payal aur Paras uthe.Mene unn dono ko Komal ko uthane bhej diya. Kuchh der baad sab log fresh hokar agaye aur hum logo ne nasta kar liya. Nasta karne k bad Main Komal main bola.

Main-
”To Komal, batao tume kahan chhod aaun.”

Komal-”Matlab.”

Main-”Matalab ki, Koi restedar hoga na tume unke pass chhod aaunga”

Komal-”Nahi, Mera ab iss duniya main koi nahi hai. Aap mujhe kisi saray pe chhod dijiye. Main wahan pe jake koi kaam dhund lungi.”

Main-”Achha ye batao tume konsa kaam ata hai.”

Komal-”Ji Mujhe ghar ka sab kaam ata hai. Aur Mujhe kapde mein Karigari ka bhi kaam ata hai. Hum log yahan kapde ka dukaan kholne arahe the ki raste mein-”

Itna bolkar wo rone lagi. Uske baad main use chup karane lag gaya. Thodi der baad wo jab chup hui, tab Payal ne bola.

Payal-
”Kaka, aap Komal ko yahan rehne do na hum logo k sath.”

Itna bol kar wo mujhe ummid bhari nagahon se dekhne lagi. Thode samay baad mein bola.

Main-
”Thik hai, mujhe kuchh paresani nahi hai. Lekin agar Komal yahan pe rehna chahti hai ki nahi, wo usse puchho.”

Payal Komal k tarfa dekhi tab ussne bhi haan me sar hila diya. Uske baad mein bachho ko upar tayar hone k liye bhej diya. Aur main Komal se baat karne lag gaya.

Main-
”Dekho Komal, ab tum hamre sath rehne wali ho tumhe kuchh baten pata honi chahiye. Payal aur Paras k Mata,Pita ab nahi rahe.Unhe gujare hue 2-3 mahina hoga. Bas 2 din pehle hi unke Dada,Dadi ka bhi nidhan ho gaya hai. Isiliye kabhi bhi khud ko akela mat samjho. Aur ek baat haan aaj se wo dono Magic School padhne ja rahe hai.Ab chalo tum bhi tayyar ho jao. Hum sab ek sath jayenge.Agar tumhe kuchh puchna hai to puchho.”

Komal-”Ji wo aap ka naam.”

Main-”Main to batana hi bhul gaya. Mera naam Abhayendra hai par mujhe Abhi bula sakti ho.Ab chalo jao tayyar ho jao.”

Uske baad wo upar tayar hone chali gayi aur main ghodo k pass chala gaya. Main ghodo ko chara diya aur ek ghode ko Tanga k sath bandh diya. Uske baad sab bazar chale gaye. Bazar mein jake mene pehle 20 Aam bech diye. Uske baad sab kliye naye kapde aur jaruri saman bi kharid liye. Komal k kapde kaam liye bi saman kharid liye. Phir bachho k school k liye jo bhi saman tha wo kharid liye Dopehar se pehle hum log ghar pahunch gaye. Ab khana komal ne banaya tha. Khana bahut tasty tha. Uske baad sab log Tala pass beth gaye. Ab khali samay tha to mene jake practice karne laga. Main practice kar raha tha to sab mujhe ghur rahe the. Mere Pactice karne k baad mein fresh hogaya, phir hum log talab k pass beth gaye. Kal se Payal aur Paras school suru ho jayega. Isi liye aaj inko khelne diya. Phir jake sham me unhe do aur Aam khane ko diye. Phir raat ka khana khake hum log so gaye.

Phir agle din subah, meri der se aankh khuli kyun ki bahut din baad practice kiya tha. Aaj khana Komal ne banaya tha. Khane k baad hum sab school chale gaye.School pahunchte hi meri nazar samne rakhi tanga par padi. Usme jab ek aadmi nikla usko dekh kar mera gussa satve asman par chali gayi. Mera haath apne aap mere Blade par chala gaya. Lekin uske baad tange se ek aaurat nikli usko dekh kar mere aansu nikal aye. Mene khud ko sambhala, phir bachhe bi tange se utar gaye Uske baad dusre tange se bi kuchh bachhe nikle. Uske baad bache school chale gaye aur main baar k taraf chala gaya.Mene Komal ko Haria Kaka ka dukaan dikhaya. Usko apne kapde k dukaan k liye aga sahi lagi. Mene bagal wale dukaandar se baat ki aur dukaan saf karwane k liye bol diya. Komal ko bhi dukaan mein bhi jo badlab karwana tha ya naya furniture chahiye tha wo sab bagalwale dukaandar ko bata diya aur mene mudraye dedi.Uske baad hum log gar chale aye. Komal dopehar ka khana banane lagi aur main practice karne lag gaya.Uske baad um logon ne dopehar ka khana khaya. Sham ko hum log bachho ko lane chale gaye. School chutti hone k baad hum log bazar chale gaye. Bachhe bazar mein ghumne lage aur main Ramu Kaka
(Haria Kaka k Bgalwale khet k malik, jo abhi Haria kaka k khet aur dukaan sambhal rahe hain) k pass chala gaya. Unko apne dukaan k bare mein bata diya.Uske baad hum log ghar aagaye aur raat ka khana khake so gaye.

Aise hi
10 din bit gaye, ab khana Komal hi bana rahi thi kyun ki mera khana kisiko bhi pasand nahi aya. Komal ab bachho k sath pura ghul mil gayi thi.Subah main bachho ko choodne jata aur Komal dukaan chali jati. Phir sham ko main bachho ko leke Komal k paas chala jata aur phir hum sab log ghar chale aate. Jo aadmi aur aaurat mujhe pehle din school main dikhe wo phir nahi dikhe.Pandit ji bhi ab 10 din mein 3 baar aye the.Unhe Komal ka Kapde ka kaam bhi bahut pasand aaya. Kal Academy ka test hai. Mera maan thoda ghabra raha tha. Phir socha jo hoga deka jayega. Aaj mene Practice nahi kari.Aaj ka din bhi aise hi nikal gaya. Academy test mein bhag lene k liye Aryabart Samrajya k sabhi deshon k bhi nagarik aur sainik bhi aye the. Kul mila k 500 k upar pratiyogi aye the aur sirf 200 ka chayan hona tha. Pehle Ganit(Mathematics), Sahitya( Litrature), Sishatchar(Etiquette) aur pir dopehar k baad Sangeet(Music), Ghodsavari(Horse Riding), AshtraVidhya(Weapons) ka test honewala tha.

Yahan pe sabhi desho k Raja ya Rajyapratinidhi aye the Saath mein Aryavart k alag alag desh k General bhi aye the. Academy ka test dekhne k liye Magic School k baccho ko bhi bulaya gaya tha. Sadharan Janta bhi dekhne aa sakte hain. Par unhe uske liye bahut Mudraye dene padte hai. Har Pratiyogi k saath ek aadmi ja sakta hai. Isiliye Mein Komal ko legaya. Bachhe to Magic School se ja sakte hain.



Geography of Aryavart :


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Aryavart Samrajya mein 7 desh hain. Jo ki Dev Nagri,Veerah, Himavatkuski, Rayadweep, Dweepakalp, Kaantar Nagar aur Akshat Nagar. De Nagri Aryavar ki Raajdhani hai. Aryabart k Padosi desh hain Sumeru,Huna, Aaravi. Aryavart ka sir Sumeru desh k sath acchhe sambandh hai. Baki desh k sath Aryavart ka sambandh kuchh thik nai hai. Bahut Lambi yudhh k baad abhi Yudhh Viram pe hai.

Dev Nagri:

Aryavart ki raajdhani hai Dev Nagri. Dev Nagri ka Nagar des k bichh mein hai. West aur North pe jungle aur pahade hain. East mein Nadi(River) hai. South mein yadatar upjaw jamin hai. Uske baad Pahad hai.

Dweepkalp:

Aryavart k sabse nicche ka desh. Ye jagah k tino side Samudra hai aur upar Pahad hai. Ye ek Aved kila ki tarah hai Dweepkalp k bichh mein pura ghana jungle hai. Yahan k praj Samundar k kinare rehte hain Ye jaga Samudri karobar k liye prassidh hai. Dweepkalp ki raajdhani pura South pe hai. Dweepkalp k south mein ek dweep hai, Rakshaka, waan par koi jata nahi hai.
(Age jaa kar ye raaz khulega).

Veerah:

Dev Nagri k West wala Desh hai. Ye desh ki raajdhani North side par hai. Yahan se Sumeru desh k saath byabasay hota hai. Veera k south mein West Sea hai aur west mein Rayadweep desh hai. Veerah aur Rayadweep k bich mein ek bahut badi Desert hai.

Rayadweep:

Aryavart ki Pascimi Des hai. Iski Raajdani South k taraf hai. Ye jagah pura sukha hai. West side mein Aaravi aur North pe Sumeru hai.Aryavart ki west side k suraksha ka jimma iske upar hai. Yudhh Viram k baad bhi humle hote rehte hai. Kabhi Jamin se to Kabhi samudra se. Par yahan k sainik pure josh k sath ladte hai.

Himavatkuski:

Aryavart ki North side sima ka desh. Ye jagah pura Barile pahadiyon se ghira rehta hai Iska Raadani South k taraf hai. North Side pe Huna Desh hai. Iss Desh k uttari sima k tara bahut badi badi pahad hai jahan pe bahut hi raaz hai. Isiliye Huna des bhi iss taraf nai ata.
(Yahan ka raaz bhi baad mein khulega).

Kaantar Nagar:

Ye desh Dev Nagri k east side pe hai. Ye desh ki raajdhani East k taraf hai.Ye jagah ka jyadatar hissa jungle,nadi aur pahadon se ghira hua hai. North side pe Huna Desh hai aur South mein East Sea hai. Nadi k bajeh se South aur East side ki jamin upjaw hai. Isiliye yaan par yadatar khet hoti hai.

Aakshat Nagar:

Ye Aryavart ki sabse East side mein rehne wala desh hai. Iske jyadatar simayen samundar se ghiri hui hai. Iska Raajdhani west side mein hai. North side ka thoda hissa Huna Desh k saath uda hua hai. Yahan ki Navy sabse best hai. Huna ne Yudhh k samay bahut kosis ki par iske Navy ko nahi hara sake.Lekin nukshan bahut hua. Yahan par jyadatar kheti hoti hai.
(Payal aur Paras yahan k Prince aur Princess hai).

To aaj yahan sabhi 7 deshon k Raja ya Rajparatinidhi aye the. Aur wo bhi aya tha.
Amazing Bhai bahut bhdia update
 

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Update8:

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Aise hi baat karte karte sham ho gayi. Pandit ji ghar me kawach laga diye aur Mandir chale gaye. Kal jabtak wo naa aye ghar se bahar na nikalne k liye bol diya tha. Raat ko kisika khane ka man nahi tha Payal aur Paras chup chap bethe the. Kuchh hi mahino mein unhone apne maa, pita, dada, dadi ko kho diya tha. Bahut muskil se unhone khana khaya aur mene unhe yahan se kal jana hai bol diya. Pehle to wo log bahut roye uske baad samjhane se samajh gaye aur phir hum sab log ek saath so gaye.

Aab Aage:


Agle din Jab Panditji aye tab hum log nikal gaye apne naye ghar ki taraf. Ye ghar bhi hame khali karna tha to hum logo ne bail gadi pe sab jaruri saman bandh kar le gaye. Payal aur Paras kuchh dukhi dikh rahe the. Ab issme kya kar sakte hain. Jo unke bachpan se ghar hai, jis ghar me unke mata, pita, dada, dadi ki yaad hai, wo ghar chhod k jane mein kuchh to dukh lagega.

Pehle hum log sidha Prantadhikari k pass chale gaye. Waha pe wo Rajaswa Adhikari bhi tha. Hum logo ne wahan par apne and ka maksad bataya. Kar me Ek Raupya Mudra byaz sun k Prantadhikari pura gussa hogaye. Unhone bina kuch be Rajaswa Adhikari ko hawa me utha k patak diya. Bichara wo sirf chillata raha lekin uth nahi pa raha tha. Uske Sainik ake usko bandi bana kar le gaye. Uske baad Unhone Haria Kaka k sare kar sahi hisab se liye. Ab Jitni bhi jamin thi sab Paras aur Payal k naam thi. Aur mera naam abhi uss ne abhibhavaak(Guardian) k gaur par likhawaya gaya jo ki mera asli naam hai. Mera naam hai,
Abhayendra. Wahan se nikal kar hum log apne naye ghar k taraf chal diye.


Ye ghar
Northeast k aakhari chhor pe hai. Ye Ghar baki gharon se thode duri par tha. Ye ek do manjila pakka ghar tha. Nichhe bethne k liye jagah tha aur kitchen tha. Aur upar sone k liye tin kamre the. Ghar k charo taraf pakki diwar thi. Ghar k pichhe ek kuan(Well)tha. Ghar mein sab saman pehle se hi tha. Upar dono kamre mein bed tha. Ghar k pichhe pahadi tha. Aur ek talab bhi tha.

Main-
“ Pandit ji, yahan to ghar k pichhe pahadi hai aur ghar bhi sabse dur hai. Suraksha k liye kya ye jagah sahi rahega.”

Pandit ji-“ Tum nischint raho Beta, ye pahadi, talab aur mera ghar pura surakshit hai. Ye ghar Mera purvajo ka hai. Tab iss duniya k jo sabse sakti Sali Wizard the, wo mere purvaj hi the. Unke marne se pehle unhone apni sari sakti samet kar ye sab kawach mein bandh diya. Koi bhi galat bhavna se yahan par nahi aa sakta.”

Main-“Ji shukriya Panditji”

Phir hum ne upar k taraf chal diye. Upar tin kamre the aur do bathroom the. Sab kamre me pehle hi bed aur table aur kursiyan the.

Pandit Ji-
“ Beta, tum log aaj aaram karo. Kal jake tumhari aur Bachho k admission k liye jayenge.”

Main-“ Ji Panditji, jaisa aap kahen.”

Uske baad Pandit ji chale gaye. Phir hum sab ne saman set kar diya. Phir dopehar ka khana khake hum log Talab k passs jake beth gaye.

Main-
“ Payal, Paras aise dukhi rehne se kuchh nahi hoga.”

Paras-“ Par Kaka, Yaad to aa rahi hai. Jitna bhi kosis karu par apne aap ko rok nahi sakta.”

Main-“ Main janta hun tum dono ko kaisa mehsoosh ho raha hai. Mene bhi apne Mata,pita, apne priyajano ko kho diya hai. Tab me 6 saal ka tha.Yaad to mujhe bhi aati hai. Lekin ye socho agar tum is tarah rahe to kya unsabki aatma ko khushi milegi. Tumhare Dada, Dadi chahte the kintuk dono apna jivan hasi khusi bitao.”

Payal-“ Hum kosis karenge Kaka.”

Main-“ Pata hai ki aaj Panditji kya keh rahe the.”

Paras-“ Kya.”

Main-“ Panditji keh rahe the ki tum log bhi jadu kar sakte ho.”

Payal-“ Sach me. Par kaise.”

Main-“ Kal hum sab jayenge. Magic School me tumhara admission karne. Wahan pe tumhe Magic k bare mein sab bataenge.”

Paras-“ Par hum Magic sikh kar kya karenge.”

Main kucch soch te hue bola.

Main-
“ Agar kabhi mujhe jarurat pade to tum meri madad kareena. Jaise Panditji aur wo Healer Magician ne ki. Aur phir se unn logo ne hum pe humla kiya tab tum meri raksha karna. Dekha nahi main dono samay ghayal ho gaya.”

Payal-“ Main jarur apki raksha karungi.”

Aise hi hum logo ne baat ki aur Sham ko ghar m andar aa gaye. Phir raat ka khana khake sogaye.

Phir Kal subah Panditji k and k baad hum log Magic School k taraf chal diye.

Jab Hum Magic School pahunche to use dekh k mujhe bada jhatka laga. Kyun itni badi building mene ajj tak nahi dekhi thi. Pehle hum Magic School k Pradhan sikshak se mile. Unhone Paras aur Payal k test k liye bhej diya. Jab un logo ko pata chala k Payal aur Paras k 10 Meredian khule hain to wo log bahut khush hue. Aur jaldi se dono ka admission karwa diya gaya.

Uss k baad Mene Pandit ji k sath bachho k bhej diya. Aur Sena Mukhyalaya k taraf chala gaya. Aur wahan apne ane ka karan bataya. Waise bhi iss baar Academy k test k liye sena se bahut Sainik aa rahe the to kisine ne bhi jyada puchh tachh nahi ki. Uske baad mujhe apne sath hathiyar rakhne ki anumati patra bhi mil gaya. Ye anumati Patra dikha kar mein kisi bhi Lauhar se hathiyar bana sakta hun ya kharid sakta hun. Par Dev Nagri k rule k hisab se mein Dhanush aur Arrows kharid sakta hun par usee mujhe andar hi rakhna hoga. Wo Anumati Patra leke me sabse pehle ek Lauhar k paas chala gaya. Wahan pe mene 1 Dhanush, 12 Arrows, 2 Long Knife, aur 1 Blade kharid liya. Itne Hathiyar kyun ki ye meri ek aadat thi jab mein sainik tha. Uske baad mein 4 Wooden Swords, aur kuchh lakdi aur ghas k putliyan kharid liya aur unko shidha mere ghar bhejne k liye bol diya. Lauhar ko kuchh jyada Mudraye dedi kyun ki ye kaam wo jaldi kare. Wahan se mein Ghar k taraf chala gaya.

Mein West me tha aur hamara ghar North East me tha. Jab mein pehle aya tha tab Northwest k gate se aya tha. Pata nahi kyun mujhe aaj phir se wo jhode p jane ka maan hua. Mene ek Ghoda(Horse) kharid liya. Aur uss taraf chala gaya. Abhi lagbhag Dopehar hua tha ki mein jhopdi k paas pahunch gaya. Jhopdi k bahar ek ped pe mene horse ko bandh diya. Mein jhopdi k andar jake dekha to sab kuchh waisa ka waisa hi tha. Pata nahi kyun aaj mujhe yahan ane k maan hua. Jaise hi mene jhopdi bahar nikal muje ek awaz sunayi diya.
Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai.
Update interesting hai bhai.payal or paras or Abhi ka admission ho gya
But pyal or paras ke 10 meredian or abhi ke sirf 7 to kaise apna abhi sbse jayda powerful bnega.
 

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Update9:

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Mein West me tha aur hamara ghar North East me tha. Jab mein pehle aya tha tab Northwest k gate se aya tha. Pata nahi kyun mujhe aaj phir se wo jhode p jane ka maan hua. Mene ek Ghoda(Horse) kharid liya. Aur uss taraf chala gaya. Abhi lagbhag Dopehar hua tha ki mein jhopdi k paas pahunch gaya. Jhopdi k bahar ek ped pe mene horse ko bandh diya. Mein jhopdi k andar jake dekha to sab kuchh waisa ka waisa hi tha. Pata nahi kyun aaj mujhe yahan ane k maan hua. Jaise hi mene jhopdi bahar nikal muje ek awaz sunayi diya.


For Reference:

Blade:


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Long knife:


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5 Magic Levels:


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Aab Aage:

Ye awaz Ghodon(Horses) ki thi. Jaise ghode daud rahe ho. Par ye awaz dhimi thi. Ab bhai kya kare jigyansa(Curiosity) ye ek kida hai jab kisi ko kat ti hai na, dimag kharab kar ke rakh deti hai. Aur yahi haal mera bhi hua. Mene bhi curiosity k chalte badh gaya apni marane k aur(awaz ki aur). Kuchh der chal ne k baad mujhe kuchh chikhe sunayi di. Main chaukanna ho gaya. Mene Dhanush k kaman me arrow laga diya. Aur dhire dhire age badhta chala gaya. Kuchh der badne k baad mujhe kuchh lash dikhi. Mene jindegi me bahut hi lash dekhi hai. Isiliye mujhe inse pharak nahi padta. Par lashon ko dekh k aisa laga ye kisi Janwar ka kaam nahi par kisi giroh ka kaam hai. Phir mujhe kaki ki wo baat yaad agayi, jisme unhone luteron ka jikar kiya tha. Phir me thoda age badh gaya. Mujhe kuchh logon k hasne ki awaz arahe thi aur kisi chillane ki. Ye koi ladki ki awaz hai. Main jaldi se uss taraf badh gaya. Aur uske baad jo mene dekha mera khoon khol gaya.

Kuchh aadmi ek ladki ko bina kapdo k ussko lita diya. Char aadmi uske haath par pakad rakhe the. Phir 5th aadmi apne kapde utar raha tha. Jaise hi usne apne kapde utar kar ladki k upar ane laga. Tab kahan se ek arrow ake uske aankh mein ghus gaya. Aur wo nikal gaya. Ye arrow mene hi chalaya tha. Ye arrow chalake mein ped k pichhe chup ke dusra arrow kaman pe lagaya. Uss aadmj k girte hi baki char aadmi chaukanna ho gaye. Jaise hi wo log uthe tab phir se ek k aankh mein ek Arrow ghus gaya. Wo log abhi ped k pichhe chup gaye. Itne wo ladki apna kapada samet kar ek ped k pas beth gayi. Ab me bhi dhire dhire age badhne laga. Itne me ek khanjar udta hua mere pas aya. Mene apna Dhanush phek diya aur phauran apna 2 Long Knifes jo mere apne kamar k pichhe bandh ke rakhi thi, wo nikali aur jo khanjar mere taraf aa raha tha to usko mod ne k liye war kiya. Par jaise hi wo mere se takrane wala tha wo ghum gaya aur mere pet ke paas and laga. Waqt rehte me ghum gaya, nahito phirse mere pet me kuchh ghus jata. Mene ghum te waqt dekh liya ki ek lutera apne haath se kuchh usare kar raha tha. Sala ye Magician lagta hai. Phirse wo khanjar mere taraf badh raha tha. Achha tha ki mere dono hath me hathiyaar the warna aaj to meri lag jati. Main jaise taise kar ke khanjar se bach raha tha. Lekin har bar se bachne k baad me ankhe tedhi kar k uss lutera ko dekh raha tha. Jaise mujhe laga ki me abhi uss pe hamla kar sakta hun tab mene apna ek Long Knife uss k taraf phek diya. Par sala wo pura chaukanna tha, wo khanjar mere long knife ko block kardiya. Lekin main bhi kam chalak nahi tha, mene ek long knife phekne k baad fauran hi dusra wow bhi phek diya. Wo lutera is k liye ready nahi tha, aur wo dusra long knife sidha uss k dil mein ghus gaya. Ab mere paas ek Blade tha, Blade talwar se chhota hota hai,aur long knife se bada aur use ek side hi dhar rehta hai. Ab mene apna Blade nikal diya, aur baki dono ko dekhne laga. Par wo dono mujhe kahin nahi hai dikhe. Main Ladki ki taraf dekha wo ek taraf dekh rahi thi. To mujhe bhi yakin ho gaya, baki dono bhi udhar hi honge. Main bhi uss taraf chal diya.

Thoda age badhte hi. Mere upar se chillane ka awaz aya. Mene Blade ko apne sar k taraf kar k upar dekhne laga. Ek aadmi ped se mere upar kud raha tha. Bewakuf kahin ka. Sala humla karne k time koi chhillake humla karta hai kya. Uska talwar mere Blade pe laga. Uske baad usne mere right, left me humla kiya main ne usko apne Blade se rok diya. Jaise ho wo mere pet pe marne k liye war kiya mein ghum gaya aur mere Blade sidha uske gardan k aar par ho gayi. Ab uske bad kya hua bol k fyda bhi nahi hai. Lekin wo sala aakhri wala kahan hai. Tab sala pichhe se ladki k chillane ki awaz aayi. Wo aadmi ladki k gardan par talwar rakh diya tha. Achha hua ladki ne kapde pahan liye the. Wo jor se ro rahi thi.

Lutera-
“ Jaldi se apne hathiyar phek de, barna me iss ladki ko mar dunga.”

Main abhi apna Blade pekh kar dono haath upar kar uss k paas dhire dhire badh gaya. Main uss Magician lutera k paas pahunch gaya. Wo lutera mujhe rukne k liye bola. Main ruk gaya aur nichhe ek per kar k beth gaya. Uske baad wo sala hasne laga. Ye uski jindegi ki aakhri Hansi thi. Kyun ki jab wo has raha tha, uska dhyan mere upar se hat gaya tha. Mene apne right hand se mera long knife Magician Lutera k Sine se nikala aur uske taraf phek diya. Mera knifr sidha ladki k kaan k pas se uske sar pe lagi. Aur ladki ki chikh nikal gayi. Aur wo aadmi pichhe ki taraf gir gaya. Ab mamla khatam hua. Uske baad main ladki k pas jake bola.

Main-
“ Daro mat, main tumhe kuchh nahi karunga. Ye sab bhi khatam ho gaya. Ye sab mar gaye hai. Ab tumhe dar ne ki jarurat nahi hai.”

Ladki-“ Aap mere sath jabardasti nahi karenge na. Aap mujhe nahi marenge na.”

Main-“ Nahi Marunga nahi jabardasti karunga, Chalo yahan se chalte hain, ye jagah khatre se khali nahi hai. Yahan pe unke aur bhi aadmi ho sakte hain.”

Uske baad mene jake apne sare hathiyar, arrows k sath samet liya. Sab laash k paas jake acche se check in kiya. Mujhe sab k paas se kuchh Mudraye jarur mili. Ab wo Mudraye unke kaam ki to nahi thi, to mene le liya. Uske baad ek arrow ko kaman me lagake main age badh chala . Thode dur pe mujhe Ghodon ki awaz aayi. Main uss taraf badh gaya. Wahan pe panch ghode the. Ghodon k side mein saman bandhe hue the. Main ne ladki ko ek ghode pe bithaya aur baki char ko rassi mein bandh kar leke age chal pada. Age aake hum log uss jag aa pahunch gaye jahan pe kuchh logon ki lashen padi thi. Ladki ghode se utar kar unn logo k paas jake rone lagi. Mene usko kuchh samay rone diya aur charo taraf dekhne laga. Wahan pe ek Tanga(Horse Carriage) tha. Yahan pe mujhe jyada der rukna thik nahi laga tab mene ladki se bola.

Main-
“ Ye jagah khatre se khali nahi hai. Hame chalna chahiye.”

Ladki-“Par mere Mata, Pita aur Bhai hain. Main inko kaise chhod k ja sakti hun.”

Main-“ Inko hum log aise Nagar ke andar nahi le ja sakte, iInka antim sanskar yahin karna hoga par ye jagah thik nahi hai.Chalo pehle inko tanga mein lad dete hai.”

Itna bol k mene sab ki laash ko Tanga mein dal kar ladki k saath uss jhopdi mein chala gaya. Phir sab k lash ko jhopdi k andar rakh kar. Jhopdi ko aag laga di. Apne mata,pita aur bhaiyon ki chita jalte dekh ladki rone lag gayi. Mene uski chup karaya aur Tanga k paas aa gaya. Mene jake apne ghode ki sab k sath bandh diya. Pancho ghode me jo saman tha, usse tanga mein rakh diya. Ab ladki tanga k samne beth gayi aur mein ek ghode pe beth k baki sab ghodo ko rassi se bandh kar nagar ki taraf chal diya. Ab me to thehra lalchi insaan. Isiliye main jate jate Aam k ped dhund raha tha thode der baad wo bhi mujhe mil gaya. Isiliye jate jate mene 25 Aam tod diye.

Main-
“ Tum ne kabhi Aam khaye hain.”

Ladki ne Naa me sar hilaya. To mene ek Aam usko khane k liye de diya. Usko khate hi uska chehra thoda achha hua.

Main-
“Kya Naam h tumhara.”

Ladki-“Komal”

Main-“Abhi hum Nagar thode duri pe hai. Isiliye hume jaldi chalna hoga.”

Komal ne haan me sar hilaya. Uske bad hum log Nagar k taraf teji se nikal gaye.

Nagar pe pahunch te hi shaam ho gayi. Par Dwar abhi band nahi hua tha. Mene Dwar k sainik ko Luteron k bare mein bata diya. Pehle to wo log bahut gussa hue ki Komal k parivar ko mar diya,aur uske sath balatkar karne ki koshish bhi ki. Par jaise unhe pata chala ki mene sahi samay pe use bachaya aur un Luteron ko mar diya, tab wo log bahut khush hue. Nagar k andar hum log jaldi chal nahi sakte, yahan ka rule hai. Isiliye ghar pahunch te pahunch te raat ho gayi.

Jab main ghar k andar pahuncha to dekha Paras aur Payal udaas bethe the. Pandit ji unhe khane k liye bol rahe the, par wo khana nahi kha rahe the. Mujhe dekte hi ,wo dono ake mujhse lipat kar rone lage.

Main-
“Kya hua tum dono ko, aise ro kyun rahe ho.”

Payal-“ Hame laga aap bhi hame chhod k chale gaye.”(Rote hue)

Main-“ Aisa kabhi ho sakta hai, ki main apne pyare bachho ko chhod k chala jaun. Main to tum logo k liye aam lane gaya tha. Ye dekho.”

Itna bol kar main ne unhe aam dikhaya. Aur un dono ko ek ek Aam diya. Wo dono khush ho gaye aur Aam khane lage. Mene Pandit ji ko bhi ek diya par unhone mana kar diya. Uske baad mene Komal ka parichay sab se karwaya. Uske baad mene Komal ko tisre room me rehne k liye dikhane le gaya. Usse bathroom bhi dikhaya aur fresh hone k liye bol k chala gaya. Usska saman mene uske room me rakh diya. Uske baad mene Tanga se luteron ka saman leke apne room me rakh diya aur baki jo Komal k parivar ka tha use nichhe rakh diya. Phir mene Tanga se Ghoda ko nikal kar baki Ghodon k sath ek khunte mein bandh diya aur chara dal diya (jab mene ghoda kharida tha tab ghode bale ko mere ghar chara bhejne k liye bol diya tha,kuchh jyada Mudraye deke).

Main ghar k andar aa gaya. Komal bhi fresh hokar saaf kapde pehan kar aa gayi thi. Jab mene Komal ko dekha to socha dikhne buri nahi hai. Sarir thoda patla hai, rang bhi utna gora nahi hai, par dikhne mein achhi hai. Phir hum sabne khana khaya. Khana khake Panditji ghar chale gaye. Wo kal nahi ane wale the. Kal Mandir me badi pooja hai to wo nahi aa sakte the. Payal aur Paras Komal se baat karna chahte the par mene unhe ye bol diya ki Komal bahut lamba safar tay kar k aayi hai, usko aram karne diya jaye. Wo dono bhi maan gaye aur apne room sone chale gaye. Komal ko mene apna room dikhaya aur agar kuchh jarurat hi yo mujhe bulane k liye bol diya. Wohi sone chali gayi. Main bhi apne room ake ,bed par let k aaj k din k bare me sochne lag gaya. Aise hi sochte sochte main so gaya.
Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai...
Abhi na Bina magic ke magician luttre ko haraya kabile tarif ..
Komal ke liye dukh hua..
Paras or payal ke emotions ka aapne ache se dikhaya..but ek BT Avi to smjh nhi aai Jo jhopdi Abhi ne jalaya .mujhe yad hai starting usi jhopdi se hua ta story ka abhi so jhopdi pahucha kaise tha iska v jawab Avi tk nhi mila
 
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