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Fantasy ABHI - THE WARRIOR 2 (Completed)

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DAIVIK-RAJ said:
Nice mind blowing fantastic update brother
aage dekhte hai ki Deepu Apne dosto ko bachane ke liye kya karta hai
jish ghatna ko sab comman samajh rahe the sayad us par Se parda uthnevwala hai and ab Kuch update ke under villen ki jhalak milegi

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Fantasy - R.R.Raj --- Safar Aadi Se Ant Tak

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Thanks a lot bro ..for your superb fantastic ..comment ...aapka andaja bikul sahi bhai ...common dikhne wali ghatna ...se Villan ka direct link hai ...

:thanks::thanks::thanks:

aise hi saath banaye rakhe ??

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Nevil singh said:
Kayoki is fouram per lagbhag har romance wali rachna me Kirti ka naam aaya hai. Baki anyatha na le, hum toh kala ke kadardaan hai.
Sab rachnao me romance ki kahani joh Preetam da ki hai utam rahi jishe padhte- padhte kai varsh beet gaye per kabhi puri na hui, kai platfourm se peecha karte chale aa rahe hai ummid me kabhi toh ant hoga ish divye kahani ka.
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Bhai mein toh bas parihas kar raha tha ...yadi aapko bura laga ho toh uske liye kshama chahta hu ..

mein iss forum par lockdown mein juda bas kuch fantasy kahani padhi woh bhi adhuri thi ...uske baad maine kahani likhna shuru kiya ..issiliye ..aur koi kahani padne ka samay hi nahi mila ....issiliye muzhe nahi pata tha k iss baare mein....pata nahi tha ....

Bas aap apna saath banaye rakhe ??
 
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abhi1008 said:
Update - 69

Deepu k 8 dost gayab the ...aur uske mann mein kuch bura hone ki aashanka bal pakad rahi thi ...

ab aagee....

Deepu apne dosto ko dhundne ...gaon se bahar ..nadi k kinare kinare ....chalte hue .....purane Dragon wale mandir k nikat ...hi pahadi ..se girte ..hue zharne tak pahuncha .....unchayi se girte hue jharne k kaaran ...waha ek chota talab sa bada hua tha ....

Deepu uss talab k kinare kinare chalte hue apne doston ko dhundne laga ....ek jagah usse apne doston k ...kuch kapde aur unke mobile rakhe hue mile ....Deepu ne charo taraf khoja ...lekin uske doston ka kahi kuch pata nahi chala ....talab tak jaate hue unke pairo k nishan bane hue the ....lekin unke lautne ka koi nishan nahi tha ....

Aakhir jo socha wahi hua ...Uske mann mein kissi anhooni ghatit hone ki aashanka aur balwati ho gayi .....Deepu talab mein utar gaya ....aur poore talab mein jal k bhiter apne dostoh ko khojne laga ..lekin unke koi bhi pata nahi tha ...talab se jal ek choti nahar k roop mein jungle k bich se hokar gujarti thi ....Deepu ..tairte hue ab ussi nahar ...k jal mein aage badhne laga ....

abhi thodi hi dur badha tha ...k ek bada sa magarmach uski or badha ....woh apna bada se jabda kholkar Deepu par humla karne hi wala tha ...k Deepu usse chakma dekar ...tezi se uske niche se nikalkar aage badha ....lekin aage do aur bade semagar mach muh faade ....uske saamne the .....
ab unn magarmacho ko maarkar aage badhne k siwa uske paas aur koi rasta nahi tha .....tab tak picche wala bhi paas mein aaraha tha .....ek ne tab tak uss par humla kar diya ...Deepu ne majbooti se uske jabde ko pakadkar usse chir diya ...tab tak ek ne ...apne jabde mein uska ek pair pakda hi tha ...k . Deepu ne dusre pair se ek jordar kick uske jabde par maari ..aur hawa mein uchalkar ..apni talwar ...ka waar ek magarmach k sar k aar paar kar diya ...teesra jaise hi uspar humla karne aage badha ...Deepu ne apni talwar se uska bhi kaam tamam kar diya...

teeno magarmach maare jaa chuke the ....Deepu k ek pair bhi magarmach k daant lagne se thoda jakhmi ho gaya tha ..issiliye Deepu nahar se bahar aaya ....nahar k kinare baithkar apni sansoo ko niyantrit karne laga ..woh lagbhag ..ek ghante se tair raha tha ..pair k zakhmo se khun bhi bah raha tha . aur pida bhi bahut ho rahi thi....Deepu ne apne chakro ki urja ko sakriya karke panch tatva ki urja se apne ghav ko heal kiya ...

Nahar mein tairta hua woh bich jungle tak aagaya tha ....ek bàar toh uske mann mein aaya k kahi uske dost bhi magarmacho ka shikar toh nahi ho gaye ....lekin uske mann kah raha tha k nahi jo dikh raha hai woh sach nahi hai ....kuch na kuch toh aisa chal raha jo woh samaz nahi raha hai ....

Deepu phir nahar k kinare kinare chal kar dekhne laga k kahi yoh kuch aisa mil jaaye ....jisase kuch pata chale .....thodi dur chalne k baad usse ...nahar k kinare kuch kadmo k nishan mile ...jo nahar se jungle ki or jaarahe the ....Deepu unhi kadmo k nishan par chalte hue aage badha ...aagee ...ghaas aur pedo se gire patto k kaaran ab nishan bhi khatam ho gaye the ...

.ab aage kaise badhe issi baat ko woh soch raha tha ...k usse aise laga jaise uske picche koi hai ...Deepu satark hokar apni talwar sambhal li aur vaar karne piche muda ..toh ..waha uske teeno bbhai the ...

Shivom - arre arre bhai ..ruk jaa ...kya kar raha hai ...hume maarne ka irada hai kya ...

Deepu - ohh toh tum teeno ho ..lekin yaha kya kar rahe ho ....

Krish - Bhai pahele tum batao k yaha bich jungle mein tum kya kar rahe ho ...pata bhi hai ..waha Mahal mein sab tumhe hi dhud rahe ..hai ..aur tum yaha jungle mein ghum rahe ho ....

Shivom - kuch toh baat hai bhai ..nahi toh tum aise yaha nahi hote ...

tab Deepu ne unhe sabkuch bata diya .....

Krish - yeh toh bahut bura hua bhai ....kahin woh sab un magamachho ka shikar toh nahi ho gaye ....

Deepu - nahi muzhe aisa nahi lagta ....nahar se lekar yaha tak phir yeh pairo k nishan kiske hai ...

Shivom - jaisi paisthiti dikh rahi gai ..woh khud gaye nahi unhe le jaaya gaya hai ..lekin kyu aur kaha ....itne bade jungle mein kaha dhundenge ...

Virat - tum sab ruko mein dekhta hu ....(itna kahkar Virat ne apni aankhien band kar li ...apne gyan aur indriyo ki shakti ka prayog karke ...jungle ki har aawaj ..ko dekhne ka prayatna karne laga .)

Virat - jaldi chalo yaha se paschimi disha mein kuch gunde type k log msine dekhe ..hai shayad wahi kuch pata chalega ...

Jungle k ek kone mein lagbhag ...10 ...gunde aadhunik haiyaro se lace ....ek gufa ..k bahar khade the ....woh kissi nakab posh se kuch baat kar rahe the ....

Deepu ..Shivom ...Krish ..aur Virat ...charo unse kuch dur zhadiyo mein teleport hokar pahunch gaye ....unhone ...saamne ka drishya dekha jaha ..woh Nakab posh unn gundo ko kuch bata raha tha ....Charo ne ek dusre ki aankho mein dekhkar ishara kiya aur ....zhadiyo se nikalkar ...aage badhe ....

woh charo aage badh hi rahe the k uss Nakab Posh ki nazar unpar padi .....

NP - apne gundo se - bewakufo lagta hai ab tumahara man nahi hai kaam mein yeh charo kaise chut gaye .....

Un gundo ne palatkar dekha .....unmein se ek....
G - lekin boss waha toh sirf woh 8 hi the ....yeh pata nahi kaha se aagaye ....

NP - Kaun ho tum log aur yaha kya kar rahe ho ..

Deepu - Uncle hum toh apne doston ko dhundte hue yaha pahunche ....kya aapne unhe kahi dekha hai .....

NP - apne gndo se ......Bewakufo ..aise kya dekh rahe ho suna nahi yeh apne doston ko milne aaye hai ....inhe inke doston se mila do ...dhyan rahe muzhe sab jinda chahiye ....

Krish - aap aisa jyu kah rahe ho jinda chahiye ....aap .humara kya karoge ..uncle ..hume chod do ..hum yaha se chale jaayenge ....

NP - ha..ha ha ...kaha jaaoge bachkar ...( apne gundo se ) pakdo inhe ... ...un 10 mein se ek apni ..Gun lekar aage badha ...

Gunda - apne haath upar uthao ..nahi toh tum sabko yahi bhun dunga ....

uss gunde ki baat sunkar Deepu ko chodkar teeno muskurane lage ....kyu k uss gunde ne Deepu par hi gun taan di thi aur ab kya hone wala tha yeh unhe maalum tha ....

Deepu ne apne haath upar uthaye ....aur pal bhar mein uss gunde ki gardan jamin par padi thi ....khun ka fawara ..chodte hue uska dhad ...bhi jamin par girkar chatpatane laga ....

achanak yeh kya hua woh NP aur gunde samaz nahi paaye ....unhone aisa kuch socha nahi tha ....NP khatre ko bhanp chuka tha .....

NP - dekh kya rahe ho bhun do sabko ....

uske itna kahte hi ...sabhi guns garaj uthi ..lekin usase pahele hi Krish ne ..ek abhed shield saamne khadi kar di ..jisase woh saari goliya takrakar girne lagi ...

NP ne jab Shield ko dekha toh samaz gaya k yeh koi sadharan ladke nahi hai inke paas bhi powers hai ....Toh usne ...apni urja ka prahar...uss shield par kiya ...jisase ...woh shield tut gayi lekin tab tak ..Virat apni telekinesis ki power se unke guns ko jaam kar chuka tha ....jisase goliya chalni band ho gayi .....gun band hote dekhkar un gundo ne guns wahi jamin par patki aur ...unn charo ki taraf ....daude ...abhi Deepu kuch karta ..k Shivom ne usse rok liya ...

Shivom - bhai hume bhi thodi sewa ka mauka do ...

woh 9 gunde un tak pahuche hi the ...k Shivom ..hawa mein uchalkar ..ek k seene par jordar kick maari ...jisase uske seene k haddi tut gayi aur woh dharashayi ho gaya ....ek ..gunda ne tab tak uski gardan piche se apni bajuo mein jakad ..li ..aur ek uske pet mein mukke barsane laga ....Shivom ne ek haath piche le jaakar ...uski gardan pakad li aur ek zhatke se uski gardan ki haddi tod di aur saamne wale k dono taango k beech ek jordar prahar kiya ...jisase wohcheekhta hua niche gir pada ...uske gurte hi usne ..sar ko apne pairo tale khuchal diya ..jusase uski khopi fut gayi ...aur uska bheja bahar aagaya ....

yaha teen gunde Krish par ek saath zhapte the ....Krish ...hawa mein uchalkar ...waha sevhat gaya aur teeno ek dusre se takra gaye ....jab takwoh sambhalte ..tab tak ...woh ek gunde k piche jaakar uski garden marod chuka tha ....Baaki bache do mein se ek ne Krish ek muuka uske jabde par marna chaha ..lekin uske pahele hi Krish ne uska haath ukhad diya ..jisase woh chillate hue behosh ho gaya ...Tab tak teesre ne picche se ek jordar kick Krish k pith par maari ...jisase woh girte girte bacha ...usne turat sambhalkar ...uss gunde par chalang laga di ...aur usse dharti par gira diya ...uske chatti par sawar hokar ..Krish ne uski gardan hi dhad se ukhad di ....

teen gunde jinhone Virat par humla kiya ....woh teeno ek saath uski aur bade ....lekin Virat ne apni mind controlling power ka istemal ...karje unn teeno ko vash mein kiya ...woh teeno ab ek dusre k khoon k pyase ho gaye aur aapas mein hi bhid gaye .....

yeh saara khel khuch hi palo ka tha ....jab teeno unn gundo se bhide ...toh NP ne bhi apni urja ka prahar unpar kiya ..jisse ...Deepu ne dekh liya ...aur apni urja k prayog se ...uss vaar se apne teeno bhaiyo ko bacha liya ....

Deepu - kayar ...aise dhoke se unpar kya vaar karta hai ...dum hai toh mera saamna kar ....

NP - tum sabko toh ab tak mein baccha samaz kar khel raha tha ....par ab aur nahi lo sambhalo ....itna kahkar ...lagatar apni urja se ...Deepu par prahar karne laga ....Deepu bhi apni Divya talwar se unn pragaro ko bakhubi rok raha tha .....woh prahar itne tezi se aarahe the ...k ..woh bas unko rok hi raha tha ....NP ..Deepu ko ..apne upar prahar karne ka koi mauka nahi de eaha tha ....

Deepu ne talwar chalate hue ek yogi ki tarah apna dyan ekagrah kiya ....aur ..badi tezi se apna sthan badalkar ....Uss NP par apni panch tatvo ki urja ka samilit vaar kiya ...Jiske lagte hi ..woh NP ...ghayal hokar picche ki taraf gir gaya ...usse gir hua dekhkar Deepu uski or bahdha ...hi tha ..k usne turant sambhalkar ...Deepu par apni urja ka vaar kar diya ....jo sidha Deepu k seene par laga ....

Deepu ko uss vaar k prabhav se bahut pida ka anubhav ho raha tha ..uske seene ka kuch bhag uss vaar se jhulas gaya tha ....Woh abhi apni pida se sambhal hi raha tha k NP ne ...ab apni ..urja ka bada sa gola banaya aur ...Deepu par vaar ...kiya ....woh vaar Deepu ko lagta ....iske pahele ...ek shwet urja aakar uss vaar se takrayi aur woh vaar bekar ho gaya ...

NP ne jab dekha toh Waha Abhi khada tha .....Abhi kuch karta iske pahele Abhi ko dekhte hi woh waha se ...teleport hokar bhag gaya ....

saare gunde bhi maare jaa chuke the ...Abhi ne Deepu ko sambhala ...aur uske seene par haath rakhkar uske ghav ko heel kiya ....Toh usse kuch hosh aaya ....

Abhi - ab kaise lag raha hai beta ..tum thik ho ...

Deepu - muzhe kshama kar do pitashri ...mein aapki aashao par khara nahi utar saka ...

Abhi - nahi mere bacche muzhe garv hai tum sab par ....tumne bakhubi se ..uska saamna kiya ....uski urja k vaar se itna toh pata lag gaya hai k woh koi sadharan shatru nahi hai ...yeh koi alag hi shaki hai ..

parantu yeh tha kaun aur unka uddesya kya hai ...aur tum sab yaha kaise .....

Tab Deepu ne apne doston k khone se lekar ab tak ki saari baat batayi .....

Abhi - hmm lagta hai mamla kuch gadbad hai ....kuch dino se aise hi kissi na kissi hadse mein baccho k khone ki ghana bad rahi hai ....Aakhir yeh log kaun hai aur iss tarah baccho ko agwa kyu kar rahe hai ....yeh jo koi bhi hai bahut shaktishali hai ..jo sangharak ...ki urja ka saamna itne sahjta se kar raha tha ....

khair dekhte hai aage kya karna hai ...waha mahal mein sabhi pareshan ho rahe hai ...humme jsldi se chalna hoga ...phit sabhi uss gufa mein faye ...waha ...Deepu k diston k saath saath ...gaon k kuch bacche aur the jo uss zharne nein nahane aaye the woh bhi murchit pade the ...

Abhi ...Deepu ...Shivom Krish ..Virat ...aur unn sabhi murchit baccho ko lekar teleport hokar mahal pahunch gaya ....

Abhi k liye itna hi ....
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