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Ankitshrivastava

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Awesome update,
Kahani me phir se sajish ka dour start ho chuka, sb apni apni chal chal rhe hai,
Ankit apni game khel rha hai udhr paresh aur meeta devendra ke sahare apni game,
Kahani apni shuruaat se judti ja rhi hai,
Starting me jis priwar ka jikr hua tha wo jameen uski thi aur uska relation pongo se lag rha hai aur punit se bhi,
Lekin richa pongo ko nhi janti, isliye pongo aur punit ke ek hone me kuchh doubt hai,
Udhr pongo ke richa ko khud ko punit ki wife khne pr jo reaction aaya hai usme puja aur richa ke ek hone pr bhi hai shak ho rha hai,
Richa se deal ho chuki hai aur ab sath kam hoga sb ,
Udhr ankit ko nakul se kuchh ladies ke surag hath aate hai, jinme ke ka relation karan ke sath tha,
Ab last me ek ladki ki entry
Guthi suljhane ke bajaye uljhti ja rhi hai , jo shayad khulne ka ishara hai

Hmm....gutthi to abhi aur uljhegi....par haa.....kuch-kuch sulajh kar saamne bhi aayga.....

Baat kare puneet aur pongo ki....to inke baare me last me clear hoga.....itna easy nhi hoga inka relation pata karna.....

Richa aur puja ka maamla simple hai....jo jald hi clear hoga.....ki wo same hai ki nhi.....

Ankit ka game kya hai....wo kya soch raha hai....abhi is baare me kuch nhi bol sakta....but ye bata du....ki insaan ko kuch kade faisle lene ke liye apno ko bhi khona pad sakta hai.....yaar gaddar bhi ho sakte hai....jo aapko aage samjh aayga.....

Rahi baat dushmano ki....to dekhte hai ki wo kab kya karte hai....aur kitne safal hote hai....waise villion bhi lucky ho sakte hai kabhi-kabhi.....baki dekhte rahe.....


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Ankitshrivastava

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Mast update diya hai bhai,ek sajish khatam nahi ho rahi, doosari start, is update ko pad kar aisa lag raha hai, pongo richa ko janta hai aur richa bhi pongo ko aur bahut sare characters bhi aa gaye kahani main, is update main kuch kuch spelling mistake bhi the, but hum readers samajh jaate hai, in last umda update diya hai aapne agle update ki pratiksha main

Spelling ka kya bolu......jaldbaji me ho jata hai....koi professional typist nhi hu na.....codding hoti to mistakes nhi hoti......usme expert hu.....to spelling to aage bhi aisi mil sakti hai....samjh lena....

Aur rahi story....to raaj kai hai...but dheere-dheere sab khulege.......pongo aur richa ka sach bhi.....dekhte rahe.....

Thanks buddy.............
 

Ankitshrivastava

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Spelling mistake ke tension na lo bhai ham read karlangay

Mujhe bhi easa lagta hai Puja Punit ke leya he a sab karra he hay

Hello bhi zamin ka Mater ab samaj me aaya a zamin Punit ke petaji ke hay and Ankit ka muqsad sirf Punit Puja nahe balke us sab ka master mind tak pahunchna hay or rajne ke aankh kholna hay superb mere jaan

Chalo.....koi to samjha.....ab dekhte hai...ki aap jo samjhe....wo kitna samjhe.....ye aapko aage clear hoga......

Baki puja to abhi saamne hai hi nhi....richa hai....to dekhte hai ki wo kya hai....kyo hai....aur kya kar rahi hai......dekhte rahe.....

Thanks buddy...........
 

Ankitshrivastava

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Ok maiiin doobara comment kar raha hun Ankit bhai as thora view change kia hai apna..
pehle socha ki pehla wala comment delete karke karu as usme likhi hui bat tumko jayda hurt kar sakti hai.. waise bhi tum meri baaton se kuch jayda hi jalldi naraz ho jate ho...

phir socha ki itna darpok bhi nahi .. jo hai real hai.. us waqt jo feeling aayi wo likh dia .. aur ab jo soch raha hun wo likh raha.. aur ye isliye badla kyunki kahin na kahin mind mein hai ki Ankitshrivastava bhai itne acche writer hai to aise kaise ho raha hai.. mujhe ab kyun pasand nahi aaraha hai.. to thora scohne par samjh aagaya shayad..

Mujhe lag raha tha ki ye story actually puneet aur puja ki hai, par aisa nahi hai... wo to bas ek special character hai... ye story hai Ankit aur uske family ki jaisa kii last update mein aaya ek falashback .. shayad usne badla lene ki.. jisme kahin na kahin puneet aur puja bhi jude hai.. lekin unke kirdar ko thora jdya dikhaya gaya hai kisi reason se...

aur abhi jis tarah se story mein update aaye hai jisme itna sara confusion aur raaz dikkhaya ja raha hai .. usse ek aur option niikal kar aata hai mind mein ki shayad puja richa ban kar puneet ka sapna pura karna chahti thi wo zameen aur factory usko gift de kar .. aur is beech ulta uske sath hi kuch chaalein chal di gayi ho... jiska nateeza hua puneet ki maut... maut ke baad shayad puja ne khud ko guilty mana hoga aur baaki se badla lene ke liye wo waisi hi ban gayi aise dikha rahi ki usko bas apne se matlab hai.. aur puneet ke sapne ko pura karne ke liye wo kuch bhi karne ko ready ho .. kisi ke sath sone ko bhi shayad.. as usko apn apni izzat ki nahi puneet ke sapne ki padi hai..

ye mera view hai.. as I still believe in love .. ab dekhte hai kitna sahi guess hai aur kitna galat...

aur haan sorry last comment ke liye.. main ab tumko galat bolne se pehle ye raaz khulne tak ya kahain end hone tak ka wait karunga ... hope tum bhi bura nahi manoge aur apne fan ko bhi samjhoge...

Na sorry ki jaroorat hai aur na main gussa hota hu....main to bas comment ke according reply karta hu....baki readers story ko kaise aage dekhte hai....ye unki choise hai.....

Chalo ye to samjh aa gaya ki ye dtory kisi 1-2 insaano ki nhi hai....maine bhi last reply me samjhaya hai.....ki ye story me koi bhi 1 character sabkuch nhi....aur koi bekaar bhi nhi.....

Halaki ankit hi lead karte dikh raha hai.....but kya sach me wo hi lead roll me hai.....ye sab last me hi clear hoga.....

As i said in d starting......love, cheat, revenge , action, frndshp, nd laalach(english word yaad nhi), selfishness.....u'll see all of this in story.....

Rahi baat richa ki....to abhi kya bolu....aage dekho....kafi kuch hona hai....wahi baat ankit aur pingo par bhi laagu hoti hai....

Wahi dushman bhi aage badege....naye characters ka link bhi samjh aayga....aur unke sath koun deal karega....ye bhi....abhi kai log apni party badalte najar aayge....apne swarth ke liye.....nafrat me pad kar.....ya majboori me bhi....ye sab dekhege.....

Bas ye yaad rakhn.....jo dikhta hai.....wahi hamesh sach nhi hota.....not even love......


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Ankitshrivastava

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Bhai dragging too much ! Story getting bored !
Sorry to say it !

This is d way i write a story.....nd i like it...u can check my previous story.....u'll find d same thing.....

And yes.....if u getting bored....so...i cant help it......

There r too many stories in fis forume....may b u like them....hav a look....


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