Fantasy ABHI - THE WARRIOR 2 (Completed)

[Anky@123]

Behtareen update bhai ???

 

[Nevil singh]

Update - 69

Deepu k 8 dost gayab the ...aur uske mann mein kuch bura hone ki aashanka bal pakad rahi thi ...

ab aagee....

Deepu apne dosto ko dhundne ...gaon se bahar ..nadi k kinare kinare ....chalte hue .....purane Dragon wale mandir k nikat ...hi pahadi ..se girte ..hue zharne tak pahuncha .....unchayi se girte hue jharne k kaaran ...waha ek chota talab sa bada hua tha ....

Deepu uss talab k kinare kinare chalte hue apne doston ko dhundne laga ....ek jagah usse apne doston k ...kuch kapde aur unke mobile rakhe hue mile ....Deepu ne charo taraf khoja ...lekin uske doston ka kahi kuch pata nahi chala ....talab tak jaate hue unke pairo k nishan bane hue the ....lekin unke lautne ka koi nishan nahi tha ....

Aakhir jo socha wahi hua ...Uske mann mein kissi anhooni ghatit hone ki aashanka aur balwati ho gayi .....Deepu talab mein utar gaya ....aur poore talab mein jal k bhiter apne dostoh ko khojne laga ..lekin unke koi bhi pata nahi tha ...talab se jal ek choti nahar k roop mein jungle k bich se hokar gujarti thi ....Deepu ..tairte hue ab ussi nahar ...k jal mein aage badhne laga ....

abhi thodi hi dur badha tha ...k ek bada sa magarmach uski or badha ....woh apna bada se jabda kholkar Deepu par humla karne hi wala tha ...k Deepu usse chakma dekar ...tezi se uske niche se nikalkar aage badha ....lekin aage do aur bade semagar mach muh faade ....uske saamne the .....
ab unn magarmacho ko maarkar aage badhne k siwa uske paas aur koi rasta nahi tha .....tab tak picche wala bhi paas mein aaraha tha .....ek ne tab tak uss par humla kar diya ...Deepu ne majbooti se uske jabde ko pakadkar usse chir diya ...tab tak ek ne ...apne jabde mein uska ek pair pakda hi tha ...k . Deepu ne dusre pair se ek jordar kick uske jabde par maari ..aur hawa mein uchalkar ..apni talwar ...ka waar ek magarmach k sar k aar paar kar diya ...teesra jaise hi uspar humla karne aage badha ...Deepu ne apni talwar se uska bhi kaam tamam kar diya...

teeno magarmach maare jaa chuke the ....Deepu k ek pair bhi magarmach k daant lagne se thoda jakhmi ho gaya tha ..issiliye Deepu nahar se bahar aaya ....nahar k kinare baithkar apni sansoo ko niyantrit karne laga ..woh lagbhag ..ek ghante se tair raha tha ..pair k zakhmo se khun bhi bah raha tha . aur pida bhi bahut ho rahi thi....Deepu ne apne chakro ki urja ko sakriya karke panch tatva ki urja se apne ghav ko heal kiya ...

Nahar mein tairta hua woh bich jungle tak aagaya tha ....ek bàar toh uske mann mein aaya k kahi uske dost bhi magarmacho ka shikar toh nahi ho gaye ....lekin uske mann kah raha tha k nahi jo dikh raha hai woh sach nahi hai ....kuch na kuch toh aisa chal raha jo woh samaz nahi raha hai ....

Deepu phir nahar k kinare kinare chal kar dekhne laga k kahi yoh kuch aisa mil jaaye ....jisase kuch pata chale .....thodi dur chalne k baad usse ...nahar k kinare kuch kadmo k nishan mile ...jo nahar se jungle ki or jaarahe the ....Deepu unhi kadmo k nishan par chalte hue aage badha ...aagee ...ghaas aur pedo se gire patto k kaaran ab nishan bhi khatam ho gaye the ...

.ab aage kaise badhe issi baat ko woh soch raha tha ...k usse aise laga jaise uske picche koi hai ...Deepu satark hokar apni talwar sambhal li aur vaar karne piche muda ..toh ..waha uske teeno bbhai the ...

Shivom - arre arre bhai ..ruk jaa ...kya kar raha hai ...hume maarne ka irada hai kya ...

Deepu - ohh toh tum teeno ho ..lekin yaha kya kar rahe ho ....

Krish - Bhai pahele tum batao k yaha bich jungle mein tum kya kar rahe ho ...pata bhi hai ..waha Mahal mein sab tumhe hi dhud rahe ..hai ..aur tum yaha jungle mein ghum rahe ho ....

Shivom - kuch toh baat hai bhai ..nahi toh tum aise yaha nahi hote ...

tab Deepu ne unhe sabkuch bata diya .....

Krish - yeh toh bahut bura hua bhai ....kahin woh sab un magamachho ka shikar toh nahi ho gaye ....

Deepu - nahi muzhe aisa nahi lagta ....nahar se lekar yaha tak phir yeh pairo k nishan kiske hai ...

Shivom - jaisi paisthiti dikh rahi gai ..woh khud gaye nahi unhe le jaaya gaya hai ..lekin kyu aur kaha ....itne bade jungle mein kaha dhundenge ...

Virat - tum sab ruko mein dekhta hu ....(itna kahkar Virat ne apni aankhien band kar li ...apne gyan aur indriyo ki shakti ka prayog karke ...jungle ki har aawaj ..ko dekhne ka prayatna karne laga .)

Virat - jaldi chalo yaha se paschimi disha mein kuch gunde type k log msine dekhe ..hai shayad wahi kuch pata chalega ...

Jungle k ek kone mein lagbhag ...10 ...gunde aadhunik haiyaro se lace ....ek gufa ..k bahar khade the ....woh kissi nakab posh se kuch baat kar rahe the ....

Deepu ..Shivom ...Krish ..aur Virat ...charo unse kuch dur zhadiyo mein teleport hokar pahunch gaye ....unhone ...saamne ka drishya dekha jaha ..woh Nakab posh unn gundo ko kuch bata raha tha ....Charo ne ek dusre ki aankho mein dekhkar ishara kiya aur ....zhadiyo se nikalkar ...aage badhe ....

woh charo aage badh hi rahe the k uss Nakab Posh ki nazar unpar padi .....

NP - apne gundo se - bewakufo lagta hai ab tumahara man nahi hai kaam mein yeh charo kaise chut gaye .....

Un gundo ne palatkar dekha .....unmein se ek....
G - lekin boss waha toh sirf woh 8 hi the ....yeh pata nahi kaha se aagaye ....

NP - Kaun ho tum log aur yaha kya kar rahe ho ..

Deepu - Uncle hum toh apne doston ko dhundte hue yaha pahunche ....kya aapne unhe kahi dekha hai .....

NP - apne gndo se ......Bewakufo ..aise kya dekh rahe ho suna nahi yeh apne doston ko milne aaye hai ....inhe inke doston se mila do ...dhyan rahe muzhe sab jinda chahiye ....

Krish - aap aisa jyu kah rahe ho jinda chahiye ....aap .humara kya karoge ..uncle ..hume chod do ..hum yaha se chale jaayenge ....

NP - ha..ha ha ...kaha jaaoge bachkar ...( apne gundo se ) pakdo inhe ... ...un 10 mein se ek apni ..Gun lekar aage badha ...

Gunda - apne haath upar uthao ..nahi toh tum sabko yahi bhun dunga ....

uss gunde ki baat sunkar Deepu ko chodkar teeno muskurane lage ....kyu k uss gunde ne Deepu par hi gun taan di thi aur ab kya hone wala tha yeh unhe maalum tha ....

Deepu ne apne haath upar uthaye ....aur pal bhar mein uss gunde ki gardan jamin par padi thi ....khun ka fawara ..chodte hue uska dhad ...bhi jamin par girkar chatpatane laga ....

achanak yeh kya hua woh NP aur gunde samaz nahi paaye ....unhone aisa kuch socha nahi tha ....NP khatre ko bhanp chuka tha .....

NP - dekh kya rahe ho bhun do sabko ....

uske itna kahte hi ...sabhi guns garaj uthi ..lekin usase pahele hi Krish ne ..ek abhed shield saamne khadi kar di ..jisase woh saari goliya takrakar girne lagi ...

NP ne jab Shield ko dekha toh samaz gaya k yeh koi sadharan ladke nahi hai inke paas bhi powers hai ....Toh usne ...apni urja ka prahar...uss shield par kiya ...jisase ...woh shield tut gayi lekin tab tak ..Virat apni telekinesis ki power se unke guns ko jaam kar chuka tha ....jisase goliya chalni band ho gayi .....gun band hote dekhkar un gundo ne guns wahi jamin par patki aur ...unn charo ki taraf ....daude ...abhi Deepu kuch karta ..k Shivom ne usse rok liya ...

Shivom - bhai hume bhi thodi sewa ka mauka do ...

woh 9 gunde un tak pahuche hi the ...k Shivom ..hawa mein uchalkar ..ek k seene par jordar kick maari ...jisase uske seene k haddi tut gayi aur woh dharashayi ho gaya ....ek ..gunda ne tab tak uski gardan piche se apni bajuo mein jakad ..li ..aur ek uske pet mein mukke barsane laga ....Shivom ne ek haath piche le jaakar ...uski gardan pakad li aur ek zhatke se uski gardan ki haddi tod di aur saamne wale k dono taango k beech ek jordar prahar kiya ...jisase wohcheekhta hua niche gir pada ...uske gurte hi usne ..sar ko apne pairo tale khuchal diya ..jusase uski khopi fut gayi ...aur uska bheja bahar aagaya ....

yaha teen gunde Krish par ek saath zhapte the ....Krish ...hawa mein uchalkar ...waha sevhat gaya aur teeno ek dusre se takra gaye ....jab takwoh sambhalte ..tab tak ...woh ek gunde k piche jaakar uski garden marod chuka tha ....Baaki bache do mein se ek ne Krish ek muuka uske jabde par marna chaha ..lekin uske pahele hi Krish ne uska haath ukhad diya ..jisase woh chillate hue behosh ho gaya ...Tab tak teesre ne picche se ek jordar kick Krish k pith par maari ...jisase woh girte girte bacha ...usne turat sambhalkar ...uss gunde par chalang laga di ...aur usse dharti par gira diya ...uske chatti par sawar hokar ..Krish ne uski gardan hi dhad se ukhad di ....

teen gunde jinhone Virat par humla kiya ....woh teeno ek saath uski aur bade ....lekin Virat ne apni mind controlling power ka istemal ...karje unn teeno ko vash mein kiya ...woh teeno ab ek dusre k khoon k pyase ho gaye aur aapas mein hi bhid gaye .....

yeh saara khel khuch hi palo ka tha ....jab teeno unn gundo se bhide ...toh NP ne bhi apni urja ka prahar unpar kiya ..jisse ...Deepu ne dekh liya ...aur apni urja k prayog se ...uss vaar se apne teeno bhaiyo ko bacha liya ....

Deepu - kayar ...aise dhoke se unpar kya vaar karta hai ...dum hai toh mera saamna kar ....

NP - tum sabko toh ab tak mein baccha samaz kar khel raha tha ....par ab aur nahi lo sambhalo ....itna kahkar ...lagatar apni urja se ...Deepu par prahar karne laga ....Deepu bhi apni Divya talwar se unn pragaro ko bakhubi rok raha tha .....woh prahar itne tezi se aarahe the ...k ..woh bas unko rok hi raha tha ....NP ..Deepu ko ..apne upar prahar karne ka koi mauka nahi de eaha tha ....

Deepu ne talwar chalate hue ek yogi ki tarah apna dyan ekagrah kiya ....aur ..badi tezi se apna sthan badalkar ....Uss NP par apni panch tatvo ki urja ka samilit vaar kiya ...Jiske lagte hi ..woh NP ...ghayal hokar picche ki taraf gir gaya ...usse gir hua dekhkar Deepu uski or bahdha ...hi tha ..k usne turant sambhalkar ...Deepu par apni urja ka vaar kar diya ....jo sidha Deepu k seene par laga ....

Deepu ko uss vaar k prabhav se bahut pida ka anubhav ho raha tha ..uske seene ka kuch bhag uss vaar se jhulas gaya tha ....Woh abhi apni pida se sambhal hi raha tha k NP ne ...ab apni ..urja ka bada sa gola banaya aur ...Deepu par vaar ...kiya ....woh vaar Deepu ko lagta ....iske pahele ...ek shwet urja aakar uss vaar se takrayi aur woh vaar bekar ho gaya ...

NP ne jab dekha toh Waha Abhi khada tha .....Abhi kuch karta iske pahele Abhi ko dekhte hi woh waha se ...teleport hokar bhag gaya ....

saare gunde bhi maare jaa chuke the ...Abhi ne Deepu ko sambhala ...aur uske seene par haath rakhkar uske ghav ko heel kiya ....Toh usse kuch hosh aaya ....

Abhi - ab kaise lag raha hai beta ..tum thik ho ...

Deepu - muzhe kshama kar do pitashri ...mein aapki aashao par khara nahi utar saka ...

Abhi - nahi mere bacche muzhe garv hai tum sab par ....tumne bakhubi se ..uska saamna kiya ....uski urja k vaar se itna toh pata lag gaya hai k woh koi sadharan shatru nahi hai ...yeh koi alag hi shaki hai ..

parantu yeh tha kaun aur unka uddesya kya hai ...aur tum sab yaha kaise .....

Tab Deepu ne apne doston k khone se lekar ab tak ki saari baat batayi .....

Abhi - hmm lagta hai mamla kuch gadbad hai ....kuch dino se aise hi kissi na kissi hadse mein baccho k khone ki ghana bad rahi hai ....Aakhir yeh log kaun hai aur iss tarah baccho ko agwa kyu kar rahe hai ....yeh jo koi bhi hai bahut shaktishali hai ..jo sangharak ...ki urja ka saamna itne sahjta se kar raha tha ....

khair dekhte hai aage kya karna hai ...waha mahal mein sabhi pareshan ho rahe hai ...humme jsldi se chalna hoga ...phit sabhi uss gufa mein faye ...waha ...Deepu k diston k saath saath ...gaon k kuch bacche aur the jo uss zharne nein nahane aaye the woh bhi murchit pade the ...

Abhi ...Deepu ...Shivom Krish ..Virat ...aur unn sabhi murchit baccho ko lekar teleport hokar mahal pahunch gaya ....

Abhi k liye itna hi ....
Agla update jald hi . ...

Khubsurat shabdo se suniyojit dhang se ek suprichit sheelly se likhi gai ek aur nayi ashaon ka sanchar karti hui ashadharan update laaye hai mitr.

 

[Nevil singh]

Bhai mein toh bas parihas kar raha tha ...yadi aapko bura laga ho toh uske liye kshama chahta hu ..

mein iss forum par lockdown mein juda bas kuch fantasy kahani padhi woh bhi adhuri thi ...uske baad maine kahani likhna shuru kiya ..issiliye ..aur koi kahani padne ka samay hi nahi mila ....issiliye muzhe nahi pata tha k iss baare mein....pata nahi tha ....

Bas aap apna saath banaye rakhe ??

Nahi mitr Rachnakaar toh devtulye hote hai jo gaain ki sarita ki versha karte hue samaj me chhupi hui buraiyo ko ant karte hai. Aap dil per na le ye toh shobhagye hai mera ke aapke gaain se man parfullit hota hai.
Mitr khush rahiye, chintmukt rahiye v komal hrideya me sdaive parmatma ka vaash rahta hai vi ushse kabhi koi bura karye karva hi nahi sakta aap nishandeh ek utamkoti ki aatma hai, yaqeen na ho to dhyan ke dwara aap sawaym jaan jaayenge. Saadhovaad!

 

[u.sir.name]

Nahi mitr Rachnakaar toh devtulye hote hai jo gaain ki sarita ki versha karte hue samaj me chhupi hui buraiyo ko ant karte hai. Aap dil per na le ye toh shobhagye hai mera ke aapke gaain se man parfullit hota hai.
Mitr khush rahiye, chintmukt rahiye v komal hrideya me sdaive parmatma ka vaash rahta hai vi ushse kabhi koi bura karye karva hi nahi sakta aap nishandeh ek utamkoti ki aatma hai, yaqeen na ho to dhyan ke dwara aap sawaym jaan jaayenge. Saadhovaad!

Baki baat choro yeh btao Nevil bhai kha se dhundh k late ho yeh shabad...
Kya adbhut likhte ho...
Meri mano ek kahani aap bhi chalu karlo...

 

[mashish]

Update - 69

Deepu k 8 dost gayab the ...aur uske mann mein kuch bura hone ki aashanka bal pakad rahi thi ...

ab aagee....

Deepu apne dosto ko dhundne ...gaon se bahar ..nadi k kinare kinare ....chalte hue .....purane Dragon wale mandir k nikat ...hi pahadi ..se girte ..hue zharne tak pahuncha .....unchayi se girte hue jharne k kaaran ...waha ek chota talab sa bada hua tha ....

Deepu uss talab k kinare kinare chalte hue apne doston ko dhundne laga ....ek jagah usse apne doston k ...kuch kapde aur unke mobile rakhe hue mile ....Deepu ne charo taraf khoja ...lekin uske doston ka kahi kuch pata nahi chala ....talab tak jaate hue unke pairo k nishan bane hue the ....lekin unke lautne ka koi nishan nahi tha ....

Aakhir jo socha wahi hua ...Uske mann mein kissi anhooni ghatit hone ki aashanka aur balwati ho gayi .....Deepu talab mein utar gaya ....aur poore talab mein jal k bhiter apne dostoh ko khojne laga ..lekin unke koi bhi pata nahi tha ...talab se jal ek choti nahar k roop mein jungle k bich se hokar gujarti thi ....Deepu ..tairte hue ab ussi nahar ...k jal mein aage badhne laga ....

abhi thodi hi dur badha tha ...k ek bada sa magarmach uski or badha ....woh apna bada se jabda kholkar Deepu par humla karne hi wala tha ...k Deepu usse chakma dekar ...tezi se uske niche se nikalkar aage badha ....lekin aage do aur bade semagar mach muh faade ....uske saamne the .....
ab unn magarmacho ko maarkar aage badhne k siwa uske paas aur koi rasta nahi tha .....tab tak picche wala bhi paas mein aaraha tha .....ek ne tab tak uss par humla kar diya ...Deepu ne majbooti se uske jabde ko pakadkar usse chir diya ...tab tak ek ne ...apne jabde mein uska ek pair pakda hi tha ...k . Deepu ne dusre pair se ek jordar kick uske jabde par maari ..aur hawa mein uchalkar ..apni talwar ...ka waar ek magarmach k sar k aar paar kar diya ...teesra jaise hi uspar humla karne aage badha ...Deepu ne apni talwar se uska bhi kaam tamam kar diya...

teeno magarmach maare jaa chuke the ....Deepu k ek pair bhi magarmach k daant lagne se thoda jakhmi ho gaya tha ..issiliye Deepu nahar se bahar aaya ....nahar k kinare baithkar apni sansoo ko niyantrit karne laga ..woh lagbhag ..ek ghante se tair raha tha ..pair k zakhmo se khun bhi bah raha tha . aur pida bhi bahut ho rahi thi....Deepu ne apne chakro ki urja ko sakriya karke panch tatva ki urja se apne ghav ko heal kiya ...

Nahar mein tairta hua woh bich jungle tak aagaya tha ....ek bàar toh uske mann mein aaya k kahi uske dost bhi magarmacho ka shikar toh nahi ho gaye ....lekin uske mann kah raha tha k nahi jo dikh raha hai woh sach nahi hai ....kuch na kuch toh aisa chal raha jo woh samaz nahi raha hai ....

Deepu phir nahar k kinare kinare chal kar dekhne laga k kahi yoh kuch aisa mil jaaye ....jisase kuch pata chale .....thodi dur chalne k baad usse ...nahar k kinare kuch kadmo k nishan mile ...jo nahar se jungle ki or jaarahe the ....Deepu unhi kadmo k nishan par chalte hue aage badha ...aagee ...ghaas aur pedo se gire patto k kaaran ab nishan bhi khatam ho gaye the ...

.ab aage kaise badhe issi baat ko woh soch raha tha ...k usse aise laga jaise uske picche koi hai ...Deepu satark hokar apni talwar sambhal li aur vaar karne piche muda ..toh ..waha uske teeno bbhai the ...

Shivom - arre arre bhai ..ruk jaa ...kya kar raha hai ...hume maarne ka irada hai kya ...

Deepu - ohh toh tum teeno ho ..lekin yaha kya kar rahe ho ....

Krish - Bhai pahele tum batao k yaha bich jungle mein tum kya kar rahe ho ...pata bhi hai ..waha Mahal mein sab tumhe hi dhud rahe ..hai ..aur tum yaha jungle mein ghum rahe ho ....

Shivom - kuch toh baat hai bhai ..nahi toh tum aise yaha nahi hote ...

tab Deepu ne unhe sabkuch bata diya .....

Krish - yeh toh bahut bura hua bhai ....kahin woh sab un magamachho ka shikar toh nahi ho gaye ....

Deepu - nahi muzhe aisa nahi lagta ....nahar se lekar yaha tak phir yeh pairo k nishan kiske hai ...

Shivom - jaisi paisthiti dikh rahi gai ..woh khud gaye nahi unhe le jaaya gaya hai ..lekin kyu aur kaha ....itne bade jungle mein kaha dhundenge ...

Virat - tum sab ruko mein dekhta hu ....(itna kahkar Virat ne apni aankhien band kar li ...apne gyan aur indriyo ki shakti ka prayog karke ...jungle ki har aawaj ..ko dekhne ka prayatna karne laga .)

Virat - jaldi chalo yaha se paschimi disha mein kuch gunde type k log msine dekhe ..hai shayad wahi kuch pata chalega ...

Jungle k ek kone mein lagbhag ...10 ...gunde aadhunik haiyaro se lace ....ek gufa ..k bahar khade the ....woh kissi nakab posh se kuch baat kar rahe the ....

Deepu ..Shivom ...Krish ..aur Virat ...charo unse kuch dur zhadiyo mein teleport hokar pahunch gaye ....unhone ...saamne ka drishya dekha jaha ..woh Nakab posh unn gundo ko kuch bata raha tha ....Charo ne ek dusre ki aankho mein dekhkar ishara kiya aur ....zhadiyo se nikalkar ...aage badhe ....

woh charo aage badh hi rahe the k uss Nakab Posh ki nazar unpar padi .....

NP - apne gundo se - bewakufo lagta hai ab tumahara man nahi hai kaam mein yeh charo kaise chut gaye .....

Un gundo ne palatkar dekha .....unmein se ek....
G - lekin boss waha toh sirf woh 8 hi the ....yeh pata nahi kaha se aagaye ....

NP - Kaun ho tum log aur yaha kya kar rahe ho ..

Deepu - Uncle hum toh apne doston ko dhundte hue yaha pahunche ....kya aapne unhe kahi dekha hai .....

NP - apne gndo se ......Bewakufo ..aise kya dekh rahe ho suna nahi yeh apne doston ko milne aaye hai ....inhe inke doston se mila do ...dhyan rahe muzhe sab jinda chahiye ....

Krish - aap aisa jyu kah rahe ho jinda chahiye ....aap .humara kya karoge ..uncle ..hume chod do ..hum yaha se chale jaayenge ....

NP - ha..ha ha ...kaha jaaoge bachkar ...( apne gundo se ) pakdo inhe ... ...un 10 mein se ek apni ..Gun lekar aage badha ...

Gunda - apne haath upar uthao ..nahi toh tum sabko yahi bhun dunga ....

uss gunde ki baat sunkar Deepu ko chodkar teeno muskurane lage ....kyu k uss gunde ne Deepu par hi gun taan di thi aur ab kya hone wala tha yeh unhe maalum tha ....

Deepu ne apne haath upar uthaye ....aur pal bhar mein uss gunde ki gardan jamin par padi thi ....khun ka fawara ..chodte hue uska dhad ...bhi jamin par girkar chatpatane laga ....

achanak yeh kya hua woh NP aur gunde samaz nahi paaye ....unhone aisa kuch socha nahi tha ....NP khatre ko bhanp chuka tha .....

NP - dekh kya rahe ho bhun do sabko ....

uske itna kahte hi ...sabhi guns garaj uthi ..lekin usase pahele hi Krish ne ..ek abhed shield saamne khadi kar di ..jisase woh saari goliya takrakar girne lagi ...

NP ne jab Shield ko dekha toh samaz gaya k yeh koi sadharan ladke nahi hai inke paas bhi powers hai ....Toh usne ...apni urja ka prahar...uss shield par kiya ...jisase ...woh shield tut gayi lekin tab tak ..Virat apni telekinesis ki power se unke guns ko jaam kar chuka tha ....jisase goliya chalni band ho gayi .....gun band hote dekhkar un gundo ne guns wahi jamin par patki aur ...unn charo ki taraf ....daude ...abhi Deepu kuch karta ..k Shivom ne usse rok liya ...

Shivom - bhai hume bhi thodi sewa ka mauka do ...

woh 9 gunde un tak pahuche hi the ...k Shivom ..hawa mein uchalkar ..ek k seene par jordar kick maari ...jisase uske seene k haddi tut gayi aur woh dharashayi ho gaya ....ek ..gunda ne tab tak uski gardan piche se apni bajuo mein jakad ..li ..aur ek uske pet mein mukke barsane laga ....Shivom ne ek haath piche le jaakar ...uski gardan pakad li aur ek zhatke se uski gardan ki haddi tod di aur saamne wale k dono taango k beech ek jordar prahar kiya ...jisase wohcheekhta hua niche gir pada ...uske gurte hi usne ..sar ko apne pairo tale khuchal diya ..jusase uski khopi fut gayi ...aur uska bheja bahar aagaya ....

yaha teen gunde Krish par ek saath zhapte the ....Krish ...hawa mein uchalkar ...waha sevhat gaya aur teeno ek dusre se takra gaye ....jab takwoh sambhalte ..tab tak ...woh ek gunde k piche jaakar uski garden marod chuka tha ....Baaki bache do mein se ek ne Krish ek muuka uske jabde par marna chaha ..lekin uske pahele hi Krish ne uska haath ukhad diya ..jisase woh chillate hue behosh ho gaya ...Tab tak teesre ne picche se ek jordar kick Krish k pith par maari ...jisase woh girte girte bacha ...usne turat sambhalkar ...uss gunde par chalang laga di ...aur usse dharti par gira diya ...uske chatti par sawar hokar ..Krish ne uski gardan hi dhad se ukhad di ....

teen gunde jinhone Virat par humla kiya ....woh teeno ek saath uski aur bade ....lekin Virat ne apni mind controlling power ka istemal ...karje unn teeno ko vash mein kiya ...woh teeno ab ek dusre k khoon k pyase ho gaye aur aapas mein hi bhid gaye .....

yeh saara khel khuch hi palo ka tha ....jab teeno unn gundo se bhide ...toh NP ne bhi apni urja ka prahar unpar kiya ..jisse ...Deepu ne dekh liya ...aur apni urja k prayog se ...uss vaar se apne teeno bhaiyo ko bacha liya ....

Deepu - kayar ...aise dhoke se unpar kya vaar karta hai ...dum hai toh mera saamna kar ....

NP - tum sabko toh ab tak mein baccha samaz kar khel raha tha ....par ab aur nahi lo sambhalo ....itna kahkar ...lagatar apni urja se ...Deepu par prahar karne laga ....Deepu bhi apni Divya talwar se unn pragaro ko bakhubi rok raha tha .....woh prahar itne tezi se aarahe the ...k ..woh bas unko rok hi raha tha ....NP ..Deepu ko ..apne upar prahar karne ka koi mauka nahi de eaha tha ....

Deepu ne talwar chalate hue ek yogi ki tarah apna dyan ekagrah kiya ....aur ..badi tezi se apna sthan badalkar ....Uss NP par apni panch tatvo ki urja ka samilit vaar kiya ...Jiske lagte hi ..woh NP ...ghayal hokar picche ki taraf gir gaya ...usse gir hua dekhkar Deepu uski or bahdha ...hi tha ..k usne turant sambhalkar ...Deepu par apni urja ka vaar kar diya ....jo sidha Deepu k seene par laga ....

Deepu ko uss vaar k prabhav se bahut pida ka anubhav ho raha tha ..uske seene ka kuch bhag uss vaar se jhulas gaya tha ....Woh abhi apni pida se sambhal hi raha tha k NP ne ...ab apni ..urja ka bada sa gola banaya aur ...Deepu par vaar ...kiya ....woh vaar Deepu ko lagta ....iske pahele ...ek shwet urja aakar uss vaar se takrayi aur woh vaar bekar ho gaya ...

NP ne jab dekha toh Waha Abhi khada tha .....Abhi kuch karta iske pahele Abhi ko dekhte hi woh waha se ...teleport hokar bhag gaya ....

saare gunde bhi maare jaa chuke the ...Abhi ne Deepu ko sambhala ...aur uske seene par haath rakhkar uske ghav ko heel kiya ....Toh usse kuch hosh aaya ....

Abhi - ab kaise lag raha hai beta ..tum thik ho ...

Deepu - muzhe kshama kar do pitashri ...mein aapki aashao par khara nahi utar saka ...

Abhi - nahi mere bacche muzhe garv hai tum sab par ....tumne bakhubi se ..uska saamna kiya ....uski urja k vaar se itna toh pata lag gaya hai k woh koi sadharan shatru nahi hai ...yeh koi alag hi shaki hai ..

parantu yeh tha kaun aur unka uddesya kya hai ...aur tum sab yaha kaise .....

Tab Deepu ne apne doston k khone se lekar ab tak ki saari baat batayi .....

Abhi - hmm lagta hai mamla kuch gadbad hai ....kuch dino se aise hi kissi na kissi hadse mein baccho k khone ki ghana bad rahi hai ....Aakhir yeh log kaun hai aur iss tarah baccho ko agwa kyu kar rahe hai ....yeh jo koi bhi hai bahut shaktishali hai ..jo sangharak ...ki urja ka saamna itne sahjta se kar raha tha ....

khair dekhte hai aage kya karna hai ...waha mahal mein sabhi pareshan ho rahe hai ...humme jsldi se chalna hoga ...phit sabhi uss gufa mein faye ...waha ...Deepu k diston k saath saath ...gaon k kuch bacche aur the jo uss zharne nein nahane aaye the woh bhi murchit pade the ...

Abhi ...Deepu ...Shivom Krish ..Virat ...aur unn sabhi murchit baccho ko lekar teleport hokar mahal pahunch gaya ....

Abhi k liye itna hi ....
Agla update jald hi . ...

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[ANUJ KUMAR]

Update - 69

Deepu k 8 dost gayab the ...aur uske mann mein kuch bura hone ki aashanka bal pakad rahi thi ...

ab aagee....

Deepu apne dosto ko dhundne ...gaon se bahar ..nadi k kinare kinare ....chalte hue .....purane Dragon wale mandir k nikat ...hi pahadi ..se girte ..hue zharne tak pahuncha .....unchayi se girte hue jharne k kaaran ...waha ek chota talab sa bada hua tha ....

Deepu uss talab k kinare kinare chalte hue apne doston ko dhundne laga ....ek jagah usse apne doston k ...kuch kapde aur unke mobile rakhe hue mile ....Deepu ne charo taraf khoja ...lekin uske doston ka kahi kuch pata nahi chala ....talab tak jaate hue unke pairo k nishan bane hue the ....lekin unke lautne ka koi nishan nahi tha ....

Aakhir jo socha wahi hua ...Uske mann mein kissi anhooni ghatit hone ki aashanka aur balwati ho gayi .....Deepu talab mein utar gaya ....aur poore talab mein jal k bhiter apne dostoh ko khojne laga ..lekin unke koi bhi pata nahi tha ...talab se jal ek choti nahar k roop mein jungle k bich se hokar gujarti thi ....Deepu ..tairte hue ab ussi nahar ...k jal mein aage badhne laga ....

abhi thodi hi dur badha tha ...k ek bada sa magarmach uski or badha ....woh apna bada se jabda kholkar Deepu par humla karne hi wala tha ...k Deepu usse chakma dekar ...tezi se uske niche se nikalkar aage badha ....lekin aage do aur bade semagar mach muh faade ....uske saamne the .....
ab unn magarmacho ko maarkar aage badhne k siwa uske paas aur koi rasta nahi tha .....tab tak picche wala bhi paas mein aaraha tha .....ek ne tab tak uss par humla kar diya ...Deepu ne majbooti se uske jabde ko pakadkar usse chir diya ...tab tak ek ne ...apne jabde mein uska ek pair pakda hi tha ...k . Deepu ne dusre pair se ek jordar kick uske jabde par maari ..aur hawa mein uchalkar ..apni talwar ...ka waar ek magarmach k sar k aar paar kar diya ...teesra jaise hi uspar humla karne aage badha ...Deepu ne apni talwar se uska bhi kaam tamam kar diya...

teeno magarmach maare jaa chuke the ....Deepu k ek pair bhi magarmach k daant lagne se thoda jakhmi ho gaya tha ..issiliye Deepu nahar se bahar aaya ....nahar k kinare baithkar apni sansoo ko niyantrit karne laga ..woh lagbhag ..ek ghante se tair raha tha ..pair k zakhmo se khun bhi bah raha tha . aur pida bhi bahut ho rahi thi....Deepu ne apne chakro ki urja ko sakriya karke panch tatva ki urja se apne ghav ko heal kiya ...

Nahar mein tairta hua woh bich jungle tak aagaya tha ....ek bàar toh uske mann mein aaya k kahi uske dost bhi magarmacho ka shikar toh nahi ho gaye ....lekin uske mann kah raha tha k nahi jo dikh raha hai woh sach nahi hai ....kuch na kuch toh aisa chal raha jo woh samaz nahi raha hai ....

Deepu phir nahar k kinare kinare chal kar dekhne laga k kahi yoh kuch aisa mil jaaye ....jisase kuch pata chale .....thodi dur chalne k baad usse ...nahar k kinare kuch kadmo k nishan mile ...jo nahar se jungle ki or jaarahe the ....Deepu unhi kadmo k nishan par chalte hue aage badha ...aagee ...ghaas aur pedo se gire patto k kaaran ab nishan bhi khatam ho gaye the ...

.ab aage kaise badhe issi baat ko woh soch raha tha ...k usse aise laga jaise uske picche koi hai ...Deepu satark hokar apni talwar sambhal li aur vaar karne piche muda ..toh ..waha uske teeno bbhai the ...

Shivom - arre arre bhai ..ruk jaa ...kya kar raha hai ...hume maarne ka irada hai kya ...

Deepu - ohh toh tum teeno ho ..lekin yaha kya kar rahe ho ....

Krish - Bhai pahele tum batao k yaha bich jungle mein tum kya kar rahe ho ...pata bhi hai ..waha Mahal mein sab tumhe hi dhud rahe ..hai ..aur tum yaha jungle mein ghum rahe ho ....

Shivom - kuch toh baat hai bhai ..nahi toh tum aise yaha nahi hote ...

tab Deepu ne unhe sabkuch bata diya .....

Krish - yeh toh bahut bura hua bhai ....kahin woh sab un magamachho ka shikar toh nahi ho gaye ....

Deepu - nahi muzhe aisa nahi lagta ....nahar se lekar yaha tak phir yeh pairo k nishan kiske hai ...

Shivom - jaisi paisthiti dikh rahi gai ..woh khud gaye nahi unhe le jaaya gaya hai ..lekin kyu aur kaha ....itne bade jungle mein kaha dhundenge ...

Virat - tum sab ruko mein dekhta hu ....(itna kahkar Virat ne apni aankhien band kar li ...apne gyan aur indriyo ki shakti ka prayog karke ...jungle ki har aawaj ..ko dekhne ka prayatna karne laga .)

Virat - jaldi chalo yaha se paschimi disha mein kuch gunde type k log msine dekhe ..hai shayad wahi kuch pata chalega ...

Jungle k ek kone mein lagbhag ...10 ...gunde aadhunik haiyaro se lace ....ek gufa ..k bahar khade the ....woh kissi nakab posh se kuch baat kar rahe the ....

Deepu ..Shivom ...Krish ..aur Virat ...charo unse kuch dur zhadiyo mein teleport hokar pahunch gaye ....unhone ...saamne ka drishya dekha jaha ..woh Nakab posh unn gundo ko kuch bata raha tha ....Charo ne ek dusre ki aankho mein dekhkar ishara kiya aur ....zhadiyo se nikalkar ...aage badhe ....

woh charo aage badh hi rahe the k uss Nakab Posh ki nazar unpar padi .....

NP - apne gundo se - bewakufo lagta hai ab tumahara man nahi hai kaam mein yeh charo kaise chut gaye .....

Un gundo ne palatkar dekha .....unmein se ek....
G - lekin boss waha toh sirf woh 8 hi the ....yeh pata nahi kaha se aagaye ....

NP - Kaun ho tum log aur yaha kya kar rahe ho ..

Deepu - Uncle hum toh apne doston ko dhundte hue yaha pahunche ....kya aapne unhe kahi dekha hai .....

NP - apne gndo se ......Bewakufo ..aise kya dekh rahe ho suna nahi yeh apne doston ko milne aaye hai ....inhe inke doston se mila do ...dhyan rahe muzhe sab jinda chahiye ....

Krish - aap aisa jyu kah rahe ho jinda chahiye ....aap .humara kya karoge ..uncle ..hume chod do ..hum yaha se chale jaayenge ....

NP - ha..ha ha ...kaha jaaoge bachkar ...( apne gundo se ) pakdo inhe ... ...un 10 mein se ek apni ..Gun lekar aage badha ...

Gunda - apne haath upar uthao ..nahi toh tum sabko yahi bhun dunga ....

uss gunde ki baat sunkar Deepu ko chodkar teeno muskurane lage ....kyu k uss gunde ne Deepu par hi gun taan di thi aur ab kya hone wala tha yeh unhe maalum tha ....

Deepu ne apne haath upar uthaye ....aur pal bhar mein uss gunde ki gardan jamin par padi thi ....khun ka fawara ..chodte hue uska dhad ...bhi jamin par girkar chatpatane laga ....

achanak yeh kya hua woh NP aur gunde samaz nahi paaye ....unhone aisa kuch socha nahi tha ....NP khatre ko bhanp chuka tha .....

NP - dekh kya rahe ho bhun do sabko ....

uske itna kahte hi ...sabhi guns garaj uthi ..lekin usase pahele hi Krish ne ..ek abhed shield saamne khadi kar di ..jisase woh saari goliya takrakar girne lagi ...

NP ne jab Shield ko dekha toh samaz gaya k yeh koi sadharan ladke nahi hai inke paas bhi powers hai ....Toh usne ...apni urja ka prahar...uss shield par kiya ...jisase ...woh shield tut gayi lekin tab tak ..Virat apni telekinesis ki power se unke guns ko jaam kar chuka tha ....jisase goliya chalni band ho gayi .....gun band hote dekhkar un gundo ne guns wahi jamin par patki aur ...unn charo ki taraf ....daude ...abhi Deepu kuch karta ..k Shivom ne usse rok liya ...

Shivom - bhai hume bhi thodi sewa ka mauka do ...

woh 9 gunde un tak pahuche hi the ...k Shivom ..hawa mein uchalkar ..ek k seene par jordar kick maari ...jisase uske seene k haddi tut gayi aur woh dharashayi ho gaya ....ek ..gunda ne tab tak uski gardan piche se apni bajuo mein jakad ..li ..aur ek uske pet mein mukke barsane laga ....Shivom ne ek haath piche le jaakar ...uski gardan pakad li aur ek zhatke se uski gardan ki haddi tod di aur saamne wale k dono taango k beech ek jordar prahar kiya ...jisase wohcheekhta hua niche gir pada ...uske gurte hi usne ..sar ko apne pairo tale khuchal diya ..jusase uski khopi fut gayi ...aur uska bheja bahar aagaya ....

yaha teen gunde Krish par ek saath zhapte the ....Krish ...hawa mein uchalkar ...waha sevhat gaya aur teeno ek dusre se takra gaye ....jab takwoh sambhalte ..tab tak ...woh ek gunde k piche jaakar uski garden marod chuka tha ....Baaki bache do mein se ek ne Krish ek muuka uske jabde par marna chaha ..lekin uske pahele hi Krish ne uska haath ukhad diya ..jisase woh chillate hue behosh ho gaya ...Tab tak teesre ne picche se ek jordar kick Krish k pith par maari ...jisase woh girte girte bacha ...usne turat sambhalkar ...uss gunde par chalang laga di ...aur usse dharti par gira diya ...uske chatti par sawar hokar ..Krish ne uski gardan hi dhad se ukhad di ....

teen gunde jinhone Virat par humla kiya ....woh teeno ek saath uski aur bade ....lekin Virat ne apni mind controlling power ka istemal ...karje unn teeno ko vash mein kiya ...woh teeno ab ek dusre k khoon k pyase ho gaye aur aapas mein hi bhid gaye .....

yeh saara khel khuch hi palo ka tha ....jab teeno unn gundo se bhide ...toh NP ne bhi apni urja ka prahar unpar kiya ..jisse ...Deepu ne dekh liya ...aur apni urja k prayog se ...uss vaar se apne teeno bhaiyo ko bacha liya ....

Deepu - kayar ...aise dhoke se unpar kya vaar karta hai ...dum hai toh mera saamna kar ....

NP - tum sabko toh ab tak mein baccha samaz kar khel raha tha ....par ab aur nahi lo sambhalo ....itna kahkar ...lagatar apni urja se ...Deepu par prahar karne laga ....Deepu bhi apni Divya talwar se unn pragaro ko bakhubi rok raha tha .....woh prahar itne tezi se aarahe the ...k ..woh bas unko rok hi raha tha ....NP ..Deepu ko ..apne upar prahar karne ka koi mauka nahi de eaha tha ....

Deepu ne talwar chalate hue ek yogi ki tarah apna dyan ekagrah kiya ....aur ..badi tezi se apna sthan badalkar ....Uss NP par apni panch tatvo ki urja ka samilit vaar kiya ...Jiske lagte hi ..woh NP ...ghayal hokar picche ki taraf gir gaya ...usse gir hua dekhkar Deepu uski or bahdha ...hi tha ..k usne turant sambhalkar ...Deepu par apni urja ka vaar kar diya ....jo sidha Deepu k seene par laga ....

Deepu ko uss vaar k prabhav se bahut pida ka anubhav ho raha tha ..uske seene ka kuch bhag uss vaar se jhulas gaya tha ....Woh abhi apni pida se sambhal hi raha tha k NP ne ...ab apni ..urja ka bada sa gola banaya aur ...Deepu par vaar ...kiya ....woh vaar Deepu ko lagta ....iske pahele ...ek shwet urja aakar uss vaar se takrayi aur woh vaar bekar ho gaya ...

NP ne jab dekha toh Waha Abhi khada tha .....Abhi kuch karta iske pahele Abhi ko dekhte hi woh waha se ...teleport hokar bhag gaya ....

saare gunde bhi maare jaa chuke the ...Abhi ne Deepu ko sambhala ...aur uske seene par haath rakhkar uske ghav ko heel kiya ....Toh usse kuch hosh aaya ....

Abhi - ab kaise lag raha hai beta ..tum thik ho ...

Deepu - muzhe kshama kar do pitashri ...mein aapki aashao par khara nahi utar saka ...

Abhi - nahi mere bacche muzhe garv hai tum sab par ....tumne bakhubi se ..uska saamna kiya ....uski urja k vaar se itna toh pata lag gaya hai k woh koi sadharan shatru nahi hai ...yeh koi alag hi shaki hai ..

parantu yeh tha kaun aur unka uddesya kya hai ...aur tum sab yaha kaise .....

Tab Deepu ne apne doston k khone se lekar ab tak ki saari baat batayi .....

Abhi - hmm lagta hai mamla kuch gadbad hai ....kuch dino se aise hi kissi na kissi hadse mein baccho k khone ki ghana bad rahi hai ....Aakhir yeh log kaun hai aur iss tarah baccho ko agwa kyu kar rahe hai ....yeh jo koi bhi hai bahut shaktishali hai ..jo sangharak ...ki urja ka saamna itne sahjta se kar raha tha ....

khair dekhte hai aage kya karna hai ...waha mahal mein sabhi pareshan ho rahe hai ...humme jsldi se chalna hoga ...phit sabhi uss gufa mein faye ...waha ...Deepu k diston k saath saath ...gaon k kuch bacche aur the jo uss zharne nein nahane aaye the woh bhi murchit pade the ...

Abhi ...Deepu ...Shivom Krish ..Virat ...aur unn sabhi murchit baccho ko lekar teleport hokar mahal pahunch gaya ....

Abhi k liye itna hi ....
Agla update jald hi . ...

Awesome update bhai

 

[ANUJ KUMAR]

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[The king]

Nice update bhai waiting for next update

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Update - 69

Deepu k 8 dost gayab the ...aur uske mann mein kuch bura hone ki aashanka bal pakad rahi thi ...

ab aagee....

Deepu apne dosto ko dhundne ...gaon se bahar ..nadi k kinare kinare ....chalte hue .....purane Dragon wale mandir k nikat ...hi pahadi ..se girte ..hue zharne tak pahuncha .....unchayi se girte hue jharne k kaaran ...waha ek chota talab sa bada hua tha ....

Deepu uss talab k kinare kinare chalte hue apne doston ko dhundne laga ....ek jagah usse apne doston k ...kuch kapde aur unke mobile rakhe hue mile ....Deepu ne charo taraf khoja ...lekin uske doston ka kahi kuch pata nahi chala ....talab tak jaate hue unke pairo k nishan bane hue the ....lekin unke lautne ka koi nishan nahi tha ....

Aakhir jo socha wahi hua ...Uske mann mein kissi anhooni ghatit hone ki aashanka aur balwati ho gayi .....Deepu talab mein utar gaya ....aur poore talab mein jal k bhiter apne dostoh ko khojne laga ..lekin unke koi bhi pata nahi tha ...talab se jal ek choti nahar k roop mein jungle k bich se hokar gujarti thi ....Deepu ..tairte hue ab ussi nahar ...k jal mein aage badhne laga ....

abhi thodi hi dur badha tha ...k ek bada sa magarmach uski or badha ....woh apna bada se jabda kholkar Deepu par humla karne hi wala tha ...k Deepu usse chakma dekar ...tezi se uske niche se nikalkar aage badha ....lekin aage do aur bade semagar mach muh faade ....uske saamne the .....
ab unn magarmacho ko maarkar aage badhne k siwa uske paas aur koi rasta nahi tha .....tab tak picche wala bhi paas mein aaraha tha .....ek ne tab tak uss par humla kar diya ...Deepu ne majbooti se uske jabde ko pakadkar usse chir diya ...tab tak ek ne ...apne jabde mein uska ek pair pakda hi tha ...k . Deepu ne dusre pair se ek jordar kick uske jabde par maari ..aur hawa mein uchalkar ..apni talwar ...ka waar ek magarmach k sar k aar paar kar diya ...teesra jaise hi uspar humla karne aage badha ...Deepu ne apni talwar se uska bhi kaam tamam kar diya...

teeno magarmach maare jaa chuke the ....Deepu k ek pair bhi magarmach k daant lagne se thoda jakhmi ho gaya tha ..issiliye Deepu nahar se bahar aaya ....nahar k kinare baithkar apni sansoo ko niyantrit karne laga ..woh lagbhag ..ek ghante se tair raha tha ..pair k zakhmo se khun bhi bah raha tha . aur pida bhi bahut ho rahi thi....Deepu ne apne chakro ki urja ko sakriya karke panch tatva ki urja se apne ghav ko heal kiya ...

Nahar mein tairta hua woh bich jungle tak aagaya tha ....ek bàar toh uske mann mein aaya k kahi uske dost bhi magarmacho ka shikar toh nahi ho gaye ....lekin uske mann kah raha tha k nahi jo dikh raha hai woh sach nahi hai ....kuch na kuch toh aisa chal raha jo woh samaz nahi raha hai ....

Deepu phir nahar k kinare kinare chal kar dekhne laga k kahi yoh kuch aisa mil jaaye ....jisase kuch pata chale .....thodi dur chalne k baad usse ...nahar k kinare kuch kadmo k nishan mile ...jo nahar se jungle ki or jaarahe the ....Deepu unhi kadmo k nishan par chalte hue aage badha ...aagee ...ghaas aur pedo se gire patto k kaaran ab nishan bhi khatam ho gaye the ...

.ab aage kaise badhe issi baat ko woh soch raha tha ...k usse aise laga jaise uske picche koi hai ...Deepu satark hokar apni talwar sambhal li aur vaar karne piche muda ..toh ..waha uske teeno bbhai the ...

Shivom - arre arre bhai ..ruk jaa ...kya kar raha hai ...hume maarne ka irada hai kya ...

Deepu - ohh toh tum teeno ho ..lekin yaha kya kar rahe ho ....

Krish - Bhai pahele tum batao k yaha bich jungle mein tum kya kar rahe ho ...pata bhi hai ..waha Mahal mein sab tumhe hi dhud rahe ..hai ..aur tum yaha jungle mein ghum rahe ho ....

Shivom - kuch toh baat hai bhai ..nahi toh tum aise yaha nahi hote ...

tab Deepu ne unhe sabkuch bata diya .....

Krish - yeh toh bahut bura hua bhai ....kahin woh sab un magamachho ka shikar toh nahi ho gaye ....

Deepu - nahi muzhe aisa nahi lagta ....nahar se lekar yaha tak phir yeh pairo k nishan kiske hai ...

Shivom - jaisi paisthiti dikh rahi gai ..woh khud gaye nahi unhe le jaaya gaya hai ..lekin kyu aur kaha ....itne bade jungle mein kaha dhundenge ...

Virat - tum sab ruko mein dekhta hu ....(itna kahkar Virat ne apni aankhien band kar li ...apne gyan aur indriyo ki shakti ka prayog karke ...jungle ki har aawaj ..ko dekhne ka prayatna karne laga .)

Virat - jaldi chalo yaha se paschimi disha mein kuch gunde type k log msine dekhe ..hai shayad wahi kuch pata chalega ...

Jungle k ek kone mein lagbhag ...10 ...gunde aadhunik haiyaro se lace ....ek gufa ..k bahar khade the ....woh kissi nakab posh se kuch baat kar rahe the ....

Deepu ..Shivom ...Krish ..aur Virat ...charo unse kuch dur zhadiyo mein teleport hokar pahunch gaye ....unhone ...saamne ka drishya dekha jaha ..woh Nakab posh unn gundo ko kuch bata raha tha ....Charo ne ek dusre ki aankho mein dekhkar ishara kiya aur ....zhadiyo se nikalkar ...aage badhe ....

woh charo aage badh hi rahe the k uss Nakab Posh ki nazar unpar padi .....

NP - apne gundo se - bewakufo lagta hai ab tumahara man nahi hai kaam mein yeh charo kaise chut gaye .....

Un gundo ne palatkar dekha .....unmein se ek....
G - lekin boss waha toh sirf woh 8 hi the ....yeh pata nahi kaha se aagaye ....

NP - Kaun ho tum log aur yaha kya kar rahe ho ..

Deepu - Uncle hum toh apne doston ko dhundte hue yaha pahunche ....kya aapne unhe kahi dekha hai .....

NP - apne gndo se ......Bewakufo ..aise kya dekh rahe ho suna nahi yeh apne doston ko milne aaye hai ....inhe inke doston se mila do ...dhyan rahe muzhe sab jinda chahiye ....

Krish - aap aisa jyu kah rahe ho jinda chahiye ....aap .humara kya karoge ..uncle ..hume chod do ..hum yaha se chale jaayenge ....

NP - ha..ha ha ...kaha jaaoge bachkar ...( apne gundo se ) pakdo inhe ... ...un 10 mein se ek apni ..Gun lekar aage badha ...

Gunda - apne haath upar uthao ..nahi toh tum sabko yahi bhun dunga ....

uss gunde ki baat sunkar Deepu ko chodkar teeno muskurane lage ....kyu k uss gunde ne Deepu par hi gun taan di thi aur ab kya hone wala tha yeh unhe maalum tha ....

Deepu ne apne haath upar uthaye ....aur pal bhar mein uss gunde ki gardan jamin par padi thi ....khun ka fawara ..chodte hue uska dhad ...bhi jamin par girkar chatpatane laga ....

achanak yeh kya hua woh NP aur gunde samaz nahi paaye ....unhone aisa kuch socha nahi tha ....NP khatre ko bhanp chuka tha .....

NP - dekh kya rahe ho bhun do sabko ....

uske itna kahte hi ...sabhi guns garaj uthi ..lekin usase pahele hi Krish ne ..ek abhed shield saamne khadi kar di ..jisase woh saari goliya takrakar girne lagi ...

NP ne jab Shield ko dekha toh samaz gaya k yeh koi sadharan ladke nahi hai inke paas bhi powers hai ....Toh usne ...apni urja ka prahar...uss shield par kiya ...jisase ...woh shield tut gayi lekin tab tak ..Virat apni telekinesis ki power se unke guns ko jaam kar chuka tha ....jisase goliya chalni band ho gayi .....gun band hote dekhkar un gundo ne guns wahi jamin par patki aur ...unn charo ki taraf ....daude ...abhi Deepu kuch karta ..k Shivom ne usse rok liya ...

Shivom - bhai hume bhi thodi sewa ka mauka do ...

woh 9 gunde un tak pahuche hi the ...k Shivom ..hawa mein uchalkar ..ek k seene par jordar kick maari ...jisase uske seene k haddi tut gayi aur woh dharashayi ho gaya ....ek ..gunda ne tab tak uski gardan piche se apni bajuo mein jakad ..li ..aur ek uske pet mein mukke barsane laga ....Shivom ne ek haath piche le jaakar ...uski gardan pakad li aur ek zhatke se uski gardan ki haddi tod di aur saamne wale k dono taango k beech ek jordar prahar kiya ...jisase wohcheekhta hua niche gir pada ...uske gurte hi usne ..sar ko apne pairo tale khuchal diya ..jusase uski khopi fut gayi ...aur uska bheja bahar aagaya ....

yaha teen gunde Krish par ek saath zhapte the ....Krish ...hawa mein uchalkar ...waha sevhat gaya aur teeno ek dusre se takra gaye ....jab takwoh sambhalte ..tab tak ...woh ek gunde k piche jaakar uski garden marod chuka tha ....Baaki bache do mein se ek ne Krish ek muuka uske jabde par marna chaha ..lekin uske pahele hi Krish ne uska haath ukhad diya ..jisase woh chillate hue behosh ho gaya ...Tab tak teesre ne picche se ek jordar kick Krish k pith par maari ...jisase woh girte girte bacha ...usne turat sambhalkar ...uss gunde par chalang laga di ...aur usse dharti par gira diya ...uske chatti par sawar hokar ..Krish ne uski gardan hi dhad se ukhad di ....

teen gunde jinhone Virat par humla kiya ....woh teeno ek saath uski aur bade ....lekin Virat ne apni mind controlling power ka istemal ...karje unn teeno ko vash mein kiya ...woh teeno ab ek dusre k khoon k pyase ho gaye aur aapas mein hi bhid gaye .....

yeh saara khel khuch hi palo ka tha ....jab teeno unn gundo se bhide ...toh NP ne bhi apni urja ka prahar unpar kiya ..jisse ...Deepu ne dekh liya ...aur apni urja k prayog se ...uss vaar se apne teeno bhaiyo ko bacha liya ....

Deepu - kayar ...aise dhoke se unpar kya vaar karta hai ...dum hai toh mera saamna kar ....

NP - tum sabko toh ab tak mein baccha samaz kar khel raha tha ....par ab aur nahi lo sambhalo ....itna kahkar ...lagatar apni urja se ...Deepu par prahar karne laga ....Deepu bhi apni Divya talwar se unn pragaro ko bakhubi rok raha tha .....woh prahar itne tezi se aarahe the ...k ..woh bas unko rok hi raha tha ....NP ..Deepu ko ..apne upar prahar karne ka koi mauka nahi de eaha tha ....

Deepu ne talwar chalate hue ek yogi ki tarah apna dyan ekagrah kiya ....aur ..badi tezi se apna sthan badalkar ....Uss NP par apni panch tatvo ki urja ka samilit vaar kiya ...Jiske lagte hi ..woh NP ...ghayal hokar picche ki taraf gir gaya ...usse gir hua dekhkar Deepu uski or bahdha ...hi tha ..k usne turant sambhalkar ...Deepu par apni urja ka vaar kar diya ....jo sidha Deepu k seene par laga ....

Deepu ko uss vaar k prabhav se bahut pida ka anubhav ho raha tha ..uske seene ka kuch bhag uss vaar se jhulas gaya tha ....Woh abhi apni pida se sambhal hi raha tha k NP ne ...ab apni ..urja ka bada sa gola banaya aur ...Deepu par vaar ...kiya ....woh vaar Deepu ko lagta ....iske pahele ...ek shwet urja aakar uss vaar se takrayi aur woh vaar bekar ho gaya ...

NP ne jab dekha toh Waha Abhi khada tha .....Abhi kuch karta iske pahele Abhi ko dekhte hi woh waha se ...teleport hokar bhag gaya ....

saare gunde bhi maare jaa chuke the ...Abhi ne Deepu ko sambhala ...aur uske seene par haath rakhkar uske ghav ko heel kiya ....Toh usse kuch hosh aaya ....

Abhi - ab kaise lag raha hai beta ..tum thik ho ...

Deepu - muzhe kshama kar do pitashri ...mein aapki aashao par khara nahi utar saka ...

Abhi - nahi mere bacche muzhe garv hai tum sab par ....tumne bakhubi se ..uska saamna kiya ....uski urja k vaar se itna toh pata lag gaya hai k woh koi sadharan shatru nahi hai ...yeh koi alag hi shaki hai ..

parantu yeh tha kaun aur unka uddesya kya hai ...aur tum sab yaha kaise .....

Tab Deepu ne apne doston k khone se lekar ab tak ki saari baat batayi .....

Abhi - hmm lagta hai mamla kuch gadbad hai ....kuch dino se aise hi kissi na kissi hadse mein baccho k khone ki ghana bad rahi hai ....Aakhir yeh log kaun hai aur iss tarah baccho ko agwa kyu kar rahe hai ....yeh jo koi bhi hai bahut shaktishali hai ..jo sangharak ...ki urja ka saamna itne sahjta se kar raha tha ....

khair dekhte hai aage kya karna hai ...waha mahal mein sabhi pareshan ho rahe hai ...humme jsldi se chalna hoga ...phit sabhi uss gufa mein faye ...waha ...Deepu k diston k saath saath ...gaon k kuch bacche aur the jo uss zharne nein nahane aaye the woh bhi murchit pade the ...

Abhi ...Deepu ...Shivom Krish ..Virat ...aur unn sabhi murchit baccho ko lekar teleport hokar mahal pahunch gaya ....

Abhi k liye itna hi ....
Agla update jald hi . ...

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Abhi ...Deepu ...Shivom Krish ..Virat ...aur unn sabhi murchit baccho ko lekar teleport hokar mahal pahunch gaye

ab aagee.. ....

Abhi ne Mahal k guest house mein ...unn sabhi murchit baccho ..ko ...laakar ..rakha...Woh log abhi bhi murchit the .... ...apne saathiyo ki aisi haalat Deepu k baaki k dost bhi ghabra rahe the ....unhone Deepu se unki aisi haalat ka kaaran pucha ..lekin unhe sab kuch batakar aur pareshan nahi karna chahta tha .....

Deepu - ghabrane ki jarurat nahi hai .....paani k rez bahav mein bahne k kaaran yeh behosh ho gaye hai kuch hi der mein inhe hosh aajayega ....

Abhi ne Deepu .ko ishara kiya unn sabhi ko waha se hatane ka ....ishara kiya ...Deepu bhi samazkar apne doston ko waha se lekar mahal aagaya ....waha sabhi Subah se Deepu k aur uske doston k laapata hone se pareshan ho rahe the ..khaskar uski charo mataye ...usne sabko wahi baat batayi jo usne baaki doston ...ko batayi ....

bakki sabko toh Deepu ki baat par bharosa ho gaya lekin uski charo maao ko lag raha tha k kuch toh hai jo Deepu chupa raha hai ....
Breafast ka toh samay kab ka nikal gaya tha Abhi dopahar k 1 baj rahe the ..issiliye sab Lunch karne baith gaye ....

yaha Abhi ne unhe heal karke ...hosh mein laane ka prayatna kar raha tha ....lekin woh hosh mein nahi aarahe the ....healing karte vakt usse iss baat ka aabhas ho gaya ...k inhe koi heavy drug diya gaya hai ...jo inke poore sharir mein phail gaya hai ...ab inhe Kewal prakriti ki urja hi thik kar sakti thi jo Rimpy k paas thi ....Abhi ne Rimpy ko telepathy k jariye sandesh diya ...

Thodi hi der mein Rimpy bhi waha koi bahana banakar aagayi aur apni urji se un sabko heal kiya jisase unke sharir mein daudta hua drug khatam ho gaya ....

Abhi - kya hua Rimpy tum kuch pareshan lag rahi ho ...yeh sab thik toh hai na ...

Rimpy - pareshani ki baat hi hai ...kyuki inhe jo drug diya gaya hai ...woh kuch alag hai ...ausa drug maine aaj tak nahi dekha ....yeh drug kaha se aaya ....aur kaun uska istemal inn masum baccho par kar raha hai ...unka kya udesshya hai ..
inke sharir se drug toh khatam ho gaya hai ...lekin asli sthiti kya hai woh toh inke hosh mein aane par hi pata chalega .....

Lunch hone k baab Deepu apne doston k saath wapas guest house aagaya ......uske dost abhi bhi behosh the

Deepu - ab kaise hai yeh sab dad ...inhe kab tak hosh aajaayega ....

Abhi - chinta mat karo ab yeh thik hai aur bahut jaldi hosh mein aajaayenge ...ab mein chalta hu muzhe kuch jaruri kaam hai ...

itna kahkar Abhi waha se chala jaata hai ....

yaha . dur ..Kissi underground chamber mein .....Black Eagle gang k 8 asur jinhone KS k maare jaane k baad yeh syndicate chalu ki thi aur aur chote mote crime se apna guzar basar kar rahe the ....woh aatho k aatho ..sir zhukaye ...kissi k saamne khade the dar k maare sabhi thar thar kaanp rahe the

unmein se ek ki haalat toh kuch jyada hi kharab thi ..woh haath jodkar ..ek badi si table k picche Chair par baithe hue vyakti se ...maafi mang raha tha...table k paas hi ek aadmi behosh pada

yaha Eagle gang k members ko E1..E2...aise likhunga ...

E1 - muzhse bahut badi galti ho gayi boss maaf kar do .....dubara kabhi aisa nahi karunga ....

Boss - Dubara karne k liye tu jinda raha tab na ....murkh ...tumahari murkhta k kaaran woh hum tak pahunch sakta hai .....usne tumhe dekh liya hai ...ab woh kabhi bhi tum tak pahunch sakta hai phir tumahare jariye muzh tak ....

E1 - lekin boss mein toh nakab mein tha....

boss - murkh asur usne tumhare ..maalik KS ka samul nashkar diya ...phir bhi tum usse ab tak samaz nahi paaye ....usne tumahari aankhien dekh li hai ...ab tumhe yeh sharir chodna hoga ....

E1 - rahem karo boss mein hi aapko laaya tha muzhe mat maaro ...

Boss - murkh ..mein tumhe maarne ki nahi ..sharir chodne ki baat kar raha hu ...( waha behosh pade aadmi ki or ishara karte hue ) ab tumhe uss sharir mein rahna hoga ....tabhi kursi par baithe hue Boss k gaatho se ek neeli roshni ki kiran nikli aur E1 ko lagi ...roshni lagte hi ..E1 jamin par girkar thodi der tadapta raha ...phir ...shant ho gaya ...aur uske sharir se uski aatma nikalkar Uss behosh pade aadmi mein sama gayi ...uss asur ki aatma usmein samate hi uss aadmi ki aatma uske sharir se mukt ho gayi .....

ab E1 kisi dusre sharir mein aa chuka tha .....

Boss - ab tum iske mastisk ka prayog karke iske baare mein saari jaankari hasil kar lo ...aur iske pariwar mein ghul mil jaao ..

E1 - jo aagya boss ..itna kahkar E1 waha se chala gaya ....

Boss ab hume yeh sthan badalna hoga ...kyu k yaha woh kabhi bhi pahunch sakta hai ....ab jaao yaha se ....

Woh sabhi apne man mein uss din ko koste hue bahar aagaye ..jis din unhone yeh Boss wali musibat gale band gayi...achhe kgase ek syndicate k maalik bankar ..raj kar rahe the ..kaha ab ..gulami ku janjiro mein bandhe hai ....woh sab ab yske khlaf bhi nahi jaa sakte the ...kyu ki woh uski shaktiya jaante the ....Pahele KS ki gulami abhi iss boss ki yahi unki niyati thi ....

kissi bhi jagah jo bhi ghatna ghatati hai uss ghatna ...se utpanna ..urja tarange waha k vatavaran mein phail jaati hai .....Divya drishti wale unhi tarago ka upayog karke ..waha ghatit ghatnao ko dekhte hai ....

Asuro k waha se jaane k baad Boss ne waha ki saari urja tarange mita di aur waha se adrishya ho gaya ....

Yaha Guest house mein Rimpy k jaane k baad ....Abhi ne divya drishti ka prayog karke uss nakab posh k baare mein janane ka prayatna kiya ...lekin uska kuvh bhi pata nahi chal saka ....uske mann mein ..kai vichar chal rahe the ...aakhir woh nakabposh kaun tha ....aur inn baccho k apaharan k picche unka kya uddesya tha ...KS k maare jaane k baad ab tak toh koi aisa shaktishali ..shatru dekha nahi jo sangharak ki shaktiyo ka saamna kar sake ...

lagta hai phir koi bada tufan aanewala hai . ..woh apne vicharo mein aise hi gun tha k Deepu ...apne doston k saath waha aagaya ....Abhi ko in sab baaton ka pata lagana tha ..issiliye woh unhe wahi chodkar bahar aagaya ...abki baar phir uss Nakabposh ..ki dekhne ka prayatna kiya toh usse kuch dikha ....

Abhi turant teleport ho gaya ...aur us under ground chamber mein pahunch gaya ....waha ...usne dekha k jamin par koi pada hua tha ...Abhi ne usse check kiya toh woh mar chuka tha ...uske kapdo se woh pehchan gaya ..k yeh wahi Nakabposh hai jisse usne waha jungle mein dekha tha ..lekin isse kisne maara ...

Abhi ne apni divya drishti k dwara waha ghatit ghatnao ko dekhne ka prayatna kiya lekin usse kuch dikhayi nahi diya .....

Yaha Guest house mein Deepu uske bhai ..aur Sammer aadi uske dost apne 8 doston k hosh mein aane ka intezar kar rahe the . ....Kirti bhi wahi par thi ...unn 8 mein uski best frnd Kiran aur Rashmi bhi thi jinhe unke parents se permission lekar woh khud aone saath laayi thi ....unki aisi haalt dekhkar usse bahut dukh ho raha tha aur saath mein dar bhi k agar unko kuch ho gaya toh woh unke parents ko kya jawab degi ....

Deepu ...Kirti ko dilasa de raha tha ...Deepu ne apne baaki doston ko ...apne apne Room mein rest karne k liye bhej diya .. ....Shivom ..Krish aur Virat ..bhi Waha Deepu aur Kirti ko chodkar chale gaye the ....

Kirti Deepu k kandhe par apna sar rakhkar baithi hui thi ..Deepu uska haat pakde baiitha hua tha .

Kirti - yeh sab kya hua jaan ....mera dil ghabra raha hai ...yeh thik toh ho jaayenge na ...

Deepu - tumhe muzh par bharosa hai na ...

Kirti - haa ..duniya mein sabse jyada ....

Deepu - toh phir yu pareshan hona chod do ..main apne doston ko kuch nahi hone dunga ....

Deepu ki baaton se Kirti ko hosla milta hai woh apna chehra uthakar Deepu ki taraf dekhti hai uski aanhon mein halki si nami thi ...Kirti bahut komal hriday ki thi woh kissi ki pida nahi dekh sakti thi ...Deepu ne uski aankon ki nami ko poncha .....phir niche zhukar uske maathe par kiss karta hai ...aur usse bahon mein bharkar usse hosla dene laga ...

Tabhi kissi k karahne ki aawaj aayi ...toh Deepu ne dekha uske doston ko hosh aaraha hai .....Deepu aur Kirti un sabhi ko hosh mein aaya hua dekhkar bahut khush hue ...hosh mein aane par woh kissi but ki tarah aankhien khokar kar baith gaye ...Deepu aur Kirti baar baar unhe aawaj de rahe the ...lekin woh kuch responce hi nahi kar rahe the ...

Kirti baar baar apni saheliya Kiran aur Rashmi ko pukar rahi thi ...lekin woh uski aawaj par kuch bhi react nahi kar rahi thi ...Deepu k baaki doston ko bhi yahi sthiti thi ....

Yaha mahal mein Shivali ...Ritu ..Vibhakta ..aur Rimpy ...mehmano aur rishtedaro mein vyast the .sabhi mehman ek ek karke jaa rahe the ....Ab kewal ..Rinku ..Lima ...Addu aur uski family baaki thi .....Rimpy se unhe Deepu k doston ki haalt k baare mein pata chala ....sabhi mehmano se faarig hokar ..woh sab bhi guest house pahunch gaye .....Ussi samay Abhi bhi wapas aagaya tha ..

Deepu aur Kirti yaha apne doston ki yeh haalat dekhkar bahut pareshan ho gaye the ....Deepu ne ..apni mind power ka prayog karke unke mastishk mein bhi zhankar dekha ..lekin waha usse unki koi bhi smritiya nahi mili ...ussi samay Abhi aur baaki sab bhi waha pahunche ....apne pita ko dekhkar Deepu ka man shant ho gaya ..usse poorna vishwas tha ...k uske pita k liye koi karya asambhav nahi ...

Deepu - dekhiye na dad ...insabko kya ho gaya ..hai .....maine inke mind mein zhankar inhe thik karne ki koshish bhi ki lekin waha unki smritiyo ka koi chinh tak nahi mila ...poora mind jaise blank ho gaya ho ....

Abhi ne aage badhkar unki aankho mein dekha ....

Abhi - jiska muzhe dar tha wahi hua ....drug ne inke mastishk ki saari yaadein mita di hai ...jiss karan ...yeh sab kissi baat ka response nahi de rahe hai ....

Deepu - koi toh rasta hoga inhe thik karne ka ....

Abhi - ek raasta hai ...Hamare mastshik k saath saath humare har janam ki smritiya ..humare antahakarn mein surakshit rahti hai ....
Antaha karan k 4 bhag hote hai ...mann ...buddhi ...chit ..aur ..Ahankar ...ismein satvik ahankar aur tamsik ahankar ....do hote hai ...

humari anant janmo ki saari smritiya humare satvik ahankar mein surakshit rahti hai ..inki iss janam ki smritiya wahi se inke mastishk mein dubara pahunchani hogi aur yeh karya tumhari maa Vibhakta hi kar sakti hai ....

Vibhakta Abhi k ishare ko samaz gayi ...k usse kya karna hai ....

Vibhakta - Aap bikul sahi kah rahe hai ....parantu muzhe uske liye ekant chahiye .....kyuki muzhe iske liye gahan dhyan mein utarna hoga ...aur inke antaha karan se judna hoga ...

Vibhakta ki .baat sunkar sabhi bahar aagaye .....Aur ..Vibhakta ..dhyan mudra mein baithkar apna karya karne lagi ....apne athak ..prayas dwara usne ek ek karke ...sabke antaha karan se unki yaado ko unke mastishk tak pahunchaya ...iss karya mein usse do ghante karib lag gaye ...

Apna karya poora karne k baad woh bahar aagayi .....

Abhi k poochne par usne apne karya k safal hone ki suchna di ..

Vibhakta - Maine unki smritiyo ko wapas unke mastishk tak pahuncha diya hai ...unhe poori tarah normal hone mein 24 ghante lagenge ....abhi uhne thodi der vishram karne do ...hosh mein aate hi dheere dheere unhe sab yaad aane lagega ....

Vibhakta ki baat se sab khush hue ....aur chinta mukt bhi Sirf Abhi aur Deepu ko chodkar ....

dono k man mein kai prashna chal rahe the ...k aakir woh nakabposh kaun tha ...usse kisne maara ...aur baccho ka apharan karke unke mind ko blank karne k piche unka kya udesya tha ...aakhir yeh kaun sa naya shaktishali shatru aagaya tha ...jiski shakti ka saamna Sangharak bhi kathinayi se kar paa raha tha ...woh kaunsi aisi shakti thi jiss kaaran Abhi bhi apni divya drishti k dwara kuch dekh nahi paaraha tha ....

kya aap meinse koi andaja laga sakta hai kaun hai yeh main Villan ....

Abhi k liye itna hi ....
Agla Update jald hi....