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AK ke jaisa rakho ...Thanks bhai log for your love and support
And maine mann bana liya hai second part likhne ka jo ki jaldi hi start kar dunga main aur wo different hoga issse bhut jada diffrent and bada bhi.
Bas ek suggestion chahiye tha ki hero ka character is khushal ke jaisa rakhu ya
my Complete intention wale AK jaisa
Abhi bata do cmnt karke main likhna start karunga aaj se
Next part aa raha hai and usme khushal hi jeetegabhai koshish achchi thi. par kushal ki haar achchhi nahi lagi.Vaise aap writer ho behtar samajhate ho
Is baar plot change nahi hoga aur is baar wali story isse maaf different bhi hogi naya challenge hoga is baar dono energy ke samnepar god ne kaha ki kisi aur grah par nayi kahani start hogi aur naye rules .....to is baar bich me kahani ko ghumana mat ...
jaise mom aur behen ka bhi wolf hona ,,,,mom ka dhokhebaj hona ,,,,,
kahani waha tak sahi jaa rahi thi jab kushal apne pack ki ladkiyo ko bachane ki planning kar raha tha ,,,uske baad sabka gaddar hona waha se thodi kharab ho gayi thi ...only my view ...
Incest to nahi but haa adultery to hogi aur khoob hogi wo bhi magic ke sath maza aayega aapko padhkekahani mast lagi par kushal ki planning jisse dobara ye kahani shuru na hone ki fail ho gayi aur wo marr gaya ,saath me taaniya bhi ...
pae is baar mix rakhna ( adultery + incest sex ) ..???..
maja aayega kyunki long story hogi to sex hoga hi ( waise fantacy ,yaa jaadui , yaa jisme koi reason ho us kahani me sex padhne me maja nahi aata ,par shayad aur readers ko pasand aaye ) ..
4 ya 5 din baad start ho jayega broWaiting for the next part