Fantasy 🗼 TOWER OF GOD

[Itachi_Uchiha]

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[JAI]

UPDATE - 9.1



Ab tak aap e dekha dosto ki kaise mai, aur khun hill ke piche hi chupe rahte hai ki test over ho jata hai. Aur bache hue 200regulars ko turant hi ek dusra test de diya jata hai. Jisme hme 5 min ke ander hi 3 Regulars ki ek team banani thi. Mai aur Khun Plan karke jate hai aur apne bato me fasa kar Rak ko apne team me samil kar leta hai. Wahi Parkash, Sandeep aur Ruhi ke bich samjhauta karwa kar kud us team ka leader bnana cahta tha. Lakin Sandeep aur Ruhi kud ek team bana kar waha se uski baat sune bina nikal lete hai.​

AB AAGE....


Hum sare log wo team test bhi paas karke EVENKHALL'S me aa cuke the. Jaha hmara agla test hone wala tha.
Ye ek bahut hi bada hall tha jisme 1000+ log bhi aaram se khade ho skte the. Ekdam samne ek bada sa stage type ka bana hua tha.
Yaha hamare alawa aur bhi bahut sare aas hue regulars the.sare log caro taraf aur baki dusre regulars ko dekhte hue aage stage ki taraf ja rahe the.
Mostly inme alag alag prajati ke regulars hi the. Ek eye aur lambe balo wala aadmi, bodybuilder, Mask pahne hue ,ajib se kpde pahne hue aise hi na jane kitne log the.

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Parkash sub taraf dekhte hue kahta hai " To ye hai EVENKHALL'S jaha hamara 2nd test hona hai. "
( Dusre Regulars ko dekhte hue ) " Wow, Ye sare hi dikhne me powerful aur kathor lag rahe hai. "
" Har koi yaha par dekhne se aisa lag raha hai ki wo aaj tak kabhi nahi hara hai. "
" Ye sare 1st test ke survivors bhi hai. "
" Ab mujhe feel ho raha hai ki asli test ab kahi ja kar suru hone wala hai. "
" Mai bahut jyada excited hu. "

Parkash Apne right side me santi se samne dekhte hue chal rahe Sandeep ki taraf dekh kar usase puchta hai " Tm kya soch rahe ho Sandeep ? "
" Kya tum in sare powerful logo ko dekhne ke liye excited nahi ho ? "
" Kya tumhari worrier spirit ye sb dekh kar increase nahi ho rahi hai ? "

Sandeep ( santi se samne dekhte hue ) " Tmhare is badbad karne wale muh ke karan mere words tumhare upar Attack karna cahte hai, Parkash. "

Parkash ( normally ) " Ohh... Aisi baat hai kya ? "

Fir Parkash apne left side me Sandeep ki tarah santi se chal rahi Ruhi se kahta hai " Well ! To Ruhi tmhe kaisa feel ho raha hai ? "
" Kya tumhe bhi excitement feel nahi ho raha hai ya .... "

Ruhi ek look Parkash ko dekhte hue bich me hi bol padti hai " Are ha mai excited hu. "
" Mai bahut jyada exited hu tumhare jaise ek badbad karne wale ek useless ladke ke team me aa kar. "

Lakin Parkash ko to jaise inki bato se koi fark hi nahi padta hai. Wo wo normally kahta hai " Ah... Thik hai. "
" Tum dono... Mere khyal se tum dono abhi mujhe thik se janti nahi ho."
" Lakin mai such me bahut strong hu. Maine deadly martial arts sikha hua hai. "

Ye sun kar Sandeep aur Ruhi dono dusri taraf dekhte hue apne man me ek hi baat soch rahi hoti hai ' Hmse juth mat bolo. '

Parkash ( dono ki taraf bari bari dekhte hue ) " Tmhe pata hai, mera martial arts ek secret form of combat hai. Jo ki tower me kuch special purani generation se new generation ko paas hota aa raha hai. "

Sandeep aur Ruhi ek sath " Apna muh band kro. "



Wahi inse hi thodi duri par ek yellow hair nd eyes wali ek cute si ladki thi uska name Ritu tha. Usne pink frock pahna hua tha. Aur apne back par usne ek brown bag carry kiya hua tha.
Wo apne sath hi khade ek lambe chaude handsome se ladke ko jiska name Kapil tha. jisne knight ki uniform pahni hui thi dekhte hue thodi ghbra kar kahti hai " Mai aaj tak itni bhid wali jagah par kabhi nahi gayi hu, Kapil..."
" Mujhe yaha bahut dar lag raha hai. "

Kapil (Ritu ko dekh ke pyar se ) " Aap bilkul tention mat lo lady Ritu. "
" Mai hamesa aapka shield ban kar aapke samne khada rahunga. "

Ritu ( Kapil ko dekh kar smile karte hue ) " Oh god ! Tum kitne sweet ho. "

Wahi in logo se thoda hi piche chal raha inke team ka 3rd member jiska name Sani tha. Jisne ek black full t-shirt pahna hua tha. Wo in dono ko dekh kr apne man me sochta hai ' Yaha to pyar khil raha hai. '

Fir Sani Kapil ke paas ja kar kahta hai " Hey Kapil , mai bhi aaj tak itne jyada logo ke bich nahi gaya hu. "

Kapil ( normal tone me ) " Mere khyal se tum logo ke sath ghume milne me ache nahi ho.

Sani " jo bhi ho... "

Fir wo tino samne ki taraf jane lagte hai.



THUMP... THUMP...

Aise hi ek aur team stage ki taraf santi se ja rahi hoti hai. Us team me ek bahut bade body wala red hair wala ladka hota hai jiske back par red color ke hi wings hote hai. Uske solder par hi ek ek choti si puch wali ladki baithi hoti hai. Nd uske right side me unke team kalast member chl raha hota hai. Jisne dark red color ki ek topi pahani hui thi.

Inhe dekh kr kuch Regulars aapas me bate karne lagte hai.

Ek regular " Ohh.. ye wahi ref hair wala ladka hai na. "
" Aakhir isne team test kaise paas kar liya ? "

2nd regular ( uski taraf dekhte hue ) " ohh !! Ye ladka ... "
" 1st test me ye jis kisi se bhi mila tha isne un sub ke upar Attack kiya tha. "
" Aur isne un sub ko bina kisi raham ke maar diya tha. Ye bahut hi jyada kathor hai. "

1st regular " Aakhir koi iske sath team up kaise kar skta hai ? "
" Mujhe ye baat smjh me nahi aa rahi hai. "

2nd regular ( uske teammates ki taraf dekh kar ) " Well, dekhne se uske teammates bhi koi ordinary log nahi lag rahe hai. "



Ek aur team stage se kuch duri par thi. Jisme ek hi ladka tha jo ki wahi jamin par ek pillow nd blanket liye hue so raha tha.
Uske paas hi do ladkiya khadi thi ek lambe yellow hair wali thi. Jiske sir par ek red color ka singh nikala hua tha. Nd dusri ladki normal si thi. Usne ek black color ka solderless top pahna hua tha.

Black top wali ladki, ladke ki taraf dekh kr " Aakhir ye jab se mila hai tab se lagatar so kyu raha hai ? "
( Singh wali ladki ko dekh kr ) " Tmhe pakka pata hai ki hum iske upar yakin kar skte hai ? "

Singh wali ladki ( smile krte hue ) " hahaha, mujhe guarantee de skti hu ki ye storng hai. "


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Wahi in sb se piche mai aur khun, Rak ka ek ek hath pakad ke stage ke paas jate hue chro taraf dekh rahe the.

Mai ( chro taraf dekhte hue ) " Amazing intne sare regulars logo ne test paas kiya hai. "

Khun ek smile ke sath " Well, dekh kr aisa lagta hai ki yaha 100 se bhi jyada regulars hai. "
" Aur itna to pakka hai ye sare chune hue log hi hai. "
" To isme koi shak ki baat nahi hai ki, ye sare test paas karke yaha aaye hue hai. "
( Baki regulars ki taraf isara karte hue ) " sambhal kar rahna, Ruhaan. Inme se kuch ke paas unusual power hai. "
" Inme se kuch cheap aur gande player bhi honge. "
" Residantial area se select hone ke baad jo bhi yaha, aaye hote hai un sb ke paas kam se kam ek extraordinary talent jarur hota hai. "
" To inme se kisi ko bhi kam smjhne ki bhool kabhi mat karna. "
" Yaha par jitne bhi regulars hai sare kahtarnak dusman hai. "
" Well ! Mujhe pura yakin hai ki hum yaha sbse strongest team hai. "
( Smile ke sath ) " Quki hmara leader, awesome aur powerful Mr. Crocodile jo hai. "

Mai ( Rak ko dekh ke haste hue ) " Sahi kaha tmne. "

Tab Rak gusse me Khun ka hath jhtak deta hai aur kahta hai " kon kya hai ? Tum sale dimak laga kar mujhe fasane wale turtle. "
" Mere paas se apne hath ko dur rakho.

Khun ( Tak ko dekh ke ) " ouch ! Tum aone ek teammates ke sath aisa kaise kar skte ho ? "

Rak ( gusse se ) " Tum mere teammate nahi ho. Samjhe tum sale gadhe. "







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nice update dear

 

[Bhupinder Singh]

UPDATE - 9.2​

AB AAGE....


Sare log aise hi us hall me jagah dekh kr apne apne team ke sath baith jate hai. Aur agle instructions ka wait krne lagte hai.
Tabhi ek jagah se ek red hair ladke ki chillane ki aawaj aati hai.

Red hair boy " Aakhir maine tmko dundh hi liya. "
" Mai tumhe maar dalunga. "

Itna kah kr wo ek team ke paas aata hai jisme ek bauna tha jisne apne back par dono side sword rakhi hui thi. Ek lamba se slim ladka tha jisne silver colour ka ek long gown type kapda pahna hua tha. Aur aakhiri member bhi ek ladka hi tha jiske ek hath me red color ki ek sword thi. Usne Red color ki ek ponny teil banayi hui thi kud ke balo me.

Red hair wala ladka us ponny tail wale ke t shirt ke coller ko apne left hath se pakad kar bahut jyada gusse me kahta hai " Dekho tmne mere hath ka kya haal kiya hai ? "
" Tum ab ise wapas se kaise sahi kar sakte ho batao ? "
" Huh ? Bolo ? "

Ponny tail boy ( santi se use dekhte hue ) " Mai nahi janta. "
" Mere khyal se tumhe ek stick buy karke use apne is hath ke sath attach kar lena cahiye. "

Red hair boy ye sun kar bahut gusse me aa jata hai aur lagbhag chillate hue kahta hai " kya kaha ? "
" Tum sale..... "

Darsal baat ye hui thi ki first test ke time ponny tail wale boy ne us red hair boy ke right hath ko apne sword se pura cut kar diya tha. Aur red hair boy ko wo yaha dikh gaya to wo apna gussa kabu na kar paya aur ise marne chla aaya.

Lakin Red hair boy ke in bato se ponny tail boy ko koi fark hi nahi pad raha tha. Tabhi ponny tail ke group ke wo silver gown wala member red hair boy se kahta hai " Bs karo ab. "
" Mujhe bahut dukh hua tmhare hath ka ye haal dekh kr... "
" Lakin break time me fighting karna mana hai. "
" Aur tumhe ye chot test ke time lagi thi to isme iski bhi koi galti nahi hai. "

Red hair boy us silver gown wale ladke ko dekh ke gusse se " Iski galti nahi hai ? Huh tm aisa kah bhi kaise skte ho ? "
" Ye ghat lagaye baitha tha. Nahi to mai itna kamjor nahi hu ki iske jaisa koi ladka mujhe maar paye. "

Silver gown boy " Are mera wo matlab nahi tha, mai to ye kahna cahta tha ki.... "

Abhi wo aage kuch kahta usase phle hi ponny tail wala ladka rude way me bolta hai " Mujhe pakka yakin hai agar mai ghat lagaye baitha bhi nahi hote tab bhi mai tmhara yahi haal karta. "
" Tum bahut jyada kamjor ho. "

CLANG....

Ye sunte hi Red hair boy to gusse se aag babula ho jata hai aur apne back par bandhe hue apne weapon ko apne left hath me le kr ponny tail boy se kahta hai " Kya tu. Such me yahi pata karna cahte ho ? Hai na ? "
" Well bahut jldi tmhe pata lag jayega. Chlo suru karo. "
" Chlo fight karte hai. "
" Ab mujhe is test ki koi parwah nahi hai. "

Wo to akdam fight karne ko hi ready ho gaya tha. Lakin silver gown boy use calm karne ki kosis karta rahta hai. Lakin wo nahi manta hai.

Unse kuch duri par hi hall me ek taraf hum tino baithe hue the aur ye sub hum log bhi dekh rahe the.
Mai apni jagah se khade hote hue fikar se kahta hu " Aisa lagta hai ye break time me bhi bs fight karne hi wale hai Mr. Khun. "
" Tmhe nahi lagta hai ki hme unhe rokna cahiye. "

Khun ( mujhe dekhte hue santi se ) " choro unhe. "
" Wo ye sb karna bahut jldi hi band kr denge. "

Tabhi stage ke upar ek ek loude aawaj aati hai " Tum logo ko smjh me nahi aa raha hai kya ? Ki break ke time me koi fight nahi hogi. "
Khun ( halke se smile krte hue ) " Aur wo aa gaya. "

Ye awwaj sunte hi sare logo ka dhyan us aawaj ke hi taraf chla jata hai. Aur wo dekhne lagte hai ye aakhir kisne kaha hai.
Waha stage par ek bahut hi handsome sa young ladka khada tha. Usne black shirt aur balloon paint phna hua tha. Aur usne cream color ki ek fancy coat wear kiya hua tha. Uske right eye ke nice ek mole tha. Aur uske hair nd eye dono akdam light yellow color ke the.

Wo ladka stage ke upar se us red hair hair ponny tail wale ladke ko dekhte hue " Tmne meri bato ko seriously nahi liya hai na regulars ? "

Ye sunte hi wo Red hair wala ladka apne weapon ke sath uski taraf gusse se aane lagta hai to uska ek teammate jo ki ek parrot tha wo use apne baho me jakad kar age jane se rok deta hai.
Lakin fir bhi wo red hair boy gusse me stage wale ladke ko dekh ke chillata hai " Kon hai ye ladka ? Dikhne me ye ek chirkut lag raha hai. "
" Hey ladke, tum marna cahte ho kya ? "
" To ja kar koi chhe marne ki dawa kyu nahi Jha lete ho. "

Uske pakde hue parrot " Chup ho jao. "
" Mere khyal se ye ek... "

Tabhi wo stage wala ladka ek smile ke sath bolta hai " Mai yaha ka test administratior hu. "
" Aur mera name Naik hai. "

Ye sunte hi abki fat jati hai . Aur wo Red hair boy haklate hue dar ke sath kahta hai " T.......Test administratior... "
" M...matlab ki tum ek R...rank... "

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Naik uski taraf aate hue " Ha ! Mai is tower ka ek Ranker hu. "

Ab parrot ne bhi us red hair boy ko chor diya tha. Aur wo ab bikul sant ho gaya tha aur Naik ko dekhte hue wo kahta hai " E...Ek real Ranker.. "
" Such me... "

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Fir apne teammates ke sath wapas jate hue red hair boy, us ponny tail wale se kahta hai " Dhat teri ki. "
" Mai isi liye piche hat raha hu quki Ranker yaha par hai. "
" Lakin ek baat yaad rakhna mai hi wo person hu jo tumhe marega. "

Ye sun kar ponny tail wala boy bhi bs apne daat pista rah gaya tha. Quki wo bhi Ranker ke rahte kuch nahi karna chahta tha.

Naik ( ek smile ke sath ) " Well ! Well ! Well ! "
" Kya ye sare ek bahut jyada excited crowd nahi lag rahe hai ? "

Mai bhi ye sb dekh raha hota hu aur mai Naik se bahut jyada impress ho jata hu.

Mai ( Naik ko dekhte hue ) " Wow, ye kitna acha hai. "
" Isne kuch jyada nahi bola. Lakin isne fight rok di. "

Khun ( mujhe dekhte hue ) " Ha bikul, Quki ye ek Ranker hai aur sath me ye yaha ka test administrateor bhi hai. "

Mai, khun ko dekhte hue confusion ke sath " Ek Ranker.. ? "
" Lakin ye Ranker hota kya hai ? "

Khun ( Surprise se mujhe dekhte hue ) " kya ? "
" Tmhe Yaha tak ki Ranker ke bare me bhi kuch nahi jante ho ? "

Mai apni gardan bas na me hila deta hu. Fir khan Naik ko dekhte hue kahta hai " Jo log is tower ke top par pahunch jate hai sirf wahi Rankers ho skte hai. "
" Inhe her season Tower ke andar ek ranking di jati hai. Isi liye inhe Ranker kaha jata hai. "

Mai , khun ko dekhte hue " mtlb tower ke sbse top par ? "

Ab Tak bhi hmari bato ko dhyan se sunane lagta hai. Fir Khun aage kahta hai " Ha ! "
" Ye sare amazing hote hai. "
" Thousands regulars me se kewal ek ya do hi log Ranker ban pate hai. "
" Agar such kahu to ye sare Monsters hote hai. Inke bahut hi crazy powers hoti hai. "

Mai ( sochte hue ) " Tower ke top par pahuncha. "
( Apne man me Yuri aur Evan ko yaad karte hue ) ' Matlb wo dono bahut hi powefull aur amazing log the. '

Tabhi Naik jo ki ab tak wapas se stage par ja chuka tha wo thoda tej kahta hai " Mic test regulars, yaha upar dekho. "
" Mai ab tm sb ko next round ke bare me sb smjhunga. "
" Usase phle , mai tum sub ko apne bare me detailed me sub bata deta hu. "
" Mai tum sub ka test administrateor, Ranker Naik hu. "
( Ek pyari si smile krte hue ) " nice to meet yo... "

Usko dekhte hue nice khade regulars tarah tarah ki bate apne man me soch rahe the.

' Omg, ye kitna powefull hoga. '
' kya hme iska sikar karna hai ? '
' Dekhte hai ab kya hota hai. '

Naik ( apne dono hath faila kar smile ke sath ) " Quki ab tak tmlogo ne kuch time tak rest kar liya hai. To ab hum next test ki taraf aage badhte hai. "
" Lakin usase phle ek chota sa pretest hai. "
" Aur jo bhi ye pretest paas nahi kar payega wo next test dene ke liye nahi ja skta hai. "

Ye sunte hi sare log akdam se shocked ho jate hai. Aur pure hall me sannata chha jata hai. Sare regulars bas Naik ko hi dekhne lagte hai.

Khun " kya "
" Iska Matlab ki yeek aur elimination test hai. "

Ek singh wali ladki " Aakhir ye ab aur kya test karna chahta hai ? "

Naik ( smile krte hue ) "Ha ha ! "
" Fikar Mat karo. Ye such me ek bahut hi aasan sa test hai. "
" To sub relax ho jao. "
" To chlo ab pretest ko start karte hai. "

Fir Naik apna right hath ko aage apne samne hawa me utha kar kahta hai " Is tarah ya us tarah, Yaha ya waha aur sare jagah. "
"Aur boom. "

WHOOSH....
SWOOSH.....

Nike ke ye karte hi uske hath se ek white color ki bhut hi strong energy niklti hai. Aur wo waha se hote hue pure room me aakhir tak jane lagti hai. Stage ke bilkul paas jo thode kamjor regulars rahte hai. Wo kud ko smbhal nahi pate hai. Aur apni jagah se udate hue kafi dur piche ja girte hai.

Ruhi to apne us green weapon ko ek baar samne ki taraf swing karke kud ko bacha leti hai. Lakin uske is action se Sandeep apni lagah gir jata hai.
Mostly Regulars apne weapons ko samne krke apni jagah par kud ko roke rakhne ki kosis karte hai. Khun bhi apne bag ko apne samne jor se patak deta hai. Jisase uska bag to wahi jamin me rahta hai. Lakin wo use pakde hawa me udane lagta hai. Kuch dur to ye sare log bhi apne jagah se khisak gaye the.

Sare regulars bs yahi chilla rahe the.

" Arggg.. ye kya hai ? "
" Aaahhhh..... "

Ruhi " oof..... "

Sandeep " aahhhhh.... "

Rak " aahhhhhhh.... Ye kya hai ? "

Khun " Dhat teri ki. "
" Kya ye shinsu energy hai ? "

Ab tak wo energy khtam ho cuki thi aur stage se kuch step aage ek transparent shinsu energy ka barrier ban gaya tha.

Naik ( sbko dekhte hue ek smile ke sath ) " Haa tum logo me se kuch log sahi soch rahe hai. "
" Maine shinsu energy ka ek barrier banaya hai. "
" Maine shinsu ko compressed krke ek aisa barrier banaya, jisne tm sub ko piche dhkel diya hai. "
" Jaisa ki tum sub ache se jante ho in tower ke ander shinsu har jagah hai. "
" Aur ye ek important role play karta hai. Quki yahi tumhe saas lene ke liye aur pani pine ke liye provide karwata hai. "
" Halaki, kabhi kabhar shishu ko ek powerful jaanlewa weapon bhi ban jata hai. "
" Ye depend karta hai aap uska kaise use karte ho. "
" Highly concentrated shinsu bahut jyada strong hota hai. Isase tum ek hath bhi bade aaram se thod skte ho. "
" Isi liye is tower ke ander sare contestents fight krne ke liye shinsu ko hi use karte hai. "
" Halaki, aise log bhi hai jo shinsu par partikul reaction bhi show karte hai. "
" Dusre sabdo me kahu to aise log jo shinsu ke sath ache se behaviour nahi kar skte. "
" Wo tower me rahne ke liye upyukt candidates nahi hai. "
" Jo log bhi is barrier se gujar ke is taraf aayenge, unke upar shinsu ka adverse reactions nahi hoga. "
" Jo team is barrier se gujar kar is taraf aayegi. Wo is test ko bhi pass kar legi. "
" Aur jo nahi kar payenge, wo fail ho jayenge. "
" Thik hai to sabhi log is barrier ko paar karna suru karo. "

Tabhi ek regular bich me hi bol padta hai " Ruko ! Kya tmne team kaha ? "
" Kya hoga agar hmare team ka koi ek member is barrier ko paar na kar paye to ? "

Naik " kya ye jahir si baat nahi hai ? "
" Wo team fail ho jayegi. "

Ye sunte hi sare logo ko gussa aa jata hai. Aur sath me Surprise bhi ho jate hai.

Tabhi lizard boy Naik ko dekhte hue kahta hai " ye to Murkhatapurn hai. "
" Is baat ka to koi sense hi nahi banta hai. "

Naik ( apne face par apna hath rakhte hue Lizard boy ko dekhte hue ) " isme kya betuka ya Murkhatapurn hai ? "

Lizard boy " Ha aur nahi to kya. "
" Hme last minute me team banaya tha. "
" Ye sahi baat nahi hai agar mai apne teammates ki wajah se is test se eliminate hota hu to. "
" Ye to bs ek bad luck hai. "

Ye sun kar baki ke regulars bhi kahne lagte hai.

" Ye to rubbish hai. "
" Aur nahi to kya. Ye koi lottery hai kya ? "

Naik ( sbki baat sun kr kahta hai ) " Hey, kya tm logo ko pata hai is tower me upar jane ke liye sbse jyada jaruri chij kya hai ? "
" Wo hai luck. "
" Tmhari body storng ho iska luck hona. "
" Tm smart ho iska luck hona. Tm rich ho ye luck hona. "
" Tmhare paas luck ho ki tum death se bach sako. "
" Tumhare teammates bache rahe iska luck hona. "
" Tm log ab tak yaha aa paye ho iska kewal ek hi reason hai. Aur wo yehai ki tum sub lucky ho. "
" Aur ab tum kahte ho ki luck ko test karna betuka, aur murkhatapurn hai. "
" Ab apni bakwas band karo. Aur tum sare regulars test dena suru karo. "

Khun ( nirash hote hue ) " Dhat teri ki. "
" Use jo kahna tha usne to kah diya. "
( Apne man me ) ' Iska Matlb, iska fairness se koi lena dena nahi hai. '
' Well, agar dekha jaye to is shinsu ke barrier ka concentration itna jyada high bhi nahi lag raha hai. '
( Rak ki tarf dekhte hue ) ' Quki ye shinsu ke ander hi Sikar karta hai. To ye bahut aasani se ye test paas kar lega. '
' main problem Ruhaan hai. '

Itna soch kar Khun mere tarf dekhta hai. Lakin ye kya mai to waha hota hi nahi hu.

Khun ( apne man me ) ' Ye Ruhaan kaha gaya ? '

Mai ( Naik se ) " Ummm..... Sorry Mr. Naik. "

Tabhi khun ko meri aawaj sunayi deti hai.
Aur wo mere aawaj ki Direction me dekhta hai. Aur mai barrier ke us paas Stage ke paas khada Naik se kuch puch raha hota hu.

Mai ( confusion se apne ek hath se sir khujate hue ) " Mai nahi janta hu aisa kyu hua. Lakin mai is shinsu se piche nahi hua hu. "
( Bahut hi bholepan se Naik ko dekhte hue ) " Um... Is test ke liye mere khyal se mujhe piche ja kar wapas is barrier se idhar aana hoga, hai na ? "

THUMP....

Naik mujhe hi aktak ghure ja raha tha. Uska dil bhi ye baat sun kar ak baar ko bahut tej dhrakne lagta hai.

A..Ha. Ha.. ha.

Ye sub dekh kr mujhe pasina aane lagta hai aur mai jaanbujh kr situation ko halka karne ke liye hasne ki kosis karta hu.

Mai " Mujhe maaf kar dijiye. "
" Mai wapas chla jata hu. Aakhir ye ek test hai. "

Itna kah kar mai piche mud kar wapas se barrier ke us paar jane lagta hu.

Tabhi Naik smile krte hue kahta hai " Nahi Ruhaan ! "
" Tum yahi ruko. "
" Mere khyal se maine koi galti kar di hogi. "
" Aur waise bhi ye bhi luck ka ek part hai. "
" Tum is test me paas ho gaye ho, Mr. Ruhaan. "

Darasal hua ye tha ki jb Naik ne ye barrier lagaya to uske is barrier ke shinsu energy se sare regulars Stage se kuch step piche ko chle gaye the. Lakin mai jo ki apne team ke sath wahi stage ke paas hi ek taraf khada tha. Mujhe koi energy feel nahi hoti hai. Aur mai wahi khada rahta hu. Ab aisa kyu hota hai ye mujhe bhi nahi pata. Aur Sare logo ka Naik aur is barrier ke karan dhyan mere taraf nahi jata hai.
Lakin jaise hi mai Naik se baat karta hu. Aur Nike mujhe paas bolta hai. Sare regulars ko ek bahut bada sadma lagta hai. Sbka muh khula ka khula rah jata hai.

Sandeep ( shocked se ) " kya ? "

Black top girl " such me !!! "

Lizard boy ( muh fade hue ) " Dhat teri ki. Ye sala luck. "
" Lagta hai sara luck isi ladke ko mil gaya hai. Huh ? "

Khun ( mujhe dekhte hue apne man me ) ' Kya... '
' Aakhir chl kya raha hai yaha ? '
' Naik se kabhi koi aisi galti ho hi nahi sakti. '
' Mai aur crocodile jst uske bagal me khade the. Lakin hum log to piche khisak aaye the. '
' Ye koi galti nahi ho skti hai. '
' Ise dekho wo energy piche dhkel hi nahi payi. '

Ruhi ( mujhe ghur ke dekhte hue apne man me ) ' Ye kya hai ? '

Sleeping boy wo bhi is ghatna se uth chuka tha aur mujhe hi dekhte hue apne man me soch raha tha ' Ye ladka kon hai ? '

Wahi in sub se be kabar mai stage ke paas kud ko relex karte hue kud se kahta hu " damm !! To ye duniya bs luck ke bhrose chlti hai. "
" Ab se kabhi akele kahi nahi jana hai. "

Jabki stage se mujhe ghur kar dekhte hue Naik apne man me kahta hai ' Ek Monster is tower ke ander aa cuka hai. '









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Shadaar update hmm ab competition badh gaya h jo bahut khatarnak ho gaya h aur abi tak ruhaan ko bahut jabardast weapon black march mila huva h matlb uske khud ke pass sirf talent ke roop mai sirf uski will power h jo usai jeetne ke liye harpal motivate karti h ab dekhte h agai kya hota h sabi teams toh khatarnaak lag rahi h......

Haaa ab dhire dhire asli game start hoga. Sare faltu ke log hatate jayenge aur bs ab dhire dhire main log hi bachenge.
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UPDATE - 9.2​

AB AAGE....


Sare log aise hi us hall me jagah dekh kr apne apne team ke sath baith jate hai. Aur agle instructions ka wait krne lagte hai.
Tabhi ek jagah se ek red hair ladke ki chillane ki aawaj aati hai.

Red hair boy " Aakhir maine tmko dundh hi liya. "
" Mai tumhe maar dalunga. "

Itna kah kr wo ek team ke paas aata hai jisme ek bauna tha jisne apne back par dono side sword rakhi hui thi. Ek lamba se slim ladka tha jisne silver colour ka ek long gown type kapda pahna hua tha. Aur aakhiri member bhi ek ladka hi tha jiske ek hath me red color ki ek sword thi. Usne Red color ki ek ponny teil banayi hui thi kud ke balo me.

Red hair wala ladka us ponny tail wale ke t shirt ke coller ko apne left hath se pakad kar bahut jyada gusse me kahta hai " Dekho tmne mere hath ka kya haal kiya hai ? "
" Tum ab ise wapas se kaise sahi kar sakte ho batao ? "
" Huh ? Bolo ? "

Ponny tail boy ( santi se use dekhte hue ) " Mai nahi janta. "
" Mere khyal se tumhe ek stick buy karke use apne is hath ke sath attach kar lena cahiye. "

Red hair boy ye sun kar bahut gusse me aa jata hai aur lagbhag chillate hue kahta hai " kya kaha ? "
" Tum sale..... "

Darsal baat ye hui thi ki first test ke time ponny tail wale boy ne us red hair boy ke right hath ko apne sword se pura cut kar diya tha. Aur red hair boy ko wo yaha dikh gaya to wo apna gussa kabu na kar paya aur ise marne chla aaya.

Lakin Red hair boy ke in bato se ponny tail boy ko koi fark hi nahi pad raha tha. Tabhi ponny tail ke group ke wo silver gown wala member red hair boy se kahta hai " Bs karo ab. "
" Mujhe bahut dukh hua tmhare hath ka ye haal dekh kr... "
" Lakin break time me fighting karna mana hai. "
" Aur tumhe ye chot test ke time lagi thi to isme iski bhi koi galti nahi hai. "

Red hair boy us silver gown wale ladke ko dekh ke gusse se " Iski galti nahi hai ? Huh tm aisa kah bhi kaise skte ho ? "
" Ye ghat lagaye baitha tha. Nahi to mai itna kamjor nahi hu ki iske jaisa koi ladka mujhe maar paye. "

Silver gown boy " Are mera wo matlab nahi tha, mai to ye kahna cahta tha ki.... "

Abhi wo aage kuch kahta usase phle hi ponny tail wala ladka rude way me bolta hai " Mujhe pakka yakin hai agar mai ghat lagaye baitha bhi nahi hote tab bhi mai tmhara yahi haal karta. "
" Tum bahut jyada kamjor ho. "

CLANG....

Ye sunte hi Red hair boy to gusse se aag babula ho jata hai aur apne back par bandhe hue apne weapon ko apne left hath me le kr ponny tail boy se kahta hai " Kya tu. Such me yahi pata karna cahte ho ? Hai na ? "
" Well bahut jldi tmhe pata lag jayega. Chlo suru karo. "
" Chlo fight karte hai. "
" Ab mujhe is test ki koi parwah nahi hai. "

Wo to akdam fight karne ko hi ready ho gaya tha. Lakin silver gown boy use calm karne ki kosis karta rahta hai. Lakin wo nahi manta hai.

Unse kuch duri par hi hall me ek taraf hum tino baithe hue the aur ye sub hum log bhi dekh rahe the.
Mai apni jagah se khade hote hue fikar se kahta hu " Aisa lagta hai ye break time me bhi bs fight karne hi wale hai Mr. Khun. "
" Tmhe nahi lagta hai ki hme unhe rokna cahiye. "

Khun ( mujhe dekhte hue santi se ) " choro unhe. "
" Wo ye sb karna bahut jldi hi band kr denge. "

Tabhi stage ke upar ek ek loude aawaj aati hai " Tum logo ko smjh me nahi aa raha hai kya ? Ki break ke time me koi fight nahi hogi. "
Khun ( halke se smile krte hue ) " Aur wo aa gaya. "

Ye awwaj sunte hi sare logo ka dhyan us aawaj ke hi taraf chla jata hai. Aur wo dekhne lagte hai ye aakhir kisne kaha hai.
Waha stage par ek bahut hi handsome sa young ladka khada tha. Usne black shirt aur balloon paint phna hua tha. Aur usne cream color ki ek fancy coat wear kiya hua tha. Uske right eye ke nice ek mole tha. Aur uske hair nd eye dono akdam light yellow color ke the.

Wo ladka stage ke upar se us red hair hair ponny tail wale ladke ko dekhte hue " Tmne meri bato ko seriously nahi liya hai na regulars ? "

Ye sunte hi wo Red hair wala ladka apne weapon ke sath uski taraf gusse se aane lagta hai to uska ek teammate jo ki ek parrot tha wo use apne baho me jakad kar age jane se rok deta hai.
Lakin fir bhi wo red hair boy gusse me stage wale ladke ko dekh ke chillata hai " Kon hai ye ladka ? Dikhne me ye ek chirkut lag raha hai. "
" Hey ladke, tum marna cahte ho kya ? "
" To ja kar koi chhe marne ki dawa kyu nahi Jha lete ho. "

Uske pakde hue parrot " Chup ho jao. "
" Mere khyal se ye ek... "

Tabhi wo stage wala ladka ek smile ke sath bolta hai " Mai yaha ka test administratior hu. "
" Aur mera name Naik hai. "

Ye sunte hi abki fat jati hai . Aur wo Red hair boy haklate hue dar ke sath kahta hai " T.......Test administratior... "
" M...matlab ki tum ek R...rank... "

Tap... Tap... Tap...

Naik uski taraf aate hue " Ha ! Mai is tower ka ek Ranker hu. "

Ab parrot ne bhi us red hair boy ko chor diya tha. Aur wo ab bikul sant ho gaya tha aur Naik ko dekhte hue wo kahta hai " E...Ek real Ranker.. "
" Such me... "

Tap... Tap... Tap...

Fir apne teammates ke sath wapas jate hue red hair boy, us ponny tail wale se kahta hai " Dhat teri ki. "
" Mai isi liye piche hat raha hu quki Ranker yaha par hai. "
" Lakin ek baat yaad rakhna mai hi wo person hu jo tumhe marega. "

Ye sun kar ponny tail wala boy bhi bs apne daat pista rah gaya tha. Quki wo bhi Ranker ke rahte kuch nahi karna chahta tha.

Naik ( ek smile ke sath ) " Well ! Well ! Well ! "
" Kya ye sare ek bahut jyada excited crowd nahi lag rahe hai ? "

Mai bhi ye sb dekh raha hota hu aur mai Naik se bahut jyada impress ho jata hu.

Mai ( Naik ko dekhte hue ) " Wow, ye kitna acha hai. "
" Isne kuch jyada nahi bola. Lakin isne fight rok di. "

Khun ( mujhe dekhte hue ) " Ha bikul, Quki ye ek Ranker hai aur sath me ye yaha ka test administrateor bhi hai. "

Mai, khun ko dekhte hue confusion ke sath " Ek Ranker.. ? "
" Lakin ye Ranker hota kya hai ? "

Khun ( Surprise se mujhe dekhte hue ) " kya ? "
" Tmhe Yaha tak ki Ranker ke bare me bhi kuch nahi jante ho ? "

Mai apni gardan bas na me hila deta hu. Fir khan Naik ko dekhte hue kahta hai " Jo log is tower ke top par pahunch jate hai sirf wahi Rankers ho skte hai. "
" Inhe her season Tower ke andar ek ranking di jati hai. Isi liye inhe Ranker kaha jata hai. "

Mai , khun ko dekhte hue " mtlb tower ke sbse top par ? "

Ab Tak bhi hmari bato ko dhyan se sunane lagta hai. Fir Khun aage kahta hai " Ha ! "
" Ye sare amazing hote hai. "
" Thousands regulars me se kewal ek ya do hi log Ranker ban pate hai. "
" Agar such kahu to ye sare Monsters hote hai. Inke bahut hi crazy powers hoti hai. "

Mai ( sochte hue ) " Tower ke top par pahuncha. "
( Apne man me Yuri aur Evan ko yaad karte hue ) ' Matlb wo dono bahut hi powefull aur amazing log the. '

Tabhi Naik jo ki ab tak wapas se stage par ja chuka tha wo thoda tej kahta hai " Mic test regulars, yaha upar dekho. "
" Mai ab tm sb ko next round ke bare me sb smjhunga. "
" Usase phle , mai tum sub ko apne bare me detailed me sub bata deta hu. "
" Mai tum sub ka test administrateor, Ranker Naik hu. "
( Ek pyari si smile krte hue ) " nice to meet yo... "

Usko dekhte hue nice khade regulars tarah tarah ki bate apne man me soch rahe the.

' Omg, ye kitna powefull hoga. '
' kya hme iska sikar karna hai ? '
' Dekhte hai ab kya hota hai. '

Naik ( apne dono hath faila kar smile ke sath ) " Quki ab tak tmlogo ne kuch time tak rest kar liya hai. To ab hum next test ki taraf aage badhte hai. "
" Lakin usase phle ek chota sa pretest hai. "
" Aur jo bhi ye pretest paas nahi kar payega wo next test dene ke liye nahi ja skta hai. "

Ye sunte hi sare log akdam se shocked ho jate hai. Aur pure hall me sannata chha jata hai. Sare regulars bas Naik ko hi dekhne lagte hai.

Khun " kya "
" Iska Matlab ki yeek aur elimination test hai. "

Ek singh wali ladki " Aakhir ye ab aur kya test karna chahta hai ? "

Naik ( smile krte hue ) "Ha ha ! "
" Fikar Mat karo. Ye such me ek bahut hi aasan sa test hai. "
" To sub relax ho jao. "
" To chlo ab pretest ko start karte hai. "

Fir Naik apna right hath ko aage apne samne hawa me utha kar kahta hai " Is tarah ya us tarah, Yaha ya waha aur sare jagah. "
"Aur boom. "

WHOOSH....
SWOOSH.....

Nike ke ye karte hi uske hath se ek white color ki bhut hi strong energy niklti hai. Aur wo waha se hote hue pure room me aakhir tak jane lagti hai. Stage ke bilkul paas jo thode kamjor regulars rahte hai. Wo kud ko smbhal nahi pate hai. Aur apni jagah se udate hue kafi dur piche ja girte hai.

Ruhi to apne us green weapon ko ek baar samne ki taraf swing karke kud ko bacha leti hai. Lakin uske is action se Sandeep apni lagah gir jata hai.
Mostly Regulars apne weapons ko samne krke apni jagah par kud ko roke rakhne ki kosis karte hai. Khun bhi apne bag ko apne samne jor se patak deta hai. Jisase uska bag to wahi jamin me rahta hai. Lakin wo use pakde hawa me udane lagta hai. Kuch dur to ye sare log bhi apne jagah se khisak gaye the.

Sare regulars bs yahi chilla rahe the.

" Arggg.. ye kya hai ? "
" Aaahhhh..... "

Ruhi " oof..... "

Sandeep " aahhhhh.... "

Rak " aahhhhhhh.... Ye kya hai ? "

Khun " Dhat teri ki. "
" Kya ye shinsu energy hai ? "

Ab tak wo energy khtam ho cuki thi aur stage se kuch step aage ek transparent shinsu energy ka barrier ban gaya tha.

Naik ( sbko dekhte hue ek smile ke sath ) " Haa tum logo me se kuch log sahi soch rahe hai. "
" Maine shinsu energy ka ek barrier banaya hai. "
" Maine shinsu ko compressed krke ek aisa barrier banaya, jisne tm sub ko piche dhkel diya hai. "
" Jaisa ki tum sub ache se jante ho in tower ke ander shinsu har jagah hai. "
" Aur ye ek important role play karta hai. Quki yahi tumhe saas lene ke liye aur pani pine ke liye provide karwata hai. "
" Halaki, kabhi kabhar shishu ko ek powerful jaanlewa weapon bhi ban jata hai. "
" Ye depend karta hai aap uska kaise use karte ho. "
" Highly concentrated shinsu bahut jyada strong hota hai. Isase tum ek hath bhi bade aaram se thod skte ho. "
" Isi liye is tower ke ander sare contestents fight krne ke liye shinsu ko hi use karte hai. "
" Halaki, aise log bhi hai jo shinsu par partikul reaction bhi show karte hai. "
" Dusre sabdo me kahu to aise log jo shinsu ke sath ache se behaviour nahi kar skte. "
" Wo tower me rahne ke liye upyukt candidates nahi hai. "
" Jo log bhi is barrier se gujar ke is taraf aayenge, unke upar shinsu ka adverse reactions nahi hoga. "
" Jo team is barrier se gujar kar is taraf aayegi. Wo is test ko bhi pass kar legi. "
" Aur jo nahi kar payenge, wo fail ho jayenge. "
" Thik hai to sabhi log is barrier ko paar karna suru karo. "

Tabhi ek regular bich me hi bol padta hai " Ruko ! Kya tmne team kaha ? "
" Kya hoga agar hmare team ka koi ek member is barrier ko paar na kar paye to ? "

Naik " kya ye jahir si baat nahi hai ? "
" Wo team fail ho jayegi. "

Ye sunte hi sare logo ko gussa aa jata hai. Aur sath me Surprise bhi ho jate hai.

Tabhi lizard boy Naik ko dekhte hue kahta hai " ye to Murkhatapurn hai. "
" Is baat ka to koi sense hi nahi banta hai. "

Naik ( apne face par apna hath rakhte hue Lizard boy ko dekhte hue ) " isme kya betuka ya Murkhatapurn hai ? "

Lizard boy " Ha aur nahi to kya. "
" Hme last minute me team banaya tha. "
" Ye sahi baat nahi hai agar mai apne teammates ki wajah se is test se eliminate hota hu to. "
" Ye to bs ek bad luck hai. "

Ye sun kar baki ke regulars bhi kahne lagte hai.

" Ye to rubbish hai. "
" Aur nahi to kya. Ye koi lottery hai kya ? "

Naik ( sbki baat sun kr kahta hai ) " Hey, kya tm logo ko pata hai is tower me upar jane ke liye sbse jyada jaruri chij kya hai ? "
" Wo hai luck. "
" Tmhari body storng ho iska luck hona. "
" Tm smart ho iska luck hona. Tm rich ho ye luck hona. "
" Tmhare paas luck ho ki tum death se bach sako. "
" Tumhare teammates bache rahe iska luck hona. "
" Tm log ab tak yaha aa paye ho iska kewal ek hi reason hai. Aur wo yehai ki tum sub lucky ho. "
" Aur ab tum kahte ho ki luck ko test karna betuka, aur murkhatapurn hai. "
" Ab apni bakwas band karo. Aur tum sare regulars test dena suru karo. "

Khun ( nirash hote hue ) " Dhat teri ki. "
" Use jo kahna tha usne to kah diya. "
( Apne man me ) ' Iska Matlb, iska fairness se koi lena dena nahi hai. '
' Well, agar dekha jaye to is shinsu ke barrier ka concentration itna jyada high bhi nahi lag raha hai. '
( Rak ki tarf dekhte hue ) ' Quki ye shinsu ke ander hi Sikar karta hai. To ye bahut aasani se ye test paas kar lega. '
' main problem Ruhaan hai. '

Itna soch kar Khun mere tarf dekhta hai. Lakin ye kya mai to waha hota hi nahi hu.

Khun ( apne man me ) ' Ye Ruhaan kaha gaya ? '

Mai ( Naik se ) " Ummm..... Sorry Mr. Naik. "

Tabhi khun ko meri aawaj sunayi deti hai.
Aur wo mere aawaj ki Direction me dekhta hai. Aur mai barrier ke us paas Stage ke paas khada Naik se kuch puch raha hota hu.

Mai ( confusion se apne ek hath se sir khujate hue ) " Mai nahi janta hu aisa kyu hua. Lakin mai is shinsu se piche nahi hua hu. "
( Bahut hi bholepan se Naik ko dekhte hue ) " Um... Is test ke liye mere khyal se mujhe piche ja kar wapas is barrier se idhar aana hoga, hai na ? "

THUMP....

Naik mujhe hi aktak ghure ja raha tha. Uska dil bhi ye baat sun kar ak baar ko bahut tej dhrakne lagta hai.

A..Ha. Ha.. ha.

Ye sub dekh kr mujhe pasina aane lagta hai aur mai jaanbujh kr situation ko halka karne ke liye hasne ki kosis karta hu.

Mai " Mujhe maaf kar dijiye. "
" Mai wapas chla jata hu. Aakhir ye ek test hai. "

Itna kah kar mai piche mud kar wapas se barrier ke us paar jane lagta hu.

Tabhi Naik smile krte hue kahta hai " Nahi Ruhaan ! "
" Tum yahi ruko. "
" Mere khyal se maine koi galti kar di hogi. "
" Aur waise bhi ye bhi luck ka ek part hai. "
" Tum is test me paas ho gaye ho, Mr. Ruhaan. "

Darasal hua ye tha ki jb Naik ne ye barrier lagaya to uske is barrier ke shinsu energy se sare regulars Stage se kuch step piche ko chle gaye the. Lakin mai jo ki apne team ke sath wahi stage ke paas hi ek taraf khada tha. Mujhe koi energy feel nahi hoti hai. Aur mai wahi khada rahta hu. Ab aisa kyu hota hai ye mujhe bhi nahi pata. Aur Sare logo ka Naik aur is barrier ke karan dhyan mere taraf nahi jata hai.
Lakin jaise hi mai Naik se baat karta hu. Aur Nike mujhe paas bolta hai. Sare regulars ko ek bahut bada sadma lagta hai. Sbka muh khula ka khula rah jata hai.

Sandeep ( shocked se ) " kya ? "

Black top girl " such me !!! "

Lizard boy ( muh fade hue ) " Dhat teri ki. Ye sala luck. "
" Lagta hai sara luck isi ladke ko mil gaya hai. Huh ? "

Khun ( mujhe dekhte hue apne man me ) ' Kya... '
' Aakhir chl kya raha hai yaha ? '
' Naik se kabhi koi aisi galti ho hi nahi sakti. '
' Mai aur crocodile jst uske bagal me khade the. Lakin hum log to piche khisak aaye the. '
' Ye koi galti nahi ho skti hai. '
' Ise dekho wo energy piche dhkel hi nahi payi. '

Ruhi ( mujhe ghur ke dekhte hue apne man me ) ' Ye kya hai ? '

Sleeping boy wo bhi is ghatna se uth chuka tha aur mujhe hi dekhte hue apne man me soch raha tha ' Ye ladka kon hai ? '

Wahi in sub se be kabar mai stage ke paas kud ko relex karte hue kud se kahta hu " damm !! To ye duniya bs luck ke bhrose chlti hai. "
" Ab se kabhi akele kahi nahi jana hai. "

Jabki stage se mujhe ghur kar dekhte hue Naik apne man me kahta hai ' Ek Monster is tower ke ander aa cuka hai. '









Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!
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Bahut he dhansuu update tha matlab naik ne shinsu energy release ki thi usai sab toh piche ho gaye par ruhaan nahi sayad aisa isliye kyoki yuri ne pahle he usai de diya tha janha tak muje yaad h ....aur ye naik ne ruhaan ko dekh ke declare bi kardiya h ki wo ek monester agaya h ruhaan ke powerfull banne ki ek he wajah hogi wo h uski will jo usai uske pyar se milne ki tadap se ati h shandaar update bro
ab story fast ho rahi h.........
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Note : dosto kuch personal problems ki wajagh se mere dono story ne next update Saturday ya Sunday ko hi aayega.
Mai out of station hu tb tak ke liye to mere paas Updates likhne ka time nahi hai abhi bilkul bhi.