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Barasaat ki raat thi. Abhinav ek sunsaan sadak par gaadi chala kar ghar vaapas ja raha tha. Tej barish mein use samne ki sadak thik se dikhayi nahi de rahi thi, tabhi achaanak unse raaste ke bich mein ek ladki nazar aayi. Abhinav satark tha aur usne samay par par break daba dia. Us ladki ko halka jhatka laga aur woh gir padi. Abhinav turant gadi se utarkar use dekhne ke liye daud pada. Ladki behosh padi thi.


Abhinav ne use utha kar apni car mein bitha liya. Usne dekha ki wo ladki pregnant hai. Abhinav use lekar turant hospital pahuncha, woh ummid kar raha tha ki usne us ladki ko ya uske bachche ko chot nahi pahunchayi, agar aisa hua to woh khud ko kabhi maaf nahi kar payega. Doctor ne ladki ko apni dekharekh mein liya aur turant treatment shuru kar diya. Jald hi use hosh aa gaya.


Abhinav daud ke us ladki ke paas gaya. Use uski bahut chinta ho rahi thi.


"Aap thik ho?" usne poocha. Ladki ne koi jawab nahi diya, bas use ek khaali nazar se dekhti rahi.


Abhinav ne apna sawal doharaya, ladki phir bhi kuch nahi boli.


Kisi ne Abhinav ke kandhe par thapathapaaya aur kaha ki doctor usse baat karna chahte hai. Woh doctor ke kaksh mein chala gaya.


Doctor ne Abhinav se kaha, "Sir, kuch zaroori baat karni thi aap se. Is ladki ki umar lagbhag 20 saal hai lekin yeh ladki mansik roop se viklang hai aur shayad janam se hi aisi hi thi. Aur woh 6 mahine ki garbhwati hai. Humne usse uske parivaar ke baare mein poochhane ki koshish ki, lekin woh kuch bhi bata nahi paa rahi hai. Isake alaava, is ladki ke sharir par purani choton ke nishaan hai, jaise ki use maara peeta gaya ho. Yeh pregnancy bhi shayad zabardasti ke karan hui hai. Haalaanki, kuch mamooli kharonchon ko chhod kar aap ki gaadi se takaraane ke kaaran koi nuksaan nahi hua, aur uske bachche ko bhi koi nukasaan nahi hua hai."


Abhinav shanti se doctor ki baat sun raha tha. Use us ladki ke prati gahari sahaanubhooti thi. Usne kuchh der socha, ek gahari saans li aur kaha, "Main ek FIR darj karna chahta hoon."


Police jald hi pahunchi aur Abhinav aur doctor ke bayaan darj kie. Haalaanki ladki kuchh bhi bata nahi pa rahi thi. Abhinav ne police se anurodh kiya ki woh jald se jald uske parivaar ka pata lagane mein madad kare, aur un logon ko bhi jo uski is haalat ke liye jimmedar the.


Abhinav us ladki ke paas gaya aur uske bagal mein baith gaya aur halke se uska haath thama. Jaise hi usne use chhua, ladki ekdum se ghabra gayi, lekin Abhinav ne shanti se uska haath pakad kar uski or pyaar se dekha. Wo kafi der tak use dekhti rahi aur dhire-dhire shaant ho gai.


Doctor aur police is baat par charcha kar rahi thi ki, jab tak uske parivaar ka pata nahi chal jaata. Use kahan rakha jae.

"Yeh ek chhota shahar hai aur aas-paas aisi ladki on ko aashray dene ke liye koi achhi suvidha nahi hain" police nirikshak ne kaha, "yahaan se lagabhag 200 kilometer door padosi shahar mein ek NGO hai, lekin wahan humne pata kiya hai ki jagah khali nahi hai."


"Mujhe khed hai, lekin ham use hospital mein bhi nahi rakh sakate," doctor ne kaha.


"Agar aapki ijazat ho to, to main uske parivaar ke pata chalane tak use apani dekhabhaal mein rakhana chaahata hoon." Abhinav ne Inspector se kaha

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"Thik hai Abhinav ji," Inspector ne kaha, "Mujhe pata hai ki aap ek izzatdaar parivaar se hain, main kuch dinon tak uski dekhabhaal karane ke liye aap par bharosa kar sakata hoon."


Abhinav use apne saath le jaakar khush tha. Is nanhi Pari ko kuch dinon ke liye aashray dene ke liye uske ghar mein nishchit roop se jagah thi. Jab woh use apni car mein bitha ke ghar le ja raha tha, to usne use ek bachche ki jigyaasa ke saath car ki khidki se duniya ki sundarata ko nihaarate dekha. Shaayad woh lambe samay tak kahin band thi.


Jab Abhinav ke padosiyon se use apne ghar ke andar ek garbhavati ladki ko le jaate hue dekha to use padosiyon ne use buri tarah ghoor kar dekha, lekin usne paravaah nahi ki.


Abhinav us ladki ko ek aaraamadaayak kamare mein le gaya jise usne uske liye taiyaar kiya tha. Abhinav ne uske liye ek teddy bear bhi laya tha. Woh ladki teddy bear ko dekh kar bahut khush hui, use gale laga ke woh ek chhote bacche ki tarah hasne aur khelne lagi.


Abhinav use dekh kar muskuraya. Jab se woh usse mila tha, usne keval uska udaas, dara hua chehra dekha tha. use is tarah hansate aur khelate dekhkar uske dil ko sukoon mila.


"Pari" Abhinav ne use bulaaya.


Ladki ne Abhinav ki or dekha.


"Tumhaara naam Pari hai'' Abhinav ne uski or ishara karate hue kaha. Usne us ladki ko “Pari” bulane ka faisla kiya tha.


"Main Abhinav hoon." usne apni or ishara karte hue kaha.


"Abhinav kaho" usne jor dekar kaha. Use ise do baar doharaana pada, aur phir woh ladki "Abi ...aav" shabdon se joojhati hui boli. Abhinav use dekh kar muskuraaya aur use gale laga liya.


Abhinav use kuch khana diya, lekin usne khate khate apne upar gira diya. Pari ko ehsaas hua ki usne kuchh gadabad ki hai aur woh udaas ashrupoorn aankhon se kshama maang rahi thi. Abhinav use dekh kar muskuraya, use saaf kiya aur use bistar par sula kar chadar odhada di. Shaayad woh bahut thaki hui thi, woh turant hi so gai.


Abhinav ke darwaje ki ghanti baji. uski mangetar Sheetal aayi thi. Woh bahut gusse me thi.


"Main kya sun rahi hoon Abhinav? tum ek pregnant ladki ko ghar le aaye?" Sheetal ne gusse mein kaha.


"Hann sahi suna hai tumne," Abhinav ne kaha, "Mujhe uski dekhbhal karne ke liye tumhari madad ki zaroorat hai. Mujhe yakin hai ki ek ladki hone ke naate tum use behtar samajh sakti ho. Bechari ke saath bahot bura hua hai. Main bas kuch dinon tak uski dekhabhaal karna chaahata hoon jab tak ki uske parivaar ka pata nahi lag jaata."


"Uske saath bahot bura hua hai? Tumhe yeh sab kisne bataya? Usne khud? Ya tum us doctor ki har baat par yakeen kar rahe ho jo keval is pagal ladki se chhutakaara paana chaahata tha jaise uske parivaar ne kiya? Kya tumne socha bhi hai ki log kya kahenge? Hum jald hi shaadi karne wale hain, aur tumhara aisa karna na keval tumhare liye balki mere liye bhi sharmanaak hai."


"Mujhe nahi lagata ki kisi ki madad karne mein sharminda hone ki koi baat hai." Abhinav ne kaha.


"I am sorry lekin mujhe tumhara is ladki ko ghar laana bilkul pasand nahi aaya. Use kisi NGO mein bhej dete na. Use ghar kyon laen? Kya tumhein meri zara bhi parwah nahi hai?"


"Of course tumhari parwah karta hun Sheetal, I love you,” Abhinav ne kaha.


“Please ek baar aur soch lo Abhinav,” Sheetal ne kaha, “Hum ek samaaj mein rehte hain ... tumhe pata nahi hai ki log tumhare baare mein kya baatein kar rahe hain .."

Bas itna kehkar Sheetal chali gai.


Abhinav udaas ho gaya. Use ummid thi ki Sheetal uska saath degi, use ummid thi ki uska dil uske jaisa achha hoga. Woh duniya ki paravaah nahi karata tha jab use vishwas hota ki woh sahi hai. Usne bedroom mein jhaanka aur Pari ko chain se sote hue dekha. Woh uske baalon ko sahlate hue uske paas baith gaya.


Kuchh saal pahale ek durghatana mein Abhinav ne apne parivaar ko kho diya tha. Tab se woh apne ghar mein akela rehta tha. Woh hamesha kisi ke saath ke liye tarasta tha. Usne Pari ki aankhon mein jo bebasi aur akelaapan dekha, theek waisa hi akelapan woh apne pariwar ke bina mahasoos karta tha.


Ek samay tha jab uske paas kuch bhi nahi tha, kayi baar jab woh itna thaka hota lekin uska duhkh use sone nahi deta, kayi baar uska mann karta ki koi uske sir ko pyaar se tab tak sehlaye jab tak woh so nahi jaata. Sheetal ek achchhi ladki thi, saubhagya se usne jivan mein aisa dukh bhara daur kabhi nahi dekha. Abhinav ke jeevan ka yeh hissa tha jise woh kabhi samajh nahi payi.


Pari ki dekhabhaal ke liye usne ek nurse ko kaam par rakha tha jab woh kaam ke liye bahar jaata tha. Pari ek pyaari ladki thi, haalaanki uske aas-paas ke sabhi log use tiraskaar se dekhte the, phir bhi uske chehare ki maasoomiyat ko koi mita nahi sakte the. Usne Abhinav ke liye kabhi koi pareshaani nahi khadi ki. Woh chup chaap ghar ke chaaron or uska pichha karati aur ek kone mein khadi hokar use dekhti rehti. Woh jab bhi nazron se ojhal ho jata toh woh pareshan ho jaati thi. Abhinav aksar uske saath luka-chhupi khelta. Abhinav chhip jaata tha aur Pari use talaashti. Agar woh use nahi dhoondh paati to woh rone lagati aur Abhinav saamne aa jaata. Use dobara dekh kar woh khushi se chilla uthti.


Woh bahut dukhi hoti thi jab Abhinav kaam par jaata, lekin Abhinav hamesha vaada karta tha ki woh vaapas aaega aur uske lie kuchh laega. Aur woh hamesha Pari ke liye kuch na kuch laata tha, kabhi khilone, kabhi chocolate.


"Abi, abi ..." usne Pari ko khushi se pukaarate suna. jab woh dekhne gaya ki yeh kya hai, to usne khushi-khushi use apani aur Abhinav ki ek crayon drawing dikhai.


"Yeh to bahut sundar hai sweetie!" Abhinav ne kaha. Usne Pari ki us pyari si dawing ko sambhal ke rakha.


Kuch din beet gaye. Pari ko bhi Abhinav ka saath accha lagta tha. Woh har raat usko pariyon ki kahani sunata, aur woh un jaadu bhari kahaniyon mein kho jaati jo usne pehle kabhi nahi suni thi.


Ek raat Abhinav ne Pari ko apne phoole hue pet par hath rakhte hue use chup chaap rote hue paaya. Jaise hi Abhinav uske paas gaya, Pari ne use kasakar gale laga liya.


"Mujhe kya ho raha hai Abi? Mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai..." Pari ne aansoo bahaate hue kaha.


"Yahan ek pyara sa farishta hai'' Abhinav use dilaasa diya, "Jab uske aane ka samay hoga, tab woh farishta in duniya mein aayega aur woh tumhe sabse jyada pyaar karega. Aur tum phir kabhi akeli nahi rahogi."


"Sach mein?" Pari ne use aur bhi kasakar gale lagaate hue kaha, "mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai".


"Mat daro Pari, sab thik ho jaega" Abhinav ne ne uske maathe ko choomte hue kaha, "ab so jao, good night, sweet dreams."


Pari ko Abhinav ke ghar mein rehte hue ab lagabhag 2 hafte bit chuke the, lekin uske parivaar ka koi pata nahi chala. Lekin Abhinav ko is baat se koi fark nahi pada. Use Pari ka saath accha lagta tha. Lekin Sheetal ki naarazgi badhati ja rahi thi.


Ek shaam, Abhinav ke darwaje ki ghanti baji. Usne darwaja khola to saamne Sheetal khadi thi. Woh ek sundar si dress pehen kar taiyyar hui thi.


“Tum phone kyu nahi utha rahe the?” Sheetal ne gusse se kaha.


Abhinav ne phone check kiya to silent par tha. Sheetal ke 12 missed calls pade hue the.


“I am sorry phone silent par tha,” Abhinav ne kaha, “Waise tum itni taiyyar hokar kaha ja rahi ho?”


“Aaj shaam tum mujhe candlelight dinner par le jaane waale the! Bhool gaye?” Sheetal ne gusse mein chillate hue kaha.


“I am so sorry Sheetal,” Abhinav ne kaha, “Darasal, Pari ko subah se bukhar tha isliye main uski dekhbhaal kar raha tha, isiliye mujhe yaad nahi raha. I am really sorry.”


Yeh baat sunte hi Sheetal ne apna aapa kho diya. “Pata nahi is pagal ladki ke peeche aise kya deewane hue ho ki apne mangetar ke saath plan ki hui date bhool gaye.”


“I am really sorry Sheetal,” Abhinav ne shanti se jawab diya, “Lekin sirf ek baar, keval ek baar, apne baare mein sochna band karo aur Pari ke baare mein socho ki woh kaisa mahasoos kar rahi hogi. Aur woh yahan jyada dinon tak nahi rahne wali hai."


"Uske baare mein kya sochna hai? Na shakal hai na akal hai is randi ke paas aur mere mard pe doore daal rahi hai," Sheetal Pari par chillai.


Pari uska gussa dekh kar dar gai aur phoot-phoot kar rone lagi. Usne Abhinav ki or dekha aur kaha, "Pari... sorry.."


Abhinav ne use gale lagaya aur use dilasa dene ki koshish ki. "Mat ro sweetie, tumhe sorry kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai, yeh tumhari galti nahi hai."


"Uski galti nahi?" Sheetal chillai, "Jis tarah se tum uski parwah karate ho, mujhe lagta hai ki shayad yeh bacha tumhara hai ... tumne is mandbuddhi randi ko chod kar pregnant kar diya aur ab usse pyaar ho gaya."


"Bas Sheetal!" Abhinav chillaaya, "Is bechari ladki ko apna naam tak nahi pata, isko yeh bhi nahi pata ki uske saath kya ho raha hai..woh bas itna jaanti hai ki woh bahut dard mein hai... yeh sharm ki baat hai ki tum use samajhne ki koshish bhi nahi kar rahi ho. Mujhe sach mein lagta tha ki tumhare seene mein dil hai, main sach mein tumhe pyar karta tha Sheetal, maine socha tha ki main tumhare saath sab kuchh saajha kar sakta hoon, ... maine socha tha ki tum mujh par vishwas karogi, mujhe lagta tha ki is lachar ladki ke liye tumhare dil mein bhi pyaar hoga...aur yahaan tum kitani gandi baatein kar rahi ho...mujhe khushi hai ki main tumhara yeh roop bhi dekh saka... main ab tumse koi baat nahi karna chahta. Bas chali jao Sheetal."


Sheetal chali gai. Pari abhi bhi uski baanhon mein kaanp rahi thi. Woh bahut dari hui thi. "Please mujhe saza nahi dena...bahut dard…saza nahi…" usne darr se kaampte hue bola.


Abhinav ne uski aankhon mein dekha. Woh keval bhay aur laachaari dekh sakta tha. ‘Koi rakshas hi hogi jo itni pyari ladki ko saza dega’ usne socha.


Mansik roop se vikshipt man jo apna naam tak yaad nahi rakh sakta, saza yaad rakhta hai...kitni dardanaak thi uski kahaani? Usne use apni baahon mein utha liya aur bistar par le gaya. Woh uske bagal mein baitha raha jab tak woh so nahi gai.


Abhinav ki nazar uske drawing book par padi jo uske bistar ke paas padi thi. Usne woh drawing book khola to hairan reh gaya. Kuch bhayank se drawing bana rakhe the uspe Pari ne crayon se. Sabse pahle drawing mein qabar mein ek mrit ladki thi jis ke sir mein chaakoo phansa hua tha aur ek aadami qabar ke upar ek ped pe lage hue fande se latak raha tha aur paas mein khada ek bachcha bebas hokar dekh raha tha. Doosre drawing mein ek teddy bear tha jiske chaaron taraf khoon laga tha. Ek chitr mein bina naakhoonon vaala ek kata hua haath dikhaya gaya. Ek andhere kue ki drawing thi jisme bahut saare bachhe doobte hue dikhai de rahe the, ek ladki drawing thi jiski skin poori tarah se nili thi, ek chitr mein ek pinjare ke andar tooti pankhudiyon wala ek phool tha, agli drawing mein raakshasi praaniyon se ghiri ek tooti hui gudiya dikh rahi thi, aur ek panna poori tarah se kaale rang se ranga gaya tha. Abhinav in chitron ka arth jaan na chahta tha, Pari un drawings ke maadhyam se kuch kehne ki koshish kar rahi thi, lekin kuchh bhi spasht nahi tha.


Agle din Abhinav ko police ka phone aaya. Police waalon ko pata chal gaya hai ki Pari kahan se aayi hai. Woh ek mental hospital tha. Abhinav police aur Pari ke saath wahan pahuch gaya. Jagah ko pehachante hi Pari chikhane-chillaane lagi, lekin karmachaariyon ne jaldi se us par kaaboo pa liya aur use le gaye.


"Yahaan panjikrt uska naam Ragini hai," wahan ke psychiatrist ne police ko bataaya. "use ek anaathaalay se yahaan bheja gaya tha. Woh bahut hinsak bacchi thi aur aksar doosre bachchon ko chot pahunchati thi. Woh “Intermittent Explosive Disorder” se pidit hai, woh jyadatar samay shaant rehti hai lekin jab uttejit hoti hai to woh bahut khataranaak ho sakati hai."


"Kya bakwas hai yeh!" Abhinav ne gusse me kaha, "Woh theek se bol bhi nahi sakti aur aap kah rahe hain ki woh khatarnak hai? Sabase pahale yeh bataiye, uski is halat ke liye kaun jimmedar hai? main chahata hoon ki us kamine ko abhi giraftaar kiya jaye!"


"Mujhe afsos hai ki us vyakti ka pata lagana mushkil hai. Woh yahan ka aadmi nahi ho sakta kyonki Ragini ek saal pahale yahaan se bhaag gayi thi. Yeh rahi police mein darj ki gayi report ki copy. Humne use khojne ki bahut koshish ki lekin uska kuch pata nahi chala, koi nahi jaanata ki woh is dauran kahan thi. Ho sakta hai ki us dauran kisi ne uske saath zabardasti ki ho, sirf Ragini hi hume bata sakti hai ki vaastav mein uske saath kya hua tha," doctor ne kaha.


Achanak, ek aadami ke jor se chikhne ki aawaz aayi. Khatarnak roop se ghaayal ek staff zameen par gira pada tha. Sabhi log use dekhane ke liye pahunche. Pari ke haath mein jang lagi kil thi, jisase usne us aadami ki aankh fod di thi. Woh gusse se kaamp rahi thi, uski aankhen khoon se laal thi. Pari ki is hinsak harakat ko dekhkar Abhinav hairan reh gaya. Jaise hi Pari ne Abhinav ko dekha, woh shaant ho gayi gai aur phoot-phoot kar rone lagi. Usne khoon se lathapath kil ko gira diya aur Abhinav ke paas daudi aur use kasakar gale laga liya.


"Pari ko yahan mat chhodo ...bahut buri jagah ..." usne aansoo bahaate hue bhikh maangi.


Abhinav ne dari hui Pari ko gale laga liya. Use doctor ki baaton ki parwah nahi thi, usne jo dekha us par vishwas bhi nahi kiya...use sirf apni Pari, uski maasoomiyat aur pavitrata par vishwas tha.


"Humein ab jaana chaahiye, Mr. Abhinav," Police Inspector ne kaha, "Woh maanasik roop se bimaar hai, use ab isi hospital mein rehna hoga."


"Main use yahan nahi chhod sakata...main chahta hoon ki woh mere saath rahe.." Abhinav ne kaha.


"Mujhe khed hai, lekin adaalat aapko use ghar le jaane ki anumati nahi degi kyon ki woh khataranaak roop se bimaar hai. Woh samaaj ke liye khatra hai. use yahaan rehna chaahiye aur ilaaj karaana chaahie. Halanki aap usse milne aa sakte hain," Inspector ne Abhinav ko samjhaya.


Bhaari man se Abhinav ne Pari ko jaane diya. Jaise hi woh jaane ke liye muda, woh jor se chillai aur use kas ke gale lagaya.


"Please mat jao..." Pari gidgidate hue boli. Uski pakad itani mazboot thi ki uske naakhoon Abhinav ki tvacha mein dhas kar khoon nikalne laga. Lekin Abhinav mehasoos kar sakata tha ki Pari ka dard usse kahin adhik tivr tha. Woh wahin sthir aur avaak khada raha aur hospital ke karmachaariyon ne Pari ko khinch kar Abhinav se alag kar liya. Jab woh apni poori taakat ke saath sangharsh kar rahi thi to Abhinav ne ne bas ashrupoorn nazron se use dekha.


Ek nurse ne Pari ko injection lagaya aur woh behosh ho gati. Us mental hospital mein kayi pinjare the jahaan paagalon ko jaanavaron ki tarah rakha jaata tha. Un pinjaron mein se ek mein uski Pari behosh padi thi. Uske haath aur pair zanjeer mein jakde hue the taaki woh khud ko ya kisi aur ko chot na pahuncha sake. Woh bahut maasoom lag rahi thi. Abhinav ne ashru bhari nigaahon se uski or dekha. Uske dil maan hi nahi raha tha ki Pari kisi ko chhot pahuncha sakti hai. Lekin uske paas wahan se jaane ke alawa koi chara nahi tha. Woh apni car mein baitha aur bhaari man se wahan se chala gaya.


Mental hospital mein jab injection ka asar chala gaya, Pari ne bechain hokar Abhinav ka naam pukaarane lagi. Magar woh anjaan thi is baat se ke kitne log us par buri nazar banaye hue the.


Darwaja khula aur 2 adami uski cell mein ghuse. Woh achaanak shaant ho gayi.


"Pari kyu ro rahi hai?" woh log haste hue bole, "Pari ko Abhinav ke paas jaana hai?”


Pari dar se kaamp rahi thi. Lekin woh Abhinav ke paas jaana chahti thi. Unse haan mein sir hilaya. "Hum tumhe uske paas le chalenge, chalo hamare saath chup chaap aao."


Pari donon aadmiyon ke saath chup chap chal di.


Ve use sidhiyon se niche ek andheri jagah mein le gaye. Pari andhere se nahi darati thi, use isaki aadat thi. un logon mein se ek ne achaanak use piche se pakad liya aur uske munh ko jor se daba diya taaki woh chilla na sake. Woh keval kamajor roop se virodh kar sakati thi, woh bahut thaki hui thi. Unme se ek aadmi ne use farsh par leta diya aur uske saath zabardasti karne laga. Pari ke paas ladane ya chikhane ki takat hi nahi bachi thi. Uski garbhaavastha ne use kamjor bana diya tha. Usne bas apani aankhen band kar aur Abhinav ke baare mein sochne lagi, Abhinav ke saath bitae samay ki khoobasoorat yaadein shaayad uske jivan ke ekamaatr khoobasoorat pal the.

Abhinav ka khayal aate hi usme mann mein ek umeed jaag uthi. Pari apni poori takat se phir ladhne lagi. Use paas pada ek lohke ka sariya mila. Usne woh uthakar us aadmi ke sar pe de mara. Usne itni takat se maara ki woh aadmi wahin mar gaya. Phir bhi pari ne us aadmi ke mrit sharir par itne vaar kiye ki ab uska chehra tak pechana nahi jaa raha tha. Phir Pari gusse se doosre aadmi ki ooar badhi. Uska hinsak roop dekh kar doosra aadmi gharbra kar wahan se bhag gaya.


Pari bahar nikalne ka raasta khojne lagi. Us hospital ki ke chaaron or ghana jangal tha. Lekin woh bina dare, raat ke andhere mein jungle ki taraf chal padi. Achanak tej barish hone lagi aur Pari baarish mein poori tarah bheeg gayi, lekin Abhinav tak pahunchne ke liye woh kuch bhi seh sakti thi, kisi bhi haalaat se ladh sakti thi. Abhinav shaayad woh ekamaatr aadami jisane kabhi use pyaar diya. Raat ka andhera gehrata gaya aur thand badhti gayi, lekin Pari Abhinav ka naam chillaate hue baarish mein chalati rahi.


Abhinav abhi bhi tez baarish mein apni gaadi chala raha tha. Woh Pari ko bhool nahi pa raha tha. Uske dil ne baar-baar Pari ke baare mein suni hui har baat par vishvaas karane se inakaar kar diya. Bechaari ladki...anaathaalay mein pali-badhi... kya uska parivar kabhi tha? Kya kuch bura hua unke saath? Ya shaayad uska parivaar ne use bojh samajhkar kahin chhod diya…Abhinav ko shak tha ki anaathaalay mein uski thik se dekhabhaal bhi ki gayi ya nahi, aur phir mental hospital - uske jaisi pyari si ladki ke liye itani darawni jagah .


Pari ke baare mein sabhi alag alag kahaniya bun rahe the, lekin Abhinav ne keval us kahaani par vishwas kiya jo Pari ke sharir par ghav ke nishaan aur uski aankhon ki maasoomiyat ne batayi thi. Pari ne jo drawing banaye the, ve ab use samajh mein aa rahe the, woh use apni dardanaak kahaani batane ki koshish kar rahi thi. Ek ladki jis par itne julm hue, jise maara pita gaya, bhookha rakha gaya hai aur zabardasti ki gayi, usse pratikriya karane ka bhi haq nahi hai? Uske gusse ko “Intermittent Explosive Disorder” keh ke kharij kar dena kitna krur hai!


Abhinav ne apne gusse par kaaboo paane ke liye sangharsh kiya. Woh yeh soch kar sihar utha ki Pari ka us mental hospital mein kya haal hoga. Abhinav apne dil ki gaharai use woh saara pyaar aur dekhabhaal dena chaahata tha jiski woh hakadaar thi, lekin woh asahaay tha. Unse apne dil mein ek dardnaak khalipan mehsoon kiya. Usne apni bebasi ko kosa, aur shaayad apne zindagi mein pehali baar woh apne bhagavaan se naaraaj tha.


Pari usi bhagavaan se bhikh maang rahi thi ki woh use Abhinav ke paas le jae lekin shaayad uski aavaaj itani kamajor thi ki unke kaanon tak nahi pahunch saki. Pari ab itni thak chuki thi ki, woh gili mitti par gir gai, kamajor aur bhookhi, thand mein kaampti hui, phir bhi Abhinav ka naam leti rahi. Woh uske pyaar, uske saath ke liye bahut tarasti rahi, lekin berehem thand ne dhire-dhire uski jaan le li.
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Category : thriller + romance :
This short story is awesome package of revolting emotions, ek choti si kahani me itna sab kuch daalana bahut hi muskil hota hai.
pari aur abhinav do kirdarro ke beech chote chote palo ko pyaar bhara banana aur kirdaaro ke wajan ko badhana, mujhe bahut badia laga. ek trah se dono ke beech ke emotion aaj ki society ko darshaata hai. abhinav ka kirdaar bahut hi saaf dil ka tha, aur to aur wo saaf dil ke rahte usne apne pyaar sheetal ki baato ko bhi khaarij kar dia, apne ussoolo par tika raha.

Writing skills ki baat kare to kahani ko ek sire to aakhri sire tak pahuchaane me lekhika Indian Princess ne bahut hi shaandar tarike se darshaaya hai, kahaani me pari ko lekar bahut saare turning points aaye uske baad bhi kahaani apni pakad majbooti se banayi hui thi, pari ka kirdaar main focus par rakhte hue kahaani ko apnin aakhri mod to badiya tarike se pahuchaya gya.

Reader's view: reader ke tor par story dil ko chuu lene waali thi, do logo ke pyaar, ek beshara ladki aur samaaj ki kaali chaaya ko unda roop se dikhaya gya hai. :claps: :claps:
 
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Story: Purwa our geeta

Writer: Md sultantipu40

Total word Count ~ 5700 approx.

Pehale to dost mein aap ko badhaee doonga ke aap ne bhaag liya iss contest mein… best of luck!!
Kahanee likahana koyee aasan kaam nahee he… yeh aik creative kaam he… jis ko writer apne khoon aur bhaavanaon se seench kar rachtaa he…

Story ka theme he multiple murders based thriller-mystery… jis mein aik mukhy role aik aatma kaa he… Aatma he “purvaa” ki… jis ka murder ho jata he apne Pita, Mata aur Didi ke saath… aur Purvaa kee aatma aik aur mrt ladkee “geeta” ke badan mein samaa jaatee he… apnee family ke khoon ka badla lene…
Aur phir shareer tau hota he ‘geeta’ ka magar aatma hotee he “purvaa” kee… iss tarah se badlaa poora hotaa he…

Kiran aik achhee aur inteeligent police officer, jo ke iss case ko suljhatee he… aur pooree hakeekat uss ke maadhyam se readers ke saamne khul jaatee he…

Bro… aap ne intahiyee brilliant plot sochaa aur theek kirdaar chunne… aap ka conceptual work atiutkrsht tha… yadi execution bhee ussee tarah kee hotee to bina kissi sandeh ke yeh kaha jaa sakta thaa ke yeh story aik masterpiece hotee…
Aisa nahee he ke conceptual aur execution ke gap ke kaaran se story kaa level neeche aagaya ho… magar mein ne aap kee doosaree stpries padhee hein aur yeh mein achhe se jaanta hun ke aap kee lekhan Kaushal kitane umdaa hein… anyways overall the story was good…

Aap ke bhavishy ke prayaason ke lie shubhakaamanaen… 🙏
 
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Barasaat ki raat thi. Abhinav ek sunsaan sadak par gaadi chala kar ghar vaapas ja raha tha. Tej barish mein use samne ki sadak thik se dikhayi nahi de rahi thi, tabhi achaanak unse raaste ke bich mein ek ladki nazar aayi. Abhinav satark tha aur usne samay par par break daba dia. Us ladki ko halka jhatka laga aur woh gir padi. Abhinav turant gadi se utarkar use dekhne ke liye daud pada. Ladki behosh padi thi.


Abhinav ne use utha kar apni car mein bitha liya. Usne dekha ki wo ladki pregnant hai. Abhinav use lekar turant hospital pahuncha, woh ummid kar raha tha ki usne us ladki ko ya uske bachche ko chot nahi pahunchayi, agar aisa hua to woh khud ko kabhi maaf nahi kar payega. Doctor ne ladki ko apni dekharekh mein liya aur turant treatment shuru kar diya. Jald hi use hosh aa gaya.


Abhinav daud ke us ladki ke paas gaya. Use uski bahut chinta ho rahi thi.


"Aap thik ho?" usne poocha. Ladki ne koi jawab nahi diya, bas use ek khaali nazar se dekhti rahi.


Abhinav ne apna sawal doharaya, ladki phir bhi kuch nahi boli.


Kisi ne Abhinav ke kandhe par thapathapaaya aur kaha ki doctor usse baat karna chahte hai. Woh doctor ke kaksh mein chala gaya.


Doctor ne Abhinav se kaha, "Sir, kuch zaroori baat karni thi aap se. Is ladki ki umar lagbhag 20 saal hai lekin yeh ladki mansik roop se viklang hai aur shayad janam se hi aisi hi thi. Aur woh 6 mahine ki garbhwati hai. Humne usse uske parivaar ke baare mein poochhane ki koshish ki, lekin woh kuch bhi bata nahi paa rahi hai. Isake alaava, is ladki ke sharir par purani choton ke nishaan hai, jaise ki use maara peeta gaya ho. Yeh pregnancy bhi shayad zabardasti ke karan hui hai. Haalaanki, kuch mamooli kharonchon ko chhod kar aap ki gaadi se takaraane ke kaaran koi nuksaan nahi hua, aur uske bachche ko bhi koi nukasaan nahi hua hai."


Abhinav shanti se doctor ki baat sun raha tha. Use us ladki ke prati gahari sahaanubhooti thi. Usne kuchh der socha, ek gahari saans li aur kaha, "Main ek FIR darj karna chahta hoon."


Police jald hi pahunchi aur Abhinav aur doctor ke bayaan darj kie. Haalaanki ladki kuchh bhi bata nahi pa rahi thi. Abhinav ne police se anurodh kiya ki woh jald se jald uske parivaar ka pata lagane mein madad kare, aur un logon ko bhi jo uski is haalat ke liye jimmedar the.


Abhinav us ladki ke paas gaya aur uske bagal mein baith gaya aur halke se uska haath thama. Jaise hi usne use chhua, ladki ekdum se ghabra gayi, lekin Abhinav ne shanti se uska haath pakad kar uski or pyaar se dekha. Wo kafi der tak use dekhti rahi aur dhire-dhire shaant ho gai.


Doctor aur police is baat par charcha kar rahi thi ki, jab tak uske parivaar ka pata nahi chal jaata. Use kahan rakha jae.

"Yeh ek chhota shahar hai aur aas-paas aisi ladki on ko aashray dene ke liye koi achhi suvidha nahi hain" police nirikshak ne kaha, "yahaan se lagabhag 200 kilometer door padosi shahar mein ek NGO hai, lekin wahan humne pata kiya hai ki jagah khali nahi hai."


"Mujhe khed hai, lekin ham use hospital mein bhi nahi rakh sakate," doctor ne kaha.


"Agar aapki ijazat ho to, to main uske parivaar ke pata chalane tak use apani dekhabhaal mein rakhana chaahata hoon." Abhinav ne Inspector se kaha

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"Thik hai Abhinav ji," Inspector ne kaha, "Mujhe pata hai ki aap ek izzatdaar parivaar se hain, main kuch dinon tak uski dekhabhaal karane ke liye aap par bharosa kar sakata hoon."


Abhinav use apne saath le jaakar khush tha. Is nanhi Pari ko kuch dinon ke liye aashray dene ke liye uske ghar mein nishchit roop se jagah thi. Jab woh use apni car mein bitha ke ghar le ja raha tha, to usne use ek bachche ki jigyaasa ke saath car ki khidki se duniya ki sundarata ko nihaarate dekha. Shaayad woh lambe samay tak kahin band thi.


Jab Abhinav ke padosiyon se use apne ghar ke andar ek garbhavati ladki ko le jaate hue dekha to use padosiyon ne use buri tarah ghoor kar dekha, lekin usne paravaah nahi ki.


Abhinav us ladki ko ek aaraamadaayak kamare mein le gaya jise usne uske liye taiyaar kiya tha. Abhinav ne uske liye ek teddy bear bhi laya tha. Woh ladki teddy bear ko dekh kar bahut khush hui, use gale laga ke woh ek chhote bacche ki tarah hasne aur khelne lagi.


Abhinav use dekh kar muskuraya. Jab se woh usse mila tha, usne keval uska udaas, dara hua chehra dekha tha. use is tarah hansate aur khelate dekhkar uske dil ko sukoon mila.


"Pari" Abhinav ne use bulaaya.


Ladki ne Abhinav ki or dekha.


"Tumhaara naam Pari hai'' Abhinav ne uski or ishara karate hue kaha. Usne us ladki ko “Pari” bulane ka faisla kiya tha.


"Main Abhinav hoon." usne apni or ishara karte hue kaha.


"Abhinav kaho" usne jor dekar kaha. Use ise do baar doharaana pada, aur phir woh ladki "Abi ...aav" shabdon se joojhati hui boli. Abhinav use dekh kar muskuraaya aur use gale laga liya.


Abhinav use kuch khana diya, lekin usne khate khate apne upar gira diya. Pari ko ehsaas hua ki usne kuchh gadabad ki hai aur woh udaas ashrupoorn aankhon se kshama maang rahi thi. Abhinav use dekh kar muskuraya, use saaf kiya aur use bistar par sula kar chadar odhada di. Shaayad woh bahut thaki hui thi, woh turant hi so gai.


Abhinav ke darwaje ki ghanti baji. uski mangetar Sheetal aayi thi. Woh bahut gusse me thi.


"Main kya sun rahi hoon Abhinav? tum ek pregnant ladki ko ghar le aaye?" Sheetal ne gusse mein kaha.


"Hann sahi suna hai tumne," Abhinav ne kaha, "Mujhe uski dekhbhal karne ke liye tumhari madad ki zaroorat hai. Mujhe yakin hai ki ek ladki hone ke naate tum use behtar samajh sakti ho. Bechari ke saath bahot bura hua hai. Main bas kuch dinon tak uski dekhabhaal karna chaahata hoon jab tak ki uske parivaar ka pata nahi lag jaata."


"Uske saath bahot bura hua hai? Tumhe yeh sab kisne bataya? Usne khud? Ya tum us doctor ki har baat par yakeen kar rahe ho jo keval is pagal ladki se chhutakaara paana chaahata tha jaise uske parivaar ne kiya? Kya tumne socha bhi hai ki log kya kahenge? Hum jald hi shaadi karne wale hain, aur tumhara aisa karna na keval tumhare liye balki mere liye bhi sharmanaak hai."


"Mujhe nahi lagata ki kisi ki madad karne mein sharminda hone ki koi baat hai." Abhinav ne kaha.


"I am sorry lekin mujhe tumhara is ladki ko ghar laana bilkul pasand nahi aaya. Use kisi NGO mein bhej dete na. Use ghar kyon laen? Kya tumhein meri zara bhi parwah nahi hai?"


"Of course tumhari parwah karta hun Sheetal, I love you,” Abhinav ne kaha.


“Please ek baar aur soch lo Abhinav,” Sheetal ne kaha, “Hum ek samaaj mein rehte hain ... tumhe pata nahi hai ki log tumhare baare mein kya baatein kar rahe hain .."

Bas itna kehkar Sheetal chali gai.


Abhinav udaas ho gaya. Use ummid thi ki Sheetal uska saath degi, use ummid thi ki uska dil uske jaisa achha hoga. Woh duniya ki paravaah nahi karata tha jab use vishwas hota ki woh sahi hai. Usne bedroom mein jhaanka aur Pari ko chain se sote hue dekha. Woh uske baalon ko sahlate hue uske paas baith gaya.


Kuchh saal pahale ek durghatana mein Abhinav ne apne parivaar ko kho diya tha. Tab se woh apne ghar mein akela rehta tha. Woh hamesha kisi ke saath ke liye tarasta tha. Usne Pari ki aankhon mein jo bebasi aur akelaapan dekha, theek waisa hi akelapan woh apne pariwar ke bina mahasoos karta tha.


Ek samay tha jab uske paas kuch bhi nahi tha, kayi baar jab woh itna thaka hota lekin uska duhkh use sone nahi deta, kayi baar uska mann karta ki koi uske sir ko pyaar se tab tak sehlaye jab tak woh so nahi jaata. Sheetal ek achchhi ladki thi, saubhagya se usne jivan mein aisa dukh bhara daur kabhi nahi dekha. Abhinav ke jeevan ka yeh hissa tha jise woh kabhi samajh nahi payi.


Pari ki dekhabhaal ke liye usne ek nurse ko kaam par rakha tha jab woh kaam ke liye bahar jaata tha. Pari ek pyaari ladki thi, haalaanki uske aas-paas ke sabhi log use tiraskaar se dekhte the, phir bhi uske chehare ki maasoomiyat ko koi mita nahi sakte the. Usne Abhinav ke liye kabhi koi pareshaani nahi khadi ki. Woh chup chaap ghar ke chaaron or uska pichha karati aur ek kone mein khadi hokar use dekhti rehti. Woh jab bhi nazron se ojhal ho jata toh woh pareshan ho jaati thi. Abhinav aksar uske saath luka-chhupi khelta. Abhinav chhip jaata tha aur Pari use talaashti. Agar woh use nahi dhoondh paati to woh rone lagati aur Abhinav saamne aa jaata. Use dobara dekh kar woh khushi se chilla uthti.


Woh bahut dukhi hoti thi jab Abhinav kaam par jaata, lekin Abhinav hamesha vaada karta tha ki woh vaapas aaega aur uske lie kuchh laega. Aur woh hamesha Pari ke liye kuch na kuch laata tha, kabhi khilone, kabhi chocolate.


"Abi, abi ..." usne Pari ko khushi se pukaarate suna. jab woh dekhne gaya ki yeh kya hai, to usne khushi-khushi use apani aur Abhinav ki ek crayon drawing dikhai.


"Yeh to bahut sundar hai sweetie!" Abhinav ne kaha. Usne Pari ki us pyari si dawing ko sambhal ke rakha.


Kuch din beet gaye. Pari ko bhi Abhinav ka saath accha lagta tha. Woh har raat usko pariyon ki kahani sunata, aur woh un jaadu bhari kahaniyon mein kho jaati jo usne pehle kabhi nahi suni thi.


Ek raat Abhinav ne Pari ko apne phoole hue pet par hath rakhte hue use chup chaap rote hue paaya. Jaise hi Abhinav uske paas gaya, Pari ne use kasakar gale laga liya.


"Mujhe kya ho raha hai Abi? Mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai..." Pari ne aansoo bahaate hue kaha.


"Yahan ek pyara sa farishta hai'' Abhinav use dilaasa diya, "Jab uske aane ka samay hoga, tab woh farishta in duniya mein aayega aur woh tumhe sabse jyada pyaar karega. Aur tum phir kabhi akeli nahi rahogi."


"Sach mein?" Pari ne use aur bhi kasakar gale lagaate hue kaha, "mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai".


"Mat daro Pari, sab thik ho jaega" Abhinav ne ne uske maathe ko choomte hue kaha, "ab so jao, good night, sweet dreams."


Pari ko Abhinav ke ghar mein rehte hue ab lagabhag 2 hafte bit chuke the, lekin uske parivaar ka koi pata nahi chala. Lekin Abhinav ko is baat se koi fark nahi pada. Use Pari ka saath accha lagta tha. Lekin Sheetal ki naarazgi badhati ja rahi thi.


Ek shaam, Abhinav ke darwaje ki ghanti baji. Usne darwaja khola to saamne Sheetal khadi thi. Woh ek sundar si dress pehen kar taiyyar hui thi.


“Tum phone kyu nahi utha rahe the?” Sheetal ne gusse se kaha.


Abhinav ne phone check kiya to silent par tha. Sheetal ke 12 missed calls pade hue the.


“I am sorry phone silent par tha,” Abhinav ne kaha, “Waise tum itni taiyyar hokar kaha ja rahi ho?”


“Aaj shaam tum mujhe candlelight dinner par le jaane waale the! Bhool gaye?” Sheetal ne gusse mein chillate hue kaha.


“I am so sorry Sheetal,” Abhinav ne kaha, “Darasal, Pari ko subah se bukhar tha isliye main uski dekhbhaal kar raha tha, isiliye mujhe yaad nahi raha. I am really sorry.”


Yeh baat sunte hi Sheetal ne apna aapa kho diya. “Pata nahi is pagal ladki ke peeche aise kya deewane hue ho ki apne mangetar ke saath plan ki hui date bhool gaye.”


“I am really sorry Sheetal,” Abhinav ne shanti se jawab diya, “Lekin sirf ek baar, keval ek baar, apne baare mein sochna band karo aur Pari ke baare mein socho ki woh kaisa mahasoos kar rahi hogi. Aur woh yahan jyada dinon tak nahi rahne wali hai."


"Uske baare mein kya sochna hai? Na shakal hai na akal hai is randi ke paas aur mere mard pe doore daal rahi hai," Sheetal Pari par chillai.


Pari uska gussa dekh kar dar gai aur phoot-phoot kar rone lagi. Usne Abhinav ki or dekha aur kaha, "Pari... sorry.."


Abhinav ne use gale lagaya aur use dilasa dene ki koshish ki. "Mat ro sweetie, tumhe sorry kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai, yeh tumhari galti nahi hai."


"Uski galti nahi?" Sheetal chillai, "Jis tarah se tum uski parwah karate ho, mujhe lagta hai ki shayad yeh bacha tumhara hai ... tumne is mandbuddhi randi ko chod kar pregnant kar diya aur ab usse pyaar ho gaya."


"Bas Sheetal!" Abhinav chillaaya, "Is bechari ladki ko apna naam tak nahi pata, isko yeh bhi nahi pata ki uske saath kya ho raha hai..woh bas itna jaanti hai ki woh bahut dard mein hai... yeh sharm ki baat hai ki tum use samajhne ki koshish bhi nahi kar rahi ho. Mujhe sach mein lagta tha ki tumhare seene mein dil hai, main sach mein tumhe pyar karta tha Sheetal, maine socha tha ki main tumhare saath sab kuchh saajha kar sakta hoon, ... maine socha tha ki tum mujh par vishwas karogi, mujhe lagta tha ki is lachar ladki ke liye tumhare dil mein bhi pyaar hoga...aur yahaan tum kitani gandi baatein kar rahi ho...mujhe khushi hai ki main tumhara yeh roop bhi dekh saka... main ab tumse koi baat nahi karna chahta. Bas chali jao Sheetal."


Sheetal chali gai. Pari abhi bhi uski baanhon mein kaanp rahi thi. Woh bahut dari hui thi. "Please mujhe saza nahi dena...bahut dard…saza nahi…" usne darr se kaampte hue bola.


Abhinav ne uski aankhon mein dekha. Woh keval bhay aur laachaari dekh sakta tha. ‘Koi rakshas hi hogi jo itni pyari ladki ko saza dega’ usne socha.


Mansik roop se vikshipt man jo apna naam tak yaad nahi rakh sakta, saza yaad rakhta hai...kitni dardanaak thi uski kahaani? Usne use apni baahon mein utha liya aur bistar par le gaya. Woh uske bagal mein baitha raha jab tak woh so nahi gai.


Abhinav ki nazar uske drawing book par padi jo uske bistar ke paas padi thi. Usne woh drawing book khola to hairan reh gaya. Kuch bhayank se drawing bana rakhe the uspe Pari ne crayon se. Sabse pahle drawing mein qabar mein ek mrit ladki thi jis ke sir mein chaakoo phansa hua tha aur ek aadami qabar ke upar ek ped pe lage hue fande se latak raha tha aur paas mein khada ek bachcha bebas hokar dekh raha tha. Doosre drawing mein ek teddy bear tha jiske chaaron taraf khoon laga tha. Ek chitr mein bina naakhoonon vaala ek kata hua haath dikhaya gaya. Ek andhere kue ki drawing thi jisme bahut saare bachhe doobte hue dikhai de rahe the, ek ladki drawing thi jiski skin poori tarah se nili thi, ek chitr mein ek pinjare ke andar tooti pankhudiyon wala ek phool tha, agli drawing mein raakshasi praaniyon se ghiri ek tooti hui gudiya dikh rahi thi, aur ek panna poori tarah se kaale rang se ranga gaya tha. Abhinav in chitron ka arth jaan na chahta tha, Pari un drawings ke maadhyam se kuch kehne ki koshish kar rahi thi, lekin kuchh bhi spasht nahi tha.


Agle din Abhinav ko police ka phone aaya. Police waalon ko pata chal gaya hai ki Pari kahan se aayi hai. Woh ek mental hospital tha. Abhinav police aur Pari ke saath wahan pahuch gaya. Jagah ko pehachante hi Pari chikhane-chillaane lagi, lekin karmachaariyon ne jaldi se us par kaaboo pa liya aur use le gaye.


"Yahaan panjikrt uska naam Ragini hai," wahan ke psychiatrist ne police ko bataaya. "use ek anaathaalay se yahaan bheja gaya tha. Woh bahut hinsak bacchi thi aur aksar doosre bachchon ko chot pahunchati thi. Woh “Intermittent Explosive Disorder” se pidit hai, woh jyadatar samay shaant rehti hai lekin jab uttejit hoti hai to woh bahut khataranaak ho sakati hai."


"Kya bakwas hai yeh!" Abhinav ne gusse me kaha, "Woh theek se bol bhi nahi sakti aur aap kah rahe hain ki woh khatarnak hai? Sabase pahale yeh bataiye, uski is halat ke liye kaun jimmedar hai? main chahata hoon ki us kamine ko abhi giraftaar kiya jaye!"


"Mujhe afsos hai ki us vyakti ka pata lagana mushkil hai. Woh yahan ka aadmi nahi ho sakta kyonki Ragini ek saal pahale yahaan se bhaag gayi thi. Yeh rahi police mein darj ki gayi report ki copy. Humne use khojne ki bahut koshish ki lekin uska kuch pata nahi chala, koi nahi jaanata ki woh is dauran kahan thi. Ho sakta hai ki us dauran kisi ne uske saath zabardasti ki ho, sirf Ragini hi hume bata sakti hai ki vaastav mein uske saath kya hua tha," doctor ne kaha.


Achanak, ek aadami ke jor se chikhne ki aawaz aayi. Khatarnak roop se ghaayal ek staff zameen par gira pada tha. Sabhi log use dekhane ke liye pahunche. Pari ke haath mein jang lagi kil thi, jisase usne us aadami ki aankh fod di thi. Woh gusse se kaamp rahi thi, uski aankhen khoon se laal thi. Pari ki is hinsak harakat ko dekhkar Abhinav hairan reh gaya. Jaise hi Pari ne Abhinav ko dekha, woh shaant ho gayi gai aur phoot-phoot kar rone lagi. Usne khoon se lathapath kil ko gira diya aur Abhinav ke paas daudi aur use kasakar gale laga liya.


"Pari ko yahan mat chhodo ...bahut buri jagah ..." usne aansoo bahaate hue bhikh maangi.


Abhinav ne dari hui Pari ko gale laga liya. Use doctor ki baaton ki parwah nahi thi, usne jo dekha us par vishwas bhi nahi kiya...use sirf apni Pari, uski maasoomiyat aur pavitrata par vishwas tha.


"Humein ab jaana chaahiye, Mr. Abhinav," Police Inspector ne kaha, "Woh maanasik roop se bimaar hai, use ab isi hospital mein rehna hoga."


"Main use yahan nahi chhod sakata...main chahta hoon ki woh mere saath rahe.." Abhinav ne kaha.


"Mujhe khed hai, lekin adaalat aapko use ghar le jaane ki anumati nahi degi kyon ki woh khataranaak roop se bimaar hai. Woh samaaj ke liye khatra hai. use yahaan rehna chaahiye aur ilaaj karaana chaahie. Halanki aap usse milne aa sakte hain," Inspector ne Abhinav ko samjhaya.


Bhaari man se Abhinav ne Pari ko jaane diya. Jaise hi woh jaane ke liye muda, woh jor se chillai aur use kas ke gale lagaya.


"Please mat jao..." Pari gidgidate hue boli. Uski pakad itani mazboot thi ki uske naakhoon Abhinav ki tvacha mein dhas kar khoon nikalne laga. Lekin Abhinav mehasoos kar sakata tha ki Pari ka dard usse kahin adhik tivr tha. Woh wahin sthir aur avaak khada raha aur hospital ke karmachaariyon ne Pari ko khinch kar Abhinav se alag kar liya. Jab woh apni poori taakat ke saath sangharsh kar rahi thi to Abhinav ne ne bas ashrupoorn nazron se use dekha.


Ek nurse ne Pari ko injection lagaya aur woh behosh ho gati. Us mental hospital mein kayi pinjare the jahaan paagalon ko jaanavaron ki tarah rakha jaata tha. Un pinjaron mein se ek mein uski Pari behosh padi thi. Uske haath aur pair zanjeer mein jakde hue the taaki woh khud ko ya kisi aur ko chot na pahuncha sake. Woh bahut maasoom lag rahi thi. Abhinav ne ashru bhari nigaahon se uski or dekha. Uske dil maan hi nahi raha tha ki Pari kisi ko chhot pahuncha sakti hai. Lekin uske paas wahan se jaane ke alawa koi chara nahi tha. Woh apni car mein baitha aur bhaari man se wahan se chala gaya.


Mental hospital mein jab injection ka asar chala gaya, Pari ne bechain hokar Abhinav ka naam pukaarane lagi. Magar woh anjaan thi is baat se ke kitne log us par buri nazar banaye hue the.


Darwaja khula aur 2 adami uski cell mein ghuse. Woh achaanak shaant ho gayi.


"Pari kyu ro rahi hai?" woh log haste hue bole, "Pari ko Abhinav ke paas jaana hai?”


Pari dar se kaamp rahi thi. Lekin woh Abhinav ke paas jaana chahti thi. Unse haan mein sir hilaya. "Hum tumhe uske paas le chalenge, chalo hamare saath chup chaap aao."


Pari donon aadmiyon ke saath chup chap chal di.


Ve use sidhiyon se niche ek andheri jagah mein le gaye. Pari andhere se nahi darati thi, use isaki aadat thi. un logon mein se ek ne achaanak use piche se pakad liya aur uske munh ko jor se daba diya taaki woh chilla na sake. Woh keval kamajor roop se virodh kar sakati thi, woh bahut thaki hui thi. Unme se ek aadmi ne use farsh par leta diya aur uske saath zabardasti karne laga. Pari ke paas ladane ya chikhane ki takat hi nahi bachi thi. Uski garbhaavastha ne use kamjor bana diya tha. Usne bas apani aankhen band kar aur Abhinav ke baare mein sochne lagi, Abhinav ke saath bitae samay ki khoobasoorat yaadein shaayad uske jivan ke ekamaatr khoobasoorat pal the.

Abhinav ka khayal aate hi usme mann mein ek umeed jaag uthi. Pari apni poori takat se phir ladhne lagi. Use paas pada ek lohke ka sariya mila. Usne woh uthakar us aadmi ke sar pe de mara. Usne itni takat se maara ki woh aadmi wahin mar gaya. Phir bhi pari ne us aadmi ke mrit sharir par itne vaar kiye ki ab uska chehra tak pechana nahi jaa raha tha. Phir Pari gusse se doosre aadmi ki ooar badhi. Uska hinsak roop dekh kar doosra aadmi gharbra kar wahan se bhag gaya.


Pari bahar nikalne ka raasta khojne lagi. Us hospital ki ke chaaron or ghana jangal tha. Lekin woh bina dare, raat ke andhere mein jungle ki taraf chal padi. Achanak tej barish hone lagi aur Pari baarish mein poori tarah bheeg gayi, lekin Abhinav tak pahunchne ke liye woh kuch bhi seh sakti thi, kisi bhi haalaat se ladh sakti thi. Abhinav shaayad woh ekamaatr aadami jisane kabhi use pyaar diya. Raat ka andhera gehrata gaya aur thand badhti gayi, lekin Pari Abhinav ka naam chillaate hue baarish mein chalati rahi.


Abhinav abhi bhi tez baarish mein apni gaadi chala raha tha. Woh Pari ko bhool nahi pa raha tha. Uske dil ne baar-baar Pari ke baare mein suni hui har baat par vishvaas karane se inakaar kar diya. Bechaari ladki...anaathaalay mein pali-badhi... kya uska parivar kabhi tha? Kya kuch bura hua unke saath? Ya shaayad uska parivaar ne use bojh samajhkar kahin chhod diya…Abhinav ko shak tha ki anaathaalay mein uski thik se dekhabhaal bhi ki gayi ya nahi, aur phir mental hospital - uske jaisi pyari si ladki ke liye itani darawni jagah .


Pari ke baare mein sabhi alag alag kahaniya bun rahe the, lekin Abhinav ne keval us kahaani par vishwas kiya jo Pari ke sharir par ghav ke nishaan aur uski aankhon ki maasoomiyat ne batayi thi. Pari ne jo drawing banaye the, ve ab use samajh mein aa rahe the, woh use apni dardanaak kahaani batane ki koshish kar rahi thi. Ek ladki jis par itne julm hue, jise maara pita gaya, bhookha rakha gaya hai aur zabardasti ki gayi, usse pratikriya karane ka bhi haq nahi hai? Uske gusse ko “Intermittent Explosive Disorder” keh ke kharij kar dena kitna krur hai!


Abhinav ne apne gusse par kaaboo paane ke liye sangharsh kiya. Woh yeh soch kar sihar utha ki Pari ka us mental hospital mein kya haal hoga. Abhinav apne dil ki gaharai use woh saara pyaar aur dekhabhaal dena chaahata tha jiski woh hakadaar thi, lekin woh asahaay tha. Unse apne dil mein ek dardnaak khalipan mehsoon kiya. Usne apni bebasi ko kosa, aur shaayad apne zindagi mein pehali baar woh apne bhagavaan se naaraaj tha.


Pari usi bhagavaan se bhikh maang rahi thi ki woh use Abhinav ke paas le jae lekin shaayad uski aavaaj itani kamajor thi ki unke kaanon tak nahi pahunch saki. Pari ab itni thak chuki thi ki, woh gili mitti par gir gai, kamajor aur bhookhi, thand mein kaampti hui, phir bhi Abhinav ka naam leti rahi. Woh uske pyaar, uske saath ke liye bahut tarasti rahi, lekin berehem thand ne dhire-dhire uski jaan le li.
Pari......ik alagh level ki story emotions se full.....pari jab abinav ko mili toh lga bechari mansik chot se peedit hai....abhinav ki care se usme badlav aae pyaar ke bhaav jagey........ abhinav ka relation v uski vajah se kharab hua ..esey hota hai....at end mental hospital mein jo jo b hua....apke shabdon ne mujhe emotional kr diya aapki lekhni ka kmaal hai ki mein isme doob gya...ending se dil dukha
..jese jese mein pad raha tha ..muje lag raha tha jese mein jo raha hai Issey rok du... realty wali feeling......jyada nhi mujhe revu aata...bass Kamaal dhamaal........ :applause:
 
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Rita aur Rahul dono first cousin the aur college ma sath padte the ek dosre ka ghar ana jana laga rehta tha college ka kam sath ma karte the aur sath ma college ate jate the kab unki dosti pyar ma badal gai pata hi nahi chala uske baad ek dosre k itne close howe first time dono ne sex ka maza ek sath liya yaani ek dosre ki Virginity thodne ka time dono ne khud hi dekha ab fir luckily dono ne apne parents ko razi kiya aur shadi karli dono k parents achche paise wale the aur dono Dubai ma reh chuke the Rita hamesha se apni family k sath rahi isliye uska kabhi bhi akelapan feel nahi kiya.

Rita ki graduation complete nahi howi unfortunately kyuk shadi jaldi ho gai but Rahul ne master kiya shadi k baad aur shadi k ek saal baad hi Rahul ko Dubai ma ek achchi Job mili aur woh Rita Rahul k parents k sath Mumbai ma rehne laagi sath ma uske parents bhi the isliye uska time guzar raha tha but Bhagwan ko kuch aur hi manzoor tha aur Rita k Parents ki death ho gai Rita iss dunya ma ek akeli reh gai kyuk uske koi bhai behan nahi the aur fir Rita ko Rahul k parents ka pyar mila but Rita ki life ma shayed kuch aur hi lekha tha aur unki bhi car accident ma death ho gai aur Rita ek dafa fir akeli ho gai .

Rahul jab parents ko Alvidaa karne aya aur fir se job pe jane laaga tuo Rita ne Rahul ko bola muhje bhi sath le jao ab ma yaha akele kese rahongi but Rahul bola abhi meri job set nahi howi wait karlo try karo honey akele rehne ki baas thode time ki baat hai Ab Rita ki life ma akelapan tuo tha hi aur Pati k naa hone se ab koi aisa bhi nahi tha jiske sath uska time pass tuo ho kuch time k baad jo badi kami Rita ki life ane lagi jo shadishuda Aurat ki sabse badi zarorat hai woh hai sex kehte hain jab aap ek dafa sex ka maza le lete ho tuo fir maan aur bhi machalta hai aur karne ko uske baad Rita ki life ki sabse badi yahi kami rahi uska reaction yahi howa Rita porn movies, adults stories dekhne lagi aur social media pe logo se baat hone lagi aur jab aap baat hoti hai stranger se tuo dosti pe hoti aur fir yahi howa Rita ki dosti howi 2 3 ladkon se jo usko nahi pata tha uske neighbor ma hi rehte the aur usko khubsurati k ashiq the jiska Rita ko nahi pata tha As usual jo hota hai baat karne k baad sharing hoti hai baten photos ab kyuk Rita ki life ma badi kami thi sex tuo Rita yahi soch k apni nude Pics bhi share kar di.

Ab hamari society ma jo mostly hota hai ek akeli aurat k sath wahi howa usko us nude pics pe blackmailed karna shuru howa ab akeli aurat apni izzat bachne k liye unki demands ko pura karne lagi kabhi paise kabhi new mobile aur zabardasti milna lastly jab Rita ki bardasht ki limit khatam howi tuo Rita ne apne Pati ko sab pata hi diya kya karti kab taak tension leti ab Rahul ko ana pada wapas apni biwi k pass aur police case bana aur lastly ek badi amount dekh k jaan chuti aur Rita ko le k Dubai agaya.

Rita ki life ma ek bar fir se kuch khushiyan ayi aur usko dobara mila sex ka maza but unfortunately woh bhi kuch din k liya tha shayed kyuk ek raat Rita ka hubby usko bola honey muhje business karne ka chance mila hai UK ma apne friend k sath aur muhje jana hoga Rita ne bola but Rahul ma akeli kese rahongi ab muhjse nahi raha jata fir ek kam karte hain muhje pregnant kar do fir
Rahul abhi nahi darling muhje kuch karne do tumhare liye apne liye aur bacho k liye future achcha ho aur ek khubsurat luxury life ho isliye tuo ma itni hard work kar raha hon aur ek bar fir woh Rita ko chhod k chala Rita ko sex ki aag ma jala k ab saal ma ek dafa ata hai aur Rita ki usi Adhuri life ma Jee rahi hai .


Rita isi jaali howi life ma Jee rahi thi fir ek din uske hubby ka phone aya uska business partner apna ek office open kar raha hai Dubai ma aur ham ne socha hai tum kab tak akeli rahongi tuo kyu naa tum us chote se office ka look after karo Rita ko bhi ye acha laga tuo usne Yes bol diya aur kuch dino baad office open howa aur Rita uska care karne lagi aur business achcha hota gaya aur fir business k kuch bade cleint ki mulaqat Rita se howi aur woh Rita k jism k diwane howe aur Rita jo phele hi apni jism ki aag ma Jaal rahi uske close hoti gai aur unho ne Rita k jism ko pane k liye apni dolat aur Jhote pyar ko use kiya kabhi Rita ko shopping, parties, Gold aur luxury items dete rehte the aur Rita k achche dost ban gaye aur finally unho ne Rita k sath bed share kiya kyuk unka pata chal gaya ek Pyasi aurat k life ma yahi kami hai apna kam poora karne k baad unho ne bhi Rita ko apne haal pe chhod diya aur aaj bhi Rita apni Adhuri life ma Jee rahi hai pata nahi kab uski life ka ye adhura Pan khatam hoga ....
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..woo..veri sad ...story....hai aapki kya sach me itna kuchh huwa hai aapke sath..aapki story padhkar mai v sad ho gaya ysr ....par koi nahi ham hai na yek dusre ke sath apni gsm bant lenge babe..🌹🌷💐for you babe

Aapki chhoti se kahani dher sari bate byan kar rahi aapki kahani me dard saf dikh raha hai is kahani se ridar ko bahut kuchh sikh milne wali hai ...thanks..rita..🌹
 

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year 20**





ek school me aaj 12 class ka special lecture tha jisme dr.anand ko bulaya gaya tha jo one of the best psychiatric mane jate hai , unhone class me aane ke kuch der baad ek smile ke sath lecture suru kia '' jarurat sabko hoti hai kisina kisi chij ki aur uske upar hi hamari dunia chalti hai, jaise ham insano ko sans lene ki , khane ki ya sone ki jarurat hoti hai, par ye sab physiological jarurate hai. par kya koi bata sakta hai uske alava hame sabse jayda kisiki jarurat hoti hai '' ab itna bol kar itna kehkar dr.anand thoda aage aagaye students ke paas unka ans sunne ke liye.


sab soch rahe the tabhi ek ladki ne apna hath upar kiya anand ne usko ans dena ka isara kiya , fir wo ladki boli '' i think sir hame sabse jayda happiness ki jarurat hoti hai, i means kon nahi chahega wo hamesha khush rahe '' ye ans sunne ke baad anand ne muskurate huve chehre ke sath bola '' beta tumahri baat to sahi hai par ans galat hai '' firse anand ne sab baccho ki taraf deka aur pucha '' koi bata sakta ye ans me galti kya thi '' ye sunte sab bacche sochne lage tabhi ek ladka bola,





past, year-20**


7th standard ki class me ek baccha apni pencil ko black se sharp karne me laga tha wo apne me khoya hua tha tabhi ek jatak se tapli uske sar ke piche padti hai, jisse wo baccha pura darr jata hai uska dimag panic mode me chala jata hai, tabhi jis ladke ne usko mara tha usne bola '' chal nikul bhai ne tujhe bulaya hai'' wo baccha thoda apne aap ko control karte huve bola '' kon nikul or mujjse kya kaam hai ''

itna sunte hi dusre ladke ne firse apna hath uppar kiya jisse dusra baccha darke piche ho gaya , dekh ke dusra baccha haste huve bola '' darpok sale, ab chup chap chalega ya ek aur dun '' us bechare ladke ne class me dekha sabki aur par koi uski help ke liye nahi tha balki uske piche wale ladke usko dekh ke has rahe the, ab wo dara hua tha and kuch kar sakta nahi tha isliye wo darte huve us ladke ke piche chalne laga. thodi der baad wo ladka kuch ladko ke paas jake bola '' ye lo bhai aagaya aapka murga ''


in sab lakdo ke bich me ek ladka tha jiska naam nikul ka tha usne isara karke us ladke ko apne paas bulaya fir uska collar pakda aur bola '' kyun be chuje yug naam haina tera, suna hai tera baap ke paas bahut paise hai '' itna sunte hi wo baccha dar gaya aur darte darte bola '' haan mera naam yu...gg hi hai par mere pass pai..se nahi hai'' ye baat sunke nikul aur gussa ho gaya '' juth bolta hia paise nahi hai..'' itna bolke nikul ko aur paas khich ke uske jeb me hath dala usne kuch chije bahar nikali wo sab choti choti pencils thi ye dekh ke confuse ho gaya fir gusse hote huve wo bola '' ye sab kya hai itni sari pencils kyun rakhi hai '' ye dekh ke yug darte huve bola '' pata nahi mene nahi rakhi '' ye sunke nikul bola '' kya matlab pata nahi koi bhoot aake rakh ke gaya kya agar ye teri nahi hai to kiski hogi '' ye sunte hi ek ladka bola '' bhai iski nahi hai to fir to isne chori ki hogi '' ye sunke nikul ne ek thappad yug ko marte huve bola '' sale itna paisa hoke chori karta hai, bure kaam karega sale '' itna bol kar usne ek ladke ke samne dekh ke bola '' oye mote tere bag me se wo steel ki scale lana aaj isko sutharna padega'' itna sunke ab yug bahut dar gaya uski dhadkan dhak dhak ho rahi thi tabhi usko aavaj aai '' tere hath me pencil to hai fir inse kya darna ek baar mardo fir tumhe koi bully nahi karega aur ye pain chala jayega ''




year-20**


dr anand ke que ka ans dete huve ek ladka bola '' happiness chahat hoti hai jaurat nahi aur chahat ke liye pehle jarurat ko pura karna padta hai '' ye sunte hi dr.anand ne us ladke ki aur dekha aur bole '' kya naam hai tumahra '' wo ladke ne ans diya '' Ayan....Ayan dixit '' ye sunne ke baad anand bole '' so ayan baat tumahri sahi thi par agli baar ans dene se pehe hath upar kar lena '' ye sunne ke baad ladka has kar bola '' kyun, jaha tak mujhe yaad hai aapne to aesa koi rule banaya nahi tha class me aane ke baad '' dr. anand kuch kehne wale the tabhi ek dusre ladke ne hath uthaya, ye dekhte huve dr.anand ne us ladke ko ans dene ke liye bola us ladke ne pehle que ans diya '' sir mujhe lagta hai hame sabse jyada jarurat safety ki hoti hai'' ye sunke dr. anand ke chehre pe muskan aagai aur wo bole '' sahi kaha beta tumne , so hame sabse jyada need hoti hai safety aur hajaro salo ke evolution me hamara dimag ek chij sabse acche se sikha hai wo hai survival ''




PAST, YEAR- 20**



''ab bhi kya soch rahe ho agar tumse nahi ho raha to mere hath me pencil do '' itna bol kar us ladkne ne apna hath aage kar diya ye dekh yug soch me pada tabhi nikul bola '' abe mote kitni der lagegi jaldi lana scale '' itna bol kar nikul ne yug ki taraf dekha wo dara hua tha fir yug ne apna hath aage kiya jisme pencil thi aur wo bola '' ye lo '' ye dekh ke nikul thoda confuse sa dikha par uske baad dekha uski vajah se usko thoda darr mehsus hua par kuch samaj pata usse pehle uske kandhe me pencil ghush gai. ye dekh sab ladko ki fatt gai kisiko kuch samaj nahi aaraha tha waha nikul ki chikhe nikal rahi thi sath me uske hantho me khun bhara pada tha.



NEXT DAY, PRINCIPAL OFFICE


principal roy '' dekhye pradhan ji aapka beta hai is baar jane de rahe hai nahi to jo inse harkat ki hai us hisab se koi or hota to school se me suspend kar deta '' pradhan ne ye baat suni fir aur gusse me yug ki taraf dekh ke uska kaan marod diya, jisse yug ki aahhhh nikal gai aur pradhan bole '' suna tune, ek to pehle se padhai me sabse piche hai ab upar se ladai bhi karne laga '' yug thoda aah aah karte huve bola '' nahi papa mene kuch nahi kiay meri galti nahi hai '' itna sun kar pradhan aur gussa hoke bole '' jagde sath ab juth bhi bolne laga '' itna bol kar aur jor se kaan marod diya , ye dekh pramod nikul ki taraf dekh ke bole '' pradhan ji usko chod dijiye galti to hamare nalayak bacche ki hi hogi, yahi hamesha kuch na kuch jagde karta rehta hai. upar se hai bhi bacche ab kya kar sakte hai'' itna bol kar pramod nikul ki taraf gaye aur bole '' chal mafi mang isne '' itna sunkar nikul thoda rote huve chehre ke sath bola '' sorry uncle meri hi galti thi abse aesa nahi karunga '' ye dekh pradhan thode sant huve aur aese bhi wo jaldi se matter solve karna cahhate the, par tabhi office me ek aadmi aaya apne bacche ke sath ye baccha karna tha jisko nikul kal mota mota bol raha tha.


karan ke sath us aadmi ko dekh kar principal bhi khade ho gaye waha pradhan and pramod bhi ke sath khade ho gye ye aadmi dhiraj tha karan ke papa and yaha ke mla ke bhai upar se unka bhi accha khasa naam aur paisa tha , karan bhi nikul ki gang me rehta tha kyun ke unke sath hote huve usko koi bully nahi kar sakta tha . inko dekh kar principal bole '' are dhiraj ji aapka yaha kya aana hua '' dhiraj gusse me bole '' kya matlab kya aana huva ye mera baccha darr ke mare puri raat so nahi paya . abhi bhi dekhiye kaisa dara huva hai '' ye dekh prinicipal bole '' ha dhiraj ji me bhi abhi yahi discuss kar raha tha, yahi do baccho ka jagda hua tha '' prinicipal ne yug and nikul ki taraf dekh ke kaha . dhiraj ne dono ki taraf dekha nikul ke hath patti dekh ke samaj gaya ke marne wala yug hi hoga isliye usko dekh ke dhiraj bole '' kyun be dikhne me to ittu sa kaha aai tere me itni charbi'' ye dekh prahdhan aage aake bole '' maaf kar dijiye sir abhi baccha hai galti ho gai, ab ky bolu pehle to padhai me zero tha ab to ye sab bhi suru kar diya ''


itna sunke dhiraj bole '' baccha hua to kya hua sambhal kar nahi rakh sakte ya sirf ladai jhagda karna hi sikahaya hai aur vaise bhi ab maaf karna mere hath me nahi hai joy prinicipal sir ko sahi lagega wo punishment deknge '' . ye sunke prinicipal roy bole '' wo pradhan ji and pramod ji dono ki sahmati se mene case ko rafadafa karne ka socha hai. pramod ji bhi nahi chahte ki ye case aage bade '' ye sunke dhiraj bole '' ha to kya pramod ko jo karna hai kare mujhe kya mera beta so nahi paya uska kya '' . ye sun principal bole '' fir aesa karte hai 15 din ke liye dono ladko ko suspend kar dete hai, ye thik rahega na '' . prinicipal ne pramod and pradhan ki taraf dekh ke bole, un dono ne hami bhar di aur aese hi dono ko suspend kar diya gaya.




YEAR_20** DR.ANAND-LECTURE


dr anand abhi apni baat kar rahe the '' jaisa ke mene bola survival aur safety haamre liye bahut jaruri hai, jaise har kisi animals ke liye hoti hai, par ab ye safety hame do tarah se milti hai ya to ham khud apne ko aap ko safe rakhe ya hame koi safe rakhe jaise border par koi army ya police. par usse bhi alag ek chij hai wo hai ekta jaise animals jundh me rehte hai vaise ham bhi rehte hai koi caste ke naam pe koi religion ke naam ya fir country ke naam pe or in sabko milega ek chij aati hai wo hai socity ya bole hamare desh ke liye samaj, jaise animals kindoms ke kuch rules hai vaise hi hamare samaj ke rules hote hai aur samaj me relatable hone ke liye sabko hi wo rules follow karne padte hai. bas is survival ke topic pe ek last baat bolunga jaisa wo hai Hierarchy ke upar par usse pehle ek que puchununga '' itna bolke anand sab baccho ki taraf dekha




PAST, YEAR-20**


Ab pradhan, yug ko leke ghar aagya tha usko ghar aake thodi bahut maar padi sath me bahut data bhi gaya khash kar uski mom ke dvara jo ek high school teacher thi aur chahti thi ke unke bacche topper ho aur bada hoke unka nam roshan kare.

Ab yug apne room me beth kar padhai kar raha tha par sab uske sar ke upar ja raha tha usko kuch bhi samaj nahi aaraha tha. tabhi yug ki sister naina uske room me aai wo padhai me acchi thi, usne aake thodi der yug se baat ki aur yug ko bhi usse baat karke accha lagta tha jaise ghar me koi tha jo uska sath deta tha dono ne thodi der masti ki fir naina ne yug ko color pencils ka ek pack gift kiya ye dekh yug bola '' ye kya hai aur mujhe kyun de rahe the'' ye sunke boli '' kyun bhaiya itna jaldi bhul gaye tumne hi to bola tha tumhe pencils bahut pasand hai isliye mene socha tumhe color pencils bahut pasand aayenge '' yug ye sunke bola '' ab mujhe kyun penicils pasand aayenge par tum laai ho to me mana kaise kar sakta hun '' itna bol kar yug ne wo pencils le li fir naina bhi apne room me chali hai,




kuch der baad naina apne room me homework kar rahi thi tabhi waha uske room me yug aagaya aur bola '' thanks naina pencil box lane ke liye mere liye '' ye sunke naina boli '' koi baat nahi , vaise apne try kia kuch draw karna ka '' ye sunke yug bola '' nahi me kuch draw nahi karta agar karta bhi hun to erase kar deta hun '' ye sunke naina boli '' thik hai agli baar kuch draw kare to mujhe dikha dena '' yug ne javab diya '' thik hai sochunga agar kuch aacha hua to dikhavunga '' yug room se bahar jane wala tha tabhi uski najar naina ke homeworkk pe padi aur wo bola '' ye ans tumne wrong likha hai yaha 46 ans aaye g '' ye sunke naina ne apne homework ko sahi dekha aur bola '' ha me bhi kitni duffer hun '' ye sunke yug bola '' koi baat nahi galti hoti vaise bhi me hun help karne ke iye '' ye sunke naina boli '' thanks '' itna sunke yug apne room me chala gaya.


Aese hi ab roj yug padhai karta saara din aese bhi usko ghar pe rehna tha par har roj saam ko uski mom usko que puchti par uska ans de nahi pata tha yug kyun ki usko kuch aata nahi tha par uski mom ko lagta tha ki wo padhai thik se nahi kar raha hai isliye usko roj dant padti thi, ab aese din nikal gaye ab uske school jane ka time aaya wo raste se ja raha tha par ek pool pe jake wo ruk gaya waha bahut teji se pani beh raha tha, wo dekh ke wo kisi soch me pada tha tabhi usko aavaj aati hai '' kya soch rahe ho itni der se '' ye sunke yug bola '' mere se baat mata karo us din bina kuch bole tum chale gaye '' samne se ladka bola '' ab me kya kar sakta hun jo mera kaam tha wo to mene kar diya tha '' ye sunke yug bola '' tum bhul gaye tumahre naam sahyug kyun hai '' samnse se aavaj aai '' nahi baba mujhe yaad hai me tumahra sath deta hun isiliye me sahyug hun '' ye sunke yug bola '' fir tum chale kyun jate ho sahi time '' sahyug samne se bola '' thik hai tum yahi chahte hona me hamesha tumahre sath rahu '' yug ne samne se javab diya '' ha '' samne se sahuyg bola '' thik hai abse tumahre sath hi rahunga bas kabhi kahi nahi javunga '' ye sunke yug muskurane laga


fir yug waha se school me gaya waha koi kuch use bola nahi break me usne nikul aur uske friends ko dur se dekha par wo bhi kuch nahi bole nikul ko ab tak yug ka wo smile karta hun chehra yaad hai jab usne pencil uske kandhe pe mara tha tabse wo thoda sa dar gaya tha.


fir aese hi din chale jane lage yug roj apne school jane laga aese wo 8th me aagaya ab wo dusre school gaya jaha uski mom teacher thi. us school me har week test hote the saturday ko or uska result har monday ko aata tha waha par yug ka kuch 2 months nikal gaye ek din saturday ko test tha par har baat ki tarah is baar bhi yug ke dimag ke sab upar ja raha tha, wo bas pen ko apne lips pe rakh ke khel raha tha kyun ki ab usse kuch ho nahi raha tha par tabhi uske muh se pen gir gai pen ko niche padi dekh kar yug ne sahyug ko bola '' wo pen ko baps lana '' itna sunke sahyog ne pen leli wo bapas yug ko dena wala tha tabhi sir ne bola '' bas 15 min bache hai jaldi jaldi likho sab '' itna sunte hi sahyog apne aap sab ans likhne laga, kuch min baad jab yug apna test dekha jisme sab ans likhe huve the fir wo sahyug ki aur ekhta hai bolta hai '' tumhe sab ans aate the to pehle kabhi bola kyun nahi '' sahyug bola '' ab tumne kabhi pucha nahi to mene kabhi kuch bola'' ye sunke yug ne kuch bola nahi bas itna hi bola ki dusre test me help kar dena jo is test ke turant baad tha aur sahyug ne aesa hi kia sabke ans de diye acche se ye dekh yug khush tha. school ke baad hi ghar gaya wo itni khushi thi aaj test ki vajah se, usko lag raha tha ki ghar pe sab khush honge fir wo monday ka wait karne laga, jab monday hua wo school gaya to sabke mark aaye waha yug ne top kiya tha khash kar second test me, sab student sock me the kisiko bharosha nahi ho raha tha khash kar teachers ko isiliye unko bahana mil gaya ki Miss puja (yug ki mom ) ne usko sayad pehle se hi test de diye honge isiliye wo itna accha kar paya kuch teachers jo puja se jalan thi wo sab ye bate banane lage jiska pata puja ko chal gaya unko bhi laga yug itna accha kar nahi sakta usne cheating ki hogi par uski cheating ki vajah se sabke samne unki izzat chali gai ye dekh unko bahut gussa aaya aur ye sara gussa sham ko yug pe nikal gaya usko bahut dant padi ye soch ke ki usne cheating ki hai. puja ne dant ke yug ko samjaya ki mene tumhe hamehsa acchee kaam karna sikhaya hai par tum cheating karne lage, shaam ko pradhan bhi aaye unko bhi ye sab sunke gussa aya kyun ke sath me unki izzat bhi jayegi jab log bate felane lagenge isiliye unhone bhi gusse me bol diya yug ko ki '' tera jaisa beta mera khun ho hi nahi sakta''. ye sab sunne ke baad yug ne us din ke baad kabhi bhi test me acche marks nahi laye aese hi uski 8 se 10 th ki padhai wahi pe chali fir 11th se usne school change karli.



YEAR 20** DR.ANAND KI CLASS


'' So ab mera que hai jaisa ki ayan ne bola tha jaruriyat khatam hone ke baad hi chahat puri karsakte hai aur jaisa ki sabko chahtah khushi ki hoti hai sab apni life me khush rehna chahte hai fir koi batayega aapko khushi kis chij me sabse jayda milti hai '' ye sunke kcuh baccho ne hath uthaya ek ne bola '' sir agar koi hame pyaar karne wala ho '' dusre ne bola '' sir paise ya respect se '' ek bola '' agar sir me is saal top karunga to ''


ye sab sunke anand bole '' jaisa mene bola jaha pe log hote hai waha apne aap hierarchy suru ho jati hai aur sabko hierarchy me upar jana hota hai jo upar hota hai wo uske niche wale ko dabata hai usko control karta hai niche wala uske niche wale ko dabata hai par hierarchy me upar jane ke liye bhi hame jarurat hoti hai jaise pyaar karne ke liye koi chij hona jisse ham pyaar kar sake ya koi hame, respect ke liye aesa kuch kaam karna jisse hame respect mille class top karne ke liye knowledge ya fir exam me acchi cheating karne ki skill ka hona jaruri hota hai.'' ye sab bolke anand ne sabki aur dekha par fir uska dhayan ayan pe gaya jo bench ke upar per rakh kar betha tha ye dekh ke anand bole '' ye ghar nahi class hai thoda sahi se betho baki sab students ko dekho kaise sahi bethe hai aesa karoge to hierarchy me upar kaise aavoge '' ye sunke ayan ko hasi aagai par fir usne bas ek chutki bajai baki sab students bhi uski tarah bench pe per rakh kar beth gaye fir ayan bola '' ab thik haina aur dusri baat hierarchy me upar jana aap jaiso ka kaam hai me to khud hi bhagwan hun mujhe kya jarurat ''


ye dekh dr anad ko gussa aagaya wo kuch bolne wala the tabhi rahul jo dr.anand ke paas intern hai wo kabse sari baat sun raha tha class ke piche khade khade wo bhaag ke aaya dr anand ke paas aur unko phone de dia ye bolke ke koi argent call hai baat karne ke baad dr anand bich class me hi waha se nikal gaye. ye call hospital se tha koi inspector panday ka aur unhone kuch bate batai wo sunke bhaag ke hospital gaye waha wo panday se mile aur pucha konsa room to panday ne room ki taraf isara kar diya.


waha room me dr.ananad gaye to waha bed par yug betha tha uske hath pencil thi wo dr ananad ko dekh ke bola '' me ab is pencil se nahi darta mera phobia chala gaya'' ye sunte hi dr.anand ke chehre pe sock ke bhaav aagaye aur wo bole '' kya kiya tumne '' iske javab me yug haste huve bola '' i killed them ''





PAST, YEAR-20**


Ab yug ka 11th std suru ho gaya tha jab wo pehle din school gaya class me jate usko ek ladki dikhi jiska naam tha priyanshi uski khubsurti dekh ke hi uska dil dhadak ne laga usko pehli najar me attraction ho gaya tha , ab roj wo priyanshi ki taraf class me dekhta rehta tha par uski himmat kabhi hoti nahi thi waha priyanshi ne bhi notice kiya tha usko dkehte huve jo uske liye koi nai baat nahi thi par usko yug jaise bhondu darpok ladke pasand nahi the. waha yug ne ek din ghar pe naina ko priyanshi ke bare me bataya par wo gussa ho gai aur boli ke usko ladkion se jayda padhai pe dhayan dena chahiye.


but yug se raha nahi ja raha tha wo ek baar naina ko akele dekh ke baat karne chala gaya par jaisa usne socha aesa hua nahi priyanshi ne usko bahut suna di usko upar se stupid bol diya bola tum darpko ho upar se padhai me bhi acche nahi ho tumahre andar ek bhi acchi quelity nahi jisse ladki tumhe pasnad kare fir me kaise kar sakti hun. ye sab sunke yug ko bura laga, waha priyanshi ne apne kuch friends ko bhi ye bate bata di ki yug ne usko propose kiya tha sabne milke majak udaya yug ka, waha yug ko kuch samaj nahi aaraha tha wo kya kare. yug jis school me tha wo private thi school thi yaha bhi har 2 din me test liye jate the. ek din aesa hi test chal raha tha par yug ka kuch mann nahi tha par tabhi usko dhayan aaya is school me uski mom nahi hai yaha to wo sahyug ki help le sakt ahai isliye usne sahyug ki taraf dekh ke que ka ans pucha jo jo sahyug ko aata tha wo sab usne ans de diye. agle din jab yug school me aaya tab uske kuch 80 marks aaye the test me par-roj uske 40 ke aas paas aate the ye dekh ke sab sock ho gaye the ki ye itne acche marks kaise laya par baat fel gai ki usne priyanshi ki vajah se marks acche laye hai ye baat priyanshi ke friends ne fela di thi, waha yug ne ghar pe ksiiko marks ke bare me bataya nahi tha. fir agle test me firse yug 85 laya ab in sabse khush priyanshi ho rahi thi kyun ki sara credit yug ka usko mil raha tha wo to pehle se acche marks lati thi usko aese bhi motapa karne me accha lagta tha aesa hone se usko aur maja aane laga.

fir yug ne marks ka sab naina ko bata diya wo ye sab sunke khush huvi usne bola '' aaj me bahut khush bhiaya ab roj aese marks lana '' ye baate sunke yug bhi khush tha par ab agle din maths ka test tha upar se teacher hamehsa maths ka test hard rakhte the jisse bacche bahut pareshan the yug abhi sone ko chala gaya jo hoga dekha jayega agle din.


agle din jab yug utha wo direct school me gaya waha kuch bacche notice bord dekh rahe the par aaj to koi test ka result tha to sab kya dekh rahe hai ye soch ke wo notice board par dekhne gaya waha sab bacche usko hi dekh rahe the jab usne notice board dekha to waha maths ke mark likhe huve the sabke aur sabse upar yug ka naam tha 100-marks ke sath ye dekh ke hi wo sock ho gaya usko kuch samaj me nahi aya ye sab kya ho raha hai. par tabhi uske taraf priyashi ne dekha aur usko smile dedi wo smile dekh kar yug sab bhul gaya, fir aese hi din jane lage dhire dhire yug ki ab priyanshi ke sath accchi banne lagi thi dono class me bate karte fir number bhi exchange kar diya par abhi tak friends ki tarah hi baat karte the priyanshi abhi bate aage nahi badana chahti thi yug ne sab kiya tha par usko alag type ke ladke pasand the. fir ek din priyanshi ke sab friends baat kar rahe the usme yug ki baat nikli sath me ek ladke ne bataya ki uski usko naina bahut pasand hai aur dono sath me hi ek school me padhte hai, usne bola tu meri help kar de aese bhi yug tere sab bate manenge pls mera itna kaam karde, ab piryanshi ko bhi dikhana tha ki uska yug pe control hai aur wo uske friend ki help karke thoda badapa karna chahti thi.


ek din theater me movie dekhne ke liye pucha yug ko yug ye sunke khush ho gaya par priyanshi ne bola uske sab friends bhi aarahe hai so tum bhi naina ko leke ana yug ne bhi hami bhar di, waha ghar pe naina ko bataya yug ne movie ke liye to wo bhi khush ho gai. fir wo sab sunday ko mile theater me abhi prayanshi ke sath uski friend thi sath me uska boyfriend amit fir uska dost jisko naina pasand thi wo harsh, sab log movie dekhne ke baad bahar coffee pine. waha yug jyada bol nahi raha tha bas chupchap thodi thodi hi hello jaisi bate kar raha tha. fir sab coffee pike bahar nikal rahe the tabhi naina ke mun se aahhhh nikli ye sunke yug ne piche dekha waha naina ke baju ke do chaar ladke khade the fir usne naina ki taraf dekha aur bola '' kya hua '' naina darte huve boli '' kisine piche se touch kiya '' ye sunke harsh and amit waha ladko ke paas gaye amit ne bola '' aese kisi ko touch karna sahi nahi hai tumahri himmat kaise huvi '' samne se ladka bola '' jyada ucchal mat kya proof hai hamne usko touch kiya '' harsh bhi ab aagaya bato me aur bola '' salo yaha jyada bano mat hame pata hai tum hi yaha pe khade ho '' waha ab jhagda hone laga priyanshi aur uski dost harsh and amit ko rok rahe the jyada jhagda aage na bade isliye. ye sab chal raha tha ke tabhi samne wale ladke ke muh me coffe cup aake laga uske jisse uske honth fatt gaye aur khun nikalne laga wha sab sock ho gaye par tabhu yug aake ek ladke ko mukke se marne laga aur bola '' usko touch kaise kiya tune maderchod '' wo ladka chillata hua bola '' me nahi tha '' ye sunke yug khada hua ab sabki fatti padi thi samne do ladko ko dekh ke yug bola '' tum dono me se kon maderchod tha '' dono kuch bole usse pehle hi yug ne ek ko jor se kick marke giradiya ye sab ek jatke me hua tha sab ye sab dekh ke sab sock me tha ab amit piiche ayaa yug ko rokne ke liye jaise usne kandhe pe hath rakha yug ne piche ghum ke dekha aur gusse se amit ko bola '' hath hata bsdk '' ab yug ka chehra dekh ke amit ki bhi fatt gai par tabhi naina aai aur bola '' rukja yash pls yash rukja tujhe meri kasam '' ye sunte hi yug thoda sant hua usne naina ka hath pakda aur waha se leke chale gaya, waha piche sab bas aese hi khade rahe ab harsh ki gand fatt gai usne socha tha naina ke sath relation ka par ab uski gand fatt rahi thi yug ka ye roop dekh kar.


waha subah yug ne aankhe kholi usne dekha, wo naina ke room me uske bed pe tha usko kuch samaj nahi aya thodi der baad naina bhi aagai yug ne pucha kya hua to naina ne bola '' kuch nahi raat ko tum thak gaye to yaha sone ki jid rahe the fit kya yahi pe so gaye '' ab aesa yug ke sath har hafte hone laga tha usko kuch yaad nahi rah raha tha ab yug bhi sab samaj gaya tha ki ye sab wo nahi kar raha hai usne baju me dekha waha pe sahyug bhi tha jo uski taraf hi dekh raha. fir yug ne mobile hath me liya waha bahut sare msg the priyanshi ke pehle sorry ka msg tha fir bahut sare hiiii ka tha upar se 25 miss calls the aur last me tha '' kyun ans bhi nahi de rahe pls kuch to bolo'' fir uske baad tha '' dont you love me anymore '' ye sab dekh ke confuse tha yug, fir wo school gaya waha to priyanshi aate hi uska hath pakad ke alag le gai fir thodi der uski taraf dekha aur yug ko gale laga liya aur boli '' abhi tak gussa ho '' ab yug ke maje the aur aese hi dono ne apna relationship suru kiya fir 11th khatam hua waha yug ne top kiya to ghar wale sab heran the fir uske papa ne party rakhi uske liye sath me naina and uski family wale bhi aaye the.


waha ek aadmi bola '' waah pradhan ji kya marks laye hau apake bete '' ye sunke pradhan khush hote huve yug ke khandhe pe hath rakhte huve bole '' aakhir beta kiska hai ab sab to top nahi kar sakte haina class me '' ab yug ko sabka pyaar aur izzat milne lagi thi par ab ek hi uski problem thi wo thi pencils kyun ke wo kitni bhi pencils apne room ke ahar fek de par fir bhi uske room me pecils bapas aajati thi dhire dhire usko isse irritation hone lagi par wo kuch karna nahi chahta tha aur kisiko bata bhi nahi raha tha. aese time chalne laga fir kuch time baad usne pehle fir priyanshi ke sath sex kiya tha fir aese hi dono ka chalta raha ab har week sex ki bhukh hoti thi dono ko, kuch time baad dono ki collage suru ho gai and 3rd year me family ke presure me aake dono ne shaadi kar li kyun ke dono bahut salo se sath the aur sabko pata bhi chal gaya tha sab bate bhi banane lage the dono ki to shaadi karni padi par uske baad bhi yug ki life sahi ja rahi thi par ek chij ne uski life change kardi




YEAR-20**-HOSPITAL




waha dr.ananad kuch der yug se baat karne ke baad room se bahar aaye bahar police ko unhone kuch bate batai pehli uske pencils ke phobia ke bare me aur dusri uske dissociative personality discoder ke bare me , ye sab sunke police sab sock me the par ye case abhi accident ka tha kyun ke yug ko yaha hosptial me laya gaya tha. waha panday ne pratik ko pucha jo '' sir aapko kya lagta hai aese bhi ye accident tha uske bimari se kuch lena dena nahi lagta'' pratik ne bola '' baat to sahi hai par mujhe kuch to gadbad lag rahi hai jish tarah accident hua hai us hisab se kuch bate pach nahi rahi upar se wo ladki ko bhi jyada kuch chot nahi aai hai. panday bola '' fir sir ab kya kare ab ye case ab pechida hota ja raha hai , aap samaj rahe haina '' ye sunke pratik bola '' ha me samaj raha hun aur ye bhi ki us bacche se tumhe pyaar bahut hai, ab na chahte huve bhi khena pad raha hai call karde us bakchod ko '' ye sunke panday happy happy ho gaya aur usne call laga dia.


waha kuch der baad dr.ananad bapas aaye aur pratik ko dekh kar bole '' mujhe din baad abroad jana hai ab usi sab me busy me sayad aapki jyada help na kar pavu par ye rahul hai mera intern kuch jaurat ho isse puchna yug ke disoder ke bare me bhi aapko kuch janna hai to isse puch lena '' ye sunke pratik bola '' thank you aur vaise bhi hamne hamare counselling ke liye kisiko bulaya hai '' ye sunke anand bole '' kyun '' pratik bola '' ji mujhe lag raha hai sayad ye accident ki jagah murder na ho isliye'' ye sunke anand sock me tha par tabhi panday bola '' lo aagaya ab thodi der me pura case solve hoga ''


anand ne samne ki taraf dekha to dekhte hi rah gaye kyun ke samne ayan aaraha tha wo unke paas aake bola '' kyun sir aap yaha bahut jaldi mulakat ho gai '' ayan ko dekh kar panday ki taraf dekh kar ananad bole '' ye '' ye sunke panday bole '' yahi to hai hamare mastermind bas dekhte rahiye aap bhi jaan jayenge '' ye sunke ayan bola '' are panday ji aap to sarminda kar rahe hai itna bhi hamari tarif mat kijiiye '' anand aur rahul ke liye baat unke pare thi dono kuch jayda bole nahi.


ayan ne pucha '' panday ji ab boliye aur puri detail dijiye accident ki '' panday -' ji 4 logo ka hua tha 1 ki death ho gai hai unka naam pradhan hai dusre ka naam puja hai wo bhi apni aakhri sannse gin rahi hai, fir driver jiska naam yug hai wo abhi sahi salamat hai fir ladki hai naina naam ki wo bhi sahi salamat hai'' ayan ne pucha '' thik hai ab thoda driver ke bare me batavo'' panday bola '' abhi jo hame pata laga hai ki unko DID hai aur pehle pencils se phobia bhi tha '' ye sunke ayan bola '' intresting '' fir aayan ne pucha '' aur koi family me tha kya '' panday ne bola '' ji pehle uski wife thi par dono ka divorce ho gaya tha '' ayan bola '' thik hai kyun hua divorce uski sari detail chahiye aur sabse badi chij trigger ko search karna padega '' ye sunke rahul bola '' konsa trigger'' ayan bola '' jaisa dr.anand ne bola tha ham ek jundh ki tarah chalte hai khudko bachne ke liye par wo batana bhul gaye ki isi-jundh me hame shikar khudh jundh ka karna hota hi ''



fir ayan waha se nikal gaya agli subah aaya waha panday ne bataya divorce priyanshi ke cheating karne par hua tha aur jis ladke rishav ke sath kiya tha uski bhi death goa me ho gai thi. ayan ne bola '' chalo ek aur naam jud ab uski wife se milna padega ek baar '' fir ayan priyanshi se mila waha kuch saval kiye fir aakhhir me pucha '' tum rishav ke sath kitni baar inimate huvi thi '' prayanshi boli '' ek bhi baar nahi bas ham kiss se aage nahi bade kabhi ham kuch kar pate usse pehle hi usi death ho gai thi''


ye baat sunke ayan ke chehre pe smile aagai fir kaha '' rishav ko janne wale sabko yug ki photo dikahvo aur pucho koi usse janta hai '' kuch ghante baad rishav ke ek friend ne bataya ke usne in dono ko sath me dekha tha ek kuch paiso ki baat kar rahe the aur date ke hisab se wo priyanshi se mila usse pehle hi yug semila tha, ye sunke priyanshi sock ho gai jo pure din se yahi pe thi usko kuch samaj nahi aarah tha tabhi ayan bola '' iska matalab yahi hai ki usne jaan buj ke rishav ko tumhe fasane ko bola ''

rahul -aese kyun

ayan - kyun ki jaise gun ka trigger tabane se pehle khud ki safety rakhte hai isi tarah isne bhi jo usko pyara tha usko dur kar diya safe rahne ke liye par rishav ne hadd paar karne ki sochi to usko maar diya par ek baat aur bhi hai iska matlab ye bhi hua ki uske hath pehle se trigger aagaya tha bas pata karna hai wo kya hai'' waha piche priyanshi roti rahi

waha ayan ko idea aaya wo jake puja se mila jo thoda thoda hos me thi usko ayan ne kuch bate batai jisse uski anakho se aansu aane lage thodi der baad, naina se puja ko milaya kyun ke ab puja aakhri sanse gin rahi thi fir last me yug se mili waha puja ne yug ki taraf dekha jiske chehre pe smile thi, wo dekh ke puja ke aankh se aur aansu nikal gaye bas itna hi boli - sorry beta mene tumahra hamesha accha hi chaha hia, i always love you

ye sunke yug ki muskan chali gai, waha ek camera se sab ayan dekh raha tha ki ye kya baat kar rahe hai, ab yug panic hone laga puja ki bate sunke uska dimag kharab hone laga.

ayan ne itni der me yug aur naina ke room me ek microphone lagaya hua tha aur wo apni bike apni hostel ki taraf ja raha tha par dono ki bate sunke achanak usne bike break lagai aur speed me bike hospital ki taraf bhagadi.

waha yug abhi hospital bhaag gaya tha abhi wo ek pool ke upar khada tha aur wo pal soch raha tha jab uski life change ho gai wo sochke usne pool jump lagadi.

past-20**



yug ab roj roj kuch na kuch bhul jata tha jaise ab uski body pe kisi aur ne kabja kar liya tha jab bhi wo hosh me aata tha tab wo kahi aur hi jagah hota tha ek din wo hosh me aya tab wo sex kar raha tha wo ladki boli - kya kar rahe ho jaan thoda dhire se karo
par abhi yug ki anakhe fati ki fati reh gai thi kyun ki abhi wo jisse sex kar raha aur jo uske niche nangi leti thi wo naina thi, uska dimag kaam karna band ho gaya tha wo turant toilate me bhaga usko ulti hone lagi aur thodi der baad behosh ho gaya par agli baar jab hosh me aaya tab wo naina ke room me tha sath me usne kapde bhi pehne huve the usko kuch samaj nahi aaya usne baju me dekha to drawer par ek pencil padi huvi thi aur tabse wo sabmaj gaya upar se usko phobia bhi ho gaya.

ab uski dunia ujad gai thi jo usse sabse jyada pyaar karti thi wo sayad usko nahi uske anad dusre ko pyaar karti hai yahi soch ne yug ki life change kardi bachapan se hi uska sath sirf naina hi deti thi, par ab sab change ho gaya tha par uska dimag trigger tab hua jab naina ne uske bday pe usko pencil gift ki wo bhi uskeupar naina naam likha tha. fir usko raat ko sapne me jo aaj tak wo sab sambal ke rakha tha jaise usko bachapan me maar padna sab bapas aagaya wo so nahi pa raha tha itne saaal sabkuch naina ki vajah se uski life chal rahi thi par ab wo khatam ho gaya tha uske dimag me ajib ajib khayal aane lage tab wo dr. anand se pehli baar mila tha. ab yug pe bhoot savar tha usne jaise taise kuch mahine nikale par wo reh nahi saka ab pura din usko apne purane din yaad aate aur uske sath gussa



YEAR-20**

ab pool par sab police aachuki thi aur sab body search kar rahe the par kisko kuch mil nahi raha tha upar se bahav bahut jyada tha, waha kuch der me ayan bhi aagaya usne panday ko bataya ki usko trigger mil gaya, aur panday ke puchne pe wo bola ki yug ki 2 nahi par 3 personality thi fir ayan ne yug aur naina ki recording sunai

yug - pls naina bas ek baar bol do tum us pencil se jyada mujse pyaar karti ho, mene hamesha tumhe bas pani bahan ki tarah hi deha hai uar sabse jyada pyaar bhi mene tumhe hi kiya hai

naina - uska naam pencil nahi yash hai mene bachapan se sirf usko hi pyaar kiya hai aur usne mujse

yug ne socha nahi tha ki naina ko pata hoga upar se aaj usko pata chala ki uska naam yash hai ye sunke wo kuch der baad hospital se bhaag gaya,

waha ayan ne pool par panday se kaha '' bas panday ji ab saval ye hai ki ye suicide hai ya murder ya fir dono '' fir ayan ne pool par ek pencil padi dekhi aur haske bola '' ya fir ye penicil maderchod mastermind hai ''
Pure dimag ko ghuma dene wali thi. Yug ke andar total 3 personality thi. Ek woh khud dusra sahyug aur teesra Yash. Aur maze ki baat Yug ko sirf Sahyug ke baare mein pata tha.

Puri story mein bahot kuch aisa tha jisse dimaag hi ghumm gaya tha. Sach mein story bahot achhi lagi. Padh ke maza aaya. Dusri story ka intezaar rahegaa.
 

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What a treat :bow: I think this is one of the best scifi short stories I have read in a while. There are a lot of great aspects of this story but what I feel made this one stand out was the style of depicting the details in conversation style (I think it's Harshit's signature) and keeping us on the edge throughout. From the very first line I was searching for what is the twist and Oh boy! What a thought provoking piece of literature it was. I hope am not exaggerating even a bit by stating that THIS one is the best so far :applause:

My heartiest congratulations Sir for such a creation :shakehands:
 
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*moslow's Hierarchy of Needs*

year 20**





ek school me aaj 12 class ka special lecture tha jisme dr.anand ko bulaya gaya tha jo one of the best psychiatric mane jate hai , unhone class me aane ke kuch der baad ek smile ke sath lecture suru kia '' jarurat sabko hoti hai kisina kisi chij ki aur uske upar hi hamari dunia chalti hai, jaise ham insano ko sans lene ki , khane ki ya sone ki jarurat hoti hai, par ye sab physiological jarurate hai. par kya koi bata sakta hai uske alava hame sabse jayda kisiki jarurat hoti hai '' ab itna bol kar itna kehkar dr.anand thoda aage aagaye students ke paas unka ans sunne ke liye.


sab soch rahe the tabhi ek ladki ne apna hath upar kiya anand ne usko ans dena ka isara kiya , fir wo ladki boli '' i think sir hame sabse jayda happiness ki jarurat hoti hai, i means kon nahi chahega wo hamesha khush rahe '' ye ans sunne ke baad anand ne muskurate huve chehre ke sath bola '' beta tumahri baat to sahi hai par ans galat hai '' firse anand ne sab baccho ki taraf deka aur pucha '' koi bata sakta ye ans me galti kya thi '' ye sunte sab bacche sochne lage tabhi ek ladka bola,





past, year-20**


7th standard ki class me ek baccha apni pencil ko black se sharp karne me laga tha wo apne me khoya hua tha tabhi ek jatak se tapli uske sar ke piche padti hai, jisse wo baccha pura darr jata hai uska dimag panic mode me chala jata hai, tabhi jis ladke ne usko mara tha usne bola '' chal nikul bhai ne tujhe bulaya hai'' wo baccha thoda apne aap ko control karte huve bola '' kon nikul or mujjse kya kaam hai ''

itna sunte hi dusre ladke ne firse apna hath uppar kiya jisse dusra baccha darke piche ho gaya , dekh ke dusra baccha haste huve bola '' darpok sale, ab chup chap chalega ya ek aur dun '' us bechare ladke ne class me dekha sabki aur par koi uski help ke liye nahi tha balki uske piche wale ladke usko dekh ke has rahe the, ab wo dara hua tha and kuch kar sakta nahi tha isliye wo darte huve us ladke ke piche chalne laga. thodi der baad wo ladka kuch ladko ke paas jake bola '' ye lo bhai aagaya aapka murga ''


in sab lakdo ke bich me ek ladka tha jiska naam nikul ka tha usne isara karke us ladke ko apne paas bulaya fir uska collar pakda aur bola '' kyun be chuje yug naam haina tera, suna hai tera baap ke paas bahut paise hai '' itna sunte hi wo baccha dar gaya aur darte darte bola '' haan mera naam yu...gg hi hai par mere pass pai..se nahi hai'' ye baat sunke nikul aur gussa ho gaya '' juth bolta hia paise nahi hai..'' itna bolke nikul ko aur paas khich ke uske jeb me hath dala usne kuch chije bahar nikali wo sab choti choti pencils thi ye dekh ke confuse ho gaya fir gusse hote huve wo bola '' ye sab kya hai itni sari pencils kyun rakhi hai '' ye dekh ke yug darte huve bola '' pata nahi mene nahi rakhi '' ye sunke nikul bola '' kya matlab pata nahi koi bhoot aake rakh ke gaya kya agar ye teri nahi hai to kiski hogi '' ye sunte hi ek ladka bola '' bhai iski nahi hai to fir to isne chori ki hogi '' ye sunke nikul ne ek thappad yug ko marte huve bola '' sale itna paisa hoke chori karta hai, bure kaam karega sale '' itna bol kar usne ek ladke ke samne dekh ke bola '' oye mote tere bag me se wo steel ki scale lana aaj isko sutharna padega'' itna sunke ab yug bahut dar gaya uski dhadkan dhak dhak ho rahi thi tabhi usko aavaj aai '' tere hath me pencil to hai fir inse kya darna ek baar mardo fir tumhe koi bully nahi karega aur ye pain chala jayega ''




year-20**


dr anand ke que ka ans dete huve ek ladka bola '' happiness chahat hoti hai jaurat nahi aur chahat ke liye pehle jarurat ko pura karna padta hai '' ye sunte hi dr.anand ne us ladke ki aur dekha aur bole '' kya naam hai tumahra '' wo ladke ne ans diya '' Ayan....Ayan dixit '' ye sunne ke baad anand bole '' so ayan baat tumahri sahi thi par agli baar ans dene se pehe hath upar kar lena '' ye sunne ke baad ladka has kar bola '' kyun, jaha tak mujhe yaad hai aapne to aesa koi rule banaya nahi tha class me aane ke baad '' dr. anand kuch kehne wale the tabhi ek dusre ladke ne hath uthaya, ye dekhte huve dr.anand ne us ladke ko ans dene ke liye bola us ladke ne pehle que ans diya '' sir mujhe lagta hai hame sabse jyada jarurat safety ki hoti hai'' ye sunke dr. anand ke chehre pe muskan aagai aur wo bole '' sahi kaha beta tumne , so hame sabse jyada need hoti hai safety aur hajaro salo ke evolution me hamara dimag ek chij sabse acche se sikha hai wo hai survival ''




PAST, YEAR- 20**



''ab bhi kya soch rahe ho agar tumse nahi ho raha to mere hath me pencil do '' itna bol kar us ladkne ne apna hath aage kar diya ye dekh yug soch me pada tabhi nikul bola '' abe mote kitni der lagegi jaldi lana scale '' itna bol kar nikul ne yug ki taraf dekha wo dara hua tha fir yug ne apna hath aage kiya jisme pencil thi aur wo bola '' ye lo '' ye dekh ke nikul thoda confuse sa dikha par uske baad dekha uski vajah se usko thoda darr mehsus hua par kuch samaj pata usse pehle uske kandhe me pencil ghush gai. ye dekh sab ladko ki fatt gai kisiko kuch samaj nahi aaraha tha waha nikul ki chikhe nikal rahi thi sath me uske hantho me khun bhara pada tha.



NEXT DAY, PRINCIPAL OFFICE


principal roy '' dekhye pradhan ji aapka beta hai is baar jane de rahe hai nahi to jo inse harkat ki hai us hisab se koi or hota to school se me suspend kar deta '' pradhan ne ye baat suni fir aur gusse me yug ki taraf dekh ke uska kaan marod diya, jisse yug ki aahhhh nikal gai aur pradhan bole '' suna tune, ek to pehle se padhai me sabse piche hai ab upar se ladai bhi karne laga '' yug thoda aah aah karte huve bola '' nahi papa mene kuch nahi kiay meri galti nahi hai '' itna sun kar pradhan aur gussa hoke bole '' jagde sath ab juth bhi bolne laga '' itna bol kar aur jor se kaan marod diya , ye dekh pramod nikul ki taraf dekh ke bole '' pradhan ji usko chod dijiye galti to hamare nalayak bacche ki hi hogi, yahi hamesha kuch na kuch jagde karta rehta hai. upar se hai bhi bacche ab kya kar sakte hai'' itna bol kar pramod nikul ki taraf gaye aur bole '' chal mafi mang isne '' itna sunkar nikul thoda rote huve chehre ke sath bola '' sorry uncle meri hi galti thi abse aesa nahi karunga '' ye dekh pradhan thode sant huve aur aese bhi wo jaldi se matter solve karna cahhate the, par tabhi office me ek aadmi aaya apne bacche ke sath ye baccha karna tha jisko nikul kal mota mota bol raha tha.


karan ke sath us aadmi ko dekh kar principal bhi khade ho gaye waha pradhan and pramod bhi ke sath khade ho gye ye aadmi dhiraj tha karan ke papa and yaha ke mla ke bhai upar se unka bhi accha khasa naam aur paisa tha , karan bhi nikul ki gang me rehta tha kyun ke unke sath hote huve usko koi bully nahi kar sakta tha . inko dekh kar principal bole '' are dhiraj ji aapka yaha kya aana hua '' dhiraj gusse me bole '' kya matlab kya aana huva ye mera baccha darr ke mare puri raat so nahi paya . abhi bhi dekhiye kaisa dara huva hai '' ye dekh prinicipal bole '' ha dhiraj ji me bhi abhi yahi discuss kar raha tha, yahi do baccho ka jagda hua tha '' prinicipal ne yug and nikul ki taraf dekh ke kaha . dhiraj ne dono ki taraf dekha nikul ke hath patti dekh ke samaj gaya ke marne wala yug hi hoga isliye usko dekh ke dhiraj bole '' kyun be dikhne me to ittu sa kaha aai tere me itni charbi'' ye dekh prahdhan aage aake bole '' maaf kar dijiye sir abhi baccha hai galti ho gai, ab ky bolu pehle to padhai me zero tha ab to ye sab bhi suru kar diya ''


itna sunke dhiraj bole '' baccha hua to kya hua sambhal kar nahi rakh sakte ya sirf ladai jhagda karna hi sikahaya hai aur vaise bhi ab maaf karna mere hath me nahi hai joy prinicipal sir ko sahi lagega wo punishment deknge '' . ye sunke prinicipal roy bole '' wo pradhan ji and pramod ji dono ki sahmati se mene case ko rafadafa karne ka socha hai. pramod ji bhi nahi chahte ki ye case aage bade '' ye sunke dhiraj bole '' ha to kya pramod ko jo karna hai kare mujhe kya mera beta so nahi paya uska kya '' . ye sun principal bole '' fir aesa karte hai 15 din ke liye dono ladko ko suspend kar dete hai, ye thik rahega na '' . prinicipal ne pramod and pradhan ki taraf dekh ke bole, un dono ne hami bhar di aur aese hi dono ko suspend kar diya gaya.




YEAR_20** DR.ANAND-LECTURE


dr anand abhi apni baat kar rahe the '' jaisa ke mene bola survival aur safety haamre liye bahut jaruri hai, jaise har kisi animals ke liye hoti hai, par ab ye safety hame do tarah se milti hai ya to ham khud apne ko aap ko safe rakhe ya hame koi safe rakhe jaise border par koi army ya police. par usse bhi alag ek chij hai wo hai ekta jaise animals jundh me rehte hai vaise ham bhi rehte hai koi caste ke naam pe koi religion ke naam ya fir country ke naam pe or in sabko milega ek chij aati hai wo hai socity ya bole hamare desh ke liye samaj, jaise animals kindoms ke kuch rules hai vaise hi hamare samaj ke rules hote hai aur samaj me relatable hone ke liye sabko hi wo rules follow karne padte hai. bas is survival ke topic pe ek last baat bolunga jaisa wo hai Hierarchy ke upar par usse pehle ek que puchununga '' itna bolke anand sab baccho ki taraf dekha




PAST, YEAR-20**


Ab pradhan, yug ko leke ghar aagya tha usko ghar aake thodi bahut maar padi sath me bahut data bhi gaya khash kar uski mom ke dvara jo ek high school teacher thi aur chahti thi ke unke bacche topper ho aur bada hoke unka nam roshan kare.

Ab yug apne room me beth kar padhai kar raha tha par sab uske sar ke upar ja raha tha usko kuch bhi samaj nahi aaraha tha. tabhi yug ki sister naina uske room me aai wo padhai me acchi thi, usne aake thodi der yug se baat ki aur yug ko bhi usse baat karke accha lagta tha jaise ghar me koi tha jo uska sath deta tha dono ne thodi der masti ki fir naina ne yug ko color pencils ka ek pack gift kiya ye dekh yug bola '' ye kya hai aur mujhe kyun de rahe the'' ye sunke boli '' kyun bhaiya itna jaldi bhul gaye tumne hi to bola tha tumhe pencils bahut pasand hai isliye mene socha tumhe color pencils bahut pasand aayenge '' yug ye sunke bola '' ab mujhe kyun penicils pasand aayenge par tum laai ho to me mana kaise kar sakta hun '' itna bol kar yug ne wo pencils le li fir naina bhi apne room me chali hai,




kuch der baad naina apne room me homework kar rahi thi tabhi waha uske room me yug aagaya aur bola '' thanks naina pencil box lane ke liye mere liye '' ye sunke naina boli '' koi baat nahi , vaise apne try kia kuch draw karna ka '' ye sunke yug bola '' nahi me kuch draw nahi karta agar karta bhi hun to erase kar deta hun '' ye sunke naina boli '' thik hai agli baar kuch draw kare to mujhe dikha dena '' yug ne javab diya '' thik hai sochunga agar kuch aacha hua to dikhavunga '' yug room se bahar jane wala tha tabhi uski najar naina ke homeworkk pe padi aur wo bola '' ye ans tumne wrong likha hai yaha 46 ans aaye g '' ye sunke naina ne apne homework ko sahi dekha aur bola '' ha me bhi kitni duffer hun '' ye sunke yug bola '' koi baat nahi galti hoti vaise bhi me hun help karne ke iye '' ye sunke naina boli '' thanks '' itna sunke yug apne room me chala gaya.


Aese hi ab roj yug padhai karta saara din aese bhi usko ghar pe rehna tha par har roj saam ko uski mom usko que puchti par uska ans de nahi pata tha yug kyun ki usko kuch aata nahi tha par uski mom ko lagta tha ki wo padhai thik se nahi kar raha hai isliye usko roj dant padti thi, ab aese din nikal gaye ab uske school jane ka time aaya wo raste se ja raha tha par ek pool pe jake wo ruk gaya waha bahut teji se pani beh raha tha, wo dekh ke wo kisi soch me pada tha tabhi usko aavaj aati hai '' kya soch rahe ho itni der se '' ye sunke yug bola '' mere se baat mata karo us din bina kuch bole tum chale gaye '' samne se ladka bola '' ab me kya kar sakta hun jo mera kaam tha wo to mene kar diya tha '' ye sunke yug bola '' tum bhul gaye tumahre naam sahyug kyun hai '' samnse se aavaj aai '' nahi baba mujhe yaad hai me tumahra sath deta hun isiliye me sahyug hun '' ye sunke yug bola '' fir tum chale kyun jate ho sahi time '' sahyug samne se bola '' thik hai tum yahi chahte hona me hamesha tumahre sath rahu '' yug ne samne se javab diya '' ha '' samne se sahuyg bola '' thik hai abse tumahre sath hi rahunga bas kabhi kahi nahi javunga '' ye sunke yug muskurane laga


fir yug waha se school me gaya waha koi kuch use bola nahi break me usne nikul aur uske friends ko dur se dekha par wo bhi kuch nahi bole nikul ko ab tak yug ka wo smile karta hun chehra yaad hai jab usne pencil uske kandhe pe mara tha tabse wo thoda sa dar gaya tha.


fir aese hi din chale jane lage yug roj apne school jane laga aese wo 8th me aagaya ab wo dusre school gaya jaha uski mom teacher thi. us school me har week test hote the saturday ko or uska result har monday ko aata tha waha par yug ka kuch 2 months nikal gaye ek din saturday ko test tha par har baat ki tarah is baar bhi yug ke dimag ke sab upar ja raha tha, wo bas pen ko apne lips pe rakh ke khel raha tha kyun ki ab usse kuch ho nahi raha tha par tabhi uske muh se pen gir gai pen ko niche padi dekh kar yug ne sahyug ko bola '' wo pen ko baps lana '' itna sunke sahyog ne pen leli wo bapas yug ko dena wala tha tabhi sir ne bola '' bas 15 min bache hai jaldi jaldi likho sab '' itna sunte hi sahyog apne aap sab ans likhne laga, kuch min baad jab yug apna test dekha jisme sab ans likhe huve the fir wo sahyug ki aur ekhta hai bolta hai '' tumhe sab ans aate the to pehle kabhi bola kyun nahi '' sahyug bola '' ab tumne kabhi pucha nahi to mene kabhi kuch bola'' ye sunke yug ne kuch bola nahi bas itna hi bola ki dusre test me help kar dena jo is test ke turant baad tha aur sahyug ne aesa hi kia sabke ans de diye acche se ye dekh yug khush tha. school ke baad hi ghar gaya wo itni khushi thi aaj test ki vajah se, usko lag raha tha ki ghar pe sab khush honge fir wo monday ka wait karne laga, jab monday hua wo school gaya to sabke mark aaye waha yug ne top kiya tha khash kar second test me, sab student sock me the kisiko bharosha nahi ho raha tha khash kar teachers ko isiliye unko bahana mil gaya ki Miss puja (yug ki mom ) ne usko sayad pehle se hi test de diye honge isiliye wo itna accha kar paya kuch teachers jo puja se jalan thi wo sab ye bate banane lage jiska pata puja ko chal gaya unko bhi laga yug itna accha kar nahi sakta usne cheating ki hogi par uski cheating ki vajah se sabke samne unki izzat chali gai ye dekh unko bahut gussa aaya aur ye sara gussa sham ko yug pe nikal gaya usko bahut dant padi ye soch ke ki usne cheating ki hai. puja ne dant ke yug ko samjaya ki mene tumhe hamehsa acchee kaam karna sikhaya hai par tum cheating karne lage, shaam ko pradhan bhi aaye unko bhi ye sab sunke gussa aya kyun ke sath me unki izzat bhi jayegi jab log bate felane lagenge isiliye unhone bhi gusse me bol diya yug ko ki '' tera jaisa beta mera khun ho hi nahi sakta''. ye sab sunne ke baad yug ne us din ke baad kabhi bhi test me acche marks nahi laye aese hi uski 8 se 10 th ki padhai wahi pe chali fir 11th se usne school change karli.



YEAR 20** DR.ANAND KI CLASS


'' So ab mera que hai jaisa ki ayan ne bola tha jaruriyat khatam hone ke baad hi chahat puri karsakte hai aur jaisa ki sabko chahtah khushi ki hoti hai sab apni life me khush rehna chahte hai fir koi batayega aapko khushi kis chij me sabse jayda milti hai '' ye sunke kcuh baccho ne hath uthaya ek ne bola '' sir agar koi hame pyaar karne wala ho '' dusre ne bola '' sir paise ya respect se '' ek bola '' agar sir me is saal top karunga to ''


ye sab sunke anand bole '' jaisa mene bola jaha pe log hote hai waha apne aap hierarchy suru ho jati hai aur sabko hierarchy me upar jana hota hai jo upar hota hai wo uske niche wale ko dabata hai usko control karta hai niche wala uske niche wale ko dabata hai par hierarchy me upar jane ke liye bhi hame jarurat hoti hai jaise pyaar karne ke liye koi chij hona jisse ham pyaar kar sake ya koi hame, respect ke liye aesa kuch kaam karna jisse hame respect mille class top karne ke liye knowledge ya fir exam me acchi cheating karne ki skill ka hona jaruri hota hai.'' ye sab bolke anand ne sabki aur dekha par fir uska dhayan ayan pe gaya jo bench ke upar per rakh kar betha tha ye dekh ke anand bole '' ye ghar nahi class hai thoda sahi se betho baki sab students ko dekho kaise sahi bethe hai aesa karoge to hierarchy me upar kaise aavoge '' ye sunke ayan ko hasi aagai par fir usne bas ek chutki bajai baki sab students bhi uski tarah bench pe per rakh kar beth gaye fir ayan bola '' ab thik haina aur dusri baat hierarchy me upar jana aap jaiso ka kaam hai me to khud hi bhagwan hun mujhe kya jarurat ''


ye dekh dr anad ko gussa aagaya wo kuch bolne wala the tabhi rahul jo dr.anand ke paas intern hai wo kabse sari baat sun raha tha class ke piche khade khade wo bhaag ke aaya dr anand ke paas aur unko phone de dia ye bolke ke koi argent call hai baat karne ke baad dr anand bich class me hi waha se nikal gaye. ye call hospital se tha koi inspector panday ka aur unhone kuch bate batai wo sunke bhaag ke hospital gaye waha wo panday se mile aur pucha konsa room to panday ne room ki taraf isara kar diya.


waha room me dr.ananad gaye to waha bed par yug betha tha uske hath pencil thi wo dr ananad ko dekh ke bola '' me ab is pencil se nahi darta mera phobia chala gaya'' ye sunte hi dr.anand ke chehre pe sock ke bhaav aagaye aur wo bole '' kya kiya tumne '' iske javab me yug haste huve bola '' i killed them ''





PAST, YEAR-20**


Ab yug ka 11th std suru ho gaya tha jab wo pehle din school gaya class me jate usko ek ladki dikhi jiska naam tha priyanshi uski khubsurti dekh ke hi uska dil dhadak ne laga usko pehli najar me attraction ho gaya tha , ab roj wo priyanshi ki taraf class me dekhta rehta tha par uski himmat kabhi hoti nahi thi waha priyanshi ne bhi notice kiya tha usko dkehte huve jo uske liye koi nai baat nahi thi par usko yug jaise bhondu darpok ladke pasand nahi the. waha yug ne ek din ghar pe naina ko priyanshi ke bare me bataya par wo gussa ho gai aur boli ke usko ladkion se jayda padhai pe dhayan dena chahiye.


but yug se raha nahi ja raha tha wo ek baar naina ko akele dekh ke baat karne chala gaya par jaisa usne socha aesa hua nahi priyanshi ne usko bahut suna di usko upar se stupid bol diya bola tum darpko ho upar se padhai me bhi acche nahi ho tumahre andar ek bhi acchi quelity nahi jisse ladki tumhe pasnad kare fir me kaise kar sakti hun. ye sab sunke yug ko bura laga, waha priyanshi ne apne kuch friends ko bhi ye bate bata di ki yug ne usko propose kiya tha sabne milke majak udaya yug ka, waha yug ko kuch samaj nahi aaraha tha wo kya kare. yug jis school me tha wo private thi school thi yaha bhi har 2 din me test liye jate the. ek din aesa hi test chal raha tha par yug ka kuch mann nahi tha par tabhi usko dhayan aaya is school me uski mom nahi hai yaha to wo sahyug ki help le sakt ahai isliye usne sahyug ki taraf dekh ke que ka ans pucha jo jo sahyug ko aata tha wo sab usne ans de diye. agle din jab yug school me aaya tab uske kuch 80 marks aaye the test me par-roj uske 40 ke aas paas aate the ye dekh ke sab sock ho gaye the ki ye itne acche marks kaise laya par baat fel gai ki usne priyanshi ki vajah se marks acche laye hai ye baat priyanshi ke friends ne fela di thi, waha yug ne ghar pe ksiiko marks ke bare me bataya nahi tha. fir agle test me firse yug 85 laya ab in sabse khush priyanshi ho rahi thi kyun ki sara credit yug ka usko mil raha tha wo to pehle se acche marks lati thi usko aese bhi motapa karne me accha lagta tha aesa hone se usko aur maja aane laga.

fir yug ne marks ka sab naina ko bata diya wo ye sab sunke khush huvi usne bola '' aaj me bahut khush bhiaya ab roj aese marks lana '' ye baate sunke yug bhi khush tha par ab agle din maths ka test tha upar se teacher hamehsa maths ka test hard rakhte the jisse bacche bahut pareshan the yug abhi sone ko chala gaya jo hoga dekha jayega agle din.


agle din jab yug utha wo direct school me gaya waha kuch bacche notice bord dekh rahe the par aaj to koi test ka result tha to sab kya dekh rahe hai ye soch ke wo notice board par dekhne gaya waha sab bacche usko hi dekh rahe the jab usne notice board dekha to waha maths ke mark likhe huve the sabke aur sabse upar yug ka naam tha 100-marks ke sath ye dekh ke hi wo sock ho gaya usko kuch samaj me nahi aya ye sab kya ho raha hai. par tabhi uske taraf priyashi ne dekha aur usko smile dedi wo smile dekh kar yug sab bhul gaya, fir aese hi din jane lage dhire dhire yug ki ab priyanshi ke sath accchi banne lagi thi dono class me bate karte fir number bhi exchange kar diya par abhi tak friends ki tarah hi baat karte the priyanshi abhi bate aage nahi badana chahti thi yug ne sab kiya tha par usko alag type ke ladke pasand the. fir ek din priyanshi ke sab friends baat kar rahe the usme yug ki baat nikli sath me ek ladke ne bataya ki uski usko naina bahut pasand hai aur dono sath me hi ek school me padhte hai, usne bola tu meri help kar de aese bhi yug tere sab bate manenge pls mera itna kaam karde, ab piryanshi ko bhi dikhana tha ki uska yug pe control hai aur wo uske friend ki help karke thoda badapa karna chahti thi.


ek din theater me movie dekhne ke liye pucha yug ko yug ye sunke khush ho gaya par priyanshi ne bola uske sab friends bhi aarahe hai so tum bhi naina ko leke ana yug ne bhi hami bhar di, waha ghar pe naina ko bataya yug ne movie ke liye to wo bhi khush ho gai. fir wo sab sunday ko mile theater me abhi prayanshi ke sath uski friend thi sath me uska boyfriend amit fir uska dost jisko naina pasand thi wo harsh, sab log movie dekhne ke baad bahar coffee pine. waha yug jyada bol nahi raha tha bas chupchap thodi thodi hi hello jaisi bate kar raha tha. fir sab coffee pike bahar nikal rahe the tabhi naina ke mun se aahhhh nikli ye sunke yug ne piche dekha waha naina ke baju ke do chaar ladke khade the fir usne naina ki taraf dekha aur bola '' kya hua '' naina darte huve boli '' kisine piche se touch kiya '' ye sunke harsh and amit waha ladko ke paas gaye amit ne bola '' aese kisi ko touch karna sahi nahi hai tumahri himmat kaise huvi '' samne se ladka bola '' jyada ucchal mat kya proof hai hamne usko touch kiya '' harsh bhi ab aagaya bato me aur bola '' salo yaha jyada bano mat hame pata hai tum hi yaha pe khade ho '' waha ab jhagda hone laga priyanshi aur uski dost harsh and amit ko rok rahe the jyada jhagda aage na bade isliye. ye sab chal raha tha ke tabhi samne wale ladke ke muh me coffe cup aake laga uske jisse uske honth fatt gaye aur khun nikalne laga wha sab sock ho gaye par tabhu yug aake ek ladke ko mukke se marne laga aur bola '' usko touch kaise kiya tune maderchod '' wo ladka chillata hua bola '' me nahi tha '' ye sunke yug khada hua ab sabki fatti padi thi samne do ladko ko dekh ke yug bola '' tum dono me se kon maderchod tha '' dono kuch bole usse pehle hi yug ne ek ko jor se kick marke giradiya ye sab ek jatke me hua tha sab ye sab dekh ke sab sock me tha ab amit piiche ayaa yug ko rokne ke liye jaise usne kandhe pe hath rakha yug ne piche ghum ke dekha aur gusse se amit ko bola '' hath hata bsdk '' ab yug ka chehra dekh ke amit ki bhi fatt gai par tabhi naina aai aur bola '' rukja yash pls yash rukja tujhe meri kasam '' ye sunte hi yug thoda sant hua usne naina ka hath pakda aur waha se leke chale gaya, waha piche sab bas aese hi khade rahe ab harsh ki gand fatt gai usne socha tha naina ke sath relation ka par ab uski gand fatt rahi thi yug ka ye roop dekh kar.


waha subah yug ne aankhe kholi usne dekha, wo naina ke room me uske bed pe tha usko kuch samaj nahi aya thodi der baad naina bhi aagai yug ne pucha kya hua to naina ne bola '' kuch nahi raat ko tum thak gaye to yaha sone ki jid rahe the fit kya yahi pe so gaye '' ab aesa yug ke sath har hafte hone laga tha usko kuch yaad nahi rah raha tha ab yug bhi sab samaj gaya tha ki ye sab wo nahi kar raha hai usne baju me dekha waha pe sahyug bhi tha jo uski taraf hi dekh raha. fir yug ne mobile hath me liya waha bahut sare msg the priyanshi ke pehle sorry ka msg tha fir bahut sare hiiii ka tha upar se 25 miss calls the aur last me tha '' kyun ans bhi nahi de rahe pls kuch to bolo'' fir uske baad tha '' dont you love me anymore '' ye sab dekh ke confuse tha yug, fir wo school gaya waha to priyanshi aate hi uska hath pakad ke alag le gai fir thodi der uski taraf dekha aur yug ko gale laga liya aur boli '' abhi tak gussa ho '' ab yug ke maje the aur aese hi dono ne apna relationship suru kiya fir 11th khatam hua waha yug ne top kiya to ghar wale sab heran the fir uske papa ne party rakhi uske liye sath me naina and uski family wale bhi aaye the.


waha ek aadmi bola '' waah pradhan ji kya marks laye hau apake bete '' ye sunke pradhan khush hote huve yug ke khandhe pe hath rakhte huve bole '' aakhir beta kiska hai ab sab to top nahi kar sakte haina class me '' ab yug ko sabka pyaar aur izzat milne lagi thi par ab ek hi uski problem thi wo thi pencils kyun ke wo kitni bhi pencils apne room ke ahar fek de par fir bhi uske room me pecils bapas aajati thi dhire dhire usko isse irritation hone lagi par wo kuch karna nahi chahta tha aur kisiko bata bhi nahi raha tha. aese time chalne laga fir kuch time baad usne pehle fir priyanshi ke sath sex kiya tha fir aese hi dono ka chalta raha ab har week sex ki bhukh hoti thi dono ko, kuch time baad dono ki collage suru ho gai and 3rd year me family ke presure me aake dono ne shaadi kar li kyun ke dono bahut salo se sath the aur sabko pata bhi chal gaya tha sab bate bhi banane lage the dono ki to shaadi karni padi par uske baad bhi yug ki life sahi ja rahi thi par ek chij ne uski life change kardi




YEAR-20**-HOSPITAL




waha dr.ananad kuch der yug se baat karne ke baad room se bahar aaye bahar police ko unhone kuch bate batai pehli uske pencils ke phobia ke bare me aur dusri uske dissociative personality discoder ke bare me , ye sab sunke police sab sock me the par ye case abhi accident ka tha kyun ke yug ko yaha hosptial me laya gaya tha. waha panday ne pratik ko pucha jo '' sir aapko kya lagta hai aese bhi ye accident tha uske bimari se kuch lena dena nahi lagta'' pratik ne bola '' baat to sahi hai par mujhe kuch to gadbad lag rahi hai jish tarah accident hua hai us hisab se kuch bate pach nahi rahi upar se wo ladki ko bhi jyada kuch chot nahi aai hai. panday bola '' fir sir ab kya kare ab ye case ab pechida hota ja raha hai , aap samaj rahe haina '' ye sunke pratik bola '' ha me samaj raha hun aur ye bhi ki us bacche se tumhe pyaar bahut hai, ab na chahte huve bhi khena pad raha hai call karde us bakchod ko '' ye sunke panday happy happy ho gaya aur usne call laga dia.


waha kuch der baad dr.ananad bapas aaye aur pratik ko dekh kar bole '' mujhe din baad abroad jana hai ab usi sab me busy me sayad aapki jyada help na kar pavu par ye rahul hai mera intern kuch jaurat ho isse puchna yug ke disoder ke bare me bhi aapko kuch janna hai to isse puch lena '' ye sunke pratik bola '' thank you aur vaise bhi hamne hamare counselling ke liye kisiko bulaya hai '' ye sunke anand bole '' kyun '' pratik bola '' ji mujhe lag raha hai sayad ye accident ki jagah murder na ho isliye'' ye sunke anand sock me tha par tabhi panday bola '' lo aagaya ab thodi der me pura case solve hoga ''


anand ne samne ki taraf dekha to dekhte hi rah gaye kyun ke samne ayan aaraha tha wo unke paas aake bola '' kyun sir aap yaha bahut jaldi mulakat ho gai '' ayan ko dekh kar panday ki taraf dekh kar ananad bole '' ye '' ye sunke panday bole '' yahi to hai hamare mastermind bas dekhte rahiye aap bhi jaan jayenge '' ye sunke ayan bola '' are panday ji aap to sarminda kar rahe hai itna bhi hamari tarif mat kijiiye '' anand aur rahul ke liye baat unke pare thi dono kuch jayda bole nahi.


ayan ne pucha '' panday ji ab boliye aur puri detail dijiye accident ki '' panday -' ji 4 logo ka hua tha 1 ki death ho gai hai unka naam pradhan hai dusre ka naam puja hai wo bhi apni aakhri sannse gin rahi hai, fir driver jiska naam yug hai wo abhi sahi salamat hai fir ladki hai naina naam ki wo bhi sahi salamat hai'' ayan ne pucha '' thik hai ab thoda driver ke bare me batavo'' panday bola '' abhi jo hame pata laga hai ki unko DID hai aur pehle pencils se phobia bhi tha '' ye sunke ayan bola '' intresting '' fir aayan ne pucha '' aur koi family me tha kya '' panday ne bola '' ji pehle uski wife thi par dono ka divorce ho gaya tha '' ayan bola '' thik hai kyun hua divorce uski sari detail chahiye aur sabse badi chij trigger ko search karna padega '' ye sunke rahul bola '' konsa trigger'' ayan bola '' jaisa dr.anand ne bola tha ham ek jundh ki tarah chalte hai khudko bachne ke liye par wo batana bhul gaye ki isi-jundh me hame shikar khudh jundh ka karna hota hi ''



fir ayan waha se nikal gaya agli subah aaya waha panday ne bataya divorce priyanshi ke cheating karne par hua tha aur jis ladke rishav ke sath kiya tha uski bhi death goa me ho gai thi. ayan ne bola '' chalo ek aur naam jud ab uski wife se milna padega ek baar '' fir ayan priyanshi se mila waha kuch saval kiye fir aakhhir me pucha '' tum rishav ke sath kitni baar inimate huvi thi '' prayanshi boli '' ek bhi baar nahi bas ham kiss se aage nahi bade kabhi ham kuch kar pate usse pehle hi usi death ho gai thi''


ye baat sunke ayan ke chehre pe smile aagai fir kaha '' rishav ko janne wale sabko yug ki photo dikahvo aur pucho koi usse janta hai '' kuch ghante baad rishav ke ek friend ne bataya ke usne in dono ko sath me dekha tha ek kuch paiso ki baat kar rahe the aur date ke hisab se wo priyanshi se mila usse pehle hi yug semila tha, ye sunke priyanshi sock ho gai jo pure din se yahi pe thi usko kuch samaj nahi aarah tha tabhi ayan bola '' iska matalab yahi hai ki usne jaan buj ke rishav ko tumhe fasane ko bola ''

rahul -aese kyun

ayan - kyun ki jaise gun ka trigger tabane se pehle khud ki safety rakhte hai isi tarah isne bhi jo usko pyara tha usko dur kar diya safe rahne ke liye par rishav ne hadd paar karne ki sochi to usko maar diya par ek baat aur bhi hai iska matlab ye bhi hua ki uske hath pehle se trigger aagaya tha bas pata karna hai wo kya hai'' waha piche priyanshi roti rahi

waha ayan ko idea aaya wo jake puja se mila jo thoda thoda hos me thi usko ayan ne kuch bate batai jisse uski anakho se aansu aane lage thodi der baad, naina se puja ko milaya kyun ke ab puja aakhri sanse gin rahi thi fir last me yug se mili waha puja ne yug ki taraf dekha jiske chehre pe smile thi, wo dekh ke puja ke aankh se aur aansu nikal gaye bas itna hi boli - sorry beta mene tumahra hamesha accha hi chaha hia, i always love you

ye sunke yug ki muskan chali gai, waha ek camera se sab ayan dekh raha tha ki ye kya baat kar rahe hai, ab yug panic hone laga puja ki bate sunke uska dimag kharab hone laga.

ayan ne itni der me yug aur naina ke room me ek microphone lagaya hua tha aur wo apni bike apni hostel ki taraf ja raha tha par dono ki bate sunke achanak usne bike break lagai aur speed me bike hospital ki taraf bhagadi.

waha yug abhi hospital bhaag gaya tha abhi wo ek pool ke upar khada tha aur wo pal soch raha tha jab uski life change ho gai wo sochke usne pool jump lagadi.

past-20**



yug ab roj roj kuch na kuch bhul jata tha jaise ab uski body pe kisi aur ne kabja kar liya tha jab bhi wo hosh me aata tha tab wo kahi aur hi jagah hota tha ek din wo hosh me aya tab wo sex kar raha tha wo ladki boli - kya kar rahe ho jaan thoda dhire se karo
par abhi yug ki anakhe fati ki fati reh gai thi kyun ki abhi wo jisse sex kar raha aur jo uske niche nangi leti thi wo naina thi, uska dimag kaam karna band ho gaya tha wo turant toilate me bhaga usko ulti hone lagi aur thodi der baad behosh ho gaya par agli baar jab hosh me aaya tab wo naina ke room me tha sath me usne kapde bhi pehne huve the usko kuch samaj nahi aaya usne baju me dekha to drawer par ek pencil padi huvi thi aur tabse wo sabmaj gaya upar se usko phobia bhi ho gaya.

ab uski dunia ujad gai thi jo usse sabse jyada pyaar karti thi wo sayad usko nahi uske anad dusre ko pyaar karti hai yahi soch ne yug ki life change kardi bachapan se hi uska sath sirf naina hi deti thi, par ab sab change ho gaya tha par uska dimag trigger tab hua jab naina ne uske bday pe usko pencil gift ki wo bhi uskeupar naina naam likha tha. fir usko raat ko sapne me jo aaj tak wo sab sambal ke rakha tha jaise usko bachapan me maar padna sab bapas aagaya wo so nahi pa raha tha itne saaal sabkuch naina ki vajah se uski life chal rahi thi par ab wo khatam ho gaya tha uske dimag me ajib ajib khayal aane lage tab wo dr. anand se pehli baar mila tha. ab yug pe bhoot savar tha usne jaise taise kuch mahine nikale par wo reh nahi saka ab pura din usko apne purane din yaad aate aur uske sath gussa



YEAR-20**

ab pool par sab police aachuki thi aur sab body search kar rahe the par kisko kuch mil nahi raha tha upar se bahav bahut jyada tha, waha kuch der me ayan bhi aagaya usne panday ko bataya ki usko trigger mil gaya, aur panday ke puchne pe wo bola ki yug ki 2 nahi par 3 personality thi fir ayan ne yug aur naina ki recording sunai

yug - pls naina bas ek baar bol do tum us pencil se jyada mujse pyaar karti ho, mene hamesha tumhe bas pani bahan ki tarah hi deha hai uar sabse jyada pyaar bhi mene tumhe hi kiya hai

naina - uska naam pencil nahi yash hai mene bachapan se sirf usko hi pyaar kiya hai aur usne mujse

yug ne socha nahi tha ki naina ko pata hoga upar se aaj usko pata chala ki uska naam yash hai ye sunke wo kuch der baad hospital se bhaag gaya,

waha ayan ne pool par panday se kaha '' bas panday ji ab saval ye hai ki ye suicide hai ya murder ya fir dono '' fir ayan ne pool par ek pencil padi dekhi aur haske bola '' ya fir ye penicil maderchod mastermind hai ''
Yug,sehyug aur yash ....kya gol gol story hai ..chakkr aane lage ...lekin superb.. maza aaya... theatre ke bahr jab yug lad raha tha toh Naina ne Issey yash kehke roka..muje vahin gadbad lggi ..aur ghar aakr woh Naina k room se utha or kuch yaad nhi tha .. starting mein sehyug muje koi jaadu chamtkar lgga..lekin aagey aagey clear hota gea...personality disorder...iska mujhe jyada pta nhi..pr kahani pddkr maza aaya....
 

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First of all I was so so glad to see that you wrote this story from a female prospective, not very common for a male writer but really appreciate it. Story was hot, with the leather it became hotter :angel1: enjoyed it.

Just would have been better in my opinion if you would have introduced the characters in a different manner, with the flow of story maybe. But apart from that it was a nicely written sex encounter. :thumbup:
 
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***Breaker of chains : Rise of New Era***

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Amawas ki Kaali Andheri raat thi aur na jaane aaj baadal kuch jyada hi gurraa rahe the, shayad kuch kahna chah rahe the, par humesha ki trah aaj bhi unki sunne waala koi nahi tha. Par door ek sunsaan kile ke tahkhaane me ek shaksh zarur kisi se kuch sunna chah raha tha………………..





Shaksh- Bata de, murakh mujhe jo janna hai, kab tak aise hi bediyo me sadta rahega, apni saari jawani aise hi nikaalega kya. Mujhe de de jo main maang raha hu, aisho aaram ki zindagi de dunga tujhe…..



Kaidi ko koi hosh nahi tha, uske dono hatho me bel bandi hui thi, jo uske hatho ko baandte hue uske kaara ghar ke beecho beech chat par bandhi hui thi, uske haatho par bel ki jakdan se gehre laal-neele nishan ho chuke the, uska sharir zakhmo se aur kale neele nishano se bhara hua tha, ye saaf tha kaidi ko bahut waqt tak trah trah peeda di gyi thi.

Isi peeda ki wajah se use use shaksh ki baate dhundli sunaai de rahi thi, uski aankhe aadhi khuli thi, use lag raha tha wo ek sapna dekh raha hai, uski kale bade baal khulkhar uske chehre par faile hue the, uski aankhe uske baalo me se rah rahkar jhaank rahi thi. Uski aankhe dard aur km neend ki wajah se srukh laal thi, chehre par ek bhi shikand nahi thi, badi kaali daadhi se uska chehra ek khukhaar sher jaisa lag raha tha, isi beej lagataar us shaksh ki aawaj se uske kaano tak rah rahkar pahuch rahi thi.



Kaidi aisi sthiti me bhi data hua tha, aur na jaane kyu uska mann aaj khush tha, aur shaksh ki baate sunkar uske sukhe hotho par halki muskan aa gyi. Jo us shaksh se dekh li.



Shaksh- ab kya rah gya hai teri zindagi me hasne ke lie, tu yaha bediyo me sad raha hai, jaanwaro se bhi bat trr zindagi jee raha hai, teri saari zindagi mere hatho me hai, teri bahan aadhi paagal ho chuki hai, teri maa lambi neend so rahi hai, tere baap ko tune khud us din maar dia tha. Kuch hi dino me teri behan 20 saal ki ho jaaegi, tab poore 2 saal ho jaaenge tujhe is kaid khaane me. Mujhe de de jo mujhe chahiye aur fir jee lena apni zindagi.



Kaidi apni behan ke baare me sunte hi uske andar se na jaane kaise shakti aa jaati hai, aur wo zor se dahaad ke bolta hai, aur poore tahkhaane me aawaj goonj jaati hai, bhaari bhaari bedio se badhe hote hue bhi aisa lagta hai wo abhi chut kar us shaksh ki gardan pakad lega. Uska poora sharir hil uth ta hai

Kaidi- nahi dunga tujhe kuch bhi, khaali hath jaaega tu humesha yaha se, ek din main yaha se nikal kar teri gardan ko apne hatho se tod dunga, aur tere khoon ki ghoot piyunga. Apni kaali jubaan se meri behan ka zikar na karna kabi, warna teri ruh ko anantkaal tak apna gulaam banaunga.



Shaksh (haste hue)- dekh raha hu, teri hekdi abhi gyi nahi hai. Jaildar se kahunga teri hawa tight karega, jis din tu tutega, us din mujhe tu sab kuch bata dega, ek na ek din tujhse main uglwa hi lunga sab



Kaida (gurraate hue)- chala jaa, tu yaha se, isse pahle main tujhe aur is jaildaar ko aur is poore tehkhaane ko tabah kar du, aaaaahhhhhhhh………

Shaksh (shaintaani hasi haste hue)- koshish to karke dekho kya hota hai.

Kaidi ki aawaj ek dum bhaari kisi jaanwar jaisi ho jaati hai, uske baal hawa me uthne lagte hai uske hath bade hone lagte hai….par jaise hi uski shakti badhne lagti hai. Wo bedia safed Roshni se jal uthti hai, aur wo kaidi dard se tadapne lagta hai.



Kaidi- aaah DARK MAGE…….tujhe ek din yaha se nikalkar mout ke ghaat utaar dunga..aaaaaahhhh



Dark Mage (apna kaala jaadui staff ghumaata hai)- jab tak mujhe jo chahiye tun ahi deta, tu yahi rahega………aaram se soja abhi..mere paaltu….hahahahaaaaaa

Dark Mage jaadu karke use sula deta hai.

DM- jaildaaaar, mere paaltu ka dhyaan rakho, jyada hi jangli ho raha hai, main dobara aaunga tab tak ye seedha ho jaaana chahiye.



Jail daar- ji sarkaar.

Dark mage apne kale choge me chehre ko dhak kar bahar nikal gya, baahr uska kaal dragon uska wait kar raha tha. Wo uspar baithkar apne mehal me chala gya.



Idhar kothary me jaildaar ne, kaidi ko 4 gaaliyan di aur wapas apni gasth par chala gaya…..

Kaidi abhi tak behosh tha, thodi der me hosh me wo wapis aaata hai, dekhata hai ki dark mage jaa chuka hai aur wo waise hi kaidkhaane me bediyo se bandha hua latka hua hai. Uske dono baaju dard kar rahe hai, aur uska poora sharir jaise aag me jal raha tha.



Kaidi sochne lagta hai, kaise usne apne laalach ke chalte, apni poori zindagi tabah kar li, kaise uska bhara poora pariwaar usne apni hi hatho se khatam kar dia, aur jo dard uske dil me hai wo in sab bediyo ke dard se dard se, dark mage ke julm se badh kar bhi jyada hai. Dark mage usko itna tabah nahi kar sakta jitna usne khud ko kar lia tha. Kaidi sochne lagta hai jaise kal hi baat thi……



2 saal pahle Backstory……



Dunia ke paas ab samay kum bacha hua tha, is dunia ka sooraj khatam hone wala tha, bus 10-15 saalo me saari dharti ki uraja, ped poude, jeev jantu, poora jaadu bhi jo ki sooraj ki uraja se tha, khatam hone waale the. Aise waha ke Rajkumar DUNGEON MASTER ne ek tarkeeb nikaali jisse poori dunia bach sakti thi, aur fir se sukh shaanti wapis aa sakti thi. Par uske lie uske akele ke paas itni shakti nahi thi. Aur isme waha ke raja Mahamahim jadugar aur uske mantri raajkumar dungeon master ke plan ko support nahi kar rahe the. Aise me ek baar aakhri koshish karte hue Dungeon Master ne Apne pita ke aur sab mantrio ke aage apna plan vistaar me batakari sabko raaji karne ki sochi……….

Mantrimandal sabha :



Dungeon Master: Mahamahim, humare paas aur koi upaae nahi hai, agar humne kuch nahi kiya to dharti kuch saalo me khatam ho jaaegi, is dharti pe Jeevan ka vinaash ho jaaega.

Mahamahim: jaise har chiz ka shuruwaat hoti hia, har chiz ka ant bhi zaruri hai, yahi prakarti ka niyam hai, hume isse chedchaad nahi karni chahiye

Dungeon Master: Par iska matlab aap apne raajay praja aur pariwaar ka ant dekh sakte hai ? kya ek raja hone ke naate aapka dharam nahi banata ki apni praja aur raaj ko bachae

Mahamahim: Kitne hazar saalo se hum apni praja aur raaj ko kaayam karte aa rahe hai, apne shatruo se aur najaane kine vinaashkaari sankato se humne apne raajya ki Raksha kari hai, parantu ab jab Jeevan savaym hi khatam hone jaa raha hai, sristi ka virod sawayam param shakti ka virod hai, ye to honi hai honi ko koi nahi taal sakta, agar sampooran vinash niyati ke anusaar hona hai to hume dharam ki raah par chalte hue isko swikaar kar lena chahiye.

1 Mantri: maharaja bilkul sahi kah rahe hai, prakarti hi pram shakti hai (sab mantrimandal ne sath me bola)

Dungeon Master
: kya prakarti ne khud hi hume sochne aur samjhe ki shakti aur khud ke bachav ki shakati nahi di hai, kya humaara faraz nahi banata ki agar prakarti aur is dharti ko bachaane ka agar koi tarika hai hum us par amal kare, kya humari shakti aur soch khud prakarti ka hissa nahi hai. Kya hume apne ghar ko bacchane ka koi mool adhikaar nahi hai.



Mahamahim: tum apne sawarth ke lie, aur maout ke darr se aisa bol rahe ho, tumhe andaza nahi hai ki zindagi aur mout ek hi hisse ke do pahlu hu. Tum bus aane waale samay ko lekar darr rahe ho, parantu parakarti ne hume jo shakti di hai, Jeevan dan dia hai to hume prakarti ka dia jaane wale amar ant bhi manjoor hona chahiye. Hum prakarti ke niyamo ka aadar sammaan karte hue apni maryaada par challenge. Yahi humamara tumhare majamahim ka, raajkul ka, faisala hai. Sannnn staff ki aawaj (mahamahim ne apni staff ko zameen par jor se maarte hue kaha….)

Dungeon master: panratu…..

Mahamahim (gusse se): aakhri faisla hai……(staff zameen par maarte hai, poori sabha me safed rohni fail jaati hai)

Poora mantri mandal chaaplusi karte hue bolte hai- jai ho mahamahim ki jai ho….





Us din Dungeon master waha se sir jhukhaaye chala jaata hai, parantu use uske upar apne samaj, apne ghar bar apni janta ko bachane ka bhaar mahsoos hota tha, use lagta tha jab uske paas sabkuch thik karne ki vidya hai to, ek raata hai, to kyu wo ruk raha tha.



Aakhri usne mahamahim, apne pita, ki aagya ko na maante hue, sab kuch apnne haath me lene ki sochi, is sab ke lie uske paas itni shakti nahi thi, poore samraajy me sabse takatwar mahamahim hi tha. Isilie usne apni maa aur behan ko apni baat samjhaate hue apni aur kar lia.



Rani maa, dungeon master ki maa, usse bahut pyaar karti thi, wo apne bete ke lie, apne pariwaar ko bachane ke lie kuch bhi kar sakti thi, use bhi apne bete ke upar naaj tha ki uski vidya ki wajah se poori duniya bach jaaegi.



Doosri traf, Twin-Flame, dungeon master ki behan, beshak apne bhai se bahut pyaar karti thi, parantu wo apne pita ki laadli thi unse se bahut pyar karti thi, par wo apne pariwar ko, janta ko, khona nahi chahti thi, use bhi apne bhai ke plan jo ki zindagi ko bachane aur kaayam karne ka tha, par bharosa tha. Apne pita aur bhai me se kisi ek ko chunne ki kasamkash uske lie bahut muskil thi, kyu ki wo bachpan se hi Bi-polar thi, jiske rahte uska savbhav kabhi kabhi bahut dayadil, naramdil aur komal par kabi kabi bahut khuni-bhayanak aur nirdayi ho jaati thi, uska aadha sharir kabhi kabhi aag jaisa ja luth ta tha, kabi kabi barf jaisa ban jaata tha…uske paas anokkhi shaktiya thi, wo bhi bahut shaktishali thi.. Par jaise taise wo maan gyi aur tino mahal aur raajya se door ek puraani khandar me jaakar vidhi ko poora karne ka plan banaya.



Tino, Dungeon Master ke Dragon Drogon ke upar baith kar Andheri raat me udkar khandar me pahuch gye. Drogon pure Mystical kingdom me sabse shaktishaali mythical creature tha, wo dungeon master ke sath hi bada hua tha, dono ke beech ek atut rista tha, wo dungeon ka poori trah se wafadaar tha, wo gehre laal rang ka dragon tha, jo ki bade bade seharo, parvato ko apni aag se khatam karne ki shakti rakhta tha. Wo 100 foot lamba dragon tha, matlab ki badi badi building uske saamne choti lagti thi. Par kamal ki baat ye thi ki mythical creature hone ki wajah se wo apna size kum jyada kar sakta tha, jyada tar wo apne aap ko ek ghode ya hathi ke size tak hi rakhta tha, kabi kabi ek chote se chipkali jaisa bhi, jisse wo dungeon master ke gale ya kandhe par khelta rahta tha.



Tino, Andheri raat me khandar me pahuchte hai, drogon apna size chota karke wahi pe raat ki neend poori karne lagta hai.



Dungeon master: maa main vidhi shuru karta hu, aap dono ko ko vidhi me saamil hona hoga, uske beech hum tino apni shaktiyo ko kendrit karte hue vidhi ko poora karna padega.

Rani maa- thik hai beta, tum jaldi karo, tumhare pita se koi baat nahi chipti, vidhi ko jaldi poora karna hoga, agar wo aa gye to vidhi poori nahi hogi

Twin-flame- ha bhai, tum vidhi shuru karo, tab tak main bahar pahra deti hu.




Vidhi ke anusar, tino ki shaktio ko ek hona tha jiske rahte, ek apar shakti ki wajah se dungeon master dusri dunia ka portal khol deta, aur waha ki urja se apni dunia ke surya ko thik kar dega.



Dungeon master vidhi shuru karta hai, rani maa vidhi ke kaary me hath bataati hai, raani maa ke paas “foresight” ki power thi, wo kuch samay tak future me dekh sakti thi, wo dekhti hai ki mahamahim apne mythical creature FlameWings par baith kar khandar ki tarf aa rahe hai, aur uske sath kingdom ka sabse takatwar samurai jo ki raajgaddi ke lie bahut loyal tha, wo bhi aa raha hai.



Raani maa- beta jaldi karo, tumhare pita ji aa rahe hai, unko pata lag gya hai, aur wo yaha aayenge to sab kuch tahas mahas kar denge, shayad hume maar bhi de, tumhe unke gusse ka pata hai.

Dungeon master: maa par vidhi to abhi aadhi hui hai, mere paas shakti nahi hai ki akele main is vidhi ko poora kar paau

Rani maa- beta main tumhe apni poori shakti de deti hu, aur tumhari behan bhi apni shakti tumhe de degi, isse tum vidhi poori kar lena, aur main tab tak tumhare pita ko sambhal lungi.

Dungeon master: maa tum agar apni shakti mujhe de dogi to tum uske bina tumhari soul urja unbalance ho jaayegi, tum bahut kamjor ho jaaogi, aur aapki umar bhi jyada hai, pata nahi kya hoga, main ye risk nahi le sakta.

Rani maa- jyada der ki baat nahi hai, vidhi poori hone ke baad tum mujhe meri shakti wapis kar dena. Baaki baato ka samay nahi hai, ujawal bhavishy ke lie itna risk to lena padega, Beti jaldi andar aao….(rani maa twin flame ko aawaj deti hai)

Twin-flame ko apni maa ki ghabraayi hui aawaj sunai deti hai, wo daud kar andar jaati hai.

Twin-flame- kya hua maa ?

Rani maa- beti baato ka samay nahi hai, tumhare pita is traf aa rahe hai, hume apni shaktiya tumhare bhai ko deni hongi.




Twin-flame : thik hai maa, jaisa aap kahe.

Dungeon Master taiyaar ho jaata hai, dono maa-beti apni shakti dungeon master ko dene lagti hai.

Rani-maa hawa me dono hath ghumati hai, aur apni shakti dungeon master ko de deti hai : (Dance of souls)

Twin-flame apna jaadu karti hai, (ice age), aur uski shakti dungeon master ke andar chali jaati hai.

Maa-beti, dono ki shakti milne ke baad dungeon master ki shakti badh jaati hai, uske aankho me se halki halki aag ki lapte nikalne lagti hai, aur uska pahna hua choga apna rang badalkar laal ho jaata hai.

Idhar rani-maa jaise hi apni shakti dungeon master ko deti hai, uske sharir me ek dum se spast roop se dikhne waali kamjori aa jaati hai, aur uske baal jaise safed ho jaate hai. Par twin-flame ki umar abhi kum thi isilie us par jyada asar nahi hua. Uska dimagi santulan thoda bigad ho gya tha

Rani-maa- samay na gawao ab, jaldi se vidhi ko poora karo, beti tum mere sath bahar aao.

Twin-flame (hosh sambhalte hue)- aasha karti hu aap kaamyaab honge bhaiya.

Dungeon master (smile karte hue): bilkul meri behna.




Dono maa beti, khandar ke bahar pahuch jaati hai, aur mahamahim ka intezaar karti hai, idhar dungeon master ne shakti milne ke baad vidhi ki gati ko tej kar dia tha.



Mahamahim apne firephoneix (Flamewings) ke upar baith ke aa raha hota hai, jiske sath Demon samurai bhi hota hai, ab rani maa aur twin-flame dono ko mahamahim flamewings ko dekh sakte the.

Rani-maa aur twin-flame, dono ko darr lag raha tha, dono hi mahamahim ki shaktio ki aage bahut kamjor thi. Par fir bhi rani-maa ko umeed thi ki wo mahamahim ko kaise bhi karke waha rok lengi. Twin-flame bahut hi pareshan thi, uska dimag fata jaa raha tha, wo apne pita ka saamna nahi karna chahti thi, uske dimag me ajeeb sa pagalpan chaata jaa raha tha.

Twin-flame ka sir ghumne lagta hai, aur wo apne sir ko jor jor se ghumaane lagti hai, uske baal poore khul kar bikhar jaate hai, aur wo ajeeb si hasi hasne lagati hai, jise sunkar rani maa chintit hokar puchti hai, kya hua beti thik to ho.




Twin-flame (ajib si hasi haste hue)- aaee Bhudia tu apna kaam kar na, yaha sab marne waale hai, mout ka taandav hone waala hai, mains sabko jala kar raakh kar dungi.

Rani-maa samjh jaati hai ki twin-flame ka dusra roop bahar aa gya hai, aur wo ab jo bhi saamne hoga usko maar daalegi.

Wo apne aap ko sambhal leti hai, apni shaktiya dungeon master ko dene ke baad wo thodi kamjor ho gyi thi, use maalum tha wo aise condition me jyada ladd nahi paaegi. Wo bus kuch bhi karke thoda samay nikaalna chahti thi, jisse dungeon master vidhi ko poora kar le.

Dungeon master ke pas shakti thi, to usne sabse pahle khandar ke chaaro aur ek surakha kawach ka mantra padh kar ek jaadui ghera bana dia, jiske andar aana kaafi muskil tha.

Mahamahim flamewings ke upar se dekhta hai ki uski beti aur uski patni khandar ke bahar khade hai aur wo samj jaata hai ki uska beta bhi andar hai aur kuch galat hone waala hai.

Wo demon samurai ke sath tha, dono khandar ke paas jaake utar jaate hai, Mahamahim bina kisi ladai ke maamle ko rafa dafa karna chahta tha, par shyad usko bhi andaza tha aisa hona namunkin hai. Demon samurai chup chaap mahamhim ke sath khada tha, use pata tha ye raj gharane ka matter hai, wo mahamahim ki aagya ke bina kuch bhi nahi karega.

Mahamahim- maharani tumse ye ummeed nahi thi hume, aapne raajgaddi ke hukum ka ullaghan kiya hai.

Rani-maa- humne apne baccho ka sath dia hai, aur apni janta ke hit ke lie socha hai, jo aap nahi kar paae, aapne jaha mirtyu ko apna liya hai, wahi humne Jeevan ko gale se lagaya hai, hum apne pariwar aur janta ko aise marne nahi denge

Mahamahim- aap putra moh me andhi ho gyi ho maharani, aap ko sahi galat ki samajh nahi rahi.

Rani-maa- sahi galat ki samajh janam dene waali sirf, Jeevan ko shuru karne waali sirf maa hi samjh sakti hai. Huamri samajh sahi raah par hai maharaja aap hi bhatak gye hai.

Mahamahim samjh jaata hai, raani-maa se baat karke kuch nahi hoga, wo apni putri twin-flame ki aur dekh kar kahta hai.

Mahamahim (uski aawaj me dukh aur disappointment thi): beti tum bhi apne pita ke khilaaf ho gyi ho, hume ye dekh kar bahut dukh hua hai.

Twin-flame jo ki raani-maa aur mahamahim ki baato par dhyan nahi de rahi thi, wo paagal hokar apna aaapa kho chuki thi, usne mahamahim ki baat ka ajeeb si bhaari aawaj me bus ek hi shabd me jawaab dia- Maroge……

Aur ye bol kar twin-flame jaadu ghere ke bilkul samne kood padi thi, jaise ki wo humle ke lie taiyar thi. Idhar mahamahim bhi samjh gya tha ki uski beti ka dusra savbhaav baahar aa gya hai, ab wo khukhaar ho gyi hai usse baat karne ka kuch faaeda nahi. Wo Demon samurai ko order deta hai.

Mahamahim: samurai aage badho aur jaadu ghere ko tod do…

Demon samurai: jo aagya mahamahim




Demon samurai attack karte hue: (Demon slash), apni talwar ko hawa me ghumaata hua apna attack taiyar karta hai, dekhte hi dekhte uski talwaar black ho jaati hai, aur kaali talwar ko jor se jaadui ghere ke upar maarta hai, ek badi kaali parchaai hawa ko kaat ti hui, ghere par padti hai. Aur ghera thoda kamjor ho jaata hai….





Idhar khandar ke andar dungeon master apni vidhi ko poora karne hi vaala hota hai, jab use demon samurai ka attack feel hota hai, use pata lagta hai uske paas jyada waqt nahi hai, wo apni poori shakti se. vidhi ko jaise taise poori kar deta hai, uski saanse chad jaata hai, uske sharir ki nashe fool jaati hai, uski chaati me saans lena bhaari ho raha tha, par use pata ki vidhi kitni zaruri hai isilie wo rooka nahi. Aur jaise hi vidhi poori hui, dusri dunia ka portal khul jaata hai. Jo ki khandar ki theek upar hota hai. Jaise hi wo portal khulta hai, aasman beech me fat jaata hai, aur raani-maa, mahamahim, twin flame aur demon samurai sab aasman ki aur dekhte hai. Mahamahim ko jis baat kar dar wahi ho gya, use laga ki ghor anarth hone waala hai.

Mahamhim: jaldi karo samurai.

Demon samurai mahamahim ki traf dekhta hai, aur apni gardan se haa me ishaara karta hai, aur ek bada attack karta hai (Dance of dark angel) is attack ke sath demon samurai ki black sword se bahut saare dark shadow attacks lagataar jaadui ghere par padne lagte hai. Aur ghera ek dum se toot jaata hai.




Ghere ke tut te hi, dungeon master ko pata lag jaata hai, parantu tab tak wo dusri duniya, jo ki ek multiverse ki hazaro dhartio me ek aur dharti thi, ke suraj se shakti lena shuru kar deta hai.

Mahamahim dekhta hai ki aasman me khule portal me se urja nikal rahi hai aur khandar ke andar jaa rahi hai, use pata chal jaata hai ki dungeon master urja khich raha hai. Mahamahim ko jaldi hi kuch karna tha, nahi to bahut der ho jaati.




Mahamahim khandar ki aur kadam badhaata hi hai ki, twin-flame attack kar deti hai. (Hell fire….) charo aur aag fail jaati hai, par mahamhim ki shakti ke aage twin flame kuch bhi nahi thi, wo aag ko apni chadi ghumar kar, apne staff ki uraja se sokh leta hai.

Mahamahim: bus beti bahut hua, hume jaane do

Raani-maa: aap kahi nahi jaa sakte, rani maa attack karti hai (soul lock): jisse mahamhim ki soul aur rani-maa ki soul aapas me lock ho jaati hai.




Mahamahim: rani-sahiba bus kijie, aap galat kar rahi hai.

Rani-maa: sahi galat ka samay nikal chuka hai..aahhhh




Rani maa ki shakti kum thi isilie wo struggle kar rahi thi, par use pata thi ki use kuch hi der ke lie mahamahim ko rokna hai.

Idhar mahamahim ne samurai ko ishara kia, demon samurai aage badhkar twin-flame ko sambhalne ke lie taiyaar hua. Demon samurai ne apni talwar ki urja apne next attack se badha di, uski talwar ab kaali hokar usme ajib se laal aag jal uthi thi.




Par itne me hi, aasman me se khule portal me se kisi jaanwar ki guraane ki uchi aawaj aati hai

Graarrrrrr Graarrrrrr raarrrrrrr

Sab upar dekhne lagte hai, ek kale rang ka bada dragon apne muh se aag nikaalta hua portal me se is dunia me aa raha tha, jaise hi wo portal me se poora nikala usne jaise poore khandar ko apne wings ke niche le lia, poora khandar andhere me dhoob gya. Fir ek dum dragon ne apne muh se aag faiki (Volcono fire)



Par jaise hi aisa hua, mahamahim ne rani-maa ka attach ek dum se tod dia apne jaadu se ek ghera bana lia aur dragon ki aag se sabse bacha lia. Par mahamhim ke jaadui ghere ke aas paas ki jagah sab jal uth ti hai. Wo uchi uchi lapto me kuch nahi dikh raha tha.

Rani-maa apni foresight ki power use karti hai, use pata lag jaata hai kya hone wala hai, wo xforum-communication se mahamahim ko usi waqt sab bata deti hai. Par jaise hi wo ye karti hai uski shakti khatam ho jaati hai aur wo behosh ho jaati hai.

Twin-flame ye dekhti hai aur wo samajti hai ki mahamahim ne rani-maa ko maar dia hai, wo mahamahim ki traf attack karne ke lie aage badhati hui daud padti hai, aur hawa me kood kar attack karne ko hoti hai ki mid-air me hi mahamahim apni shakti ka prayog karte hue twin-flame ki shaktiya cheen lete hai aur use behosh kar dete hai.

Mahamahim demon samurai ko jaldi se ek xforum-communicate karte hue Sandesh bhejta hai, aur demon samurai jaldi se rani-maa aur twin-flame ko dono kandho par uthakar dragon ki aag ke beech se khandar se door ghane jungle me le jaata hai. Wo samaj jaata hai ki kuch bada galat hone wala hai.




Jaise hi aag thodi kum hoti hai, dragon apne wings se hawa ko tej karte hueaag ko kum kar deta hai, black dragon ke attach se khandar ke andar vidhi ko poora kar rahe hai dungeon master ka link dusri dunia ki urja se toot jaata hai, aur wo jaldi se apne dragon ko taiyaar kar leta hai, dungeon master ka fire dragon Drogon apne bade poore roop me aa jaata hai, aur fire phoenix flamewings bhi apna size bada kar leta hai aur dono black dragon se ladne ke lie taiyar ho jaate hai.



Itne me ek aawaj poore aasman me goonj uthi hai, jo ki black dragon par baithe ek shaksh ki thi, aur wo koi aur nahi DARK MAGE tha

DARK MAGE: is duniya ke vaasiyo tumhara naya raja aa gya, tumhari sukh shaanti ke lie yahi sahi hoga ki tum humari shakti ke ghutne tek do, warna anjaam bhukto aur mout ko gale lagao, hahahaha (pagal ki trah haste hue)

Mahamahim aur dungeon master dono khandar ke bahar hote hai, bade bade dragons ke wings se hawa tej chal rahi thi.

Mahamahim: beta, abhi ke lie aapsi baato ko bhul jaao, ye shaksh humari dunia kaisi bhi ho uspar kabja karne aaya hai aur iske iraade shaitaani lag rahe hai.

Dungeon Master: pita ji aap thik kah rahe ho, aisa hi lagta hai.

Dark Mage apne black dragon se utar kar niche aa jaata hai, aur mahamahim aur dungeon master usko dekh rahe the, dono kaano kaan chokanne the, aur kisi bi waqt hone wale humle ke lie taiyar. Jab wo dhyan se dekhte hai to dono shock ho jaate hai.

Dark Mage: to is poore saamraayja ke raja tum ho buddhe.

Dungeon master: tameez se baat karo, tumhe nahi pata tum kisse baat kar raha hu

Dark mage: jitni ijjat ek gulam ko milni chahiye utni mil rahi hai, aur dekho to humari shakal milti hai par fir bhi tujhe dekhkar mujhe kitni ghinn aa rahi hai. Tumhari zindagi abhi tak vyarth thi, ab tumhare Jeevan ka ek hi maksad meri seva, apne raja ke aage juko. (dark mage apna kaala staff zameen par maarta)




Dark mage ki shakal dungeon master se milti thi, par bus ye fark tha ki wo ek jaalim dunia ko khatam karne wala, laalchi insaan tha. Aur dungeon master life ko save karna chahta tha, dayadil thi, sabke hit ke lie sochne waala.

Mahamhim: tumhare lie accha hoga tum jaha se aaye ho, aur tumhare jo bhi iraade hai unko lekar apni dunia me wapis chale jaao. Isi me tumhari aur sabki balai hai.




Dark mage ab unke chaaro aur chalte hue baat karne lagta hai, : tum mujhe apne pita ki yaad dilaato ho, wo bhi aise hi badi badi baate kiya karte the jinka koi matlab nahi tha, mujhe humesha lagta tha unka dimag kharab hai, isilie mujhe unse nafrat thi. Aaahhhhhhhh (dark mage attack kar deta hai)…

Iske sath hi ladai shuru ho jaati hai dungeon master ka fire dragon drogon aur sath me mahamahim ka flamewings aur dark mage ke dragon ke sath ladne lag jaate hai.




Mahamahim us attack se bache hue apne staff se dusra humla karte hai, aur dark mage us attack ko apne staff se absorb kar leta hai.

Dungeon master bhi ladai me saamil ho jaata hai, wo attack karta hai to uske attacks ko dark mage apne baaye hath se rok deta hai aur uske upar attack kar deta hai.




Mahamahim aur dungeon master dono samaj jaate hai ki dark mage bahut jyada powerful hai, usko aise nahi hara sakte hai.

Idhar dark mage samjh jaata hai ki mahamahim jyada powerful hai par dungeon master ke andar ladne ke badiya gur hai. Wo soch leta hai use kya karna hai.




Dark mage ek bada attack karta hai : apne anjaam ke taiyaar ho jaao (Darkness of dark side of moon) jisse ek bada kaala energy ka gola dungeon master ki traf jaa padta hai.

Isse dungeon master rokne ki koshish karta hai (first ray of sun) apne attack se, ek badi light ki beam uske staff se nikalti hai aur dark mage ki energy ball se takra jaati hai. Par dark mage ka energy ball bahut shakti shalli tha. Mahamhim ko bhi us attack ko rokne ke lie dungeon master ke paas jaana pada.




Par jaise hi mahamhim dungeon master ke paas jaane ke lie aage badhta tha, dark mage isi chiz ka intezaar kar Raha tha. Dark mage ne apne staff se ek energy ball aur banayi aur mamahim ko usme kaid kar lia.

Dark mage: buddhe bahut chappar chappar kar li tune, tera kaam khatam ho gya ab. Ab is dunia ko teri zarurat nahi hai.

Dungeon master : pita ji, nahi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dungeon master ka attack bada ho jaata ho jaata hai, aur wo badi koshish karke dark mage ki badi energy ball ko piche push karke aasman me fenk deta hai.

Par tab tak dark mage mahamhim ko apne energy ball me kaid karke aasman me khule hue dusri dunia ke portal me fenk deta hai, uske piche piche dungeon master ka dragon and flamewings dono hi portal me chale jaate hai, aur jaise hi dark mage aisa karta hai, wo portal band ho jaata hai.

Dungeon master : main tujhe jaan se maar dunga (fire of thousand suns) dungeon master attack karne ki shuruwaat karta hai. Par isse pahle hi dark mage dungeon master ke piche teleport hokar usko apni energy beam se hit kar deta hai….aur dungeon master wahi behosh ho jaata hai.

Aur jab aankh khulti hai to dungeon master apne aap ko kaidi paata hai, wo bhi usi khandar ke tahkhaane me. Wo jaadui bedio se bandha hua tha.

Dark mage: ab tu mera gulaam hai mera kaidi hai, aur jab tak tu mujhe dusri duniayao ke portal khol ke dega, taaki main sab par jaake unpar raaj kar saku.

Dungeon master: mere pita ji kaha hai, tune kya kiya unke sath haramzaade.

Dark mage: us buddhe ko bhul jaa ab tu, ab tu bus meri seva karega, mujhe pujega

Dungeon master: hahahahaha, abe saale tujhe kon pujeja tujhe koi nahi jaanta idhar, tu kon hai, ye dunia khatam hone wali hai, isilie maine dusri dunia ka portal khola tha, aur ab tu is marti dunia ka raja banna chahta hai, jab yaha ke logo ko pata lagega ki mahamahim nahi rahe, unka bharosa bilkul uth jaaega, aur aise bhi koi bhi unke saamne aaya to usko wo jalakar maar denge

Dark mage: abe choti akal ke chuze, baap chala gya to kya hua beta to zinda hai, main raaj karunga ab teri ghatiya shakal hai mere paas, par fir bhi tujse accha dikhta hu, aur teri maa aur behan bhi zinda hongi is dunia me kahi, unhe dhund kar tere saamne unko maar dunga.

Dungeon master apni maa aur behan ka name sunta he ghabra gya: nahi unko kuch mat karna, nahi to main tujhe jaan se maar dunga.

Dark mage: agar unki sehmati chahta hai to mujhe dusri dunia ke portal kholne ki vidhi bata de, main tujhe chod dunga.

Dungeon master: aisa kabi nahi hoga, main usse pahle mar jaaunga

Dark mage: to marr saale idhar hi, saddta rah suvar ki trah….jab tak tu mujhe bataega nahi tu idhar hi kutte ki trah kaid rahega………….






Ab in sab baato ko 2 saal ho chuke the………

Dungeon master bedio me bandha hua apne aap ko kos raha tha, kyu usne wo plan socha ab uski wajah se agar kaise bhi karke ye dunia bach bhi jaae to dark mage is dunia par raaj karega aur apne zulamo se tabahi faila dega. Uski wajah se uski maa nahi rahi thi, uske pariwar ke kisi bhi member ko uski khabar nahi thi. Wo akela tanha bus apni aakhri saanse gin kar maut ka intezar kar raha tha. Uske dil me dard aur aag thi, jisse ya to wo khud ya fir dark mage dono me se ek ko jalana chahta tha.

Is dark mage shahi gharane me madira aur aurto ke beech ayaashi kar raha tha, mantri mandal bhi Rajkumar ke is roop ko dekhkar taajuub me the. Mahamahim ke jaane ke baad dark mage, jiska chehra hoobhu dungeon master se milta tha, raja ban gya tha. Mahamhim ki mirtryu ki khabar khud black samurai sabi mantrio ko di thi, sabko ye pata tha mahamahim dunia ko bachane ke lie ek vidhi ka aagman karte hue maut ko gale laga lia.

Idhar twin-flame pita ki maut ke baad bahut khookhar ho gyi thi, uske nirdayi roop ne uske dimag par kabja kar lia tha, use apne pita ki mirtyu aur us raat ki koi baat yaad nahi thi dark mage ne uski nirdayita ko dekhte hue use raaj darbaar sambhalne ke lie de dia tha, wo dark mage ka right hand ban gyi thi sab mantri usse darte the, aur wo jo bhi mantri uske khilaaf bolta twin-soul usko ya to maar deti ya fir usko maar maar ke mantri mandal se bahar kar deti.

Idhar 2 saal se demon samurai mahamahim ke raaj ko dil me dabae hue tha, aur raani-maa jo ki 2 saal se neend me so rahi thi, wo aaj amawas ka kaali raat ko jaag uthne waali thi, ye amaawas ki raat koi maamuli raat nahi thi, ye wo raat hai jisme sabi jaadugraniyo ki shaktiya 1000 guna badh jaati hai, aur aaj twin-flame ka janamdin tha, wo ab yuvaawastha me paripakh hone jaa rahi thi, aur iske sath hi use apne bi-polar character par poora poora control milne waala tha.

Jaise hi amawas ka kaali raat sabse Ghani hoti hai, raani-maa ki 2 saal se jaadui neend toot jaati hai. Wo beshak jaadui neend me so rahi thi, par usko apne aas pas ho rahi sab baato ka gyaan tha, uski neend jaise hi khulti hai to jaise poore raajya me jaadui lehar daud jaati hai, uski aankho me gusse aur dard ke aasu hote hai, jo na chahkar bhi uski aankho se nikal kar bah uthte hai, use apne pati ke sacrifice, apne bete ke bandhi hone ka aur apni beti ka maansik utpeedan, aur apne raajya ke logo ka dukh mahsoos ho raha hota hai. Par use pata tha abhi aasu bahane ka waqt nahi hai.

Same chiz, twin-flame ke sath bhi hui thi, use aisa lagta hai ki jaise wo ek gehri neend sa jaag uthi hai. Use sabse pahle us raat ki baate yaad aati hai, kaise wo, uska bhai aur maa ladai ke lie taiyaar ho rahe the aur uske pita ne usko behosh kar dia tha, aur fir usko 2 saal ke daruan uske doosre roop ke kiye hue bure kaam yaad aate hai, usko bahut gehra dard mehasus hota hai. Aur uski aankho me se aasu beh uthte hai.

Dark mage apni raat ki aiyaashiyo ko poora karke chain ki neend so raha tha, use in sab chizo ki bhanak bhi nahi thi.

Par itne lambe samay se chal raha ghinona atyachaar band hone waala tha.

Twin-flame apne kamre me roti Hui subak subak kar aasu Baha rahi thi, ki acchnak uske kamre ka darwaaja khula hai aur raani-maa daakhil ho jaati hai. Twin-flame apni najre uthakar apni maa ki traf dekhti hai Wo daud kar apni maa ke kadmo me gir jaati hai aur uski kamar ke charo aur hath daalkar rone lagati hai. Raani-maa apni beti ke Sundar chehre ki aur dekhti hai aur uske chehre par giri baalo ki lat ko uske kaan pe piche karke bolti hai

Raani-maa: bus beti, ab sab thik ho jaaega

Twin-flame (apne sir ko apni maa ke hath par dabate hue kahti hai) : par kaise maa, batao kaise thik hoga

Twin-flame ki aawaj me beinteihaa dard tha, jiska koi ant nahi tha.

Raani-maa: beti jaldi chalo, main tumhe samjhaati hu.

Raani-maa aur twin-flame dono, jaldi se jaha dungeon master kaid tha usi khandar ki aur chal padi. Raani-maa apne jaadu se khud ko aur twin-flame ko andrishy kar deti hai. Aur jab dono khandar pahuchate hai, to waha ke jyadtar pahredaar raat ko neend so rahe hote hai par fir bhi raani-maa khandar ke sabi pahredaaro aur jaildaar ko bhi apne jaadu se gehri need Sula deti hai, raat abhi kuch hi der me khtam hone wali thi, subah ki pahli Kiran nikalne ko thi.

Dungeon master bedio me bndha hua tha, uska chehra badi daadhi aur ghane bade baalo se bhara hua tha, uska bada majboot sharir bade bade choto aur nishano ke baad bhi kathor aur shaktishaali maloom hota tha, wo bhi bedio se Bandha halki jhapi le raha tha, parantu jaise hi usne kadmo ki aahat suni to usse bada achambha hua, uski aankho me aasu jhalak aaye the, kyu wo jaan gya tha ki ye koi nahi uski maa ke kadmo ki aawaj thi.

Kadmo ki aawaj jaldi se uske kaaragrah ki aur badh rahi thi. Sath me ek shaksh aur tha, jiske pair ki jutiya aawaj kar rahi thi.

Dungeon master se intezaar sehan nahi hota hai, uske man ki utsukta itni badh jaati aur uske chanchal man se, jo ki 2 saal se dukh aur dard se tadap raha tha, aawaj nikal uth ti hai.

Dungeon master: MAA!!!!

Raani-maa aur
twin-flame,
bhag kar uski karagrah ki aur jaate hai. Tino ka milan hota hai

Raani-maa: beta

Twin-flame: bhaiyaa

Raani-maa apne jaadu se karagrah ki salaakhe gaayab kar deti hai aur jhat se dungeon master ki bedia bhi gayab kar deti hai, dungeon master, jo ki do saal se dhang se chala bhi nahi tha, maa aur behan ko dekh kar unko aur bhag uthta hai.

Aur us kaale khandhar ke ek chote se karagrah me, ek maa aur dono bacche fir se ek ho jaate hai.

Tino thodi der tak rote hue, ek dusre ko kuch der tak gale lagaaye rakhte hai, fir thodi der me raani-maa dungeon master ke sir par hath rakh kar uske baalon ko sehlaati hai aur uske chehre ko pakad kar kahti hai. Beta tumhare papa ko wapis laane ka samay ho gya hai. Waqt aa gya hai ki poora pariwar wapis ek ho jaae.

Dungeon master: kaise maa, aap kya kah rahi hai.

Raani-maa: beta tumhare pita ko pahle hi pata tha ki kuch bura home wala hai, jaise hi dark mage is dharti par aaya to uski Shakti dekh kar unhe pata chal gaya tha use haraana naamunkin hai, par shayad kaali-poornima ke din, jo ki aaj hai, usko haraaya Jaa sakta hai, kyu ki meri Shakti wapis aur kaafi jyada ho chuki hai, aur twin-flame ki shakti ne yuva awasta ke baad pooran roop le lia hai. Ye ab pahle se kai guna shaktishaali ho gyi hai, aur isne apni bi-polar character par bhi kabu kar lia hai. Aur black samurai mehal me rahkar dark mage ki chokidaari kar raha hai, kuch bhi hone se pahle wo hume aagah kar dega, beta ab jaldi karo

Dungeon Master apni choti behan, twin-flame ki traf dekhta hai, use apni behan par bada naaz aur pyaar aata hai, dusri traf twin-flame jo ki pichhle do saal me kaafi badal gyi thi, uska sharir aur shakti dono hi kaafi taakatwar ho chuke the uske baal khule hue the, sunahre rang ke. Aur kapde bhi sunhare ho gye the, jo ki ak badi jaadugarni ki nishani thi

Dungeon master: maa main samjh gya. Thik hai. Par meri staff mere paas nahi hai.

Raani-maa mantra padhti thi, aur dungeon master ko pahle se bhi shaktishaali staff de deti hai. Dungeon jab staff ko apne hath me leta to usko apne sharir me pahle se bhi kai guna jyada shakti ka aabhaas hota hai

Dungeon Master: ye to pahle se bhi jyada shaktishaali staff hai

Raani-maa: ha beta iski zarurat padegi, ab jaldi se vidhi shuru karte hai.



Dungeon master ne jaldi se wahi vidhi shuru kar di, aur fir se aakash me ghor ghane baadal chaane lage aur bijli chamakne lagi, us dunia ke jaadu me jaise hi jaadui halchal honi shuru hui ki dark mage ki neend khul jaati hai, daaru aur nangi aurto ke beech wo apne Shahi kamre me tha, us kamre ka pahra black samurai aur khud Shahi senapati de rahe the.

Dark mage dhyan laga kar apni shakti se pata kar leta hai ki dungeon master ko kisi ne aajad kar dia hai (jaadui bedia dark mage ki thi, usi ki wajah se)

Dark mage andar se hi cheekh uthta hai: senapati, jaldi se sena ko taiyar karo.

Senapati aur black samurai, dono bahar se hi aawajj lagate hai, kya hua huzoor sab thik to hai.

Dark mage apne kapdo ko muskil se lapete hue bahar aata hai, saaf dikh raha tha ki wo niche se bilkul nanga hai

Dark mage: raajya ke bahar koi kaala jaadu kar raha hai, jo humare raajya aur is dunia ke lie khatra hai, jaldi se sena ko taiyaar karo. Tab tak black samurai tum humare sath chalo.

Dark mage ka plan tha ki wo sabse pahle jaake dungeon master ko aajad karne walo ko maar de, aur black samurai ek Shahi gaddi ka rakhwala jisko sab maante hai uski aakho me apni image positive bana le, taaki baad me poori sena aur raajya uske sath ho jaae. Jisse wo dungeon master ko bura aadmi, ek behrupiya karaar kar sake.

Dark mage aur black samurai, dark mage ke black dragon pe baithkar usi khandhar ki aur udd padte hai, Shahi sena kuch hi der me waha pahuchne waali thi. Isi beech black samurai ne telepathy se raani-maa ko message bhej dia tha ki dark mage ko pata chal gya hai.

Idhar dungeon master portal ko jaise hi kholta hai, use us portal me se drogon (fire dragon ), flamewings (fire phoenix) aate dikhte hai, aur flamewings par sawaar use apne pita mahamahim najar aate hai.

Drogon aur dungeon master ka rista bahut attoot tha, drogon bahut emotional ho gya tha, uski aankho se aasu (jo ki chote chote fire ke gole the) tapak rahe the. Sabse pahle drogon hi chota hokar, dungeon master ki traf udd padta hai aur uske poore badan par lipatt jaata hai, aur apni lambi jeeb se uske poore sharir ko chaatne lagta hai, dungeon master bhi drogon se gale lagkar bhavuk ho jaata hai, wo bhi haste haste drogon ko gale lagata hai. Drogon wooo, wooohhh grooorrr ki aawaje nikaal raha tha, isi beech dono ka pyaar dekh ke raani-maa aur twin-flame hass rahe the.

Dungeon master: bus bus, drogon, maine bhi bahut yaad kiya tujhe.

Flamewings zameen par jaise hi utarta hai aur Mahamahim flamewings se utar kar mudkar apne pariwar ko dekhte hai, raani-maa, twin-flame aur dungeon master sab mahamahim ki or daud padte hai. Sab ek dusre ko gale lagaate hai.

Dungeon Master - pita ji Hume maaf kar dijie, sab humari galti hai, humaari wajah se ye sab hua, hume Sikh mil gyi hai, aap sahi the.

Raani-maa, twin-flame, dungeon master sab chok jaate hai : KYAA!!!!

Mahamahim: Haa bete, hum galat the, tum aur tumhari maa sahi the. Tum sabse, pariwar se, apne raajya se, apne logo se itne din door rahkar hume ahasaas hua zindagi kya hai, pariwar kya hai. Aur ise surakhshit rakhna kyu zaruri hai. Sabse jyada maine apne pariwar se milne waali khushi, apne baccho ko yaad kiya, kaise tum bachpan me haste khelte the.

Twin-flame: sach papa

Mahamahim: ha meri bitiya (mahamahim twin-flame ko apni aur kheech kar uske maathe ko chum leta hai, aur twin-flame ke aankho se hata saaf karta hai)

Twin-flame: maine bhi aapko bahut Miss Kiya.

Dungeon master: accha, tu to 2 saal se Hell roop me thi, tujhe kya pata hai

Twin-flame: hell roop me zarur thi par mere angel roop ko bhi sab pata tha, ab dono ko kabi bhi control kar sakti hu.

Dungeon master: Ha dekh raha hu teri shakti kaafi badh gyi hai, pita ji main dekh raha hu aap ki shakti bhi badh gyi hai. Aap to pahle se do guna shaktishaali ho gye hai.

Mahamahim: beta us dunia ka sooraj humare sooraj se jawaan hai shaktishaali hai, isilie waha ka jaadu bhi shaktishaali hai, dark mage isi wajah se itna shaktishaali hai.

Dungeon master: par ab hum sabki shakti badh gyi hai, ab hum use Hara denge.

Drogon beech me : grroor rooore grrrooor (jaise wo bhi ladne ke lie bilkul taiyaar tha)



Flamewings apne pankh zor zor se fadfada kar apni sehmati de raha tha.

Mahamahim: bilkul hum is baar use Hara denge, chahe hume kuch bhi karna pade, par wo bahut hi hoshiyaar aur zaalim hai, hume use Kum nahi samjhna chahiye. Beta tumhari shakti sooraj se aati hai, tum doosri dunia ke sooraj se apni shakti badha lo, tumhe iski zarurat padegi.aur baaki sab taiyar ho jaao dark mage aata hi hoga

Dungeon master: ji pita jee main samjh gya.

Dungeon Apni urja bhadhaane lagta hai, par itne me hi dark mage waha aa jaata hai.

Dark mage aur demon samurai, dono black dragon par baithe hote hai,

Dark mage aur demon samurai, dragon se utarte hai, black dragon apni power dikhaate hue apne nostrils se aag fenk raha hai aur chinghaad raha tha. Aur isi beech mahamahim black samurai ko telepathy se message kar deta hai.

Dark mage jab dekhta hai ki mahamahim wapis aa gya hai to wo samjh jaata hai ki black samurai ke aage ab koi story nahi bana paaega. Aur isi beech demon samurai ek second ke andar apni talwar se dark mage ki gardan Par waar karta hai.

Dark mage ki gardan talwaar se cut jaati hai, aur sir dhad se alag ho jaata hai, dark mage ka sir door jaakar gir jaata hai aur dhad ke ghutne zameed par gir jaate hai aur waha laash ban kar uski gardan se skhoon banhne lagta hai. Demon samurai ko lagta hai ki dark mage mar gya, aur raani-maa, aur baaki logo ko bhi ek pal ka sukoon milta hai

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Achanak se hasne ki aawaj aati hai, to pata lagta hai.Dark mage ka kata hua sar door pada hai hota hai, aur usme se hasne ki aawaj aa rahi hoti hai.

Aur fir dhad aur sir dono dhua ban ke udd jaate hai, aur aasman me se hasne ki aawaj aane lagti hai.



Demon samurai, raani-maa, dungeon master, mahamahim aur twin-flame sab hairaan ho jaate hai.

Dark mage, black dragon ke kaan me chupa hota hai aur wo apna roop bada karke insaan ke size me aa jaata hai.

Dark mage: mujhe pahle hi is black samurai par shak tha, par main iska dimag kabi padh nahi paaya kyu ki ye apna dimag humesha shant rakhta tha. Koi nahi, ab jab Buddha gang wapas aa gyi hai, thode log jyada ho gye to kya hua, khoon jyada Baha dunga, aisa pahli baar to ho nahi Raha, hahahahahah (paagal ki tarah haste hue)

Mahamahim: tumhara khel khatam hua dark mage, agar apni jaan pyaari hai to apni dunia me wapis chale jaao.

Dark mage: buddhe mujhe Gyan dena band kar, teri sehat ke lie thik nahi hai. Us dunia me jaakar kya karunga waha ab mere lie kuch nahi hai, ye dunia ran birangi hai, acchi ladkia hai idhar. Aur tu to rah ke aaya hai udhar tujhe pata hai

Mahamahim: mujhe pata hai isilie main is dunia me tujhe kabi nahi rahne dunga, tu khooni darinda hai, jiske koi ussool mariyaada nahi, tu ek jallad hai ek taakat ka pyaasa aadmi hai tu. Tere jaisa aadmi raaj gaddi par nahi, jail me hona chahiye, bedia me bandha hua.

Dark mage: buddhe lagta hai tere Dil me bahut pyaar ban gya hai mere lie, koi nahi jyada der Zinda nahi rahega tu, tere dil ko teri chaati se nikaal kar uska khoon tere dono baccho ko pilaaunga.

Dungeon master: pita ji, aisa kya kiya tha isne us dunia me

Mahamahim: is haiwaan ne apne hi poore pariwaar ka katal kar dia tha, aur uski saari shaktiya chura Li thi, aur waha zabardasti raaja ban gya tha. Jab main waha gya to log hairaan ho gye aur jab maine unhe bataya ki main doosri dunia se aaya Hu to unhone mujhe iska kaala ghinona raaj bataya, maine waha 2 saal iske kaale raaj se ubharne me un logo ki sewa kari aur madad Kari.

Dungeon master, raani-maa, twin-flame, black samurai sab ye baate sun kar chounk gye, unhe apne kaano par wiswaas nahi ho raha tha

Dungeon master: Chee, koi insaan Aisa bhi ho sakta hai, itna neech gira hua.

Dark mage, pagal jaise haste hue: hahahahaha, tum jaise chote dimaag waalo ko kya pata hai. Pariwar, pyaar aur riste ye sab kamjor dimag ke insaan karte hai, ye sab aadmi ko baandh dete hai, kamjor kar dete hai, andar se khokhla bana dete hai. Aazaadi ka matlab in sab se mukht hokar hi aadmi ko samjh aata hai, jab maine apni maa, behan aur baap ko maara to unki cheenkho ko sunkar jaise aaatma mukht hi gyi, waise aazaadi mujhe kabi feel nahi hui thi. Main aazad ho gya tha, aur azaadi ke baad mujhe pata chala ki zindagi ka asli matlab aazad hokar hi samjh aata hai, aur rules me rahkar aadmi ka dimag kamjor ho jaata hai, aadmi machine ban jaata hai apne aap ko bhul jaata hai. Aur main ab sabko ye sikhaane yaha aaya tha, aur is chuze ko kaha tha ki mujhe bhi aise portal khol kar de taaki dusri dunia me jaakar sabko main ye sikhaau. Par shyad pahle mujhee tum sab ko maarkar is chuze ko samjhana padega ye. Hahahahaha hahaha (pagal ki hasi haste hue)



Dark mage apne aap ko 5 clones me divide kar leta hai. Uski urja se poora aasman kaala ho gya tha.

Dungeon master dark Mage ki aisi ghatiya ghinoni baate sunkar bahut gusse me aa gya hai, uska paara aasman Chu raha tha.

Dungeon master: apni bakwaas band kar, tu aaj Zinda nahi bachegi, tu kisi dunia ke kaabil nahi hai, tere sharir ka koi bhi hissa Zinda nahi rahna chahiye, tujhe jala kar khaak kar dunga main.

Dungeon master ek dum se attack kar deta hai (fire of raging sun): ek bada aag ka gola 5 clones ki traf teji se badh uthta hai.

Dark mage ka ek clone (shadow of moon) attack karta hai aur magic ki ek black ball dungeon master ke aatcck ko rokk deti hai.

Mahamahim: beta isne apne pariwar ki shaktiya sokh li thi, isilie iske paas humari sabki milakar shaktiya hai, isilie isko sab mil kar hi Hara sakte hai.

Dungeon master ka gussa aasman Chu raha tha, wo bahut garam ho gya tha.

Dungeon master: thik hai pita jee, par isse sirf main maarunga.

Dungeon master: aaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!

Dungeon master ke guuse ki wajah se uraja bahut badh gyi thi, uski staff ka magic bahut strong Ho gyi thi, ki uska rang aur dungeon master ke kapde golden rang ke ho gye the.

Mahamahim: sab taiyaar ho jaao.

Dark ke sabi clones ke paas raani-maa, twin-flame, dungeon master aur Mahamahim jaisi shaktiya thi.

Twin-flame (ice age): ek barf ki strike karti hai, aur poori dharti zam jaati hai, par dark mage apne attack (fire of raging sun) jo ki dungeon master ka attack tha usse ice age attack ko rok deta hai.

Demon samurai: (Song of devil) attack karta hai, par dark mage flame ki sword bana kar usko rokk leta hai. Aur teleport hokar piche se uski kamar par waar karta hai.

Demon samurai : aaahhhh!!!!

Raani-maa jab ye dekhta to wo waha aakar demon samurai ki madad karti hai

Raani-maa: apne mind se ek badi chattan uthakar dark mage ki traf maarti hai, par dark mage ka clone usko bhi Tod deta hai.

Mahamahim: dark mage ki asli urja ko mehasoos karo, uski asli uraja waale sharir par waar karo, clone se ladne ka koi faaeda nahi.

Dark mage : buddhe Tera dimag bahut jyada chalta hai, tujhe pahle khatam karta hu.

Dungeon master teleport hokar dark mage ke piche chala jaata hai: aur uski gardan pakad leta hai, aur bolta hai

Dungeon master: teri haisiyat nahi hai unse baat karne ki, tu gandagi ka keeda hai.

Dark mage ki gardan dungeon master ne dabochi Hui thi, aur dark mage ke pair hawa me the.

Dark mage haste hue: hahaha, ha aise hi paagalpan ki limits ko cross kar do, kitna accha hai na ye, aazad ho jaao

Dungeon master attack karta hai (solar shine) aur dark mage ke clone ko attack hot hota hai aur clone zameen me Dass kar blast ho jaata hai.

Aise hi dungeon master baaki ke clones ko bhi attack se khatam kar deta hai. Par asli dark mage chupa hua tha. Asli dark mage ne khud ko adrishya kar lia tha aur wo chip kar mahamahim ke piche chala jaata hai. Aur jaise hi piche se dark mage attack karne waala hota hai.



Mahamahim: kaayar humesha chip kar hi waar karte hai

Ye bolkar mahamahim apne staff se energy beam se dark mage par attack kar deta hai.

Dark mage: aaaaahhhhhhhhh

Dark mage ke kandhe par mahamahim ki energy beam lag jaati hai.

Dark mage: lagta hai ghee tedhi ungli se nikaalna padega.

Dark mage apne clones ko wapis bula leta hai, aur apna final attack shuru karta hai.

Dark mage apni is dunia ko alvida kah do tum ab :hahahahaha (Darkness of Black hole)

Dark mage ka attack itna shaktishaali tha ki uske chaaro ki light khatam ho gyi thi, khandhar ke chaaro aur bus andhera hi chaa gya tha, ek badi kaali energy ball jiska size ek paravat ke jitna tha, dark mage ne dungeon master ki taraf fenk di.



Dungeon master: main aisa nahi hone dunga, main kisi ko kuch nahi hone dunga.

Dungeon master apna counter attack karta hai, (Fire of raging sun)

Par dungeon master ka attack usko rok nahi paaya, tabhi raani-maa aur twin-flame Dungeon master ke paas teleport ho gye.

Raani-maa ne attack kiya (angelic shine of souls) aur twin-flame ne sath dete hue (Holy fire) attack kiya.

Par muskil se dark mage ka itna bada bhari attack ruk Raha tha.

Dark mage : hahahahahah, tumhari dunia me sab kamjor hai, aur tum aur tumhari kamjor dunia ko khatam karke main nayi dunia banaunga.

Mahamahim bhi dungeon master ke paas me teleport Ho jaata hai.

Mahamahim: aisa kabi nahi hoga, teri kaali kartute aaj tere sath khatam hongi.

Mahamahim attack karta hai. (Feirce light!!!!)

Mahamahim ke attack ke baad ek dum se energy ball wapis dark mage ki traf jaane lagta hai.

Itne me hi waha shaahi sena aa jaati hai, aur senapati dekhta hai ki dark mage se poora Shahi pariwar lad raha hai.

Aur wo sena ko wahi rukne ka aadesh deta hai.

Dark mage ka black dragon bhi drogon aur flamewings ke attacks nahi Bach paa raha tha.

Drogon ne apne panjo ko black dragon ke wings ko pakad liya tha aur uski gardan par jor se kaat liya tha, jisse kaafi saara khoon aur Maas drogon ne kaat liya tha. Saamne se black dragon ki chaati par flamewings me bhaari fire 🔥 wala attack kar dia. Iske sath hi black dragon zameen par Jaa gira

Idhar jab dark mage dekhta hai ki uska dragon kuch nahi kar paa raha hai aur uska energy ball uski taraf badh raha hai. Usne ek aur ghinoni chaal chali.

Dark mage: ye dragon bhi kisi kaam ka nahi nikla, sab mujhe akele hi karna padega, aur dekho to janta bhi aayi hai tamasha dekhne

Dark mage ne apni shakti badhane ki Sochi, dark mage ne apne black dragon ki urja kheechni shuru kar di, aur sath me poori sena se bhi kaale magic se urja khichni shuru kar di, aur jab laga ki urja kaafi ho gyi hai. Dark mage apna attack kar dia, apne magic se wapis badi kaali energy ball Push kar dia.

Is baar to uska attack badi hi tezi se dharti ki aur badh raha tha aur Mahamahim, dungeon master bhi mil kar kuch nahi kar paa rahe the.

Dungeon master: iska attack to bahut powerful hai pita ji, hume aur zor lagana padega.

Raani-maa: beta mujhe tumpar bharosa hai, tumhe is attack ko khatam karna hoga.

Twin-flame: bhaiya, main aapke sath hu.

Mahamahim: beta, iski shakti beshak jyada hai, par humare pariwar ke aapsi pyar ki shakti ko koi nahi hra shakta. Ab waqt aa gya hai, tum is pariwar ke mukhiya Bano, tum sambhalo sab.

Dungeon master: pita ji aap ye kya kah rahe, main kuch samjha nahi.

Mahamahim: tum sab samjh jaaoge, tumhari maa aur behan ka dhyan rakhna.

Ye kahte hi, mahamahim dungeon master, raani-maa aur twin-flame ko energy ball se door teleport kar deta hai.

Iske sath hi mahamahim, black energy ball ko apne andhar sokh leta hai, aur Mahamahim aasman me teleport ho jaata hai, jaise bahut bada dhamaka hota hai, poore aasman me light hi light ho jaati hai.

Aur jaise chote chote jugnu ki baarish si hone lagti hai, aur wo baarish dungeon master ke upar girne lagti hai.

Dungeon master: Pitaa ji!!!!!!!!! Nahi!!!!.

Dungeon master, zameen par ghunt tek kar ro raha hota hai.

Dark mage: hahahahahah, buddhe ka time aa gya tha, ek gya ab 3 baaki hai. Dark mage lagataar has raha tha

Dungeon master se ab bardaash se bahar ho jaata hai, wo gusse se aag babula ho jaata hai.

Use ek dum se apne pita ki aawaj sunai deti hai, ab mahamahim magical realm me tha

Mahamahim: beta ab sab tum par hai, meri saari shakti, buddhi aur takat tumhare anadar hai, tum sab kuch kar sakte ho, jo kabi main nahi kar saka, muje tum par naaj hai beta.Main humesha tumhare sath hu

Dungeon master: pita ji, main aapki legacy ko dil se laga kar rakhunga, aur koshish karunga ki sahi raste par chalta rahu.

Mahamahim: mujhe tum par bharosa hai beta, ab jaao is dunia ko bachao.



Dungeon master: tera khel aaj hi khatam karta hu main dark mage.

Dark mage dekhta hai ki dungeon master ki power kai guna badh chuki hai, use pata nahi chal paa raha tha ki wo kitna taakatwar hai, dungeon master ki shakti teji se badh rahi thi.

Dungeon master: tu dekh ab.

Dungeon master apne dher saare clones bana kar hawa me dark mage ko chaaro aur se gher leta hai

Dark mage ki hasi ruk jaati hai, wo Darr jaata hai, aur ghum ghum kar dekhne lagta hai

Dungeon master: tujhe bedio se, bandhano se dar lagta hai na. To ye le

Dungeon master magic se saare clones se dark mage ko magic bedio me kaid kar leta hai.

Dark mage ab har jagah se bedio se Bandha tha, aur hawa me tair raha tha.

Senapati, raani-maa, twin-flame, demon samurai aur Shahi sena, ye sab dekh rahi thi.

Ab dungeon master ke paas apaar shakti thi aur Mahamahim ki saari buddhi thi.

Dungeon master ne kai saare dusri dunia ke portal khol die. Aur waha ke sooraj urja lene laga hai.

Dungeon master: tujhe pyaar aur pariwar ki taakat nahi pata, dekh ye hai taakat pariwar ki(FIRE...OF…THOUSAND…..SUNS!!!!)



Dark mage: NAHI!!!!!!?!!!

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Ek badi fire Baal bedio me bandhe hue dark mage se jaakar takaraati hai, aur dark Wahi bhasam ho jaata hai, bedio se dungeon master dark mage ka magic apne andar shokh leta hai.



Iske sath hi dungeon master ladai Jeet leta hai, dark mage ke atyachaar aur jurm se sabko chutkaara milta hai, dungeon master ka pariwar, uska dragon drogon fir se harmony me apna jeevan shuru karte hai.

Dungeon master apni knowledge ka upyog karte hue, dusri dunia ke sooraj se apni dunia ko thik kar leta hai. Mahamahim ki yaad rakhte hue, wo apni behan ko dark mage ki dunia ko sambhalne bhej deta hai.Aur raani-maa raaj gharana sambhaalti haai, demon samurai humesha ki tarah raajgaddi ki pahredaaro karta hai.



Aur Dungeon Master aasha karta hai ki magical realm me balance bana rahe, Parr aap jab dusri duniao se ched chaad karte hai to sab kuch sahi kaise rah sakta hai, parr wo kahani kabi baad me.



Abhi ke lie…..



The End….
Jabardasttt Storyy thiii. Maza aagaya padhkee.

Hero ki soch toh achhi thi. Par uski yeh achhi soch ne bahot kuch bigaad diyaa. Multiverse ka portal open kardiya jiske madad se dusre earth se hero ka hi ek roop waha aagaya aur usne 2 saal tak hero ko kaidd kardiyaa.

Par aakhir mein jeet sachai ki hui. Hero ke parivaar ka phir se milan hua aur unhone milke villain ko maar giraya.

Isse ek chiz toh sikhne ko mili prakriti ke niyam se kabhi ched chaad nhi karni chahiye bhale hi aapka motive achha ho. Aur bahot baar achhe motive bhi musibat laa sakte hai.
 
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