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Update 11


"The Time has come"


To 15 sal bit chuke the aur 15 salo mae bahut kuch badal chuka tha,

To suruat karte hai, avi ki family se to avi ke papa ka business aur jada bada ho gaya,.
Aur bolte hai na ki jaha pesa jada ho admi ke dost aur dusamana dono bad jate hai, wese hi sumit ke saath bhi hua wese to business mae dusmani amma baat hoti hai, par sumit ke kuch dushman uske aur uske parivaar ke puiche pade the,.
Par kyuki avi UK mae safa tha wahi sneha ki security bhi jabardat thi isliye sumit relax tha..

Sneha pahle jese thi wesi ab bhi hai, hamesha apne bete se baat karna utne ke baad aur sone se pahle..

In 15 salo mae koi yess din nahi raha hoga jab avi aur sneha ne baat na ki ho, par ye sirf phone call par video chat par nahi kyukin avi ko dekhate hi sneha ki ankhe bhar aati thi aur wo apne anshu apne bete ko nahi dikhana cahati thi ya nahi dikha sakti thi, aur iski bahut badi wajha thi aur wo tha avi,

Wese to avi ko bahut chijo se nafrat thi, par 2 chijo se sabse jada

1- wo kabhi bhi apni maa ko udash nahi dekh sakta tha

2 aur dusri wajha sneha ki ankho mae anshu

Isliye sneha kabhi bhi video chat nahi ki avi ke saath, agar kaha jaye the in 15 salo mae usne apne bete ko kabhi nahi dekha ki uska beta kesa dikhta hai, par sneha ko avi ki wapis aanee ki bahut khushi thi par, ek aur wajha thi jiske karan usko avi ka intajara tha, aur wo wajha thi abha Sneha man mae soch rahi thi..


SNEHA - avi jaldi se wapis aa jawo tumhari mama tumhara wait kar rahi hai, aur sayada sirf tum hi abha ko pahle ki tarah kar sakate ho..


To yess kya hua hoga, aur kya hua abha ke saath jisake liye sneha ko avi ka intajaar tha..


Ab toda nazar mar lete hai us boss ki taraf bhi
In 15 salo mae boss ka business bhi bada hua, aur usne bahut baar Sumit ya uski family ko nukasana pahuchane ki kosis ki,
Par har baar usko haar hi mili har baar jese kisi ko pahle hi pata lag jata ki boss kuch karne wala hai,

Dusri usne raka ke bare mae sochana chod diya tha, kyuki uski wajha se uska pesa aur time dono barbaad ho rahe the,
Isliye usne ye decid kiya ki wo Sant rahe gaa aur ek accha time ane par, Sumit par bahut bada hamala karega, tab tak sirf apne kaam kar focus..


Ab bacha thakur parivaar, jaha sab kuch normal aur accha chal raha tha sabhi ladkiya 21 sal ki ho chuki thi, aur ab hum chalate hai toda piche jab avi ka 21 brithday ka din aaya aur thakur parivaar hamesa ki tarha apne khul devi ke mandir gaye the, satha mae 3 no betiyaan bhi.
Ab wo bhi badi ho chuki thi, aur unke man mae bahut se sawal aate the ki har saal ISI din hum log, kyu puja karte hai logo ko khana khilatee hai aur bhi bahut kuch,
Par unko in sab se koi problam nahi thi, par wajha thi ki ye kiske liye aur kyu aur, usi din saam ko job sab log khane khane bathe hue the tab jo in tino mar sabhee badi ladki thi usne


Beti - dada Ji kya mein apse kuch puch sakti hu.. Please


Thakur- are to isme puchne ki kya baat, tu to meri payari gudiya hai, kya baat hai bol ..


Beti - dada ji ye jo har saal hun 28 jun ko ye sab karte hai wo Kiske liye karte hai aur kyu..


Uske mhu se nikli is baat ko sun kar jitne bade the sab chup ho gaya ya bol sakate hai ki shok ho gaye.. Par thakur sahab nahi..

Thakur sahab ne payar se uske sir par haath rakha aur bole..


Thakur- accha to ab hamari beti ab badi ho gai hai jo apne dada se sawal kar rahi hai,
Janta tha ek na ek din tum sab ko ye baat bhatani hi padegi, to beti is din ham tere bhai ke janmadin ki wajha se karte hai..


Ab jo do aur bahane the wo khate khate ruk gaye Thakur sahab ko sawal bhari nazro se dekhne lage..


Beti - bhai, par dada Ji jaha tak hum janti hai, hamare parivaar mae to koi bhai hai hi nahi,
Sirf bahane hi hai na to ye bhai kaha se


Thakur- beti tere sirf 2 chacha nahi hai, tera ek aur chacha hai, jo hamse dur rahta hai..


Beti - kya ek aur chachaji hai hamare aur ek bhai saga bhai bhi, par wo log kyu nahi aate humse milne dad Ji mere sab saheliyo ke bhai hai,
Mujhe bhi mere bhai se milna hai dada Ji plesse..


Thakur- tu chinta mat kar beti bahut hu jald tu apne bhai se milegi bahut jald..


Ab in sab ko chod kar chalte hai UK mae jaha hamara avi padta hai ,

Wese isko ek University kahna tik rahega kyuki yeha 1 class se lekar PG tak ki education ki Faslity thi..


Par avi ko sirf college complete karna tha, wese yaha bhi har taraf avi ke hi charche the, wajha uska attitude ,

Avi ko sab janate the jo accha students the wo bhi, aur jo bure the wo bhi, kyuki avi dono mae famous tha, jaha class mae uski takar ka koi nahi tha,

Wahi class se bhar koi usse takrna nahi chaata tha, kyuki avi bahut ki khataranaak tha, jo ek baar uske hathe chad jata wo 4-5 mahino ke liya hospital mae chala jata..

Wese students usse darte the par teacher usase bahut impres rahte kyuki wo apne har Sabject mae top tha,

Saath hi games mae bhi jata avi Swiming ke liya famous tha, kyuki jab bhi kisi durse school ke saath Compilation hota, avi jis bhi game mae aatha wo jit ke jata, aur swimming competition ke samay se puri University ki ladkiya to aati thi saath mae married aur unmarried teacher bhi avi ki body ko dekhne aati thi

Aur ISI aachi aur buri dono adato ki wajha se usko - devil engal bolte the..

University kr ladki yahi chahti thi ki wk avi ki girlfriend bane , yaha tak ki uski upper class females students bhi avi ko prapos kar chuki thi aur kai ne to usko "one night stand " ka offer bhi de diya tha
( wese ye one night stand kya hai, jara mujko bhi batan, bas flow flow mae likh diya hu
Wese bhi hamara kya hum to akhand singla hai , kabhi muka hi diya kisi ne , kher apna dukh kabhi aur bataunga)

Par kabhi bhi avi ne kisi ko Accapt nahi kiya, wo bas padai aur game's par focus karta tha aur na hi is 15 sal mae usne koi friend banya tha,


Aur ajj college ke Wrisling ring ke charo taraf kafi log the, wajha thi ki University ki sabse sunder ladki ne avi ko chalege diya tha ki agar wo uske security guard ko match mae hara de to wo sab ke samne avi ko lip kiss karege..

Wese to avi bahut famous tha Wrisling mae bhi, usko koi hara nahi paya tha abhi tak,.
Par is baar baat alag thi, match suru hua aur jo avi ke fans ne socha sahi hua avi ne sirf 5 moves mae us guard ko hara diya

(Chalte hai ring mae)

To is wakt ring mae avi tha aur samne wo ladki jiska naam Jennifer tha wo kadhi hui thi


To toda jennifer ke bare mae bata do ye University ki sabse khubasoorat ladki hai, aur ye hamesa avi ko apne aage jukana chhati thi wajha, avi hamesa isko har jagah maat de deta tha, par avi kabhi bhi jennifer ki beauti se koi farak nahi pada, isliye jennifer ne sab ke samne avi ko chalenge diya tha par aj wo kudh, Us ring mae khadi hui thi aur , ANUSMENT hua


- so friends now the time has come, the winner of the match Avinash now kiss, , give me big hend..

Charo taraf avi avi ki gunj hone lagi avi dhire se jennifer ke pass gaya, is wakt jennifer ki heart beat tej chal rahi thi kyuki ajj tak kisi bhi ladke ki himmat nahi hui ki usko chu bhi le,
Par yaha wo khud hi haar gai, wo niche dekh rahi avi ne, uske gal ko pakda aur upper kiya, jennifer ki ankho mae anshu saaf the, avi ne usko chod diya, sabhi log chup ho gaye aur jennifer bhi avi ko dekhne lagi, avi ne mick apne hatho mae liya aur bola


Avi - I'll fight because I'll never refused someone challenge, and for us ms, what's her name guys
(Sabhi ek saath bole jennifer) Wo ms jennifer for me you are nothing, and I can't kiss someone like you,

Aur avi us ring se chala gaya idhar sab logo ki baate suru ho gai ki, avi ki nazaro mae ms jennifer ki koi aukaat nahi hai..
Idhar jennifer turant apne room mae bhag kar gai aur Mirror ke samne ja kar apne app ko dekhne lagi

Jennifer ka baap ek Indian tha, jennifer hamesha apne app ko sabse alag samja karti thi, aur ye bhi ki usko koi ladka na nahi bol sakta, par ajj uska ye attitude avi ke samne khatm ho gaya, wo bhi puri University ke samane,
Aur jennifer rote hue bolne lagi

Jennifer- In first time in my life someone insult my beauty ,
I'll remember this Mrs avi, and I'll promise, I'll take my revenge



Aur jis din avi wapis India ke liya aanewala tha us din us University ke Dean aur har wo teacher avi ko last bar milne aaye the jinhonne avi ko padya tha,
Sabhi khush the ki avi wapish apne family ke pass ja raha hai aur dukhi bhi ki wi ek brilliant student ko kho rahe haye

Inme avi ki home room teacher bhi thi

Teacher- dean how about you think, what happened when avi Goes India,


Dean - well Ms karri is doesn't matter where he goes, he is never change, in my 40 years of ass teacher I never been seen someone like him, and I don't think I'll meet someone like him, he is only one, in the world..
But hi attitude is something that I'll fear, what happened when hi Goes in India.


Karri - I no Dean but is my Personal thinking about avi

It's doesn't matter where he goes, hi well control everything with his hand "




To be continued

 

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Mr Sumit sing thakur- India ke jane mane businessman jinka karobar India ke alawa kai aur desho mae fela hua hai,
Pesa aur power dono ki koi kami nahi, aur ye sab inhonne apne dam par hasil kiya hai aur kabhi bhi gamand nahi kiya ek dayawan (helpfull person), garibo ke liye koi bhi kaam karane mae hamesa aage rahte hai,
Wese to inka bahut hi bada family background hai, par kuch wajha se unse dur hai, duniya ki nazro mae Sumit ke parivaar mae kuch gine chune log hi hai, dosto aur dusmano ki koi kami nahi






Miss Sneha sing thakur - Wife Sumit sing thakur, ek pure heart woman, jiske dil mae kisi bhi ke liye kabhi koi jalan ya koi galat khyaal nahin aaya, Khubasurati mae koi kami nahi 41 age mae bhi sirf 30 ki lagti hai,
Ek Acchi wife, housewife aur ek acchi maa, har tarah se best,
Baki high society ki aurto ki taraha inkl party drink in sab chijo mae koi intrest nahi,
Inki zindagi inke pati aur bete se suru hoti hai aur unpar hi khatm,
Wese Sumit ki tarah inka bhi family background bahut powerful hai, par ye bhi dur hai unse wajha -unknown?






Amit sing - best friend as brother of Sumit,
To ye Sumit ke friend bhai aur business partner family sab kuch hai, amit ek anath hai iski family mae koi nahi hai, sing surname isko Sumit ne hi diya hai, isliye ye Sumit aur uski family ke liye apni jaan laga sakta hai,
Ye jada tar Country se bahar rahte hai






Abha sing -wife of Amit sing best friend sneha sing, Ek beautiful lady,sneha se jada ,kamal ki body,har rog running aur yoga ki wajha se
wese to pahale ye ek chanchal aur khush kisam ki aurat thi par kuch wajha se bilkul saant ho gai, wajha -unknown?







Avinash sing thakur - MC (galat mat samajhna ,main character ) of this story, only child of Sumit and sneha
Color apni maa sneha par gaya hai matlab bahut gora , 6.1 ki hight, well build body, strong chest , ek attractive Hundsome boy, he is different from her parents, no mercy of any one, in simple
"A man without heart " Inko kisi se koi matlab nahi sirf kuch logo ke alawa ,par kuch hai jo isko dusro se alag karti aur wo hai
( itni bhi kya jaldi hai , jab story agge jate jayegi pata chal jaayega ,)

To mujko avi ke liye koi acchi photo nahi mili isliye ye perfect tha to

 

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Update 11


"The Time has come"


To 15 sal bit chuke the aur 15 salo mae bahut kuch badal chuka tha,

To suruat karte hai, avi ki family se to avi ke papa ka business aur jada bada ho gaya,.
Aur bolte hai na ki jaha pesa jada ho admi ke dost aur dusamana dono bad jate hai, wese hi sumit ke saath bhi hua wese to business mae dusmani amma baat hoti hai, par sumit ke kuch dushman uske aur uske parivaar ke puiche pade the,.
Par kyuki avi UK mae safa tha wahi sneha ki security bhi jabardat thi isliye sumit relax tha..

Sneha pahle jese thi wesi ab bhi hai, hamesha apne bete se baat karna utne ke baad aur sone se pahle..

In 15 salo mae koi yess din nahi raha hoga jab avi aur sneha ne baat na ki ho, par ye sirf phone call par video chat par nahi kyukin avi ko dekhate hi sneha ki ankhe bhar aati thi aur wo apne anshu apne bete ko nahi dikhana cahati thi ya nahi dikha sakti thi, aur iski bahut badi wajha thi aur wo tha avi,

Wese to avi ko bahut chijo se nafrat thi, par 2 chijo se sabse jada

1- wo kabhi bhi apni maa ko udash nahi dekh sakta tha

2 aur dusri wajha sneha ki ankho mae anshu

Isliye sneha kabhi bhi video chat nahi ki avi ke saath, agar kaha jaye the in 15 salo mae usne apne bete ko kabhi nahi dekha ki uska beta kesa dikhta hai, par sneha ko avi ki wapis aanee ki bahut khushi thi par, ek aur wajha thi jiske karan usko avi ka intajara tha, aur wo wajha thi abha Sneha man mae soch rahi thi..


SNEHA - avi jaldi se wapis aa jawo tumhari mama tumhara wait kar rahi hai, aur sayada sirf tum hi abha ko pahle ki tarah kar sakate ho..


To yess kya hua hoga, aur kya hua abha ke saath jisake liye sneha ko avi ka intajaar tha..


Ab toda nazar mar lete hai us boss ki taraf bhi
In 15 salo mae boss ka business bhi bada hua, aur usne bahut baar Sumit ya uski family ko nukasana pahuchane ki kosis ki,
Par har baar usko haar hi mili har baar jese kisi ko pahle hi pata lag jata ki boss kuch karne wala hai,

Dusri usne raka ke bare mae sochana chod diya tha, kyuki uski wajha se uska pesa aur time dono barbaad ho rahe the,
Isliye usne ye decid kiya ki wo Sant rahe gaa aur ek accha time ane par, Sumit par bahut bada hamala karega, tab tak sirf apne kaam kar focus..


Ab bacha thakur parivaar, jaha sab kuch normal aur accha chal raha tha sabhi ladkiya 21 sal ki ho chuki thi, aur ab hum chalate hai toda piche jab avi ka 21 brithday ka din aaya aur thakur parivaar hamesa ki tarha apne khul devi ke mandir gaye the, satha mae 3 no betiyaan bhi.
Ab wo bhi badi ho chuki thi, aur unke man mae bahut se sawal aate the ki har saal ISI din hum log, kyu puja karte hai logo ko khana khilatee hai aur bhi bahut kuch,
Par unko in sab se koi problam nahi thi, par wajha thi ki ye kiske liye aur kyu aur, usi din saam ko job sab log khane khane bathe hue the tab jo in tino mar sabhee badi ladki thi usne


Beti - dada Ji kya mein apse kuch puch sakti hu.. Please


Thakur- are to isme puchne ki kya baat, tu to meri payari gudiya hai, kya baat hai bol ..


Beti - dada ji ye jo har saal hun 28 jun ko ye sab karte hai wo Kiske liye karte hai aur kyu..


Uske mhu se nikli is baat ko sun kar jitne bade the sab chup ho gaya ya bol sakate hai ki shok ho gaye.. Par thakur sahab nahi..

Thakur sahab ne payar se uske sir par haath rakha aur bole..


Thakur- accha to ab hamari beti ab badi ho gai hai jo apne dada se sawal kar rahi hai,
Janta tha ek na ek din tum sab ko ye baat bhatani hi padegi, to beti is din ham tere bhai ke janmadin ki wajha se karte hai..


Ab jo do aur bahane the wo khate khate ruk gaye Thakur sahab ko sawal bhari nazro se dekhne lage..


Beti - bhai, par dada Ji jaha tak hum janti hai, hamare parivaar mae to koi bhai hai hi nahi,
Sirf bahane hi hai na to ye bhai kaha se


Thakur- beti tere sirf 2 chacha nahi hai, tera ek aur chacha hai, jo hamse dur rahta hai..


Beti - kya ek aur chachaji hai hamare aur ek bhai saga bhai bhi, par wo log kyu nahi aate humse milne dad Ji mere sab saheliyo ke bhai hai,
Mujhe bhi mere bhai se milna hai dada Ji plesse..


Thakur- tu chinta mat kar beti bahut hu jald tu apne bhai se milegi bahut jald..


Ab in sab ko chod kar chalte hai UK mae jaha hamara avi padta hai ,

Wese isko ek University kahna tik rahega kyuki yeha 1 class se lekar PG tak ki education ki Faslity thi..


Par avi ko sirf college complete karna tha, wese yaha bhi har taraf avi ke hi charche the, wajha uska attitude ,

Avi ko sab janate the jo accha students the wo bhi, aur jo bure the wo bhi, kyuki avi dono mae famous tha, jaha class mae uski takar ka koi nahi tha,

Wahi class se bhar koi usse takrna nahi chaata tha, kyuki avi bahut ki khataranaak tha, jo ek baar uske hathe chad jata wo 4-5 mahino ke liya hospital mae chala jata..

Wese students usse darte the par teacher usase bahut impres rahte kyuki wo apne har Sabject mae top tha,

Saath hi games mae bhi jata avi Swiming ke liya famous tha, kyuki jab bhi kisi durse school ke saath Compilation hota, avi jis bhi game mae aatha wo jit ke jata, aur swimming competition ke samay se puri University ki ladkiya to aati thi saath mae married aur unmarried teacher bhi avi ki body ko dekhne aati thi

Aur ISI aachi aur buri dono adato ki wajha se usko - devil engal bolte the..

University kr ladki yahi chahti thi ki wk avi ki girlfriend bane , yaha tak ki uski upper class females students bhi avi ko prapos kar chuki thi aur kai ne to usko "one night stand " ka offer bhi de diya tha
( wese ye one night stand kya hai, jara mujko bhi batan, bas flow flow mae likh diya hu
Wese bhi hamara kya hum to akhand singla hai , kabhi muka hi diya kisi ne , kher apna dukh kabhi aur bataunga)

Par kabhi bhi avi ne kisi ko Accapt nahi kiya, wo bas padai aur game's par focus karta tha aur na hi is 15 sal mae usne koi friend banya tha,


Aur ajj college ke Wrisling ring ke charo taraf kafi log the, wajha thi ki University ki sabse sunder ladki ne avi ko chalege diya tha ki agar wo uske security guard ko match mae hara de to wo sab ke samne avi ko lip kiss karege..

Wese to avi bahut famous tha Wrisling mae bhi, usko koi hara nahi paya tha abhi tak,.
Par is baar baat alag thi, match suru hua aur jo avi ke fans ne socha sahi hua avi ne sirf 5 moves mae us guard ko hara diya

(Chalte hai ring mae)

To is wakt ring mae avi tha aur samne wo ladki jiska naam Jennifer tha wo kadhi hui thi


To toda jennifer ke bare mae bata do ye University ki sabse khubasoorat ladki hai, aur ye hamesa avi ko apne aage jukana chhati thi wajha, avi hamesa isko har jagah maat de deta tha, par avi kabhi bhi jennifer ki beauti se koi farak nahi pada, isliye jennifer ne sab ke samne avi ko chalenge diya tha par aj wo kudh, Us ring mae khadi hui thi aur , ANUSMENT hua


- so friends now the time has come, the winner of the match Avinash now kiss, , give me big hend..

Charo taraf avi avi ki gunj hone lagi avi dhire se jennifer ke pass gaya, is wakt jennifer ki heart beat tej chal rahi thi kyuki ajj tak kisi bhi ladke ki himmat nahi hui ki usko chu bhi le,
Par yaha wo khud hi haar gai, wo niche dekh rahi avi ne, uske gal ko pakda aur upper kiya, jennifer ki ankho mae anshu saaf the, avi ne usko chod diya, sabhi log chup ho gaye aur jennifer bhi avi ko dekhne lagi, avi ne mick apne hatho mae liya aur bola


Avi - I'll fight because I'll never refused someone challenge, and for us ms, what's her name guys
(Sabhi ek saath bole jennifer) Wo ms jennifer for me you are nothing, and I can't kiss someone like you,

Aur avi us ring se chala gaya idhar sab logo ki baate suru ho gai ki, avi ki nazaro mae ms jennifer ki koi aukaat nahi hai..
Idhar jennifer turant apne room mae bhag kar gai aur Mirror ke samne ja kar apne app ko dekhne lagi

Jennifer ka baap ek Indian tha, jennifer hamesha apne app ko sabse alag samja karti thi, aur ye bhi ki usko koi ladka na nahi bol sakta, par ajj uska ye attitude avi ke samne khatm ho gaya, wo bhi puri University ke samane,
Aur jennifer rote hue bolne lagi

Jennifer- In first time in my life someone insult my beauty ,
I'll remember this Mrs avi, and I'll promise, I'll take my revenge



Aur jis din avi wapis India ke liya aanewala tha us din us University ke Dean aur har wo teacher avi ko last bar milne aaye the jinhonne avi ko padya tha,
Sabhi khush the ki avi wapish apne family ke pass ja raha hai aur dukhi bhi ki wi ek brilliant student ko kho rahe haye

Inme avi ki home room teacher bhi thi

Teacher- dean how about you think, what happened when avi Goes India,


Dean - well Ms karri is doesn't matter where he goes, he is never change, in my 40 years of ass teacher I never been seen someone like him, and I don't think I'll meet someone like him, he is only one, in the world..
But hi attitude is something that I'll fear, what happened when hi Goes in India.


Karri - I no Dean but is my Personal thinking about avi

It's doesn't matter where he goes, hi well control everything with his hand "




To be continued

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Update 11


"The Time has come"


To 15 sal bit chuke the aur 15 salo mae bahut kuch badal chuka tha,

To suruat karte hai, avi ki family se to avi ke papa ka business aur jada bada ho gaya,.
Aur bolte hai na ki jaha pesa jada ho admi ke dost aur dusamana dono bad jate hai, wese hi sumit ke saath bhi hua wese to business mae dusmani amma baat hoti hai, par sumit ke kuch dushman uske aur uske parivaar ke puiche pade the,.
Par kyuki avi UK mae safa tha wahi sneha ki security bhi jabardat thi isliye sumit relax tha..

Sneha pahle jese thi wesi ab bhi hai, hamesha apne bete se baat karna utne ke baad aur sone se pahle..

In 15 salo mae koi yess din nahi raha hoga jab avi aur sneha ne baat na ki ho, par ye sirf phone call par video chat par nahi kyukin avi ko dekhate hi sneha ki ankhe bhar aati thi aur wo apne anshu apne bete ko nahi dikhana cahati thi ya nahi dikha sakti thi, aur iski bahut badi wajha thi aur wo tha avi,

Wese to avi ko bahut chijo se nafrat thi, par 2 chijo se sabse jada

1- wo kabhi bhi apni maa ko udash nahi dekh sakta tha

2 aur dusri wajha sneha ki ankho mae anshu

Isliye sneha kabhi bhi video chat nahi ki avi ke saath, agar kaha jaye the in 15 salo mae usne apne bete ko kabhi nahi dekha ki uska beta kesa dikhta hai, par sneha ko avi ki wapis aanee ki bahut khushi thi par, ek aur wajha thi jiske karan usko avi ka intajara tha, aur wo wajha thi abha Sneha man mae soch rahi thi..


SNEHA - avi jaldi se wapis aa jawo tumhari mama tumhara wait kar rahi hai, aur sayada sirf tum hi abha ko pahle ki tarah kar sakate ho..


To yess kya hua hoga, aur kya hua abha ke saath jisake liye sneha ko avi ka intajaar tha..


Ab toda nazar mar lete hai us boss ki taraf bhi
In 15 salo mae boss ka business bhi bada hua, aur usne bahut baar Sumit ya uski family ko nukasana pahuchane ki kosis ki,
Par har baar usko haar hi mili har baar jese kisi ko pahle hi pata lag jata ki boss kuch karne wala hai,

Dusri usne raka ke bare mae sochana chod diya tha, kyuki uski wajha se uska pesa aur time dono barbaad ho rahe the,
Isliye usne ye decid kiya ki wo Sant rahe gaa aur ek accha time ane par, Sumit par bahut bada hamala karega, tab tak sirf apne kaam kar focus..


Ab bacha thakur parivaar, jaha sab kuch normal aur accha chal raha tha sabhi ladkiya 21 sal ki ho chuki thi, aur ab hum chalate hai toda piche jab avi ka 21 brithday ka din aaya aur thakur parivaar hamesa ki tarha apne khul devi ke mandir gaye the, satha mae 3 no betiyaan bhi.
Ab wo bhi badi ho chuki thi, aur unke man mae bahut se sawal aate the ki har saal ISI din hum log, kyu puja karte hai logo ko khana khilatee hai aur bhi bahut kuch,
Par unko in sab se koi problam nahi thi, par wajha thi ki ye kiske liye aur kyu aur, usi din saam ko job sab log khane khane bathe hue the tab jo in tino mar sabhee badi ladki thi usne


Beti - dada Ji kya mein apse kuch puch sakti hu.. Please


Thakur- are to isme puchne ki kya baat, tu to meri payari gudiya hai, kya baat hai bol ..


Beti - dada ji ye jo har saal hun 28 jun ko ye sab karte hai wo Kiske liye karte hai aur kyu..


Uske mhu se nikli is baat ko sun kar jitne bade the sab chup ho gaya ya bol sakate hai ki shok ho gaye.. Par thakur sahab nahi..

Thakur sahab ne payar se uske sir par haath rakha aur bole..


Thakur- accha to ab hamari beti ab badi ho gai hai jo apne dada se sawal kar rahi hai,
Janta tha ek na ek din tum sab ko ye baat bhatani hi padegi, to beti is din ham tere bhai ke janmadin ki wajha se karte hai..


Ab jo do aur bahane the wo khate khate ruk gaye Thakur sahab ko sawal bhari nazro se dekhne lage..


Beti - bhai, par dada Ji jaha tak hum janti hai, hamare parivaar mae to koi bhai hai hi nahi,
Sirf bahane hi hai na to ye bhai kaha se


Thakur- beti tere sirf 2 chacha nahi hai, tera ek aur chacha hai, jo hamse dur rahta hai..


Beti - kya ek aur chachaji hai hamare aur ek bhai saga bhai bhi, par wo log kyu nahi aate humse milne dad Ji mere sab saheliyo ke bhai hai,
Mujhe bhi mere bhai se milna hai dada Ji plesse..


Thakur- tu chinta mat kar beti bahut hu jald tu apne bhai se milegi bahut jald..


Ab in sab ko chod kar chalte hai UK mae jaha hamara avi padta hai ,

Wese isko ek University kahna tik rahega kyuki yeha 1 class se lekar PG tak ki education ki Faslity thi..


Par avi ko sirf college complete karna tha, wese yaha bhi har taraf avi ke hi charche the, wajha uska attitude ,

Avi ko sab janate the jo accha students the wo bhi, aur jo bure the wo bhi, kyuki avi dono mae famous tha, jaha class mae uski takar ka koi nahi tha,

Wahi class se bhar koi usse takrna nahi chaata tha, kyuki avi bahut ki khataranaak tha, jo ek baar uske hathe chad jata wo 4-5 mahino ke liya hospital mae chala jata..

Wese students usse darte the par teacher usase bahut impres rahte kyuki wo apne har Sabject mae top tha,

Saath hi games mae bhi jata avi Swiming ke liya famous tha, kyuki jab bhi kisi durse school ke saath Compilation hota, avi jis bhi game mae aatha wo jit ke jata, aur swimming competition ke samay se puri University ki ladkiya to aati thi saath mae married aur unmarried teacher bhi avi ki body ko dekhne aati thi

Aur ISI aachi aur buri dono adato ki wajha se usko - devil engal bolte the..

University kr ladki yahi chahti thi ki wk avi ki girlfriend bane , yaha tak ki uski upper class females students bhi avi ko prapos kar chuki thi aur kai ne to usko "one night stand " ka offer bhi de diya tha
( wese ye one night stand kya hai, jara mujko bhi batan, bas flow flow mae likh diya hu
Wese bhi hamara kya hum to akhand singla hai , kabhi muka hi diya kisi ne , kher apna dukh kabhi aur bataunga)

Par kabhi bhi avi ne kisi ko Accapt nahi kiya, wo bas padai aur game's par focus karta tha aur na hi is 15 sal mae usne koi friend banya tha,


Aur ajj college ke Wrisling ring ke charo taraf kafi log the, wajha thi ki University ki sabse sunder ladki ne avi ko chalege diya tha ki agar wo uske security guard ko match mae hara de to wo sab ke samne avi ko lip kiss karege..

Wese to avi bahut famous tha Wrisling mae bhi, usko koi hara nahi paya tha abhi tak,.
Par is baar baat alag thi, match suru hua aur jo avi ke fans ne socha sahi hua avi ne sirf 5 moves mae us guard ko hara diya

(Chalte hai ring mae)

To is wakt ring mae avi tha aur samne wo ladki jiska naam Jennifer tha wo kadhi hui thi


To toda jennifer ke bare mae bata do ye University ki sabse khubasoorat ladki hai, aur ye hamesa avi ko apne aage jukana chhati thi wajha, avi hamesa isko har jagah maat de deta tha, par avi kabhi bhi jennifer ki beauti se koi farak nahi pada, isliye jennifer ne sab ke samne avi ko chalenge diya tha par aj wo kudh, Us ring mae khadi hui thi aur , ANUSMENT hua


- so friends now the time has come, the winner of the match Avinash now kiss, , give me big hend..

Charo taraf avi avi ki gunj hone lagi avi dhire se jennifer ke pass gaya, is wakt jennifer ki heart beat tej chal rahi thi kyuki ajj tak kisi bhi ladke ki himmat nahi hui ki usko chu bhi le,
Par yaha wo khud hi haar gai, wo niche dekh rahi avi ne, uske gal ko pakda aur upper kiya, jennifer ki ankho mae anshu saaf the, avi ne usko chod diya, sabhi log chup ho gaye aur jennifer bhi avi ko dekhne lagi, avi ne mick apne hatho mae liya aur bola


Avi - I'll fight because I'll never refused someone challenge, and for us ms, what's her name guys
(Sabhi ek saath bole jennifer) Wo ms jennifer for me you are nothing, and I can't kiss someone like you,

Aur avi us ring se chala gaya idhar sab logo ki baate suru ho gai ki, avi ki nazaro mae ms jennifer ki koi aukaat nahi hai..
Idhar jennifer turant apne room mae bhag kar gai aur Mirror ke samne ja kar apne app ko dekhne lagi

Jennifer ka baap ek Indian tha, jennifer hamesha apne app ko sabse alag samja karti thi, aur ye bhi ki usko koi ladka na nahi bol sakta, par ajj uska ye attitude avi ke samne khatm ho gaya, wo bhi puri University ke samane,
Aur jennifer rote hue bolne lagi

Jennifer- In first time in my life someone insult my beauty ,
I'll remember this Mrs avi, and I'll promise, I'll take my revenge



Aur jis din avi wapis India ke liya aanewala tha us din us University ke Dean aur har wo teacher avi ko last bar milne aaye the jinhonne avi ko padya tha,
Sabhi khush the ki avi wapish apne family ke pass ja raha hai aur dukhi bhi ki wi ek brilliant student ko kho rahe haye

Inme avi ki home room teacher bhi thi

Teacher- dean how about you think, what happened when avi Goes India,


Dean - well Ms karri is doesn't matter where he goes, he is never change, in my 40 years of ass teacher I never been seen someone like him, and I don't think I'll meet someone like him, he is only one, in the world..
But hi attitude is something that I'll fear, what happened when hi Goes in India.


Karri - I no Dean but is my Personal thinking about avi

It's doesn't matter where he goes, hi well control everything with his hand "




To be continued

Bounce

To Ab is story ke logo ka introduction ,


Mr Sumit sing thakur- India ke jane mane businessman jinka karobar India ke alawa kai aur desho mae fela hua hai,
Pesa aur power dono ki koi kami nahi, aur ye sab inhonne apne dam par hasil kiya hai aur kabhi bhi gamand nahi kiya ek dayawan (helpfull person), garibo ke liye koi bhi kaam karane mae hamesa aage rahte hai,
Wese to inka bahut hi bada family background hai, par kuch wajha se unse dur hai, duniya ki nazro mae Sumit ke parivaar mae kuch gine chune log hi hai, dosto aur dusmano ki koi kami nahi






Miss Sneha sing thakur - Wife Sumit sing thakur, ek pure heart woman, jiske dil mae kisi bhi ke liye kabhi koi jalan ya koi galat khyaal nahin aaya, Khubasurati mae koi kami nahi 41 age mae bhi sirf 30 ki lagti hai,
Ek Acchi wife, housewife aur ek acchi maa, har tarah se best,
Baki high society ki aurto ki taraha inkl party drink in sab chijo mae koi intrest nahi,
Inki zindagi inke pati aur bete se suru hoti hai aur unpar hi khatm,
Wese Sumit ki tarah inka bhi family background bahut powerful hai, par ye bhi dur hai unse wajha -unknown?






Amit sing - best friend as brother of Sumit,
To ye Sumit ke friend bhai aur business partner family sab kuch hai, amit ek anath hai iski family mae koi nahi hai, sing surname isko Sumit ne hi diya hai, isliye ye Sumit aur uski family ke liye apni jaan laga sakta hai,
Ye jada tar Country se bahar rahte hai






Abha sing -wife of Amit sing best friend sneha sing, Ek beautiful lady,sneha se jada ,kamal ki body,har rog running aur yoga ki wajha se
wese to pahale ye ek chanchal aur khush kisam ki aurat thi par kuch wajha se bilkul saant ho gai, wajha -unknown?







Avinash sing thakur - MC (galat mat samajhna ,main character ) of this story, only child of Sumit and sneha
Color apni maa sneha par gaya hai matlab bahut gora , 6.1 ki hight, well build body, strong chest , ek attractive Hundsome boy, he is different from her parents, no mercy of any one, in simple
"A man without heart " Inko kisi se koi matlab nahi sirf kuch logo ke alawa ,par kuch hai jo isko dusro se alag karti aur wo hai
( itni bhi kya jaldi hai , jab story agge jate jayegi pata chal jaayega ,)

To mujko avi ke liye koi acchi photo nahi mili isliye ye perfect tha to

Intro sandar diya bhai maza aa gya padh kr...
Abha ko kya hua aage dekhte hai... Kahi aisa to nhi us boss ke attack ka sikar ho gyi ho ...
Ye apne Avi ko chalange dene vali ladki ki ankho me anshu dekh kr avi ne use kiss krne se Mna kr diya pr uske attitude ne us ladki ka ghamand tod diya jiske chalte us ladki ne galat samajh liya or badla lene ke liye kasam kha li... Dekhte hai kya hota hai aage...
Avi ab 15 saal baad apne Desh ja rha hai dekhte hai vha kya karta hai or Abha ko dekh uske hontho pr mushkan Kaise lata hai...
Yha avi ki bahno ne apne dada ji se aaj vo sawal puchh hi liya Jiski ummid dada ji ko Bahut Pahle se thi or unhone jvab bhi sahi diya hai, ab dekhte hai avi kin paristhitiyo me milta hai apne Ghar me Ya haveli me apne parivar se...
Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast

 

[Devil hunter123]

Update 11


"The Time has come"


To 15 sal bit chuke the aur 15 salo mae bahut kuch badal chuka tha,

To suruat karte hai, avi ki family se to avi ke papa ka business aur jada bada ho gaya,.
Aur bolte hai na ki jaha pesa jada ho admi ke dost aur dusamana dono bad jate hai, wese hi sumit ke saath bhi hua wese to business mae dusmani amma baat hoti hai, par sumit ke kuch dushman uske aur uske parivaar ke puiche pade the,.
Par kyuki avi UK mae safa tha wahi sneha ki security bhi jabardat thi isliye sumit relax tha..

Sneha pahle jese thi wesi ab bhi hai, hamesha apne bete se baat karna utne ke baad aur sone se pahle..

In 15 salo mae koi yess din nahi raha hoga jab avi aur sneha ne baat na ki ho, par ye sirf phone call par video chat par nahi kyukin avi ko dekhate hi sneha ki ankhe bhar aati thi aur wo apne anshu apne bete ko nahi dikhana cahati thi ya nahi dikha sakti thi, aur iski bahut badi wajha thi aur wo tha avi,

Wese to avi ko bahut chijo se nafrat thi, par 2 chijo se sabse jada

1- wo kabhi bhi apni maa ko udash nahi dekh sakta tha

2 aur dusri wajha sneha ki ankho mae anshu

Isliye sneha kabhi bhi video chat nahi ki avi ke saath, agar kaha jaye the in 15 salo mae usne apne bete ko kabhi nahi dekha ki uska beta kesa dikhta hai, par sneha ko avi ki wapis aanee ki bahut khushi thi par, ek aur wajha thi jiske karan usko avi ka intajara tha, aur wo wajha thi abha Sneha man mae soch rahi thi..


SNEHA - avi jaldi se wapis aa jawo tumhari mama tumhara wait kar rahi hai, aur sayada sirf tum hi abha ko pahle ki tarah kar sakate ho..


To yess kya hua hoga, aur kya hua abha ke saath jisake liye sneha ko avi ka intajaar tha..


Ab toda nazar mar lete hai us boss ki taraf bhi
In 15 salo mae boss ka business bhi bada hua, aur usne bahut baar Sumit ya uski family ko nukasana pahuchane ki kosis ki,
Par har baar usko haar hi mili har baar jese kisi ko pahle hi pata lag jata ki boss kuch karne wala hai,

Dusri usne raka ke bare mae sochana chod diya tha, kyuki uski wajha se uska pesa aur time dono barbaad ho rahe the,
Isliye usne ye decid kiya ki wo Sant rahe gaa aur ek accha time ane par, Sumit par bahut bada hamala karega, tab tak sirf apne kaam kar focus..


Ab bacha thakur parivaar, jaha sab kuch normal aur accha chal raha tha sabhi ladkiya 21 sal ki ho chuki thi, aur ab hum chalate hai toda piche jab avi ka 21 brithday ka din aaya aur thakur parivaar hamesa ki tarha apne khul devi ke mandir gaye the, satha mae 3 no betiyaan bhi.
Ab wo bhi badi ho chuki thi, aur unke man mae bahut se sawal aate the ki har saal ISI din hum log, kyu puja karte hai logo ko khana khilatee hai aur bhi bahut kuch,
Par unko in sab se koi problam nahi thi, par wajha thi ki ye kiske liye aur kyu aur, usi din saam ko job sab log khane khane bathe hue the tab jo in tino mar sabhee badi ladki thi usne


Beti - dada Ji kya mein apse kuch puch sakti hu.. Please


Thakur- are to isme puchne ki kya baat, tu to meri payari gudiya hai, kya baat hai bol ..


Beti - dada ji ye jo har saal hun 28 jun ko ye sab karte hai wo Kiske liye karte hai aur kyu..


Uske mhu se nikli is baat ko sun kar jitne bade the sab chup ho gaya ya bol sakate hai ki shok ho gaye.. Par thakur sahab nahi..

Thakur sahab ne payar se uske sir par haath rakha aur bole..


Thakur- accha to ab hamari beti ab badi ho gai hai jo apne dada se sawal kar rahi hai,
Janta tha ek na ek din tum sab ko ye baat bhatani hi padegi, to beti is din ham tere bhai ke janmadin ki wajha se karte hai..


Ab jo do aur bahane the wo khate khate ruk gaye Thakur sahab ko sawal bhari nazro se dekhne lage..


Beti - bhai, par dada Ji jaha tak hum janti hai, hamare parivaar mae to koi bhai hai hi nahi,
Sirf bahane hi hai na to ye bhai kaha se


Thakur- beti tere sirf 2 chacha nahi hai, tera ek aur chacha hai, jo hamse dur rahta hai..


Beti - kya ek aur chachaji hai hamare aur ek bhai saga bhai bhi, par wo log kyu nahi aate humse milne dad Ji mere sab saheliyo ke bhai hai,
Mujhe bhi mere bhai se milna hai dada Ji plesse..


Thakur- tu chinta mat kar beti bahut hu jald tu apne bhai se milegi bahut jald..


Ab in sab ko chod kar chalte hai UK mae jaha hamara avi padta hai ,

Wese isko ek University kahna tik rahega kyuki yeha 1 class se lekar PG tak ki education ki Faslity thi..


Par avi ko sirf college complete karna tha, wese yaha bhi har taraf avi ke hi charche the, wajha uska attitude ,

Avi ko sab janate the jo accha students the wo bhi, aur jo bure the wo bhi, kyuki avi dono mae famous tha, jaha class mae uski takar ka koi nahi tha,

Wahi class se bhar koi usse takrna nahi chaata tha, kyuki avi bahut ki khataranaak tha, jo ek baar uske hathe chad jata wo 4-5 mahino ke liya hospital mae chala jata..

Wese students usse darte the par teacher usase bahut impres rahte kyuki wo apne har Sabject mae top tha,

Saath hi games mae bhi jata avi Swiming ke liya famous tha, kyuki jab bhi kisi durse school ke saath Compilation hota, avi jis bhi game mae aatha wo jit ke jata, aur swimming competition ke samay se puri University ki ladkiya to aati thi saath mae married aur unmarried teacher bhi avi ki body ko dekhne aati thi

Aur ISI aachi aur buri dono adato ki wajha se usko - devil engal bolte the..

University kr ladki yahi chahti thi ki wk avi ki girlfriend bane , yaha tak ki uski upper class females students bhi avi ko prapos kar chuki thi aur kai ne to usko "one night stand " ka offer bhi de diya tha
( wese ye one night stand kya hai, jara mujko bhi batan, bas flow flow mae likh diya hu
Wese bhi hamara kya hum to akhand singla hai , kabhi muka hi diya kisi ne , kher apna dukh kabhi aur bataunga)

Par kabhi bhi avi ne kisi ko Accapt nahi kiya, wo bas padai aur game's par focus karta tha aur na hi is 15 sal mae usne koi friend banya tha,


Aur ajj college ke Wrisling ring ke charo taraf kafi log the, wajha thi ki University ki sabse sunder ladki ne avi ko chalege diya tha ki agar wo uske security guard ko match mae hara de to wo sab ke samne avi ko lip kiss karege..

Wese to avi bahut famous tha Wrisling mae bhi, usko koi hara nahi paya tha abhi tak,.
Par is baar baat alag thi, match suru hua aur jo avi ke fans ne socha sahi hua avi ne sirf 5 moves mae us guard ko hara diya

(Chalte hai ring mae)

To is wakt ring mae avi tha aur samne wo ladki jiska naam Jennifer tha wo kadhi hui thi


To toda jennifer ke bare mae bata do ye University ki sabse khubasoorat ladki hai, aur ye hamesa avi ko apne aage jukana chhati thi wajha, avi hamesa isko har jagah maat de deta tha, par avi kabhi bhi jennifer ki beauti se koi farak nahi pada, isliye jennifer ne sab ke samne avi ko chalenge diya tha par aj wo kudh, Us ring mae khadi hui thi aur , ANUSMENT hua


- so friends now the time has come, the winner of the match Avinash now kiss, , give me big hend..

Charo taraf avi avi ki gunj hone lagi avi dhire se jennifer ke pass gaya, is wakt jennifer ki heart beat tej chal rahi thi kyuki ajj tak kisi bhi ladke ki himmat nahi hui ki usko chu bhi le,
Par yaha wo khud hi haar gai, wo niche dekh rahi avi ne, uske gal ko pakda aur upper kiya, jennifer ki ankho mae anshu saaf the, avi ne usko chod diya, sabhi log chup ho gaye aur jennifer bhi avi ko dekhne lagi, avi ne mick apne hatho mae liya aur bola


Avi - I'll fight because I'll never refused someone challenge, and for us ms, what's her name guys
(Sabhi ek saath bole jennifer) Wo ms jennifer for me you are nothing, and I can't kiss someone like you,

Aur avi us ring se chala gaya idhar sab logo ki baate suru ho gai ki, avi ki nazaro mae ms jennifer ki koi aukaat nahi hai..
Idhar jennifer turant apne room mae bhag kar gai aur Mirror ke samne ja kar apne app ko dekhne lagi

Jennifer ka baap ek Indian tha, jennifer hamesha apne app ko sabse alag samja karti thi, aur ye bhi ki usko koi ladka na nahi bol sakta, par ajj uska ye attitude avi ke samne khatm ho gaya, wo bhi puri University ke samane,
Aur jennifer rote hue bolne lagi

Jennifer- In first time in my life someone insult my beauty ,
I'll remember this Mrs avi, and I'll promise, I'll take my revenge



Aur jis din avi wapis India ke liya aanewala tha us din us University ke Dean aur har wo teacher avi ko last bar milne aaye the jinhonne avi ko padya tha,
Sabhi khush the ki avi wapish apne family ke pass ja raha hai aur dukhi bhi ki wi ek brilliant student ko kho rahe haye

Inme avi ki home room teacher bhi thi

Teacher- dean how about you think, what happened when avi Goes India,


Dean - well Ms karri is doesn't matter where he goes, he is never change, in my 40 years of ass teacher I never been seen someone like him, and I don't think I'll meet someone like him, he is only one, in the world..
But hi attitude is something that I'll fear, what happened when hi Goes in India.


Karri - I no Dean but is my Personal thinking about avi

It's doesn't matter where he goes, hi well control everything with his hand "




To be continued

Fantastic update

 

[Love u]

Prefect

 

[Dark.King]

Nice Update

 

[Mana6262]

Jabrdast brother.....​

( wese ye one night stand kya hai, jara mujko bhi batan, bas flow flow mae likh diya hu
Wese bhi hamara kya hum to akhand singla hai , kabhi muka hi diya kisi ne , kher apna dukh kabhi aur bataunga)

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