★☆★ Xforum | Ultimate Story Contest 2022 ~ Reviews Thread ★☆★

[Lucifer]

Reviews posted on or before 12th March 2022 11:59 PM will be considered for Best Supporting Reader

 

[Sasha!]

प्रत्‍युत्‍पन्‍नमतिस्‍व by Lews Therin Telamon

I loved the theme, very suitable for anecdotes started as normal, Lews me kept on edge the whole time as I was searching the acme, the read was smooth and easy didn't mind the wait for the twist, and when it finally came, It caught me off guard. I had to do back and forth in the last part and see if I have missed anything or not. But honestly the end seemed a bit rushed. I understand what Lews wanted to do, but that could have been done in a better way, specially as I have read him before, I know he could.

But still he is a strong contender for the award imo. And that scene "A place that is so pure, so dirty and raw"

 

[Sasha!]

Love In Local Train Jaguaar

Jaguaar ne bilkul risk na lete huye ek simple si love story likhi hai, kahani ka narrative kafi simple hai aur padhne me koi dikkat nahi ayi. Do logon ke safar ki kahani hai, jo age jakar ek ho gaye. Short stories me ek twist ki chahat rehti hai, asha hai ki Jaguaar dusri story me wo iccha puri karenge

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

रुला दिया यार

Thank you Kala Nag bhai

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Bahot achche se samaj ko aina dikhati huwi behtareen kahani

Thank you Naik bhai for your lovely review

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Very nice story Sanju

Thank you Dr Rajizexy madam

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Meko rona bilkul bhi psnd nhi
Bahut hi emotional adami hu mai

Akhir samay tak dhakdhak bani rahi aur ant me aasu tpk gye
Etna drdnaak kahani .... judges plzz gibe this man all three awards

Koi kahani kitni bhi trill , comedy , well narrated aur achche dialog waali ho

Magar is story ka concept

Thank you DREAMBOY40 bhai for your lovely review

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

ये कैसी बिदाई । SANJU ( V. R. )

I really really got emotional while reading this. Aesi kahani ko compitition ke point of view se nap tol kar dekhna sahi nahi, aesi kahaniyan bas feel ki jaa sakti hai. Mera hamesha se manna hai ke sachmuch kuch godly hota hi hai maa me (sabhi maa me) ke wo sacrifice karne se pehle ek pal nahi sochti, koi bhi baat ho apne bacche ke sath hamesha khadi rehti hai. Wahi kabhi kabhi uske apne hi bacche use akela chhod dete hai, aur us pyar ka aur uparwale ki kripa ka apman karte hai jo maa ke taur par unke pass hai.

Kahani bilkul apki tarah hai Sanju ji, pure and heartfelt

Thank you Sasha! madam for lovely review Aap ne sahi kaha , Maa se badhkar kuchh nahi hai. Main thoda emotional type ka hu to emotional kahani post kar diya.
Waise previous year Thriller story post kiya tha.

 

[Sasha!]

DREAMBOY40

सबने रंगबिरंगे शर्ट डाले थे और पैंट के निचे चुन्नीगंज ,कानपुर के मशहूर वसिम दर्जी का सिला हुआ धारीदार जांघिया ।

Story funny hai, top to bottom Writting style acchi lagi, station to station kya hua wo parts me bataya hai. Lekin bas ek baat hai ki mai short stories me character introduction ko utna zaroori nahi samajhti, kahani ke sath sath kirdaron ke characters ubhar kar aye to jyada acha lagta hai mujhe.

Nice story 3D, enjoyed it

 

[DREAMBOY40]

DREAMBOY40





Story funny hai, top to bottom Writting style acchi lagi, station to station kya hua wo parts me bataya hai. Lekin bas ek baat hai ki mai short stories me character introduction ko utna zaroori nahi samajhti, kahani ke sath sath kirdaron ke characters ubhar kar aye to jyada acha lagta hai mujhe.

Nice story 3D, enjoyed it

Thanks for your fabulous revo ...
Chhota lekhak hu sikh raha hu ...

 

[Aagasthya]

Aagasthya

This story has a undeniable innocence, aesi kahaniyan ajkal koi sade man se likhta hi nahi. Obviously kahani me kayi jagahon par bohot better karne ka scope hai, like pata nahi kyun aese gap de de ke likha hai, paragraph me likhta na but am glad beasty ne koshish ki.

First off all thanks for the review..
Paheli galti too bhagwan bhi maaf karta h..
Haa mantaa hu kuch jagah loop tha..
Next time kuch naya aur kuch baithar try karenge..