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[Ankitshrivastava]

Haasss aaagye ankit bhai yaha jaan halak main aagyi ki kaha gaye

Hahaha.....aisa mat bolo yaar, hum to yahi the.....bas life itna busy rakhti hai ki vertual life me kam hota hai aana.....aur likhna bhi thoda tough task hai na.....

Well....update post kar raha hu.....

Thanks buddy.......

 

[Ankitshrivastava]

Ankit भाई time bhahut lete hai update dene mai..maine to स्टोरी padana hi band kar diya

Puri vinamrta ke sath bol raha hu dost.....ki main is baar regular nhi ho pa raha....aur saayad aage bhi na ho paau....kyoki covid ne jo IT field ka haal kiya tha na....humari com us time ka badla ab le rahi hai.....

Ans as a project manager meri responsibilities bahut jyada ho gai....jo maine socha nhi tha....nhi to story start hi nhi karta......

But jo hua so hua.....kuch nhi kar sakta.....update late
hoge but story adhyri nhi hogi....promis....

Ab aapka jo dil kare wo kare....i cant help it.....

Thanks buddy.......

 

[Ankitshrivastava]

Update - 12​

KARAN KE GHAR ME........



Karan ke ghar me is time karan aur mahira sharaab ke ghoont maarte huye ek joordaar chudaai ka maza lootne me lage huye the.....

Unki chudaai ka ek round khatm ho chuka tha....par ab bhi mahira ka dil nhi bhara tha....isliye wo sharaab ka jaam liye bed par tik kar baithi hui thi....aur karan uski choot chaatne me laga hua tha.....

Karan- ssssrrrrrrrruuuuuuppppp....aah....ab to bata do.....itne urgent me kyo bulaya.....pata hai mujhe kitne bahane kar ke aana pada.....boss to aane hi de raha tha....

Mahira(gusse se)- bakwaas nhi....jo kar raha hai wo kar....samjha.....

Karan- wo to main saari jindagi kar sakta hu meri jaan....aah....kya hai...

Karan ki baat sunte hi mahira ne sharaab ko karan ke muh par de mara....jisse jaran hakka-bakka rah gaya....

Mahira(ghoor kar)- dowara kabhi mujhe jaan kah kar mat bulana....samjha....

Karan- ok....wo to yu hi bol gaya.....isme itna gussa kyo....sorry.....

Mahira- dowara ye galti mat karna....warna....chal chaat abhi....ruk...pahle ek peg bana.....

Karan- peg....tum kafi pi chuki ho....ab rahne do....

Mahira(gusse se)- chup....tu mera khasam hai kya....haa...jitna bola jaaye....utna kar....samjha...

Mahira ka gussa dekh kar karan fir kuch nhi bola.....aur usne uth kar oahle mahira ke liye peg banaya....aur fir bapis aa kar mahira ki choot chatne laga....

Karan ko aaj mahira ne saaf bola tha...ki aaj wo use joordaar chudaai ka maza de....koi raham na dikhaaye....islite karan khush tha....aur mahira ki choot chaat kar use dowara se garam karne me laga hua tha....

Par karan ye nhi janta tha...ki mahira aisa kyo chahti hai....kyo wo aaj karan ko apne uper beraham hone ka boli thi.....

Asal me aaj jab mahira apne souhar se milne uski company me gai thi...to waha use pata chal gaya tha...ki uska souhar maalik us rubina ke sath jishmani maza loit raha hai....aur ye koi pahli baar nhi tha....balki wo dono kafi time se ek-dusre ko chudaai ka maza de rahe the....

Bas....wahi gussa mahira ka dimaag ghuma gaya....aur usne karan se apni chudaai karane ka soch kar karan ko call kar ke bula liya tha....

Aur ab mahira chahti thi...ki jaise uske souhar ko uski fikr nhi...waise hi wo bhi befikr ho kar karan se chudaai karwaygi....

Isiliye mahira ne apna phon bhi band kar rakha tha....aur had se jyada sharaab pi jar karan ke saamne nangi padi thi....

Well...karan ne jaise hi mahira ko garam kiya....to mahira khud se karan ke saamne kutiya ban gai........

Aur jaise hi karan ne mahira ko chodna suru kiya....waise hi mahira ne use berahmi se dhakke maarne ko bol diya....

Karan- par kyo....main to tumhe pyaar karta hu....

Mahira- ye bakwaas band kar.....joor laga.....faad de meri......joor se maar.....

Karan- maar to raha hu....

Mahira- to aur joor laga....wara tera kaat kar fek doogi....aaahh.....ab bani kuch baat.....aise hi.....randi ki tarah pel saale....aaaahhh.....maarta rah....

Karan- ha saali.....ab tujhe randi ki tarah hi thokuga......le sambhaal....yeeehhh...yeeehhhh...

Aur fir karan apni puri taaqat se dhakke maarne laga....par mahira ko usse koi takleef nhi ho rahi thi...

Kyoki jo dard mahira ke dil me samaya tha.....uske saamne ye dard kuch bhi nhi tha.....isliye joordaar dhakke khaate huye bhi mahira ka dimaag kuch alag hi plan kar raha tha......

Mahira ne ab ye tay kar liya tha...ki wo maalik ka sath tab tak degi...jab tak puneet ki barbaadi nhi ho jati....

Aur uske baad wo bhi maalik ko aisa dard degi....jo maalik sapne me bhi nhi soch sakta tha.....

Par iske lite mahira ko kusi ke sath ki jaroorat thi.....aur usne apne sathi ke baare me soch liya tha.....

Well....ek joirdaar chudaai ke baad jab mahira aur karan thak kar aaraam karne lage....tab mahira ne apba phon chalu kiya aur kisi ko massage kar diya....

Mahira- oye....ek peg aur pila....fir mujhe jana hai....

Karan- dekho....tumne kafi pi li hai....mere hisaab se....

Mahira(gusse se)- oye...tera lund kya kha liya....tu kya sach me mujhe teri randi samjh baitha.....yaad rakh....tu mera kutta hai kutta....samjha ki nhi....

Karan- ye kaise bol rahi ho...main....

Mahira- chup....jitna bola hai utna kar....warna us puneet ke sath tera bhi intzaam har doogi....

Karan- accha...mera intzaam.....ab tu sun....jaran koi puneet ki tarah sareef banda nhi....jo koi bhi mera intzaam kar de.....aur yaad rakh...agar maine muh khol diya na....to tu gai jaam se....aur tera maalik bhi...samjhi...

Mahira(gusse se)- kya bola....tu mera jaam lagayga.....abhi dikhati hu tujhe ki main...aah....

Aur mahira gusse me jaise hi khadi hui...waise hi ladkhada jar gir gai.....par tabhi karan ne aage bad kar use sambhaal liya....

Karan- dekho....tumhe bhi meri jaroorat hai.....samjhi...

Mahira(ghoor kar)- ha saale...jaroorat to hai.....aur ab to kahi jyada....

Karan- jyada...matlab...

Mahira(baith kar)- ab se tujhe mera ek aur kaam karna hoga....karega...

Karan- hmm....kar to duga...par badle me mujhe kya milega....

Mahira- kaisa rahega agar tujhe main mil jaau....hamesa ke liye...

Karan- wo to accha hi hoga....par sirf tumse to duniya nhi chali na.....kuch aur bhi jaroorate hai meri...

Mahira- samjh gai.....theek hai....agar tune mera ye kaam kar diya na....to tujhe itna inaam dugi...ki teri saari jindagi aish se kategi...

Karan- pakka....

Mahira- jywaan deti hu....

Karan- to theek hai...kaam bolo....

Mahira- batati hu...pahle kapde to pahan lo.....nhi to fir se mood ban jayga....aur raat yahi nikal jaygi...

Aur fir dono ne apne kapde pahne aur cigrate ke kas maarte huye mahira ne karan ko apna plan samjh diya....

Mahira- main chahti hu ki yum mere liye ek aadmi ki jasoosi karo....

Karan- aur wo aadmi koun hai....

Mahira(dhua chhod kar)- mr.khatri.....

Karan- ye koun hai....are...kahi tum us camical company ke maalik mr.khatri ki baat to nhi kar rahi.....

Mahira- kya baat hai....tum to samjhdaar nikle....

Karan- samjhadaari chhodo....tum janti ho na ki wo kitna bada aadmi hai.....aur piwerfull bhi....are uski pahuch to netao tak hai....pata hai na....

Mahira(kas maar kar)- ye sab main bahut acche se janti hu.....

Karan- fir bhi tum mujhe uski jasoosi karne ka bol rahi ho.....pata hai na ye kitna khatranaak ho sakta hai....

Mahira- wo to hai...tabhi to ye bada kaam hai.....

Karan- bada....are ye to khudkhushi hai....uske bodygaurds dekhe.....wo to mujhe chutkiyon me masal dege.....uff...waise tumhara phon aa raga hai....dekho...

Mahira- aane do....tum meri suno....dekho...agar tumne ye kaam kar diya na...to main tumhe wo sab doogi....jo tum soch bhi nhi sakte....

Karan- accha.....hmm..matlab tum ye kaam kisi bhi haal e karna chahti ho...hai na....

Mahira- haa....

Karan- par kyo.....koi to khas wajah hogi....hai na....

Mahira(ghoor kar)- isse tumhe koi matlab nhi...samjhe....

Karan- accha....to tum bhi samjh lo....biba wajah jaane main aisa khatra nhi uthane wala....are pakda gaya to maar dege mujhe.....wo koi puneet nhi....samjhi na....

Mahira- haa...wo puneet nhi....balki uska sauru hai......bhool gaye kya....ya tumhe pata hi nhi tha....

Karan(chounk kar)- kya....kya bola tumne....

Mahira(cigrate bujha kar)- wo puja ka baap hai.....puneet ka sasuru....ab samjh aaya...ki main tumse ye kaam kyo karana chahti hu....

Karan- oh my....main kaise bhool gaya....haa...mujhe pata hai.....usne bola tha ki puja ke pita ameer hai....main kaise bhool gaya.....but ye sirf ameer nhi....ye to powerfull bhi hai....

Mahira- hmm...ab to sab samjh gaye na....ki wajah kya hai......

Karan- hmm...tum puneet ko har tarah se maarna chahti ho.....saayad uske saruraal walo ko bhi.....samjh gaya....

Mahira- wo sab chhodo....ye bolo....ki ho payga tumse.......

Karan- samjho ho gaya......ab tum apna phon utha lo....kafi der se koi call kar raha hai.....

Mahira- mera so....matlab pati hai.....

Karan- to baat kar lo....

Mahira- koi fayda nhi....baat karu ya na karu.......gadbad to honi hi hai....

Karan- gadbad....matlab....

Mahira- tum chhodo wo sab....kal se kaam par lag jao....aur abhi.....

Karan- aise kyo dekh rahi ho.....abhi kya....

Mahira- chal kapde nikaal....ek aur mouka deti hu....tod kar rakh de.....aaja....

Aur fir se mahira ek joordaar chudaai ke liye taiyaar ho gai....jise karan to mana kar hi nhi sakta tha....isliye jaldi se apne kapde nikalne laga....

Aur jald hi fir se us room me chudaai ka shor dhoom machane laga......


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PUNEET KE GHAR........


Aaj fir se puja ne apne dil me jaagi saari kadwahat aur gussa bhula kar apne puneet ke liye uska manpasand khana banaya aur besabri se uska intzaar karne lagi......

Puja ne aaj soch rakha tha....ki wo aaj apne aur puneet ke beech jaagi ye faaltu ki kadwahat door kar ke hi rahegi....

Wahi puneet bhi yahi soch kar apne ghar ki taraf bad raha tha....kyoki wo bhi apni pujji ko hurt kar ke guilty feel kar raha tha....

Well....raat ko kareeb 10 baje door bell bajte hi puja ne aage bad kar muskurate huye gate khola....aur saamne apne punni ko dekh kar uski muskaan aur jyada bad gai....

Wahi puja ka muskurata chehra dekh kar puneet ki to jaisi saari thakaan hi mit gai....aur wo bhi muskura diya....

Puja- ab yahi khade rahna ka man hai kya...andar to aao....

Puneet- kya karu...tumhare chehre ki muskurahat dekh kar kahi jane ka dil hi nhi kar raha....

Puja(sharma kar)- bas bhi karo...aao andar aao....

Ye bolte huye puja ne puneet ka hath thaam kar use andar kiya aur gate lock kar diya....

Aur jaise hi puja palti...to puneet ne use foolo ka guldasta pesh kar diya....

Puja- wow....par ye kis khushi me....

Puneet- bas yu hi....kya main apni pujji ko apni marji se fool bhi nhi de sakta...

Puja- kyo nhi....tum jo chahe kar sakte ho...pura haq banta hai mujh par tumhara....

Puneet- hmm...fool to pasand aaye na.......

Puja- sach kahu...to in foolo se jyada tumhare muh se pujji sunna kahi jyada pasand aaya....

Puneet- janta hu....maine pichhle dino tumhara bahut dil dhukhaya....par ye kyo hua....maon samjha nhi sakta....saayad dimaag hi paresaan tha....aur usi wajah se....

Puja(beech me)- bas punni....aur kuch mat bolo....main apne punni ko acche se samjhti hu...isliye tumhe safaai dene ki koi jaroorat nhi....ok...

Puneet(muskura kar)- theek hai...jaisa madam ka hukm...

Puja(muskura kar)- bas bhi na....waise ek baat mujhe bhi kahni hai....

Puneet- to bolo na....sharmao mat...

Puja- sharm nhi....guilty hai....kyoki maibe bhi tumhara bahut dil dukhaya hai...meri job ko le kar...hai na...

Puneet- nhi pujji....wo to meri galti thi...main hi hamesha ulta soch leta hu...par ab se aisa nhi hoga....tum aaraam se job karo...jab tak tum karna chaho...ok...

Puja- sacchi....to meri baat bhi sun lo....main bas kuch mahine hi job karoogi...fir mera sara samay tumhare liye hoga....ok...

Puneet- janta hu....isliye to pujji mujhe jaan se jyada pyaari hai...uummhh..

Aur fir puneet ne puja ko kiss kiya aur dono ek-dusre ki baahon me sama gaye...aur kareeb 10 minute tak dono hi ek-dusre ke seene se lage huye apni-aoni galti ka paschataap karte rahe......

Puja- ab kya aise hi khade rahoge....

Puneet- dil to yahi bol raha hai...ki bas yu hi samay tham jaaye....

Puja- oh ho....samay humare bas me nhi hai....chalo fresh ho jao...main chai lati hu....

Puneet- nhi..chai nhi....seedha khana hi khate hai.....

Puja- to theek hai...tum fredh ho kar aao....main khana lagati hu.....waise aaj maine apne punni ki fav dishes banaai hai....

Puneet(muskura kar)- tab to yu gaya aur yu aaya.....

Aur fir puneet jaldi se fresh hua aur puja ke sath mil kar dinner kiya....aur dinner ki bharpoir tareef bhi ki....jisse puja bhi bahut khush hui...

Aur fir dono bed par pahuch gaye.....aur waha dono ke beech wo pyaar suru hua....jo kai dino se kho sa gaya tha....

Aaj raat puneet aur puja ne ek-dusre ko tan aur man se waisa hi pyaar diya...jaisa wo hamesha se dete the.....

Isliye dono hi tan aur man se khush the...aur aadhi raat ke baad khushi-khushi ek-dusre ki baahon me sama kar sapno ki duniya me kho chuke the.......


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MALIK KE GHAR...........


Raat ke kareeb 1 baje banlow ke main gate par ghanti baji....jise sun kar malikkamre se nikal kar neeche hall me jane laga...

Aur jab wo seediyan utar hi raha tha....tabhi use saamne mahira dikhi....jo kafi thaki hui dikh rahi thi...aur kuch nashe me bhi thi.....

Aur apni biwi ko is haalat me dekh kar maalik ka chehra gusse se laal hone laga....

Maalik- mahira....

Mahira(uper dekh kar)- huh....kya hua ji...

Maalik- kya hua....ye koi waqt hai ghar aane ka.....aur tum....tum room me chalo...wahi baat karege.....

Asal me maalik bolna to bahut kuch chahta tha.....par jab usne waha ghar ke noukar aur gaurds ko dekha....to wo khamosh rah gaya...aur mahira ko room me aane ka bol kar khud room ki taraf chal diya......

Aur fir jaise hi mahira room me aai to maalik ne gate band kar ke mahira ko ek joordaar thappad jad diya.....

Mahira- aaah....ye kya behudigi hai....

Maalik- behudigi....wo to abhi dekhi hi kaha hai tune....

Mahira- to dikhao......wo bhi kyo baki rahe....dikhao....aahh..

Maalik(baal pakad kar)- itni tej juwaan kab se ho gai teri.....haa....

Mahira(has kar)- abhi tumne dekha hi kaha hai.....ki meri juwaan kitni tej hai....aur main bhi.....

Maalik- mujhse juwaan ladati hai....teri to main....

Aur fir maalik ne ek aur thappad mara....jisse mahira seedha bed par ja giri....

Mahira(palat kar)- aakhir hua kya hai....kis baat ka gussa hai.....main der se aai isliye....haa....

Maalik- ohh...to ab samjh aaya ki main gussa hu....to tabse muh kyo chala rahi thi....

Mahira- wo....aapne aate hi thappad maar diya....to gusse me....

Maalik- gusse me....tu mujhe gussa dikhaygi....mujhe....

Mahira- maaf karna....bas aa gaya....sorry...

Maalik- ye theek hai....bas aise hi rah....gardan aur najaren jhuka kar....to jyada jee paygi....samjhi....

Mahira(man me)- janti hu.....tabhi to khamoshi se maafi maag li....warna gussa to aaj aisa hai....ki dil karta hai teri jaan hi le lu.....par nhi le sakti....kyoki mere maqsad ke liye tera zinda rahna filhaal bahut jaroori hai....

Maalik- ab sharmindigi ho rahi hai...haa...

Mahira- huh...ji...

Maalik- to kyo karti hai aisa kaam....kyo gussa dilati hai mujhe.....

Mahira- wo main.....main to saheliyon ke sath gai thi......bas thodi der ho gai...

Maalik- tera kahi jana galat nhi lagta mujhe....maine kabhi roka kya....par tera phon.....pata hai kitni baar call kiya maine....par chaalu hi nhi....band kar ke rakha tha...aur fir chaalu bhi kiya...to call hi nhi le rahi....haa...

Mahira- nhi....wo battry nhi thi....warna main aisa karti hu kabhi....aur fir jab charging par kagwaya...tab aapke call aaye....aur tabhi phon silent rakha tha....to....sorry.....

Maalik(paas aa kar)- main bhi....thoda jyada hi gussa aa gaya.....maaf kar de...

Ye bol kar maalik bhi mahira ke sath bed par baith gaya....aur use apne seene se laga liya.....

Maalik- sorry jaan.....pata nhi kyo....par tujhe apne se door hota dekh kar mujhe bahut gussa aata hai...uper se tum nashe me thi...aur mujhse juwaan bhi ladane lagi.....to....chalo....sab bhool jao...

Mahira- hmm...(man me)- bhool kaise jaau.....nhi...bilkul nhi....bas filhaal tumhe sir par baithana jaroori hai.....waqt aane do......tumhare har thappad ka jawaab doogi.....wo bhi aisa....ki bina thaapad maare hi badi gahri chot lagegi tujhe...

Maalik- accha ye to bata...karan ka idea kaam aaya ki nhi....

Mahira- haa....karan accha kaam kar raha hai.....aur rubina bhi apne kaam me lagi hui hai....ab manjil door nhi....

Maalik- par karan ko rubina ka sach to nhi pata na....

Mahira- bilkul nhi...aur use kabhi sach ka pata bhi nhi chalega......uske pahle hi hum use....

Maalik(haste huye)- kameeni tu bhi kam nhi....

Mahira- ab aap jaise kameene ke sath rahne wali koi kameeni hi hogi na...hehehe...

Maalik- saali....aaj to tu gai....aaj raat bhar peluga tujhe...

Mahira(man me)- tu kya pelega....pela to us kameene karan ne hai....aah...ab tak tees uth rahi hai....kitni joordaar maari saale ne.....

Maalik- soch kya rahi hai....kapde nikalti hai ya choot ke pahle tere kapde faad du...

Mahira- ab kapdo ki kya galti....main nikalti hu na.....fir karo jo chaho...hmm...

Aur fir mahira aur maalik apne-apne kapde nikaal kar nange huye aur ek round chudaai kar ke aaraam karne lage.....

Mahira(man me)- sala buddha....fir se garam kar ke adhura chhod diya....pata nhi kab tak ise jhelna hoga.....ye saale puja aur puneet bhi na.....pata nhi kab puneet ka khel khatm hoga....mujhe kuch aur karna hoga....wo bhi jaldi....tabhi saayad natija jaldi aayga...hmm...kal hi rijwan se milti hu....ab use bottle me utaar kar hi kuch baat banegi.....

Maalik(man me)- ye to main janta hu ki rubina apna kaam bakhoobi kar degi....par use bhi spport ki jaroorat padegi.....aur wo support puja ki family se hi mil sakta hai....khas kar uski bahne....wo mere kaam aa sakti hai....haa...unse baat karta hu....aur wo maan gai na....to na mujhe karan ki jaroorat hogi...na us rijwaan ki.....bas ye baat mahira tak na pahuche...warna wo khel bigadegi....hmm....kal hi puja ki bahno se baat karta hu.....

Mahira aur maalik....dono hi apne-apne dimaag me puneet ki barbaadi ka naya-naya plan bana kar sone lage the....par unhe ye nhi pata tha....ki unki peet pichhe koi aur bhi apna plan bana raha tha.....jo na sirf puneet ko bhari padne wala tha...balki maalik aur mahira ko bhi bahut bhari padne wala tha........

 

[Ankitshrivastava]

Update - 13​

EK FLATE KE BEDROOM ME..........



Bistar par rubina aur rijwaan nange pade huye cigrate ke kas uda rahe the....par sath hi sath dono kisi gambheer soch me doobe huye the.....

Rijwaan(kas maar kar)- ffuuuhh....to kaisi rahi maalik se mulaqaat.....

Rubina(dhua choodte huye)- kuch khaas nhi....wahi purani.....bas kaam ki baat....

Rijwaan- to ab kya chahte hai wo.....

Rubina- yahi....ki ab puneet ko aourat ke chakkar me fasana hi hoga....tabhi puja ka dil tootega....aur wo kuch aisa karegi jisse dono ke rishte khraab hoge....aur fir puneet akela pad jayga....

Rijwaan(cigrate khatm kar ke)- akela kaise.....puja use chhod degi kya....

Rubina(kas maar kar)- haa....puja ko jitna main samjh paai hu....us hisaab se to puja turant chhod degi us puneet ko....bas saboot pakka ho....

Rijwaan- hmm...par main kuch alag soch raha hu....

Rubina(cigrate bujha kar)- ab tum bhi sochne lage....haa....

Rijwaan(gusse se)- kya matlab.....tum sab kya mujhe bewakoof samjhte ho....

Rubina- are nhi mere raja.....main to mazaak kar rahi thi....

Rijwaan(ghoor kar)- sab samjhta hu....

Rubina(rijwaan ka gaal sahla kar)- gussa mat karo...bolo....kya socha hai....

Rijwaan- main soch raha hu ki kyo na puja ki bahno ko bhi is khel me shaamil kar lu....

Rubina- usse kya hoga....aur pahle ye bolo...ki wo shamil kaise hogi....nhi manegi....adiyal hai saali....bilkul apni maa ki tarah.....

Rijwaan- itni bhi adiyal nhi hai....na hi unki maa.....samjhi...

Rubina- theek hai....par wo manegi.....mujhe to nhi lagta ki wo puneet aur puja ke sath khade hona bhi pasand karegi....

Rijwaan- ye to main bhi janta hu...ki unhe puneet aur puja se nafrat hai....

Rubina- to fir kaise hoga....mere khyaal se ye idea sochna bhi fijool hai....

Rijwaan- nhi....ye best hoga....bas hume thodi samjhdaari se kaam karna hoga....

Rubina- par tum ye karna hi kyo chahte ho....puneet aur puja to humare plan ke hisaab se alag ho hi jayge...

Rijwaan- janta hu....par usse fayda kise hoga....sirf maalik ko.....hume kya milega...

Rubina- kya matlab.....are hum ye sab unhi ke liye to kar rahe hai....aur tum bhoolo mat....maalik nhi hote to hum kaha hote...

Rijwaan(joor se)- aur tum bhi mat bhoolo ki humare sath jo hua....uski wajah maaalik hi hai....agar wo na hota...to hum apni jindagi na khote....samjhi....

Rubina(soch kar)- baat to tumhari bhi sahi hai....maalik ki wajah se hi aaj hum yaha hai.....is haal me....nhi to....

Rijwaan(khada ho kar)- beeti baaton me waqt jaya mat karo...aage dekho....aur socho....ki agar hume kuch accha haaasil karna hai....to humare paas kuch aisa hona jaroori hai...jis se maalik humara kuch na bigaad sake.....kyoki ho sakta hai...ki apna kaam hote hi wo hume hata de....

Rubina- hume kyo...hum to uska sath de rahe hai na.....

Rijwaan- haa...par hum dono ye bhi jante hai ki sacchai kya hai....aur kaam hone ke baad bhi maalik ko ye khouff to rahega hi...ki kahi humare jariye puja ko sach ka pata na chal jaaye.....

Rubina(hairani se)- to wo hume bhi maar dega....taki sachhai hamesha ke liye dafan ho jaaye.....

Rijwaan- bilkul.....wo sala apne faayde ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai....kuch bhi....

Rubina- ye to mujhe bhi pata hai....par puja ki bahno se hume kya fayda hoga....matlab maalik ko apne hath me lene ka plan....main kuch samjh nhi pa rahi....

Rijwaan- tum socho thoda...meri har baat samjh jaogi....socho.....ki maalik ki jaan ko apne kaabu me kaise kar sakte hai....soch meri jaan....thoda dimaag lagao...mujhe yakeen hai ki tum jaisi khurapati aourat meri baato ka matlab samjh jaygi...socho....

Rubina(cigrate jala kar)- saayad cigrate madad kare....fffuuuhhh.....

Aur fir rubina ne cigrate ke kas maarne suru kar diye....aur kas maarte huye hi uski aankho me chamak aa gai aur hontho par muskaan khil gai.....

Rijwaan(muskura kar)- ab samjhi.....

Rubina- ha yaar...maan gaye tere dimaag ko....kya socha hai....are agar aisa hua na....to humari to life set hai....

Rijwaan - wahi to....fir hume us maalik ki gulaami nhi karni padegi.....hum jaise chahe waise jee sakte hai...full aish ke sath....

Rubina- hmm...to fir tay raha....ab plan maalik banayga....par hum wo karege....jo hum chahte hai...theek....

Rijwaan- ha meri jaan.....ab wahi hoga...jo hum chahte hai.....

Rubina- aur suruwat kal hi hogi....kal se hi main puja ki bahno ka intzaam karti hu.....aur tum dekhna....kuch hi dino me wo humare isaare par nachegi.....

Rijwaan- ye hui na meri jaan wali baat....chal...isi baat par ek baar aur....

Rubina(cigrate bujha kar)- ek baar kya....puri raat....aao mere sartaaj....

Aur fir dekhte hi dekhte rubina aur rijwaan ke do jishm ek jaan ban kar raat ki aagosh me kho kar.....masti ke samundaar me dubki lagane lage.......




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NOW THE STORY CONTINUE FROM PUNEET POINT OF VIEW.....

( AAGE KI KAHANI PUNEET KE NAJARIYE SE.....)





Us raat puneet aur puja ke beech ke saare matbhed khatm huye aur dono ne ek-dusre ko jee bgar kar pyaar kiya.....

Aisa kagi dino baad hua tha....jab puneet aur puja ne bistar par ek hi raat me 2 round pyaar kiya tha.....

Aur is se dono hi bahut khush the....isliye saari raat wo dono ek-dusre ki baahon me hi sote rahe.....

Agli subah puja aur puneet ne bilkul pahle ki tarah pyaar se sath me baith kar chai-nasta kiya aur fir puneet lunch box le kar office nikal gaya......

Aur puneet ki ye khushi usje kaam me bhi dikhi.....aaj wo jyada focus ke sath kaam kar raha tha.....aur kaam jyada hone ke baad bhi uske maathe par tention ki ek sikan nhi thi.....

Well....sach hi kahte hai log ki agar insaan dil se khush ho to use kusi bhi baat ki tentiin nhi hoti.....aur wo khushi-khushi saari problem solve kar leta hai...

Aur puneet ko itna khush dekh kar puneet ke sathi....khas kar teena bhi khush thi....isliye lunch hote hi wo puneet ke paas aa gai....

Teena- kya baat hai sir....aaj to kafi khush dikh rahe hai...koi khaas baat....

Puneet- are nhi... at sa to kuch nhi....par haa...aaj khush hu....kafi din baad sabkuch accha lag raha hai...

Teena- wo to main dekh hi rahi hu....par is khushi ki wajah kya hai.....puja ji...haa...

Puneet(muskura kar)- udke siwa aur koun ho sakta hai....wahi meri khushi ki wajah hai...wahi dukh ki....are wo to meri jindagi ki wajah hai.....

Teena- oh ho....aap to shayar type baaten karne lage....lagta hai kal raat acchi gujri.....hehehe....

Puneet(jhijhak kar)- are...tum bhi....chalo khana khate hai....

Teena- ok....samjh gai....accha ye to bataiye.....aaj puja ji job par gai ki nhi....

Puneet- ha...office me hi hogi.....main khane ke baad call karne hi wala hu....usse bhi puch lu....ki khana to time se kha rahi ki nhi...

Teena- bilkul.....aur ab aap bhi dailly time se khate rahiye....ab tention mat lena...ok...

Puneet- ok madam....ab khana kaaye....

Teena- ji...

Aur fir puneet ne teena ke sath mil kar lunch khatm kiya....aur fir puja ko call kar diya.....

Aur fir puneet ne kuch time tak puja se normal baaten ki aur call khatm kar ke bapis apne kaam par lag gaya.....

Well....fir aise hi puneet ke din gujarne lage.....wo khysh rahta tha...isliye apne kaam par jyada focus karne laga tha...bilkul pahle ki tarah...

Aur uski wajah thi puja ka pyaar...jo puneet ko barabar mil raha tha....aur use kya chahiye tha....puja ka pyaar aur apni job hi to puneet ka sansaar thi....

Aur fir aise hi time gujarta raha....puneet ke kaam se khush ho kar uske boss ne bapis se puneet ki salary pahle jaise kar di thi......

Aur ab puneet ne soch liya tha...ki wo puja ko job nhi karne dega.....aur use wo sara sach bata dega.....jo uske sath pichhle kuch mahino me hua tha....

Par jab puneet ne puja ko job ke liye mana kiya....to puja ne saaf mana kar diya...ki wo job nhi chhod sakti....

Puneet- par kyo.....aakhir tumhe job karne ki jaroorat kya hai....main kya paryaapt nhi kamata....

Puja- aisi koi baat nhi hai punni.....but main abhi to ye job nhi chhodne wali....plz....

Puneet- par kyo....aakhir baat kya hai....

Puja- baat kya hogi....meri job me mere uper koi jimmedaari hai....rajesh ne bada trust kar ke mujhe wo jimmedaari di thi...to achanak se job chhod kar uska trust kaise tod du....haa....

Puneet- par rajesh to hume acche se janta hai....wo hume samjhega....aur mujhe bharosha hai ki wo maan bhi jayga....

Puja- bilkul maan jaayga....par kya uska trust todna sahi hoga....tum hi batao....kya tum kisi ke bharose ko achanak tod kar khush rahoge....haa...

Puneet- nhi....main samjh sakta hu.....kyoki main bhi to apni job me wahi karta hu......

Puja- to fir abhi mujhe job karne do.....bas ek baar meri jimmedaari kam ho jaane do....main khud rajesh se baat karoogi....aur job chhod dugi....theek hai...

Puneet- theek hai....(man me)- to abhi puja ko meri job ka sach batana theek nhi hoga.....bekaar me hi paresaan hogi....

Puja- kya soch rahe ho....gussa ho.......

Puneet- are nhi yaar....apni jaan se gussa ho sakta hu....wo bhi itni di baat par....ulta mujhe to proud feel ho raha hai...ki meri pujji kisi ke trust ka kitna khyaal rakhti hai.....

Puja- accha.....to ab tum mujhe job chhodne ka mat bolna.....kyoki mujhe tumhe na bolna sahi nhi lagta......isliye jab mujhe sahi lagega....tab main khud job chhod dugi....bas tum mat bolna....hmm..

Puneet- theek hai.....

Aur fir ye baat tay ho gai...ki puja apni job jaari rakhegi...aur puneet use kabhi bhi job karne se nhi rokega.....

Aur ye decision sirf puja ka hi nhi tha.....puneet ka bhi tha...kyoki puneet ye kabhi nhi chahta tha...ki uske kisi bhi kadam se dusre ka nuksaan ho...ya uska bharosha toote....

Isliye puneet ne rajesh ke bharoshe ki khatir puja ko job karne ki khuli chhoot de di....ki wo jab tak chaahe....job kar sakti hai....

Par ye decision use kuch hi hafto ke baad bhaari padne laga....kyoki puja ka kaam bad chuka tha....wo subah jaldi office jane lagi aur bapus bhi kafi late aane lagi....

Aur isi wajah se puja aur puneet ki nirmal jindagi kuch gadbadane lagi thi....jisse puneet thoda paresaan bhi tha....par puja ki khatir wo chuppi saadhe huye tha....

Asal me kafi din aisa hua....ki puja ke jaldi jane ki wajah se wo kabhi-kabhi puneet ko chai-nasta bhi nhi bana pati thi....aur banati bhi thi...to puneet ke ready hone tak wo thanda ho jata tha.....

Halaki puja ghar se nikalne ke pahle puneet ka chai-nasta aur uska tifin ready kar ke jati thi....par itni jaldbaji me...ki kai baar kafi kuch khraab ho jata tha....

Wahi raat ko bhi puja kafi baar jyada kate ho jati thi....aur fir ghar aa kar dinber banaba....aur baki ke kaam use thaka dete the....

Is wajah se puja ka khana-pina bhi gadbad ho raha tha.....aisa puneet ko lagta tha....aur sath me uska bhi....

Aur usi wajah se dono ke beech hafto me 1-2 din chhod kar theek se baat bhi nhi ho pati thi....aur pyaar to bhool hi jao......kyoki puja itni thaki hui hoti thi...ki bed par padte hi gahri beed me kho jati thi.....

Aur ye sab dekh-dekh kar puneet ko kafi bura lagta tha....gussa bhi aata tha...but wo puja ko job ke liye na nhi bol pa raha tha....

Isliye puneet ne us baare me rajni se baat ki....ki rajni puja ko samjhaaye ki job ke sath ghar aur apne aap ki fikr bhi theek se kare.....

Aur fir rajni ne puneet ko promis kiya...ki wo jaldi hi puja ko samjhaygi....aur uski paresaani door kar degi.....

Aur fir ek sunday ke din puneet ke ghar ki bell baji....aur gate khulte hi ek mast gadraai hui aourat ghar me aa gai.....

Puneet- aap....

Aourat- main deepa....

Puneet- ok....kis se milna hai aapko...

Deepa- puja madam se.....mujhe kaam ke liye bulaya hai unhone....

Puja(bedroom me aate huye)- ha deepa.....aa gai tum...aao-aao....

Puneet(mud kar)- inhe tumne bulaya....

Puja- ha.....ghar me kaam karne ke liye....

Puneet- kya....par kyo....hum 2 lig hi to hai ghar me....to inki jaroorat hi kya hai....

Puja- haroorat nhi hoti to bulati kya.....tum ruko.....deepa.....wo raha kichen....tum ja jar dekh lo....aur ye 2 room hai....aur hall...bas itna hi....

Deepa- ji madam.....to aaj se hi kaam suru kar du....

Puja- theek hai....tum abhi chai bana do....baki baad me batati hu....

Deepa- ji...

Fir jaise hi deepa kichen me gai to puneet puja ko le kar bedroom me aa gaya....

Puja- kya hai...

Puneet- wahi to main puchh raga hu....kya hai ye sab....ye kaamwaali kyo....

Puja- kyo matlab....kaam karne ko....ye ghar ke saare kaam karegi...chai, nasta, khana, jaadu, pochha, kapde...

Puneet(beech me)- janta hu ki ye log kya karti hai....main ye puchh raha hu ki iski jaroorat kya hai....

Puja- jaroorat kyo nhi.....dekho.....is job ki wajah se main thak jati hu.....theek se kaaam nhi hota....aur der bhi ho jati hai.....isliye ye jaroori hai....

Puneet- to tum kaam thoda kam kar do.....usme kya....kaho to main rajesh se baat karu......

Puja- bilkul nhi....aur tumhe kaamwaali se paresaani kya hai.....uski salary ki fikr hai kya....to nain de dugi.....main itna kanati hu....tumse nhi maagne wali....

Puneet ko puja ki ye baat seedha dil par lagi.....use dukh to bahut hua....par wo abhi baat ko badana nhi chahta tha....isliye chup raha....

Puja- ab aise mat dekho.....tum samjho na.....isse humari life acchi hogi....ok...

Puneet- wo mana...par mujhe to tumhare hath ka khana hi pasand hai...isliye bola tha....

Puja- ohh....uski fikr mat karo....tumhara tifin meri jimmedaari....aur raat ka khana bhi....ab khush....

Puneet- hmm...

Puja- chalo...mujhe ready honl kar jana hai.....

Puneet- par aaj to sunday hai....kaha jana hai....

Puja- wo....asal me kuch client aa rahe hai baahar se.....to meeting hai......

Puneet- par chutti ke din kyo...

Puja- ab client ko kaise bol sakte hai.....

Puneet- par aaj to hume ghoomne jana tha.....yaad hai na....

Puja- oh haa......koi baat nhi....shaam ko chalege.....main shaam tak aa jaugi na.....

Puneet- par meeting me itna time....ki shaam tak....ye kaisi meeting hai...

Puja- ab har jagah tumhari field ke jaisa jaam to nhi hota na....rajesh ka kaam iacting se jyda hai....to usi tarah ki meeting hoti hai.....wo shaam tak hi khatm hogi.......ab mujhe ready hone do....fir tumhara nasta bhi banana hai....

Ye bol kar puja bathroom me ghys gai....par puneet udaaas ho gaya....kyoki wo aaj puja ke sath kafi time baad acvha time bitane ki soch raha tha......

Well.....kuch der baad puja ne nasta banaya aur ready ho kar ghar se nikal gai.....par puneet ne jab puja ko jate huye dekha....to usje dinaag me kuch anchaage sawaal jaag gaye...

Aur isliye aaj pahli baar puneet ne apni puja ki jasoosi karne ka tay kiya...aur iske liye usne rajni ko call kar diya.....

( CALL PAR )

Rajni- ha puneet....

Puneet- hello....kya ho raha tha....

Rajni- kya hoga....ghar ke kaam kar rahi hu....

Puneet- kyo...tum office nhi gai....

Rajni- hehehe....aaj sunday hai puneet.....aaj kaisa office....

Puneet- par puja to abhi nikli....bol rahi thi ki koi meeting hai....client aaya hai koi....

Rajni- kya....par aisa to kuch nhi hai...matlab mujhe to is baare me koi khabar nhi...

Puneet- ho sakta hai ki tumhara kaam na ho....rajesh ko to pata hoga na....

Rajni- nhi puneet....agar aisa kuch hota to rajesh mujhe batata....

Puneet- to abhi puchho.....saayad bhool gaya hoga....

Rajni- abhi kaise pucchu....wo to ghar se nikal gaya hai...mujhe to laga ki saayad apne friend ke sath ghoomne ja raha hog....to kuch puchha hi nhi.......

Puneet- wo meeting me hi gaya hoga.......puja ne meeting ka bola hai....meeting hi hogi....

Rajni- may be.....par mujhe is baare me kuch nhi pata.....par haa...mere paas kuch hai...jo tumhe pata hona chahiye.....

Puneet- kya....bolo...

Rajni- dekho puneet....mujhe galat mat samjhna....par aaj-kal puja aur rajesh kaafi time sath me bitate hai.....

Puneet- usme kya.....main bhi office me kai logo ke sath kafi time nikalta hu....ye to job me hota hai.....

Rajni- sahi kaha.....par mujhe aisa lag raha hai...ki puja kuch badal si gai hai....

Puneet- matlab....

Rajni- ab kaise kahu.....tum ye samjh lo....ki puja ab bindaas si ho gai hai....uske liye office jyada jaroori ho gaya hai....aur ghar baad me.....saayad wo ek houswife ban kar bore ho gai hai....

Puneet- par tumhe aisa kyo laga...mujhe to kuch nhi samjh aaya.....

Rajni- ho sakta hai ki mujhe gaatfahmmi hui ho....par wahi bol rahi thi...ki ab usse ghar ka kaam nhi hota.....wo noukrani lagana chahti hai......taki use aaraam mile....

Puneet- haa...ye baat to hai...aaj hi humare ghar ek kaamwaali aai hai....par usme kya...puja sahi hai....wo kafi thak jati hai....maine dekha hai....

Rajni- wo to hai....par iske alawa bhi kuch hai....

Puneet- wo kya....

Rajni- sorry puneet....tumhe batate huye accha to nhi lag raha....par mujhe lagta hai ki puja aur rajesh.....tum samjh rahe ho na.....

Puneet- fir wahi baat.....tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakti ho....meri puja aisi nhi hai....wo aisa soch bhi nhi sakti.....

Rajni- saayad tum sahi ho....par mujhe shaq hai......

Puneet- aur us shaq ki wajah.....

Rajni- wo....asal me kai baar aisa hua hai...ki mujhe dono eksath ya to rajesh ke cabin me milte hai....ya puja ke....aur kai baar to...

Puneet- ruk kyo gai....bolo rajni...mujhe saaf-saaf batao....

Rajni- wo dono kai baar ghanto baahar rahte hai.....aur puchho to kisi na kisi meeting ka hi bolte hai...

Puneet- par ye to ho sakta hai na....puja ne mujhe bataya tha....ki kai baar use client ke paas bhi jana hota hai meeting ko....finanancial deal me wahi to help karti hai na.....ho sakta hai ki aaj bhi koi meeting ho......

Rajni- ho sakta hai....saayad main hi kuch galat soch rahi hu.....aur iski ek hi wajah hai....ki sunday ko koi kaam nhi hota na.....

Puneet- par ye jaroori bhi nhi ki sunday ko kaam na ho....ye koi sarkaari job to hai nhi....

Rajni- sahi kaha.....waise rajesh bhi taiyaar ho kar gaya hai....but mujhe laga tha ki wo saayad ghoomne ke mood me ho....isliye puchha hi nhi....sorry...

Puneet- sorry ki koi baat nhi....main puja se hi puchh luga.....waise bhi mujhe puja par apne aapse jyada bharosha hai....

Rajni- hmm...sahi kaha....puja ausi nhi hai....wo to main isliye bol padi...ki aaj rajesh dailly ki tarah taiyaar nhi tha.....wo to aise taiyaar tha jaise ki kahi ghoomne ja raha ho...bas isliye....sorry....accha batao...tumhara nasta ho gaya...

Puneet- hmm....chalo baad me baat karta hu....bye...

Rajni- bye...

Fir puneet ne call to cut kar diya....par rajni ki baaton ne puneet ke dimaag me bhi shaq ki chingaari daal di....aur wo sochbe laga.....ki kya sach me puja meeting ko gai hai....ya fir kuch aur hi baat hai....

Puneet(man me)- puja bhi aaj kuch jyada hi taiyaar thi...hamesha se alag dikh rahi thi......to kya sach me puja aur rajesh....nhi....ye main kya sochne laga...nhi....meri ouja aisi nhi hai....bilkul nhi.....

Puneet ka dil bhale hi apni puja ko sahi bol raha tha....par uska dimaag kahi na kahi shaq ki aag me fasne kaga tha.....

Aur ab puneet wo sab clear karna chahta tha...jo ki rajni ne use bola tha....par sawaal ye tha....ki puneet ko sach batayga koun.....kya use sach ka pata chalega....ya fir ye shaq ki chingaari badi aag ban kar kuch bada nuksaan karegi......




SHAQ.......YE WO BEEMAARI HAI JISKA KOI ILAAJ NHI.....

AUR WO SHAQ HI HAI....JO EK PATI-PATNI KE BEECH KI DOORI IS HAD TAK BADA SAKTE HAI.....KI UNKA RISHTA KHAAK HO JATA HAI....

TO AGAR KABHI SHAQ HO....TO PATI-PATNI KO CHAHIYE KI WO AAPAS ME BAAT KAR KE US SHAQ KO DOOR KARE.....WARNA UNKA RISHTA KHATE ME AA SAKTA HAI........

""HAPPY FRNDSHP DAY""​

 

[kingkhankar]

Both the updates are wonderful and full of planning....

 

[Ajay chauhan]

Update - 13​

EK FLATE KE BEDROOM ME..........



Bistar par rubina aur rijwaan nange pade huye cigrate ke kas uda rahe the....par sath hi sath dono kisi gambheer soch me doobe huye the.....

Rijwaan(kas maar kar)- ffuuuhh....to kaisi rahi maalik se mulaqaat.....

Rubina(dhua choodte huye)- kuch khaas nhi....wahi purani.....bas kaam ki baat....

Rijwaan- to ab kya chahte hai wo.....

Rubina- yahi....ki ab puneet ko aourat ke chakkar me fasana hi hoga....tabhi puja ka dil tootega....aur wo kuch aisa karegi jisse dono ke rishte khraab hoge....aur fir puneet akela pad jayga....

Rijwaan(cigrate khatm kar ke)- akela kaise.....puja use chhod degi kya....

Rubina(kas maar kar)- haa....puja ko jitna main samjh paai hu....us hisaab se to puja turant chhod degi us puneet ko....bas saboot pakka ho....

Rijwaan- hmm...par main kuch alag soch raha hu....

Rubina(cigrate bujha kar)- ab tum bhi sochne lage....haa....

Rijwaan(gusse se)- kya matlab.....tum sab kya mujhe bewakoof samjhte ho....

Rubina- are nhi mere raja.....main to mazaak kar rahi thi....

Rijwaan(ghoor kar)- sab samjhta hu....

Rubina(rijwaan ka gaal sahla kar)- gussa mat karo...bolo....kya socha hai....

Rijwaan- main soch raha hu ki kyo na puja ki bahno ko bhi is khel me shaamil kar lu....

Rubina- usse kya hoga....aur pahle ye bolo...ki wo shamil kaise hogi....nhi manegi....adiyal hai saali....bilkul apni maa ki tarah.....

Rijwaan- itni bhi adiyal nhi hai....na hi unki maa.....samjhi...

Rubina- theek hai....par wo manegi.....mujhe to nhi lagta ki wo puneet aur puja ke sath khade hona bhi pasand karegi....

Rijwaan- ye to main bhi janta hu...ki unhe puneet aur puja se nafrat hai....

Rubina- to fir kaise hoga....mere khyaal se ye idea sochna bhi fijool hai....

Rijwaan- nhi....ye best hoga....bas hume thodi samjhdaari se kaam karna hoga....

Rubina- par tum ye karna hi kyo chahte ho....puneet aur puja to humare plan ke hisaab se alag ho hi jayge...

Rijwaan- janta hu....par usse fayda kise hoga....sirf maalik ko.....hume kya milega...

Rubina- kya matlab.....are hum ye sab unhi ke liye to kar rahe hai....aur tum bhoolo mat....maalik nhi hote to hum kaha hote...

Rijwaan(joor se)- aur tum bhi mat bhoolo ki humare sath jo hua....uski wajah maaalik hi hai....agar wo na hota...to hum apni jindagi na khote....samjhi....

Rubina(soch kar)- baat to tumhari bhi sahi hai....maalik ki wajah se hi aaj hum yaha hai.....is haal me....nhi to....

Rijwaan(khada ho kar)- beeti baaton me waqt jaya mat karo...aage dekho....aur socho....ki agar hume kuch accha haaasil karna hai....to humare paas kuch aisa hona jaroori hai...jis se maalik humara kuch na bigaad sake.....kyoki ho sakta hai...ki apna kaam hote hi wo hume hata de....

Rubina- hume kyo...hum to uska sath de rahe hai na.....

Rijwaan- haa...par hum dono ye bhi jante hai ki sacchai kya hai....aur kaam hone ke baad bhi maalik ko ye khouff to rahega hi...ki kahi humare jariye puja ko sach ka pata na chal jaaye.....

Rubina(hairani se)- to wo hume bhi maar dega....taki sachhai hamesha ke liye dafan ho jaaye.....

Rijwaan- bilkul.....wo sala apne faayde ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai....kuch bhi....

Rubina- ye to mujhe bhi pata hai....par puja ki bahno se hume kya fayda hoga....matlab maalik ko apne hath me lene ka plan....main kuch samjh nhi pa rahi....

Rijwaan- tum socho thoda...meri har baat samjh jaogi....socho.....ki maalik ki jaan ko apne kaabu me kaise kar sakte hai....soch meri jaan....thoda dimaag lagao...mujhe yakeen hai ki tum jaisi khurapati aourat meri baato ka matlab samjh jaygi...socho....

Rubina(cigrate jala kar)- saayad cigrate madad kare....fffuuuhhh.....

Aur fir rubina ne cigrate ke kas maarne suru kar diye....aur kas maarte huye hi uski aankho me chamak aa gai aur hontho par muskaan khil gai.....

Rijwaan(muskura kar)- ab samjhi.....

Rubina- ha yaar...maan gaye tere dimaag ko....kya socha hai....are agar aisa hua na....to humari to life set hai....

Rijwaan - wahi to....fir hume us maalik ki gulaami nhi karni padegi.....hum jaise chahe waise jee sakte hai...full aish ke sath....

Rubina- hmm...to fir tay raha....ab plan maalik banayga....par hum wo karege....jo hum chahte hai...theek....

Rijwaan- ha meri jaan.....ab wahi hoga...jo hum chahte hai.....

Rubina- aur suruwat kal hi hogi....kal se hi main puja ki bahno ka intzaam karti hu.....aur tum dekhna....kuch hi dino me wo humare isaare par nachegi.....

Rijwaan- ye hui na meri jaan wali baat....chal...isi baat par ek baar aur....

Rubina(cigrate bujha kar)- ek baar kya....puri raat....aao mere sartaaj....

Aur fir dekhte hi dekhte rubina aur rijwaan ke do jishm ek jaan ban kar raat ki aagosh me kho kar.....masti ke samundaar me dubki lagane lage.......




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NOW THE STORY CONTINUE FROM PUNEET POINT OF VIEW.....

( AAGE KI KAHANI PUNEET KE NAJARIYE SE.....)





Us raat puneet aur puja ke beech ke saare matbhed khatm huye aur dono ne ek-dusre ko jee bgar kar pyaar kiya.....

Aisa kagi dino baad hua tha....jab puneet aur puja ne bistar par ek hi raat me 2 round pyaar kiya tha.....

Aur is se dono hi bahut khush the....isliye saari raat wo dono ek-dusre ki baahon me hi sote rahe.....

Agli subah puja aur puneet ne bilkul pahle ki tarah pyaar se sath me baith kar chai-nasta kiya aur fir puneet lunch box le kar office nikal gaya......

Aur puneet ki ye khushi usje kaam me bhi dikhi.....aaj wo jyada focus ke sath kaam kar raha tha.....aur kaam jyada hone ke baad bhi uske maathe par tention ki ek sikan nhi thi.....

Well....sach hi kahte hai log ki agar insaan dil se khush ho to use kusi bhi baat ki tentiin nhi hoti.....aur wo khushi-khushi saari problem solve kar leta hai...

Aur puneet ko itna khush dekh kar puneet ke sathi....khas kar teena bhi khush thi....isliye lunch hote hi wo puneet ke paas aa gai....

Teena- kya baat hai sir....aaj to kafi khush dikh rahe hai...koi khaas baat....

Puneet- are nhi... at sa to kuch nhi....par haa...aaj khush hu....kafi din baad sabkuch accha lag raha hai...

Teena- wo to main dekh hi rahi hu....par is khushi ki wajah kya hai.....puja ji...haa...

Puneet(muskura kar)- udke siwa aur koun ho sakta hai....wahi meri khushi ki wajah hai...wahi dukh ki....are wo to meri jindagi ki wajah hai.....

Teena- oh ho....aap to shayar type baaten karne lage....lagta hai kal raat acchi gujri.....hehehe....

Puneet(jhijhak kar)- are...tum bhi....chalo khana khate hai....

Teena- ok....samjh gai....accha ye to bataiye.....aaj puja ji job par gai ki nhi....

Puneet- ha...office me hi hogi.....main khane ke baad call karne hi wala hu....usse bhi puch lu....ki khana to time se kha rahi ki nhi...

Teena- bilkul.....aur ab aap bhi dailly time se khate rahiye....ab tention mat lena...ok...

Puneet- ok madam....ab khana kaaye....

Teena- ji...

Aur fir puneet ne teena ke sath mil kar lunch khatm kiya....aur fir puja ko call kar diya.....

Aur fir puneet ne kuch time tak puja se normal baaten ki aur call khatm kar ke bapis apne kaam par lag gaya.....

Well....fir aise hi puneet ke din gujarne lage.....wo khysh rahta tha...isliye apne kaam par jyada focus karne laga tha...bilkul pahle ki tarah...

Aur uski wajah thi puja ka pyaar...jo puneet ko barabar mil raha tha....aur use kya chahiye tha....puja ka pyaar aur apni job hi to puneet ka sansaar thi....

Aur fir aise hi time gujarta raha....puneet ke kaam se khush ho kar uske boss ne bapis se puneet ki salary pahle jaise kar di thi......

Aur ab puneet ne soch liya tha...ki wo puja ko job nhi karne dega.....aur use wo sara sach bata dega.....jo uske sath pichhle kuch mahino me hua tha....

Par jab puneet ne puja ko job ke liye mana kiya....to puja ne saaf mana kar diya...ki wo job nhi chhod sakti....

Puneet- par kyo.....aakhir tumhe job karne ki jaroorat kya hai....main kya paryaapt nhi kamata....

Puja- aisi koi baat nhi hai punni.....but main abhi to ye job nhi chhodne wali....plz....

Puneet- par kyo....aakhir baat kya hai....

Puja- baat kya hogi....meri job me mere uper koi jimmedaari hai....rajesh ne bada trust kar ke mujhe wo jimmedaari di thi...to achanak se job chhod kar uska trust kaise tod du....haa....

Puneet- par rajesh to hume acche se janta hai....wo hume samjhega....aur mujhe bharosha hai ki wo maan bhi jayga....

Puja- bilkul maan jaayga....par kya uska trust todna sahi hoga....tum hi batao....kya tum kisi ke bharose ko achanak tod kar khush rahoge....haa...

Puneet- nhi....main samjh sakta hu.....kyoki main bhi to apni job me wahi karta hu......

Puja- to fir abhi mujhe job karne do.....bas ek baar meri jimmedaari kam ho jaane do....main khud rajesh se baat karoogi....aur job chhod dugi....theek hai...

Puneet- theek hai....(man me)- to abhi puja ko meri job ka sach batana theek nhi hoga.....bekaar me hi paresaan hogi....

Puja- kya soch rahe ho....gussa ho.......

Puneet- are nhi yaar....apni jaan se gussa ho sakta hu....wo bhi itni di baat par....ulta mujhe to proud feel ho raha hai...ki meri pujji kisi ke trust ka kitna khyaal rakhti hai.....

Puja- accha.....to ab tum mujhe job chhodne ka mat bolna.....kyoki mujhe tumhe na bolna sahi nhi lagta......isliye jab mujhe sahi lagega....tab main khud job chhod dugi....bas tum mat bolna....hmm..

Puneet- theek hai.....

Aur fir ye baat tay ho gai...ki puja apni job jaari rakhegi...aur puneet use kabhi bhi job karne se nhi rokega.....

Aur ye decision sirf puja ka hi nhi tha.....puneet ka bhi tha...kyoki puneet ye kabhi nhi chahta tha...ki uske kisi bhi kadam se dusre ka nuksaan ho...ya uska bharosha toote....

Isliye puneet ne rajesh ke bharoshe ki khatir puja ko job karne ki khuli chhoot de di....ki wo jab tak chaahe....job kar sakti hai....

Par ye decision use kuch hi hafto ke baad bhaari padne laga....kyoki puja ka kaam bad chuka tha....wo subah jaldi office jane lagi aur bapus bhi kafi late aane lagi....

Aur isi wajah se puja aur puneet ki nirmal jindagi kuch gadbadane lagi thi....jisse puneet thoda paresaan bhi tha....par puja ki khatir wo chuppi saadhe huye tha....

Asal me kafi din aisa hua....ki puja ke jaldi jane ki wajah se wo kabhi-kabhi puneet ko chai-nasta bhi nhi bana pati thi....aur banati bhi thi...to puneet ke ready hone tak wo thanda ho jata tha.....

Halaki puja ghar se nikalne ke pahle puneet ka chai-nasta aur uska tifin ready kar ke jati thi....par itni jaldbaji me...ki kai baar kafi kuch khraab ho jata tha....

Wahi raat ko bhi puja kafi baar jyada kate ho jati thi....aur fir ghar aa kar dinber banaba....aur baki ke kaam use thaka dete the....

Is wajah se puja ka khana-pina bhi gadbad ho raha tha.....aisa puneet ko lagta tha....aur sath me uska bhi....

Aur usi wajah se dono ke beech hafto me 1-2 din chhod kar theek se baat bhi nhi ho pati thi....aur pyaar to bhool hi jao......kyoki puja itni thaki hui hoti thi...ki bed par padte hi gahri beed me kho jati thi.....

Aur ye sab dekh-dekh kar puneet ko kafi bura lagta tha....gussa bhi aata tha...but wo puja ko job ke liye na nhi bol pa raha tha....

Isliye puneet ne us baare me rajni se baat ki....ki rajni puja ko samjhaaye ki job ke sath ghar aur apne aap ki fikr bhi theek se kare.....

Aur fir rajni ne puneet ko promis kiya...ki wo jaldi hi puja ko samjhaygi....aur uski paresaani door kar degi.....

Aur fir ek sunday ke din puneet ke ghar ki bell baji....aur gate khulte hi ek mast gadraai hui aourat ghar me aa gai.....

Puneet- aap....

Aourat- main deepa....

Puneet- ok....kis se milna hai aapko...

Deepa- puja madam se.....mujhe kaam ke liye bulaya hai unhone....

Puja(bedroom me aate huye)- ha deepa.....aa gai tum...aao-aao....

Puneet(mud kar)- inhe tumne bulaya....

Puja- ha.....ghar me kaam karne ke liye....

Puneet- kya....par kyo....hum 2 lig hi to hai ghar me....to inki jaroorat hi kya hai....

Puja- haroorat nhi hoti to bulati kya.....tum ruko.....deepa.....wo raha kichen....tum ja jar dekh lo....aur ye 2 room hai....aur hall...bas itna hi....

Deepa- ji madam.....to aaj se hi kaam suru kar du....

Puja- theek hai....tum abhi chai bana do....baki baad me batati hu....

Deepa- ji...

Fir jaise hi deepa kichen me gai to puneet puja ko le kar bedroom me aa gaya....

Puja- kya hai...

Puneet- wahi to main puchh raga hu....kya hai ye sab....ye kaamwaali kyo....

Puja- kyo matlab....kaam karne ko....ye ghar ke saare kaam karegi...chai, nasta, khana, jaadu, pochha, kapde...

Puneet(beech me)- janta hu ki ye log kya karti hai....main ye puchh raha hu ki iski jaroorat kya hai....

Puja- jaroorat kyo nhi.....dekho.....is job ki wajah se main thak jati hu.....theek se kaaam nhi hota....aur der bhi ho jati hai.....isliye ye jaroori hai....

Puneet- to tum kaam thoda kam kar do.....usme kya....kaho to main rajesh se baat karu......

Puja- bilkul nhi....aur tumhe kaamwaali se paresaani kya hai.....uski salary ki fikr hai kya....to nain de dugi.....main itna kanati hu....tumse nhi maagne wali....

Puneet ko puja ki ye baat seedha dil par lagi.....use dukh to bahut hua....par wo abhi baat ko badana nhi chahta tha....isliye chup raha....

Puja- ab aise mat dekho.....tum samjho na.....isse humari life acchi hogi....ok...

Puneet- wo mana...par mujhe to tumhare hath ka khana hi pasand hai...isliye bola tha....

Puja- ohh....uski fikr mat karo....tumhara tifin meri jimmedaari....aur raat ka khana bhi....ab khush....

Puneet- hmm...

Puja- chalo...mujhe ready honl kar jana hai.....

Puneet- par aaj to sunday hai....kaha jana hai....

Puja- wo....asal me kuch client aa rahe hai baahar se.....to meeting hai......

Puneet- par chutti ke din kyo...

Puja- ab client ko kaise bol sakte hai.....

Puneet- par aaj to hume ghoomne jana tha.....yaad hai na....

Puja- oh haa......koi baat nhi....shaam ko chalege.....main shaam tak aa jaugi na.....

Puneet- par meeting me itna time....ki shaam tak....ye kaisi meeting hai...

Puja- ab har jagah tumhari field ke jaisa jaam to nhi hota na....rajesh ka kaam iacting se jyda hai....to usi tarah ki meeting hoti hai.....wo shaam tak hi khatm hogi.......ab mujhe ready hone do....fir tumhara nasta bhi banana hai....

Ye bol kar puja bathroom me ghys gai....par puneet udaaas ho gaya....kyoki wo aaj puja ke sath kafi time baad acvha time bitane ki soch raha tha......

Well.....kuch der baad puja ne nasta banaya aur ready ho kar ghar se nikal gai.....par puneet ne jab puja ko jate huye dekha....to usje dinaag me kuch anchaage sawaal jaag gaye...

Aur isliye aaj pahli baar puneet ne apni puja ki jasoosi karne ka tay kiya...aur iske liye usne rajni ko call kar diya.....

( CALL PAR )

Rajni- ha puneet....

Puneet- hello....kya ho raha tha....

Rajni- kya hoga....ghar ke kaam kar rahi hu....

Puneet- kyo...tum office nhi gai....

Rajni- hehehe....aaj sunday hai puneet.....aaj kaisa office....

Puneet- par puja to abhi nikli....bol rahi thi ki koi meeting hai....client aaya hai koi....

Rajni- kya....par aisa to kuch nhi hai...matlab mujhe to is baare me koi khabar nhi...

Puneet- ho sakta hai ki tumhara kaam na ho....rajesh ko to pata hoga na....

Rajni- nhi puneet....agar aisa kuch hota to rajesh mujhe batata....

Puneet- to abhi puchho.....saayad bhool gaya hoga....

Rajni- abhi kaise pucchu....wo to ghar se nikal gaya hai...mujhe to laga ki saayad apne friend ke sath ghoomne ja raha hog....to kuch puchha hi nhi.......

Puneet- wo meeting me hi gaya hoga.......puja ne meeting ka bola hai....meeting hi hogi....

Rajni- may be.....par mujhe is baare me kuch nhi pata.....par haa...mere paas kuch hai...jo tumhe pata hona chahiye.....

Puneet- kya....bolo...

Rajni- dekho puneet....mujhe galat mat samjhna....par aaj-kal puja aur rajesh kaafi time sath me bitate hai.....

Puneet- usme kya.....main bhi office me kai logo ke sath kafi time nikalta hu....ye to job me hota hai.....

Rajni- sahi kaha.....par mujhe aisa lag raha hai...ki puja kuch badal si gai hai....

Puneet- matlab....

Rajni- ab kaise kahu.....tum ye samjh lo....ki puja ab bindaas si ho gai hai....uske liye office jyada jaroori ho gaya hai....aur ghar baad me.....saayad wo ek houswife ban kar bore ho gai hai....

Puneet- par tumhe aisa kyo laga...mujhe to kuch nhi samjh aaya.....

Rajni- ho sakta hai ki mujhe gaatfahmmi hui ho....par wahi bol rahi thi...ki ab usse ghar ka kaam nhi hota.....wo noukrani lagana chahti hai......taki use aaraam mile....

Puneet- haa...ye baat to hai...aaj hi humare ghar ek kaamwaali aai hai....par usme kya...puja sahi hai....wo kafi thak jati hai....maine dekha hai....

Rajni- wo to hai....par iske alawa bhi kuch hai....

Puneet- wo kya....

Rajni- sorry puneet....tumhe batate huye accha to nhi lag raha....par mujhe lagta hai ki puja aur rajesh.....tum samjh rahe ho na.....

Puneet- fir wahi baat.....tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakti ho....meri puja aisi nhi hai....wo aisa soch bhi nhi sakti.....

Rajni- saayad tum sahi ho....par mujhe shaq hai......

Puneet- aur us shaq ki wajah.....

Rajni- wo....asal me kai baar aisa hua hai...ki mujhe dono eksath ya to rajesh ke cabin me milte hai....ya puja ke....aur kai baar to...

Puneet- ruk kyo gai....bolo rajni...mujhe saaf-saaf batao....

Rajni- wo dono kai baar ghanto baahar rahte hai.....aur puchho to kisi na kisi meeting ka hi bolte hai...

Puneet- par ye to ho sakta hai na....puja ne mujhe bataya tha....ki kai baar use client ke paas bhi jana hota hai meeting ko....finanancial deal me wahi to help karti hai na.....ho sakta hai ki aaj bhi koi meeting ho......

Rajni- ho sakta hai....saayad main hi kuch galat soch rahi hu.....aur iski ek hi wajah hai....ki sunday ko koi kaam nhi hota na.....

Puneet- par ye jaroori bhi nhi ki sunday ko kaam na ho....ye koi sarkaari job to hai nhi....

Rajni- sahi kaha.....waise rajesh bhi taiyaar ho kar gaya hai....but mujhe laga tha ki wo saayad ghoomne ke mood me ho....isliye puchha hi nhi....sorry...

Puneet- sorry ki koi baat nhi....main puja se hi puchh luga.....waise bhi mujhe puja par apne aapse jyada bharosha hai....

Rajni- hmm...sahi kaha....puja ausi nhi hai....wo to main isliye bol padi...ki aaj rajesh dailly ki tarah taiyaar nhi tha.....wo to aise taiyaar tha jaise ki kahi ghoomne ja raha ho...bas isliye....sorry....accha batao...tumhara nasta ho gaya...

Puneet- hmm....chalo baad me baat karta hu....bye...

Rajni- bye...

Fir puneet ne call to cut kar diya....par rajni ki baaton ne puneet ke dimaag me bhi shaq ki chingaari daal di....aur wo sochbe laga.....ki kya sach me puja meeting ko gai hai....ya fir kuch aur hi baat hai....

Puneet(man me)- puja bhi aaj kuch jyada hi taiyaar thi...hamesha se alag dikh rahi thi......to kya sach me puja aur rajesh....nhi....ye main kya sochne laga...nhi....meri ouja aisi nhi hai....bilkul nhi.....

Puneet ka dil bhale hi apni puja ko sahi bol raha tha....par uska dimaag kahi na kahi shaq ki aag me fasne kaga tha.....

Aur ab puneet wo sab clear karna chahta tha...jo ki rajni ne use bola tha....par sawaal ye tha....ki puneet ko sach batayga koun.....kya use sach ka pata chalega....ya fir ye shaq ki chingaari badi aag ban kar kuch bada nuksaan karegi......




SHAQ.......YE WO BEEMAARI HAI JISKA KOI ILAAJ NHI.....

AUR WO SHAQ HI HAI....JO EK PATI-PATNI KE BEECH KI DOORI IS HAD TAK BADA SAKTE HAI.....KI UNKA RISHTA KHAAK HO JATA HAI....

TO AGAR KABHI SHAQ HO....TO PATI-PATNI KO CHAHIYE KI WO AAPAS ME BAAT KAR KE US SHAQ KO DOOR KARE.....WARNA UNKA RISHTA KHATE ME AA SAKTA HAI........

""HAPPY FRNDSHP DAY""​

Hmm to puneet or puja ke rishte mai saq ki chingari lagayi ja chuki hai wese pujha bhi apne asli rang main aane lagi hai


But bro ye puneet ke project ka kya huva jisko karan ne kai baar barbaad kardiya tha

Or ab sawal ye uthta hai ki puja aakhir ais akyu behave karti hai mujhe to lagta hai ab ek chingari kafi hai inka rista tod nai main


Yaha to sab apne apne matlab nikalne par tule huye hai wese malik bhoskika thappad bhi jhadta hai pyaar se chut main bhi jhadta hai

Abse bade bhosdi wale ye rijwaan or rubina Sala In dono ka to carecter hi pakad main nahi aaraha hai

Well lagta hai ab hum punit ke point of view se story dekhenge maza ayega par puneet ke point of view main dard e dil jarura hoga maza ayega sachme

Mujhe ye dead wale kisse padhne main bahut maza aata hai pata nahi kyu par maza aata hai

Baki outstanding update bro

 

[khemucha]

... thanks for the update ... and the moral lesson ... par kahani ki raftar bhadni chahiye ... updates ki baat nahi kar raha houn ... but kahani ki ... kuch action ho ... kuch events ho ... koi kuch kare ... koi react kare ... scenes repititive lag rahe hain ... suspense aur dischaspi tab bhadti hai jab reader ko yeh na lage ki writer jaan bhooj kar details nahi bata raha ... befajool ka suspence banane ke liye ... reader ko lagna chahiye ki usse sab jaankaari mil rahi hai ... jaise jaise events ho rahe hon ... usse lage ki usse sab samjh aa raha hai ... par writer ka dimaag chupke se kuch aur hi kar raha ho ... reader ko lage story follow kar raha hai ... aur achanak kuch aisa ho jaye jo woh expect na kar raha ho ... somthing that does not fit the reader's understanding of the story till then ... tabhi to aapki baat sach hogi ki ... jo dikhta hai wo hota nahi aur jo hota hai wo dikhta nahi ...

... yahan to Malik, Mahira, Rubina aur Rijhwaan ke dialog aur soch se jabardasti ka suspence banya ja raha hai ... nobody can understand what they are thinking or what they are talking about ... too many unexplained plot references ... sab dhundhla dhundhla hai ... yeh kahan ka suspence ... yeh to jabardasti ka suspense hua ... jab sab adhi adhuri pahelion me bolenge aur sochenge ...

... Puneet, Puja, Karan, Rajni, Rajesh aur woh office wali ladki ki soch aur boli me to clarity hai ... they may be plotting too and most probably are, but atleast we don't get to read jabardasti ke riddles and a constant barrage of unknown/unexplained plot references from them like we see with Malik, Mahir, Rizwan and Rubina ... these 4 characters are not being handled properly. Sorry for this critique, but this is how I see it till now.

Aur ... dekh rahe ho na Vinod ... kaise Puja ne abhi tak uss lunch ke baare me Puneet ko kuch nahi bataya ... aise hi log apni chita tayyar karte hain ...

 

[Ajay chauhan]

Puri vinamrta ke sath bol raha hu dost.....ki main is baar regular nhi ho pa raha....aur saayad aage bhi na ho paau....kyoki covid ne jo IT field ka haal kiya tha na....humari com us time ka badla ab le rahi hai.....

Ans as a project manager meri responsibilities bahut jyada ho gai....jo maine socha nhi tha....nhi to story start hi nhi karta......

But jo hua so hua.....kuch nhi kar sakta.....update late
hoge but story adhyri nhi hogi....promis....

Ab aapka jo dil kare wo kare....i cant help it.....

Thanks buddy.......

Bro to aap it compney main job karte hai

Wese bro it fild main hota kya matlab ki kya aap software banate hai ya kuch or matlab ki aap kis chiz ki selling karte hai

 

[Rogger]

Ab aage kya hoga?
Waiting....
Nhi ho rha
Update plz

 

[AB17]

Wow that was a intense writing fantastic ...
Hume yeh janneko milega ya nahi ki puja aur rajesh ki beech kya chal raha hai aur chal raha hai to kabse aur kaise chal raha hai in detailed