Fantasy ABHI - THE WARRIOR 2 (Completed)

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Update - 30

Kaal aur Abhi ....ne ... yaha k sainiko ko yumlok ka raasta ..dikhaya .,..bas kuch sainiko ko Darmen tak apna sandesh pahunchane k liye ....aur uss shivir ko ek jordar dhamake se uda diya

Darmen k sainiko ki yeh chavni .......bahut badi thi lagbhag kissi bade se gaon ki bhanti......iss Chavni ko chakravyu ya ....Tislimi chavni kahna uchit hoga ....

iske teen charan the ......bahar se toh dikhne mein sadharan sainiko k rahene ki jagah ki tarah pratit hoti thi .........Abhi k pahele humle k baad Darmen ne issmein bahut badlav kiya tha ...jo Nebhru ko nahi pata tha .........

Abhi ne Kaal k saath jab Arsalan k roop mein waha pravesh kiya .....toh unka saamna sabse pahele chavni k dwarpal se hua ......jab dono bhtier pravesh kar rahe the toh 4 mein se ek ne unka marg rokte hue .......

Dwarpal - yeh tum dono bhiter kaha jaa rahe ho ..jante nahi yeh jagah kewal sainiko k liye hai .....aur ..kaal ...ko dhakka marne laga ......parantu Kaal ko koi chue aur usse kaal ka prasad prapt na ho aise kabhi ho sakta hai .......

piche khade baki dwarpal unhi ki taraf dekh rahe the .......tabhi vatavaran mein uss dwar pal ki cheekh gunji aur .....ek haat unko ..uss apne uss saathi k pith se bahar ...nikalta hua dikha ......jisse dekhkar baki teeno k raungte khade ho gaye .....unhone turant Chavni ka bada .....majbut lohe ka dwar band kiya ....

jb uss sainik ne kaal ko dhakka maara toh kaal ne apna panja ...uske chati k aarpaar ghusa diya ....aur apne Sher manav roop mein aagaya .....aur uske chati mein dhadakte hue ...khoon ka fawara chodte hue dil ko bahar nikala aur ....chaba gaya .....

Chavni k dwar band ho chuka tha .....aur ...bhiter ..ek siren k dwara sab sainik ...chetan ho gaye....


apne saathi ki aisi dardnak Maut Dekh Kar Baki ke 3 dwarpalo Apne Hath Mein pakde hue shool ko .... Puri takat ke sath Abhi aur Kaal per vaar kiya... Apne Taraf Aate hue Ek Ek Shool Ko Abhi aur Kaal ne lapak kar pakad liya Aur unhen unn sainiko par ho wapas chod diya .....
Do shool jaakar do Saniko ....k seene ko chrte hue aarpaar hogaye ......Ek bache hue ko apni maut saaf nazar aarahi thi ....usne turant apni kamar k belt se apni lesar gun nikali ...Aur ...Abhi ki taraf vaar kiya ....usmein se nikalti hui kirne Abhi ka kuch bhi nahi bigad saki .......tab tak kaal uss tak pahunch chuka tha ...usne ...uss sanik ka gun wala ... haath pakadkar ukhad diya ......
jisase woh joro se chikhne laga ....uski aawaj kaal ko bardasht nahi hue ....aur usne apna bhayankar jabdae mein pakadkar ....uss Sainik ka sar ukhadkar ....chaba gaya .....aur dhadne laga ......

Uske baad dono Dwar ki taraf aage badhe ....jaise hi woh aage badhe dwar ....se kai teer ek saath chale ......jinhe Abhi ne aage badhkar apne upar le liya ...woh teer Abhi k divya kawach k kaaran uska kuch bhi nahi bigad paaye ........

Abhi ne uss bade se lohe k majboot dwar par prahar kiya .....yaha bhiter siren bajne k kaaran ...waha k sainik satark ho gaya .....apne apne shastra uthakar sakriya ho gaye Saikdo Saink band dwar ki suraksha k liye ekatrit ho gaye .....

Abhi ne ab dwar par dusra prahar kiya .....jisase uss dwar ki haal ..khasta ho gayi .....picche Sainik apna jor lagakar uss dwar ko bachane k liye apna poora jor laga rahe the ....Abhi k reesre jordar prahar se woh darwaja ...ukhadkar picche gir pada jiske niche kai sainik dabkar mar..gaye .

Chavni k bhiter hazaro sainik poori satark ta se chappe chappe par tainat the .......Yaha saikdo sainik Abhi aur kaal ko ghere hue the ........Abhi ...apna maarak khanjar lekar ....toh kaal apne bhayankar Sher manav roop mein ....unn sainiko ....par tut pade .....aur kuch hi der mein un sabke sharir k tukde aur khoon waha bikhra pada tha .....Dono aage badh jaate hai .....

Jo bhi Sainik unke saamne aata ...woh pal bhar mein hi khatam ho jaata ....Abhi woh aage badhe hi the k badi badi chattane unpar girne lagi ......woh chattano ki baarish iyni teevra thi k Abhi aur Kaal ko sambhalne ka bhi mauka nahi mila .......

unhe dabkar mara hua Smazkar ....Kuch sainik ...malbe ki or aage badhe ....k tabhi ....gire hue chattane udkar unpar aakar girne lagi ....yeh Abhi ne apne Vaayu tava ki shakti ka prayog kiya tha ......

Abhi ne vayu shakti k dwara ...ek bada sa chakravat pragat kiya .....jo waha padi chattane ........aur Sainiko ko apne bhiter sametne laga .....

Chakravat k andar ....sainik un chattano se takra kr mtityu ko prapt hone lage ....unki vheekhe wahi chakravat mein dab kar rah gayi .....

unn sab sainiko ki kshat vikshat laasho ko girata hua woh chakravat ruk gaya ......

Abhi .ne charo taraf ek nazar daali .....waha ...marghat jaisi shanti phaili hui thi .....aage ...ek badi majboot deewar thi .....Abhi ne uss deewar par prahar kiya ....parantu eoh deewar koi thosh nahi thi ......dikhne mein majbhoot dikhne wali yeh deewar ......mayavi thi ....

Abhi ne uss deewar par haath rakha .....toh uska haath bhiter chala gaya ...woh deewar ek bhram maatra thi ....parantu jaise hi Abhi uss deewar ....ko paar karne k liye ......aage badha ....usse ...bahut si striyo ko vichalit karne wali dardnak cheekhe ...sunayi .....dene lagi ....
unn cheekho ki aawaje itni teevra thi ....ki ek pal mein hi Abhi ka sar chakrane laga ....
Abhi uss deewar se piche hat gaya ....tab deewar par drishya pragat hone lage ......jaise koi badi si screen par koi video chal raha ho .....

deewar par dikhne wala drishya .......bahut hi vibhatsa tha ....jismein usse ....nagn haalat mein roti bilakhti ...kai kanyaye aur mahilaye ....bediyo mein bandhi hui ....nazar aayi ....jiinke sharir par .kai gahre ghav the ....aur unn par namak dalkar aur pratadit kare ...aanand uthate hue ....sainiko ko dekga ....kaiyo k saath balatkar ho raha tha .......
kaiyo ko jinda hi Darmen k woh sainik chaba kar noch nochkar kha rahe hai ...aur unki har chikh par ...has rahe hai ......

aise vibhatsa drisya aur unki cheekho ...se Abhi ka mann vichalit ho gaya uski ki aankhien krodh mein laal ho gayi thi........

Abhi ko lagne laga k ho na ho yeh mayavi deewar hi aage badhne ka raasta hai .......
Abhi ne apne man ko niyantrit karne laga parantu nirantar badhti hui aawaje aur deewar par dihkhne wala drishya uske krodh ko aur badha raha tha .......
woh uss mayavi deewar k bhitar pravesh kar gaya ....shuru shuru mein aawaje aur tez ho gayi ....charo taraf gahra andhera tha ....Kaal bhi uss deewar mein pravesh kar gaya ......parantu Abhi alag marg par tha ...aur Kaal alag par .....

Abhi andhere mein aage badhta chala gaya .....Chikho ki aawaja ab samapt ho gayi thi ......aage Abhi ko halki sa orakash nazar aane laga ...Abhi aage badha ...toh saamne pattharo se bana hua ...ek bada se kaksh hai .....jismein halka sa prakash hai ....Abhi uss kaksh k madhya tak pahuncha .......tabhi ...usse kissi k hasne ki aawaj ...aayi .....yeh aawaj thi Darmen ki ......

Abhi ne charo taraf dekha toh kaksh k deewaro k alawa kuch bhi nahi tha ....usne mudkar dekha toh jis raaste se woh bhiter aaya tha woh bhi band ho chuka tha .....

Abhi ne apni urja ka vaar unn deewaro par kiya ......parantu uske kissi bhi vaar ka prabhav unn deewaro par nahi ho raha tha .....tabhi phir se wahi hasne ki aawaj gunji .....

yeh jaal Abhi k liye hi Darmen ne bichaya tha ....aise hi kai jaal uss nagar mein Darmen ne bichaye the .....kuyki usse yakeen tha k der se hi sahi ...yadi Arsalan jeevit hai toh woh jarur dubara aayega .....

har jal mein ek pre recorded sound clip thi ....aur yeh tabhi pkay hoti thi jab koi jal mein fas chuka ho ....Darmen ko pata tha k iss prithvi par uska saamna karne wala koi nahi hai ...issiliye usne apne har ..pre recorded clip ...mein Arsalan k naam se hi sambodhan record kiya tha .....aur jaise hi woh sound clip khatam ho jaati ....toh Darmen ko waha ka sandesh pata chal jaata ....

aawaj - Swagat hai mere bhai Arsalan .....bahut khushi hui tumhe jeevit dekhkar ......
lekin afsos tum apni kiisi bhi shakti ka prayog karke ....yaha se nahi nikal sakte .....
aur itne varsho k baad mile ho toh bina khatirdari kiye hue kaise jaane de sakta hu ....milenge bahut jald mere bhai .......

aur jaise hi yeh aawaj khatam hui niche ki jamin khisak gayi ...aur ...Abhi niche ....ek bade se tah khane mein gira ......

tahkhane ki kathor bhumi par girte hi ..Abhi ...sambhalkar khada ho gaya ....woh tahkhana ....sade hue maass ki badbu se bhara hua tha ...Abhi ...ne jiss taraf se badbu aarahi thi uss or dekha toh ....manav haddiyo ka dher sa laga hua tha .......

waha se aane wali badbu se uska bura haal ho raha tha ........
usne sugandhit hawa pragat karne ka prayatna kiya parantu yeh kya yaha uski panch tatva ki shakti kaam nahi kar rahi thi ........yeh sab kya hai aur kaise yaha se bahar nikla jaaye ...

Abhi ne ab pranayam dwara pahele apne shwas ko niyantrit kiya ...jo ...badbu k kaaran fool rahi thi ....apni yog shakti k dwara ...mann ko nirantrit kiya aur aage badh gaya .......

kuch kadam aage hi bada tha k kuch ajeeb si aawaaje aanelagi .......jab usne uss or dekha toh waha asankhya ...ajeeb se jeev the .....yeh jeev Darmen ki sena k sainik jo ajeeb se jeevo k garh se the ...unke aur manav k milan se pragat hue the .....jo aadhe manav ...aur aadhe chipkali jaise the ......woh abhi poori tarah se vikasit nahi huye the ....woh eaha padi kuch manav laasho ko noch nochkar kha rahe the ....

unmein se kuch ko Abhi k kadmo ki aahat aayi .......Abhi ki taraf dekhte hi woh saare ...chaunk gaye ....aur ajeeb si aawaj mein ek dusre ko jaise koi sanket de rahe ho ....

Abhi unn jeevo ko bas dekh raha tha usne pahele kabhi aise jeevo ko nahi dekha tha ......Tabhi ek jeev uchalkar Abhi k kandhe par aagaya ...Abhi ne usse pakadne k liye haath aage badaya toh usne apne jabde mein uska haath jakad liya .....aur chabane ki koshish karne laga ...Abhi ne
Abhi ne dusre haath se uska sar pakadkar jamin par patak diya .....
usko patakte hi saare jeev Abhi k uper zhapat pade ....woh jagah jagah apne daant gadhakar usse khane ki koshish karne lage ...aur Abhi unhe uthakar uthakar patak raha tha .....yaha panch tatva ki shakti bhi kaam nahi kar rahi thi .....

uske mann mein kuch chal raha tha issliye woh maarak astra se unki hatya nahi karna chahta tha ......bhale hi panch tavo ki urja ....kaam nahi kar rahi thi parantu ...chakra toh jaagrit the ...aur ...unke gun bhi ......usne .....sabse pahele ......OM ka ucharan karte hue ....Anahat chakra...ki ....aanandmayi urja ....ko phailana shuru kar diya .....jiske prabhav se woh jeev kuch shant hone lage .......Uske baad Mooladhar chakra ......mein sthit antarman ...ki urja ko ..waha phailane laga ..antarman ki urja k prabhav se Abhi ...unn..jeevo k amtarman se jud gaya tha ....
Abhi woh poori tarah viksit nahi hue the ...abhi bhi unmeon kuch acvhayi baaki thi jiske kaaran ....Abhi unnsab k mann se sampark bana paaya tha ......Abhi ne unke mann se judkar yeh baat unke mann mein bhitha di k woh unn sabka mitra hai ....

Yaha ..Kaal jab ...uss andhere mein aage badha ......toh ...ek bade se kaksha mein pahunch gaya ...yeh kaksh kam kaid khanna jyada tha ....yaha ......striya ...aur kanyay...poori nagn awastha mein bandhi hui thi ...unki haalat bahut buri thi ....aur kuch sainik ....unnpar aur atyachar karke .....apne krurta ka pradatshan karte hue ....has rahe the ......
Unn sainiko ko aise karte dekhkar Kaal ki aankhon mein khoon utar aaya .....aur ...woh ....jiss surang se woh nikla tha ....waha kahde pahredaro ko bich se chirkar aage nikal gaya ....aur waha ..sainiko ki cheekh pukar gunjne lagi ......kuch hi der mein woh jagah saikdo sainiko ki laasho ..k tukde waha bikhre pade the ......

apne saamne itni maar kaat dekhne k baad bhi waha bandhi striyo k chehre par koi bhi haav bhav nahi the ....unhe bhavna shunya ...chehre yeh bata rahe the k woh bahut kuch sah chuke hai .....ab koi aur ...drishya unhe prabhavit nahi kar sakta ....

yaha Abhi ne unn sab jeevo ko apne adhikar mein kar liya tha .....aur apni maansik tarango k saath jod liya tha ....

Ab woh sab jeev tahkhane ki ek taraf badh gaye ..aur Abhi unke piche ....unhone Abhi ki taraf dekhkar ...waha khudai karna shuru kar diya .....aur thodi hi der mein .....waha jamin mein ..ek ...raasta pragat hua woh Sabhi jeev ...ussmein utarte chale gayr ...Abhi unke piche ...uss raste mein utar gaya ........

Thodi hi dur chalne k baad ...Abhi ussi kaksh mein pahunha jaha ..kaal ...Darmen k sainiko ka Kaal bana hua tha ...

Woh jeev bhi Abhi ka ishara paate hi ...sainiko par tut pade .....thodi hi der mein waha k saare sainik maare gaye ........Abhi ne Kaal ko unn sab striyo ko mare hue sainiko k vastro se sharir dhakar waha se nikalne ka kaam diya .....

aur unn jeevo k saath aage badh gaya ....woh sabhi jeev Abhi k ek ishare par unsainiko par tut pade the ....aur Abhi bhi apni maarak khanjar se .....unn saiko ko maut k ghat utarta hua chala jaa raha tha .....

kuch gine chune sainik bache hue the ....Abhi unko lalkarte hue bola ...

Abhi - bol dena apne maalik ko ......k Arsalan aaya tha ......apne barbadi k din ginana shuru kar de .
itna kahkar Abhi ....ne Kaal ko yaad kiya ....aur kaal k saath waha se ...gayab ho gaya ......

yaha 1 mahine se Arsalan ka koi pata nahi tha aur kahi humla bhi nahi hua tha ....issiliye ....woh bhi thoda nischint ..tha .....Darmen ....zecro k rajya ki suraksha vyastha dekh raha tha ...aur waha ki sundariyo k saath sambhog k aanand mein duba hua tha .......

Zecro ko jab Arsalan k Nebhru k rajya k sainik chavni k jaal mein fasne ki khabar milti hai ....toh woh khushi se jhum uthata hai .....aur Darmen ko khabar deta hai ......Darmen abhi nashe mein tha issiliye usse sambhalne mein thoda samay lagta hai ......

Jab sambhal jaata hai ....

Darmen - wah kya khabar sunayi hai Zecro ....aahkir Arsalan humare jaal mein phas hi gaya ......
chalo jara uski khatirdari ki jaaye .....bhaut varsh ho gaye usase mile hue ....

Zecro - Kshama kare mahamahim parantu mera yaha hona jyada aawashyak hai ....

Darmen - mein samzta hu k tum Arsalan se bhaybhit ho ...parantu ab woh humari kaid mein hai ..tumhe darne ki koi awashyakta nahi hai ......

Aur Darmen Zecro ko lekar ek portal banakar uss chavni pahunchta hai ....lekin yaha pahunchkar ..uski aakhien krodh mein laal gayi thi .....Aur waha padi kati fati hui laasho ko dekhkar Zecro ki haalat kharab ho gayi thi .....

Abhi ki liye itna hi .....
Agla update ..kal.....

Fantastic update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai

 

[The king]

Nice update bhai waiting for next update

 

[Xabhi]

Fabulous update bhai

 

[abhi1008]

Update - 31

Aur Darmen Zecro ko lekar ek portal banakar uss chavni pahunchta hai ....lekin yaha pahunchkar ..uski aakhien krodh mein laal gayi thi .....Aur waha padi kati fati hui laasho ko dekhkar Zecro ki haalat kharab ho gayi thi .....
Jaise jaise woh aage jaata gaya ...tahkhane tak .....laasho k siwa kuch nahi tha ....,...tahkhane k saare jeev jungle ki or bhag chuke the .....

Zecro - Ascharya hai Nebhru k hote hue .....uske rajya mein itna kuch ho gaya aur usse pata bhi nahi chala .......Pahele Khadan par humla aur ab yeh .....kahi woh Pitashri ki sahyata toh nahi kar raha hai ......

Darmen - jaha tak ....ab tak k ghatnakram se mein yeh samaz chuka hu k Arsalan ko Nebhru k madat ki koi awashyakta nahi hai ......uski shakyi bahut badh gayi hai ......parantu phir bhi iss baat mein yadi koi bhi sachayi hai .....Toh Nebhru ko iska dand jarur milega ........

Yaha Naebhru kp jab pata chala k Abhi uske nagar mein kya kand karke gaya hai ........toh woh ek portal banakar waha se ....Abhi se milne k liye nikal gaya ....

Abhi ....unn sab ghayal mahilao ....ko chikitsa shivir le gaya tha ....unki sharirik aur mansik sthiti dono hi theek nahi thi ......abhi toh unke sharir par lage hue ghavo ka ilaj chal raha tha ......Sona ko bhi unke rahne khane pine ki vyastha ka bhar saupkar Abhi apne kaksh mein aaya ....aur aage ki ranneeti par vichar karne laga .......

Yaha Nebhru Abhi se milne uske kaksh ki aur badha .....k tabhi Vikas aur Vilas .....apni sena k kissi kam k baare mein Abhi se baatchit karne uske kaksh ki or badhe k unhone ek saaya Abhi k kaksh ki aur badhte dekha ....Dono ko ab tak apni veerta dikhane ka koi awasar nahi mila tha ......uss kaale ..kapdo ....wale ko dekhkar aaj unhe apni veerta dikhane ka mauka milgaya tha .....

Yaha Nebhru apni soch mein gum ...Abhi k kamre ki or badh raha tha ....k tabhi ....Ek dande ka jordar ptahar uske sar par hua ...yeh prahar itna aptyashit tha k usse sambhalne ka mauka hi nahi mila ....aur uske muh se cheekh nikal gayi .....

abhi woh pahle vaar se sambhal hi paata k ...ek aur vaar uske sar par hua ......aur Nebhru ki dhunayi shuru ho gayi .......Nebhru ko ab apne bachav k liye apni urja ka prayog kiya ...jisase vaar karne wale ...Vikas aur Vilas ...dono dur chitakkar jaa gire .....
Nebhru ne tezi se dono k dande chin liye .....tabhi kaksh k bahar ho rahe shor se aakarshit hokar ...Abhi kash k bahar aaya .....tab tak Nebhru unse danda chin chuka tha .....isse pahele k woh kuch kare Abhi ne usse rok liya ......

Nebhru apna sar pakadte hue ...andar ...aagaya ....dando k prahar se uska sar buri tarah dard kar raha tha ......ek jagah halka se ..jhakham bhi ban gaya tha .....ussmein se thoda khun nikalraha tha .....

Nebhru - ..haayye mera sar ...bahut jor ka maara ...kamino ne .....ek toh tum ho jo bina muje suchna diya ..mere nagar mein itna bada kand kar diya ....aur jab tumse iss baare mein baat karne aaya inhone meri hi dhunayi kar di .......aakhir yeh chal kya raha hai .....

Vikas - Woh toh aap ho choro ki tarah chipkar ..kaksh..ki or jaa rahe the ....issiliye anjane mein humse yeh hogaya .....hum kshama chahte hai ...

Nebhru - tum toh kuch bolo hi mat .....pahele toh sar ..fhod diya....aur ab kshama mang rahe ho.....

Abhi - yeh sab kya ho raha hai Vikas ....tumhe bhai par kyu humla kiya .....( Vikas ne sabkuch vistar se bataya )
Abhi - inki taraf se mein aapse kshama maangta hu ........andar aayiye ...aapke ghav se khoon bah raha hai .....pahele iska upchar karte hai ....phir baat ......

Nebhru - ..mere paas itna samay nahi .......parantu yeh jo tum Sainik chavni mein kar aaye ho uska kya ......itna bada kand karne se pahele muzhe toh pooch lena tha .....

Aapne hi toh kaha tha k Arsalan ka bhay ....sab k mann mein bithana hai .....

Nebhru - kaha toh tha .....parantu iss baare mein muzhe pahele pata hota toh mein bhi Darmen k sawalo se bachne k liye .....kuch na kuch karta .....mere rajya mein mere hote hua itna bada humla ho gaya woh bhi do baar ....isase ..Darmen ka sidha shak muzhpar jaayega k mein bhi hlawar se mil gaya hu .....

Ab tum hi batao ....k mein kya karu ......kya jawab dunga uske sawalo ka .....

Abhi - aapko jawab dene ki koi awashyakta nahi hai .....isska ...hal toh pahele hi mere mitra nikal chuke hai .....aapke sar ke yeh ghav hi bahut kuch bol denge ......bas aapko murchit hone ka abhinay karna hai ......

Abhi ne kaal ko yaad kiya aur Nebhtu ko .....uss chavni k aakhri chor par ...le jaakar chod diya .....

Nebhru - parantu kya Darmen ko meri baaton par vishwas hoga ......

Nebhru ki baat sunkar Kaal ne usse ghurkar dekha ....Nebhru ...k mann mein kaal ki krurta dekhkar phele hi dar baith chuka tha .....
aur iss tarah ghurkar dekhne se ...Nebhru aur dar gaya k pata nahi ab yeh kya karega .....tabhi Kaal ne ek jordar chanta Nebhru k muh par par maara ....jisase woh chakrakar wahi gir gaya...
phir kaal waha se chala gaya ......

Yaha Darmen aur Zecro marghat bane hue uss chavni ko dekh rahe the ....aur baatien kar rahe the .....Tabhi Zecro ka dhyan ...waha pade Nebhru par padi.....jo murchit ...pada tha .....

Zecro Darmen k saath Nebhru k paas jaata hai aur usse awwaj dekar hosh mein laane ka prayatna kiya .....lekin kaal ka vaar tha ....itne jaldi kaise Nebhru ko hosh aata ....

Zecro - Vishwas nahi hota Nebhru ki aisi haalat ....

Darmen - hmm kah toh tum thik rahe ho parantu maine dekha hai isse Arsalan se ladte hue ....Arsalan ki shakti k aage isski shakti kuch bhi nahi hai .......

Zecro - kshama chahunga mahamahim aap baar baar ......unke Shakiyo k bakhan kyu kar rahe ho .....jabki ....aap..ki shakti k aage unki shakti kuch bhi nahi hai ....

Darmen - ek baat humesha yaad rakhna ...Zecro ...apne shatru ...ko kabhi kam nahi samazna ...aur ...khaskar jab shatru ....Arsalan jaisa ho ......kya .....tum nahi jaante uske paas aisi maarak shakti hai jiske ek hi vaar se ..woh ....poora ek saur mandal nast kar sakta hai .......
aur iss baar toh woh aur bhi kai chamatkarik siddhiyo k saath aata hai ....jiske baare mein him nahi jaante .....aur ab tak toh hum uska thikana tak pata nahi kar paaye ...jabki woh humare baare mein sab kuch jaanta hai .....

Zecro - aap thik kah rahe ho mahamahim ....him vyarth hi Nebhru par sandeh kar rahe the ......

Darmen ne ..apna haath Nebhru k sar par rakha .....aur apne kaali urja se ....uske ghav ko heal kiya .....aur Nebhru ko lekar uske mahal aagaya ......

Thodi der baad usse hosh aaya toh saamne Darmen k saath Zecro bhi dikha .....

Darmen - yeh sab kaise hua ....

Nebhru - jab pitashri k humare banaye jaal mein fasne k baare mein muzhe suchna milli toh mein turant waha chala gaya .....parantu ..mein unhe rok nahi paaya ..na ..jaane kaise unhone waha k jeevo ko apne vash mein kiya tha .....aur saath hi sab bandi striyo ko bhi mukt karke le gaye ...

Abhi pahele k vaar se ubar nahi paaya tha ...issiliye mein unka sammna nahi kar saka .....

Darmen - koi baat nahi ..ab hume kuch aur sochna hoga ........

Iss humle ko 4.....5 ..din bit chuke the ....Rakshak sena bhi ....ab tak bahut kuch sikh chuki thi .....
Abhi ne kaal ki madat se se waha k sainko ko gayab karke Apne sainik ....unki jagah ....badalna ...shuru kar diya ......aur itni jyada sankhya ..mein sainiko ka naash hone k kaaran ...sena ..mein nayi bharti .....shuru ho gayi thi ....jismein Abhi k sena k sainik unki yogyata k anusar chune gaye .

Ab waha ki Darmen ki sena mein ....bahut saare Abhi k sainik apna sthan bana chuke the .....

Darmen ki sena mein sainik bhejne k baad bhi .....5000 sainik waha bache the ....Jinka srnapati ...Abhi ne ...Sonu k bhai Shankar ko banaya ......aur usse iss naye bane nagar ki raksha ka bhar saunpa ....Abhi ne ...iss ...nagar ka ...naam ...rakha ...Sonpur....kyuki ..yahi ..usse ..Sona ..milli ...thi ....waha ek mantri mandal ka gathan kiya ....jisase waha ki vyastha sucharu roop se chale ...aur mantri mandal ka adhipati banaya ...Mukhiya ji ko ....

Yaha ki vyastha banane k baad Abhi Sona ko lekar ..apne nagar aagaya ......Abhi toh kai baar bich bich mein aakar apne mata pita se bhent kar jaata tha ....Parantu yeh Sona ka pehla awsar tha jab woh Abhi k ghar mein pravesh kar rahi thi ....

Karma aur Neeru bahut khush hue ......jaise aaj hi sahi maayno mein Abhi ki shadi hui ho.. kyuki aaj pahli baar ...woh Bahu ko ghar apne lekar aaya ....waha ..ki riti riwajo se ...Sonu ka grih pravesh hua .....

Raat mein Sonu ne jab Abhi k kaksh mein pravedh kiya ...toh Abhi khidki k paas baithkar Chandrama ko nihar raha tha ........apni soch mien gum hone se usse Sonu k aane ka pata bhi nahi chala ......Tab Sonu ne uska paas jaakar uske kandhe par haath rakhkar ...pukara ...

Sonu - aise kya dekh rahe ho iss chandrama ko ......jaise yeh chandrama nahi aapki koi preyasi hai ......

Sonu ki iss baat se Abhi thoda hadbada gaya ......

Abhi - na...hi...toh....ai...si..koi..baat..nahi.....yeh..tu..bhi ..kya..baat kar rahi ho ....

Sonu - ( khilkhilakar haste hue ) dekho toh itna bada yodha ...hokar kaise ghabragaye ....jaise sachmein koi chori pakdi gayi ho ......

Abhi ....Sonu ka haath pakadkar apni goad mein bitha lete hai .....aur apne haath uske kamar par kas lete hai .....

Abhi - ajje ...yodha ..toh ..hum ..shatruo..k liye hai ......aapke liye toh ...aapke ....das hai .....aur zhukkar uske gaalo ko chum leta hai......

Sonu - accha ji ...toh...aap das ho ...toh..aapko toh mere aadesh ka paalan karna hoga......

Abhi - ji bilkul ...yeh sewak aapke aadesh ka paalan karne k liye prastut hai .....

Sonu - thik hai toh mera aadesh yeh hai ...k turrant muzhe utarkar ...chupchap jaakar so jaaye ..aur koi shaitani na kare .....

Abhi - parantu ...aapke aadesh ka paalan karne k liye iss das ko kuch chahiye ....

Sonu - kya .....

Abhi uska chehra apni taraf ghumakar uske hontho par apne honth rakh deta hai ......aur chumne lagta hai ....aur phir alag hokar uski aankhon mein dekhta hai ......

Abhi - bas yehi chahiye tha ....

Sonu uske chatti par halke haath se ek mukka maarti hai .

Sonu - kya aap bhi ....aur uske seene mein muh chupa leti hai ....

Abhi bhi usse apni baahon mein bhar leta hai .......thodi der aise hi ek dusre ko mehsus karte hai .

Abhi - Sonu.....main tumse kuch kahna chahta hu ....

Sonu - kya ...

Abhi - tum muzhse kitna prem karti ho ......

Sonu - yeh kaisa prashna hai ......jitna mein apne aap se bhi nahi karti ...aap mere pran ho ....

Abhi - yadi mere jeevan mein tumahare siwa koi aur bhi aajaye tab bhi ....

Sonu - jaha tak muzhe pata hai k ab tak k jeevan mein mete siwa aapke jeewan mein koi nahi aayi hai ......aur yadi aagar koi aati. bhi hai ....aur ismein aapki ........
prasannata hai toh muzhe koi pareshani nahi hai kyu ki aapki khushi mein hi meri khushi hai

......aur halki si muskura deti hai
parantu uski aankho se chalak uthe aansuvo ki kuch bunde Abhi dekhchuka tha ..jisse usne apne pallu se poch diya tha .....

Abhi - Sona ....sirf meri khushi nahi ...humari khushi ...main wohi kaam karunga jismein hum dono ki khushi ho ......bahut ....
...kuch aisa hai jo tumhe ....janana bahut jaruri hai .....

Sona - aisa aur kya hai ....

Abhi - iskeliye tumhe Dhyan yog ka abhyas jyada se jyada jarna hoga .....jab tum apne asli swarup ko jaan logi tab tumahre saare dwandva samapt ho jaayenge .......parantu abhi ...kuch aur krane ka samay hai ...

Sona - kya .....

Abhi - usko apni baahon mein utkhakar bister par le jaata hai .....aur ..phir shuru ho jaati hai dono ki prem leela ......uske baad dono ek dusre ki baahon mein so jaate hai ...

Abhi k liye itna hi ....
Agla update ...jald hi ....

 

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Jabardast update brother ???
ek khatarnak humla kar diya hai abhi aur kaal ne milkar darmen ki chavni par....darmen ne jaal to acha buna tha abhi yani Arsalan k khilaaf...ek baar k liye abhi usme phas to gaya tha par usne apne maan aur chitt dono ko shant kiya...aur dimag ka paryog kar un jeevo ko apne kabu mein kar wha se nikal gaya....wahi dusri taraf kaal ne bandigrh k saniko ka kaal ban gaya... aur un striyo ko wha se bacha k nikal gaya abhi k aadesh par...aur bache kuche saniko ki abhi ne watt laga di aur wha se nikal gaya....wahi zecro abhi/Arsalan k darmen k jaal mein phadne se khus hota hai aur ye khabar darmen ko deta par unhe kya pata ki unke liye kya surprise plan kiya hai Abhi ne...jab darmen aur zecro wha pahunchte hai aur dekhte hai kayi fati lashe apne saniko ki aur plan fail dekh kar krodhit ho jaate...abhi to shuruwat hui hai.....
keep writing...
keep posting.....

bahut bahut dhnyawad Abhay bhai aapke iss update ki har baarikiyo ko darshati hui adbhut ...shali mein likhe hue shandar Review k liye ..


asie hi saath banaye rakhe..??

Update 31 posted.......

 

[abhi1008]

Wow ... bhai bahut hi sundar update

Thanku soo much bhai for appreciating



asie hi saath banaye rakhe..??

Update 31 posted.......

 

[abhi1008]

Zabardast update dost

Thanku soo much bhai for appreciating



asie hi saath banaye rakhe..??

Update 31 posted.......

 

[abhi1008]

Bahut bahut dhnyawad Nevil bhai ....aapki iss sunder ....swarnmayi shabho se susajjit samiksha k liye



asie hi saath banaye rakhe..??

Update 31 posted.......

Abhi aur Kaal Darmen ki ek aur chhawni ko nestanabut kar dete hai halanki Darmen ne apni aur se Abhi ko kid kar hi liya tha per Abhi ne manavmishrit jeevo ki sahayta se ish tilisham chhawni ko purantya nasht kar diya. Samyauprant Darmen v zecro yahan aakar ish drishye ko sahan nahi kar paate aur krodhit ho jate hai.
Bahut hi romanchkari rahshyo se bhari hui ek aur pripuran update laaye hai Abhi bhai.

Dhanyawaad Sakha.

Chintit na hoiye mitr prem ki toh ek bund se hi man parfullit ho uthta hai. Prem toh nishwarth Sarita ki dhara ke saman mooke sa kal-kal kar raha he yugo-yugo se Nirvirodh.
Shukriya Mitr.