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Haunted house part -3


To jisko Mariya ne bulaaya wo tha Punisher demon , jiska kaam tha traps bicha kar sikar karna, ek alag hi tarah ka hunt..


Punishment demon - Ye bhi demon race se bilong krta hai, aur inka kaam demon world mae punishment karna hota hai, agar koi aur race bhi aa jate hai to unko bhi..
Ye bahut hi kofnak hote hai , ye apne victim ko marne se pahle bahut hi torchar karte hai..


(Note - Ye Mariya ke undar hai aur avi ko nahi jante hai sirf itna ki unki master (Mariya) ka bhi ek master hai jo bahut powerful hai)


Punisher - master apne apne gulam ko kyu yaad kiya wo bhi is human world mae..


Mariya - ek kaam hai, aur mere master chahte hai ki wo tum karo kyuki, tumhari blood line yese kaam ke liye expert hai..


Punisher- matlb mere grandmaster (avi) chahte hai ki main unke kaam aau, ye bahut badi baat hai mere liye, boliye master kya karna hai..



Mariya - 😈 sikhar karna hai, humans ka shikar, tum jesa caho wese kar sakate ho..
Par dard bahut hona chaahiye unko..


Punisher- yes master app unski chinta mat kariya, bas itana bata dijiye ki, main apna kaam kaha suru karu..


Mariya ek naya haunted house bana diya jo sirf un 10 ke liye tha..


Mariya - ye rahi jagha apna kaam suru karo aur yaad rahe wo total 10 log hai, maja aana chahiye, mere master dekh rahe hai sab kuch tik hai..


Punisher- yes master main apna kaam suru karta hu..


{Mariya- master, Punisher is ready, the hunt will start too soon ..


Avi - good wese uske pass samay hoga, abhi to unk logo ko ticket bhi nahi mila hoga,ek kaam akro tum uski (Punisher) ki madad karo aur apna illusion technique ka use bhi.. Ok


Mariya- ok master.. }

Tabhi avi ka mobile ring hua jisme call aa raha tha uski maa sneha ka..


Avi - ha maa boliye kese call kiya apne mujko..


Sneha- are bhai itni der ho gai tumko gaye hue aur abhi tak apni maa ko call nahi kiya, to mene socha main hi kar leti hu call..


Avi - kya maa app bhi meri tang kitchne ka koi bhi muka nahi chodti ho..


Sneha- achha ye sab baad mae, wese abhi kaha ho tum dono..


Avi - ha wo hum dono city ke bahar haunted park mae aaye hue hai..



Sneha- achha par avi jaha tak mujko yaad hai abha ko to in sab chijo se dar lagata hai..


Avi - lagta tha maa par ab nahi, mere saath enjoy kar rahi hai wo abhi..


Sneha- kya wo sach mae enjoy kar rahi hai, matlb khush to hai na wo..


Avi - aur nahi to maa app relax kijiye , hum dono bilkul tik hai, aur enjoy kar rahe hai..


Sneha- ok beta take care bye..


Avi - bye maa...


Aur call kat hua,Idhar gunde log bhi andar aa gaye park ke, aur

11- are ja aur ja kar hum sab ke liye ticket le kar aa aur, jaldi se, tab tak hum log bhi toda mall dekh lete hai..


Kuch der baad sabhi apni ticket le kar chal diye haunted house ki tarf


13- boss wo dekho wo raha wo ladka jiske piche hum hum aaye hue hai yaha tak..


11- badiya ab pahla kaam jaldi se mobile nikal le..


13- par bhai iska koi matlb hi nahi hai, mobile mae Network to hai hi nahi na, to..


11- abe mobile me Network nahi hai ya tere beje mae nahi hai,
Bsdk main mobile isliye bol raha tha ki uski photo kich (capture) kar lete hai, jab Network aa jate to boss ke pass bej denge, fir wo jane age kya karenge..


Fir kya sab log, apni apni koshis karne lage, par us jagha public itni thi ki koi kamyab nahi ho paya, tab tak abha aur avi ke entry ka samay aa gaya


Avi- chalo sweetheart tumko toda, is horror house ka bhi test kara du..


Abha - 😩ha kyu nahi ab jana hi hoga mujko, par dhyaan se na..


Avi abha ka hath pakad kar chal diya house ke andar, jaha pahla darwaja khulte hi,
Abha ke samne ulta lataka hua kankaal aa gaya,
Jiski wajah se , abha jor se chila kar avi se lipat gai aur avi ..


Avi - are.. Are.. Meri sweetheart dar gai kya, are ye to nakli hai, abhi hi andar aaye hai, aur abhi se, kitni darpok ho gai ho..


Abha - nahi.. Nahi.. Main koi darpok nahi hu, wo to achanak se hua na to toda chok gai thi main aur kuch bhi nahi samjhe..


Avi - acha pahli baar dehk raha hu, koi chok kar itni jor se awaj lagata hai ki jisko sun kar asli wale ghost bhi dar jaye..


Abha - dekho tum mera majak baad mae udha lena abhi chalo na jaldi se ye sab khatm karte hai aur sopping bhi to jani hai..


Avi - ha sahi kaha bahut time bhi ho gaya hai, ab ye khel khatm karte hai..


Aur ab suru hua khel, abha avi aur amm logo ke liye ye ek adventure se bhara trip tha, par kuch logo ke liye unki mout ka trip tha..


Idhar lagbhag 3 -5 group ko ek satha haunted house mae entry di jati hai, pahle avi aur uski security (normal dress) aur baki ke log aur akhri group mae wo 10 log the..


Idhar baki log ka adventure suru hua, jaha kabhi zombie aate to kabhi vampire aur ghosts, aate, kuch haste aur kuch darate the, horror sounds aur animation se bahut hi jandar haunted house bana hua tha..


Par idhar Mariya ke magic ne un logo ko us house mae pahucha diya, jaha har darwaje ke piche unki mout intjar kar rahi thi..


Ab un logo ki bari aai aur jesa ki pahle mariya ne kiya tha apne illusion technique ka use wese ab bhi kiya, matlb wo 10 kisi koi bhi na dikhe na mahsus hue..


11- chalo re jaldi se bahar to bahut bhid thi to photo nahi le paye andar to le hi lenge..


12- ha bhai bilkul chaliye wo pahle hi andar ja chuka hai kahi hum log piche na ho jaye..


Ab ye log bhi andar chale gaye, suru ke do darwaje par to sab kuch normal raha, par jab unhone tisra darwaja khola to, sab soch mae pad gaye, kyuki age 5 alag alag darwaje the..


13- bhai ye to sala khela hi badal gaya ab kya kare bhai kon se mae jaye hum..


11- abe main bhi dekh raha hu sab kuch, ruk ja sochne de kuch..


12- ab isne sochna kya bhai kisi bhi darwaje mae gus jate hai apun log aur kya simple.


14 - hat MC kisi bhi darwaje mae gus jawo teri Biwi ki kholi hai kya jaha gus jayega, abe agar age wo ladka nahi mila to..


13- ha bhai aur agar humse deri hui aur wo ladka nikal gaya bhar aur kahi aur chala gaya to....


14- to bahut gadbad ho jayegi wese bhi Boss ne bola tha ki kaam jaldi hona chaahiye jada der us colony ke pass rahana achha nahi hoga hamare liye..


11- chup MC chup, salo bakar bakar bas, ek kam karte hai hum 10 log hai, chalo sab 2-2 log bat jawo aur gus jawo, aur kisi bhi tarah se us ladke ki photo leni hi hai chalo MC chalo..


Ab sabhi par daru ka nasha havi hone laga, ab sabhi log 5 group mae bath kar ke , chal diye un 5 darwajo ke andar aur jese hi wo gaye, kya dekhte hai ki andar 2 aur darwaje hai ab kya FIR un sabhi ne decided kiya ki ab sabhi log alag alag ho jaayenge, matlb 10 darwaje aur 10 wo log..

1 door


Ab chalte hai 1 darwaje par jaha 11 gaya hua tha, wo andar gaya andar toda andhera tha aur samne ek aur darwaja.


11- hat MC pata nahi kaha kaha se fash gaya mae, darwaje ke andar darwaja sala CID ka daya ho gaya hu main, hat BC


Wo gusse mae gaya aur darwaje ki lock ko pakad kar guma diya, jesa ki hota hai, ki lock khulata hai to ek click jesi awaj aati hai, par yaha 2-3 baar awaj hui, 11 ko kuch gadbad lagi, par isse pahale ki oo koi react kar pata uski ek dard se bhari chik gunj uthi, kyuki uske pure hato par lambe -lambe kile gus chuki thi,
Wo dard se tadap raha tha, uske hato se khul kisi pani ki tarah bah raha tha, usne himat karke apna dusra hath use kiya tabhi,
Uske baju se 2 tej lohe ki salakhe aai aur uske dono hoto aur pero ke biche gus gai , ab wo hil bhi nahi paa raha tha, tabhi uske kano mae ek aur awaj aai jo uske piche ki diwal se aa rahi thi aur ek lohe ki salekhe side uske dil ko chirte hue nikal gai,
Bas uske mhu se khul ki dhar nikli aur wo ek kati hue ped (tree) ke tukde ki tarah niche gira, uski kahani wahi khatm aur samne ka darwaja khula aur Punisher andar aya usne 11 ki body ko pakda aur chal diya aur jate hue bolne laga..


Punisher- hi.. Hi.. Hi.. Ajj mere kutoo ke liye acha khana milega, 1 to gaya ab 9 baki rah gaye 😈..


2 door..


Ab yaha 12 aaya hua tha, aur is room mae charo taraf bahut se chote chote tree feli hui thi charo taraf, floor to jese thi hi nahi waha par..


12- are bc is park walo ne to bahut pese (money) lagaye hue hai lagta hai,
Yesa lag raha jese mae jungle mae aa gaya hu, par ye sab mujko nahi dara sakte hai, ha.. Ha.. Ha..


Wo hasta hua samne ke darwaje ki taraf chal pada par uski ye hansi sirf kuch seconds ke liya hi thi, kyuki uske dono pero ko un chote chote tree ne jakad liya wo hil nahi paa raha tha..

Dhire -dhire un pedo ne uski puri body ko jakad liya aur FIR suru hua uski ek ek hadi ka tutna, wo chikta raha par kuch nahi hua,
Aur ant mae uski khaini khatm ho gai..



3 door


13 yaha aaya hua tha, aur yaha ka nazara yesa tha ki charo taraf sanpo ki painting bani hui thi diwaro ke saath, floor par bhi, wo muskuraye aur age bad gaya aur..
Aur uske kano mae awaj aii -ssshhh, sshhh, ab jahir si baat hai ye kiski awaj ho sakti hai, wo toda himat juta kar piche muda to jitni paintings lagi hui thi usse sanp bahar niklne lage wo dar gaya aur age bhagna chaha par uske pero par, ko sanpo ne apni kundli mar kar rok liya..
Ab jo bade sanp the wo uski body ko jakdne lage aur ek sanp usi gardan ko kasne laga..
Ab jab hume sans lene mae taklif ho to hum apna mhu khol lete hai wese 13 ne bhi kiya par, yahi galti ho gai, wo sanp gap karke uske mhu mae gus gaya,
Wo sanp jese -jese andar jata gaya 13 ki ankho aur kano se khun niklna suru ho gaya aur, ant mae wo sanp uske pet ko chirta hua bahar aa gaya, aur satha mae uski anto ko bhi bahar la diya, aur ek aur ka khel khatm hua..



Door 4

14 jab room ke andar aaya to samne 1 nahi 2 nahi pure 4 darwaje the, jisko dekh uska dimag gum gaya..


14 - bc ye kaya hai sala mae to 1 hi admi hu aur yaha 4 darwaje ab kya, apne sarir ko tukde karke jau sab mae..


Bas uske mhu se ye nikal aur wo charo darwaje ek saath khule aur -gggarrr.. Gaaarrr.. Aauuuu.. Aaauuuu.. Ki awaje anne lagi kyoki,.
Un 4 darwajo se 4 werewolf bahar aa gaye 4 ki size badi thi aur wo 14 ko ghur ka dekhne lage,
14 ki to fat chuki thi uska sara nasha uske niche se nikal gaya, wo bagna cahate tha par wo gir gaya aur FIR, un charo werewolf ne uske dono hatho aur pere ko padak kar kichne lage, wo tadpne laga par kuch der ke liye kyuki, agle hi pal yski body 5 bhago mae bat chuki thi 4 un wolf ke pass aur 1 jamin par, aur yaha the end..



Aur usi tarah baki ke 6 aur ki dardanaak maot hui jab sabhi ko khatm kar diya tab, mariya Punisher ke samne aa gai, Punisher apni master ko dekh jhuk gaya..


Punisher- master apne jo kaam diya tha mujko , mene wo pura kiya, app khush to hai na master..


Mariya - bilkul mene jesa socha tumne usse bhi acchi tarah se apne kaam ko anzam diya, ab tum jawo..


Punisher- mujhe khusi hui ki main apne master ke kaam aya, agar aur kabhi bhi kaam ki jarurat ho mujko jarur yaad kare master.. (Aur Punisher chala gaya)


{Mariya - master apka diya hua kaam pura ho chuka hai..


Avi- bahut khub Mariya, Punisher ne apne naam ke hisab se kaam kiya.. Ab tum bhi jawo ye trip completel ho gai..


Mariya - yes, master) ..


Abha - to avi ab kya haunted house mae bhi ghum liya aur kahi gumna hai kya park mae..


Avi - nahi jitna maza lena tha le chuke hai, ab yaha se chalte hai wapis city mae..


Abha - ok no problem, par waha kaha jaayenge hum log..


Avi - shopping



😈 to be continued 😈
Ye punisher bhau to Apne naam ki tarah hi kadak hai, kya advancher karvaya in 10 logo ko, sale haunted house me aaye the Apne avi baba ki tasvir khichne, khud ki hi tasvir me haar chadhva liya... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
 

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😈 He Is Coming 😈 Again


Andhera charo taraf guf andhera, Raat ka samay, Amawas ki raat,jab chand bhi chup gaya tha,charo taraf badl hi badal,tare bhi chup gaye the yesa lag raha tha ki,ajj asman bilkul saff hai jisme na tare hai na chand,bilkul kala aasman..

Ek viran jungle jisme jada hare ped nahi the sirf adhe jivit ped the,lambi lambi bel jo un pedo se kisi sap ( snake🐍) ki tarah jul rahe the

Per us sunsan jungle ki santi sirf kuch samay tak hi thi kyukin us jungle ke bicho bich kai gadiya dod rahi thi .. Aur unke piche bhi kuch gadiya aur dono mae goli bari ki awwaje aa rahi thi..

Un gadio se kuch km age ek aur gadi thi aur us gadi mae ek married couple , betha hua tha, jisme Admi bahut hi tension mae lag raha tha, kyukin uski Biwi sayada pregnant thi aur usko pan ho raha,


Admi- sneha sabar karo sneha sabar karo, tumko kuch nahi hoga, main tumko kuch bhi nahi hone dunga, bas kuch der aur, driver gadi jaldi chalo
Dekh rahe ho na apni Malkin ki halat


Sneha (dard se) - maaa nahi Sumit main tik hu, ahh aur mujhe apni chinta nahi hai bas main (apne pet par hath rakh kar ) mujhe bas apne bacche ki chinta hai bas ek baar isko dekh lu fir agar mout bhi aa jaye to koi dukh nahi hai


Sumit - nahi sneha ye tum kesi baate kar rahi ho na tumko kuch hoga na hi hamare bacche ko main hu na, driver tum kya kar rahe gadi jaldi chalo..


Driver- main samjh sakata hu sir ki app bahut tension mae ho, par mae kya karu, is jungle mae bahut jada andhera hai aur gadi ki Roshni bhi acche se sadak par nahi aa pa rahi hai, main bas ye dyan rakh raha hu ki, madam ko koi taklif na ho..


Sumit bhi apne Driver ki baat samjh chuka tha, ki ajj kuch to alag hai aur is jungle mae bhi, par apni patni ke dard ke samne uska dimag aur kuch nahi soch raha tha.. Us gadi mae 2 nurse bhi thi jo sneha ka khyaal rakh rahi thi, par uska dard ruk nahi tha tabhi..


Achhank se gadi band pad gai aur Sumit jada tension mae aa gaya


Sumit- Driver kya hua gadi kyu rok diya tumne
..

Driver- mene nahi roki sir pata nahi kese gadi band pad gai, main abhi dekhta huu


Sumit - Nurse tum iska dhyn rako main bhi dekhta hu kya hua gadi ko..


Idhar badlo ki garjana hone lagi aur Hawa ki raftar bahut tej ho chuki thi


Nurse 1- inka pan badta ja raha hai, mujhe tension ho rahi hai ki hum hospital tak sayad hi pahunch paye ..


Nurse 2- ha mujhe bhi lagata hai ki delivery ka time aa gaya hai Hume kuch karna hoga nahi to gadbad ho sakti hai. Main abhi sir ko batati hu

Aur Nurseye bol kar niche utar gai aur Sumit ke pass ja kar boli..


Nurse- sir ek bahut badi problam ho gai hai.. Apki help chahiye..


Sumit - pro.. Problem kya problam Nurse meri Biwi to..


Nurse- sir wo mam jada samay tak control nahi kar sakti hai lagta hai bache ke janam dene ka time aa gaya hai, hum aur wait nahi kar sakte hai..


Sumit - hye bhagavaan ab main kya karu is jagah kese delivery ho sakti hai Nurse..


Nurse- sir uski tension app mat li jiye bas app is jungle mae koi jagha dekhiye jada hun aag jala sake baki sara saman hamare pass hai..


Sumit ne jada socha nahi aur idhar udhara dod laga kar dekhne laga kuch hi duri par ek khandar jesa kuch tha par waha bahut chije thi jo kaam aa sakti thi.


Sumit turant gadi ke pass aaya aur Driver aur Nurse ki madad se apni patni ko us jagah par laya


Nurse- sir app jaldi se is ladkiya ki madad se Agg jala dijye aur Driver tum is bartan mae toda barsat ka pani jama karo jaldi..


Sumit dod kar apni gai se petrol laya aur Agg jala kar pani garam karne laga, idhar dono Nurse apni puri kosis kar rahi thi..


Nurse- mam himmat mat hariye apke baby ki jindagi apke hato mae hai mam please push mam push..


Sneha puri takat laga kar ek bar push kiya, Jiski wajha se baccha bahar aaya
par kuch blood us jaga gir gye aur wo baccha mara hua tha,isse pahle ki wo Nurse kuch bol pati wo 5 log behosh ho gaye..

Aur us bacche ke charo or ek dund chakr katne laga.. Aur un 5 ko dekhne laga bhar ka musan aur jada kharab ho chuka tha..


Who - hi.. Hi.. Hi. (Hasta hua) kadodo salo ke intajaar ke baad ajj wo pal aa gai jab main **** is seal se ajad ho jaunga huu main jiske hato se na jane kitni duniya barabad ho gai.. Kitne logo ki mout ho gai..

Aur ajj mujhe ek becche ne is seal se aajadi dila di.. Huu par ek mara hua baccha, kya samay mujko ek aur muka de raha hai ki jo galtiya mene pahle ki unko sudhar sakhu..
Sayad ha is baache ke jariye sayad main wo kar saku..
Par isse pahle kuch anjan mahana aa rahe hai unko tikane laga du 😈😈..



Idhar wo gadia ruki aur unme se 8-10 log utre..


1- boss gadi to yahi hai par usne to koi bhi nahi hai lagta hai bag gaye honge


Boss - chup sale uski Biwi maa banane wali hai, aur is halat mae wo kahi bhag sakti dudo usko, unko marne ki bahut badi rakam mili hai humko,

Kuch samya baad wo sabhi gunde uski khandar ke samne aa gaye the


2- boss wo rahe sab par lagta hai aaram se soo rahe hain wo..


Boss - koi baat nahi lagta hai, unko hamesa ke sula dene ka kaam hame karna hoga..


3- par bass usne saath wo 2 mast mall bhi to hai na unka kya, unko bhi mar de kya..


Boss - chup re pahle hum sab ek ek karke unke saath apni payash buja lenge fir maar denge unko chalo ab..


Par wo nahi jante the ki wo apni mout ki taraf bad rahe wo sab us khandar ke pass, pahunch chuke the aur isse pahle ki wo kuch kar pate un sab ke hatyar gayab ho gaye..


Boss - ye.. Ye. Kya hua kese hua, kon kon hai yaha par samne aapao..


Who - -hu bacche apni mout se milne ki itni jaldi hai tumko hu, lo main aa gaya samne
.


Aur unke koi aaya jisko dekh kar hi 2 gundo ne dam taod diya.. Wo bhagna chahte the par bhag nahi paa rahe the kyuki wo pure jam chuke the


Who - akhiri baar khun bahana padega ha.. Ha.. Ha. .


Aur fir usne un sab katam kar diya yaha tak ki unke sarir ka koi tukda bhi nahi raha..


Wo us baache ke Samne gaya aur bola

Who - huu is nayi jidagi mae mujhe nahi pata ki mujhe apni purani jindagi yaad hogi ya nahi, par bas yahi chaunga ki wo path na chun lu fir se

Main tha Great ****


"The path I'll choose in the end I'll destroy millions of life"

I am tha one, the face of fear ha.. Ha..



😈 To be continued 😈
Interesting start, abhi tak sab kuch suspense hai, situation, characters and WHO. Aage dekhte hai kya hota hai.
 

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Time for reborn


Isse pahle ki who us bacche ke sarir mae ja pata, ek Roshni uske samne aa gai


Who - kon ho tum aur tumhari himmat kesi hui yaha aane ki jawan de muje



Roshni- main kon hu ye jaruri nahi hai, jaruri ye hai ki main yaha kyu hu..


Who - kya matlab hai tumhara saf saf bolo..


Roshni- tum yaha seal the kai yugo se ab tumko mukt hona hoga,


Who - nahi mein nahi mukt hunga iss bacche se mujko ek naya rasta mila hai ek nai manjil..
Jo galti mene ki thi unko sudharne ka samay aa gaya mere pass, aur tum mujko rok rahi ho..


Roshni - tum samjh nahi paa rahe ho tum *** ho aur ye ek insan ka baccha agar tum apni puri takat ke saath iske andar chale gaye the ye sarir nasat ho jayega, aur tum hari aatma bhi..


Who kuch der Sant raha fir kuch sochne ke bad, usse kuch alag - alag saktiya nikli jo Univers mae kahi gum ho gai..


Who - ab tik hai ab isko koi nuksan nahi hoga, samay ane par ye saktiya kudh isko rasta dikha dengi...


Roshni - tik hai aur ek baat ye naya jivan is bacche ke saath saath in dono maa baap ne diya hai tumko ..


Who - janta hu main kabhi bhi inkk nukasana nahi pahucha sakta hu, wese tum kon ho


Roshni - main jab samay ayega tum kudh samjh jawo ge ab jawo, aur apne naye JIWAN ki suruwat karo.. Par yaad rahe tumko kuch bhi yaad nahi rahega tumhara bita hua kal ki baate bhi nahi.....


Who - tik hai par in sab ki yade mitani padegi..


Roshni - uski chinta tum mat karo main baki ka kaam kar dugi..


Uske baad who Roshni ban kar us bacche mae chala gaya, baacha jivit wo utha, par uss Roshni ki wajha se wo so gaya..

Fir wo Roshni ne ek aakar liya ek bahut hi sundar aakar, jisko dekhne ke baad ankhe us par tahar jaye


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Wo age badi aur us bacche ko apni good mae utha liya.. Aur ek mantr pad kar uske mathe par punk mar di..


Ladki - jab tak app -14 sal ke nahi ho jaoge apki demonic power control mae rahegi aur tab tak apko hum sab protect karegi , 14 salo bad apki power kud apko aage ka rasta dikha dengi aur hum bhi apki madad karege Ab hume intajaar rahega ki kab app ayenge humari queen ke pass ..


Fir us Roshni ne un sab ki yado se us lamhe ko hata diya aur samay wahi ruka jab Nurse ne us baache ko dekha


Roshni ne ek baar uper dekha jaha se 7 kism ki Roshni aai un sabhi ne Ladkiyo ka rup liya, uss bache ke mathe par kiss kiya aur ek saath boli..

- Hame apka intajaar rahega


Aur wo sab gayab ho gai, idhar uss bacche ki rone ki aawaj se samay wapis pahle jesa ho gaya,


Nurse 1 - jaldi se saf kapda do aur pani bhi lao..

Bacche ki rone ki awwaj sun Sumit ki ankho se bhi anshu ki bunde chalak uthi


Driver-- mubaarak ho sir app pita ban gaye, hamare chote malik peda ho hi gaye..



Sumit - ha main main pita ban gaya, Nurse dono tik to hai na..


Nurse 2- ha sir baby to bilkul tik hi hai, aur madam todi behoshi ki halat mae hai, todi taklif bad gai thi unki..


Sumit - Nurse kya main apne baby ko dekh sakata hu abhi..


Nurse- nahi sir pahle isko apni maa ka dudh pine dijiye fir dekh lijiye..


Sumit- ha tik hai pahle app apna kaam karo main baby ko baad main dekh lunga..


Aur idhar kuchh gadiya aa kar ruk gai, aur Sumit unki or chal diya, ye sab Sumit ki security guards the


Guard head - sir app tik to hai na kisi ko koi chot to nahi lagi hai


Sumit- nahi hum tik hai, aur tumne kaam pura kiya.


Guard head - Ji sir jitne bhi the humne sab ko khatm kar diya, kuch bach gaye the par unko mere log dund rahe hain, wese sir mam kesi hai aur kaha hai..


Sumit - ha wo tik hai, aur mera baby bhi badiya hai..


Guard head- huu sir kya apne abhi baby kaha mtlab app..


Sumit- ha main pita ban gaya, ladka hua hai..


Guard head- mubaarak ho sir mubaarak ho, mam tik hai na sir abhi..


Sumit - ha wo tik hai achha gadi ko dekho usme kuch problam ho gai thi, hum kuch der baad nikal jayenge


Guard head- sir ab subha hone mae kuch hi gante bache hue hai, ek kaam karte hai todi der yahi aaram kar lete hai, hamare log bhi bahut hi tak gaye hai..


Sumit- accha tik hai


Aur dono kuch aur bate karne lage, musam bhi lagbhag saf ho chuka tha, idhar Nurse ne jese hi bacche ko apni maa ke satano ke pass le gai baby kudh dudh pine laga aur, sneha bhi apni Bhi behoshi se bahar aa gai, aur apne bacche ko dekh uski sari taklife ek tarah se khatm ho chuki thi..


Nurse- mam app relax kijie , baby bilkul tik hai, aur hamare Guard bhi aa chuke hai todi der baad hum log nikal jayenge yaha se..


Sneha kuch nahi boli bas ha main sir hila diya aur apne baby ko payar karne lagi


Idhar samay bhi bit gaya aur Sumit ke kuch aur log bhi aa gaye jinke saath Doctor ki team bhi thi,
Fir maa bete ko gadi main aram se leta diya aur Sumit bhi unke pass bat gaya aur gadi nikal gai, apni nai manjil ki or idhar wo kandar apne app hi Gayab ho gaya jese waha kuch tha hi nahi pahle



Idhar earth 🌎se dur ek jaga jisko bola jata hai

"The immortal world"


Waha 6 immortal bathe hue the ye sirf unki atma ka kuch hissa bacha hua tha ye sab apne samay ke
"Great emperor👑" The aur jab yaha wo kandar gayab hua, us samay pure immortal World mae andhere cha gaya, par sirf kuch samay ke liya

( To ye kon hai inki kya story hai iska kulasa tabhi hoga, jab Hume pata chalega "Who " Ki story..


Emperor 1- huu emperor's kya ap sabhi ko bhi usi aura ka anubhav hua jo mujhe hua abhi..

Baki sabhi 5 emperor ne apni sahmti is baat par de di


Emperor 2- huu to iska saf matlab hai ki wo jiska naam. Nahi lete wo wapis aa gaya hai..


Emperor 3- par ye kese ho sakta hai, usko seal karne ke liya hum sabko kya kimat chukani padi thi, fir wo kese ajad wo sakta hai, kese..


Emperor 3- mere dost hum sab bhul rahe hain wo kon hai, ajj bhi main ya sayad hum sab us samay ko nahi bhule hai, jab usne wo sab kiya tha..


Emperor 5- kese.. Kese.. Bhul sakte hai hai wo manjar , hum sab us samay apne app ko bahut powerful samaja karte the, jiska anjam Hume bhugatna pada tha..


Emperor 4- sirf Hume hi nahi hamare pure empire ko bugatna pada tha, wo nazara ajj bhi nahi bhul paya hu mae, bhale hi ye sarir kab ka khatm ho chuka hai, par is aatma mae aaj bhi wo fear hai..


Emperor 1- bhul bhi kese sakte hai humsab, jab hamari galti ki wajha se "Who " Ne hamare hum sab ke 6 empire ko khatm kar diya, wo bhi hamrae hi ankho ke samne kuch bhi nahi baccha, tha us samay ..


Emperor 6 - ha par usse bhi bura tab hua jab usko seal karne ke liya hamare ancient Lords ko apni bachi hui aatma ki takat lagani padi saath mae Hume bhi, itna sab karne ke baad bhi, ajj wo fir ajad ho gaya kese..



Emperor 3- hum sab ye kyu bhul jate hain ki, samya se jada powerful koi bhi nahi kal uska samay nahi tha isliye hum sab wo seal bana paye the ajj hamara samay nahi hai isliye wo seal tut chuki hai..



Emperor 4- tik hai par ab kya hoga jab Wo aajad ho chuka hai, kahi fir se wo sab start na ho jaye..



Emperor 6- huu muskil hai bahut muskil hai ye kahna ki ab kya hoga aage, kuch bhi ho sakta hai par hum kuch bhi nahi kar sakte hai bas dekh sakte hai..



Emperor 3 - ha sahi kaha tumne ab hamara samay nahi hai hamara samay pura ho chuka hai, ab bas kar sakte hai to intajaar...
Wo kaha hai aur aage kya karega ye ham nahi jan sakte hai


😈 To be continued😈
More characters more suspense. Abhi bhi sab kuch andhere mein hi chal raha hai khastour par Who is Who.
 

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Naam karan


To un emperor ko hum wahi chod kar wapis aate hai apne new born baby ke pass 2 din ka samay bit chuka tha aur Sumit aur sneha ko bahut sari wishes bhi mil chuki thi

Charo taraf bas khushiyaan hi khushiyaan thi aur ajj Sumit ke guru bhi aanee wale the kyuki baby ka nam karan hone wala tha


Ghar acche sajaya gaya tha, garibo ko bhojan aur kapde bate ja rahe the aur pandit apne havan puja paat main lage hue the, Sumit idhar udhara bhaag kar sabhi chijo ka dhyan rakh raha tha, saath mae uska saath amit bhi de raha, jo uska accha dost tha..


Amit - yaar Sumit ye tu todi der santi ke saath nahi bath sakta hai kya, subha se dekh raha hu, kabhi idhar to kabhi udhar..


Sumit- to kya teri tarh bath jahu sale hai, are ssb kuch dekhna padta hai mere bhai kahi koi kami na ho jaye..


Amit - sale baat to yese kar raha hai jese main jula jhul raha hu, bhul mat pichle tin dino se yahi hu samjha.. Wese ye Swami Ji kab tak aa rahe hai..


Sumit - ha wo abhi call kiya tha mene wo log 15-20 mint mae aa jayenge, wese apni tayari to Puri hai, puja ki..


Amit - are ha bhai tu ye baat 15 baar puch chuka hai aur main bata chuka hu ki, mene sab fix kar diya hai.. Acha ek baar tu bhabhi ke pass bhi message bej de ki wo bhi tayar rahe..


Sumit - are uski koi tension nahi hai uski saheli hai na matlab teri Biwi wo sab kuch dekh legi.. Achha sun kal raat ko party ka kya hai..


Idhar Sumit aur amit aage ke baare mae baat karne lage aur hum chalte hai sneha ke room mae..



Jaha sneha kuch aurto ke saath bethi hui thi aur bate kar rahi thi aur wahi uska baby kisi aur he hato mae tha


Sneha- abha aur kab tu mere bete ke saath khelti rahegi dekh aur bhi log aa rahe hai, unko bhi de de na..


Abha (amit ki Biwi) - nahi main nahi dungi, wese bhi jitna tera hak hai isme mera bhi hak hai samji, jab tak mera man nahi manega tab tak ye mere pass rahega..


Sneha- acha baba tik hai tu jiti, par kam se kam usko tayar to kar de, pandiji bhi aate hi honge, aur ye le ye kapde pahan de usko..


Abha - jarurat nahi hai samjhi, main pahle se iske liya kapde la chuki hu aur ye mere hisab se meri pasand ke kapde pahnega..


Abha- wese sneha kuch bhi bol ye baccha na bilkul alag hai dusro se


Sneha- acha aur kya kya alag hai mere bete mae jara main bhi to sunu..


Abha - dekhna pichhale 3 dino se main yaha hu aur abhi tak mene isko ek baar bhi rota hua nahi suni hu..


Sneha- to kamini tu kya chahti hai mera beta rota hi rahe.. Aur wese bhi Doctor kahte hai ki kuch bcche jada rote hi nahi hai..


Abha- ha wo to hai aur dusri baat ye dusro baccha jesa nahi hai bahut saant hai jese isko pata hai ki hum log yaha kya kar hai.. Aur


Sneha- are bas bas itni tarif bhi mat kar mere bete ki nazar lag jaye ..


Abha - ha.. Nahi karti tarif aur ek baat meri nazar nahin lagegi isko kabhi tik hai..
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Idhar sneha ko phone baja aur kuch der baat karne ke baad call cat ho gaya..


Abha - kis ka call aya tha, koi frined tha kya..


Sneha- are nahi koi frined nahi tha, Sumit the, bata rahe the ki guruji 10-15 minto mae aa Jayenge to majhe aur baby ko tayar rahne bol rahe the..


Abha - ha to fir toda jaldi se ye sab kam karte hai, har chij apne samay mae ho to accha rahta hai, chal ye to tayar ho gaya tujko bhi tayar kar deti hu


Kuch der baad Sumit ke gurudev bhi aa gaye, ye wahi the jinhone Sumit ke bure dino mae uska Marg darsan kiya tha, aur ye hamesa hi Sumit ke parivaar ke karib rahe hain

Sumit koi bhi kaam bina inki marji ke nahi karta hai, ssath mae amit aur uski Biwi ke saath bhi inke aache rishte hai..

Idhar gurudev apne kuch aur chelo ke saath andar aaye, Sumit aur amit dono ne apni - apni patni ke saath mil ke sabhi ke per do liye, sabhi ka Aasirwad le liya uske baad puja hui aur sabhi brmhan ko bhojan diya gaya, aur garibo ko Dan dene kee baad, Sumit aur uski patni gurudev ko andar ekanatha mae le gaye jaha gurudev kuch batnae wale the


Sumit- gurudev hamari seva main koi kami to nahi rah gai na..


Sneha- Ji gurudev agar rah gai ho to Hume maff kar de


Gurudev- beti hum to sadhu hai chahe 56 bhog mile ya 2 sukhi roti bhagavaan ka Prasad samjh usi mae santust ho jate hai, aur ajj tak yesa kabhi nahin hua ki tum dono se koi galti ho jaye.. Wese tumhara balak kaha hai beti..


Sneha- wo gurudev beta to abha ke pass hai wo bahut se gest aaye hai to, sabhi kuch na kuch gift de rahe hai bete ko, kya main managa lu..


Gurudev- nahi beti iski koi jarurat nahi hai, wese bhi jesa Sumit ne samay bataya tha uske anurup mere sisya ne kundli bana di hai tumhare bete ki..


Sneha- to batayega gurudev kya kahta hai mere beta ka bhavishy..


Gurudev- beti sneha ki ka bhavishy kabhi nichait nahi rahta hai, wo to uske karam nirdhaarit karte hai ki uska bhavishy kesa ho gaa..
Ha main ye jarur bata sakta hu ki is balak ki pravrtti kesi hogi


Gurudev kuch der dhyan mae bathe fir kundli ko samne rakh diya aur bole..


Gurudev- beti tere beta bahut hi Budiman, saktisali, nidar aur tej hoga, ye har chij jaldi hi sikh jayega , ye tum dono se bahut payar karega , par jada apni maa se, jaha jayega apni chap chod dega aur surwati ke kuch sal ye bahut hi badmashi karega, to iss par gusa nahi hona, apne parivar ka nam bahut age le kar jayega..

Itni tarif sun kar Sumit aur sneha bahut kush hi gaye, akhira kon se ma baap apni santan ke bare mae accha sun kar khush nahi honge..


Gurudev- beti har sike ke do pahalu hote hai abhi tak issi acchi bate suni ab baki ki baate bhi suno ye nidar to hoga hi par ye baccha nirankusa hoga beti


Sneha- matlab gurudev..


Gurudev- matlab beti ye jo chayega usko prapt karke rahega, aur iskl ye kabhi bhi pasand nahi aayega ki koi iske manjil ke bich aaye, ye bahut hi adik guuse wala hoga, aur iska gussa khataranaka ho sakata hai


Gurudev- par beti ye tumhara beta hi tum dono ke pure parivar ko ek karega, Sumit jis parivaar se tum dono dur ho na, ISI ladke ki wajha se tum apne parivaar se mil sakoge , par beti tumhe ek baat meri manani hogi bolo maan sakogi , jab tumhara beta 6 sal ko ho jaye tab tumko isko apne se alag rakhna hoga tab tak jab tak ye 22 sal ka no ho jaye,



Sneha- kya par kya gurudev



Gurudev- beti kuch yesa sanyog ban raha hai ki agar ye 6 sal se adhik samay tak tumhare pass raha to iski jindagi par khatra ho sakta hai..


Apne beti ki jindagi par khatre ki baat sun sneha khabra gai, par gurudev ke samjane se samjh gai, ki jab samay aayega wo bete ko bahar bahj denge..


Gurudev- beti ab apne bete ko manga lo saath , uska naam karan bhi to karna hai..

Kuch der baad abha Sumit amit sneha aur kuch karibe log gurudev ke pass bath gaye


Fir gurudev ne "A" Naam se bacche ka naam rakhee ko kaha jisme abha ne ek naam fir kar diya

"AVINASH"
To Avinash Babu ka naam Karan ho gaya hai aur guruji ki baato ke anusaar iska vyvhaar apne peechle jeevan ke anuroop hi rahne waala hai. Aage dekhte hai ki kya hota hai iske jeewan mein?
 

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Planning and Party 🎉🍻🎈


Abha - hu Avinash accha naam hai par lamba hai ek kaam karte hai, hum sab payar se isko avi kaha karega kyu sneha..


Sneha- are ab isme kyu kaha se aa gaya tune bol diya na bas wahi kafi hai mera beta avi


Sumit- are bhai ye sirf tum dono ka nahi hum dono bhaiyon ka bhi beta hai kyu amit..


Amit - ab yaar tu kya mar khilane par tula hua hai, yaha ye sab ke samne mujhe dategi tujko accha lagega..


Sumit- matlab abha tujko ghar mae data bhi karti hai, kyu abha


Abha - nahi bhaiya yesi koi baat nahi hai, inki to aadat hai majak karnr ki, aur tum 😠, gahar chalo tab batati hu..


Amit - 🥺dekha dekha tune Sumit kese tere bhai ko dara rahi hai ye..


Sumit- are kaha mene to kuch nahi dekha 😁.. Ye to meri acchi achi bahan hai..


Amit- 😟kamine bahan ke nate apne dost ko bhul gaya tu..


Sneha- are ab bas bhi karo tum sab, abhi bahut se kaam bache hue hai, abha amit bhaiya jaye aur sab ke liya Dan ki chije ka intajam kijiye..


Amit- ha tik hai bhabhi abhi tayari karta hai hum, abha chalo..


Idhar gurudev ne Sumit aur sneha ko akele mae aane ko kaha, to tino ek room mae chale..


Sumit- kya hua gurudev kuch aur bhi baat hai kya, apne Hume yaha aane ke liya kaha..


Gurudev- ha beta suno , mene pahle hi bata diya ki ye bahut gusse wala hoga isliye jab bhi isko gussa aaye to, isko kuch mat kahna Warna iska gussa aur bad jayega, isliye isko iske gusse ke satha chod dena, ye kudh Sant ho jagega aur bete ye lo (ek loket dete hue ) beti jab avi tumse dur jane wala ho tab ye usko pahna dena..


Sneha- Ji gurudev par isse kya hoga gurudev..


Gurudev- kuch nahi beti ye loket bhar jagh iske guuse ko kabhu mae rakhne ki madad karega.. Aur uske man ko sthir rakhega bas itna hi..


Ye bol kar gurudev wapis apne asram ko chle gaye par usne jane se pahle, un ssbhi ko bhojan aur daan de kar bida kiya gaya tha, yese hi ajj ka pura din bit gaya..

Raat ko amit aur Sumit bath kar kal ki party ki bate kar rahe the


Sumit- amit kal ki party ke liya tune hamare sare friends aur business partner ko invitation bhej diya hai na kisi ko bhul to nahi gaya..


Amit- are nahi mene puri list 3-4 baar chek ki hai kahi koi bhi nahi chuta hai tu Bolta hai to ek baar aur chek kar lunga..


Sumit- tik jesa tujko tik lage aur ek baat amit Scurity main koi bhi kami nahi honi chaahiye, tu janta na kyun..


Amit- janta hu aur tujko mujhe ye baat yaad dilane ki jarurat nahi hai, mene pahale hi apne best guard ko laga diya hai kaam par..


Sumit- mujhe Tujparr pura bharosa hai yaar, par na jane kyu yesa lag raha hai ki kahi kuch gadbad na ho jaye kal ..


Amit- Sumit tu ye is tarah kee though ko apne dimag se nikal de samjha sab kuch accha hi hoga, is baar kuch bura nahi hoga..


Aur in dono ko yahi chod kar chalte hai sahar se dur ek jagah jo underground thi, jaha bahut se guard hatyar ke saath us jagah ki sefa rakh rahe the, undar bahut se alag alag gun aur drags ko pack kiya ja raha tha, jahir si baat hai yaha illegal taskari ki ja rahi thi


Raka- raghu kaan tik tarike se hi raha hai ki nahi, janta hai na boss ko kisi bhi tarah ki galti Bardast nahi hai..



Raghu - nahi bhai app bilkul tension mat lo, Hamre log bahut hi acche se apna kaam kar rahe hai..


Raka - tik hai accha wo us sahar se jo hamara mall aane wala tha uska kya hua..


Raghu - bhai abhi police ki naka bandi bahu jada hi kadi ho gai hai, isliye hamare ladke bahut hi hifaazat ke saath mall ko yaha se waha le ja rahee hai to isme toda time lag sakta hai bhai..


Raka - tik hai par bhi ladko ko bol sab kaam dyan se hona chaahiye agar mall lane mae todi der ho bhi jaye to koi baat nahi hai..


Tabhi ek addmi raka ke pass aaya aur uske kano mae kuch bola, jisko sun raka aur wo Admi ek room mae gaye


Raka - hu bol kya nai khabar laya hai tu aur faltu ki khabar nahi honi chaahiye..


Admi - ajj tak yesa hua hai ki meri khabar faltu ho malik, bas ab ki khabar yesi hai ki kuch mil jata too..


Raka ne kabad se 500 ke not ka ek bandal uske samne fek diya..


Admi- hi.. Hi. Sukriya malik to khabar ye hai ki.. Aur usne ek lifafa aage kiya

Raka us khabar ko sun kar aur us lifafe ko dekh kar.bahut jada khush hua aur turant kisi ko call laga kar bola


Raka - ha hello main raka bol raha hu, wo boss se kuch baat karni hai..


Samne- boss abhi busy hai kya baat hai, mujhe bata do main boss ko bata dunga..


Raka- nahi ye baat phone par nahi bata sakta hu, boos ko sirf itna bol do ki khabar Sumit takur se judi hui hai


Todi der bass samne ss - boss ne tumko bulya hai jaldi se..


Raka turant bahar gaya aur akele hi gadi doda di agle 2 ghnte ke badd wo ek jungle mae gaya aur kuch der baad uske boss ke pass..

Pahle raka ko guard ne acche se chek kiya fir andar jane diya, jaha boss uper batha hua tha, ek masak laga kar..


Boss - raka bahut dino ke baad khabar laya tu, aur ek baat dhyan se agar khabar mere kaam ki nahi hui to tere liya ye accha nahi hoga..


Raka - malik ko raka ka salam, malik khabar badi hai, Sumit takur ek bahut badi partya dene wala..


Boss - Sumit mujko iske naam se nafrat hai raka, aur isme kya khabar wo to aaye din party karta rahta hai.. Fir se koi business khola hoga usne


Raka - nahi malik ye partya kisi business ko lekar nahi di jaa rahi hai. Balki


Boss - business ko lekar nahi to kiski wajha se di ja rahi hai..


Raka - malik Sumit takur party isliye de raha hai kyun wo, bapp ban chuka hai..


Ye sun kar jese uss boss ka gussa bad uski ankhe lal ho gai aur wo lambi lambi sanse lene laga ye dekh raka kuch kadam piche hat gaya aur chup ho gaya bilkul.. Kuch der baad uske boss ne apne app ko control kiya aur kaha..


Boss - raka kya khabar paki hai koi galti to nahi hui isme..


Raka - nahi malik khabar bilkul paki hai ye lijiye,


Aur ek lifafa Admi ki taraf jisne us lifafe ko boss ko diya, jese hi boss ne us lifafe main rakhi photo dekhi usne turant us photo ko jala diya..


Boss - raka bahut samay baad lekin bahut hi kaam ki khabar laya hai tu bahut acche ab bata ye party kab aur kaha par de raha hai wo


Raka - malik party kal raat ko hai aur wo apne ghar mae de raha hai party..


Boss ( hastee hue) - ha.. Ha.. Ha.. Akhira kar wo din aa hi gaya jiska mujko intajaar tha, raka tujko pata hai badla lene ka sabse accha tarika kya hota hai..


Raka- sidhi baat apne dushman ko maar do aur kya malik


Boss - nahi rakha agar kisi se badala lena ho to uski sabse payari chij ko khatm kar do, fir apne dusman ko tadapta hua dekha hi asli maja hai.. Raka meri baat dhyan se sun, kal Sumit ki sabse badi khushiy ka din uske liya sabsa bada matam ka din hona chaahiye..


Raka - boliye malik kya karna hoga Mujko..


Boss - ye kaam tu nahi karega kyuki tera uper police ki barbar nazre lagi rahti hai, isliye kisi nay ladke ki jarurt hogi, kal ke din kisi bhi tarha se Sumit ke bacche ko maar dalo, uske baad wo aur uski Biwi apni puri jindagi tadap tadap kar bita denge..


Raka - tik hai malik par malik main apne Admi ko andar kese leke jaunga, waha to..


Boss - tune kaha na ki party hogi to Sumit ne kai bade logo ko bhulya hoga, unhi mae se ek ke saath apna Admi bhi ghul jayega


Raka - par kese malik


Boss - raka ye duniya jesi dikhti hai wesi hai nahi re , tujhe kya lagta jo log hamare samne acchi achi baate karte hai kya wo sab acche hai nahi raka, kai log ek alag chahra dikhatee hai par us chahre ke piche ek aur chahra hota hai samjha


Raka - samjh gaya malik to kaam kese karu main


Boss - ye le is Admi ke pass apna Admi bhej dena, ye usko uske ghar ke andar ghusa dega
Par yaad rahe raka usko acche se samjha de ki kaam puri safai ke saath hona chaahiye, kisi ko koi bhi bhanaka nahi lagne chaahie ki kisne ye kiya aur ek baat, security cameras se bachke rahne ko bolna usko ab tu ja.. Aur ha raka is baar agar tu fell hua to samjh le teri mout bahut dardanaak hogi...

Fir raka waha se chal diya, aur Boss apne hatho mae sarab ki glaas pakad kar man hi man bolne laga..


Boss - Sumit takur tere parivaar ki wajha main ajj tak apne beto ke liya tadap raha hu ajj tak, par ab tu bhi tadpega, tu bhi ha ha ha...


Boss - mene bhi apno par bharosa karke bahut badi galti ki thi kyuki

"Yaha apne hi is intajaar mae hai ki kab muka mile aur kanjar gop de pith par "



😈 To be continued 😈
Ab ek aur naya character aur wo bhi Sumit ka dushman, ab iski kya dushmani hai aur kyon ye apne beto ke liye tadap raha hai? Ek aur naya suspense add ho gaya.
 

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The Hunting part -1


To idhar raka apne adde par batha hua tha aur kuch soch raha tha


Raka - hu mene Boss ko bol to diya ki main sab kuch kar lunga par sala samjh nahi aa raha hai ki kisko beju,
Agar ye kaam nahi hua ya, koi galti ko gai to Boss mujhe jinda nahi chodne wale na hi Mujko Marne denge, kya karu kuch soch raka


Fir raka ka ik Admi andar aaya aur ek dairy raka ki taraf kiska di


Raka - billa ye kya hai, kya hai is dairy mae..


Billa - Boss apne hi bola tha ki hamaree kuch yese logo ki list chahiye jinka koi police record na ho..


Raka - ha mene kaha to, matlb isme un logo ki jankari hai..


Billa - sirf jankari hi nahi Boss balki un sab ki kamjori aur unke number bhi hai isme Boss, mujhe lagta hai ye tisri wali sahi hogi iss kam ke liya..


Raka- billa ye tu kya bol raha hai ye ek aurat hai, isko kese kaam mae bej sakte hai hum..


Billa - Boss app sayad bhul rahe ek mard par har koi sak kar sakta hai ki ye khuni hai, par ek khubsurat aurt par koi sam nahi kar sakta hai.. Aur wese bhi ek bahut hi tej aurat hai, isase pahle bhi ye yese kaam kar chuki hai..


Raka uski report padne laga jisme uske bare mae jankari thi


Raka - bahut kub billa bahut kub, ye ek nurse bhi hai aur zahar ki bahut badi jankar bhi ha ha akhir koi mil hi gaya hai, par kon bharosa karega ki mout itni Kubsurat bhi ho sakti hai ha.. Ha..


Raka - billa isko jaldi se yaha bhula le, kal hi raat ko ye kaam ho jana chahiye


Billa - main pahle se janta tha ki app ISI ko cunoge Boss, isliye mene pahale hi isko bata diya hai kuch der mae aati hi hogi, aur ha Boss ek aur kash baat, ye peso ki bahut hi bukhi aurat hai..


Raka - accha hai billa tu bahut acche se meri aadat samjh chuka hai, aur rahi iski baat, isko to main peso se tol dunga...


Idhar wo ladki aai aur raka aur wo kuch baat karne kage FIR idhar raka ka mobile baja jisme uske Boss ke logo ne ek Admi ka pata beja tha raka ko..


Raka - achha to ye Admi hai jiske saath ye ladki andar jayegi bahut badiya, sab fix ho gaya billa, ab bas intajara hai kal raat ki party ka..

Par us ladki ne kuch yesa bola ki raka ko plan badla pada yesa kya hua hoga
To inki bato kk yahi chod kar chalte hai sneha ke pass jo bedroom mae soi hui thi, wese to amm Admi ke liya ye room normal tha par asal mae yaha, 2 demonic aura fela hua tha jo uss soye hue bacche (Avi) ke charo taraf fella hua tha 1 blue color mae dusra black color mae aur us ghar ke charo taraf santi thi jaha kuch security guard apas mae baat kar karhe the


Guard 1- yaar Ram tune kuch alag sa mahsus kiya hai, pichle kuch dino se yaha par..


Guard 2- kya alag mahsus kar liya bhai tune, sale kahi fir se tune daru to nahi pi rakhi kaam ke time..


Guard 1- chup sale main kabhi apne kaam ke samay daru nahi pita hu.. Main kuch aur bol raha tha..


Guard 2- huu achha hai tune daru nahi pi main to dar hi gaya tha ki kahi sahab ko pata chal gaya to kya hoga, wese kya alag mahsus kar raha tha tu ..


Guard 1- yaar dekh pahale is raste mae raat ko 12- 1 baje tak bhi chahal - pahal bani rahti thi, par abhi 2-3 dino se yeha to 8 baje ke baad Admi to kya ek kutta tak ki awwaj nahi sunai de rahi hai, kyu tujko kya lagta hai..


Guard 2 - ha bhai teri is baat se to main bilkul sahmat hu, par pata nahi yesa ho kya raha hai,


Guard 1- aur ek baat dhyan di hai tune ajj se pahle raat ko yaha tand nahi lagti thi is mausan mae par, ajj kal kuch tandak ka ahasaas ho raha hai..


Guard 2- bhai teri ye baat bhi sahi hai par samjh nahi aa raha hai ki ye ho kyu raha hai..


Guard 1- pata nahi bhai, chal 2 baj gaye hai ab un guard ka time suru ho gaya wo aa rahe..

Fir night dutie wale guard waha khade ho gaya aur ye dono guard apne apne man mae ye sawal kiya ki ye sab kuch ho kya raha hai nind ke agosa mae chale gaye..


Nay din ki surat ho chuki thi ajj bahut kuch hone wala tha bahut bada, Sumit ke parivaar ke liya ye ek bahut badi khushi ka din tha, aur Boss ke liya ye uske badle ka din tha aur Raka ke liya apna plan pura karne ka din tha, par in sabhi ki kadi ek se judi hui thi aur wo tha avi, jo aram se apne bad par soya hua tha, aur uske pass abha bathi hui thi.. Tabhi ek nurse ki entry hui (ye unhi mae se 1 thi jo avi je janam ke samay thi )


Abha - are neha (nurse 1 ) tum ye saman le kar kaha ja rahi ho, abhi to tumhari dutie thi na sneha ke saath rahne ki fir ye sab..


Neha - Ji mam ap sahi bol rahi ho but actually wo baat yesi hai ki mere ghar par mere dad ki taybat bahut jada kharaab ho chuki hai, wo apne last time mae hai to wo mujhe dekhna chahte hai, isliye..



Abha - wo am sorry mujhe koi idea nahi tha is baare mae, tumhara jara jaruri hai tum ja sakti ho par..


Neha - is ok mam sorry ki koi jarurat nahi hai aur app kya bolna chahti ho main sanjh chuki hu to app tension mat lijiye, ek new nurse ane wali hai wo partya ke samay aa jayegi yaha..


Abha - nayi nurse, kya wo tumhari tarah bharose wali hai na Neha yo no na what I mean..


Neha - ye man an definitely sure is his good too is work, she is also good person..


Abha - ok Neha bye take care about your father and yourself too..


Aur Neha bye bolkar chali gai, Abha wapis bed par bath gai aur avi ko bolne lagi


Abha- to hamare avi ke liya ek new nurse AAA rahi hai, let see wo kesi hai agar tumhara ya sneha ke khyaal mae todi bhi kami ho gai to 😠 , usko is ghar se bhar kar dungi .



Idhar Sumit aur amit partya ki sari tayari ki nigarani rakh rahe the saath mae security ki bhi, charo taraf security cameras ki nazar thi, guard ghar ke charo taraf nazar lagye hue the, har ane wali gadi ki achhe se cheking ki ja rahi thi..
Ab Sumit ke liya ye bahut bada din tha isliye usne almost shar ke sabhi bade business man ko invite kiya tha is partya ke liya
Ab jahir si baat hai ki jab shar ke top business man ayenge to security bhi wesi hi hogi, guard puri mutedi ke saath apna kaam kar rahe the bina invitation card ke kisi ko entry nahi di ja rahi thi, sabhi metal detector se ho kar gujar rahe the.. Sumit kuch jada hi satarka tha is chij ke liya kyukin wo janta tha ki uske dusman kuch na kuch jarur karenge, par amit ke uper usko pura bharosa tha , idhar sneha apna pura samay avi ke saath hi bita rahi thi, yaha tak ki who bhi khana bhi bhul jati thi, par abha ek acchi bahan ki tarah sneha ka pura khyaal rakh rahi thi..


Abha - sneha lav avi ko mujhe de aur tu niche ja, waha tere pados ke kuch aunties aai hui hai unse mil le..


Sneha- nahi yaar wo tu hi dekh main apne avi ko chod kar nahi jane wali hu,


Abha - sneha dekh wo log tere bulane par hi aaye hai na, koi aur hote to main welcome kar deti par wo tere padosee hai, samay ane par wo tere kaam bhi karte hai


Sneha- wese to mujhe mere avi se dur jane ka man nahi kar raha hai par fir bhi jana hoga, accha abha tune nehe ko dekha kya, wo subha se dikh nahi rahi hai..


Abha - are ha lagta hai wo tension mae tujko batana bhul gai, wo baat yesi hai ki

Fir sari baat abha ne sneha ko bata aur ye bhi ki koi new nurse aa rahi hai uske jagah..


Sneha- wo ye accha nahi hua ladki ke saath acchi thi kher koi baat nahi, accha tik hai main aati hu abhi unse mil kar.. Tu avi ke saath hi rahana


Abha - yes tu jaldi se ja aur aaram se aa main hu yaha par, aur agar kuch jarurt ho to call karna..

Ab idhar raka ne us aurat ko sab samajh diya aur apne Boss ke pass khabar kar di ki sab kuch tayar hai, ab bas injatara hai raat ka..


Tha partya start..


To samay ho gaya tha partya ka sumit ka pura ghar roshni se naha raha tha aur party sumit ne apne pool side par di hui thi jo kafi beautiful lag rahi thi..

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Idhar lagbhaga sabhi gest aa chuke the aur kuch aa bhi rahe the, dhimi lighting mae sab log party ka maja utha rahee the


Aur sumit aur sneha ko gift bhi de rahe, amit Bluetooth ki madad se apne guards kee saath laga hu tha satha mae gest par dhyaan bhi de raha tha..

Abha uper avi kee saath thi, kyun abhi avi ko niche lana save nahi tha..


Tabhi sumit kee kano main ek jani pahchani awaj padi , sumit pichhe muda to uski doctor khadi hui thi ( jo sneha ki treatment kar rahi thi)


Doctor- congratulations Mr and Mrs Thakur for baby boy..


Sneha- thank doctor for coming tonight and welcome my home..


Doctor- ok well where is your son, I want too see him..


Sumit- he is on room with abha, well doctor who is thi Lady..


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Doctor- wo sorry, to ye new nurse hai sayada mene apko inform kar diya tha, ya neha ne bataaya hoga iske baare mae


Sneha- yes neha ne bataaya tha mujhe ki new nurse aanee wali hai ajj wese kya naam hai tumhara..


Nurse- ye hello mam my name is komal sinha , well mam where is tha baby boy , I have to do my work


Sumit - abhi se, ap abhi to yaha aai ho aur abhi se apna kaam suru karne wali ho, pahle party enjoy kar lo


Doctor- sorry mr thakur she is only come for her work not westing time with anything..


Fir sneha un dono ko apne room mae le gai jaha abha avi ko sula rahi thi,


Doctor- wow 😮what a beautiful baby boy, Again congrats sneha, huu well helth, to kya nam rakha hai iska tum logo ne..


Abha - well iska naam avinash thakur rakha hai..


Doctor- huu good nam avinash thakur,


Abha - wese doctor ye apke saath kon hai..


Sneha-'are wo neha ne bataaya tha na ki uski jagah koi ane wali yahi hai wo nurse komal


Avi par us nurse ki nazar padi aur wo sochne lagi

Komal - to ye hai wo baccha jiski jindagi kee badle mujhe itne pese milne wale hai, wese baccha bahut masum hai par marna to isko padega hi..


Idhar abha ka call baja, jaha amit call par tha..


Amit - abha kaha ho tum, abhi tak party mae kyu nahi aayi ho..


Abha - wo amit main avi kee saath thi room mae


Amit - ok abhi avi ko tum nurse ya bhabhi ko de do yaha, tumhare mom dad niche tumhara wait kar rahe hai


Apne mom dad ke bare mae sun kar abha ne turant sneha ko bola ki..


Abha - sneha mere mom dad aa chuke hai, abhi amit ka call aya hai to tun avi ko dekho main abhi aati hu


Par idhar sneha ko baar baar niche bhulya ja raha tha smita ke wajha se, tab komal ko idea aaya or wo boli ...


Komal - mam app jaye niche main hu yaha par, ap aram se party enjoy kijie jab, baby ko niche lana hoga kisi ko uper bej dijiye ga...


Idhar nurse par bharosa karke sneha niche chali gai saath mae doctor bhi


Komal- wow main soch rahi thi ki ye kam bahut mushkil hoga par ye kaam to kitna asan ho gaya, bache wo sorry kya naam ha avi, avi thakur sorry for, par tumko marna hoga, tabhi mujko bahut sara money milega,

Ek choti si sisi nikalate hue


Komal - tum darna nahi ye ek alag tarah ka zahar hai, main tumko ye abhi dungi ye dhire dhire kaam karega aur tum jab so jawoge tab ye tumko hamesa ke liya sula dega aur iska koi nisana nahi milega kisi bhi Medical examination se so good bye avi..


Tabhi komal ke kano mae kuch awaj hui aur wo kadhi ho gai,

Awaj 1- good ab ye hamaaree control mae aa chuki hai, isko marna to hoga par yaha nahi le chalo isko is ghar ke bahar..


Awaj - jarur isko tadpa tadpa kar marenge akhira himmat kese hui ek insaan ki inko marne ke bare mae sochne ki bhi..

Fir wo nurse mind control ki wajha se niche chali gai aur sneha ko ye bol kar nikal gai ki, uski tabiyat kharaab hai wo kal se apni dutie join karegi


Idhar wo ek sunsan jungle mae chali gai aur mind control tut gyaan..

Komal- ahh mera sir, ye kya main.. Main yaha kya kar rahi hu, main to thakur ke ghar mae thi us bacche ko, ek minat wo awaj


Awaj - tum yaha hamari wajha se aai ho aur tum kahi nahi ja sakti ho


Komal idhar udhara gum kar dekhna lagi par usko kuch nahi dikh raha tha, wo ab dar rahi thi


Awaj- tumhari itni himmat hui ki tum, hamare rahate hue unko manre chali gai, ab hum tumko bataingi mout kese di jati hai


Komal- kon kon ho tum, main.. Main.. Nahi darti tumse himmat hai to samane aawo..


Awaj - woo to tum mujhe dekhna chahti ho tik hai, jo marne wala ho uski icha jarur puri karni chaahiye, dekho mujhe

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Aur wo samne aa gai, komal bas ankhe khole usko dekh rahi thi, uske per jam chuke the uski jaban jese bolna chod cuki thi.. Uske samane ek ladki khadi hui thi, uski ankhe bilkul safed thi aur usne ek throne pahana hua tha ..


Awaj - kya hua itne se dar gai abhi to bahut kuch baccha hai bahut kuch, tumhare sapne ha.. Ha..

Awaj - now fill tha pan, tha horrible dream come true ha.. Ha.. Ha..


Uski hansi se komal ne apni ankhe aur kan band kar liya, fir wo hashi ruk gai, aur jese hi komal ne apni ankhe kholi wo ek guffa ke andar thi, wo charo taraf dekhne lagi aur fir chilnae lagi


Komal - nahi.. Nahi.. Ye.. Ye nahi ho sakta ye.. Ye. Mera sapna hai.. Ha ye hakikat nahi hai, nahi nahi ho sakta ye kabhi par tabhi uske kano mae awaj gujni lagi


Sukhe ped ki patte ki awaj dhire dhire komal ki taraf bad rahi thi komal dar ki wajha se kuch nahi bol pa rahi thi aur uske samne uska dar tha, ek anaconda ke roop mae



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(anaconda ek vishaal sarp, filmo ki tarah nahi par lambe) par yaha baat kuch aur thi anaconda bilkul komal ki ankho mae dekhta hua, komal ko dhire dhire apni jankewa kundali mae kasne laga, dhire dhire komal ko apne pass aati mout ka ahasaas ho raha tha par wo sirf ro sakti thi aur kuch nahi tabhi uski pit ki hadi tut gai aur,

Komal- kkkkk aaaaahhhh,


uske mhu se khon nikal uski ankhe almost bahar aa chuki uska dam ghut raha tha aur uske sir ke uper anaconda mhh khol kar batha hua tha, aur komal uske mhu mae dhire dhire se ja rahi thi aur komal ki akhira chik nikali


Par komal ne apni ankhe khol di aur wo wahi par thi wo apni body ko dekhne lagi, sab kuch sahi tha, par wo manjar komal ki atama tak ko dara chuka tha


Awaj - to kesa mahsus ho raha hai tumko apne dar se samna karke accha lag raha hai na 😈.. Tu to sirf apne sapne ko hakikata mein dekh kar itna jada dar gai, aur tum sirf peso ke khatri kisi ki jaan lene wali thi, tum jeso ki mout alag honi chaahiye dard se bhari hui mout ha.. Ha.. Ha.. 😈


Komal apne gutno par aa gai thi wo puri tarah se tut chuki thi.. Uska sair uska saath nahi de raha jo usne dekha jo usne mahsus kiya, uski wajha se uske dil ki dadkan bahut tej ho gai thi, uske per uske sarir ka wajan nahi utha pa rahe the

Komal jaan chuki thi ki uska ye kaam uski zindagi ki akhri bhul thi, aur wo ye bhi jaan chuki thi ki wo marne wali, par wo ye soch kar kaap rahi thi ki uski mout kitni dardanaak ho sakti hai

Komal (rote hue ) please main main sab kuch bata dungi tumko mujko maar do please mujhe aur mat darao mujko maar do..


Tabhi ek aur awaj gunji - itni bhi kya jaldi hai tumko marne ki,mout ka ye khel to abhi suru hua hai, abhi to meri bari hai 😈

Aur samne ek aur kadhi hui thi


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😈 To be continued 😈
Plan to kaafi achcha tha Raka aur Boss ka, magar isme Doctor bhi mila hua hai ye thoda ajeeb tha ab Doctor ki kya dushmani thi Sumit se? Avi ki suraksha to uske janam ke saath hi hai to koi uska kya bigaad paayega. Ab dekhna hai ki Komal ki mout kitni bhayanaak hoti hai, superb.
 

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The flashback


Awaj 1- wo to tum bhi yaha aa gai mujhe laga tha, sirf main hi maja lungi, par tum yaha aa gai, par unke pass kon hai is samay..


Awaj 2 - unke pass wo hai, abhi wo unki suraksha kar rahi hai, par mujhe bhi to dekhna tha ki insaan kitna niche ja chuke hai..


Awaj 1- yes ajj ye peso ke liya dusro ko to kya, apno ki bhi mout dene se nahi chukte hai..


Awaj 2 - kher iske bare mae hum kabi aur baat kar lenge abhi jo kaam hamare samne hai usko karna chahiye..


Awaj 1- bilkul wese ye bahut jada dar chuki hai, aur ab isko khatm kar dena chaahiye to kya main..


Komal - nahi nahi mujhe mar do main , main kuch bhi nahi janti kisne ye karne ko bola tha main..


Awaj 2 - tumhari itni himmat ki hamare samne jhut bolo , aur uski ankho ki chamak bad gai aur uske ball bhi tode alag ho gaye, aur



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Komal ke sarir mae dard hone laga wo tadpne lagi


Komal- aaaa mmmmaaaa, nnnaahi mmmujko mmmmafffc kaaaarrr, aaaa mmmmaaaa..


Wo chikae lagi chilane lagi par uski awaj us jagah sunnee wala koi bhi nahi tha, tha sirf wo jungle aur uske janwar


Awaj 1- bas karo ruk jawo agar ye mar gai to hume puri baat kese pata chalee gi,


Awaj 2 - uske liya iska marna bhi to jaruri hai


Fir awaj 2 ne kuch ishara kiya aur uske samne ek ajib sa janvar aaya jo bahut hi bhayankar dikh raha tha, komal usko dekh kar dar gai par wo chuki bhi nahi paa rahi thi..



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Awaj 2- dekho mene tumhare liya kisko bhula kiya, iska naam " blood eater "hai ye har jivat chij ka khun chusta hai, par ye toda sa alag hai kyukee iski blood line pure hai,
Jab ye tumhara blood pine lagega tab hume tumhari yaade dikhni suru ho jayengi, kyoki insan jhuth bol sakta hai par uski yaade nahi.. Aur hume pata ye sab kuch din pahale hi hua hoga, "blood eater "jawo tumhara sikar tumharee samne hai.. ,


"Well little girl, yo are lucky in tha last time for your life you fulfill someone hunger " 😈


Aur wo blood eater komal ke pass Jane laga, komal ki mout ab uske pass aa rahi thi, wo janti thi wo marne wali hai, par is tarah se ye bilkul nahi.. Wo piche jane ki kosis karneagi par ab kuch nahi ho sakta tha


Fir blood eater ne komal ke gale ko pakad kar uske khada kiya aur,
Ki, ki, ki, aur apne lambe dat uske kandhe par gussa diya..


Awaj 2- ah main ek baat batana bhul hi gai, jab tak ye tumhara khun pita rahega tum marigi nahi..


Idhar blood eater ki ankho se ek roshni nikli aur age ek seen chalane laga, ye wese hi tha jese hum Projector se kuch dekhte hai..


To ye seen raka aur komal ki meeting tha.. Jaha wo baat kar rahe the.. Aur raka intajaar kar raha tha


Raka - billa tune to bola tha ki usko pahle hi tune message kar diya hai to abhi tak wo aai kese nahi hai, tu janta hai na ki ye kaam kitna jaruri hai mere liye, isme kisi bhi tarah ki galti bardaasht nahi kar sakta main..


Billa - janta hu Boss ache tarike se janta hu, aur usne bola ki wo abhi **** hospital mae jaldi hi aa jayegi..


Kuch 30-40 mint ke baad billa ke mobile par massages aaya, jise dekh billa bola..


Billa - bhai ho purane pull ke pass pahunch chuki hai, to kisi ko bej du usko lane ke liya..


Raka - nahi ye kaam hamara hai aur wo hamare liye jaruri hai, to tu jankar usko yaha la, aur billa bhale hi wo yaha aa rahi hai par, usko pata nahi lagna chahiye ki ye kon si jagha hai, uske ankh mae patti band kar lana..


Billa raka ke kahane par usko lane ke liya nikal pada kuch der baad wo us tak pahuch bhi gaya ..


Bill - aur komal kesi hai, peso ki wajha se kafi, acchi dikh rahi hai tu..


Komal - sab apki wajha se hi to hua hai sir, agar us raat ko app mujko wo offer nahi dete to main sayad hi yaha tak pahuch pati..


To komal pahle ek part time Collgirl ki job karti thi, kyukee wo peso ki bahut bhuki thi,wese to wo medical ki students the par usko ,muski man mutabik job nahi mil rahi thi,to wo jada pesa kamane ke liye Collgirl ki job karti thi aur ek din uski mulakat billa se hua, uske jism se billa bahut khush ho gaya aur yese hi mulakte badti gai , is bich billa ko uski kamjori ka pata chal gaya aur usne apne gang mae samil bhi kar liya..
Komal ko pahle billa ne ek hospital mae job laga di, aur komal apne dam par upper chadti gai aur billa ke kahane par, medicine ki jagha drugs ko yaha se waha beja karti thi..


Billa - are nahi wo to sab tumhari mehnat ka natija hai, wese wo mall tumhe *** shar bhej diya na..


Komal - ha wo ajj raat ko 10 baje nikal chuka hai sayad 2-3 baje tak pahuch jayega..


Billa- tik hai par ajj tumhe Boss ne ek bahut hi jaruri kaam ke liya bulaaya hai, to jara aaram se Boss ki bato ko samjhna.. Tik hai..


Ye bol kar Billa ne ek kale rang ki patti komal ki taraf ki, komal jan gai ki billa kya bolna chaata hai, aur usne apni ankho par usko bandh liya..


Todi der baad dono us jagha pahuch chuke the, biila ne komal ka hath pakad kar usko andar le gaya aur kursi par bitha diya, aur uski patti khol die, samne raka batha hua tha..


Raka - huu dekho mujko billa ne tumhare bare mae sab kuch bata diya hai, aur mujko lagta hai ki ye kaam tum kar sakti ho, to suno ek bachche ko marna ko..


Komal- hu bacche ko jab billa ne mujko phone kiya to laga ki koi bada kaam hoga par baccha..


Raka - mujko wo log bilkul bhi pasand nahi jo meri baat bich nae kaat dete hain..


Komal- sorry, app apni baat puri kijiye. Main sun rahi hu.. Par bacche ko kyu..


Raka- bacche ko kyu marna hai isse tumko koi matlab nahi hai, ye lo is admi ke saath tum uske ghar kal party main jawogi aur usko khatm karoge aur ye rahi us family ki photo..


Komal photo dekh kar turant boli.


Komal - ye to Mr and Mrs Smith sneha thakur hai na to inke ghar jana hai mujko,


Raka- huu to tun in dono ko acche se janti ho..


Komal- ha bilkul ye meri jo Boss hai unke pass aate rahte hai aur kal mujko inke ghar bhi jana hai, party ke liya Boss ke saath


(Dutie ki baat komal ko subha malum hui)


Raka kuch sochne laga fir bola..


Raka - fir to muskil ho jayegi wo tumko acche tarah se jante hai upper se tum apni Boss ke satha jawogi to kaam kese hoga..


Komal - kaam kese hoga ye meri problam hai pesa kitna milega..


Raka - samjdar ho 50 lakh advans aur 1 c kaam hone ke baad, par kaam puri safai se hona chaahiye koi bhi nisana na rahe..


Komal- uski chinta mat karo, abhi abhi hamare lab mae ek new venom (zahar) ki testing ho rahi hai, ye zahar yesa hai ki adi kisi ke andar daal di jaye to ye zahar 6-7 ghanto ke baad kaam karega aur admi ki mout hone ke baad ye 30 mint ke andar hi puri tarha se insaan ki body se gayab ho jata hai, koi bhi ye nahi pata kar sakata ki insan ki mout hui kese, bilkul natural death..


Raka - wha bahut khub jitni sundar tum ho tumhara dimag utna hi tej hai, matlb kal wo zahar..


Komal- bilkul aur mujh par koi sak bhi nahi kar sakta kyukin wo sab mujko acche se jante hai..


Raka - tik hai ye lo tumhare 50 lakh baki kaam hone ke baad, fir kaam hone ke baad milte hai, billa isko chod kar aa ja


Aur idhar komal ki ankho mae fir se patti bandhi aur idhar blood eater ne wo seen khatm kar diya,


Awaj 1- wo to ye sirf ek mohara thi, master ki jaan lene ke liya isko us admi ne kaam par lagya tha..


Awaj 2 - to ye sab kisi aur ki planing thi , tum apni soul searching technique ka upayog karo aur pata karo wo sab kaha hai is samay


(Soul Technique kisi bhi marte hui jiv antim baar kaha kaha gaya tha iske bare mae pata karna)


Awaj 1 komal ke pass gai jo 99% mar chuki thi, ab uski ankhe band hone lagi aur antim samaya mae usko sab kuch yaad aa gaya ki kese peso ke liya usne hajaro lakho ki jindagi mae ,drags naam ka zahar gol diya,aur ajj usi ki wajha se mout usko lene aa gai thi,


Awaj 1 ne apna komal ke sir par rakha ek roshni komal ke andar gai aur komal ki mout ho gai


Awaj 1- wo yaha se 5 km ki duri par ****jungle ke niche chupe hue hai, bahut se log hain, sabhi kisi tarah ki chije pakde hue hai (gun) ..


Awaj 2- tik hai ,is ladki ko body ko aag laga do,and send him to netherworld (hell ) and for them 😈


" human being things they are only living beings in the universe, but they don't no there are many people who live, and there power level behind there imagination "


"Let's Begin The Hunt "


😈 To be continued 😈
Wah kya jabardast security system hai Avi ka full hitech. Memories, location sab kuch track kar sakte hai, ek dum mast. Mohra to khatam hua ab haathi ghodo ki baari hai uske baad vazeer aur Raja ka number lagega.
 

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Mega Update 7


The Hunt part- 2


Awaj - ok par hum to unko yahi se khatm kar sakte hai, for killing humans it's just kill a ant for us Wright


Awaj 2- yes for being like us it's to easy, but it's to boring too kill then without fear..


Awaj 1- so kya karana chaiye humko, agar unke mout deni hai to kis tarah se de..


Awaj 2- is ladki komal ki tarah apni body bana lo. Aur unke pass jawo fur suru karenge Hunt..


Awaj 1- matlab main use karu body copy technique Wright..


(Body copy technique jiski madad se kisi ka bhi roop liya ja sakata hai, par ye technique kisi dusre ki aura ko copy nahi kar sakti hai, level ke upper depend karta hai)


Awaj 2- yes aur kuch karne ki jarurat nahi wese bhi, wo nahi jaan paynge ki tum koi aur ho, ab chalo suru karte hai ajj ka khel..


Awaj 1 ne apni ankhe band ki aur kuch hi der mae bilkul komal ki tarah ho gai, satha mae uski awaj bhi..


Awaj 2- good ab bas chalo waha uske baad agge ka plan decided karte hai..


Wo dono gayab hue aur usi jagha aayee jaha se komal ne billa ko message kiya, matlab purana pull ke pass


Fir awaj 2 ne komal ke mobile ko pakad kar jesa komal ne kiya tha pahle billa ko message same message dubaara send kar diya


Ab idhar billa ka mobile baja par usse pahle billa aur raka kuch baat kar the kya baat thi wo


Todi der pahale


Idhar Raka daru pine ki tayaar kar rahe the saath mae matan bhi tha aur bahut tarah ki dishes thi tebal ke uper


Billa - kya baat hai bhai ajj se pahle to app itna khush kabhi nahi dikhee bast kya hai, adde par hi daru murga aur ye sab puri party hi mana rahe ho app to ajj..


Raka- are billa party nahi karu to kya karu, ajj raat ko uddar komal apna kaam kar degi aur hume Boss peso se nahla denge, jindagi bhar fir bath kar khana hai, aa tu bhi enjoy kar aa ja..


Billa- bhai wo sab tak tik hai par pata nahi kyu mujhe komal par kuch sak ho raha hai


Billa - kya matlab hai billa, tune to kaha wo bharose wali hai..


Billa - baat wo nahi hai bhai, par kaam bahut bada hai aur pese bhi aur komal jesi chalake aurat par itni jaldi bharosa nahi karna chaahiye..


Raka - ha.. Ha.. Ha.. (Hasta hua) sabas billa sabas, tu sach mae mera sabse wafadar admi hai, main bhi yahi soch raha tha par dekhna chahta tha ki tu kuch bolega ki nahi..


Raka- wese bhi Boss ne kaha tha ki kaam ho jane ke baad, kaam karne wale ko khatm kar de, taki baad mae hume koi paresani na ho..


Ab aage...


Komal ke mobile se aaya hua message dekh billa kuch soch mae pad gaya, aur usko Sant dekh raka bola


Raka - billa kya hua tujko, abhi to khush lag raha tha aur abhi, kya hua kahi hamara plan to..


Billa - nahi boss yesi baat nahi hai, par abhi komal ka message aaya hai, wo pure pull ke pass hai..


Raka - kya par usne bola tha ki, wo wahi rukegi ajj raat ko fir ye sab kya hai, billa lagta hai kuch gadbad hai..


Billa - mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai boss, kahi us sali ne, kuch aur to nahi socha hai, kahi jada pese too..


Raka - huu ab usne kya socha aur kya kiya, ye tabhib pata Chalega jab wo bolegi, tu ek kaam kar usko yaha le aa, pata to chale ki baat kiya hai,
Wese bhi usko marna to hai hi..


Idhar raka ke bolne se billa komal ko lane chal diya, par usko ye nahi pata tha ki wo, un sab ki mout ko lane ja raha hai.. Aur billa komal ke pass gadi rok kar puchne laga


Billa - komal tum yaha kya kar rahi ho, ye to hamara plan nahi tha, aur kaam ka kya hua, tum


Komal(awaj 1- ) - tum todi der chup nhi rah sakte main tumhari nukar nahi hu samjhe, aur wese bhi, mujhe raka se baat karni hai, usake Gulam se nahi..


Billa apne bare mae is tarha ki baat sun kar bilbila utha aur gusse mae aa gaya par wo khel nahi bigadna chhata tha isliye usne bola


Billa - tik hai chalo boss ke pass aur ye patti banad lo..


Komal- main ye gandi si sasti patti kyu bandu, mene importent patti li hai, bahut pese hai ab mere pass, tu gadi chala bas


Billa- (man mae) sali tode pese kya aa gaye apni aukat bhul gai, agar main nahi hota to, tu ajj bhi dhande wali hoti..
Ruk ja sali ek baar hamare adde par chal tujko kutiya na banaya to mera naam billa nahi..


Billa apne gusse ko control mae karta hua, apne adde par pahucha aur komal ka hath pakdne laga


Komal- dur dur raho mujhase mujko mat chu, tumhare sarir se pasine ki badbu aa rahi hai, pata nahi nahaya (shower) ho ki nahi, mujko rasta bata do main kud chali jaungi..


Billa (man mae) - madar chod ajj tak sala kisi aurat ne meri itni bajati nahi ki sali tujko ko to main apne logo ke mut se nahla dunga, bas kuch der aur..


Aur billa dant pista hua, komal ke saath andar chala gya, raka apne room mae bath kar CICI tv ki madad se ye sab dekh raha tha,


Raka ( man mae) - billa to iski bahut tarif kar raha tha, aur jab pahali baar aai to yesi nahi thi fir ye sab, kuch to gadbad hai..


Idhar billa jese tese apne app ko kabhu karte hue komal ko raka tak le aaya, par aate wakt bhi komal ne billa ki ijat puri utar diya thi


Raka - komal is tarah se bina bataye tum yaha kyu aa gai aur tum is tarah se


Komal- are abhi to yaha aai hu, Pahle bethne to kuch tanda do, fir baate karna, wese bhi main tumhari Gulam nahi in jese ( billa ki taraf isara karke)


Idhar komal ki ye baat sun raka ka dimag bhi garam ho gaya par , uski majburi thi wo janana chaahata tha ki kaam hua ki nahi, aur komal yaha kyu hai, isiliye usne komal ke liya Coldrik manga li, komal aaram se Coldrik pi fir boli..


Komal- ha to kya bol rahe the tum kaam yaha kyu..


Raka - ha main ye bol raha tha ki kaam pura hua ya nahi


Komal- nahi kaam pura nahi hua


Raka ( gusse se) - kya 😠 kaam pura nahi hua kyu nahi hua kaam pura..


Komal- kyuki mene pura nahi kiya kaam isliye..


Billa - sali main jab dekh raha hu teri juban bahut chal rahi sidhe bata kaam kyu nahi kiya..


Komal - abe kalyay tu apni jaban band hi rakh, ha to meri marji jab mae waha gai tab pata chala ki wo koon hai, acchi tarah se, intni police aur security, tab mene soche kaam ke badle jo kimat tum de rahe ho bahut kam hai, isliye kaam nahi kiya..


Raka - to bol kitni kimat cahiye tumko


Komal- 10 c , aur wese bhi itna to main jaan chuki hu ki, tum kisi bade admi ke pale hue kuute ho, to usase puch lo pahle..


Raka - sali ab tak teri bakwas sun raha tha ab aur nahi, billa is sali ko dal de us room nae jab hamare log, isko noch lenge tab isko pata chalega ki kon hai hum ..


Bila komal ko pakade wala tha ki komal uth gai aur boli, - main kudh chali jaungi mai bhi to dekhu kitni aukat hi tum paltu kuuto mae


Billa ne uskk ghuse mae ek room nae le yaha aur bhar se room band kar diya aur ghuse se raka ke pass gaya, aur ek puri sarab ki botal saaf kar gaya.. Aur guuse se bola


Billa - boss agar ye kutiya un logo se bach gai to isko, har roj naye logo ke pass bech denge, tab tak jab tak mera man na bhare aur har roj -4-4 admi ke saath iska reap hona chaahiye boss.. Sali ne bahut beijat ki hai mujko..


Raka- wo tik hai par tune ek baat gor ki, yaha aane ke baat aur ye sab hone ke baad bhi, uske chahre par ek sikan nahi thi, ek aurat hone ke baujad..


Billa - ha bhai, Warna koi aurat apni izzat ki baat aane par itna Sant kese rah sakti hai, agar ek randi ko bhi is tarah se damki mile to wo bhi dar jaye par isko


Raka- wo sab baad mae, par pahle ye sochna hoga ki, boss ko kya jawab de..


Idhar us room mae total 20 log the sab log komal ko ghur kar dekhte hue bole..


1- wah bhai ajj tak itna badiya mall nahi dekha mene


2 - kya mast badan hai sali ka maja hi aa jayega usko nochne mae


3- nahi isko to bade aaram se dhire dhire karke saf karenge


4- sahi hai pahle hum 4 isko ragad lenge fir baki ke log, kya mast mall diya hai boss ne, ajj ki raat to maja hi maja


Awaj 2- ab khel suru karte hai, tumhari baari ****


Ab komal nahi awaj 2 likhunga


Awaj 2- wo to tum sab ka yahi kaam hai aurato ki jisam ke saath khelane ka, kyu karte ho ye sab


2- hi.. Hi.. Gyan de rahi hai chal sun bhi ke, hamare log aurto, aur ladkiya ko pakad kar yaha late hai aur unko kothe par bej dete hai, par jo aurat jada nahkra karti hai, usko hum noch lete hai, aur issme Hume bahut maja aata hai haaa..


3- aur ajj teri baari, hai par tu bahut hi kamsin hai tere saath to bahut maje kee satha sab kuch hoga


Ab usne komal ki body ko hata diya aur ek ajib se roop mae aa gai , (ek vampire ke roop mae) jis ko dekh kar wo sabhi piche hat gaye dar ki wajha se



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Awaj 2- tum logo ne ajj tak bahut aurte ke sarir ko nocha hoga na ajj, aurte tumhe nochengi, par ye aurte todi alag hongi, aawo meri gulamo tumhara khana tumhare samne hai.. Awo..


Aur fir waha bahut si ladkiya aa gai jo bahut hi khubasoorat dikha rahi thi



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Par sirf kuch samay tak kyuki wo badal gai aur ek bure sapne ki tarah, un logo ke samne khadi ho gai
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Ab un logo ke samne aurat ka naya rup tha ek kofnk roop, jisse dekh kar wo piche hatne lage, par jaye kaha room mae ek hi darwaja tha, jaha wo sabhi kadhi hui thi.


Awaj 1- go my girl, and show him , fell back the pan hi giving another woman,
Khatm kar do inko par , dhire dhire aaram se inko body ke ek - ek part ko aaram se inki body se dur karna,


"let's begin the Hunt "


Aur fir us kamee se Aani lagi chiko ki awwje, dardanaak chike, raham ki bhik mangne wali chinke, aur hasne wali aawaje


Idhar kuchh admi us darwaje ke pass kaan laga kar sunne lage par jab, unke hi logo ki dard bhari awwje aane lagi wo turant raka ke pass bhag gaye..


Raka- kya hua re tum sab is tarah se kyu bhag kar aa rahe ho mere pass, kya hua police to nahi


Admi - nahi bhai us us kamre se bahut chinke ki awwaj aa rahi hai..


Raka- achha to hamare admi acche se seva kar rahe hai us kutiya ki..


Admi - kutiya nahi bhai, ye chikhe to hamare admio ki hai..


Tabhi un sab ki awwaj itni tej ho gai ki , us pure underground jagah mae gunj uthi,.. Awaj sunte hi raka billa sabhi us or baghe aur samne ka nazara kuch aur hi tha.. Pure room khun aur dead body se pada hua tha aur 1 ladki raka ko dekhne lagi



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Raka ek bahut bada gunda tha usne bahut khun dekha tha bahut se logo ko usne apne hathom se mout ke ghat utara tha par is tarha ke nahi, un logo ki body ka har part idhar udhara pada hua tha aur ek jagah to
Ek female ghost kisi admi ke dil ko kha rahi thi bade chao ke saath..



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Ye manjar bahut hi kofnak tha, waha us sab logo ke liye, kyuki ye unhonne pahli aur ahkri baar dekha tha
Raka - ye.. Ye.. Sab. Ye sab hai, yaha to komal. Komal ko laya gaya tha ye sab


Tabhi andar se awaj 1 bhar aai aur wo komal ke roop se vampire ke roop mae unke samne badal gai, aur dekh jitne log waha the sabhi jamin mae gir gaye


Billa- komal.. Komal tu, tum ek, ek vampire ho, par ye ye kese ho sakta hai vampire to sirf kitabo mae tum ye sab ....


Awaj 1- komal wo ladki usko to humne pahle hi maar diya hai, aur ye sab yaha aane ke liya humne kiya tha, ab tum, tum sab maroge..


Raka samjh chuka tha ki is baar uska samna ki alag power se pada hai, isliye usne bachne ke liya bola..


Raka - dekho tumhe jo bhi chahiye, main sab de dunga, Hume humne mata maro,


Awaj - jo main cahu wo tum mujko de sakte ho


Billa- ha. Ha. Bilkul app bas bolo hum sab ka intajaam kar lenge


Awaj 1- huu par ye main decide nahi kar sakti hu, jo tumhare pichhe khadi hui hai wo bata sakti hai..



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Aur piche wo khadi hui thi, aur wo boli.


Awaj 2- meri ye bachiya bahut buki hai tumhare in 20 admiyo se inka pet nahi bhara, aur yaha too bahut sare admi hai 😈, to jawo aur apna Sikar khud kar jawo.. Par in dono ko kuch nahi karna inko bhi dekhne do mout kesi hoti hai, mout ka dar kya hota hai😈


Awaj 2 ka isara pate hi wo sabhi age bandi lagi ISI bich kuch admio ne unko goli bhi chala par, wo ye dekh aur dar gaye ki un goliyao ke lagte hi wo aur khulakar ho gai,
Ab wo sab bhagne lage , aur fir us jagah gujne lagi un sabhi ki chinke akhri chinke, dard bhari, jab koi unki ankhe nikal leti, koi hath, koi per to koi unke kano ko puri tarah se ched kar deti
, wo sabhi ko tadpa tadpa kar, kahne lagi, sabhi ko zinda hi usne sine ko apne lambe lambe nakuno se noch -noch karke unki skin ko chaba chaba kar khane lagi,


Idhar billa aur raka ye sab kuch apni ankho ke samne hota hua dekh rahe the, wo hil nahi paa rahe the na bol rahe the, unki ankho mae dar ki wajha se anshu aur unki pant bhi gili ho chuki thi, ajj unko dar ka asli matlb samjh mae aaya tha..


Us pure underground jagah main ab bas khun hi khun bacha hua tha aur un logo ki hadiya , un Ladkiyo ne sab ko khatm kar diya


Raka - mujhe mujhe chod do main sab kuch bata dunga,par ye sab kyu humne kya bigada hai tumhara


Awaj 1- ab bhi nahi samjhe jisko marne ki tum sab planing kar rahe the,hum unki guard hai ..


Raka - dekho dekho Mujko maff kar do ye ye sab mene nahi kiya mere boss ne ye sab kiya,main bata deta hu unka naam..billa bol re


Billa - ha bhai sahi boll rahe hai humari koi galti nahi hai ye sab usne kiya hum bata dete hain


Awaj 2- uski koi jarurat nahi hai kyuki hun sab dekh lenge,aur tum dono 😈


Awaj 2 un ladkiya ki or isara kiya aur un Ladkiyo ne raka aur billa ko pakad liya..


Raka - nahi.. Nahi hme mar do, inke hawale mat karo humko nahi...


Par wo un dono ko kichti hui gayab ho gai..


Awaj 1 - yaha bahut sara pesa hai aur ye sab chije bhi kya karna hai in sab ka


Awaj 2- pesa apne pass rakho jab master bade ho jaye, kya pata ye sab unke kaam aa jaye. Aur is jagah ko khatm kar do puri tarah se,


Awaj 1- par us boss ka kya kare, jo in sab chijo ke piche, asli plan to usi ka tha na,to kya usko bhi khatm kar de 😈


Awaj 2- no not this time, master kudh usko khatm karenge, agar sab ko hum hi khatm kar denge to kya maja, let give him little bit more days until the master come..


Awaj 1- master se yaad aya kya tumko wo din yaad hai , jab humne unko apna master mana tha aur wo oath ( promise ) kiya tha..


Awaj 2 - kese bhul sakti hu main jab hum sab ne mil kar kaha tha


"It's don't matter What path you choose Master, we're and we will always follow you Master"


😈 To be continued 😈
Wow kya mout ka nanga naach hua hai, ek dum mast sabki aatma to insab shaitaano ko dekh ka hi unki body ko chodhne ke liye machal gayi hongi. Very nice.
 
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