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[Jaguaar]

"__THE UNDYING LOVE__"​

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(An untold story of Pure and Eternal Love)​

Note: This is a fictional work, set in the accounts 2018 Kerala Floods and is also an intense love story, set in Tamilnadu and Kerala states respectively. I did research for six months, in order to write this story and wrote minimum of 10 drafts. The story is a spiritual sequel to my successful romantic-drama Shatabdi: The Journey of Love, which was my debut story in the storymirror. Additionally, the films like James Cameron's Titanic and Abhishek's Kedarnath made me think and I wrote this story eventually...



UTTARAKHAND JUNCTION:

10:30 PM:

As the time is 10:30 PM, the Shatabdi express, which has reached Uttrakhand Junction, starts and is going towards Hyderabad Junction. While the train is going, someone in the door of the train is crying out aloud and is seemingly upset, closing his face. Upon seeing this, a man, who was sleeping in a lower berth inside, gets up. The man looks like an Indian Army officer, who is wearing a blue shirt and red pants, with a titanic watch in his left hand. His eyes are cool, sharp and blue colored. His face looks like a shining Ganges river. He reaches the man and touches his shoulder asking him: "What happened brother? Why are you sitting and crying here?"

The young man, seemingly around 25 to 28 years of age, with his black eyes replied him: "Don't I have a freedom to cry also sir." After pausing a while he tells: "Lord Krishna said: Love wins all and further told to love everyone. But, none realizes the importance of love. This world is cheating us in the name of love."

Upon hearing this, the man asked him: "What is your name man?"

"I am Gaius, from Haryana sir. Going to Warrangal, back to my work" said the guy and he further asked for the name of this 26-year old young man. He tells him, "Myself, I am Ashwin Ramachandran, coming from Coimbatore district of Tamilnadu."

Ashwin now asked to the young man, "Gaius. Have you ever saw films, with love story?" The man initially silent replies: "Yes bro. I have seen Titanic recently and Kedarnath." Ashwin now tells him, "In both these films, the respective directors tried to showcase a love, that's set in the ocean and floods. But, in real life, we have various kinds of challenges." Shortly to say: "Our life is full of conflicts. In order to face the conflicts, you have to fight the way and stand your ground."

The duo sits in the seat and Gaius asked him: "Brother. Have you loved anyone in your life? I mean, any love stories in your life?"

Silent for a while, Ashwin tells: "True love is free from expectation, anger, and any other emotion; it involves an only act of giving, void of any expectation or null feeling. Krishna taught us the same in Mahabharata; he quoted, "He who has no attachments can really love others, for his love is pure and divine. My love story is very different."

(The story is now explained from Ashwin's point of view to make the subject more clear.)

FEW MONTHS BACK:

MEENAKSHIPURAM, COIMBATORE DISTRICT:

When one travels around the world, one notices to what an extraordinary degree human nature is the same, whether in India or America, in Europe or Australia. This is especially true in colleges and universities. We are turning out, as if through a mould, a type of human being whose chief interest is to find security, to become somebody important, or to have a good time with as little thought as possible. I was raised up by my father Ramachandran.

After my birth, my mother died due to pregnancy complications. I wasn't even told how she looks or how she smiles. Hence, I have drawn an imaginary photo of my mom and used to see it, whenever I am upset. My father was working as a Major in Indian Army, during the Kargil war. He lost one of his legs, during the war in Kashmir borders, thus been handicapped for life long.

Yet my father doesn't lost his hope and had motivated me saying, "My son. What is the significance of life? What are we living to achieve distinction, to get a better job, to be more efficient, to have wider domination over others, then our lives will be shallow and empty. If we are being educated only to be scientists, to be scholars wedded to books, or specialists addicted to knowledge, then we shall be contributing to the destruction and misery of the world." I was just eight years old, when he was telling this to me. Yet, I understood and realized the seriousness of his words.

Though being 8-years old, I decided to reinvent myself. My father taught me about Bhagavad Gita- as it is, Ramayana and Mahabharata, telling me: "My son. Our Hinduism still lives. That's because, we have these three sacred books explaining about our traditional culture and importance of life." Not only those words, but also the books have gave me a great impact.

Bhagavad Gita consisted of eighteen chapters. Each of them tells us how to live a life and how to follow ethics. Mahabharata though, had so many sub-chapters and stories, I liked Arjuna and Karna. Because Arjuna was focused in his work and aim. Likewise, I just focused on my aim to become a successful guy in my life.

GDR COLLEGE OF ARTS AND SCIENCE:

2016:

Years passed as such and I joined GDR College of Arts and Science. I had close friends: Madhu Varshini and Sai Adhithya. Madhu Varshini is my neighborhood. Her life is different when compared to me. When she was three years old, an accident injection made her autistic, already been suffering from ADHD. Her mother Anisha took care of her and for six years, she struggled with her and made her to recover completely.

But, it's not meant that, she is a good mother. A good mother means not just to take care of a daughter. But, have so many responsibilities such as: Taking care of family, father, etc. This lady however picks up fight with her father Narayanan, who was working in a SPB Company, where Brahmin dominance is higher and he have to adjust the problems in the company. Because, they gives due importance to the Brahmins. Due to the fight turning aggressive, they eventually divorced and this eventually forced him to give them his half of his forest property, to which she intended.

This left her mentally disturbed and turns fragile. Yet, her father guides her saying: "Blessed is human birth, even the dwellers in heaven desire this birth, for true knowledge and pure Love may be attained only by a human being. But of all I could name, verily love is the highest. Love & devotion that make one forgetful of everything else, Love that unites everyone."

As she is my neighbor, I used to play cricket and football with her. My father and her father are close friends since childhood days. We both shared a close bond and friendship. Though Adhithya was my close friend, he doesn't understood my pain at times. While, Madhu Varshini, been affected since her childhood, understood his pain and always supported me on various occasions in the school and colleges.

During my school days, many used to mock and tease Madhu Varshini, just because she is loose-talking and innocent. And in addition, doesn't get angered. One day, due to these torturous brute by one of my friend in 10th standard at Erode(I too was studying in the same school staying in the hostel), she tried to commit suicide.

However, I stopped her and said: "Committing suicide is a sin and crime Varshini. There are challenges and battles in our life. You have to fight against it."

"We must distinguish between the personal and the individual. The personal is the accidental; and by the accidental I mean the circumstances of birth, the environment in which we happen to have been brought up, with its nationalism, superstitions, class distinctions and prejudices. The personal or accidental is but momentary, though that moment may last a lifetime; and as the accidental, the momentary, it leads to perversion of thought and the inculcation of self-defensive fears. All of us have been trained by education and environment to seek personal gain and security, and to fight for ourselves. Though we cover it over with pleasant phrases, we have been educated for various professions within a system which is based on exploitation and acquisitive fear. Such a training must inevitably bring confusion and misery to ourselves and to the world, for it creates in each individual those psychological barriers which separate and hold him apart from others." These words had inspired Madhu Varshini and she formed a schedule for her studies. Knowing her weakness, she did yoga practices, exercises and prayers without any medication in order to keep her psychological weakness controlled. She scored good marks and studied well.

Education is not merely a matter of training the mind. Training makes for efficiency, but it does not bring about completeness. A mind that has merely been trained is the continuation of the past, and such a mind can never discover the new. That is why, to find out what is right education, we will have to inquire into the whole significance of living. After 10th also, we were in the contact. Because, both of us studied in the same school for our higher secondary education in 11th and 12th. Even Sai Adhithya was in the same school. We both grew as close friends, during these times and Sai Adhithya slowly understood his mistakes. Madhu Varshini aimed to become a doctor.

She worked hard and studied well, determined to become a cardiologist. At present, we are second-year college student and our education is completely different here, compared to schools. To most of us, the meaning of life as a whole is not of primary importance, and our education emphasizes secondary values, merely making us proficient in some branch of knowledge. Though knowledge and efficiency are necessary, to lay chief emphasis on them only leads to conflict and confusion.

PRESENT:

"Brother. You have went backward in your life story" said Gaius, to which Ashwin asked him: "How much have I went backwards?"

"Too backward bro" said Gaius. Ashwin thinks for a while about his college days and now he tells, "Education helped me to understand about my efficiency and talent. While, practical lessons helped me to learn the reality of the present world."

2016:

I supported Madhu Varshini so well, in my college helping her by giving books, introducing her to some known doctors and lecturers with the help of my father and giving her some inspirations and motivations. In the process, I slowly fell in love with her and loved one sided, which I didn't reveal to her. But, instead, I have expressed those things in my diary.

During her birthday on 26 September 2017, I asked her: "Madhu Varshini. Do you believe in love?"

"Yes Ashwin. I once believed that Love conquers all. But, now I understand well that, Love separates everyone so easily." I realized that, the impact of her mother's separation and her selfish attitude is still deep in her heart. The sorrows aren't so easy for her to forget. As a human psychology student, I very well know about this.

Now, I had got another friend called Yazhini. She is a Brahmin girl coming from R.S.Puram of Coimbatore district. We both had met co-incidentally in the class. I grew close to her, after interrogating about exams and studies, getting materials for my works. During such time, I learnt that, "Her mother died off in heart attack, due to which she didn't grew with mother's affection. Her father and elder sister is everything to her." However, insisted by Sai Adhithya, I maintained distance from her. Since, as per his views, "Madhu Varshini is developing some possessiveness in her heart, seeing their close bonding and Ashwin's avoidance." However, on one occasion, I met Madhu Varshini in her home, she invited me for a dinner, prepared by her during the absence of her father. Since, it was my birthday. Madhu is wearing red-color sari.

During that time, I went through her diary called, "Pliers(Idukki): The memorable Journey of my life." She have mentioned about the marvelous journey of love since her childhood. Through diagram and provoking messages, she have told: "How she realized the greatness of her father, cruelty of her mother and the family. Additionally, she mentioned my name and my father, citing us to be a source of inspiration and motivation for her to become successful."

I felt emotional and tears filled into my eyes. Wiping off my tears, I went towards her and she gave me a gift. Surprised, I asked her: "What's this Madhu?"

With some joy in her face and a fabulous smile, she replied to me: "It's something special for you Ashwin. I have brought this for you. It is Titanic watch."

"What's the purpose of this watch Madhu?" As he is telling this, she tells, "Hush. Be quiet for five minutes." She turns off the power in her room and tells, "5, 4, 3, 2, 1. Go." She keeps the birthday cake and lights the candle. Afterward, Ashwin slowly nears Madhu and she tells him, "Ashwin. I love you da."

He is stunned for a second and doesn't know what to reply her. But, she tells him: "I know that, you would be shocked da. Since childhood, you supported me a lot. Even when Adhithya scolded you and panned, you supported me and later on, he too gave me support. But, I realized that, you have been helping me out of love and affection. I started to understand, how pure love is. However, I feared you could not be able to take care of me. That's why I didn't propose my love." Ashwin feels emotional and runs to hug her.

Now, tears filling Madhu's eyes, she asked him: "Ashwin. You shouldn't leave me anytime at any situation da. You have to support me and stay with me. Will you do it da?"

"I would always be there with you Madhu. It's my promise" said Ashwin.

Love is relative. It could mean sex to some; kissing to others and a whole lot of foreplay yet to others. But, the one thing that stays true to all these three is that love is an art. A well-performed, indulgent form of art that can only be mastered by the innate feeling of it all. Emotional or purely physical is another debate altogether.

After a while, I gave her a diamond necklace, which I am wearing since childhood days as insisted by my father, so that I could not remember about my mother. I tied it in the neck of Madhu. She asked me, "Why is this necklace da Ashwin?"

"Whenever you remember about me, this necklace would stay with you Madhu. Because, I don't know whether I could spend some qualitative time with you, once I am in Indian Army." I stopped for a while and asked her, "Ok. Why did you wear this Titanic watch in my hand?"

She told me, "So that, you won't tell a lie as well as that, you will not indulge in fights." Yes. I fought with my college mate Sanjay Krishna, a black-sheep, who always behaves like a rowdy in our class. Madhu was mocked by him. I tolerated his antics. But, I wasn't able to tolerate his tortures to Madhu and angrily hit him, warning not to intervene with her.

That day she told me: "Are you mad Ashwin? Crazily fighting with him."

"He is crossing his limit Madhu. That's why I gave him this trigger warning!" said Ashwin. For this, she told me: "Ashwin. These kinds of disturbances are common in our life. You should try to adjust it. But, shouldn't become like them. Try to control this next time."

At present, I accidentally touched Madhu's arms lightly. Leaning his hands, I slowly took my hands out, shivering. Madhu stared at me and gave a light slap. Then, she laughed and I leaned her a bit more, touching her cheek. Looking at her eyes, I told her: "Madhu. Today, you are looking beautiful." She feels emotional and shy.

Nearing me, the pretty-queen kissed me softly in my lips. I lingered her and pulled away her sari little. Madhu saw me and leaned in. Kissing her again, I lingered my lips. I holded Madhu by the waist and took a lead to bedroom. She comes closer to him. Gently holding her in my arms, I trailed a finger down her back, feeling the fabric of her dress on my skin. Running my fingers through her hair, I trailed a finger along her jawline, holding her chin up to me. Taking my own time, I lingered and kissed her more, now passionately. She realized, "I wanted her." And she too realized, "She is wanted." Right there, Right then. Slowly I removed her dress, like sculpting a statute. Teaching her to break free. She unbuttoned my shirt and took her own time to remove my dresses. While, I never stopped kissing her and lingered on her lips. After this I gently stroke the nape of her neck and kissed her neck. We both slept together, with the help of a blanket, to hide our naked body.

When you are in bed with a woman you are creating art- a poem, a song, a story, or a painting. You are creating energy and movement that makes even the disbelieving woman believe; the atheist convert and the angered calm their nerves.

ONE YEAR LATER, MARCH 2017:

One year passed now. Yazhini went for her internship program to Ernakulam, where she is selected by a famous Medical Institution. Madhu too was selected by the same medical institution. While, I and Sai Adhithya were selected for Indian Army, two days prior to the duo's selection. During the third year, when Yazhini proposed her love, I rejected her stating: "I am just a friend to her" and further stated my love with Madhu Varshini.

This girl felt jealous and incensed by anger and possessiveness, she falsely tells Madhu Varshini(before going for Internship) the reality about my Indian Army stating: "Madhu. Ashwin thinks that, he could be able to survive in the Indian Army. But, you know? It's very difficult to survive there in the amidst of mist, snowfall and fogs. And fighting with enemy troops also becomes difficult." Yazhini used Madhu's weakness such as possessiveness, emotion and short-temperedness to add a few more words to get her angered. Telling about his father's paralysis in Indian Army, which she very well knew.

Madhu came to meet me and said, "What Yazhini told is truth ah, Ashwin?"

Sai Adhithya blinks and tells her, "You are his close friend, since childhood days. Doesn't you know about Indian Army and it's life ma?"

However, Madhu demanded an answer from me, which I agreed and she quarrels with me asking: "Then, why did you told me that, 'I won't leave you and would stay forever. That's why did you gave me this necklace ah?'"

She cried saying this and accused me of betraying her. Adhithya tries to solve the issues and console her. But, is stopped by me. During the conflicts, Yazhini suddenly regains her sense and realizes, "How she did a mistake blind folded and tried to console Madhu." But, she is adamant and came near to me asking: "Madhu. I would be happier in Indian Army. You too will be happy with me."

"You won't be alive if you are in Indian Army da. Your father lost his leg during his period in the Indian Army. I don't want to send you also and lose your own life, Ashwin. Please don't go there Ashwin." She said emotionally and cried out, with tears flowing from her eyes.

"Madhu. I want you. But, I also want Indian Army."

"It's impossible Ashwin. Choose one? Me or Indian Army! Don't tell me you want both. God won't give two chances in life, as mentioned in Bhagavad Gita. Me or Indian Army. Just one straight answer." Madhu Varshini demanded answers from him.

With a heavy heart and being watched by Sai Adhithya, Yazhini, I went near to Madhu Varshini and told her: "I'm answerable to you and my father in this world. It's not for my mom or Sai Adhithya and not for my family. You and my father is everything to me. I won't do the things which make you both feel sad. Today you are asking me to decide you or this one. It's hard for me without you Madhu. But, it's impossible for me to live without Indian Army."

Looked by my friends Sai Adhithya, Yazhini and a tearful Madhu Varshini, I additionally told her, "I am asking you with your on me. Forget me for the happiness of my father Madhu. I am supposed to bring back my father's happiness back by joining Army. So, I am ready to loose our love for his happiness. Please Madhu. You'll get the best."

Emotional, she told me in tears: "I will leave my best here. I am mad about what you will do from our childhood. Everything. I felt, I got this one at least in my life, though I lost some important moments in my life. At last this one too have got an abrupt end. The other things give some pain too. But this is more painful. Much more painful. All the best da!"

After a while, I turned to Adhithya and told, "Buddy. It's time for our train da." While, Madhu goes along with Yazhini. In the train, Adhithya consoled me. But, for both of us, it's not easy to forget the memorable moments and loving days since our childhood life. Days passed and I became Major in Indian Army. With Adhithya and me in Special forces, we did several missions solving border skirmishes and rescuing people. Yet, I felt something missing in my life. Then, Adhithya advised me to meet Madhu and speak with her, taking some days of leaves in the army, after one years of our service. Yazhini, with whom I am still more in contact, afforded to help me and she herself wanted to solve the problems, created by her.

Not only Adhithya, even my father advised me to explore the world and seek my inner peace, so that I could know what this journey is telling me to do. His words were primary to me.

PRESENT:

Gaius is really shocked to hear this love story and he tells, "Brother. What a great love story in your life! Even I didn't experience this kind of a heartbreaking trauma."

Ashwin however tells him, "How Madhu Varshini suffered several trauma like this, being an ADHD patient. She was almost to lose her morality, self-respect and self-esteem, being mocked by several of her friends. But, he supported her and didn't even let her to feel the inferiority and superiority complex."

Gaius tells him that, "He would sooner solve all his problems and bids him a farewell." Since, Hyderabad junction is to arrive sooner and the duo part ways.

TWO DAYS LATER:

KOTTAYAM JUNCTION, 3:30 AM:

5 JUNE 2018:

Two days later, Yazhini, now a renowned psychologist in the medical center of Idukki, comes to Kottayam Junction, waiting for Ashwin's arrival. She phones him and asked, "Where is the train coming now Ashwin?"

"The train is to arrive at Kottayam almost Yazhini" said Ashwin, to which she nods her head and the Shatabdi Express reaches Kottayam at 4:00 AM. He gets out of the train in the junction and meets Yazhini, 50 meters away from his compartment. Having no time for chatter, he goes along with her in the car and she feels surprised to see the changed looks of Ashwin and his changed mannerisms.

Back to home, he asked Yazhini: "How is Madhu Varshini Yazhini?"

Silent for a while, she replied him: "She had not changed Ashwin. Still stubborn. She felt angered whenever I tried to speak about you. Recently, her father died in his sleep."

Feeling shocked, Ashwin asked her: "Why didn't you inform this girl?"

"I tried to call you. But, that time, your network was out of coverage. Her anger increased and she thought, you deliberately avoided her." However, Ashwin explained his position and duty in Indian Army, during that time to rescue a few people, who were held hostage by the terrorists. Ashwin contacts his father and tells, "I have came to Kottayam dad."

He asked him to take care and tells, "I wanted to hear the news that, Madhu have accepted you da." The old man said, holding his stick in the left hand and phone on the left ear. Ashwin smiles, hearing this. The next day, having finished the morning exercise, he tries to meet Madhu Varshini(now a neurologist in the same hospital of Yazhini) in her flat, where Yazhini stayed with her, before few days ago. However, Madhu refuses to talk with him and instead tells him harshly, "Our love have ended before one years, Ashwin. We doesn't have anything to be spoken now, actually."



Hurt by her words deeply, Ashwin returns heartbroken coming to Sri Krishna temple of Idukki, accompanied by Yazhini. She tells him: "I was reason for everything Ashwin. I tried to solve this in various occasions. But she never obeyed and additionally doesn't give up her ego. That's the main reason, she is refusing to talk."



"I hope that she would cool down and accept me one day, Yazhini" said Ashwin, to which she smiled in pain. After he leaves, she cries out emotionally seeing his photo. Meanwhile, Kerala Weather report reports to the government, "There would be incessant rains in Kerala from 12 July 2018." There was left a red alert to 14 districts of Kerala and scientists predicted that, the flood would be the worst in Kerala after "the great floods of 99" during the 1924 period. Yazhini, concerned by the news, begs Ashwin to go from Idukki back to Kashmir.



However, he refuses and is stubborn in staying at Idukki to convince Madhu Varshini. Days later, rains start to downpour heavier in Kerala and due to this, many people are forced to stay inside their house and a total lockdown is enforced in the state. Due to circumstances, Madhu Varshini stays in the house of Ashwin and Yazhini. Since, her apartment people ran away from the place, after being rumoured about snakes entering inside the house.



She stays stick in her decision to avoid Ashwin. For one month, the three stays in the house, surrounded by the waters. Ashwin contacts Sai Adhithya who tells him, "Buddy. I am now coming to Idukki da. Indian Army is planning to rescue the people, affected by floods."



Idukki dam reaches full the next day and the district is given a red alert. As the river floods severely, people are trapped in the water and situation goes worst.



Being instructed by ISRO the Cabinet Secretary, senior officers of Defence Services, NDRF, NDMA and secretaries of Civilian Ministries conducted meetings with Kerala Chief Secretary. Following the decisions taken during these meetings, the Centre launched massive rescue and relief operations. In one of the largest rescue operations 40 helicopters, 31 aircraft, 182 teams for rescue, 18 medical teams of defence forces, 90 teams of NDRF and 3 companies of Central Armed Police Forces were pressed into service along with over 500 boats and necessary rescue equipments.



The same time, the water level somewhat goes down in Yazhini's house and the road sides. So the three make their way to the other side of a one way path, that leads to a temple, where Periyar river is in it's full flow. Seeing a child and a woman trapped in the steps of the Periyar River, Ashwin and Madhu Varshini rushes to rescue both of them and stands near Lord Vishnu there.



Sai Adhithya and the Indian Army sees them as they wave hands towards the sky. Madhu Varshini sends Ashwin and the duo, whom she and Ashwin saved. Then, she sees three more people stuck inside the temple and plans to rescue them. She prepares to go herself after sending them. Now, Madhu have realized her mistakes and tears flows in her eyes.



"Madhu. I need you. Please come by catching this thread Madhu. Please Madhu." Ashwin shouted and cried. Unable to see him crying, Adhithya too begged her to come using the thread, telling that: "They could adjust the seats in helicopter."



However, there is no space for her in the helicopter, which she tells them and additionally tells: "Ashwin. This is my last words to you. Not only Army can save the lives of people. But, doctors too would be able to save people as it is our regular duty, as per the medical ethics. Reward or punishment for any action merely strengthens self-centredness. Action for the sake of another, in the name of the country or of God, leads to fear, and fear cannot be the basis for right action. If we would help a child to be considerate of others, we should not use love as a bribe, but take the time and have the patience to explain the ways of consideration. But, I didn't have the patience to listen your words. As a henceforth, my death is the punishment. I have never sacrificed or adjusted since my childhood days. But, now I am sacrificing my life for the sake of two people's goodness." As Ashwin cried and screamed at Madhu, she smiles at him recalling about their memorable days, spent together before the ground below Madhu crumbles her into the full-flooded Periyar river, killing her instantly. Ashwin breaks down and cried out aloud shouting Madhu's name, as she had been carried away by the raging river.



SIX MONTHS LATER:



COIMBATORE JUNCTION:



Six months after these events, Ashwin decides to go back for Indian Army, to recover from the heartbreaking trauma of Madhu's death, having nothing much to do after losing his only beloved love. While going towards the junction, he recalls the words of Madhu during the floods and realizes that, "She have meant her sacrifice for Yazhini's love" and returns to meet Yazhini, who have been transferred to KMCH Hospitals.



Ashwin rushes to Yazhini's house and sees her father to whom he asked, "Uncle. Where's Yazhini?" Her sister stares at him and tells, "She is in her room only." He rushes to her room and sees her crying and sitting sad with the diary. He slowly goes near to her and calls her.



Yazhini looks like, someone so close to her have called her and sees Ashwin. She feels happier, with tears going off from her eyes and she tells, "Ashwin. Have you came? When did you come here? How is Madhu? Is she fine?"



Ashwin didn't reply anything, glaring at her sadly. While Yazhini realized that, "Madhu have died during the floods" and she wasn't in her own senses. She apologized to Ashwin for creating problems between them and tells, "I loved you truly Ashwin. Eventhough you don't accept my love, it would never die. It lives forever in my heart."



However, Ashwin proposed to her and she is surprised to this. He said in tears, "I realized what Madhu meant during the flood itself. Her sacrifice is for your's sake...to support for your undying love. She have got to know about your love from the diary, where you have expressed your feelings. I doesn't want to insult her sacrifice and your endless love, that you have for me. I love you Yazhini. Love you so much."



Yazhini embraces him in tears and they both share a hug. Supported by her father and sister, she walks along with Ashwin in the roads, holding his hands. While, a reflection of Madhu Varshini smiles at them.


EPILOGUE:

Our thinking capability is second to very fewer beings that exist on Earth today. Our human intellect allows us to think and love beyond the capacity of other sentient beings. Our consciousness helps us judge right and wrong and love unconditionally, forgive, carry empathy, and so forth; our evolutionary development allows us to love and become enlightened like none. Thus, Krishna spoke these words in Mahabharata, "Blessed is a human birth, even the dwellers in heaven desire this birth, for true knowledge and pure love may be attained only by a human being."

Awesome Storyy

Back to back 2 stories deke dil khush kardiyaa. Bahottt khubb

 

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Awesome Storyy

Back to back 2 stories deke dil khush kardiyaa. Bahottt khubb

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[Jaguaar]

नए रिश्ते

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रात के 8:30 बजे का समय हुआ था और राज नई दिल्ली रेलवे स्टेशन के प्लेटफार्म नंबर ४ की तरफ दौड़ रहा था, वो दिल्ली अक्सर अपने कारोबार के सिलसिले में आता रहता था पर आज एक क्लाइंट के साथ काफी समय लग गया था और देहरादून की लास्ट ट्रैन ८:२० पर स्टेशन से रवाना हो चुकी थी। ३२ साल का थका हारा राज हाँफते हुए वंही बेंच पर बैठ गया और मन ही मन अपने क्लाइंट को कोसने लगा। तभी उसके फ़ोन की घंटी बजी उसने जेब से फ़ोन निकला और स्क्रीन पर देखा तो सुमन का नाम था। राज के परिवार में सुमन उसकी पत्नी, माँ वसुधा और ३ साल का बेटा विशु ही थे जिनके इर्द गिर्द उसकी पूरी ज़िंदगी घूमती थी।

राज ने कॉल पिक किया और सुमन को बता दिया के उसकी ट्रैन मिस हो गयी है। सुमन ने चिंता भरे स्वर में पूछा "अब कैसे करोगे ?" राज ने उसे चिंता न करने को कहा और बोला के वो बस से आ जायेगा। पर दूसरी तरफ से फ़ोन को वसुधा ने ले लिया और उसे हिदायत दी के इतनी रात में सफर करने की कोई ज़रूरत नहीं है वो गुडगाँव में Richa के यंहा रुक जाए और सुबह वापस आ जाए। राज ने थोड़ी देर अपनी माँ का विरोध किया पर फिर सुमन ने भी उसे वंही रुकने का बोला तो उसे उनकी बात माननि पड़ी।

ऋचा राज की सगी बहन थी जो राज से उम्र में २ साल छोटी थी, ऋचा की शादी 3 साल पहले देहरादून में विनोद से हुई थी। विनोद गुडगाँव की एक रियल एस्टेट company में जॉब करता था और यही पर किराये के फ्लैट में रहता था। राज और विनोद की (ऋचा की शादी के दौरान) किसी बात को लेकर अनबन हो गयी थी इसीलिए राज विनोद और ऋचा दोनों से ही दुरी बनाये हुए था।

राज अभी इस उधेड़ बुन में था के वो ऋचा को कॉल करे या न करे, बड़े असमंजस की स्थिति में वो फ़ोन में ऋचा का नंबर सर्च करने लगा के तभी उसके फ़ोन की घंटी बजी, उसने देखा तो ऋचा का ही कॉल था। उसने कॉल रिसीव किया और फ़ोन को कान से लगाया "हेलो" उधर से ऋचा की आवाज़ आयी "हेलो, भैया कँहा हो अभी?", राज ने उत्तर दिया "अभी तो नई दिल्ली रेलवे स्टेशन पर हूँ", ऋचा "ठीक है, मैं एड्रेस सेंड कर रही हूँ आप ऑटो या टैक्सी लेके यंहा आ जाओ", राज ने थोड़ा झिझकते हुए कहा "अरे मैं मैनेज कर लूंगा, तू परेशां मत हो", उधर से ऋचा ने डाँटते हुए कहा "ज़ादा होशियार मत बनो, चुप चाप इधर चले आओ" राज ने कुछ कहने को मुंह खोला ही था के उधर से फिर ऋचा की आवाज़ आयी "मुझे कुछ और नहीं सुन ना, आप यंहा आ रहे हो बस, नहीं तो मैं माँ को कॉल कर रही हूँ " राज़ ने उसकी बात सुनी और हँसते हुए जवाब दिया "ठीक है ठीक है, आता हु, माँ को कॉल मत करना " उधर से ऋचा बोली "ओके , जल्दी आओ, वेट कर रही हूँ " और फिर कॉल कट हो गयी। राज़ बेंच से खड़ा हुआ और उसने अपना बैग उठा कर कंधे पर डाला, तभी फ़ोन ने बीप किया उसने फ़ोन चेक किया तो ऋचा का व्हाट्सअप था उसने लोकेशन भेजी थी और नीचे पूरा पता भी लिखा था।

सुमन और वसुधा जानती थी के राज ऋचा को कॉल नहीं करेगा इसीलिए वसुधा ने ही ऋचा को कॉल कर दिया था। ऋचा की शादी के समय विनोद और उसके घरवालों से दहेज़ को लेकर हुई अनबन को राज अभी तक भुला नहीं था। ऐसा सुमन और वसुधा को लगता था पर राज और विनोद में कभी कभी फ़ोन पर फॉर्मल बातें होती रहती थी। जिसका उन्हें पता नहीं था।

रात के 9 बज चुके थे, ऑटो दिल्ली की सड़कों पर दौड़ रहा था. राज ऑटो में बैठा अपने और ऋचा के बारे में सोच रहा था। कितना खूबसूरत रिश्ता था उन दोनों भाई बहन का शादी से पहले, शायद ही कोई ऐसा समय गुज़रा हो जब वो घर गया हो और ऋचा क लिए गिफ्ट ना ले गया हो। कितनी फ़िक्र करती थी वो उसकी, कैसे उसने अपनी सारी सेविंग्स राज को दे दी थी जब वो जॉब के लिए स्ट्रगल कर रहा था। कितना प्यार करता था वो ऋचा से और कितनी घटिया हरकत कर बैठा था उसके साथ जिसने इस पवित्र रिश्ते को ख़त्म सा कर दिया था। आज तक राज इसी ग्लानि में जी रहा था, उसने कई बार प्रयास किया के ऋचा के पैर पकड़ कर माफ़ी मांगे पर कभी इतना साहस ना जुटा पाया।

7 साल पहले -

राज उस वक्त दिल्ली में एक mnc में जॉब कर रहा था और अच्छी खासी सैलरी ले रहा था, जिस से उसके तीन जन के परिवार का खर्च अच्छे से चल रहा था। ऋचा उस वक्त 23 की थी और अपनी पोस्ट ग्रेजुएशन पूरी कर चुकी थी, वो govt जॉब की तैयारी में लगी रहती थी। एक exam के सिलसिले में उसे दिल्ली आना पड़ा तो वो राज के पास उसके रूम पर रुकी हुई थी। राज उसके आने से बहुत खुश था। उस वक्त तक राज की कोई गर्लफ्रेंड नहीं थी, जो अब तक एक गर्लफ्रेंड बनी थी वो देहरादून में ही ऋचा की ही एक सहेली थी जिसे राज कई बार चोद चूका था। ऋचा को इस बारे में कुछ पता नहीं था। 25 साल का राज यूँ तो देखने में 6 feet का कसरती जिस्म का मालिक था और देखने में किसी मॉडल से कम नहीं लगता था, उसे अपने ऑफिस में एक लड़की पसंद आयी तो थी पर वो पहले से ही किसी और के साथ रिलेशन में थी। राज अपनी जिस्मानी संतुष्टि के लिए इंटरनेट पर पोर्न, एडल्ट स्टोरीज सर्च करके खुद को संतुष्ट कर लिया करता था।

आज ऋचा का पेपर था वो सुबह जल्दी उठ के तैयार हो गयी थी और उसने राज को भी जल्दी उठा दिया था। राज बाथरूम में नाहा कर अपने आप को टॉवल से पौंछ रहा था के तभी उसकी नज़र सामने हेंगर पर टंगी ऋचा की ब्रा पर गयी, ना चाहते हुए भी राज का हाथ उसे उठाने को आगे बड़ चला। क्रीम कलर की पैडेड ब्रा को राज़ अपने हाथ में लेकर देखने लगा। पीछे लगे टैग पर उसकी नज़र पड़ी, उसने उसे करीब लाके देखा उसपर ब्रा का साइज 34C लिखा था। राज का मुंह खुला का खुला रह गया और अनायास ही उसके मुंह से निकल गया "wow " , वो मन ही मन ऋचा के साइज और उसकी ख़ूबसूरती की तारीफ करने लगा। वासना के वशीभूत होकर उसने उस ब्रा के कप को अपने गालों पर लगा लिया और उनकी खुशबू को सूंघने का प्रयास करने लगा। उस ब्रा से किसी टेलकम पाउडर की भीनी भीनी खुशबू आ रही थी। राज ने देखा उसका ६ इंच का लंड पूरी तरह से अकड़ के खड़ा हो चूका था और उसका आधा सुपाड़ा खाल से बहार झाँक रहा था। उसने बहुत सी कहानियां भाई बहन के सम्बन्धो पर पड़ी थी पर उसके जीवन में पहली बार ऐसा संयोग हो रहा था जंहा वो अपनी बहन की ब्रा को देख के ही इतना उतावला हो गया था।

उसने ऋचा की ब्रा को अपने लंड पर लपेटा और धीरे धीरे लंड की चमड़ी को आगे पीछे करने लगा, उसकी आँखे बंद होने लगी और उसकी कल्पनाओ में ऋचा की बड़ी बड़ी चूचियां उसे हिलती दिखाई देने लगी, थोड़ी देर के प्रयास से ही उसके लंड में ऐठन होने लगी और उसने एक जोरदार पिचकारी मार के सारा वीर्य उड़ेल दिया , फर्श के जिस कोने पर वीर्य की धार गिरी वंहा ऋचा की गीली panty पड़ी थी जिस पर जाकर उसका वीर्य गिरा और panty को सान गया। वीर्य की कुछ बूंदे ऋचा की ब्रा को भी गीला कर गयी थी, जब राज को होश आया तो उसे बहुत आत्मगिलानी हुई और वो खुद को कोसने लगा। तभी बहार से ऋचा की आवाज़ आयी "कितनी देर लगाओगे भैया, जल्दी आओ नाश्ता तैयार है", राज ने घबराहट में बोला "आ..आ..आ रहा हूँ"

राज ने जल्दी से ऋचा की ब्रा से अपने वीर्य को हाथ से साफ़ किया पर वीर्य के निशाँ अब भी वंहा मौजूद थे, थोड़ी देर में ये सूख जायेंगे सोचकर उसने ब्रा वापस से टांग दी , पर panty को उसने ऐसे ही छोड़ दिया और खुद को साफ़ कर के बहार आ गया।

राज कपडे पहन के तैयार हुआ तो ऋचा उसे नाश्ता देके बाथरूम में चली गयी। उधर राज भगवन से अपनी खैर मांग रहा था के इसे कुछ पता ना चले। थोड़ी देर में ऋचा वापस आयी तो उसके हाथ में धुले हुए ब्रा और panty थे उसने एक नज़र राज की तरफ देखा, दोनों की नज़र मिली और राज ने अपनी नज़रें नीचे कर ली, ऋचा बिना कुछ कहे बालकनी की तरफ बड़ गयी।

राज ये तो जान चूका था के ऋचा समझ चुकी है पर इग्नोर कर रही है, उसे अपने ऊपर गुस्सा और तरस दोनों आ रहा था।

दोपहर १२ बजे ऋचा का पेपर छूटा तो राज उसे बाइक पे लेकर वापस आ रहा था, ऋचा राज से चिपक के बैठी थी जबकि सुबह उसे सेण्टर छोडने जाते वक्त उसने थोड़ा गैप बना के रखा था। ऋचा की 34C की बड़ी बड़ी सुडोल चूचियां राज को अपनी कमर पे किसी स्पंज की तरह फील हो रही थी और वो उनका आनंद ले रहा था।

ऋचा ने राज को पीछे बैठे हुए कहा "भैया, भूख लगी है"

राज ने जवाब दिया "बता क्या खायेगी"

ऋचा "कुछ भी खिला दो"

राज "चल फिर मॉल में चलते है, जो मन करे खा लेना"

थोड़ी देर बाद दोनों ने पसिफ़िक मॉल के अंदर एक रेस्टोरेंट में खाना खाया और फॉर्मल सी बाते की , फिर बहार निकले तो ऋचा फिल्म देखने की ज़िद्द करने लगी, राज मना करने लगा के इधर सब इंग्लिश मूवीज लगी हैं तुझे समझ नहीं आएँगी, ऋचा राज से लड़ने लगी "मिस्टर MA किया है मैंने इंग्लिश से, तुमसे ज़ादा समझती हूँ " फिर राज उसे चिढ़ाने लगा "इन मूवीज में इंग्लिश डायलॉग्स बहुत फ़ास्ट होते हैं तेरी समझ नहीं आएंगे " ऋचा फिर रिक्वेस्ट करने लगी "भाई प्लीज़ दिखा दो ना, कल तो में वापस चली ही जाउंगी", राज को उसपे दया आयी और वो ऋचा को साथ लेके टिकट काउंटर की तरफ बड़ गया।

दोनों भाई बहन थिएटर में पास पास बैठ कर फिल्म देख रहे थे, ये एक इंग्लिश थ्रिलर फिल्म थी। कुछ समय बीतने के बाद फिल्म में एक बोल्ड सीन आया जिसमे लड़का अपने से उम्र में बड़ी एक महिला को स्मूच करने लगा और थोड़ी देर में उसके कपडे खोलने लगा , राज के लिए बड़ी विचित्र सी स्थिति थी , अगले ही सीन में उस लड़के ने महिला के बूब्स को दोनों हाथों में दबोच लिया और महिला का जिस्म अकड़ने लगा। राज अपने आपको थोड़ा असहज महसूस करने लगा, यही स्थिति शायद ऋचा की भी रही होगी। अभी वो बोल्ड सीन जारी था, लड़का और वो अधेड़ महिला बिस्तर में एक दूसरे को kiss कर रहे थे, तभी ऋचा ने अपना सर राज के कंधे पर रख दिया और अपने दोनों हाथों से उसकी बाजू को पकड़ लिया, राज ने उसके लिए जगह बनाते हुए अपना बांया हाथ उठा के ऋचा के बांये कंधे पर रख दिया। दोनों की आँखे स्क्रीन पर चल रहे दृश्य पर टिकी थी, दोनों भाई बहन थोड़ा असहज थे। कुछ बोलने की किसी में हिम्मत नहीं थी। अब स्क्रीन पर लड़का उस महिला के ऊपर छाया हुआ था और धीरे धीरे चादर के अंदर से अपनी कमर को हिला रहा था, महिला की बड़ी बड़ी सुडोल चूचियां पूर्णयता नग्न थी। न चाहते हुए भी राज के लंड में उफान आने लगा था। उसने धीरे से ऋचा के कंधे को दबा दिया, जिसपर ऋचा की कोई प्रितिक्रिया नहीं हुई। थोड़ी देर बाद वो सीन तो ख़त्म हो गया पर राज के मन को व्याकुल कर गया। ऋचा अभी भी राज के कंधे पर सर टिकाये फिल्म देख रही थी, राज का बांया हाथ अब ऋचा के कंधे से होता हुआ ठीक उसकी चूचियों के उभार से ठीक ऊपर झूल रहा था। थोड़ी देर बाद ही फिल्म में दूसरा सीन आया जिसमे उस लड़के ने उस महिला को कंही पर अकेले में पकड़ लिया और उसकी जीन्स के बटन खोल के उसकी panty के अंदर हाथ डाल दिया, राज ने धीरे से ऋचा के सीने पर अपनी उंगलिया फिरा दी, अब उस लड़के ने उस महिला को उल्टा किया और पीछे से धक्के मारने लगा , तभी ऋचा ने अपनी चूचियों के उभार से ठीक ऊपर सीने पर घूम रही राज की उँगलियों को अपने हाथ से पकड़ लिया और उसके हाथ को अपने हाथ में दबा के खींच कर पकड़ के बैठ गयी, अब राज की कलाई ठीक ऋचा की दायीं चूची के ऊपर से उसे दबा रही थी। राज को बड़ा अच्छा सा फील हो रहा था, उसके लंड में तनाव बढ़ने लगा था। ऋचा पूरी फिल्म में राज के हाथ को वैसे ही पकड़ कर बैठी रही, जब फिल्म ख़त्म होने को आयी तो ऋचा ने राज का हाथ छोड़ दिया पर राज ने हाथ हटाया नहीं। उस वक्त राज के मन में ऋचा को लेके सैकड़ों सवाल चल रहे थे , उसे कुछ समझ नहीं आ रहा था। पर जब दिमाग पर शैतान हावी हो तो इंसान की एक नहीं चलती। राज के साथ भी ऐसा ही हुआ, उसने अपना हाथ ऋचा के ऊपर से हटाते हुए ऋचा की दांयी चूची को धीरे से दबा दिया और हाथ हटा लिया। ये सब एक छड़ में हुआ, ऋचा ने एक नज़र राज की तरफ देखा पर राज स्क्रीन की तरफ ही देख रहा था उसने ऐसा शो किया जैसे कुछ हुआ ही न हो। पर मन ही मन राज को बहुत अच्छा लग रहा था ऋचा की चूची की कठोरता उसे अभी भी अपनी हथेली पर महसूस हो रही थी।

फिल्म ख़त्म हुई और वो दोनों वापस आ गए, फिल्म और थिएटर में हुए वाकये पर किसी ने कोई बात नहीं की थी।

रात के ११ बज चुके थे उसे अगले दिन ऋचा को घर छोड़ने भी जाना था, पर उसे अभी भी नींद नहीं आ रही थी। वो बस ऋचा और उसकी ख़ूबसूरती के बारे में ही सोच रहा था। उसने करवट बदली और अपने से थोड़ी दूर फर्श पर बिस्तर लगा के सो रही ऋचा को गौर से देखने लगा , कमरे में उस समय एक जीरो वाट का नीला बल्ब जल रहा था जिसकी पर्याप्त रौशनी में सब कुछ दिखाई दे रहा था। उस वक्त ऋचा राज की तरफ पीठ कर के सोई थी, उसने एक सफ़ेद सलवार और क्रीम कलर का टाइट फिटिंग का कुरता पहना हुआ था। राज की नज़रें ऋचा की सुडोल गांड के उभारों पर घूम रही थी, वो मन ही मन उसकी गांड के साइज के बारे में सोचने लगा, 36 नहीं 34 तो कम से कम होगा ही। फिर कुर्ते की बैक से झांकती ऋचा की गोरी नंगी पीठ पर नज़र पड़ते ही राज के लंड में तनाव आने लगा और धीरे धीरे वो अपने हाथ से अपने लंड को सहलाने लगा।

कहते हैं जब वासना अपने चरम पर हो तब सब मर्यादाएं,रिश्ते, सही गलत की परख सब धरे के धरे रह जाते हैं और वही होता है जो वासना के उठते ज्वर को मंज़ूर होता है।

उस रात भी कुछ ऐसा ही हुआ, जाने कब राज ऋचा के बिस्तर तक पहुँच गया और उसने ऋचा के एक एक कर कब सब कपडे नोच डाले उसे पता ही नहीं चला। उसे याद भी नहीं के ऋचा ने उसका विरोध किया या नहीं किया, उसे तो बस इतना याद है के वो पूर्णयता नग्न अवस्था में ऋचा की नंगी चूचियों को चूस रहा था और दूसरे हाथ से उसकी चूत को मसल रहा था फिर उसने ऋचा की टाँगे फैला दी और उनके बीच में आ गया। पसीने से लथपत राज अपने लंड को ऋचा की चूत पर रगड़ने लगा, उस वक्त ऋचा किसी ज़िंदा लाश की तरह से पड़ी थी जिसमे किसी प्रकार की कोई हल चल न थी। राज ने अपना लंड ऋचा की चूत के छेद पर टिकाया और एक नज़र ऋचा की तरफ देखा, ऋचा की आँखे खुली थी और आंसुओं की धार निरंतर उसके कानो की तरफ बह रही थी। और यही पर राज को अपराध बोध हुआ, वो उठ कर घुटनो पर बैठ गया। पाप पुण्य और वासना का अंतर्दवंद उसके दिमाग में चलने लगा। ऋचा के नंगे जिस्म को देखकर उस से अभी भी खुद पर काबू नहीं हो रहा था, वो बैठे बैठे ही अपने लंड को ज़ोर ज़ोर से मुठयाने लगा। कुछ सेकंड में ही उसके लंड ने वीर्य की बौछार सी कर दी जो ऋचा के सीने, पेट और उसकी चूत को भिगो गयी।

अब वो नंगा ही ऋचा की बगल में लेटा था और अपने इस कुकृत्य पर बहुत आत्मगिलानी महसूस कर रहा था। उसने अपने कपडे पहने और ऋचा को कंधे से पकड़ के झकझोरा। ऋचा अभी भी उसी नग्न अवस्था में लेटी हुई थी, एक दम बेजान सी।

राज का वीर्य अभी भी ऋचा के जिस्म पे जंहा तंहा बिखरा पड़ा था और उसके जिस्म से इधर उधर बह रहा था। राज ने अपनी टी शर्ट से वीर्य को साफ़ किया फिर उसकी चूत की तरफ साफ़ करने लगा तो ऋचा ने उसके हाथ से टी शर्ट छीन ली और नंगी ही उठ के बाथरूम में चली गयी।

राज वापस आके अपने बिस्तर में लेट गया, उसके दिमाग में आंधी सी चल रही थी, वो बार बार खुद को कोस रहा था। अपनी सफाई में कहने के लिए उसके पास कुछ नहीं था। बाथरूम से पानी के गिरने की आवाज़ आ रही थी, राज की आँखों से आंसू बह रहे थे, उसने जो कलंक रिश्तों पर लगाया था अब उसकी कोई भरपाई नहीं थी।

ऋचा बाथरूम से बहार आयी तो राज ने अपना मुंह दूसरी तरफ फेर लिया, अब उसके अंदर हिम्मत नहीं थी ऋचा का सामना करने की। काफी देर बीतने के बाद ऋचा ने राज का हाथ पकड़ के उठाया "मुझे पता है तुम जाग रहे हो" ऋचा ने कहा। राज उठ कर बिस्तर पर बैठ गया और सर नीचे झुका लिया, ऋचा ने खड़े खड़े ही पूछा "सिर्फ एक सवाल करना है ", राज ने "हम्म" में जवाब दिया पर सर नीचे ही झुकाये रहा। ऋचा ने अपने आंसू पोंछते हुए पूछा "आखिर क्यों? क्यों किया ऐसा मेरे साथ ", राज खामोश रहा थोड़ी देर, एक सन्नाटा सा पसरा रहा दोनों के बीच। ऋचा ने फिरसे पूछा "जवाब दो", अब राज को कुछ कुछ समझ नहीं आ रहा था क्या कहे, उसने थोड़ी हिम्मत जुटा के एक सांस में बोल दिया "I love you ऋचा"। ऋचा ने फिरसे कुछ कहना चाहा पर राज ने उसे टोक ते हुए कहा "प्लीज, और कुछ मत कहना" "मेरे अंदर हिम्मत नहीं है और कुछ बोलने की " और राज फुट फुट कर रोने लगा।

ऋचा ने भी आगे कुछ नहीं पूछा और वापस अपने बिस्तर पे जाके लेट गयी।

उस रात के बाद से उनके सम्बन्ध फिर कभी पहले जैसे नहीं रहे, घर में माँ के सामने तो दोनों थोड़ा बहुत बात कर लिया करते पर अकेले में कभी कोई बात नहीं करते। हालाँकि राखी और भाई दूज के त्यौहार दोनों भाई बहन हमेशा की तरह मानते रहे पर पहले जैसी कोई बात न रही, न ऋचा कोई मन पसंद का गिफ्ट मांगती न राज उसके साथ कोई शैतेनी करता। फिर भी राज उसकी ज़रूरत के हिसाब से उसे गफ्ट देता रहता।

समय बिता और दोनों की शादी हो गयी दोनों ही अपनी अपनी लाइफ में मशगूल हो गए। ऋचा की शादी के बाद तो राज ने जैसे बिलकुल ही उस से सम्बन्ध ख़त्म कर लिए थे।

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राज ने door bell बजायी, कुछ सेकंड बाद ऋचा ने दरवाज़ा खोला, राज ने ऋचा को देखा, ५'५" की ऋचा एक वाइट टीशर्ट और स्काई ब्लू कलर का पजामा पहने दरवाज़े पर खड़ी थी। ऋचा ने दरवाज़ा पूरा खोलते हुए राज को अनादर आने को कहा, राज ने एक स्माइल दी फिर ऋचा को छोटा सा एक हग किया। ऋचा ने राज का बैग लिया और एक रूम में जाके रख दिया। पीछे पीछे राज भी उसी रूम में चला गया और उसने ऋचा से पूछा "विनोद कँहा है?", ऋचा ने पलट ते हुए जवाब दिया "वो आने वाले होंगे ऑफिस से, आप फ्रेश हो जाओ में खाना लगाती हूँ ", राज़ ने हैरत से पूछा "इतनी लेट तक ऑफिस में रहता है?" ऋचा ने थोड़ा मायूस होते हुए जवाब दिया "हम्म, बता रहे थे ऑफिस में कोई पार्टी है आज" "वो तो खाना खा कर आएंगे, आप फ्रेश हो जाओ में कपडे लाती हूँ चेंज कर लेना"।

राज फ्रेश होकर बाथरूम से बहार निकला तो देखा bed पर एक टीशर्ट और शार्ट रखा है, ये शायद विनोद के कपडे थे जो ऋचा राज के लिए रख गयी थी क्यूंकि राज अपने साथ कोई और कपडे नहीं लाया था। राज ने कपडे पहने और रूम से बहार ड्राइंग रूम में आ गया जंहा पर एक तरफ dinning टेबल थी, जिसपर ऋचा खाना लगा रही थी। ऋचा ने राज की तरफ देखा और कहा "आ जाओ भैया, खाना लग गया है" ल

राज ने चेयर बहार खींचते हुए पूछा "तूने खा लिया ?" "नहीं, अभी नहीं, आप खा लो मैं खा लुंगी बाद में "।

राज ने दीवार पर टंगी घडी की तरफ देखा जो 10:55 का समय बता रही थी, "पागल है क्या, देख क्या टाइम हुआ है, कब तक भूखी रहेगी उस के लिए" राज ने डाँट ते हुए ऋचा से कहा। ऋचा ने स्माइल किया और फिर थोड़ा मायूसी भरे स्वर में बोली "मेरी तो आदत है भैया, आप खाओ में खा लुंगी बाद में" , राज ने फिर से डांटते हुए कहा "ज़ादा बन मत, चुप चाप बैठ और खाना खा, नहीं तो मैं भी नहीं खाऊंगा "। मजबूरन ऋचा को राज के साथ बैठ कर खाना पड़ा।

अभी वो लोग खाना खा ही रहे थे की door bell बजी, ऋचा उठ कर जाने को हुई पर राज ने रोक दिया "तू बैठ मैं खोलता हूँ "। राज ने जाके दरवाज़ा खोला तो सामने विनोद को सहारा दिए दो लोग और खड़े थे। उनमे से एक ने पूछा "भाभी जी कँहा हैं?" राज ने दरवाज़ा पूरा खोल दिया सामने बैठी ऋचा ने देखा तो वो भागती हुई आई और पूछा "क्या हुआ भैया?" "क्या हुआ इन्हे?", वो दोनों लड़के विनोद को अंदर लाने लगे, उनमे से एक ने कहा "कुछ नहीं हुआ है भाभी जी, बस आज विनोद सर कुछ ज़ादा पी गए, सुबह तक ठीक हो जायेंगे" कह कर उन्होंने वनोद को वंही सोफे पैर लेटा दिया। "अच्छा हम चलते हैं भाभी जी, नमस्ते " कह कर दोनों लड़के फ्लैट से बहार चले गए और राज ने दरवाज़ा बंद कर लिया।

राज ने अपना खाना ख़त्म किया फिर सोफे पर पड़े विनोद को उठाने की कोशिश की पर विनोद बेसुध सा पड़ा सोया हुआ था। ऋचा किचन में बर्तन धो रही थी, राज किचन में चला गया और ऋचा से पूछने लगा "कब से पी रहा है ये इतनी ?" ऋचा ने एक नज़र राज पर डाली फिर बर्तन धोते हुए बोली "ये तो आये दिन का काम है इनका, कभी कभी इतनी ज़ादा पी लेते हैं के कोई न कोई उठा के घर लता है "। राज वापस जाके अपने रूम में bed पर लेट गया, और लाइट ऑफ कर ली। रूम का गेट उसने खुला ही रखा था, बहार ड्राइंग रूम में सोफे पर सोया विनोद उसे वंहा से साफ़ दिखाई दे रहा था। थोड़ी देर में ऋचा आके विनोद को हिलाने डुलाने लगी पर विनोद ने कोई ठोस प्रतिक्रिया नहीं दी, ऋचा की पीठ उस वक्त राज के रूम की तरफ थी और विनोद को जगाने के क्रम में झुकने के कारण उसके पाजामे से उसकी गांड का उभार राज को अच्छे से दिख रहा था। ऋचा की गांड अब पहले से भी ज़ादा बड़ी लग रही थी उसे। राज फिर से ऋचा की खूबसूरती को ऊपर से नीचे तक निहारने लगा, उसके लंड में फिरसे तनाव आने लगा था। ऋचा अब नीचे बैठ कर विनोद के जूते खोल रही थी, बैठने के कारण उसकी गांड और भी ज़ादा फ़ैल गयी थी। राज ने एक बार शार्ट के ऊपर से अपने लंड को मसला फिर सारे ख़यालों को दिमाग से झटकते हुए अपने कमरे में बनी बालकनी में चला गया।

थोड़ी देर में ऋचा विनोद को सोफे पर सीधा सुला के राज के कमरे में आयी। राज को बालकनी में देख कर वो उसके पास आके खड़ी हो गयी और नीचे ज़मीन की गहराई नापने लगी। थोड़ी देर दोनों के बीच ख़ामोशी रही फिर राज ने ही ख़ामोशी को तोड़ते हुए पूछा "और सुना कैसा चल रहा है सब ?" ऋचा ने एक नज़र राज की तरफ देखा फिर नज़र सामने दूसरी बिल्डिंग की तरफ करते हुए बोली "देख तो रहे हो आप, ऐसे ही चल रहा है "

राज ने फिर से दूसरा सवाल किया "इसे समझती क्यों नहीं, इतना पीना ठीक नहीं "

ऋचा ने एक फीकी सी मुस्कान देते हुए कहा "समझती तो बहुत हूँ, पर मेरी मानता कौन है?"

फिर थोड़ी देर के लिए दोनों के बीच सन्नाटा सा पसर गया, राज बालकनी से कमरे के अंदर जाते हुए बोला "चल अब काफी टाइम हो गया, सो जा जाके"

ऋचा भी राज के पीछे पीछे कमरे में आ गयी, राज बिस्तर पर बैठ गया, ऋचा कमरे से बाहर जाते हुए धीमी आवाज़ में बोली "मुझे लगा था आप बात करोगे मुझसे"

राज को एक पल के लिए ऋचा पर तरस सा आया और उसने आवाज़ दी "ऋचा "

ऋचा दरवाज़े पर ठिठक गयी और राज की तरफ देखने लगी, राज ने इशारे से उसे अपने पास बिस्तर पर बैठने को कहा। ऋचा ने एक नज़र बाहर ड्राइंग रूम में सो रहे विनोद पर डाली फिर राज के पास जाके बिस्तर पर बैठ गयी।

राज ने अपना हाथ आगे बढ़ाकर उसका हाथ अपने दोनों हाथों के बीच थाम लिया और बोला "अब कर क्या बात करनी है? "

राज को न तो अब किसी प्रकार का डर था, न कोई आत्मगिलानी थी, ऋचा ने राज की आँखों में देखा और फिर नज़रे नीचे कर के सवाल किया "वो सब क्यों किया था भैया ?" राज को उस से शायद इसी सवाल की उम्मीद थी, उसने एक गहरी सांस ली और कहा "मैंने तुझे बताया तो था "। ऋचा ने फिरसे राज की आँखों में झाँका "हाँ बताया तो था, पर ऐसे कौन करता है, अपनी सगी बहन के साथ? " राज उसके सवाल के जवाब खोजने लगा, ऋचा ने फिर से दूसरा सवाल दाग दिया "आप उस दिन मेरा रेप करने वाले थे? है न " राज को अब कुछ जवाब समझ नहीं आ रहा था, उसने अपनी गर्दन नीचे झुका ली और बस इतना ही उसके मुंह से निकला "हम्म"। फिर थोड़ी देर ख़ामोशी रही दोनों के बीच, और ख़ामोशी को फिर ऋचा ने ही तोडा "फिर रुक क्यों गए थे?" राज की आँखों से आंसू की एक धार बह निकली और उसने ऋचा की तरफ देखते हुए कहा "पता नहीं, कैसे रुक गया"। ऋचा ने अपना हाथ आगे बड़ा के राज के आंसू पोंछे, "मेरा मकसद आपको तकलीफ पहुँचाना नहीं था "

ऋचा ने कहा।

राज ने सहमति में गर्दन हिलायी , थोड़ी देर बाद ऋचा bed से उठकर खड़ी हुई और पूछा, "अच्छा, एक आखरी सवाल?" राज ने चौंकते हुए ऋचा की तरफ देखा, ऋचा का एक हाथ अब भी राज के हाथ में था , "क्या अब भी मुझसे वैसा ही प्यार करते हो?"

राज ने ऋचा की आँखों में देखा और थोड़ी देर देखने के बाद हाँ में अपनी गर्दन हिलायी।

ऋचा दोबारा से राज के पास बैठ गयी और उसकी आँखों में देखते हुए बोली "आपने इतनी दुरी क्यों बना के रखी मुझसे?" राज ने एक नज़र ऋचा को देखा फिर छत्त की तरफ मुंह कर के बोला "कभी इतनी हिम्मत ही नहीं जुटा पाया के तुझसे बात करूँ, बहुत शर्मसार था अपने ऊपर"। कुछ सेकंड फिरसे दोनों के बीच ख़ामोशी छा गयी। राज ने ख़ामोशी को तोड़ते हुए एक गहरी सांस छोड़ते हुए कहा "I am sorry ऋचा"। ऋचा ने राज की आँखों से बह रहे आंसुओं को पोंछा और कहा "it's o.k, भाई", थोड़ी देर दोनों भाई बहन ऐसे ही बैठे रहे।

ऋचा ने बिस्तर से उठ ते हुए कहा "मैंने तो आपको बहुत पहले ही माफ़ कर दिया था", राज हैरत से ऋचा की और देखने लगा। ऋचा ने राज से अपना हाथ छुड़ाया और "गुड नाईट" बोल के दरवाज़े के तरफ बढ़ने लगी, राज ने पीछे से पुकारा "ऋचा"।

ऋचा दरवाज़े तक पहुँच चुकी थी, राज की आवाज़ सुन के वंही रुक गयी, उसने पीछे मुड़ के देखा तो राज बिस्तर से उठ के उसके पास आ रहा था। राज ने ऋचा के करीब आके उसे अपने आलिंगन में ले लिया और धीमे से उसके कान में बोला "मैं आज भी तुझसे बहुत प्यार करता हूँ"।

ऋचा ने भी राज को कस के अपनी बांहो में भींच लिया। राज ने ऋचा की गर्दन को चूम लिया, ऋचा के मुंह से सिसकारी निकल गयी और उसने राज के बालों को अपनी उँगलियों में भींच लिया। अब राज का खुद के ऊपर काबू न रहा और वो ऋचा को बेतहाशा चूमने लगा, कभी गर्दन कभी उसके कंधे को, कभी उसके सीने के ऊपरी भाग को।

ऋचा ने कमरे का दरवाज़ा भिड़ा दिया और राज ऋचा को लेकर बिस्तर पर गिर गया, उसने एक ही झटके में ऋचा की टीशर्ट को ऊपर किया और उसके पेट पर चुम्बनों की झड़ी लगा दी, उस वक्त ऋचा का धड़ बेड पर था और टाँगे फर्श पर लटक रही थी और राज फर्श पर घुटनो के बल बैठा ऋचा के पेट को चुम रहा था और अपने दोनों हाथों से ऋचा की बड़ी बड़ी चूचियों को ब्रा के ऊपर से दबा के उनकी कठोरता का जायज़ा ले रहा था। ऋचा बस सिसकारियों पर सिसकारियां ले रही थी, आज वो सारी मर्यादाएं तोड़ के राज का साथ दे रही थी। राज ने एक झटके में ऋचा की ब्रा को पकड़ के ऊपर सरका दिया और ऋचा की बड़ी बड़ी चूचियां झूलती हुई बहार आ गयी। राज ने बिना देर किये उसकी दायीं चूची को मुंह में भर लिया और किसी छोटे बच्चे की तरह चूसने लगा, ऋचा को जब राज के मुंह की गर्माहट का एहसास अपनी चूची पर हुआ तो उसके मुंह से "आह " निकल गयी और उसने राज के सर को अपने हाथों से ज़ोर से अपनी चूची पर दबा लिया। राज दूसरे हाथ से अपनी बहन की बांयी चूची को ज़ोर ज़ोर से दबा रहा था और ऋचा बस "आह" "आह" कर रही थी। अब राज ने देर न करते हुए एक झटके में ऋचा का पजामा panty सहित घुटनो तक सरका दिया और अपना शार्ट भी आनन फानन में उतार फेंका। राज तुरंत ही वापस ऋचा के ऊपर छा गया, राज का लंड किसी लोहे की रोड की तरह सख्त हो चूका था और अब वो ऋचा की चूत पर घर्षण कर रहा था। राज और ऋचा की नज़रें मिली और राज ने धीरे से पूछा "डाल दूँ?" ऋचा ने आँखे बंद कर के अपनी सहमति दे दी, राज ने नीचे की तरफ हाथ ले जाके लंड को उसकी चूत पर सेट किया फिर ऋचा के होठों को अपनी होठों में भर लिया और कमर को एक झटका दिया, आधा लंड सरक के ऋचा की चूत में समां गया। ऋचा के मुंह से एक ज़ोरदार सिसकारी फूटी "आह" और उसने फिर से राज के होठों को अपनी होठों के बीच दबा लिया और उनका रसपान करने लगी। राज ऋचा के होठों को चूसते हुए अपनी कमर को आगे पीछे करने लगा, आज उसे बहुत मज़ा आ रहा था, जैसे कोई मुंह मांगी मुराद पूरी हो गयी हो। राज ने अब अपनी स्पीड बड़ाई और साथ ही ऋचा के होठों से आज़ाद होके उसकी बांयी चूची के निप्पल को अपनी मुंह में भर के चूसने लगा। ऋचा ने एक नज़र घुमा के दरवाज़े की तरफ देखा, दरवाज़े की थोड़ी सी ओट से सामने ड्राइंग रूम के सोफे पर विनोद अभी भी बेसुध सा पड़ा सो रहा था। राज ज़ोर ज़ोर से ऋचा की चूत में धक्के मार रहा था, ऋचा की चूत उसे सुमन की चूत से कंही ज़ादा टाइट लग रही थी। कुछ मिनट के बाद राज पागलों की तरह धक्के मारने लगा और ऋचा अपनी कमर को उठा उठा के उसका साथ देने लगी। ऋचा को अपनी अंदर कुछ टूटता सा महसूस हुआ, उसकी कमर अकड़ गयी और उसने राज की कमर को ज़ोर से भींच लिया, तभी राज के लंड से एक ज्वालामुखी सा फूटा और उसने वीर्य से ऋचा की चूत को भर दिया। दोनों भाई बहन एक दूसरे के ऊपर पड़े हांफ रहे थे। कुछ सेकंड बाद राज ऋचा के ऊपर से हट के उसकी बगल में लेट गया और अपनी साँसों को दुरुस्त करने की कोशिश करने लगा। ऋचा की चूत से राज का वीर्य बहार निकल के बेडशीट को भिगो रहा था। अचानक बहार कुछ आहट हुई, ऋचा और राज तुरंत बिस्तर छोड़ के खड़े हो गए, ऋचा ने जल्दी से अपने कपडे पहने और बहार चली गयी, राज अभी भी अपना अंडरवियर ढूंढ़ने में लगा था।

बहार जाके ऋचा ने देखा तो विनोद सोफे से नीचे लुढ़का पड़ा था, थोड़ी देर में राज ने पीछे से आके विनोद को सहारा दिया और उसे ऋचा के बैडरूम में ले जाके लेटा दिया। राज ने ऋचा को फिर से पकड़ के किस करना चाहा पर ऋचा ने विनोद के डर से उसे रोक दिया। राज वापस आके अपने कमरे में सो गया।

अगले दिन राज को बस स्टैंड तक छोड़ने विनोद खुद आया था, इसीलिए उसकी ऋचा से कोई ख़ास बात न हो पायी थी। बस में विंडो सीट पर बैठा राज बहार खेतो में खिले सरसों के फूलों को देख रहा था, उसके जीवन में भी जैसे कोई नयी बहार आयी थी, पतझड़ के बाद कुछ नए रिश्तों ने जन्म लिया था।

THE END

Bahott hi badhiyaa story thii bhaiii. Mazaa aagaya padhkee. Raj ne past mein hawas ke haatho majbur hoke apni hi sagi behen ka rape karne ki koshish ki par usdin jaise taise usne khud ko rokh liya par usdin ke baad dono bhai behen ek dusre se juda hogyee.

Par 7 saal baad dono bhai behen phir se kareeb aaye. Aur hawas ke haatho majbur hoke saare purane rishte todke Naye Rishte ko janam de gaye aur woh kargaye jo bhai behen ke pavitra rishte ko apavitra kardiya.

 

[randeep]

Bahott hi badhiyaa story thii bhaiii. Mazaa aagaya padhkee. Raj ne past mein hawas ke haatho majbur hoke apni hi sagi behen ka rape karne ki koshish ki par usdin jaise taise usne khud ko rokh liya par usdin ke baad dono bhai behen ek dusre se juda hogyee.

Par 7 saal baad dono bhai behen phir se kareeb aaye. Aur hawas ke haatho majbur hoke saare purane rishte todke Naye Rishte ko janam de gaye aur woh kargaye jo bhai behen ke pavitra rishte ko apavitra kardiya.

Kahani aapko pasand aayi uske liye bahut bahut dhanyawad.

 

[Sasha!]

Superbbb Storyyyy

Main jyaada English story nhi padhta aur naahi uspe review deta hu. Isiliye sirf itna hi likhaa. Umeed hai aapko bura nhi lagega.

Apne story padhne ke liye waqt nikala wahi bohot hai mere liye

 

[Sasha!]

Story - Buree Qismat! Phir bhi too milee
Written by - Destiny

Funny lighthearted story hai, hero keeps facing difficulties and can't express his love (story of most Indian men ) but finally buri kismat ko lady luck ne accha kar diya

Nice efforts Bigul

 

[Batman]

...Meri Doosri Muhabbat...
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Spoiler

To agar pahela Ishq zakham thaa Naa
Too Dusra Ishq Malaham..

Too pahele Ishq nee mujhee sikhyaa Mujhee

Kyon pyaar karna chahiye , Too dusre Ishq nee sikhyaa

Mujhee.. Mujhe kyon pyaar karna chahiye

Aapne kabhi nayi slice ki bottle ke khali hone ke baad usme paani bhar ke piyaa hai..

Too pahela Ishq usme bhare aam rass ke jaisa hota hai

Too wahi Dusra Ishq paani jaisa jisme mehak aur

flavour too usi ki hoti hai par lekin voo swaad nahi hota

Too ye kahani hai mere...Doosre Ishq ki..


Too jab Paheli muhabbat, jab bikhar gyi thi Naa
Too Yee Tai Kiya tha ki ab..

Ab dobara kabhi Ghadi nahi pehanni hai.. ki ab ghadi ke kantee..

Agar Kisi ke nupatee me uljhee naa too kabhi sulajhh nahi payenge...

Too ab apne carrier pe dhyaan Dena hai apne sapno ko tabbajoo Deni hai..

Too padhaai ki aur exam dene ka faisla kiyaa..
Exam ki date Tay hui 12 Oct..

Sehar Lucknow..

Too Lucknow ki train pakdi aur uski aur nikal pade

2 station tak naa too koi train me Chadha aur
Naa hi koi utraa..

Aur Main apne hi khayalo me khoya hua tha..

Phir Teesre station pe entry Hui uski

Chitra... Chitra Sharma..

Lambai koi 5.8 inch..
Aur Rang bilkul dhoodh saa safeed..

Ekk white colour ki t-shirt...
Aur Ekk blue denim..

Kanno mee earphones..
Aur baal ekdum khule

Aur har ekk Chewim-gum ki bite pee..

bee sumaar..

Coolness..

Itnaa jaadu too sala..

Harry Potter ki..

Unn 7 kitabo , me nahi thaa..

Jitnaa uski unn doo ankho me thaa..


Usko dekh kr aisaa lagtaa thaa..
Naa..kii

Voo Taj mehal jaisi thi jisse Kewal muhabbat..
Kee liye banaaya gya hoo..

[..Ishq ki yaado kaa

Behad Hansi manzar thi voo

Mai doob jaata tha jiski yaado me

Voo samundar thi voo..]


Jisse dekh kr khush too huaa jaa saktaa hoo..

Lekin..Lekin usee kabhi apnaa naa banaaya jaa saktaa hoo..

Usaki Aankhe Itani Gahari Thi Ki, Tairana Aata Tha Magar Dub Jana Achchha Laga.

(Jeena Muhal Kar Rakha tha

Uski Inn Aankho Ne kaiyo kaa..

Khuli Ho To Talaash uski

Band Ho To Khwab uske)

Mai akshar khudaa see puchaa karta hu..
Kii Yee 2 aankh , 2 kaan , 1 naak

Aur battisss (32) daantoo wala yee
Combination..

Too hum sabkee pass hai naa..


Too Phir kyon.. kuch logo kee combinations
itnaa..itnaa

Perfect ...
itnaa Tabaahi hoti hai yaar..

Bairhaal uskee S2 mee enter karte hii..
Saari ladies nee

Jalan kee maare..
Lipstick kaa touch up kr liyaaa thaa...

Aur Ladkoo nee empression kee maare
Apne baal sawaar liye theee..

Lekin Mai...
Bhai Tumhara Sakth thaa..

Mai ab bhi apni kitaabo me uljhaaa hii hua tha..
Ki achanak

Voo mere pass ayi..

Aur booli ki..
Excuse me..

Kya mai yee app kaa..
Lower berth Lee sakti huu..

( ..Too dekhoo ..Yaar..

mai hawai jaahaaj mee too
Baithaa nahi thaa..

Jo khidki kee..bahar..kee badal.. jayada
important Hoo mere liye..)

Too maine kaha..
Theekh hai..
Hume koi aitraaz nahi..aap Lee sakti hoo..


Aur phir vo khidki kee bahar dekhne
Lag gyi aur

deekhtee - deekhtee - deekhtee...

Aur achanak meri aur muddi..
Aur boli..

Tum writer hoo...

Maine uski aur dekhte hue kaha..


Humn... haa..

Par aap ko kaise pata..

Usnee kaha bass...
bass pata hai..

Maine puchaa aap kya karti hoo..
Unhone kaha..

Barkhurdaar question karne kee sil-sileee mee
Pahele naam puchaa jaata hai..

Theek hai..

Too naam kya hai aap kaa..

Usne kaha Chitra sharma...

Phir jaisee Chitra rukii hii nahi..
Usnee mujhe lag bhag..

sab kuch bata diyaa..

Jaise ki - jaise ki
Kohli unhee kitnaa pasand hai..

Jaise ki - jaise ki

Kaise voo 8th class me Paheli baar apni
Cycle see gir gyi thi..

Aur apna ghutnaaa chilaa liyaa thaa..

Ki jaisee unhee kaddu bilkul pasand nahi..

(Vaisee bole too kaddu hum mee see kisi ko pasand nahi )

Usne mere ko yee bhi batayaa..
Usko hot choclate kaafi pasand hai..

Aur bataate-2 achanak mujh see
Puchaa ki..

Tumhee kya-2 pasand hai..

Maine kaha hot chocolate too nahi..

Haa..
Magar chai kee bade shaukeen hai..

Voo bhi extraa adrak wali..

Shaam koo..

Chai kaa waqt hua too..
Maine hum dono kee liye chai kharidi..

Aur Chai jab khatam hui..

Too phir unhone kaha ki chai kee paise
Mai pay karungi..

Too maine kaha ki yaar ye kaddu aur aur kohli
Kee bich paisee kaha see aagaye..

(Dil ki dhadkan aur meri sada hai tu
meri doosri aur akhiri wafa hai tu
chaha hai tujhe chahat se bhi bad kar
meri chahat aur chahat ki intiha hai tu..)

Hum Yee lazey aur laprwaah logo ki
Ekk aadat badi common hoti h..

Joo akshar bag see laptop yaa kitaabe
Nikaal lene ke baad..

Chain band karna bhool jaate h..

Too raat kaa jab waqt hua tab middle
Berth uthai gyi too..

Bag see meri cheeze farsh pe jaa giri..

Too phir maine
Apni mobile ke flashlight ki help see..

Farsh pr giri hui cheeze uthaai..
Aur apne berth pee rakh ke soone chala gya..

Subha 6 baje jab train Lucknow pr lagi..

Too asaaankh..logo kaa..
Huzumm chaddh gya thaa train mee..

Aur kisi tarah mai jadooo jahettee karte hue..
Apna bag tangaa aur platform pe
Utaar gya..

Phir yaad aya ki Chitra koo too alvidaa kahnaa hi
Bhul gya hu...

Aur mai vapas paltaa..

()

Par yee bhi too Tai Kiya tha Naa
Ki ab kisi koo choodh

Kee aane ke baad wapis palat ke nahi dekhnaa hai..

Too apne Mann see usee good byy kahne kaa khyal nikaalte hue..

Mai apne center ki aur nikal gya.
Exam chalu hone me 1 ghantaa thaa..

()

Too bag see jaise ki I'd proof..
Pencil eraser , pen wagira nikalne laga too..
Mere hoshh aurr..

Tootee...doonoo..

UDD gye..

Kyon ki mera admit card naadarad thaa..

Ekk anjaan shehar me jab aap kaa exam 1 ghante me chaalu hoo..

Aur aap kaa admit card aap koo naa mil raha hoo..
Naa..

Too sala tension God level ki hone lagti hai..

Maine exam officials see baat , request aur Jadoo jhett teeno ki..

Lekin woo logg Naa maane..

Hatashh mayushh baithaa hii thaa..
Kii..

Pichee see awaj aai..
Writer sehab kuch khoj rahe hai..

Kyaa.. ???


Maine palat kr pichhe dekhaa..
Too vaha pee Chitra khadi thi..

Hathoo mee mera admit card liye ...

Aur usi pal...
Laga ki yahi too cheez h..

Jiskii mujhe talash hai..

Voo dheere-2 mere pass aakr
Thodi doori pe Khadi hote hue kahti hai..

Vaisee aap tension me kaafi cute lagte hai...


Aur achaanak imteehaan ki ghanti bajj gyi..

Aur voo meri ankho me dekhte hue..
All the best ke liye thumbs-up kaa
Ishara karti h...

Aur mai exam Dena andar ki taraaf jaane laga..
Exam dene mai andar jaa hi Raha tha kii..

Usnee pichee see mujhe awaj lagyi...
Aur kaha..

Kii.. milnaaaa...

Humne kaha ki
Haa vahi yaar hum milenge kaise.. ???

Too unhone kaha ki..
Dasturrr raha too mil hii lengee..

Aur itnaa sunne ke baad mai andar exam hall me chala gya..

Exam dene ke baad jab mai lautaa..

Bass ekk hi makshad thaa jeevan mee
Ki ab Chitra koo khojnaa hai..

Snapc*t*. , f*. , Tw*tter , insta

Sab kuch pee koshish kii..
Par Chitra kahi nahi mili.. Mujhee..

Hataash laut hi Raha thaa ki
Kuch samaan lene ke liye..

Batuee mee see

Ekk ₹50 ka note nikala
Jispe ekk aur dasturr likhaa tha..

Aur dusri aur Chitra kaa no.

(...Har ekk dastur see bewafai
maine shiddat see hai nibhai

rastey bhi khud h dhoondhe aur
Manzil bhi khud banai..)

Too sala yee ahhsaas hua ki
Voo logg kahte hai naa..Yaar..

Zindagi me unhee muhabbat ekk baar hoti hai
Voo jhutthh kahtee hai..

Maine no. Dial kiya..

Pahela call...phir dusra.. Aur phir teesra call karne ke baad jab usne call nahi uthaya

Too Mai ekk baar ko udaas saa ho gya..
aur phir ekk aakhri baar call karne ki sochi

Lekin iss baar meri kismat ne mera saath diya aur
Phone uthaa liyaa gya..


Maine hello.. kaha..


Too phir udhar see

Kisi aadmi ki sakth aur bhaari bharkham aavaj sunai padi..


Jii aap kon..

Mai ekk baar koo thoda shock aur thoda hairan dono hoo gya..

Kyon ki mujhe bilkul bhi umeed nahi thi ki uskaa phone koi aur uthayega..

( Ekk baar koo mujhe laga ki kahi yee uskaa koi Jaan kaar yaa koi aur uska parichit too nahi )

Maine kaha jii..

Ye Chitra jii see baat karni thi..


Karib 5 se 10 second ki khamoshi kee baad
Vaha see koi jawab naa aata dekhh..

Maine phir see apna sawal dooh rahaya..

Too us aadmi nee thoda hichakte hue jawab diya..
Aur kaha ki..

Jii mai head constable Suresh Rane baat kr raha hu.. Azad chowk market see..

Police kaa naam suntee hi ekk baar ko too mai shocked ho gya..


Aur phir usne ekk lambi saans li Aur bolna chalu kiya..

Aur kaha..ki

Abhi kuch der pahele ekk truck nee...
ekk ladki koo
Takkar maar di...

Aur ladki ki at a time maukee pee hi Mautt hoo gyi..

Aur jab ye haadshaa hua

Mai uss see kuch doori pe hii chay ki dukaan pe baithaa hua tha...

Uss area me hi meri duty lagi thi..

Jab truck ne uss ladki ko takkar maari too
uskaa phone chatak kee kuch Durr divider ke paas jhadiyo mee jaa gira tha..

Aur abhi jab call aya tab hi meri iss pee nazar padi..

10 min pahele uski body ko ambulance mee daal ke city hospital Lee Jaya gya h..

Hadsaa hone ke turant baad maine inform kar diya tha..

Aap uski family ko inform kr dena..

Aur phone cut gya..

Ekk baar koo aisaa laga ki kisi nee ..
garam-2 tel mere kaano me daal diya hoo..

Mai kuch sunne samajhne ki haalat mee hi nahi thaa..
Mere dil ki dhadkan bahut teezi see chalni suru ho gyi thi..

Mera pura jism kuch hi min me poora pasine see bheeg Chuka thaa..


Mere gala bilkul sukkh gya thaa..
Mere muhh see ekk sabd bhi nahi nikal Raha thaa..

Meri halat bilkul kaato too khunn nahi aisi hoo gyi thi..

Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha mai kaise react Karu..

Mai cheekh naa chaahataa tha chillaana chahtaa tha...

Joor-2 se apna Seena Peet-2 ke Rona chahta tha
Duniyaa koo batana chahta tha..

Jaise ekk pal me sab kuch mil ke bhi mera sab kuch phir see kho gya..


Jindgi Me Baar Baar Sahara Nahi Milta

Baar Baar Pyar Se Koi Pyara Nahi Milta
Jo Pass Hai Aapke Usko Sambhal Kar Rakho

Kyoki Khone Ke Baad Vo Kabhi Dobara Nahi Milta



The End

Review :

Story Genre : Romance + charming

Story : Story achi thi, choti si cute type love story, jinse happy ending aaate aate ek u-turn le lia, badia heart touching love story thi. Ek aisi story jo hume school time ke dino me le jaati hai, jisse pahle pyaar ki mehak hai, jo maasum tha, saccha tha, Ishq wala love tha.

writing skills : Pahli story hone ke najariye se kaafi badia pakad thi kalam me, scene me jyada gap aur ghumav nahi tha, halka paragraph writing difficult laga, baaki dialougues and plot scenes kaafi point par the.

Reader's view: as a reader, ye ek choti si story aapko feel good aur good emotions feel karwaati hai, jis reader ko school type romance, halki teenage love story pasand ha, usko ye zarur padhni chahiye. iski ending se aapko ek baat zarur feel hogi, pyaar agar ho aur zighar ho seene me, dard beshak ho baad me ek baar pyaar ka hath thaam hi lena chahiye

 

[Batman]

Finally

Spoiler

Hello, friends here I come with one erotic story with a bit of kinky stuff I hope you guys will enjoy it.
So let's start with an introduction part there are only two limited characters in this story.

Megha is a 22-year-old girl short at 5.2" with black hair till her shoulders. She had a very curvy and a bit chubby body but the fat of her body was perfectly proportionate in the correct corners. she had perfectly round shaped tits, fatty butt cheeks and a beautiful face. She’s made for fucking.

Aarv is a muscular guy with 5.10" height fair skin and a handsome look as well overall he is like a dream guy of every girl's mind

In this story megha describing her experience with her bf, I hope you'll enjoy it
I'm sharing my experience with my bf when we met after a long time. Actually, we were dating each other for the last two years but coz of his job he moved to another town and we get separated.
In the past year, we were had a good time with each other and our sex life was awesome too.
He has always known that I'm a sub, he sorta figured it out from the start.
We always tried new things but We didn't really go into detail about how much of a sub I am. He spanked me a few times here and there not so much, he forced fingered me, he made things get pretty rough when we fuck, but it's never gotten as out of hand as I would prefer, still amazing. but I was always craving for a bit more.
After getting separated from him I started reading lots of sub dom stories it always turned me on so much and I wouldn't stop masturbating to them I also shared those stories with him
Finally, We met with each other after almost more than 6 months he told me he made some plans for our date. So I was pretty much excited about that.
I wanted to go to the airport to pick him up but he refused me and asked me to meet him in a shopping mall where we usually went to watch movies. So his hint was clear that he wanted to start the date with a movie
Finally, he arrived and we went inside the movie theatre he brought corner seats and the theatre was almost empty he purposefully brought tickets for the non-famous movie. only a few couples were there.
Well, about fifteen minutes into the movie he turned toward me and we started kissing and then making out and he forced his way into my mouth. It's made me a little wet. Next, I realized that he moved his hand onto my crotch and he was lightly rubbing it. Fast forward a bit, things have escalated after a bit of him rubbing my clit he stopped and turned back to the movie out of nowhere. I can't stand it so I started to rub my own clit for a bit. After a few minutes, I feel at least a little more satisfied and I pulled my hand out of my pants and focused all my attention on the screen. In the last half hour, we started making out again, then he reached over and pulled my boob out of my low cut shirt and he fiddled with the tit a little before subtly moving down to suck and nip at it. I'm getting really turned on, I was about to start massaging my clit again when he repositioned himself so his elbow was pushing into my pussy. He was not letting me masturbate. A feeling of desperation washed over me, I was trying to push his arm away but he won't budge. I go so far as to lightly grind against his arm. He won't even let me play with my tits when I tried he grabbed my hand and gave me a stern look.
I was super horny at that moment But then I knew he decided I shouldn't get to play with myself anymore.
Then I whispered in his ear that now "I can't handle any more" my panty was completely wet and my pussy water started dripping through it so we left the movie in middle and he Took me to the hotel room which he already booked for today's date.
When I entered the hotel room I get amazed after watching the room from inside. The room was fully decorated with thousands of flowers and many candles. what I feel at that moment I can't express my feelings in words.
Later he grabbed my waist from behind and started kissing my neck I asked him what is this then he whispered in my ear "you earn this" and he continued neck kissing. Then he started moving his hand on my body my pussy started dripping again it's started turning me on again I settled my palm on his hand and guided him towards my boobs he grabbed both of my boobs and started squeezing them.
I really need this Megha he again whispered in my ear and on next moment he pushed me towards the floor it was a gentle push but It gets happened suddenly My face is about to hit the floor. my short shirt falling forward exposing not only my back but my hanging breasts too.
When I turned my face I saw he Was unbuckling his belt.
Now I had no idea what is going to happen to me.
"Oh Megha ..." He whispered.
I heard the snap right before feeling the bite of the leather. I was shuddered and inhaled sharply at the surprise and pain as he hit a bit hard. Again and again, the belt fell and he beat me flesh, ever so slightly hitting a different spot each time. My pale complexion was reddened by the belt. My skin was aflame with the brutality of the strikes.
Later he started running his fingers on my back and then he pulled me up and threw me into the bed. Then he comes towards me and started undressing me within a few moments I was completely naked in front of him.
"Turn upside down" he ordered me and I followed his order without saying a single word
He took one ice cube from the jar and started moving that on my red belt marks
I felt really nice when he started grinding the ice cube on my back I forgot my all pain I started moaning with pleasure.
"Are you ready for another surprise" I came back from my unconscious mindset when he addressed me with his soft but dusky voice
"Another surprise what is it?" I replied

"Wait for a minute" he get down from the bed and opened his bag and he came back on the bed with handcuffs.
"Turn around" again he ordered me and I followed his order like a slave. he put handcuffs in my both hands and tied its rope to the corners of the bed
Then he took some ice cubes and put a few of them on my belly button area my whole body start shaking with joy. He slowly slowly started sliding ice cubes towards my pussy side I was excited and curious to know about his next step later he started grinding ice cube on my pussy lips and suddenly he put on cube into my pussy
Ahhhhh..... I yelled with pleasure within a second he put another cube with a bit roughly for this time
"No no....no plz get them out" I yelled again I was nearly about to cry at that moment. My pussy area started hurting coz of a sudden cold attack and he kept both cubes inside of my pussy for more than a minute it made my pussy senseless later he took off both cubes out of my vagina I felt a bit relaxed but not for long coz his next step was more surprising and more painful too.
He took one candle from the bad side
"Are you ready for this" he whispered
Umm-hmm I gave him my permission to go beyond
"Ask me to stop when u reach ur extreme limit" he took the candle flame near to my pussy
My pussy scene started to burn it was the most irritating and joyful moment of my life that feeling can't describe in words.
I was half crying and half moan I wanted to play with my boobs I wanted to squeeze them but I was helpless I started rubbing my toes with the bed and he just changed the position of flame very calmly like he was showing his aggression without being aggressive.
My pussy started burning "plz remove it it's hurting now"
I almost screamed so he took off the candle from my vagina
But he was not in the mood to stop neither did I want to stop him.
Later he started pouring wax of candle on my naked body, every inch of my body started burning like hell but at that moment I want that pain every single drop of wax leads me towards the joy of satisfaction. I was just screaming crying I want him to stop but I even wanted him to continue it.
Later he came close to my face and whispered in my ear
"Tell me who earned this pretty face," he asked me while pulling my chicks
"You my master" I replied
He put his hand on my right boob and squeezed it very badly. With his other hand, he twisted my other nipple hard while he lifted me. I cried out and without prompting said, "Yours, Master."
"Say it properly," he instructed.
"My nipples belong to you, Master. My breasts are your property."
Later he slides his hand on my pussy and put several fingers inside me
Ahhhh....... I screamed very loudly I felt like my pussy get teared

"To whom does this belong?" he asked.
"Master, my cunt is your property."
He removed one finger from my cunt and pushed it into my ass, hard, making me gasp. "And this?"
"My ass belongs to you, Master."

He removed his hand from between my legs, lifting my head by the hair with his other hand and bringing my mouth to his hand. I licked it clean and he forced his fingers into my mouth. "This?"
"This is your mouth, Master," I said as best as I could around his probing fingers. "It belongs to you."
"That's right," he said. "Your body belongs to me"
"Yes master my whole body belongs to you master plz punish me like ur slave" I yelled loudly
He removed his fingers from my mouth and opened my handcuffs and he get down from the bed to took off his shirt. He removed his jeans as well and he asked me to come on the edge of the bed
I did the same as he addressed me I was on my knees looking up at him with a pleading glance.
He pulled out his cock and He gently slided his hand through my hair until it gets to my ponytail. He grabbed it hard and pulled on it, tugging my head back. My nipples were hard, proudly pointing towards him.
"Suck it bitch" he ordered me to suck his cock with a tight slap on my face. His slap encouraged me and I took his cock's top inside my mouth
he made deep sounds I felt proud and excited, encouraged to go further
"Deeper baby"
I opened my mouth wider, slowly taking more of him in my mouth. In an impatient movement, he grabbed my hair and push himself all the way in until he reached my throat I gasp of surprised as he moans. He proceeded with slow thrusts down my throat, letting me catch my breath in between his motions . I felt used, his hand holding my head firmly in place each of his moans making me wetter. I was so proud of making him feel so good. I could taste pre-cum on my tongue. His thrusts grew faster and eager, letting me no time to breathe anymore. He was so close to cum. Even I didn't know when I started rubbing my clint while sucking his hard rock dick.
"Ur master gonna feed you baby but don’t swallow right away"
I felt my mouth filling with a warm and thick liquid, a salty taste. He exhaled of pleasure, emptying himself in my mouth. I just stayed there, mouth open and full of cum. He looked at me, visibly appreciating what he sees. I was still kneeled, my mouth open and full of him. I guessed my cheeks as my chest were both coloured pink.
"Swallow it now"
I did as he said, swallowing his cum, my pussy was wet and felt the bedsheet of the bed also get wetted coz of my pussy water and I was still rubbing my pussy I was about to cum but he grabbed my hand and pulled out it from my pussy
"do you like to touch yourself, Honey?" He asked me
"Yes my master" I replied with a blush
"How can u touch yourself without my permission" he roared
"I'm sorry master" I squeaked
"well, I'm going to punish you now, you slut. you'll learn to behave yourself are you ready for punishment?"
"Yes, Master plz punish your slut"

he took his belt again and then he told me to come over and lay across his lap. he started spanking me, hard, with the belt. he did this one-handed and with his other hand, he started fingering me. ignoring my clit he started filling up my pussy, pumping impossibly hard. one, two, three fingers... and my ass burned. I whimpered, and he paused.
after a bit more spanking, he decided I'd had my punishment after that he got onto the bed with me and kissed me quickly. he kissed his way down my body to my pussy and set to work licking it expertly. not to sound weird but he was like a pussy licking machine, like he was a robot eating pussy was what he was programmed for... needless to say he made me come within a few minutes just with his tongue. then, he worked his way up my body again, to my tits- not really kissing anymore... leaving a line of hickeys from my pussy up to my collarbone. then he worked on my nipples for a bit, sliding fingers into my pussy after a little while.
he made sure I was very, very wet. the wet patch in the bed was almost a puddle by this point. he removed his fingers and stopped touching me for a moment. then he asked me if I wanted him. I whimpered and nodded. he said, "use your words."
"I want you inside me."
"Turn around" he ordered me
I turned and bent knew what was coming so I get excited, always am excited when I know I'm about to get filled with his nine inches
He slid into me and then starts pounding me, thrusting in and out while I moan and wine like crazy.
like was showing me what sex was. in, out, in-out, filling me up completely with his hard cock.
Later he started spanking me again and again while I was like half cry half moan.
"Do you want me to fuck you harder"
"Yes master Fuck me harder"
"Go deep inside me"
"Yeah fuck me, right there"
"Plz don't stop"
"Don't stop until you come"
"I want you cum deep inside me"
He grabbed my ponytail from behind

"Keep fucking me like that.
Pull my hair "

He pounded me even harder, this time he started slapping me on the sides of my ass hard making me fall into fits of moaning, driving me crazy. he speeded up when he came inside me and at that point, he pumped furiously and then released his warm cum right inside me. i felt the orgasm building and building. I crested and my pussy squeezed his cock in waves.
I filled my pussy with his thick cum which is started sliding on my hips.
Finally, On that day I got what I always want from him......
The End

Review :

Story Genre : Erotica + BDSM

Story : Story was exquisite in terms of erotica, As the sex story demands initiation, teasing, hot scene and good climax, it had all the check points, Female character projects the image of a nympho who craves for more and more and male characters shows the true sign of a dom. so, concluding all this writer created scene with good depth for readers to enjoy it thoroughly.

writing skills : Plot writing and dialogue writing was good, story has minimum gaps between the scenes, but a little delay in sex story is useful, as a fresh writer smell of erotica was not lost, you can imagine it as a coffee but from a fresh beans.

Reader's view: as a reader, who likes BDSM, aka sub and dom play. you should totally read it.

 

[Scripted]

***Breaker of chains : Rise of New Era***​

Spoiler: ***Breaker of chains : Rise of New Era***

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Amawas ki Kaali Andheri raat thi aur na jaane aaj baadal kuch jyada hi gurraa rahe the, shayad kuch kahna chah rahe the, par humesha ki trah aaj bhi unki sunne waala koi nahi tha. Par door ek sunsaan kile ke tahkhaane me ek shaksh zarur kisi se kuch sunna chah raha tha………………..





Shaksh- Bata de, murakh mujhe jo janna hai, kab tak aise hi bediyo me sadta rahega, apni saari jawani aise hi nikaalega kya. Mujhe de de jo main maang raha hu, aisho aaram ki zindagi de dunga tujhe…..



Kaidi ko koi hosh nahi tha, uske dono hatho me bel bandi hui thi, jo uske hatho ko baandte hue uske kaara ghar ke beecho beech chat par bandhi hui thi, uske haatho par bel ki jakdan se gehre laal-neele nishan ho chuke the, uska sharir zakhmo se aur kale neele nishano se bhara hua tha, ye saaf tha kaidi ko bahut waqt tak trah trah peeda di gyi thi.

Isi peeda ki wajah se use use shaksh ki baate dhundli sunaai de rahi thi, uski aankhe aadhi khuli thi, use lag raha tha wo ek sapna dekh raha hai, uski kale bade baal khulkhar uske chehre par faile hue the, uski aankhe uske baalo me se rah rahkar jhaank rahi thi. Uski aankhe dard aur km neend ki wajah se srukh laal thi, chehre par ek bhi shikand nahi thi, badi kaali daadhi se uska chehra ek khukhaar sher jaisa lag raha tha, isi beej lagataar us shaksh ki aawaj se uske kaano tak rah rahkar pahuch rahi thi.



Kaidi aisi sthiti me bhi data hua tha, aur na jaane kyu uska mann aaj khush tha, aur shaksh ki baate sunkar uske sukhe hotho par halki muskan aa gyi. Jo us shaksh se dekh li.



Shaksh- ab kya rah gya hai teri zindagi me hasne ke lie, tu yaha bediyo me sad raha hai, jaanwaro se bhi bat trr zindagi jee raha hai, teri saari zindagi mere hatho me hai, teri bahan aadhi paagal ho chuki hai, teri maa lambi neend so rahi hai, tere baap ko tune khud us din maar dia tha. Kuch hi dino me teri behan 20 saal ki ho jaaegi, tab poore 2 saal ho jaaenge tujhe is kaid khaane me. Mujhe de de jo mujhe chahiye aur fir jee lena apni zindagi.



Kaidi apni behan ke baare me sunte hi uske andar se na jaane kaise shakti aa jaati hai, aur wo zor se dahaad ke bolta hai, aur poore tahkhaane me aawaj goonj jaati hai, bhaari bhaari bedio se badhe hote hue bhi aisa lagta hai wo abhi chut kar us shaksh ki gardan pakad lega. Uska poora sharir hil uth ta hai

Kaidi- nahi dunga tujhe kuch bhi, khaali hath jaaega tu humesha yaha se, ek din main yaha se nikal kar teri gardan ko apne hatho se tod dunga, aur tere khoon ki ghoot piyunga. Apni kaali jubaan se meri behan ka zikar na karna kabi, warna teri ruh ko anantkaal tak apna gulaam banaunga.



Shaksh (haste hue)- dekh raha hu, teri hekdi abhi gyi nahi hai. Jaildar se kahunga teri hawa tight karega, jis din tu tutega, us din mujhe tu sab kuch bata dega, ek na ek din tujhse main uglwa hi lunga sab



Kaida (gurraate hue)- chala jaa, tu yaha se, isse pahle main tujhe aur is jaildaar ko aur is poore tehkhaane ko tabah kar du, aaaaahhhhhhhh………

Shaksh (shaintaani hasi haste hue)- koshish to karke dekho kya hota hai.

Kaidi ki aawaj ek dum bhaari kisi jaanwar jaisi ho jaati hai, uske baal hawa me uthne lagte hai uske hath bade hone lagte hai….par jaise hi uski shakti badhne lagti hai. Wo bedia safed Roshni se jal uthti hai, aur wo kaidi dard se tadapne lagta hai.



Kaidi- aaah DARK MAGE…….tujhe ek din yaha se nikalkar mout ke ghaat utaar dunga..aaaaaahhhh



Dark Mage (apna kaala jaadui staff ghumaata hai)- jab tak mujhe jo chahiye tun ahi deta, tu yahi rahega………aaram se soja abhi..mere paaltu….hahahahaaaaaa

Dark Mage jaadu karke use sula deta hai.

DM- jaildaaaar, mere paaltu ka dhyaan rakho, jyada hi jangli ho raha hai, main dobara aaunga tab tak ye seedha ho jaaana chahiye.



Jail daar- ji sarkaar.

Dark mage apne kale choge me chehre ko dhak kar bahar nikal gya, baahr uska kaal dragon uska wait kar raha tha. Wo uspar baithkar apne mehal me chala gya.



Idhar kothary me jaildaar ne, kaidi ko 4 gaaliyan di aur wapas apni gasth par chala gaya…..

Kaidi abhi tak behosh tha, thodi der me hosh me wo wapis aaata hai, dekhata hai ki dark mage jaa chuka hai aur wo waise hi kaidkhaane me bediyo se bandha hua latka hua hai. Uske dono baaju dard kar rahe hai, aur uska poora sharir jaise aag me jal raha tha.



Kaidi sochne lagta hai, kaise usne apne laalach ke chalte, apni poori zindagi tabah kar li, kaise uska bhara poora pariwaar usne apni hi hatho se khatam kar dia, aur jo dard uske dil me hai wo in sab bediyo ke dard se dard se, dark mage ke julm se badh kar bhi jyada hai. Dark mage usko itna tabah nahi kar sakta jitna usne khud ko kar lia tha. Kaidi sochne lagta hai jaise kal hi baat thi……



2 saal pahle Backstory……



Dunia ke paas ab samay kum bacha hua tha, is dunia ka sooraj khatam hone wala tha, bus 10-15 saalo me saari dharti ki uraja, ped poude, jeev jantu, poora jaadu bhi jo ki sooraj ki uraja se tha, khatam hone waale the. Aise waha ke Rajkumar DUNGEON MASTER ne ek tarkeeb nikaali jisse poori dunia bach sakti thi, aur fir se sukh shaanti wapis aa sakti thi. Par uske lie uske akele ke paas itni shakti nahi thi. Aur isme waha ke raja Mahamahim jadugar aur uske mantri raajkumar dungeon master ke plan ko support nahi kar rahe the. Aise me ek baar aakhri koshish karte hue Dungeon Master ne Apne pita ke aur sab mantrio ke aage apna plan vistaar me batakari sabko raaji karne ki sochi……….

Mantrimandal sabha :



Dungeon Master: Mahamahim, humare paas aur koi upaae nahi hai, agar humne kuch nahi kiya to dharti kuch saalo me khatam ho jaaegi, is dharti pe Jeevan ka vinaash ho jaaega.

Mahamahim: jaise har chiz ka shuruwaat hoti hia, har chiz ka ant bhi zaruri hai, yahi prakarti ka niyam hai, hume isse chedchaad nahi karni chahiye

Dungeon Master: Par iska matlab aap apne raajay praja aur pariwaar ka ant dekh sakte hai ? kya ek raja hone ke naate aapka dharam nahi banata ki apni praja aur raaj ko bachae

Mahamahim: Kitne hazar saalo se hum apni praja aur raaj ko kaayam karte aa rahe hai, apne shatruo se aur najaane kine vinaashkaari sankato se humne apne raajya ki Raksha kari hai, parantu ab jab Jeevan savaym hi khatam hone jaa raha hai, sristi ka virod sawayam param shakti ka virod hai, ye to honi hai honi ko koi nahi taal sakta, agar sampooran vinash niyati ke anusaar hona hai to hume dharam ki raah par chalte hue isko swikaar kar lena chahiye.

1 Mantri: maharaja bilkul sahi kah rahe hai, prakarti hi pram shakti hai (sab mantrimandal ne sath me bola)

Dungeon Master: kya prakarti ne khud hi hume sochne aur samjhe ki shakti aur khud ke bachav ki shakati nahi di hai, kya humaara faraz nahi banata ki agar prakarti aur is dharti ko bachaane ka agar koi tarika hai hum us par amal kare, kya humari shakti aur soch khud prakarti ka hissa nahi hai. Kya hume apne ghar ko bacchane ka koi mool adhikaar nahi hai.



Mahamahim: tum apne sawarth ke lie, aur maout ke darr se aisa bol rahe ho, tumhe andaza nahi hai ki zindagi aur mout ek hi hisse ke do pahlu hu. Tum bus aane waale samay ko lekar darr rahe ho, parantu parakarti ne hume jo shakti di hai, Jeevan dan dia hai to hume prakarti ka dia jaane wale amar ant bhi manjoor hona chahiye. Hum prakarti ke niyamo ka aadar sammaan karte hue apni maryaada par challenge. Yahi humamara tumhare majamahim ka, raajkul ka, faisala hai. Sannnn staff ki aawaj (mahamahim ne apni staff ko zameen par jor se maarte hue kaha….)

Dungeon master: panratu…..

Mahamahim (gusse se): aakhri faisla hai……(staff zameen par maarte hai, poori sabha me safed rohni fail jaati hai)

Poora mantri mandal chaaplusi karte hue bolte hai- jai ho mahamahim ki jai ho….





Us din Dungeon master waha se sir jhukhaaye chala jaata hai, parantu use uske upar apne samaj, apne ghar bar apni janta ko bachane ka bhaar mahsoos hota tha, use lagta tha jab uske paas sabkuch thik karne ki vidya hai to, ek raata hai, to kyu wo ruk raha tha.



Aakhri usne mahamahim, apne pita, ki aagya ko na maante hue, sab kuch apnne haath me lene ki sochi, is sab ke lie uske paas itni shakti nahi thi, poore samraajy me sabse takatwar mahamahim hi tha. Isilie usne apni maa aur behan ko apni baat samjhaate hue apni aur kar lia.



Rani maa, dungeon master ki maa, usse bahut pyaar karti thi, wo apne bete ke lie, apne pariwaar ko bachane ke lie kuch bhi kar sakti thi, use bhi apne bete ke upar naaj tha ki uski vidya ki wajah se poori duniya bach jaaegi.



Doosri traf, Twin-Flame, dungeon master ki behan, beshak apne bhai se bahut pyaar karti thi, parantu wo apne pita ki laadli thi unse se bahut pyar karti thi, par wo apne pariwar ko, janta ko, khona nahi chahti thi, use bhi apne bhai ke plan jo ki zindagi ko bachane aur kaayam karne ka tha, par bharosa tha. Apne pita aur bhai me se kisi ek ko chunne ki kasamkash uske lie bahut muskil thi, kyu ki wo bachpan se hi Bi-polar thi, jiske rahte uska savbhav kabhi kabhi bahut dayadil, naramdil aur komal par kabi kabi bahut khuni-bhayanak aur nirdayi ho jaati thi, uska aadha sharir kabhi kabhi aag jaisa ja luth ta tha, kabi kabi barf jaisa ban jaata tha…uske paas anokkhi shaktiya thi, wo bhi bahut shaktishali thi.. Par jaise taise wo maan gyi aur tino mahal aur raajya se door ek puraani khandar me jaakar vidhi ko poora karne ka plan banaya.



Tino, Dungeon Master ke Dragon Drogon ke upar baith kar Andheri raat me udkar khandar me pahuch gye. Drogon pure Mystical kingdom me sabse shaktishaali mythical creature tha, wo dungeon master ke sath hi bada hua tha, dono ke beech ek atut rista tha, wo dungeon ka poori trah se wafadaar tha, wo gehre laal rang ka dragon tha, jo ki bade bade seharo, parvato ko apni aag se khatam karne ki shakti rakhta tha. Wo 100 foot lamba dragon tha, matlab ki badi badi building uske saamne choti lagti thi. Par kamal ki baat ye thi ki mythical creature hone ki wajah se wo apna size kum jyada kar sakta tha, jyada tar wo apne aap ko ek ghode ya hathi ke size tak hi rakhta tha, kabi kabi ek chote se chipkali jaisa bhi, jisse wo dungeon master ke gale ya kandhe par khelta rahta tha.



Tino, Andheri raat me khandar me pahuchte hai, drogon apna size chota karke wahi pe raat ki neend poori karne lagta hai.



Dungeon master: maa main vidhi shuru karta hu, aap dono ko ko vidhi me saamil hona hoga, uske beech hum tino apni shaktiyo ko kendrit karte hue vidhi ko poora karna padega.

Rani maa- thik hai beta, tum jaldi karo, tumhare pita se koi baat nahi chipti, vidhi ko jaldi poora karna hoga, agar wo aa gye to vidhi poori nahi hogi

Twin-flame- ha bhai, tum vidhi shuru karo, tab tak main bahar pahra deti hu.



Vidhi ke anusar, tino ki shaktio ko ek hona tha jiske rahte, ek apar shakti ki wajah se dungeon master dusri dunia ka portal khol deta, aur waha ki urja se apni dunia ke surya ko thik kar dega.



Dungeon master vidhi shuru karta hai, rani maa vidhi ke kaary me hath bataati hai, raani maa ke paas “foresight” ki power thi, wo kuch samay tak future me dekh sakti thi, wo dekhti hai ki mahamahim apne mythical creature FlameWings par baith kar khandar ki tarf aa rahe hai, aur uske sath kingdom ka sabse takatwar samurai jo ki raajgaddi ke lie bahut loyal tha, wo bhi aa raha hai.



Raani maa- beta jaldi karo, tumhare pita ji aa rahe hai, unko pata lag gya hai, aur wo yaha aayenge to sab kuch tahas mahas kar denge, shayad hume maar bhi de, tumhe unke gusse ka pata hai.

Dungeon master: maa par vidhi to abhi aadhi hui hai, mere paas shakti nahi hai ki akele main is vidhi ko poora kar paau

Rani maa- beta main tumhe apni poori shakti de deti hu, aur tumhari behan bhi apni shakti tumhe de degi, isse tum vidhi poori kar lena, aur main tab tak tumhare pita ko sambhal lungi.

Dungeon master: maa tum agar apni shakti mujhe de dogi to tum uske bina tumhari soul urja unbalance ho jaayegi, tum bahut kamjor ho jaaogi, aur aapki umar bhi jyada hai, pata nahi kya hoga, main ye risk nahi le sakta.

Rani maa- jyada der ki baat nahi hai, vidhi poori hone ke baad tum mujhe meri shakti wapis kar dena. Baaki baato ka samay nahi hai, ujawal bhavishy ke lie itna risk to lena padega, Beti jaldi andar aao….(rani maa twin flame ko aawaj deti hai)

Twin-flame ko apni maa ki ghabraayi hui aawaj sunai deti hai, wo daud kar andar jaati hai.

Twin-flame- kya hua maa ?

Rani maa- beti baato ka samay nahi hai, tumhare pita is traf aa rahe hai, hume apni shaktiya tumhare bhai ko deni hongi.



Twin-flame : thik hai maa, jaisa aap kahe.

Dungeon Master taiyaar ho jaata hai, dono maa-beti apni shakti dungeon master ko dene lagti hai.

Rani-maa hawa me dono hath ghumati hai, aur apni shakti dungeon master ko de deti hai : (Dance of souls)

Twin-flame apna jaadu karti hai, (ice age), aur uski shakti dungeon master ke andar chali jaati hai.

Maa-beti, dono ki shakti milne ke baad dungeon master ki shakti badh jaati hai, uske aankho me se halki halki aag ki lapte nikalne lagti hai, aur uska pahna hua choga apna rang badalkar laal ho jaata hai.

Idhar rani-maa jaise hi apni shakti dungeon master ko deti hai, uske sharir me ek dum se spast roop se dikhne waali kamjori aa jaati hai, aur uske baal jaise safed ho jaate hai. Par twin-flame ki umar abhi kum thi isilie us par jyada asar nahi hua. Uska dimagi santulan thoda bigad ho gya tha

Rani-maa- samay na gawao ab, jaldi se vidhi ko poora karo, beti tum mere sath bahar aao.

Twin-flame (hosh sambhalte hue)- aasha karti hu aap kaamyaab honge bhaiya.

Dungeon master (smile karte hue): bilkul meri behna.



Dono maa beti, khandar ke bahar pahuch jaati hai, aur mahamahim ka intezaar karti hai, idhar dungeon master ne shakti milne ke baad vidhi ki gati ko tej kar dia tha.



Mahamahim apne firephoneix (Flamewings) ke upar baith ke aa raha hota hai, jiske sath Demon samurai bhi hota hai, ab rani maa aur twin-flame dono ko mahamahim flamewings ko dekh sakte the.

Rani-maa aur twin-flame, dono ko darr lag raha tha, dono hi mahamahim ki shaktio ki aage bahut kamjor thi. Par fir bhi rani-maa ko umeed thi ki wo mahamahim ko kaise bhi karke waha rok lengi. Twin-flame bahut hi pareshan thi, uska dimag fata jaa raha tha, wo apne pita ka saamna nahi karna chahti thi, uske dimag me ajeeb sa pagalpan chaata jaa raha tha.

Twin-flame ka sir ghumne lagta hai, aur wo apne sir ko jor jor se ghumaane lagti hai, uske baal poore khul kar bikhar jaate hai, aur wo ajeeb si hasi hasne lagati hai, jise sunkar rani maa chintit hokar puchti hai, kya hua beti thik to ho.



Twin-flame (ajib si hasi haste hue)- aaee Bhudia tu apna kaam kar na, yaha sab marne waale hai, mout ka taandav hone waala hai, mains sabko jala kar raakh kar dungi.

Rani-maa samjh jaati hai ki twin-flame ka dusra roop bahar aa gya hai, aur wo ab jo bhi saamne hoga usko maar daalegi.

Wo apne aap ko sambhal leti hai, apni shaktiya dungeon master ko dene ke baad wo thodi kamjor ho gyi thi, use maalum tha wo aise condition me jyada ladd nahi paaegi. Wo bus kuch bhi karke thoda samay nikaalna chahti thi, jisse dungeon master vidhi ko poora kar le.

Dungeon master ke pas shakti thi, to usne sabse pahle khandar ke chaaro aur ek surakha kawach ka mantra padh kar ek jaadui ghera bana dia, jiske andar aana kaafi muskil tha.

Mahamahim flamewings ke upar se dekhta hai ki uski beti aur uski patni khandar ke bahar khade hai aur wo samj jaata hai ki uska beta bhi andar hai aur kuch galat hone waala hai.

Wo demon samurai ke sath tha, dono khandar ke paas jaake utar jaate hai, Mahamahim bina kisi ladai ke maamle ko rafa dafa karna chahta tha, par shyad usko bhi andaza tha aisa hona namunkin hai. Demon samurai chup chaap mahamhim ke sath khada tha, use pata tha ye raj gharane ka matter hai, wo mahamahim ki aagya ke bina kuch bhi nahi karega.

Mahamahim- maharani tumse ye ummeed nahi thi hume, aapne raajgaddi ke hukum ka ullaghan kiya hai.

Rani-maa- humne apne baccho ka sath dia hai, aur apni janta ke hit ke lie socha hai, jo aap nahi kar paae, aapne jaha mirtyu ko apna liya hai, wahi humne Jeevan ko gale se lagaya hai, hum apne pariwar aur janta ko aise marne nahi denge

Mahamahim- aap putra moh me andhi ho gyi ho maharani, aap ko sahi galat ki samajh nahi rahi.

Rani-maa- sahi galat ki samajh janam dene waali sirf, Jeevan ko shuru karne waali sirf maa hi samjh sakti hai. Huamri samajh sahi raah par hai maharaja aap hi bhatak gye hai.

Mahamahim samjh jaata hai, raani-maa se baat karke kuch nahi hoga, wo apni putri twin-flame ki aur dekh kar kahta hai.

Mahamahim (uski aawaj me dukh aur disappointment thi): beti tum bhi apne pita ke khilaaf ho gyi ho, hume ye dekh kar bahut dukh hua hai.

Twin-flame jo ki raani-maa aur mahamahim ki baato par dhyan nahi de rahi thi, wo paagal hokar apna aaapa kho chuki thi, usne mahamahim ki baat ka ajeeb si bhaari aawaj me bus ek hi shabd me jawaab dia- Maroge……

Aur ye bol kar twin-flame jaadu ghere ke bilkul samne kood padi thi, jaise ki wo humle ke lie taiyar thi. Idhar mahamahim bhi samjh gya tha ki uski beti ka dusra savbhaav baahar aa gya hai, ab wo khukhaar ho gyi hai usse baat karne ka kuch faaeda nahi. Wo Demon samurai ko order deta hai.

Mahamahim: samurai aage badho aur jaadu ghere ko tod do…

Demon samurai: jo aagya mahamahim



Demon samurai attack karte hue: (Demon slash), apni talwar ko hawa me ghumaata hua apna attack taiyar karta hai, dekhte hi dekhte uski talwaar black ho jaati hai, aur kaali talwar ko jor se jaadui ghere ke upar maarta hai, ek badi kaali parchaai hawa ko kaat ti hui, ghere par padti hai. Aur ghera thoda kamjor ho jaata hai….





Idhar khandar ke andar dungeon master apni vidhi ko poora karne hi vaala hota hai, jab use demon samurai ka attack feel hota hai, use pata lagta hai uske paas jyada waqt nahi hai, wo apni poori shakti se. vidhi ko jaise taise poori kar deta hai, uski saanse chad jaata hai, uske sharir ki nashe fool jaati hai, uski chaati me saans lena bhaari ho raha tha, par use pata ki vidhi kitni zaruri hai isilie wo rooka nahi. Aur jaise hi vidhi poori hui, dusri dunia ka portal khul jaata hai. Jo ki khandar ki theek upar hota hai. Jaise hi wo portal khulta hai, aasman beech me fat jaata hai, aur raani-maa, mahamahim, twin flame aur demon samurai sab aasman ki aur dekhte hai. Mahamahim ko jis baat kar dar wahi ho gya, use laga ki ghor anarth hone waala hai.

Mahamhim: jaldi karo samurai.

Demon samurai mahamahim ki traf dekhta hai, aur apni gardan se haa me ishaara karta hai, aur ek bada attack karta hai (Dance of dark angel) is attack ke sath demon samurai ki black sword se bahut saare dark shadow attacks lagataar jaadui ghere par padne lagte hai. Aur ghera ek dum se toot jaata hai.



Ghere ke tut te hi, dungeon master ko pata lag jaata hai, parantu tab tak wo dusri duniya, jo ki ek multiverse ki hazaro dhartio me ek aur dharti thi, ke suraj se shakti lena shuru kar deta hai.

Mahamahim dekhta hai ki aasman me khule portal me se urja nikal rahi hai aur khandar ke andar jaa rahi hai, use pata chal jaata hai ki dungeon master urja khich raha hai. Mahamahim ko jaldi hi kuch karna tha, nahi to bahut der ho jaati.



Mahamahim khandar ki aur kadam badhaata hi hai ki, twin-flame attack kar deti hai. (Hell fire….) charo aur aag fail jaati hai, par mahamhim ki shakti ke aage twin flame kuch bhi nahi thi, wo aag ko apni chadi ghumar kar, apne staff ki uraja se sokh leta hai.

Mahamahim: bus beti bahut hua, hume jaane do

Raani-maa: aap kahi nahi jaa sakte, rani maa attack karti hai (soul lock): jisse mahamhim ki soul aur rani-maa ki soul aapas me lock ho jaati hai.



Mahamahim: rani-sahiba bus kijie, aap galat kar rahi hai.

Rani-maa: sahi galat ka samay nikal chuka hai..aahhhh



Rani maa ki shakti kum thi isilie wo struggle kar rahi thi, par use pata thi ki use kuch hi der ke lie mahamahim ko rokna hai.

Idhar mahamahim ne samurai ko ishara kia, demon samurai aage badhkar twin-flame ko sambhalne ke lie taiyaar hua. Demon samurai ne apni talwar ki urja apne next attack se badha di, uski talwar ab kaali hokar usme ajib se laal aag jal uthi thi.



Par itne me hi, aasman me se khule portal me se kisi jaanwar ki guraane ki uchi aawaj aati hai

Graarrrrrr Graarrrrrr raarrrrrrr​

Sab upar dekhne lagte hai, ek kale rang ka bada dragon apne muh se aag nikaalta hua portal me se is dunia me aa raha tha, jaise hi wo portal me se poora nikala usne jaise poore khandar ko apne wings ke niche le lia, poora khandar andhere me dhoob gya. Fir ek dum dragon ne apne muh se aag faiki (Volcono fire)



Par jaise hi aisa hua, mahamahim ne rani-maa ka attach ek dum se tod dia apne jaadu se ek ghera bana lia aur dragon ki aag se sabse bacha lia. Par mahamhim ke jaadui ghere ke aas paas ki jagah sab jal uth ti hai. Wo uchi uchi lapto me kuch nahi dikh raha tha.

Rani-maa apni foresight ki power use karti hai, use pata lag jaata hai kya hone wala hai, wo xforum-communication se mahamahim ko usi waqt sab bata deti hai. Par jaise hi wo ye karti hai uski shakti khatam ho jaati hai aur wo behosh ho jaati hai.

Twin-flame ye dekhti hai aur wo samajti hai ki mahamahim ne rani-maa ko maar dia hai, wo mahamahim ki traf attack karne ke lie aage badhati hui daud padti hai, aur hawa me kood kar attack karne ko hoti hai ki mid-air me hi mahamahim apni shakti ka prayog karte hue twin-flame ki shaktiya cheen lete hai aur use behosh kar dete hai.

Mahamahim demon samurai ko jaldi se ek xforum-communicate karte hue Sandesh bhejta hai, aur demon samurai jaldi se rani-maa aur twin-flame ko dono kandho par uthakar dragon ki aag ke beech se khandar se door ghane jungle me le jaata hai. Wo samaj jaata hai ki kuch bada galat hone wala hai.



Jaise hi aag thodi kum hoti hai, dragon apne wings se hawa ko tej karte hueaag ko kum kar deta hai, black dragon ke attach se khandar ke andar vidhi ko poora kar rahe hai dungeon master ka link dusri dunia ki urja se toot jaata hai, aur wo jaldi se apne dragon ko taiyaar kar leta hai, dungeon master ka fire dragon Drogon apne bade poore roop me aa jaata hai, aur fire phoenix flamewings bhi apna size bada kar leta hai aur dono black dragon se ladne ke lie taiyar ho jaate hai.



Itne me ek aawaj poore aasman me goonj uthi hai, jo ki black dragon par baithe ek shaksh ki thi, aur wo koi aur nahi DARK MAGE tha

DARK MAGE: is duniya ke vaasiyo tumhara naya raja aa gya, tumhari sukh shaanti ke lie yahi sahi hoga ki tum humari shakti ke ghutne tek do, warna anjaam bhukto aur mout ko gale lagao, hahahaha (pagal ki trah haste hue)

Mahamahim aur dungeon master dono khandar ke bahar hote hai, bade bade dragons ke wings se hawa tej chal rahi thi.

Mahamahim: beta, abhi ke lie aapsi baato ko bhul jaao, ye shaksh humari dunia kaisi bhi ho uspar kabja karne aaya hai aur iske iraade shaitaani lag rahe hai.

Dungeon Master: pita ji aap thik kah rahe ho, aisa hi lagta hai.

Dark Mage apne black dragon se utar kar niche aa jaata hai, aur mahamahim aur dungeon master usko dekh rahe the, dono kaano kaan chokanne the, aur kisi bi waqt hone wale humle ke lie taiyar. Jab wo dhyan se dekhte hai to dono shock ho jaate hai.

Dark Mage: to is poore saamraayja ke raja tum ho buddhe.

Dungeon master: tameez se baat karo, tumhe nahi pata tum kisse baat kar raha hu

Dark mage: jitni ijjat ek gulam ko milni chahiye utni mil rahi hai, aur dekho to humari shakal milti hai par fir bhi tujhe dekhkar mujhe kitni ghinn aa rahi hai. Tumhari zindagi abhi tak vyarth thi, ab tumhare Jeevan ka ek hi maksad meri seva, apne raja ke aage juko. (dark mage apna kaala staff zameen par maarta)



Dark mage ki shakal dungeon master se milti thi, par bus ye fark tha ki wo ek jaalim dunia ko khatam karne wala, laalchi insaan tha. Aur dungeon master life ko save karna chahta tha, dayadil thi, sabke hit ke lie sochne waala.

Mahamhim: tumhare lie accha hoga tum jaha se aaye ho, aur tumhare jo bhi iraade hai unko lekar apni dunia me wapis chale jaao. Isi me tumhari aur sabki balai hai.



Dark mage ab unke chaaro aur chalte hue baat karne lagta hai, : tum mujhe apne pita ki yaad dilaato ho, wo bhi aise hi badi badi baate kiya karte the jinka koi matlab nahi tha, mujhe humesha lagta tha unka dimag kharab hai, isilie mujhe unse nafrat thi. Aaahhhhhhhh (dark mage attack kar deta hai)…

Iske sath hi ladai shuru ho jaati hai dungeon master ka fire dragon drogon aur sath me mahamahim ka flamewings aur dark mage ke dragon ke sath ladne lag jaate hai.



Mahamahim us attack se bache hue apne staff se dusra humla karte hai, aur dark mage us attack ko apne staff se absorb kar leta hai.

Dungeon master bhi ladai me saamil ho jaata hai, wo attack karta hai to uske attacks ko dark mage apne baaye hath se rok deta hai aur uske upar attack kar deta hai.



Mahamahim aur dungeon master dono samaj jaate hai ki dark mage bahut jyada powerful hai, usko aise nahi hara sakte hai.

Idhar dark mage samjh jaata hai ki mahamahim jyada powerful hai par dungeon master ke andar ladne ke badiya gur hai. Wo soch leta hai use kya karna hai.



Dark mage ek bada attack karta hai : apne anjaam ke taiyaar ho jaao (Darkness of dark side of moon) jisse ek bada kaala energy ka gola dungeon master ki traf jaa padta hai.

Isse dungeon master rokne ki koshish karta hai (first ray of sun) apne attack se, ek badi light ki beam uske staff se nikalti hai aur dark mage ki energy ball se takra jaati hai. Par dark mage ka energy ball bahut shakti shalli tha. Mahamhim ko bhi us attack ko rokne ke lie dungeon master ke paas jaana pada.



Par jaise hi mahamhim dungeon master ke paas jaane ke lie aage badhta tha, dark mage isi chiz ka intezaar kar Raha tha. Dark mage ne apne staff se ek energy ball aur banayi aur mamahim ko usme kaid kar lia.

Dark mage: buddhe bahut chappar chappar kar li tune, tera kaam khatam ho gya ab. Ab is dunia ko teri zarurat nahi hai.

Dungeon master : pita ji, nahi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dungeon master ka attack bada ho jaata ho jaata hai, aur wo badi koshish karke dark mage ki badi energy ball ko piche push karke aasman me fenk deta hai.

Par tab tak dark mage mahamhim ko apne energy ball me kaid karke aasman me khule hue dusri dunia ke portal me fenk deta hai, uske piche piche dungeon master ka dragon and flamewings dono hi portal me chale jaate hai, aur jaise hi dark mage aisa karta hai, wo portal band ho jaata hai.

Dungeon master : main tujhe jaan se maar dunga (fire of thousand suns) dungeon master attack karne ki shuruwaat karta hai. Par isse pahle hi dark mage dungeon master ke piche teleport hokar usko apni energy beam se hit kar deta hai….aur dungeon master wahi behosh ho jaata hai.

Aur jab aankh khulti hai to dungeon master apne aap ko kaidi paata hai, wo bhi usi khandar ke tahkhaane me. Wo jaadui bedio se bandha hua tha.

Dark mage: ab tu mera gulaam hai mera kaidi hai, aur jab tak tu mujhe dusri duniayao ke portal khol ke dega, taaki main sab par jaake unpar raaj kar saku.

Dungeon master: mere pita ji kaha hai, tune kya kiya unke sath haramzaade.

Dark mage: us buddhe ko bhul jaa ab tu, ab tu bus meri seva karega, mujhe pujega

Dungeon master: hahahahaha, abe saale tujhe kon pujeja tujhe koi nahi jaanta idhar, tu kon hai, ye dunia khatam hone wali hai, isilie maine dusri dunia ka portal khola tha, aur ab tu is marti dunia ka raja banna chahta hai, jab yaha ke logo ko pata lagega ki mahamahim nahi rahe, unka bharosa bilkul uth jaaega, aur aise bhi koi bhi unke saamne aaya to usko wo jalakar maar denge

Dark mage: abe choti akal ke chuze, baap chala gya to kya hua beta to zinda hai, main raaj karunga ab teri ghatiya shakal hai mere paas, par fir bhi tujse accha dikhta hu, aur teri maa aur behan bhi zinda hongi is dunia me kahi, unhe dhund kar tere saamne unko maar dunga.

Dungeon master apni maa aur behan ka name sunta he ghabra gya: nahi unko kuch mat karna, nahi to main tujhe jaan se maar dunga.

Dark mage: agar unki sehmati chahta hai to mujhe dusri dunia ke portal kholne ki vidhi bata de, main tujhe chod dunga.

Dungeon master: aisa kabi nahi hoga, main usse pahle mar jaaunga

Dark mage: to marr saale idhar hi, saddta rah suvar ki trah….jab tak tu mujhe bataega nahi tu idhar hi kutte ki trah kaid rahega………….





Ab in sab baato ko 2 saal ho chuke the………

Dungeon master bedio me bandha hua apne aap ko kos raha tha, kyu usne wo plan socha ab uski wajah se agar kaise bhi karke ye dunia bach bhi jaae to dark mage is dunia par raaj karega aur apne zulamo se tabahi faila dega. Uski wajah se uski maa nahi rahi thi, uske pariwar ke kisi bhi member ko uski khabar nahi thi. Wo akela tanha bus apni aakhri saanse gin kar maut ka intezar kar raha tha. Uske dil me dard aur aag thi, jisse ya to wo khud ya fir dark mage dono me se ek ko jalana chahta tha.

Is dark mage shahi gharane me madira aur aurto ke beech ayaashi kar raha tha, mantri mandal bhi Rajkumar ke is roop ko dekhkar taajuub me the. Mahamahim ke jaane ke baad dark mage, jiska chehra hoobhu dungeon master se milta tha, raja ban gya tha. Mahamhim ki mirtryu ki khabar khud black samurai sabi mantrio ko di thi, sabko ye pata tha mahamahim dunia ko bachane ke lie ek vidhi ka aagman karte hue maut ko gale laga lia.

Idhar twin-flame pita ki maut ke baad bahut khookhar ho gyi thi, uske nirdayi roop ne uske dimag par kabja kar lia tha, use apne pita ki mirtyu aur us raat ki koi baat yaad nahi thi dark mage ne uski nirdayita ko dekhte hue use raaj darbaar sambhalne ke lie de dia tha, wo dark mage ka right hand ban gyi thi sab mantri usse darte the, aur wo jo bhi mantri uske khilaaf bolta twin-soul usko ya to maar deti ya fir usko maar maar ke mantri mandal se bahar kar deti.

Idhar 2 saal se demon samurai mahamahim ke raaj ko dil me dabae hue tha, aur raani-maa jo ki 2 saal se neend me so rahi thi, wo aaj amawas ka kaali raat ko jaag uthne waali thi, ye amaawas ki raat koi maamuli raat nahi thi, ye wo raat hai jisme sabi jaadugraniyo ki shaktiya 1000 guna badh jaati hai, aur aaj twin-flame ka janamdin tha, wo ab yuvaawastha me paripakh hone jaa rahi thi, aur iske sath hi use apne bi-polar character par poora poora control milne waala tha.

Jaise hi amawas ka kaali raat sabse Ghani hoti hai, raani-maa ki 2 saal se jaadui neend toot jaati hai. Wo beshak jaadui neend me so rahi thi, par usko apne aas pas ho rahi sab baato ka gyaan tha, uski neend jaise hi khulti hai to jaise poore raajya me jaadui lehar daud jaati hai, uski aankho me gusse aur dard ke aasu hote hai, jo na chahkar bhi uski aankho se nikal kar bah uthte hai, use apne pati ke sacrifice, apne bete ke bandhi hone ka aur apni beti ka maansik utpeedan, aur apne raajya ke logo ka dukh mahsoos ho raha hota hai. Par use pata tha abhi aasu bahane ka waqt nahi hai.

Same chiz, twin-flame ke sath bhi hui thi, use aisa lagta hai ki jaise wo ek gehri neend sa jaag uthi hai. Use sabse pahle us raat ki baate yaad aati hai, kaise wo, uska bhai aur maa ladai ke lie taiyaar ho rahe the aur uske pita ne usko behosh kar dia tha, aur fir usko 2 saal ke daruan uske doosre roop ke kiye hue bure kaam yaad aate hai, usko bahut gehra dard mehasus hota hai. Aur uski aankho me se aasu beh uthte hai.

Dark mage apni raat ki aiyaashiyo ko poora karke chain ki neend so raha tha, use in sab chizo ki bhanak bhi nahi thi.

Par itne lambe samay se chal raha ghinona atyachaar band hone waala tha.

Twin-flame apne kamre me roti Hui subak subak kar aasu Baha rahi thi, ki acchnak uske kamre ka darwaaja khula hai aur raani-maa daakhil ho jaati hai. Twin-flame apni najre uthakar apni maa ki traf dekhti hai Wo daud kar apni maa ke kadmo me gir jaati hai aur uski kamar ke charo aur hath daalkar rone lagati hai. Raani-maa apni beti ke Sundar chehre ki aur dekhti hai aur uske chehre par giri baalo ki lat ko uske kaan pe piche karke bolti hai

Raani-maa: bus beti, ab sab thik ho jaaega

Twin-flame (apne sir ko apni maa ke hath par dabate hue kahti hai) : par kaise maa, batao kaise thik hoga

Twin-flame ki aawaj me beinteihaa dard tha, jiska koi ant nahi tha.

Raani-maa: beti jaldi chalo, main tumhe samjhaati hu.

Raani-maa aur twin-flame dono, jaldi se jaha dungeon master kaid tha usi khandar ki aur chal padi. Raani-maa apne jaadu se khud ko aur twin-flame ko andrishy kar deti hai. Aur jab dono khandar pahuchate hai, to waha ke jyadtar pahredaar raat ko neend so rahe hote hai par fir bhi raani-maa khandar ke sabi pahredaaro aur jaildaar ko bhi apne jaadu se gehri need Sula deti hai, raat abhi kuch hi der me khtam hone wali thi, subah ki pahli Kiran nikalne ko thi.

Dungeon master bedio me bndha hua tha, uska chehra badi daadhi aur ghane bade baalo se bhara hua tha, uska bada majboot sharir bade bade choto aur nishano ke baad bhi kathor aur shaktishaali maloom hota tha, wo bhi bedio se Bandha halki jhapi le raha tha, parantu jaise hi usne kadmo ki aahat suni to usse bada achambha hua, uski aankho me aasu jhalak aaye the, kyu wo jaan gya tha ki ye koi nahi uski maa ke kadmo ki aawaj thi.

Kadmo ki aawaj jaldi se uske kaaragrah ki aur badh rahi thi. Sath me ek shaksh aur tha, jiske pair ki jutiya aawaj kar rahi thi.

Dungeon master se intezaar sehan nahi hota hai, uske man ki utsukta itni badh jaati aur uske chanchal man se, jo ki 2 saal se dukh aur dard se tadap raha tha, aawaj nikal uth ti hai.

Dungeon master: MAA!!!!

Raani-maa aur twin-flame, bhag kar uski karagrah ki aur jaate hai. Tino ka milan hota hai

Raani-maa: beta

Twin-flame: bhaiyaa

Raani-maa apne jaadu se karagrah ki salaakhe gaayab kar deti hai aur jhat se dungeon master ki bedia bhi gayab kar deti hai, dungeon master, jo ki do saal se dhang se chala bhi nahi tha, maa aur behan ko dekh kar unko aur bhag uthta hai.

Aur us kaale khandhar ke ek chote se karagrah me, ek maa aur dono bacche fir se ek ho jaate hai.

Tino thodi der tak rote hue, ek dusre ko kuch der tak gale lagaaye rakhte hai, fir thodi der me raani-maa dungeon master ke sir par hath rakh kar uske baalon ko sehlaati hai aur uske chehre ko pakad kar kahti hai. Beta tumhare papa ko wapis laane ka samay ho gya hai. Waqt aa gya hai ki poora pariwar wapis ek ho jaae.

Dungeon master: kaise maa, aap kya kah rahi hai.

Raani-maa: beta tumhare pita ko pahle hi pata tha ki kuch bura home wala hai, jaise hi dark mage is dharti par aaya to uski Shakti dekh kar unhe pata chal gaya tha use haraana naamunkin hai, par shayad kaali-poornima ke din, jo ki aaj hai, usko haraaya Jaa sakta hai, kyu ki meri Shakti wapis aur kaafi jyada ho chuki hai, aur twin-flame ki shakti ne yuva awasta ke baad pooran roop le lia hai. Ye ab pahle se kai guna shaktishaali ho gyi hai, aur isne apni bi-polar character par bhi kabu kar lia hai. Aur black samurai mehal me rahkar dark mage ki chokidaari kar raha hai, kuch bhi hone se pahle wo hume aagah kar dega, beta ab jaldi karo

Dungeon Master apni choti behan, twin-flame ki traf dekhta hai, use apni behan par bada naaz aur pyaar aata hai, dusri traf twin-flame jo ki pichhle do saal me kaafi badal gyi thi, uska sharir aur shakti dono hi kaafi taakatwar ho chuke the uske baal khule hue the, sunahre rang ke. Aur kapde bhi sunhare ho gye the, jo ki ak badi jaadugarni ki nishani thi

Dungeon master: maa main samjh gya. Thik hai. Par meri staff mere paas nahi hai.

Raani-maa mantra padhti thi, aur dungeon master ko pahle se bhi shaktishaali staff de deti hai. Dungeon jab staff ko apne hath me leta to usko apne sharir me pahle se bhi kai guna jyada shakti ka aabhaas hota hai

Dungeon Master: ye to pahle se bhi jyada shaktishaali staff hai

Raani-maa: ha beta iski zarurat padegi, ab jaldi se vidhi shuru karte hai.



Dungeon master ne jaldi se wahi vidhi shuru kar di, aur fir se aakash me ghor ghane baadal chaane lage aur bijli chamakne lagi, us dunia ke jaadu me jaise hi jaadui halchal honi shuru hui ki dark mage ki neend khul jaati hai, daaru aur nangi aurto ke beech wo apne Shahi kamre me tha, us kamre ka pahra black samurai aur khud Shahi senapati de rahe the.

Dark mage dhyan laga kar apni shakti se pata kar leta hai ki dungeon master ko kisi ne aajad kar dia hai (jaadui bedia dark mage ki thi, usi ki wajah se)

Dark mage andar se hi cheekh uthta hai: senapati, jaldi se sena ko taiyar karo.

Senapati aur black samurai, dono bahar se hi aawajj lagate hai, kya hua huzoor sab thik to hai.

Dark mage apne kapdo ko muskil se lapete hue bahar aata hai, saaf dikh raha tha ki wo niche se bilkul nanga hai

Dark mage: raajya ke bahar koi kaala jaadu kar raha hai, jo humare raajya aur is dunia ke lie khatra hai, jaldi se sena ko taiyaar karo. Tab tak black samurai tum humare sath chalo.

Dark mage ka plan tha ki wo sabse pahle jaake dungeon master ko aajad karne walo ko maar de, aur black samurai ek Shahi gaddi ka rakhwala jisko sab maante hai uski aakho me apni image positive bana le, taaki baad me poori sena aur raajya uske sath ho jaae. Jisse wo dungeon master ko bura aadmi, ek behrupiya karaar kar sake.

Dark mage aur black samurai, dark mage ke black dragon pe baithkar usi khandhar ki aur udd padte hai, Shahi sena kuch hi der me waha pahuchne waali thi. Isi beech black samurai ne telepathy se raani-maa ko message bhej dia tha ki dark mage ko pata chal gya hai.

Idhar dungeon master portal ko jaise hi kholta hai, use us portal me se drogon (fire dragon ), flamewings (fire phoenix) aate dikhte hai, aur flamewings par sawaar use apne pita mahamahim najar aate hai.

Drogon aur dungeon master ka rista bahut attoot tha, drogon bahut emotional ho gya tha, uski aankho se aasu (jo ki chote chote fire ke gole the) tapak rahe the. Sabse pahle drogon hi chota hokar, dungeon master ki traf udd padta hai aur uske poore badan par lipatt jaata hai, aur apni lambi jeeb se uske poore sharir ko chaatne lagta hai, dungeon master bhi drogon se gale lagkar bhavuk ho jaata hai, wo bhi haste haste drogon ko gale lagata hai. Drogon wooo, wooohhh grooorrr ki aawaje nikaal raha tha, isi beech dono ka pyaar dekh ke raani-maa aur twin-flame hass rahe the.

Dungeon master: bus bus, drogon, maine bhi bahut yaad kiya tujhe.

Flamewings zameen par jaise hi utarta hai aur Mahamahim flamewings se utar kar mudkar apne pariwar ko dekhte hai, raani-maa, twin-flame aur dungeon master sab mahamahim ki or daud padte hai. Sab ek dusre ko gale lagaate hai.

Dungeon Master - pita ji Hume maaf kar dijie, sab humari galti hai, humaari wajah se ye sab hua, hume Sikh mil gyi hai, aap sahi the.

Raani-maa, twin-flame, dungeon master sab chok jaate hai : KYAA!!!!

Mahamahim: Haa bete, hum galat the, tum aur tumhari maa sahi the. Tum sabse, pariwar se, apne raajya se, apne logo se itne din door rahkar hume ahasaas hua zindagi kya hai, pariwar kya hai. Aur ise surakhshit rakhna kyu zaruri hai. Sabse jyada maine apne pariwar se milne waali khushi, apne baccho ko yaad kiya, kaise tum bachpan me haste khelte the.

Twin-flame: sach papa

Mahamahim: ha meri bitiya (mahamahim twin-flame ko apni aur kheech kar uske maathe ko chum leta hai, aur twin-flame ke aankho se hata saaf karta hai)

Twin-flame: maine bhi aapko bahut Miss Kiya.

Dungeon master: accha, tu to 2 saal se Hell roop me thi, tujhe kya pata hai

Twin-flame: hell roop me zarur thi par mere angel roop ko bhi sab pata tha, ab dono ko kabi bhi control kar sakti hu.

Dungeon master: Ha dekh raha hu teri shakti kaafi badh gyi hai, pita ji main dekh raha hu aap ki shakti bhi badh gyi hai. Aap to pahle se do guna shaktishaali ho gye hai.

Mahamahim: beta us dunia ka sooraj humare sooraj se jawaan hai shaktishaali hai, isilie waha ka jaadu bhi shaktishaali hai, dark mage isi wajah se itna shaktishaali hai.

Dungeon master: par ab hum sabki shakti badh gyi hai, ab hum use Hara denge.

Drogon beech me : grroor rooore grrrooor (jaise wo bhi ladne ke lie bilkul taiyaar tha)



Flamewings apne pankh zor zor se fadfada kar apni sehmati de raha tha.

Mahamahim: bilkul hum is baar use Hara denge, chahe hume kuch bhi karna pade, par wo bahut hi hoshiyaar aur zaalim hai, hume use Kum nahi samjhna chahiye. Beta tumhari shakti sooraj se aati hai, tum doosri dunia ke sooraj se apni shakti badha lo, tumhe iski zarurat padegi.aur baaki sab taiyar ho jaao dark mage aata hi hoga

Dungeon master: ji pita jee main samjh gya.

Dungeon Apni urja bhadhaane lagta hai, par itne me hi dark mage waha aa jaata hai.

Dark mage aur demon samurai, dono black dragon par baithe hote hai,

Dark mage aur demon samurai, dragon se utarte hai, black dragon apni power dikhaate hue apne nostrils se aag fenk raha hai aur chinghaad raha tha. Aur isi beech mahamahim black samurai ko telepathy se message kar deta hai.

Dark mage jab dekhta hai ki mahamahim wapis aa gya hai to wo samjh jaata hai ki black samurai ke aage ab koi story nahi bana paaega. Aur isi beech demon samurai ek second ke andar apni talwar se dark mage ki gardan Par waar karta hai.

Dark mage ki gardan talwaar se cut jaati hai, aur sir dhad se alag ho jaata hai, dark mage ka sir door jaakar gir jaata hai aur dhad ke ghutne zameed par gir jaate hai aur waha laash ban kar uski gardan se skhoon banhne lagta hai. Demon samurai ko lagta hai ki dark mage mar gya, aur raani-maa, aur baaki logo ko bhi ek pal ka sukoon milta hai

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Achanak se hasne ki aawaj aati hai, to pata lagta hai.Dark mage ka kata hua sar door pada hai hota hai, aur usme se hasne ki aawaj aa rahi hoti hai.

Aur fir dhad aur sir dono dhua ban ke udd jaate hai, aur aasman me se hasne ki aawaj aane lagti hai.



Demon samurai, raani-maa, dungeon master, mahamahim aur twin-flame sab hairaan ho jaate hai.

Dark mage, black dragon ke kaan me chupa hota hai aur wo apna roop bada karke insaan ke size me aa jaata hai.

Dark mage: mujhe pahle hi is black samurai par shak tha, par main iska dimag kabi padh nahi paaya kyu ki ye apna dimag humesha shant rakhta tha. Koi nahi, ab jab Buddha gang wapas aa gyi hai, thode log jyada ho gye to kya hua, khoon jyada Baha dunga, aisa pahli baar to ho nahi Raha, hahahahahah (paagal ki tarah haste hue)

Mahamahim: tumhara khel khatam hua dark mage, agar apni jaan pyaari hai to apni dunia me wapis chale jaao.

Dark mage: buddhe mujhe Gyan dena band kar, teri sehat ke lie thik nahi hai. Us dunia me jaakar kya karunga waha ab mere lie kuch nahi hai, ye dunia ran birangi hai, acchi ladkia hai idhar. Aur tu to rah ke aaya hai udhar tujhe pata hai

Mahamahim: mujhe pata hai isilie main is dunia me tujhe kabi nahi rahne dunga, tu khooni darinda hai, jiske koi ussool mariyaada nahi, tu ek jallad hai ek taakat ka pyaasa aadmi hai tu. Tere jaisa aadmi raaj gaddi par nahi, jail me hona chahiye, bedia me bandha hua.

Dark mage: buddhe lagta hai tere Dil me bahut pyaar ban gya hai mere lie, koi nahi jyada der Zinda nahi rahega tu, tere dil ko teri chaati se nikaal kar uska khoon tere dono baccho ko pilaaunga.

Dungeon master: pita ji, aisa kya kiya tha isne us dunia me

Mahamahim: is haiwaan ne apne hi poore pariwaar ka katal kar dia tha, aur uski saari shaktiya chura Li thi, aur waha zabardasti raaja ban gya tha. Jab main waha gya to log hairaan ho gye aur jab maine unhe bataya ki main doosri dunia se aaya Hu to unhone mujhe iska kaala ghinona raaj bataya, maine waha 2 saal iske kaale raaj se ubharne me un logo ki sewa kari aur madad Kari.

Dungeon master, raani-maa, twin-flame, black samurai sab ye baate sun kar chounk gye, unhe apne kaano par wiswaas nahi ho raha tha

Dungeon master: Chee, koi insaan Aisa bhi ho sakta hai, itna neech gira hua.

Dark mage, pagal jaise haste hue: hahahahaha, tum jaise chote dimaag waalo ko kya pata hai. Pariwar, pyaar aur riste ye sab kamjor dimag ke insaan karte hai, ye sab aadmi ko baandh dete hai, kamjor kar dete hai, andar se khokhla bana dete hai. Aazaadi ka matlab in sab se mukht hokar hi aadmi ko samjh aata hai, jab maine apni maa, behan aur baap ko maara to unki cheenkho ko sunkar jaise aaatma mukht hi gyi, waise aazaadi mujhe kabi feel nahi hui thi. Main aazad ho gya tha, aur azaadi ke baad mujhe pata chala ki zindagi ka asli matlab aazad hokar hi samjh aata hai, aur rules me rahkar aadmi ka dimag kamjor ho jaata hai, aadmi machine ban jaata hai apne aap ko bhul jaata hai. Aur main ab sabko ye sikhaane yaha aaya tha, aur is chuze ko kaha tha ki mujhe bhi aise portal khol kar de taaki dusri dunia me jaakar sabko main ye sikhaau. Par shyad pahle mujhee tum sab ko maarkar is chuze ko samjhana padega ye. Hahahahaha hahaha (pagal ki hasi haste hue)



Dark mage apne aap ko 5 clones me divide kar leta hai. Uski urja se poora aasman kaala ho gya tha.

Dungeon master dark Mage ki aisi ghatiya ghinoni baate sunkar bahut gusse me aa gya hai, uska paara aasman Chu raha tha.

Dungeon master: apni bakwaas band kar, tu aaj Zinda nahi bachegi, tu kisi dunia ke kaabil nahi hai, tere sharir ka koi bhi hissa Zinda nahi rahna chahiye, tujhe jala kar khaak kar dunga main.

Dungeon master ek dum se attack kar deta hai (fire of raging sun): ek bada aag ka gola 5 clones ki traf teji se badh uthta hai.

Dark mage ka ek clone (shadow of moon) attack karta hai aur magic ki ek black ball dungeon master ke aatcck ko rokk deti hai.

Mahamahim: beta isne apne pariwar ki shaktiya sokh li thi, isilie iske paas humari sabki milakar shaktiya hai, isilie isko sab mil kar hi Hara sakte hai.

Dungeon master ka gussa aasman Chu raha tha, wo bahut garam ho gya tha.

Dungeon master: thik hai pita jee, par isse sirf main maarunga.

Dungeon master: aaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!

Dungeon master ke guuse ki wajah se uraja bahut badh gyi thi, uski staff ka magic bahut strong Ho gyi thi, ki uska rang aur dungeon master ke kapde golden rang ke ho gye the.

Mahamahim: sab taiyaar ho jaao.

Dark ke sabi clones ke paas raani-maa, twin-flame, dungeon master aur Mahamahim jaisi shaktiya thi.

Twin-flame (ice age): ek barf ki strike karti hai, aur poori dharti zam jaati hai, par dark mage apne attack (fire of raging sun) jo ki dungeon master ka attack tha usse ice age attack ko rok deta hai.

Demon samurai: (Song of devil) attack karta hai, par dark mage flame ki sword bana kar usko rokk leta hai. Aur teleport hokar piche se uski kamar par waar karta hai.

Demon samurai : aaahhhh!!!!

Raani-maa jab ye dekhta to wo waha aakar demon samurai ki madad karti hai

Raani-maa: apne mind se ek badi chattan uthakar dark mage ki traf maarti hai, par dark mage ka clone usko bhi Tod deta hai.

Mahamahim: dark mage ki asli urja ko mehasoos karo, uski asli uraja waale sharir par waar karo, clone se ladne ka koi faaeda nahi.

Dark mage : buddhe Tera dimag bahut jyada chalta hai, tujhe pahle khatam karta hu.

Dungeon master teleport hokar dark mage ke piche chala jaata hai: aur uski gardan pakad leta hai, aur bolta hai

Dungeon master: teri haisiyat nahi hai unse baat karne ki, tu gandagi ka keeda hai.

Dark mage ki gardan dungeon master ne dabochi Hui thi, aur dark mage ke pair hawa me the.

Dark mage haste hue: hahaha, ha aise hi paagalpan ki limits ko cross kar do, kitna accha hai na ye, aazad ho jaao

Dungeon master attack karta hai (solar shine) aur dark mage ke clone ko attack hot hota hai aur clone zameen me Dass kar blast ho jaata hai.

Aise hi dungeon master baaki ke clones ko bhi attack se khatam kar deta hai. Par asli dark mage chupa hua tha. Asli dark mage ne khud ko adrishya kar lia tha aur wo chip kar mahamahim ke piche chala jaata hai. Aur jaise hi piche se dark mage attack karne waala hota hai.



Mahamahim: kaayar humesha chip kar hi waar karte hai

Ye bolkar mahamahim apne staff se energy beam se dark mage par attack kar deta hai.

Dark mage: aaaaahhhhhhhhh

Dark mage ke kandhe par mahamahim ki energy beam lag jaati hai.

Dark mage: lagta hai ghee tedhi ungli se nikaalna padega.

Dark mage apne clones ko wapis bula leta hai, aur apna final attack shuru karta hai.

Dark mage apni is dunia ko alvida kah do tum ab :hahahahaha (Darkness of Black hole)

Dark mage ka attack itna shaktishaali tha ki uske chaaro ki light khatam ho gyi thi, khandhar ke chaaro aur bus andhera hi chaa gya tha, ek badi kaali energy ball jiska size ek paravat ke jitna tha, dark mage ne dungeon master ki taraf fenk di.



Dungeon master: main aisa nahi hone dunga, main kisi ko kuch nahi hone dunga.

Dungeon master apna counter attack karta hai, (Fire of raging sun)

Par dungeon master ka attack usko rok nahi paaya, tabhi raani-maa aur twin-flame Dungeon master ke paas teleport ho gye.

Raani-maa ne attack kiya (angelic shine of souls) aur twin-flame ne sath dete hue (Holy fire) attack kiya.

Par muskil se dark mage ka itna bada bhari attack ruk Raha tha.

Dark mage : hahahahahah, tumhari dunia me sab kamjor hai, aur tum aur tumhari kamjor dunia ko khatam karke main nayi dunia banaunga.

Mahamahim bhi dungeon master ke paas me teleport Ho jaata hai.

Mahamahim: aisa kabi nahi hoga, teri kaali kartute aaj tere sath khatam hongi.

Mahamahim attack karta hai. (Feirce light!!!!)

Mahamahim ke attack ke baad ek dum se energy ball wapis dark mage ki traf jaane lagta hai.

Itne me hi waha shaahi sena aa jaati hai, aur senapati dekhta hai ki dark mage se poora Shahi pariwar lad raha hai.

Aur wo sena ko wahi rukne ka aadesh deta hai.

Dark mage ka black dragon bhi drogon aur flamewings ke attacks nahi Bach paa raha tha.

Drogon ne apne panjo ko black dragon ke wings ko pakad liya tha aur uski gardan par jor se kaat liya tha, jisse kaafi saara khoon aur Maas drogon ne kaat liya tha. Saamne se black dragon ki chaati par flamewings me bhaari fire wala attack kar dia. Iske sath hi black dragon zameen par Jaa gira

Idhar jab dark mage dekhta hai ki uska dragon kuch nahi kar paa raha hai aur uska energy ball uski taraf badh raha hai. Usne ek aur ghinoni chaal chali.

Dark mage: ye dragon bhi kisi kaam ka nahi nikla, sab mujhe akele hi karna padega, aur dekho to janta bhi aayi hai tamasha dekhne

Dark mage ne apni shakti badhane ki Sochi, dark mage ne apne black dragon ki urja kheechni shuru kar di, aur sath me poori sena se bhi kaale magic se urja khichni shuru kar di, aur jab laga ki urja kaafi ho gyi hai. Dark mage apna attack kar dia, apne magic se wapis badi kaali energy ball Push kar dia.

Is baar to uska attack badi hi tezi se dharti ki aur badh raha tha aur Mahamahim, dungeon master bhi mil kar kuch nahi kar paa rahe the.

Dungeon master: iska attack to bahut powerful hai pita ji, hume aur zor lagana padega.

Raani-maa: beta mujhe tumpar bharosa hai, tumhe is attack ko khatam karna hoga.

Twin-flame: bhaiya, main aapke sath hu.

Mahamahim: beta, iski shakti beshak jyada hai, par humare pariwar ke aapsi pyar ki shakti ko koi nahi hra shakta. Ab waqt aa gya hai, tum is pariwar ke mukhiya Bano, tum sambhalo sab.

Dungeon master: pita ji aap ye kya kah rahe, main kuch samjha nahi.

Mahamahim: tum sab samjh jaaoge, tumhari maa aur behan ka dhyan rakhna.

Ye kahte hi, mahamahim dungeon master, raani-maa aur twin-flame ko energy ball se door teleport kar deta hai.

Iske sath hi mahamahim, black energy ball ko apne andhar sokh leta hai, aur Mahamahim aasman me teleport ho jaata hai, jaise bahut bada dhamaka hota hai, poore aasman me light hi light ho jaati hai.

Aur jaise chote chote jugnu ki baarish si hone lagti hai, aur wo baarish dungeon master ke upar girne lagti hai.

Dungeon master: Pitaa ji!!!!!!!!! Nahi!!!!.

Dungeon master, zameen par ghunt tek kar ro raha hota hai.

Dark mage: hahahahahah, buddhe ka time aa gya tha, ek gya ab 3 baaki hai. Dark mage lagataar has raha tha

Dungeon master se ab bardaash se bahar ho jaata hai, wo gusse se aag babula ho jaata hai.

Use ek dum se apne pita ki aawaj sunai deti hai, ab mahamahim magical realm me tha

Mahamahim: beta ab sab tum par hai, meri saari shakti, buddhi aur takat tumhare anadar hai, tum sab kuch kar sakte ho, jo kabi main nahi kar saka, muje tum par naaj hai beta.Main humesha tumhare sath hu

Dungeon master: pita ji, main aapki legacy ko dil se laga kar rakhunga, aur koshish karunga ki sahi raste par chalta rahu.

Mahamahim: mujhe tum par bharosa hai beta, ab jaao is dunia ko bachao.



Dungeon master: tera khel aaj hi khatam karta hu main dark mage.

Dark mage dekhta hai ki dungeon master ki power kai guna badh chuki hai, use pata nahi chal paa raha tha ki wo kitna taakatwar hai, dungeon master ki shakti teji se badh rahi thi.

Dungeon master: tu dekh ab.

Dungeon master apne dher saare clones bana kar hawa me dark mage ko chaaro aur se gher leta hai

Dark mage ki hasi ruk jaati hai, wo Darr jaata hai, aur ghum ghum kar dekhne lagta hai

Dungeon master: tujhe bedio se, bandhano se dar lagta hai na. To ye le

Dungeon master magic se saare clones se dark mage ko magic bedio me kaid kar leta hai.

Dark mage ab har jagah se bedio se Bandha tha, aur hawa me tair raha tha.

Senapati, raani-maa, twin-flame, demon samurai aur Shahi sena, ye sab dekh rahi thi.

Ab dungeon master ke paas apaar shakti thi aur Mahamahim ki saari buddhi thi.

Dungeon master ne kai saare dusri dunia ke portal khol die. Aur waha ke sooraj urja lene laga hai.

Dungeon master: tujhe pyaar aur pariwar ki taakat nahi pata, dekh ye hai taakat pariwar ki(FIRE...OF…THOUSAND…..SUNS!!!!)



Dark mage: NAHI!!!!!!?!!!

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Ek badi fire Baal bedio me bandhe hue dark mage se jaakar takaraati hai, aur dark Wahi bhasam ho jaata hai, bedio se dungeon master dark mage ka magic apne andar shokh leta hai.



Iske sath hi dungeon master ladai Jeet leta hai, dark mage ke atyachaar aur jurm se sabko chutkaara milta hai, dungeon master ka pariwar, uska dragon drogon fir se harmony me apna jeevan shuru karte hai.

Dungeon master apni knowledge ka upyog karte hue, dusri dunia ke sooraj se apni dunia ko thik kar leta hai. Mahamahim ki yaad rakhte hue, wo apni behan ko dark mage ki dunia ko sambhalne bhej deta hai.Aur raani-maa raaj gharana sambhaalti haai, demon samurai humesha ki tarah raajgaddi ki pahredaaro karta hai.



Aur Dungeon Master aasha karta hai ki magical realm me balance bana rahe, Parr aap jab dusri duniao se ched chaad karte hai to sab kuch sahi kaise rah sakta hai, parr wo kahani kabi baad me.



Abhi ke lie…..

The End….​

Wow....wow....woowwww...... :Claps:
"Everything is binery" story ke baad yeh baakion se bilkul alagh thi....ekdum compitition ke level ki...... Mainly toh story sachai or burai ladai pr bassed thi ...jeetna toh sachai ne hi tha.....Dark maze naam aacha laga mujhe........ Baaki ju toh ho hi Batman ..kmaal krdi

 

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Wow....wow....woowwww...... :Claps:
"Everything is binery" story ke baad yeh baakion se bilkul alagh thi....ekdum compitition ke level ki...... Mainly toh story sachai or burai ladai pr bassed thi ...jeetna toh sachai ne hi tha.....Dark maze naam aacha laga mujhe........ Baaki ju toh ho hi Batman ..kmaal krdi

thanks bhai, fantasy mujhe bahut pasand hai, maine socha kyu na baaki members ko bhi fantasy ki treat di jaae. mujhe accha ju ko pasand aayi.