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[Vk248517]

Update 3


Naam karan


To un emperor ko hum wahi chod kar wapis aate hai apne new born baby ke pass 2 din ka samay bit chuka tha aur Sumit aur sneha ko bahut sari wishes bhi mil chuki thi

Charo taraf bas khushiyaan hi khushiyaan thi aur ajj Sumit ke guru bhi aanee wale the kyuki baby ka nam karan hone wala tha


Ghar acche sajaya gaya tha, garibo ko bhojan aur kapde bate ja rahe the aur pandit apne havan puja paat main lage hue the, Sumit idhar udhara bhaag kar sabhi chijo ka dhyan rakh raha tha, saath mae uska saath amit bhi de raha, jo uska accha dost tha..


Amit - yaar Sumit ye tu todi der santi ke saath nahi bath sakta hai kya, subha se dekh raha hu, kabhi idhar to kabhi udhar..


Sumit- to kya teri tarh bath jahu sale hai, are ssb kuch dekhna padta hai mere bhai kahi koi kami na ho jaye..


Amit - sale baat to yese kar raha hai jese main jula jhul raha hu, bhul mat pichle tin dino se yahi hu samjha.. Wese ye Swami Ji kab tak aa rahe hai..


Sumit - ha wo abhi call kiya tha mene wo log 15-20 mint mae aa jayenge, wese apni tayari to Puri hai, puja ki..


Amit - are ha bhai tu ye baat 15 baar puch chuka hai aur main bata chuka hu ki, mene sab fix kar diya hai.. Acha ek baar tu bhabhi ke pass bhi message bej de ki wo bhi tayar rahe..


Sumit - are uski koi tension nahi hai uski saheli hai na matlab teri Biwi wo sab kuch dekh legi.. Achha sun kal raat ko party ka kya hai..


Idhar Sumit aur amit aage ke baare mae baat karne lage aur hum chalte hai sneha ke room mae..



Jaha sneha kuch aurto ke saath bethi hui thi aur bate kar rahi thi aur wahi uska baby kisi aur he hato mae tha


Sneha- abha aur kab tu mere bete ke saath khelti rahegi dekh aur bhi log aa rahe hai, unko bhi de de na..


Abha (amit ki Biwi) - nahi main nahi dungi, wese bhi jitna tera hak hai isme mera bhi hak hai samji, jab tak mera man nahi manega tab tak ye mere pass rahega..


Sneha- acha baba tik hai tu jiti, par kam se kam usko tayar to kar de, pandiji bhi aate hi honge, aur ye le ye kapde pahan de usko..


Abha - jarurat nahi hai samjhi, main pahle se iske liya kapde la chuki hu aur ye mere hisab se meri pasand ke kapde pahnega..


Abha- wese sneha kuch bhi bol ye baccha na bilkul alag hai dusro se


Sneha- acha aur kya kya alag hai mere bete mae jara main bhi to sunu..


Abha - dekhna pichhale 3 dino se main yaha hu aur abhi tak mene isko ek baar bhi rota hua nahi suni hu..


Sneha- to kamini tu kya chahti hai mera beta rota hi rahe.. Aur wese bhi Doctor kahte hai ki kuch bcche jada rote hi nahi hai..


Abha- ha wo to hai aur dusri baat ye dusro baccha jesa nahi hai bahut saant hai jese isko pata hai ki hum log yaha kya kar hai.. Aur


Sneha- are bas bas itni tarif bhi mat kar mere bete ki nazar lag jaye ..


Abha - ha.. Nahi karti tarif aur ek baat meri nazar nahin lagegi isko kabhi tik hai..
.

Idhar sneha ko phone baja aur kuch der baat karne ke baad call cat ho gaya..


Abha - kis ka call aya tha, koi frined tha kya..


Sneha- are nahi koi frined nahi tha, Sumit the, bata rahe the ki guruji 10-15 minto mae aa Jayenge to majhe aur baby ko tayar rahne bol rahe the..


Abha - ha to fir toda jaldi se ye sab kam karte hai, har chij apne samay mae ho to accha rahta hai, chal ye to tayar ho gaya tujko bhi tayar kar deti hu


Kuch der baad Sumit ke gurudev bhi aa gaye, ye wahi the jinhone Sumit ke bure dino mae uska Marg darsan kiya tha, aur ye hamesa hi Sumit ke parivaar ke karib rahe hain

Sumit koi bhi kaam bina inki marji ke nahi karta hai, ssath mae amit aur uski Biwi ke saath bhi inke aache rishte hai..

Idhar gurudev apne kuch aur chelo ke saath andar aaye, Sumit aur amit dono ne apni - apni patni ke saath mil ke sabhi ke per do liye, sabhi ka Aasirwad le liya uske baad puja hui aur sabhi brmhan ko bhojan diya gaya, aur garibo ko Dan dene kee baad, Sumit aur uski patni gurudev ko andar ekanatha mae le gaye jaha gurudev kuch batnae wale the


Sumit- gurudev hamari seva main koi kami to nahi rah gai na..


Sneha- Ji gurudev agar rah gai ho to Hume maff kar de


Gurudev- beti hum to sadhu hai chahe 56 bhog mile ya 2 sukhi roti bhagavaan ka Prasad samjh usi mae santust ho jate hai, aur ajj tak yesa kabhi nahin hua ki tum dono se koi galti ho jaye.. Wese tumhara balak kaha hai beti..


Sneha- wo gurudev beta to abha ke pass hai wo bahut se gest aaye hai to, sabhi kuch na kuch gift de rahe hai bete ko, kya main managa lu..


Gurudev- nahi beti iski koi jarurat nahi hai, wese bhi jesa Sumit ne samay bataya tha uske anurup mere sisya ne kundli bana di hai tumhare bete ki..


Sneha- to batayega gurudev kya kahta hai mere beta ka bhavishy..


Gurudev- beti sneha ki ka bhavishy kabhi nichait nahi rahta hai, wo to uske karam nirdhaarit karte hai ki uska bhavishy kesa ho gaa..
Ha main ye jarur bata sakta hu ki is balak ki pravrtti kesi hogi


Gurudev kuch der dhyan mae bathe fir kundli ko samne rakh diya aur bole..


Gurudev- beti tere beta bahut hi Budiman, saktisali, nidar aur tej hoga, ye har chij jaldi hi sikh jayega , ye tum dono se bahut payar karega , par jada apni maa se, jaha jayega apni chap chod dega aur surwati ke kuch sal ye bahut hi badmashi karega, to iss par gusa nahi hona, apne parivar ka nam bahut age le kar jayega..

Itni tarif sun kar Sumit aur sneha bahut kush hi gaye, akhira kon se ma baap apni santan ke bare mae accha sun kar khush nahi honge..


Gurudev- beti har sike ke do pahalu hote hai abhi tak issi acchi bate suni ab baki ki baate bhi suno ye nidar to hoga hi par ye baccha nirankusa hoga beti


Sneha- matlab gurudev..


Gurudev- matlab beti ye jo chayega usko prapt karke rahega, aur iskl ye kabhi bhi pasand nahi aayega ki koi iske manjil ke bich aaye, ye bahut hi adik guuse wala hoga, aur iska gussa khataranaka ho sakata hai


Gurudev- par beti ye tumhara beta hi tum dono ke pure parivar ko ek karega, Sumit jis parivaar se tum dono dur ho na, ISI ladke ki wajha se tum apne parivaar se mil sakoge , par beti tumhe ek baat meri manani hogi bolo maan sakogi , jab tumhara beta 6 sal ko ho jaye tab tumko isko apne se alag rakhna hoga tab tak jab tak ye 22 sal ka no ho jaye,



Sneha- kya par kya gurudev



Gurudev- beti kuch yesa sanyog ban raha hai ki agar ye 6 sal se adhik samay tak tumhare pass raha to iski jindagi par khatra ho sakta hai..


Apne beti ki jindagi par khatre ki baat sun sneha khabra gai, par gurudev ke samjane se samjh gai, ki jab samay aayega wo bete ko bahar bahj denge..


Gurudev- beti ab apne bete ko manga lo saath , uska naam karan bhi to karna hai..

Kuch der baad abha Sumit amit sneha aur kuch karibe log gurudev ke pass bath gaye


Fir gurudev ne "A" Naam se bacche ka naam rakhee ko kaha jisme abha ne ek naam fir kar diya

"AVINASH"

Nice updates

 

[Naik]

Update 3


Naam karan


To un emperor ko hum wahi chod kar wapis aate hai apne new born baby ke pass 2 din ka samay bit chuka tha aur Sumit aur sneha ko bahut sari wishes bhi mil chuki thi

Charo taraf bas khushiyaan hi khushiyaan thi aur ajj Sumit ke guru bhi aanee wale the kyuki baby ka nam karan hone wala tha


Ghar acche sajaya gaya tha, garibo ko bhojan aur kapde bate ja rahe the aur pandit apne havan puja paat main lage hue the, Sumit idhar udhara bhaag kar sabhi chijo ka dhyan rakh raha tha, saath mae uska saath amit bhi de raha, jo uska accha dost tha..


Amit - yaar Sumit ye tu todi der santi ke saath nahi bath sakta hai kya, subha se dekh raha hu, kabhi idhar to kabhi udhar..


Sumit- to kya teri tarh bath jahu sale hai, are ssb kuch dekhna padta hai mere bhai kahi koi kami na ho jaye..


Amit - sale baat to yese kar raha hai jese main jula jhul raha hu, bhul mat pichle tin dino se yahi hu samjha.. Wese ye Swami Ji kab tak aa rahe hai..


Sumit - ha wo abhi call kiya tha mene wo log 15-20 mint mae aa jayenge, wese apni tayari to Puri hai, puja ki..


Amit - are ha bhai tu ye baat 15 baar puch chuka hai aur main bata chuka hu ki, mene sab fix kar diya hai.. Acha ek baar tu bhabhi ke pass bhi message bej de ki wo bhi tayar rahe..


Sumit - are uski koi tension nahi hai uski saheli hai na matlab teri Biwi wo sab kuch dekh legi.. Achha sun kal raat ko party ka kya hai..


Idhar Sumit aur amit aage ke baare mae baat karne lage aur hum chalte hai sneha ke room mae..



Jaha sneha kuch aurto ke saath bethi hui thi aur bate kar rahi thi aur wahi uska baby kisi aur he hato mae tha


Sneha- abha aur kab tu mere bete ke saath khelti rahegi dekh aur bhi log aa rahe hai, unko bhi de de na..


Abha (amit ki Biwi) - nahi main nahi dungi, wese bhi jitna tera hak hai isme mera bhi hak hai samji, jab tak mera man nahi manega tab tak ye mere pass rahega..


Sneha- acha baba tik hai tu jiti, par kam se kam usko tayar to kar de, pandiji bhi aate hi honge, aur ye le ye kapde pahan de usko..


Abha - jarurat nahi hai samjhi, main pahle se iske liya kapde la chuki hu aur ye mere hisab se meri pasand ke kapde pahnega..


Abha- wese sneha kuch bhi bol ye baccha na bilkul alag hai dusro se


Sneha- acha aur kya kya alag hai mere bete mae jara main bhi to sunu..


Abha - dekhna pichhale 3 dino se main yaha hu aur abhi tak mene isko ek baar bhi rota hua nahi suni hu..


Sneha- to kamini tu kya chahti hai mera beta rota hi rahe.. Aur wese bhi Doctor kahte hai ki kuch bcche jada rote hi nahi hai..


Abha- ha wo to hai aur dusri baat ye dusro baccha jesa nahi hai bahut saant hai jese isko pata hai ki hum log yaha kya kar hai.. Aur


Sneha- are bas bas itni tarif bhi mat kar mere bete ki nazar lag jaye ..


Abha - ha.. Nahi karti tarif aur ek baat meri nazar nahin lagegi isko kabhi tik hai..
.

Idhar sneha ko phone baja aur kuch der baat karne ke baad call cat ho gaya..


Abha - kis ka call aya tha, koi frined tha kya..


Sneha- are nahi koi frined nahi tha, Sumit the, bata rahe the ki guruji 10-15 minto mae aa Jayenge to majhe aur baby ko tayar rahne bol rahe the..


Abha - ha to fir toda jaldi se ye sab kam karte hai, har chij apne samay mae ho to accha rahta hai, chal ye to tayar ho gaya tujko bhi tayar kar deti hu


Kuch der baad Sumit ke gurudev bhi aa gaye, ye wahi the jinhone Sumit ke bure dino mae uska Marg darsan kiya tha, aur ye hamesa hi Sumit ke parivaar ke karib rahe hain

Sumit koi bhi kaam bina inki marji ke nahi karta hai, ssath mae amit aur uski Biwi ke saath bhi inke aache rishte hai..

Idhar gurudev apne kuch aur chelo ke saath andar aaye, Sumit aur amit dono ne apni - apni patni ke saath mil ke sabhi ke per do liye, sabhi ka Aasirwad le liya uske baad puja hui aur sabhi brmhan ko bhojan diya gaya, aur garibo ko Dan dene kee baad, Sumit aur uski patni gurudev ko andar ekanatha mae le gaye jaha gurudev kuch batnae wale the


Sumit- gurudev hamari seva main koi kami to nahi rah gai na..


Sneha- Ji gurudev agar rah gai ho to Hume maff kar de


Gurudev- beti hum to sadhu hai chahe 56 bhog mile ya 2 sukhi roti bhagavaan ka Prasad samjh usi mae santust ho jate hai, aur ajj tak yesa kabhi nahin hua ki tum dono se koi galti ho jaye.. Wese tumhara balak kaha hai beti..


Sneha- wo gurudev beta to abha ke pass hai wo bahut se gest aaye hai to, sabhi kuch na kuch gift de rahe hai bete ko, kya main managa lu..


Gurudev- nahi beti iski koi jarurat nahi hai, wese bhi jesa Sumit ne samay bataya tha uske anurup mere sisya ne kundli bana di hai tumhare bete ki..


Sneha- to batayega gurudev kya kahta hai mere beta ka bhavishy..


Gurudev- beti sneha ki ka bhavishy kabhi nichait nahi rahta hai, wo to uske karam nirdhaarit karte hai ki uska bhavishy kesa ho gaa..
Ha main ye jarur bata sakta hu ki is balak ki pravrtti kesi hogi


Gurudev kuch der dhyan mae bathe fir kundli ko samne rakh diya aur bole..


Gurudev- beti tere beta bahut hi Budiman, saktisali, nidar aur tej hoga, ye har chij jaldi hi sikh jayega , ye tum dono se bahut payar karega , par jada apni maa se, jaha jayega apni chap chod dega aur surwati ke kuch sal ye bahut hi badmashi karega, to iss par gusa nahi hona, apne parivar ka nam bahut age le kar jayega..

Itni tarif sun kar Sumit aur sneha bahut kush hi gaye, akhira kon se ma baap apni santan ke bare mae accha sun kar khush nahi honge..


Gurudev- beti har sike ke do pahalu hote hai abhi tak issi acchi bate suni ab baki ki baate bhi suno ye nidar to hoga hi par ye baccha nirankusa hoga beti


Sneha- matlab gurudev..


Gurudev- matlab beti ye jo chayega usko prapt karke rahega, aur iskl ye kabhi bhi pasand nahi aayega ki koi iske manjil ke bich aaye, ye bahut hi adik guuse wala hoga, aur iska gussa khataranaka ho sakata hai


Gurudev- par beti ye tumhara beta hi tum dono ke pure parivar ko ek karega, Sumit jis parivaar se tum dono dur ho na, ISI ladke ki wajha se tum apne parivaar se mil sakoge , par beti tumhe ek baat meri manani hogi bolo maan sakogi , jab tumhara beta 6 sal ko ho jaye tab tumko isko apne se alag rakhna hoga tab tak jab tak ye 22 sal ka no ho jaye,



Sneha- kya par kya gurudev



Gurudev- beti kuch yesa sanyog ban raha hai ki agar ye 6 sal se adhik samay tak tumhare pass raha to iski jindagi par khatra ho sakta hai..


Apne beti ki jindagi par khatre ki baat sun sneha khabra gai, par gurudev ke samjane se samjh gai, ki jab samay aayega wo bete ko bahar bahj denge..


Gurudev- beti ab apne bete ko manga lo saath , uska naam karan bhi to karna hai..

Kuch der baad abha Sumit amit sneha aur kuch karibe log gurudev ke pass bath gaye


Fir gurudev ne "A" Naam se bacche ka naam rakhee ko kaha jisme abha ne ek naam fir kar diya

"AVINASH"

Badhiya shaandaar update bhai
Hero ka naam AVINASH sahi h behtareen naam h to
Guru ji hisab gussa bahot aayega 6 saal k baad kahi door bhi bhejna padega
Dekhte h aage kia hota h

 

[Dark.King]

Nice Update

 

[Rohit1988]

Update 1


He Is Coming Again


Andhera charo taraf guf andhera, Raat ka samay, Amawas ki raat,jab chand bhi chup gaya tha,charo taraf badl hi badal,tare bhi chup gaye the yesa lag raha tha ki,ajj asman bilkul saff hai jisme na tare hai na chand,bilkul kala aasman..

Ek viran jungle jisme jada hare ped nahi the sirf adhe jivit ped the,lambi lambi bel jo un pedo se kisi sap ( snake) ki tarah jul rahe the

Per us sunsan jungle ki santi sirf kuch samay tak hi thi kyukin us jungle ke bicho bich kai gadiya dod rahi thi .. Aur unke piche bhi kuch gadiya aur dono mae goli bari ki awwaje aa rahi thi..

Un gadio se kuch km age ek aur gadi thi aur us gadi mae ek married couple , betha hua tha, jisme Admi bahut hi tension mae lag raha tha, kyukin uski Biwi sayada pregnant thi aur usko pan ho raha,


Admi- sneha sabar karo sneha sabar karo, tumko kuch nahi hoga, main tumko kuch bhi nahi hone dunga, bas kuch der aur, driver gadi jaldi chalo
Dekh rahe ho na apni Malkin ki halat


Sneha (dard se) - maaa nahi Sumit main tik hu, ahh aur mujhe apni chinta nahi hai bas main (apne pet par hath rakh kar ) mujhe bas apne bacche ki chinta hai bas ek baar isko dekh lu fir agar mout bhi aa jaye to koi dukh nahi hai


Sumit - nahi sneha ye tum kesi baate kar rahi ho na tumko kuch hoga na hi hamare bacche ko main hu na, driver tum kya kar rahe gadi jaldi chalo..


Driver- main samjh sakata hu sir ki app bahut tension mae ho, par mae kya karu, is jungle mae bahut jada andhera hai aur gadi ki Roshni bhi acche se sadak par nahi aa pa rahi hai, main bas ye dyan rakh raha hu ki, madam ko koi taklif na ho..


Sumit bhi apne Driver ki baat samjh chuka tha, ki ajj kuch to alag hai aur is jungle mae bhi, par apni patni ke dard ke samne uska dimag aur kuch nahi soch raha tha.. Us gadi mae 2 nurse bhi thi jo sneha ka khyaal rakh rahi thi, par uska dard ruk nahi tha tabhi..


Achhank se gadi band pad gai aur Sumit jada tension mae aa gaya


Sumit- Driver kya hua gadi kyu rok diya tumne
..

Driver- mene nahi roki sir pata nahi kese gadi band pad gai, main abhi dekhta huu


Sumit - Nurse tum iska dhyn rako main bhi dekhta hu kya hua gadi ko..


Idhar badlo ki garjana hone lagi aur Hawa ki raftar bahut tej ho chuki thi


Nurse 1- inka pan badta ja raha hai, mujhe tension ho rahi hai ki hum hospital tak sayad hi pahunch paye ..


Nurse 2- ha mujhe bhi lagata hai ki delivery ka time aa gaya hai Hume kuch karna hoga nahi to gadbad ho sakti hai. Main abhi sir ko batati hu

Aur Nurseye bol kar niche utar gai aur Sumit ke pass ja kar boli..


Nurse- sir ek bahut badi problam ho gai hai.. Apki help chahiye..


Sumit - pro.. Problem kya problam Nurse meri Biwi to..


Nurse- sir wo mam jada samay tak control nahi kar sakti hai lagta hai bache ke janam dene ka time aa gaya hai, hum aur wait nahi kar sakte hai..


Sumit - hye bhagavaan ab main kya karu is jagah kese delivery ho sakti hai Nurse..


Nurse- sir uski tension app mat li jiye bas app is jungle mae koi jagha dekhiye jada hun aag jala sake baki sara saman hamare pass hai..


Sumit ne jada socha nahi aur idhar udhara dod laga kar dekhne laga kuch hi duri par ek khandar jesa kuch tha par waha bahut chije thi jo kaam aa sakti thi.


Sumit turant gadi ke pass aaya aur Driver aur Nurse ki madad se apni patni ko us jagah par laya


Nurse- sir app jaldi se is ladkiya ki madad se Agg jala dijye aur Driver tum is bartan mae toda barsat ka pani jama karo jaldi..


Sumit dod kar apni gai se petrol laya aur Agg jala kar pani garam karne laga, idhar dono Nurse apni puri kosis kar rahi thi..


Nurse- mam himmat mat hariye apke baby ki jindagi apke hato mae hai mam please push mam push..


Sneha puri takat laga kar ek bar push kiya, Jiski wajha se baccha bahar aaya
par kuch blood us jaga gir gye aur wo baccha mara hua tha,isse pahle ki wo Nurse kuch bol pati wo 5 log behosh ho gaye..

Aur us bacche ke charo or ek dund chakr katne laga.. Aur un 5 ko dekhne laga bhar ka musan aur jada kharab ho chuka tha..


Who - hi.. Hi.. Hi. (Hasta hua) kadodo salo ke intajaar ke baad ajj wo pal aa gai jab main **** is seal se ajad ho jaunga huu main jiske hato se na jane kitni duniya barabad ho gai.. Kitne logo ki mout ho gai..

Aur ajj mujhe ek becche ne is seal se aajadi dila di.. Huu par ek mara hua baccha, kya samay mujko ek aur muka de raha hai ki jo galtiya mene pahle ki unko sudhar sakhu..
Sayad ha is baache ke jariye sayad main wo kar saku..
Par isse pahle kuch anjan mahana aa rahe hai unko tikane laga du ..



Idhar wo gadia ruki aur unme se 8-10 log utre..


1- boss gadi to yahi hai par usne to koi bhi nahi hai lagta hai bag gaye honge


Boss - chup sale uski Biwi maa banane wali hai, aur is halat mae wo kahi bhag sakti dudo usko, unko marne ki bahut badi rakam mili hai humko,

Kuch samya baad wo sabhi gunde uski khandar ke samne aa gaye the


2- boss wo rahe sab par lagta hai aaram se soo rahe hain wo..


Boss - koi baat nahi lagta hai, unko hamesa ke sula dene ka kaam hame karna hoga..


3- par bass usne saath wo 2 mast mall bhi to hai na unka kya, unko bhi mar de kya..


Boss - chup re pahle hum sab ek ek karke unke saath apni payash buja lenge fir maar denge unko chalo ab..


Par wo nahi jante the ki wo apni mout ki taraf bad rahe wo sab us khandar ke pass, pahunch chuke the aur isse pahle ki wo kuch kar pate un sab ke hatyar gayab ho gaye..


Boss - ye.. Ye. Kya hua kese hua, kon kon hai yaha par samne aapao..


Who - -hu bacche apni mout se milne ki itni jaldi hai tumko hu, lo main aa gaya samne
.


Aur unke koi aaya jisko dekh kar hi 2 gundo ne dam taod diya.. Wo bhagna chahte the par bhag nahi paa rahe the kyuki wo pure jam chuke the


Who - akhiri baar khun bahana padega ha.. Ha.. Ha. .


Aur fir usne un sab katam kar diya yaha tak ki unke sarir ka koi tukda bhi nahi raha..


Wo us baache ke Samne gaya aur bola

Who - huu is nayi jidagi mae mujhe nahi pata ki mujhe apni purani jindagi yaad hogi ya nahi, par bas yahi chaunga ki wo path na chun lu fir se

Main tha Great ****


"The path I'll choose in the end I'll destroy millions of life"

I am tha one, the face of fear ha.. Ha..



To be continued

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Bit one think we want u complete your Story if u writing please
We will with u

 

[Rohit1988]

Update 2


Time for reborn


Isse pahle ki who us bacche ke sarir mae ja pata, ek Roshni uske samne aa gai


Who - kon ho tum aur tumhari himmat kesi hui yaha aane ki jawan de muje



Roshni- main kon hu ye jaruri nahi hai, jaruri ye hai ki main yaha kyu hu..


Who - kya matlab hai tumhara saf saf bolo..


Roshni- tum yaha seal the kai yugo se ab tumko mukt hona hoga,


Who - nahi mein nahi mukt hunga iss bacche se mujko ek naya rasta mila hai ek nai manjil..
Jo galti mene ki thi unko sudharne ka samay aa gaya mere pass, aur tum mujko rok rahi ho..


Roshni - tum samjh nahi paa rahe ho tum *** ho aur ye ek insan ka baccha agar tum apni puri takat ke saath iske andar chale gaye the ye sarir nasat ho jayega, aur tum hari aatma bhi..


Who kuch der Sant raha fir kuch sochne ke bad, usse kuch alag - alag saktiya nikli jo Univers mae kahi gum ho gai..


Who - ab tik hai ab isko koi nuksan nahi hoga, samay ane par ye saktiya kudh isko rasta dikha dengi...


Roshni - tik hai aur ek baat ye naya jivan is bacche ke saath saath in dono maa baap ne diya hai tumko ..


Who - janta hu main kabhi bhi inkk nukasana nahi pahucha sakta hu, wese tum kon ho


Roshni - main jab samay ayega tum kudh samjh jawo ge ab jawo, aur apne naye JIWAN ki suruwat karo.. Par yaad rahe tumko kuch bhi yaad nahi rahega tumhara bita hua kal ki baate bhi nahi.....


Who - tik hai par in sab ki yade mitani padegi..


Roshni - uski chinta tum mat karo main baki ka kaam kar dugi..


Uske baad who Roshni ban kar us bacche mae chala gaya, baacha jivit wo utha, par uss Roshni ki wajha se wo so gaya..

Fir wo Roshni ne ek aakar liya ek bahut hi sundar aakar, jisko dekhne ke baad ankhe us par tahar jaye




Wo age badi aur us bacche ko apni good mae utha liya.. Aur ek mantr pad kar uske mathe par punk mar di..


Ladki - jab tak app -14 sal ke nahi ho jaoge apki demonic power control mae rahegi aur tab tak apko hum sab protect karegi , 14 salo bad apki power kud apko aage ka rasta dikha dengi aur hum bhi apki madad karege Ab hume intajaar rahega ki kab app ayenge humari queen ke pass ..


Fir us Roshni ne un sab ki yado se us lamhe ko hata diya aur samay wahi ruka jab Nurse ne us baache ko dekha


Roshni ne ek baar uper dekha jaha se 7 kism ki Roshni aai un sabhi ne Ladkiyo ka rup liya, uss bache ke mathe par kiss kiya aur ek saath boli..

- Hame apka intajaar rahega


Aur wo sab gayab ho gai, idhar uss bacche ki rone ki aawaj se samay wapis pahle jesa ho gaya,


Nurse 1 - jaldi se saf kapda do aur pani bhi lao..

Bacche ki rone ki awwaj sun Sumit ki ankho se bhi anshu ki bunde chalak uthi


Driver-- mubaarak ho sir app pita ban gaye, hamare chote malik peda ho hi gaye..



Sumit - ha main main pita ban gaya, Nurse dono tik to hai na..


Nurse 2- ha sir baby to bilkul tik hi hai, aur madam todi behoshi ki halat mae hai, todi taklif bad gai thi unki..


Sumit - Nurse kya main apne baby ko dekh sakata hu abhi..


Nurse- nahi sir pahle isko apni maa ka dudh pine dijiye fir dekh lijiye..


Sumit- ha tik hai pahle app apna kaam karo main baby ko baad main dekh lunga..


Aur idhar kuchh gadiya aa kar ruk gai, aur Sumit unki or chal diya, ye sab Sumit ki security guards the


Guard head - sir app tik to hai na kisi ko koi chot to nahi lagi hai


Sumit- nahi hum tik hai, aur tumne kaam pura kiya.


Guard head - Ji sir jitne bhi the humne sab ko khatm kar diya, kuch bach gaye the par unko mere log dund rahe hain, wese sir mam kesi hai aur kaha hai..


Sumit - ha wo tik hai, aur mera baby bhi badiya hai..


Guard head- huu sir kya apne abhi baby kaha mtlab app..


Sumit- ha main pita ban gaya, ladka hua hai..


Guard head- mubaarak ho sir mubaarak ho, mam tik hai na sir abhi..


Sumit - ha wo tik hai achha gadi ko dekho usme kuch problam ho gai thi, hum kuch der baad nikal jayenge


Guard head- sir ab subha hone mae kuch hi gante bache hue hai, ek kaam karte hai todi der yahi aaram kar lete hai, hamare log bhi bahut hi tak gaye hai..


Sumit- accha tik hai


Aur dono kuch aur bate karne lage, musam bhi lagbhag saf ho chuka tha, idhar Nurse ne jese hi bacche ko apni maa ke satano ke pass le gai baby kudh dudh pine laga aur, sneha bhi apni Bhi behoshi se bahar aa gai, aur apne bacche ko dekh uski sari taklife ek tarah se khatm ho chuki thi..


Nurse- mam app relax kijie , baby bilkul tik hai, aur hamare Guard bhi aa chuke hai todi der baad hum log nikal jayenge yaha se..


Sneha kuch nahi boli bas ha main sir hila diya aur apne baby ko payar karne lagi


Idhar samay bhi bit gaya aur Sumit ke kuch aur log bhi aa gaye jinke saath Doctor ki team bhi thi,
Fir maa bete ko gadi main aram se leta diya aur Sumit bhi unke pass bat gaya aur gadi nikal gai, apni nai manjil ki or idhar wo kandar apne app hi Gayab ho gaya jese waha kuch tha hi nahi pahle



Idhar earth se dur ek jaga jisko bola jata hai

"The immortal world"


Waha 6 immortal bathe hue the ye sirf unki atma ka kuch hissa bacha hua tha ye sab apne samay ke
"Great emperor" The aur jab yaha wo kandar gayab hua, us samay pure immortal World mae andhere cha gaya, par sirf kuch samay ke liya

( To ye kon hai inki kya story hai iska kulasa tabhi hoga, jab Hume pata chalega "Who " Ki story..


Emperor 1- huu emperor's kya ap sabhi ko bhi usi aura ka anubhav hua jo mujhe hua abhi..

Baki sabhi 5 emperor ne apni sahmti is baat par de di


Emperor 2- huu to iska saf matlab hai ki wo jiska naam. Nahi lete wo wapis aa gaya hai..


Emperor 3- par ye kese ho sakta hai, usko seal karne ke liya hum sabko kya kimat chukani padi thi, fir wo kese ajad wo sakta hai, kese..


Emperor 3- mere dost hum sab bhul rahe hain wo kon hai, ajj bhi main ya sayad hum sab us samay ko nahi bhule hai, jab usne wo sab kiya tha..


Emperor 5- kese.. Kese.. Bhul sakte hai hai wo manjar , hum sab us samay apne app ko bahut powerful samaja karte the, jiska anjam Hume bhugatna pada tha..


Emperor 4- sirf Hume hi nahi hamare pure empire ko bugatna pada tha, wo nazara ajj bhi nahi bhul paya hu mae, bhale hi ye sarir kab ka khatm ho chuka hai, par is aatma mae aaj bhi wo fear hai..


Emperor 1- bhul bhi kese sakte hai humsab, jab hamari galti ki wajha se "Who " Ne hamare hum sab ke 6 empire ko khatm kar diya, wo bhi hamrae hi ankho ke samne kuch bhi nahi baccha, tha us samay ..


Emperor 6 - ha par usse bhi bura tab hua jab usko seal karne ke liya hamare ancient Lords ko apni bachi hui aatma ki takat lagani padi saath mae Hume bhi, itna sab karne ke baad bhi, ajj wo fir ajad ho gaya kese..



Emperor 3- hum sab ye kyu bhul jate hain ki, samya se jada powerful koi bhi nahi kal uska samay nahi tha isliye hum sab wo seal bana paye the ajj hamara samay nahi hai isliye wo seal tut chuki hai..



Emperor 4- tik hai par ab kya hoga jab Wo aajad ho chuka hai, kahi fir se wo sab start na ho jaye..



Emperor 6- huu muskil hai bahut muskil hai ye kahna ki ab kya hoga aage, kuch bhi ho sakta hai par hum kuch bhi nahi kar sakte hai bas dekh sakte hai..



Emperor 3 - ha sahi kaha tumne ab hamara samay nahi hai hamara samay pura ho chuka hai, ab bas kar sakte hai to intajaar...
Wo kaha hai aur aage kya karega ye ham nahi jan sakte hai


To be continued

Fantastic update

 

[Rohit1988]

Update 3


Naam karan


To un emperor ko hum wahi chod kar wapis aate hai apne new born baby ke pass 2 din ka samay bit chuka tha aur Sumit aur sneha ko bahut sari wishes bhi mil chuki thi

Charo taraf bas khushiyaan hi khushiyaan thi aur ajj Sumit ke guru bhi aanee wale the kyuki baby ka nam karan hone wala tha


Ghar acche sajaya gaya tha, garibo ko bhojan aur kapde bate ja rahe the aur pandit apne havan puja paat main lage hue the, Sumit idhar udhara bhaag kar sabhi chijo ka dhyan rakh raha tha, saath mae uska saath amit bhi de raha, jo uska accha dost tha..


Amit - yaar Sumit ye tu todi der santi ke saath nahi bath sakta hai kya, subha se dekh raha hu, kabhi idhar to kabhi udhar..


Sumit- to kya teri tarh bath jahu sale hai, are ssb kuch dekhna padta hai mere bhai kahi koi kami na ho jaye..


Amit - sale baat to yese kar raha hai jese main jula jhul raha hu, bhul mat pichle tin dino se yahi hu samjha.. Wese ye Swami Ji kab tak aa rahe hai..


Sumit - ha wo abhi call kiya tha mene wo log 15-20 mint mae aa jayenge, wese apni tayari to Puri hai, puja ki..


Amit - are ha bhai tu ye baat 15 baar puch chuka hai aur main bata chuka hu ki, mene sab fix kar diya hai.. Acha ek baar tu bhabhi ke pass bhi message bej de ki wo bhi tayar rahe..


Sumit - are uski koi tension nahi hai uski saheli hai na matlab teri Biwi wo sab kuch dekh legi.. Achha sun kal raat ko party ka kya hai..


Idhar Sumit aur amit aage ke baare mae baat karne lage aur hum chalte hai sneha ke room mae..



Jaha sneha kuch aurto ke saath bethi hui thi aur bate kar rahi thi aur wahi uska baby kisi aur he hato mae tha


Sneha- abha aur kab tu mere bete ke saath khelti rahegi dekh aur bhi log aa rahe hai, unko bhi de de na..


Abha (amit ki Biwi) - nahi main nahi dungi, wese bhi jitna tera hak hai isme mera bhi hak hai samji, jab tak mera man nahi manega tab tak ye mere pass rahega..


Sneha- acha baba tik hai tu jiti, par kam se kam usko tayar to kar de, pandiji bhi aate hi honge, aur ye le ye kapde pahan de usko..


Abha - jarurat nahi hai samjhi, main pahle se iske liya kapde la chuki hu aur ye mere hisab se meri pasand ke kapde pahnega..


Abha- wese sneha kuch bhi bol ye baccha na bilkul alag hai dusro se


Sneha- acha aur kya kya alag hai mere bete mae jara main bhi to sunu..


Abha - dekhna pichhale 3 dino se main yaha hu aur abhi tak mene isko ek baar bhi rota hua nahi suni hu..


Sneha- to kamini tu kya chahti hai mera beta rota hi rahe.. Aur wese bhi Doctor kahte hai ki kuch bcche jada rote hi nahi hai..


Abha- ha wo to hai aur dusri baat ye dusro baccha jesa nahi hai bahut saant hai jese isko pata hai ki hum log yaha kya kar hai.. Aur


Sneha- are bas bas itni tarif bhi mat kar mere bete ki nazar lag jaye ..


Abha - ha.. Nahi karti tarif aur ek baat meri nazar nahin lagegi isko kabhi tik hai..
.

Idhar sneha ko phone baja aur kuch der baat karne ke baad call cat ho gaya..


Abha - kis ka call aya tha, koi frined tha kya..


Sneha- are nahi koi frined nahi tha, Sumit the, bata rahe the ki guruji 10-15 minto mae aa Jayenge to majhe aur baby ko tayar rahne bol rahe the..


Abha - ha to fir toda jaldi se ye sab kam karte hai, har chij apne samay mae ho to accha rahta hai, chal ye to tayar ho gaya tujko bhi tayar kar deti hu


Kuch der baad Sumit ke gurudev bhi aa gaye, ye wahi the jinhone Sumit ke bure dino mae uska Marg darsan kiya tha, aur ye hamesa hi Sumit ke parivaar ke karib rahe hain

Sumit koi bhi kaam bina inki marji ke nahi karta hai, ssath mae amit aur uski Biwi ke saath bhi inke aache rishte hai..

Idhar gurudev apne kuch aur chelo ke saath andar aaye, Sumit aur amit dono ne apni - apni patni ke saath mil ke sabhi ke per do liye, sabhi ka Aasirwad le liya uske baad puja hui aur sabhi brmhan ko bhojan diya gaya, aur garibo ko Dan dene kee baad, Sumit aur uski patni gurudev ko andar ekanatha mae le gaye jaha gurudev kuch batnae wale the


Sumit- gurudev hamari seva main koi kami to nahi rah gai na..


Sneha- Ji gurudev agar rah gai ho to Hume maff kar de


Gurudev- beti hum to sadhu hai chahe 56 bhog mile ya 2 sukhi roti bhagavaan ka Prasad samjh usi mae santust ho jate hai, aur ajj tak yesa kabhi nahin hua ki tum dono se koi galti ho jaye.. Wese tumhara balak kaha hai beti..


Sneha- wo gurudev beta to abha ke pass hai wo bahut se gest aaye hai to, sabhi kuch na kuch gift de rahe hai bete ko, kya main managa lu..


Gurudev- nahi beti iski koi jarurat nahi hai, wese bhi jesa Sumit ne samay bataya tha uske anurup mere sisya ne kundli bana di hai tumhare bete ki..


Sneha- to batayega gurudev kya kahta hai mere beta ka bhavishy..


Gurudev- beti sneha ki ka bhavishy kabhi nichait nahi rahta hai, wo to uske karam nirdhaarit karte hai ki uska bhavishy kesa ho gaa..
Ha main ye jarur bata sakta hu ki is balak ki pravrtti kesi hogi


Gurudev kuch der dhyan mae bathe fir kundli ko samne rakh diya aur bole..


Gurudev- beti tere beta bahut hi Budiman, saktisali, nidar aur tej hoga, ye har chij jaldi hi sikh jayega , ye tum dono se bahut payar karega , par jada apni maa se, jaha jayega apni chap chod dega aur surwati ke kuch sal ye bahut hi badmashi karega, to iss par gusa nahi hona, apne parivar ka nam bahut age le kar jayega..

Itni tarif sun kar Sumit aur sneha bahut kush hi gaye, akhira kon se ma baap apni santan ke bare mae accha sun kar khush nahi honge..


Gurudev- beti har sike ke do pahalu hote hai abhi tak issi acchi bate suni ab baki ki baate bhi suno ye nidar to hoga hi par ye baccha nirankusa hoga beti


Sneha- matlab gurudev..


Gurudev- matlab beti ye jo chayega usko prapt karke rahega, aur iskl ye kabhi bhi pasand nahi aayega ki koi iske manjil ke bich aaye, ye bahut hi adik guuse wala hoga, aur iska gussa khataranaka ho sakata hai


Gurudev- par beti ye tumhara beta hi tum dono ke pure parivar ko ek karega, Sumit jis parivaar se tum dono dur ho na, ISI ladke ki wajha se tum apne parivaar se mil sakoge , par beti tumhe ek baat meri manani hogi bolo maan sakogi , jab tumhara beta 6 sal ko ho jaye tab tumko isko apne se alag rakhna hoga tab tak jab tak ye 22 sal ka no ho jaye,



Sneha- kya par kya gurudev



Gurudev- beti kuch yesa sanyog ban raha hai ki agar ye 6 sal se adhik samay tak tumhare pass raha to iski jindagi par khatra ho sakta hai..


Apne beti ki jindagi par khatre ki baat sun sneha khabra gai, par gurudev ke samjane se samjh gai, ki jab samay aayega wo bete ko bahar bahj denge..


Gurudev- beti ab apne bete ko manga lo saath , uska naam karan bhi to karna hai..

Kuch der baad abha Sumit amit sneha aur kuch karibe log gurudev ke pass bath gaye


Fir gurudev ne "A" Naam se bacche ka naam rakhee ko kaha jisme abha ne ek naam fir kar diya

"AVINASH"

Mast update

 

[Mana6262]

Sandar update brother...

Hero bahut gussa Bala hoga dekhte us gusse prvab Kitna khtarnak hota hai..

Or Vai tumne jo naam diya hai avinash dil khush kar diya yar mera naam same hai....​

 

[گجر صاحب]

Bro plz give a mega update

 

[Luffy]

Update 3


Naam karan


To un emperor ko hum wahi chod kar wapis aate hai apne new born baby ke pass 2 din ka samay bit chuka tha aur Sumit aur sneha ko bahut sari wishes bhi mil chuki thi

Charo taraf bas khushiyaan hi khushiyaan thi aur ajj Sumit ke guru bhi aanee wale the kyuki baby ka nam karan hone wala tha


Ghar acche sajaya gaya tha, garibo ko bhojan aur kapde bate ja rahe the aur pandit apne havan puja paat main lage hue the, Sumit idhar udhara bhaag kar sabhi chijo ka dhyan rakh raha tha, saath mae uska saath amit bhi de raha, jo uska accha dost tha..


Amit - yaar Sumit ye tu todi der santi ke saath nahi bath sakta hai kya, subha se dekh raha hu, kabhi idhar to kabhi udhar..


Sumit- to kya teri tarh bath jahu sale hai, are ssb kuch dekhna padta hai mere bhai kahi koi kami na ho jaye..


Amit - sale baat to yese kar raha hai jese main jula jhul raha hu, bhul mat pichle tin dino se yahi hu samjha.. Wese ye Swami Ji kab tak aa rahe hai..


Sumit - ha wo abhi call kiya tha mene wo log 15-20 mint mae aa jayenge, wese apni tayari to Puri hai, puja ki..


Amit - are ha bhai tu ye baat 15 baar puch chuka hai aur main bata chuka hu ki, mene sab fix kar diya hai.. Acha ek baar tu bhabhi ke pass bhi message bej de ki wo bhi tayar rahe..


Sumit - are uski koi tension nahi hai uski saheli hai na matlab teri Biwi wo sab kuch dekh legi.. Achha sun kal raat ko party ka kya hai..


Idhar Sumit aur amit aage ke baare mae baat karne lage aur hum chalte hai sneha ke room mae..



Jaha sneha kuch aurto ke saath bethi hui thi aur bate kar rahi thi aur wahi uska baby kisi aur he hato mae tha


Sneha- abha aur kab tu mere bete ke saath khelti rahegi dekh aur bhi log aa rahe hai, unko bhi de de na..


Abha (amit ki Biwi) - nahi main nahi dungi, wese bhi jitna tera hak hai isme mera bhi hak hai samji, jab tak mera man nahi manega tab tak ye mere pass rahega..


Sneha- acha baba tik hai tu jiti, par kam se kam usko tayar to kar de, pandiji bhi aate hi honge, aur ye le ye kapde pahan de usko..


Abha - jarurat nahi hai samjhi, main pahle se iske liya kapde la chuki hu aur ye mere hisab se meri pasand ke kapde pahnega..


Abha- wese sneha kuch bhi bol ye baccha na bilkul alag hai dusro se


Sneha- acha aur kya kya alag hai mere bete mae jara main bhi to sunu..


Abha - dekhna pichhale 3 dino se main yaha hu aur abhi tak mene isko ek baar bhi rota hua nahi suni hu..


Sneha- to kamini tu kya chahti hai mera beta rota hi rahe.. Aur wese bhi Doctor kahte hai ki kuch bcche jada rote hi nahi hai..


Abha- ha wo to hai aur dusri baat ye dusro baccha jesa nahi hai bahut saant hai jese isko pata hai ki hum log yaha kya kar hai.. Aur


Sneha- are bas bas itni tarif bhi mat kar mere bete ki nazar lag jaye ..


Abha - ha.. Nahi karti tarif aur ek baat meri nazar nahin lagegi isko kabhi tik hai..
.

Idhar sneha ko phone baja aur kuch der baat karne ke baad call cat ho gaya..


Abha - kis ka call aya tha, koi frined tha kya..


Sneha- are nahi koi frined nahi tha, Sumit the, bata rahe the ki guruji 10-15 minto mae aa Jayenge to majhe aur baby ko tayar rahne bol rahe the..


Abha - ha to fir toda jaldi se ye sab kam karte hai, har chij apne samay mae ho to accha rahta hai, chal ye to tayar ho gaya tujko bhi tayar kar deti hu


Kuch der baad Sumit ke gurudev bhi aa gaye, ye wahi the jinhone Sumit ke bure dino mae uska Marg darsan kiya tha, aur ye hamesa hi Sumit ke parivaar ke karib rahe hain

Sumit koi bhi kaam bina inki marji ke nahi karta hai, ssath mae amit aur uski Biwi ke saath bhi inke aache rishte hai..

Idhar gurudev apne kuch aur chelo ke saath andar aaye, Sumit aur amit dono ne apni - apni patni ke saath mil ke sabhi ke per do liye, sabhi ka Aasirwad le liya uske baad puja hui aur sabhi brmhan ko bhojan diya gaya, aur garibo ko Dan dene kee baad, Sumit aur uski patni gurudev ko andar ekanatha mae le gaye jaha gurudev kuch batnae wale the


Sumit- gurudev hamari seva main koi kami to nahi rah gai na..


Sneha- Ji gurudev agar rah gai ho to Hume maff kar de


Gurudev- beti hum to sadhu hai chahe 56 bhog mile ya 2 sukhi roti bhagavaan ka Prasad samjh usi mae santust ho jate hai, aur ajj tak yesa kabhi nahin hua ki tum dono se koi galti ho jaye.. Wese tumhara balak kaha hai beti..


Sneha- wo gurudev beta to abha ke pass hai wo bahut se gest aaye hai to, sabhi kuch na kuch gift de rahe hai bete ko, kya main managa lu..


Gurudev- nahi beti iski koi jarurat nahi hai, wese bhi jesa Sumit ne samay bataya tha uske anurup mere sisya ne kundli bana di hai tumhare bete ki..


Sneha- to batayega gurudev kya kahta hai mere beta ka bhavishy..


Gurudev- beti sneha ki ka bhavishy kabhi nichait nahi rahta hai, wo to uske karam nirdhaarit karte hai ki uska bhavishy kesa ho gaa..
Ha main ye jarur bata sakta hu ki is balak ki pravrtti kesi hogi


Gurudev kuch der dhyan mae bathe fir kundli ko samne rakh diya aur bole..


Gurudev- beti tere beta bahut hi Budiman, saktisali, nidar aur tej hoga, ye har chij jaldi hi sikh jayega , ye tum dono se bahut payar karega , par jada apni maa se, jaha jayega apni chap chod dega aur surwati ke kuch sal ye bahut hi badmashi karega, to iss par gusa nahi hona, apne parivar ka nam bahut age le kar jayega..

Itni tarif sun kar Sumit aur sneha bahut kush hi gaye, akhira kon se ma baap apni santan ke bare mae accha sun kar khush nahi honge..


Gurudev- beti har sike ke do pahalu hote hai abhi tak issi acchi bate suni ab baki ki baate bhi suno ye nidar to hoga hi par ye baccha nirankusa hoga beti


Sneha- matlab gurudev..


Gurudev- matlab beti ye jo chayega usko prapt karke rahega, aur iskl ye kabhi bhi pasand nahi aayega ki koi iske manjil ke bich aaye, ye bahut hi adik guuse wala hoga, aur iska gussa khataranaka ho sakata hai


Gurudev- par beti ye tumhara beta hi tum dono ke pure parivar ko ek karega, Sumit jis parivaar se tum dono dur ho na, ISI ladke ki wajha se tum apne parivaar se mil sakoge , par beti tumhe ek baat meri manani hogi bolo maan sakogi , jab tumhara beta 6 sal ko ho jaye tab tumko isko apne se alag rakhna hoga tab tak jab tak ye 22 sal ka no ho jaye,



Sneha- kya par kya gurudev



Gurudev- beti kuch yesa sanyog ban raha hai ki agar ye 6 sal se adhik samay tak tumhare pass raha to iski jindagi par khatra ho sakta hai..


Apne beti ki jindagi par khatre ki baat sun sneha khabra gai, par gurudev ke samjane se samjh gai, ki jab samay aayega wo bete ko bahar bahj denge..


Gurudev- beti ab apne bete ko manga lo saath , uska naam karan bhi to karna hai..

Kuch der baad abha Sumit amit sneha aur kuch karibe log gurudev ke pass bath gaye


Fir gurudev ne "A" Naam se bacche ka naam rakhee ko kaha jisme abha ne ek naam fir kar diya

"AVINASH"

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[Avir]

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