Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

[abhi1008]

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[Black water]

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[Pradeep singh]

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[Vickey1211]

Update - 25

abhi tak aapne dekha....
Abhi & frnds ka outing k liye jaana.....
mauj masti k saath din ki ...samapti....aur Abhi ko kuch aawaj aana......aur Sweety aur Divya k tent mein dekhna...

ab aage.....

maine unke tent mein dekha toh dono waha nahi thi.....aur unka tent bhi piche se fata hua tha.....

muzhe kisi bahut bade khatre ka andesha hone laga ....tabhi .....
piche zhadiyon mein se kuch aawaj aayi mein turant waha jaakar dekhne laga toh kuch dikhayi nahi de raha tha.
wapas unke tent mein aaya toh ek jagah kuch khoon k nishan dekhkar ,
dil aur ghabrane laga.....

tabhi khyal aaya ki Addu bhi tent mein akeli hai........mein daudkar waha gaya toh , usse aaram se sota hua dekhkar
meri jan mein jaan aayi.....

mein ab soch mein pad gaya kya karu
agar unko dhundne jaata hu toh yaha kuch aur gadbad na ho jaaye ..aur yadi na jaau toh apni hi nazaro mein gir jaaunga......tabhi muzhe dad ka khayal aaya ....toh meine unko call karne ki sochi.......jab cell mein dekha toh ....network nahi aaraha tha...

phir maine kuch socha......aur sab tent mein jaskar sab ko jagaaya ,
jab sab log ek jagah ikkatha hua....
sab soch rahe the ...aisi kya baat hui hai ...meine unko itni raat ko jagaya

sab meri tarf hi dekh rahe the....

di - kya baat hai betu tune hum sabko itni raat ko ekattha kiya hua hai....
aur itna pareshan kyu lag raha hai....

mein - sabhi pahle shaant ...ho jaao
aur dyan se meri baat suno....

tab maine unko saari baat batayi..

jisse sukar sab pareshan ho rahe the

Rimpy - Abhi ....kaise bhi kar ke hume unhe dhundna hoga ...mein unke parents ko kya jawab dungi.....
pata nahi kya hua hoga mera dil bahu ghabra raha hai...

mein - aise ghabrane se kuch nahi hoga......hume dhyarya se kaam lena hoga...

di - Abhi ...Addu kahi dikh nahi rahi hai ...kaha hai woh

mein - di abhi woh tent mein so rahi hai....
di - Betu ab yaha tent mein safe nahi hai ...tum yahi ruko mein addu ko lekar aati hu ....
di saath 4 sameer aur bhanu bhi chal diye....
tabhi waha kuch 20 commandos ki team aayi ...aur .....
mein soch hi raha tha ..ki ab yeh kaun hai........tabhi unka chief bol pada..

Chief - Sir hum aapki hi security k liye hai ... R.V.S sir ne hi appoint kiya hai

Tab tak di bhi addu ko lekar aagayi


chief -hum dur se hi aap sab par najar banaye rakhte hai......

hume waha jungle mein kuch hulchul mehsus hui aur kuch awaaje aayi

....usski ka pata karne jaa hi rahe the ki tabhi hume unn 4 commandos ka signal mila jo aapke shivir k piche ki securtiy dekh rahe the

jab hum waha ...pahunche toh... waha unki laashe padi hui thi ....

humne aapko alert karne k liye call lagaya toh dekha sab k mob k network hi band hai......yaha tak ki satellite ph bhi band pad gaye hai......

maine unhe yaha jo hua bataya.....
to chief ne kaha

chief - aaplogo ka yaha rahna abhi thik nahi hai.....aap log abhi yaha se jaao aap ke saath 10 commandos jaayenge ...hum yaha dekh lenge

sab aapas mein baat kane lage

sameer - Nahi sir hum sab aaye hai toh saath jab tak hamare dono frnds ka pata nahi lagta hum yahi rahenge

chief ne samzhane ki koshish ki lekin koi sunnane ko tayyar nahi tha

tab tay hua ki 10 com yaha rahenge

mein - Sir mein bhi aapke saath chalunga...yeh sab meri hi jimmedari par aaye hai

chief ne bahut mana kiya ...

mein - aap shayad bhul gaye hai k mein kiska beta hu ...aise darkar dubakna mein nahi kar sakta....

sameer - mein bhi chalunga saath mein.
mein - nahi Sameer tumahara yaha rahna jyada jaruri hai...

di - lekin betu tu.......

mein di ko rok te hue ...di bharosa rakho muzh par ..kuch nahi hoga

phir chal pada mein 10 comm ki team k saath ghane jungle k ander ,

abhi hum koi 1 km ander aagaye the
lekin kahi kuch aisa dikh nahi raha tha ki kuch surag haath lage........

aise hi chalte chalte hum ghane jungle k aur ander purane mahal k khandhar tak pahunch gaye .....hum abhi badne hi wale the ki muzhe waha kuch khatra mehsus hua....

hum wahi ruk gaye chief ne 2 comm do bheja ....aur unhe sirf waha ki jaankari laane ki hidayat di...

hum intezar kar rahe the .....tabhi woh dono aagaye
chief - kaho kya kuch hai waha

comm - Sir uss khandhar k nicche ek tahkhana hai humne waha kuch roshni dekhi ..aur tahkhane k ander jaane ka raasta iss khander k back side se hai hum waha kuch logo ko ander jaate hue dekha hai....

Chief - accha yeh pata chala kitne log hai waha.
com - nahi sir . yeh toh pata nahi chal paaya...hum phir chal pade uss tahkhanne ki aur.....chief ne muzhe ek pistol di saftey k liye

tahkhanne k enterance tak pahunche hi the ki kuch 10 log ander se bahar aate hue dikhe..

hum wahi andhere mein chup gaye

unn logo k haato mein kuch tha...
woh log wahi bahar baith gaye ..aur kuch khanne lage ...jjab humne dhyan se dekha toh wah ek mara hua hiran tha aur woh log usse noch noch kar kha rahe the....

hum sab hairan the ki koi insan kaise iss tarah kga sakta hai ....tabi unmein se koi..

arre yr ab inn jaanwaro ko khaane mein maza nahi aaraha hai......
ander itni saari ladkiya hai ...ek ko agar hum kha lenge toh kitna maza aayega....
naram naram maas aur garam garam khoon maza aajaega

dusra - abe soch samaz k baat kar ...
tu jaanta hai na yeh sab kiski amanat hai.....phir
haa jaanta hu lekin jin do ko abhi hum laaye hai unmein se ek ko toh chot lagi hai ... isiliye ab kaam ki nahi rahi

usse toh kha sakte hai....

unki baate sunkar muzhe ek baat toh pata chal gyi k yeh insaan toh ho nahi sakte .....jo kisi insaan ko jinda khane ki soch rahe hai....
ab humne jyada der na karte hue andhere mein unko gher liya aur phir fire.......aur isse pahele woh kuch samazte gunji goliyon ki aawaj aur unki ceekhe...

humne socha ki ki saare maare gaye .
aur hum aage bade hi the k uss khandhar k chaaro taraf se badi bhayankar guraahat k saath aaye kuch saaye humne apne aapko jab charo taraf se ghire hue paaya.......

unmein se kuch aage aaye toh waha jalti hui mashalo ki roshni mein unko dekha toh hume aapni aankho par vishwas nahi hua......yeh sab aadhe bhediye aur aadhe insaan( warewolf)

hume samaz mein nahi aaya ki kya kare tabhi ...dhyan aaya ki janwar aag se darte hai......

toh maine ek jump laagyi aur mashal haath mein le li, muzhe dekhkar comm bhi mashal lene aage bade ki tabhi 2 wf ne 2 comm par humla kar diya aur khatam.......

tabhi chief ne fire ka order diya
banduke chikhi lekin yeh kya , innper goliyon ka koi asar na hote hue dekhkar badi hairani hui hume ab apni maut saamne dikhne lagi.....

humne apne haath mein mashal lekar ghera banaya aur aap k jarye aapne aapko bachane k koshish karne lage

aachanak unohone hum par humla kardiya.....lekin woh hum tak pahunch paate tab unke aur humare bich aaye 6 nakab posh jinke haato chamkti hui talwar ne unhe rok diya tha aur kuch bhediye shaitan ko pyare....

mein unhe pachan gaya ...yeh dad aur unke agents....the...

tabhi ek bhediya jo shayad unnka head tha gurraya

grrrh hmmm kaun ho tum kyu hamare bich mein pad rahe ho.....

dad - Main hu SANGHARAK tum sab ki maut ....phir shuru hui maar kaat

dad ne ek talwar mere taraf badayi aur ab mein bhi unnbhediyo kaa saamna karne laga,.......bhediye katte jaa rahe the phir bhi khayam nahi ho rahe the..

dad ki speed dekhkar mein hairan tha

mere saath aaye sbahi comm ne bahut mukabla kiya lekin woh unn bhediyo ka saamna na ka paaye...

jaise jaise mein ladta jaa raha tha meri speed badti hi jaa rahi thi mein bhi baat se hairan tha....

bhediye the ki khattam hone ka naam hi nahi le rahe the......

bhediya - ha hah ..ha kitno ko maaroge tum log aise ladte ladte thak jaaoge toh....phir toh tum sabki maut

tabhi waha ek pink colour ki shield se woh jagah cover ho gayi jisse bhediyo ki sankhya badni baan ho gayi.....aur sabhi bhediye k kate sgarir jamin par

tabhi uper se woh shield haati aur jo ussmein jo saamne aaya usko dekh kar toh mein shock ho gaya

mein - arre mom ...ap yaha...kaise aur ..yeh sab....kya....dad

Dad - bata abhi samay nahi hai inn baato ka ...jaao niche jaskar sabhi ladkiyo ko le aao......

abhi mein ander jaane hi laga tha ki jor se hawa chalne lagi.....aur dehkte hi dekhte....sabhi mare hue bhediye mein se black smoke sa nikal aur ek jagah ikkhatha ho gaya aur roop liya ek mahabhyabkar bhediya manv ka
jo karib 30 ft uncha tha

aur gunji hasee-- ha..ha..ha....tuch
manav tum karoge humara mukabla

toh aao apne marne ka shauk pura karo.....
mom ne kuch haath aage karke karne ki koshish ki tabhi uss bhediye ne black energy se humla kiya aur mom du jaakar gir gayi ....aur behosh ho gayi

mein .....mom .....Darinde ab toh tu gaya ...aur talwar lekar pahuch gaya uske saamne.....
dad - aise nahi hum sabhi ko humla karna hoga.....aur hum sab ek saath
badhe ....tabhi usske haath mein mudgar pragat hua aur usne ek hi waar mein hum sabko dharashayi kar diya .....humari haalat bahut buri thi
ab apne upar gussa aaraha tha k mein apne mom dad k liye kuch nahi kar paa raha hu.......

Tabhi waha ek laal roshni ka ghera
pragat hua aur uss mein se nikla ek saaya....

Bhediya - ab tum kaun ho ..jo maut lene aaye ho
tabh ek bhayankar aawaj gunji.......

MAHAKAAL KA ANSH HU MAIN
SHAITAN DHYAN SE DEKH MUZHKO
MAUT HU MEIN.....

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agla update jald hi.....

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[Avir]

Nice one

 

[Sakal]

 

[Vickey1211]

 

[ashish_1982_in]

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[Shahrukh]

Bahut bahtareen update bhai

 

[abhi1008]

Update - 26

ab tak aapne dekha......
Abhi ka Sweety aur Divya ki khij mein jaana....
khandhar mein manav bhediyo se saamna.....
aur ek saaye ka pragat hona..
ab aage.....aur aawaj

Mahakaal ka ansh hu mein
kaal hu mein
Shaitan dhyan se dekh muzhko
maut hu mein...

jaise hi Dad ne uss saye ko dekha aur aawaj suni toh unke chehre par halki muskurahat aagyi
mein soch mein tha ki ab yeh kaun aagaya....

Jaise hi uss bhediye ne
Kaal (rakesh ka asli rup) ka naam suna usski hasee ruk gay ....thodi der k kiye dar gaya...lekin phir...

bhediya - kaal tu bhi aagaya......
ab pahele tuzhe ki khatam karunga..
phir inn macharo ko masulnga bada maza aayega.....
tab tak mom ko hosh aagaya tha
mere paas aakar.....

mom - Betu tu thik toh hai na .....
dehko ji maine pahle hi iss outing k liye aapko mana kiya tha....dekho kitni chot lagi hai isse.....
phir maa ne muzhe gale lagaya...

aisi hi hoti hai maa ..khud toh dard mein thi aur mere chot ki chinta kar rahi thi...

mein - mom muzhe kuch nahi hua hai ....dekho mein bilkul thik hu....

dad - Naina kuch nahi hua hai isse
mere sher beta hai .......

ab dad k 5 agents bhi sambhal gaye the woh bhi humare paas aagye .....

Tabhi woh Mahabhediya bade krodh se daudta hua aaya aur kaal par humla kar diya ...lekin uss tak pahunchta usse pahele hi kaal ne ek energy beam uss par chodi ...aur woh uchalta hua dur jaakar gira...

ab usska krodh bahut bad haya tha ...
usne haath upaar kiye aur ek chamkti hui bijli jaise urja usske haath mein aagayi...aur ussne ..kaal par humla kar diya...... tabhi badla kaal ka roop
aur badal gaya uska chehra bhayankar sher k roop mein.....

aur gunji bhayankar dahad ....uss dahad ....ki urja se woh biji jaane kaha gayab ho gayi

palak zhapkte hi kaal pahunch gaya uss k paas aur garden se pakadkar

kaal - bahut hua khel tera.....
itna kahkar kaal ne apna panja ghusa diya uske chati mein aur dil bahar

dekhte hi dekhte woh khatam hua aur uske sharir k tukde ho gaye...

kaal wapas apne yoddha rup mein aaya aur ek nazar meri taraf dekha aur muskurate he waha se adrishya ho gaya..

jaane kya usski aankon mein tha ...
jo muzhe kuch apnapan se laga

tabhi dad ki aawaj se mera dhyan tuta

Dad - agents inn sab bhediyo ki bodies ko khatam kar do..

abhi chalo ander dekhte hai

jab hum ander tahkhane mein pahunche....toh waha dekha kareeb 50 ladkiya badi buri condition mein thi sabhi behosh thi.....unke haath aur pair bandhe hue the unhi mei muzhe
Divya bhi dikhi aur wahi paas ek kone mein jakhmi haalat mein sweety padi hui thi .....usske sir se khoon bahraha tha.....meine check kiya toh ...uski saanse badi dheemi dheemi chal rahi thi .......dad ....yaha aao dekho isse

tabhi bahar se chopper ki aawaje aane lagi......jo shayad papa ne hi bulaye the ...
ab tak un sabhi ladkiyo ko khol diya gaya tha .....lekin hosh nahi aaya tha shayad....koi drugs diya gaya ho

tabhi waha kuch doctors ki team aagayi .. sab ladkiyo ko waha se Hospital le jaaya gaya....Sweety ka bhi first aid kar k hospital le jaaya gaya..

ab dad , mom aur mein waha pahunche ,jaha di , addu aur saare frnds the ...waha sabhi tense the addu bar bar mere baare mein puch rahi thi aur di usse sambhal rahi thi .....

commandos apna kaam kar rahe the
Rimpy aur sabhi frnds humara intejar ka rahe the....

tabhi sab ne muzhe dad aur mom k saath aate dekha ....Addu daud kar mere gale gayi ....

Addu - arre bhai aap kaha gaye the
mein kab se didu ko puch rahi thi ...woh muzhe bata hi nahi rahi thi....

mein - kahi nahi betu mom & dad hume surprise karne aarahe the...
toh unhi ko receive karne gaya tha...

Addu k gale lagte hi jaane kaise mera saara dard chala gaya tha......

phir di aur saare frnds muzhe puchne lage ....betu yeh kya ...mom dad yaha kaise......aur Divya aur Sweety ko dhundne gaya tha kya woh mili......
aur tere saath jo comm gaye the woh kaha hai....

ab mein kya batata di ko....toh dad ki taraf dekha.....

Dad - arre arre ...beta ...ek saath ...kitne sawal
woh baat aisi hai ....humne socha ki tum sabko join kar ke surprise du
abhi hum yaha pahunche hi the ki muzhe Abhi ka ph aagaya ..tab meine
comm k chief se baat ki ...
jungle mein dhundne par woh dono mil gayi bas behosh ki....

toh comm unhe apne saath hospital
le gaye jab abhi wapas aaraha tha toh yeh hume yahi mila..

cahalo ab so jaao kal subah dekhte hai.....

subah hui hum mein se kisi ka mann nahi tha enjoy karne ka .....
leki mom , dad aur addu k kahne par thoda bhaut ghume aur sham ko wapis laut gaye..

Ghar pahunch ka Rimpy ne apni frnds ko milne ki iccha ki ...toh Dad ne kal saath chalbe ka wada kiya

di addu ko lekat room mein chali gayi aur mein mom aur dad k room mein

mein - ab dad aap dono mein se koi muzhe batayega ....ki yeh dab kya ho raha hai ...aur mom aapke paas yeh super powers..

Dad - aane wale samay mein ek mahayudh honewala hai yeh ussi ki tayyari samaz lo.....

aur beta humari family koi sadharan nahi tum , mein, naina ritu aur addu
sab mein kuch na kuch powers hai...

lekin saati baate jannane ka abhi samay nahi aaya hai....

mein - uff yeh sahi samay ...sahi samay.....kab aayega woh..

dusre din hum sabhi hospital mein unn sabhi ladkiyo ki tabiyat dekhne gaye Rimpy bhi saath thi

sab hosh mein aagayi thi sirf sweety hi behosh thi....dad k kahne se Dsp sahab bhi aaye the aur sabhi ladkiyo
se unke ghar ka pata puch rahe the.

phir hum Sweety k paas gaye jo abhi tak behosh thi...Usse dekhkar Rimpy ko bahut bura lag raha tha

Addu - bhai yeh Rimpy di ki frnd hai na kys hua hai isse.....

mein - kuch nahi betu bas thodi bimar hai..
addu - Shayad ibnhe bukhar hai mein dekhu ...itna kahkar addu ne apna haath usske maathe par rakha...aur tabhi usse hosh aagaya ....

innko yahi chodte hai dekhte hai villan party kya kar rahi hai......

Durmukhasur bade krod se. ----
nahii ...yeh tune....accha nahi kiya kaal......meri pooja mein tune vighna daala hai
pitashri toh tap kar rahe hai aur mein kanyamedh yagya k dwara Ham sabke maalik Eblis ko ko prasanna karke aur shaktiyo ko prapt karna chahta tha....

aaj ki aahutiya aakhri thi...tune accha nahi kiya....

DA - snenapati Durjaya prithvi par jo hum burai paap...aur nasha gailarahe hai woh kaisa chal raha hai....

senapati - yuraj.....waha pata nahi Sangharah nasm se koi hai jo hamare
karyo ko rok raha hai ......

DA - toh pata kari usska...kaun hai woh.....ek manav humare karyo mein badha pahuncha raha hai aur tum shaktishali asur hokar kuc nahi kar rahe ho ..

dhyan rahe iss shristi k 7 lok poore hamare adhin hai ...unn ka upayog karo....

Krodhasur, lobhasur aur mohasutum jaskar manushya k man badlo

aur maya sur tum waha jaakar waha k vigyan ko dekho ......

phir sabha samapt hui.....

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