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Fantasy A YOUNG WEREWOLF (COMPLETED)

Just yes or no

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    Votes: 34 91.9%
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  • Poll closed .

mashish

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{UPDATE:-30} FINAL UPDATE


Khushal ne taniya ko ishara kiya jo ki hamare plan ka part tha aur fir king ki taraf ho liya, kuch dur chalne ke baad king aur khushal dono aamne samne khade they.


King:- to batao kaise shuru karna chahoge?


Khushal:- pehle insan bane huye, fir werewolf banke, fir gaurdian aur fir aakhri mein wo khanjar.


King khushal ki baat pe muskura diya aur uski ye muskurahat hi uski sehmati thi.


Kuch der tak dono ek doosre ki aankho mein dekhte rahe aur fir dono ne ek doosre ki taraf daud laga di. Is waqt dono hi normal insan they.


Jaise hi dono paas pahuche dono ek sath punch mara ek doosre ko lekin dono ne hi punch block kar diya aur ek doosre ko jhatak diya. Fir dono ek doosre pe jhapte, lekin is baar king ne khushal ko ek flying marni chahi par khushal niche jhuka aur jhukte jhukte king ke legs pe kick maari lekin king ne bhi jump karke khud ko khushal se door kar liya.


Aur wahi door khadi taniya dono ko dekh rahi thi kitne same hai ye dono jo itni der se ladte huye bhi ek doosre ko chot nahi pahucha paa rahe.


Idhar,


Khushal ne is baar pehel karte huye ek kick king ke sir pe maarni chahi lekin king niche jhuka aur aisa hote hi khushal ne apne pair ko jor se niche ki taraf moda lekin king ne niche aate huye pair ko thik apne sir ke uper pakda aur marodna chaha lekin khushal ne khud ki body ko usi disha mein ghuma diya jis disha mein king ne uske pair ko modna chaha tha lekin aisa karne se king ne khushal ke pair ko chod diya aur wo fir se ek doosre ke samne they.


Khushal:- let's change.


Aur khushal ke dono hi alpha werewolf mein badal gaye. Jaha ek taraf king ek khunkhaar werewolf dikh raha tha wahi khushal ek dum sunder sa werewolf dikh raha tha lekin aankho mein gussa saaf dikh raha tha.


Dono ne ek baar sir upper karke dahad maari aur ek doosre ki taraf speed se badhe itni speed thi dono ki taniya jo ki khud ek alpha hai usey bhi muskil se dikh raha tha lekin in dono ko aaj kisi ki parwah nahi thi isliye dono ke sir ek doosre se takraye aur dono hi piche ko jaa gire aur fir khade huye aur fir takraye aur fir wahi haal indono aisa kayi baar kiya aur itni baar karne ki wajah se inke sir se khoon bhi aane laga tha lekin dekhte hi dekhte jhakam bhi bhar jaate. Dono ne bich bich mein panje wagarh bhi try kiye ek doosre pe jiska result same aaya jhakam deke bhi kuch hath nahi laga.


King:- let's change.


King ye baat bolte huye muskura raha tha wahi khushal thoda sa nervous ho gaya tha kyuki usey pata tha ki red gaurdian avtaar ke paas us khanjar ki bhi takat hai. Lekin ladayi to ladni thi isliye dono badal gaye aur jab dono badle to king ki aankhe aur baal pure red colour ke ho gaye they yaha tak ki uski nasho mein bhi red colour dur se dikh raha tha. Wahi khushal ki aankhe aur baal dono blue ho gayi thi aur uske aaspas ka environment thanda ho gaya tha.


Dono ne ek doosre ki aankho mein dekha aur dekhte dekhte apni power realise kar di jisse bahut kuch hua ek to ye ki aaspaas ka mahool ek dum se badle lag gaya tha kyuki to powerful source of energy ek sath takra rahe they aur wahi taniya inke powerful aura se apne ghutno pe aa gayi thi lekin wo bhut dur thi to usey itna impact nahi pad raha tha.


King aur khushal ki body se same amount aur same power ki energy release ho rahi thi aur isi ke chalte un dono ke bich mein ek energy ball banne lagi jo aadhi red aur aadhi blue energy thi aur aisa hote dekh khushal ke hotho pe smile aa gayi lekin ye smile ek dum se ruk gayi kyuki king ne us khanjar ki power ko bhi release kar diya jisse us energy ball mein red energy ka amount badhne kaga aur blue energy ko badi tezi se absorb karne laga sur kuch hi time mein wo pura red ho chuka tha aur uske aura se khushal bhi ghutno pe aa gaya tha. Tabhi king ne us ball ko khushal ki taraf kar diya ab khushal mein itni himmat to thi nahi ki wo khada hoke bach jasye isliye usne wo ball apni chest pe le liya.


Lekin usne usse pehle taniya ko ishara kiya aur wo samjh gayi lekin tabhi wo energy ball khushal se takrayi aur ek blast hua bhut tez aur khushal piche ki taraf udta hua door jaa gira, khushal ka haal bhut bura ho chuka tha like uske kapde fat chuke they uske sarir pe ghav hi ghav they jo heal nahi ho rahe they aur uske muh se khoon nikal raha tha tabhi waha jhatke se king uske paas pahucha aur is time uske hath mein khanzar tha jo kuch hi second mein khushal ke chest mein tha lekin tabhi plan ke mutabik taniya waha aayi aur us khanzar ke gayab hone se pehle us khanzar ko pakad ke king ko marna chaha lekin wo khushal ki chest se niklate hi taniya ke sarir ko jala ke rakh kar gaya aur gayab ho gaya aur dheere dheere khushal ki body bhi ret mein milne lagi uske paas king khada bas muskura raha tha


King:- main ek baar fir jeet gaya Bhai, kosis aur plan acha tha tumhara.


Dheere dheere mera sharir pura ret mein mil gaya ab jo bachi thi wo thi meri soul jo ki blue energy thi aur wo bhi body ke khatam hote hi aakash mein gayab ho gayi aur pahuch gayi apne rachiyta ke paas..



Is samay blue energy ke samne ek white energy thi aur uski chamak itni thi ki wo croro planets ko ek sath roshan kar de.


God:- ohhh mere bache fir se haar gaye tum, tum haar isliye gaye kyuki tum niyati se bhaag rahe they tum is khel ko hamesa ke liye khatam karna chahte they, par aisa ho nahi sakta kyuki ye khel aise hi chalta aaya hai aur aise hi chalega.par mujhe afsos hai ki meri banayi huyi ek cheez baar baar haar rahi hai kyuki wo jazbaato mein beh jaati hai.



Kuch saalo tak wo blue energy wahi sthir rahi aur kuch saalo mein red energy ka jeewan kaal samapt hua aur wo bhi yaha aa gaya aur is waqt dono energy god ke samne sthir ruki huyi thi.


God:- tum dono ka samay firse aa gaya hai. lekin is baar kuch alag hoga kuch naya hoga naya grah hoga naye log honge naye niyam honge, is baar na tumhe kuch yaad hoga na yaad aayega, yaad aayega to bhi aant mein,is baar na wo khanzar hoga na koi hathiyar, is baar tum dono ko ek planet pe barabar jindagi milegi jisme jaadu hoga, nayi chunotiya hongi aur in sab mein tum dono ko khud ko sabse shresth sabit karna hoga.


Wo white energy se thodi der awaz aana band huyi to blue energy aur red energy chakar lagane lagi chaaro taraf.


God:- haa ab tum dono ke jaane ka samay ho haya hai. Agli partispradha ke liye asshirvaad.


Aur isi ke sath us white energy ne dono energy balls ko apne ander khich liya aur thodi der baad waha se sab gayab ho gaya. Wahi dono energy pahuch gayi naye grah pe apni nayi kahani likhne naye patro aur naye niyam ke sath.



The End and To Be Continued ??
good update but writer ji ye kesa end kiya aapne hero ko hi maar diya ye end nahi hona chahiye tha story ka
 
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{UPDATE:-30} FINAL UPDATE


Khushal ne taniya ko ishara kiya jo ki hamare plan ka part tha aur fir king ki taraf ho liya, kuch dur chalne ke baad king aur khushal dono aamne samne khade they.


King:- to batao kaise shuru karna chahoge?


Khushal:- pehle insan bane huye, fir werewolf banke, fir gaurdian aur fir aakhri mein wo khanjar.


King khushal ki baat pe muskura diya aur uski ye muskurahat hi uski sehmati thi.


Kuch der tak dono ek doosre ki aankho mein dekhte rahe aur fir dono ne ek doosre ki taraf daud laga di. Is waqt dono hi normal insan they.


Jaise hi dono paas pahuche dono ek sath punch mara ek doosre ko lekin dono ne hi punch block kar diya aur ek doosre ko jhatak diya. Fir dono ek doosre pe jhapte, lekin is baar king ne khushal ko ek flying marni chahi par khushal niche jhuka aur jhukte jhukte king ke legs pe kick maari lekin king ne bhi jump karke khud ko khushal se door kar liya.


Aur wahi door khadi taniya dono ko dekh rahi thi kitne same hai ye dono jo itni der se ladte huye bhi ek doosre ko chot nahi pahucha paa rahe.


Idhar,


Khushal ne is baar pehel karte huye ek kick king ke sir pe maarni chahi lekin king niche jhuka aur aisa hote hi khushal ne apne pair ko jor se niche ki taraf moda lekin king ne niche aate huye pair ko thik apne sir ke uper pakda aur marodna chaha lekin khushal ne khud ki body ko usi disha mein ghuma diya jis disha mein king ne uske pair ko modna chaha tha lekin aisa karne se king ne khushal ke pair ko chod diya aur wo fir se ek doosre ke samne they.


Khushal:- let's change.


Aur khushal ke dono hi alpha werewolf mein badal gaye. Jaha ek taraf king ek khunkhaar werewolf dikh raha tha wahi khushal ek dum sunder sa werewolf dikh raha tha lekin aankho mein gussa saaf dikh raha tha.


Dono ne ek baar sir upper karke dahad maari aur ek doosre ki taraf speed se badhe itni speed thi dono ki taniya jo ki khud ek alpha hai usey bhi muskil se dikh raha tha lekin in dono ko aaj kisi ki parwah nahi thi isliye dono ke sir ek doosre se takraye aur dono hi piche ko jaa gire aur fir khade huye aur fir takraye aur fir wahi haal indono aisa kayi baar kiya aur itni baar karne ki wajah se inke sir se khoon bhi aane laga tha lekin dekhte hi dekhte jhakam bhi bhar jaate. Dono ne bich bich mein panje wagarh bhi try kiye ek doosre pe jiska result same aaya jhakam deke bhi kuch hath nahi laga.


King:- let's change.


King ye baat bolte huye muskura raha tha wahi khushal thoda sa nervous ho gaya tha kyuki usey pata tha ki red gaurdian avtaar ke paas us khanjar ki bhi takat hai. Lekin ladayi to ladni thi isliye dono badal gaye aur jab dono badle to king ki aankhe aur baal pure red colour ke ho gaye they yaha tak ki uski nasho mein bhi red colour dur se dikh raha tha. Wahi khushal ki aankhe aur baal dono blue ho gayi thi aur uske aaspas ka environment thanda ho gaya tha.


Dono ne ek doosre ki aankho mein dekha aur dekhte dekhte apni power realise kar di jisse bahut kuch hua ek to ye ki aaspaas ka mahool ek dum se badle lag gaya tha kyuki to powerful source of energy ek sath takra rahe they aur wahi taniya inke powerful aura se apne ghutno pe aa gayi thi lekin wo bhut dur thi to usey itna impact nahi pad raha tha.


King aur khushal ki body se same amount aur same power ki energy release ho rahi thi aur isi ke chalte un dono ke bich mein ek energy ball banne lagi jo aadhi red aur aadhi blue energy thi aur aisa hote dekh khushal ke hotho pe smile aa gayi lekin ye smile ek dum se ruk gayi kyuki king ne us khanjar ki power ko bhi release kar diya jisse us energy ball mein red energy ka amount badhne kaga aur blue energy ko badi tezi se absorb karne laga sur kuch hi time mein wo pura red ho chuka tha aur uske aura se khushal bhi ghutno pe aa gaya tha. Tabhi king ne us ball ko khushal ki taraf kar diya ab khushal mein itni himmat to thi nahi ki wo khada hoke bach jasye isliye usne wo ball apni chest pe le liya.


Lekin usne usse pehle taniya ko ishara kiya aur wo samjh gayi lekin tabhi wo energy ball khushal se takrayi aur ek blast hua bhut tez aur khushal piche ki taraf udta hua door jaa gira, khushal ka haal bhut bura ho chuka tha like uske kapde fat chuke they uske sarir pe ghav hi ghav they jo heal nahi ho rahe they aur uske muh se khoon nikal raha tha tabhi waha jhatke se king uske paas pahucha aur is time uske hath mein khanzar tha jo kuch hi second mein khushal ke chest mein tha lekin tabhi plan ke mutabik taniya waha aayi aur us khanzar ke gayab hone se pehle us khanzar ko pakad ke king ko marna chaha lekin wo khushal ki chest se niklate hi taniya ke sarir ko jala ke rakh kar gaya aur gayab ho gaya aur dheere dheere khushal ki body bhi ret mein milne lagi uske paas king khada bas muskura raha tha


King:- main ek baar fir jeet gaya Bhai, kosis aur plan acha tha tumhara.


Dheere dheere mera sharir pura ret mein mil gaya ab jo bachi thi wo thi meri soul jo ki blue energy thi aur wo bhi body ke khatam hote hi aakash mein gayab ho gayi aur pahuch gayi apne rachiyta ke paas..



Is samay blue energy ke samne ek white energy thi aur uski chamak itni thi ki wo croro planets ko ek sath roshan kar de.


God:- ohhh mere bache fir se haar gaye tum, tum haar isliye gaye kyuki tum niyati se bhaag rahe they tum is khel ko hamesa ke liye khatam karna chahte they, par aisa ho nahi sakta kyuki ye khel aise hi chalta aaya hai aur aise hi chalega.par mujhe afsos hai ki meri banayi huyi ek cheez baar baar haar rahi hai kyuki wo jazbaato mein beh jaati hai.



Kuch saalo tak wo blue energy wahi sthir rahi aur kuch saalo mein red energy ka jeewan kaal samapt hua aur wo bhi yaha aa gaya aur is waqt dono energy god ke samne sthir ruki huyi thi.


God:- tum dono ka samay firse aa gaya hai. lekin is baar kuch alag hoga kuch naya hoga naya grah hoga naye log honge naye niyam honge, is baar na tumhe kuch yaad hoga na yaad aayega, yaad aayega to bhi aant mein,is baar na wo khanzar hoga na koi hathiyar, is baar tum dono ko ek planet pe barabar jindagi milegi jisme jaadu hoga, nayi chunotiya hongi aur in sab mein tum dono ko khud ko sabse shresth sabit karna hoga.


Wo white energy se thodi der awaz aana band huyi to blue energy aur red energy chakar lagane lagi chaaro taraf.


God:- haa ab tum dono ke jaane ka samay ho haya hai. Agli partispradha ke liye asshirvaad.


Aur isi ke sath us white energy ne dono energy balls ko apne ander khich liya aur thodi der baad waha se sab gayab ho gaya. Wahi dono energy pahuch gayi naye grah pe apni nayi kahani likhne naye patro aur naye niyam ke sath.



The End and To Be Continued ??
Kya bolu bhai nice update
 
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Superb update
kya king aur kushal dono hi wolf the ?? shayad inke bich kuch vampire bhi maujud the aisa mujhe laga,,( jo aapne deal ki baat batayi thi wolf aur vampire ke bich ,,ke king power ful tha isliye vampire ke raja uska saath de raha tha ) ?...last me sirf king hi bach gaya ,,,par kya uske aur bhi saathi bach gaye the ???.
Nice update but end is too short. All of us know good energy nd bad energy equal in this world, no one can distroy other one. Only God knows who will won.
Thanks & waiting for next part.
Mind-blowing update

And

Waiting Next part
Nice story bhai waiting for next part bhai
OK bhai waiting second part
good update but writer ji ye kesa end kiya aapne hero ko hi maar diya ye end nahi hona chahiye tha story ka
Kya bolu bhai nice update
Waiting bhai...
Nice ending bro but www ant second part jaldi seisma 2nd part start kijeye.
Thanks bhai log for your love and support

And maine mann bana liya hai second part likhne ka jo ki jaldi hi start kar dunga main aur wo different hoga issse bhut jada diffrent and bada bhi.
Bas ek suggestion chahiye tha ki hero ka character is khushal ke jaisa rakhu ya
my Complete intention wale AK jaisa :cool:
Abhi bata do cmnt karke main likhna start karunga aaj se
 
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