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[Lucifer]

Reviews posted on or before 12th March 2022 11:59 PM will be considered for Best Supporting Reader

 

[Indian Princess]

Main kyaa hi kahu iss story ke baare mein. Koi shabd hi nhi hai mere paas. Agar MODs ki likhi hui story select hoti hai toh aapki iss story ko Top 3 mein se ek position jarur milega.

Kahani ka title kahani ke saath puri tarah match kiyaa. Aaj ka zamane mein Abhinav jaisa insaan milna bahot mushkil hota hai. Usne jis tarah se ek mentally unstable pregnant ladki ko sambhala woh wakai kabile taarif hai. Ek tarah se bola jaaye toh Abhinav aur Pari ek tarah se iss tarah judd gaye the ke unhe alag karna lagbhag asambhav thaa.

Yaha humhe Sheetal jaisi ladkiyan bhi dikhi jo sirf apne baare mein sochti hai. Ek ladki hoke dusri ladki ke dukh jo naa samjhe usse kyaa hi bola jaaye.

Aur last mein jo padha usse kisi ke bhi aankhon mein aansu aajate. Bahot hi dil dukhane wala part tha woh. Uss Mental hospital mein ek Pregnant ladki ke saath jis tarah se behave kiya gaya usi se pata chalta tha ke waha rehke hi Pari ki halat aur jyaada buri hogyi thi.

Aur phir uss hospital ke staffs ne Abhinav ke naam ka lalach deke phir se Pari ke saath balatkaar karne ki koshish usse yehi zaahir hota hai ke woh hospital kaisa hai. Pari 1 saal pehle bhaag gayi thi aur usse koi dhund nhi paaya yeh toh mujhe jhoot laga. Mujhe toh lagta hai unhone dhundne ki koshish nhi ki thi.

Last mein Pari ki dardnaak maut sach mein rula dene wala part tha. Agar maut ki jagah Pari aur Abhinav ka milan hojaata toh kahani ka end Happy hota. Sach mein bahot hi jabardasttt kahaniii thiii.

Thank you for this awesome review

Yeh padhkar khushi hui ki aapne story ki tareef ki, uske emotions ko samjha aur story me kamiyan nahi nikali.

This story is close to my heart, aur maine bas wahi likha jo maine feel kiya. Thanks for appreciation.

 

[Jaguaar]

Thank you for this awesome review

Yeh padhkar khushi hui ki aapne story ki tareef ki, uske emotions ko samjha aur story me kamiyan nahi nikali.

This story is close to my heart, aur maine bas wahi likha jo maine feel kiya. Thanks for appreciation.

Story wakai taarif ke kaabil thi. Aur mujhe koi kamiyaan dikhi hi nhii.

 

[Destiny]

Pari​

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Barasaat ki raat thi. Abhinav ek sunsaan sadak par gaadi chala kar ghar vaapas ja raha tha. Tej barish mein use samne ki sadak thik se dikhayi nahi de rahi thi, tabhi achaanak unse raaste ke bich mein ek ladki nazar aayi. Abhinav satark tha aur usne samay par par break daba dia. Us ladki ko halka jhatka laga aur woh gir padi. Abhinav turant gadi se utarkar use dekhne ke liye daud pada. Ladki behosh padi thi.


Abhinav ne use utha kar apni car mein bitha liya. Usne dekha ki wo ladki pregnant hai. Abhinav use lekar turant hospital pahuncha, woh ummid kar raha tha ki usne us ladki ko ya uske bachche ko chot nahi pahunchayi, agar aisa hua to woh khud ko kabhi maaf nahi kar payega. Doctor ne ladki ko apni dekharekh mein liya aur turant treatment shuru kar diya. Jald hi use hosh aa gaya.


Abhinav daud ke us ladki ke paas gaya. Use uski bahut chinta ho rahi thi.


"Aap thik ho?" usne poocha. Ladki ne koi jawab nahi diya, bas use ek khaali nazar se dekhti rahi.


Abhinav ne apna sawal doharaya, ladki phir bhi kuch nahi boli.


Kisi ne Abhinav ke kandhe par thapathapaaya aur kaha ki doctor usse baat karna chahte hai. Woh doctor ke kaksh mein chala gaya.


Doctor ne Abhinav se kaha, "Sir, kuch zaroori baat karni thi aap se. Is ladki ki umar lagbhag 20 saal hai lekin yeh ladki mansik roop se viklang hai aur shayad janam se hi aisi hi thi. Aur woh 6 mahine ki garbhwati hai. Humne usse uske parivaar ke baare mein poochhane ki koshish ki, lekin woh kuch bhi bata nahi paa rahi hai. Isake alaava, is ladki ke sharir par purani choton ke nishaan hai, jaise ki use maara peeta gaya ho. Yeh pregnancy bhi shayad zabardasti ke karan hui hai. Haalaanki, kuch mamooli kharonchon ko chhod kar aap ki gaadi se takaraane ke kaaran koi nuksaan nahi hua, aur uske bachche ko bhi koi nukasaan nahi hua hai."


Abhinav shanti se doctor ki baat sun raha tha. Use us ladki ke prati gahari sahaanubhooti thi. Usne kuchh der socha, ek gahari saans li aur kaha, "Main ek FIR darj karna chahta hoon."


Police jald hi pahunchi aur Abhinav aur doctor ke bayaan darj kie. Haalaanki ladki kuchh bhi bata nahi pa rahi thi. Abhinav ne police se anurodh kiya ki woh jald se jald uske parivaar ka pata lagane mein madad kare, aur un logon ko bhi jo uski is haalat ke liye jimmedar the.


Abhinav us ladki ke paas gaya aur uske bagal mein baith gaya aur halke se uska haath thama. Jaise hi usne use chhua, ladki ekdum se ghabra gayi, lekin Abhinav ne shanti se uska haath pakad kar uski or pyaar se dekha. Wo kafi der tak use dekhti rahi aur dhire-dhire shaant ho gai.


Doctor aur police is baat par charcha kar rahi thi ki, jab tak uske parivaar ka pata nahi chal jaata. Use kahan rakha jae.

"Yeh ek chhota shahar hai aur aas-paas aisi ladki on ko aashray dene ke liye koi achhi suvidha nahi hain" police nirikshak ne kaha, "yahaan se lagabhag 200 kilometer door padosi shahar mein ek NGO hai, lekin wahan humne pata kiya hai ki jagah khali nahi hai."


"Mujhe khed hai, lekin ham use hospital mein bhi nahi rakh sakate," doctor ne kaha.


"Agar aapki ijazat ho to, to main uske parivaar ke pata chalane tak use apani dekhabhaal mein rakhana chaahata hoon." Abhinav ne Inspector se kaha

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"Thik hai Abhinav ji," Inspector ne kaha, "Mujhe pata hai ki aap ek izzatdaar parivaar se hain, main kuch dinon tak uski dekhabhaal karane ke liye aap par bharosa kar sakata hoon."


Abhinav use apne saath le jaakar khush tha. Is nanhi Pari ko kuch dinon ke liye aashray dene ke liye uske ghar mein nishchit roop se jagah thi. Jab woh use apni car mein bitha ke ghar le ja raha tha, to usne use ek bachche ki jigyaasa ke saath car ki khidki se duniya ki sundarata ko nihaarate dekha. Shaayad woh lambe samay tak kahin band thi.


Jab Abhinav ke padosiyon se use apne ghar ke andar ek garbhavati ladki ko le jaate hue dekha to use padosiyon ne use buri tarah ghoor kar dekha, lekin usne paravaah nahi ki.


Abhinav us ladki ko ek aaraamadaayak kamare mein le gaya jise usne uske liye taiyaar kiya tha. Abhinav ne uske liye ek teddy bear bhi laya tha. Woh ladki teddy bear ko dekh kar bahut khush hui, use gale laga ke woh ek chhote bacche ki tarah hasne aur khelne lagi.


Abhinav use dekh kar muskuraya. Jab se woh usse mila tha, usne keval uska udaas, dara hua chehra dekha tha. use is tarah hansate aur khelate dekhkar uske dil ko sukoon mila.


"Pari" Abhinav ne use bulaaya.


Ladki ne Abhinav ki or dekha.


"Tumhaara naam Pari hai'' Abhinav ne uski or ishara karate hue kaha. Usne us ladki ko “Pari” bulane ka faisla kiya tha.


"Main Abhinav hoon." usne apni or ishara karte hue kaha.


"Abhinav kaho" usne jor dekar kaha. Use ise do baar doharaana pada, aur phir woh ladki "Abi ...aav" shabdon se joojhati hui boli. Abhinav use dekh kar muskuraaya aur use gale laga liya.


Abhinav use kuch khana diya, lekin usne khate khate apne upar gira diya. Pari ko ehsaas hua ki usne kuchh gadabad ki hai aur woh udaas ashrupoorn aankhon se kshama maang rahi thi. Abhinav use dekh kar muskuraya, use saaf kiya aur use bistar par sula kar chadar odhada di. Shaayad woh bahut thaki hui thi, woh turant hi so gai.


Abhinav ke darwaje ki ghanti baji. uski mangetar Sheetal aayi thi. Woh bahut gusse me thi.


"Main kya sun rahi hoon Abhinav? tum ek pregnant ladki ko ghar le aaye?" Sheetal ne gusse mein kaha.


"Hann sahi suna hai tumne," Abhinav ne kaha, "Mujhe uski dekhbhal karne ke liye tumhari madad ki zaroorat hai. Mujhe yakin hai ki ek ladki hone ke naate tum use behtar samajh sakti ho. Bechari ke saath bahot bura hua hai. Main bas kuch dinon tak uski dekhabhaal karna chaahata hoon jab tak ki uske parivaar ka pata nahi lag jaata."


"Uske saath bahot bura hua hai? Tumhe yeh sab kisne bataya? Usne khud? Ya tum us doctor ki har baat par yakeen kar rahe ho jo keval is pagal ladki se chhutakaara paana chaahata tha jaise uske parivaar ne kiya? Kya tumne socha bhi hai ki log kya kahenge? Hum jald hi shaadi karne wale hain, aur tumhara aisa karna na keval tumhare liye balki mere liye bhi sharmanaak hai."


"Mujhe nahi lagata ki kisi ki madad karne mein sharminda hone ki koi baat hai." Abhinav ne kaha.


"I am sorry lekin mujhe tumhara is ladki ko ghar laana bilkul pasand nahi aaya. Use kisi NGO mein bhej dete na. Use ghar kyon laen? Kya tumhein meri zara bhi parwah nahi hai?"


"Of course tumhari parwah karta hun Sheetal, I love you,” Abhinav ne kaha.


“Please ek baar aur soch lo Abhinav,” Sheetal ne kaha, “Hum ek samaaj mein rehte hain ... tumhe pata nahi hai ki log tumhare baare mein kya baatein kar rahe hain .."

Bas itna kehkar Sheetal chali gai.


Abhinav udaas ho gaya. Use ummid thi ki Sheetal uska saath degi, use ummid thi ki uska dil uske jaisa achha hoga. Woh duniya ki paravaah nahi karata tha jab use vishwas hota ki woh sahi hai. Usne bedroom mein jhaanka aur Pari ko chain se sote hue dekha. Woh uske baalon ko sahlate hue uske paas baith gaya.


Kuchh saal pahale ek durghatana mein Abhinav ne apne parivaar ko kho diya tha. Tab se woh apne ghar mein akela rehta tha. Woh hamesha kisi ke saath ke liye tarasta tha. Usne Pari ki aankhon mein jo bebasi aur akelaapan dekha, theek waisa hi akelapan woh apne pariwar ke bina mahasoos karta tha.


Ek samay tha jab uske paas kuch bhi nahi tha, kayi baar jab woh itna thaka hota lekin uska duhkh use sone nahi deta, kayi baar uska mann karta ki koi uske sir ko pyaar se tab tak sehlaye jab tak woh so nahi jaata. Sheetal ek achchhi ladki thi, saubhagya se usne jivan mein aisa dukh bhara daur kabhi nahi dekha. Abhinav ke jeevan ka yeh hissa tha jise woh kabhi samajh nahi payi.


Pari ki dekhabhaal ke liye usne ek nurse ko kaam par rakha tha jab woh kaam ke liye bahar jaata tha. Pari ek pyaari ladki thi, haalaanki uske aas-paas ke sabhi log use tiraskaar se dekhte the, phir bhi uske chehare ki maasoomiyat ko koi mita nahi sakte the. Usne Abhinav ke liye kabhi koi pareshaani nahi khadi ki. Woh chup chaap ghar ke chaaron or uska pichha karati aur ek kone mein khadi hokar use dekhti rehti. Woh jab bhi nazron se ojhal ho jata toh woh pareshan ho jaati thi. Abhinav aksar uske saath luka-chhupi khelta. Abhinav chhip jaata tha aur Pari use talaashti. Agar woh use nahi dhoondh paati to woh rone lagati aur Abhinav saamne aa jaata. Use dobara dekh kar woh khushi se chilla uthti.


Woh bahut dukhi hoti thi jab Abhinav kaam par jaata, lekin Abhinav hamesha vaada karta tha ki woh vaapas aaega aur uske lie kuchh laega. Aur woh hamesha Pari ke liye kuch na kuch laata tha, kabhi khilone, kabhi chocolate.


"Abi, abi ..." usne Pari ko khushi se pukaarate suna. jab woh dekhne gaya ki yeh kya hai, to usne khushi-khushi use apani aur Abhinav ki ek crayon drawing dikhai.


"Yeh to bahut sundar hai sweetie!" Abhinav ne kaha. Usne Pari ki us pyari si dawing ko sambhal ke rakha.


Kuch din beet gaye. Pari ko bhi Abhinav ka saath accha lagta tha. Woh har raat usko pariyon ki kahani sunata, aur woh un jaadu bhari kahaniyon mein kho jaati jo usne pehle kabhi nahi suni thi.


Ek raat Abhinav ne Pari ko apne phoole hue pet par hath rakhte hue use chup chaap rote hue paaya. Jaise hi Abhinav uske paas gaya, Pari ne use kasakar gale laga liya.


"Mujhe kya ho raha hai Abi? Mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai..." Pari ne aansoo bahaate hue kaha.


"Yahan ek pyara sa farishta hai'' Abhinav use dilaasa diya, "Jab uske aane ka samay hoga, tab woh farishta in duniya mein aayega aur woh tumhe sabse jyada pyaar karega. Aur tum phir kabhi akeli nahi rahogi."


"Sach mein?" Pari ne use aur bhi kasakar gale lagaate hue kaha, "mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai".


"Mat daro Pari, sab thik ho jaega" Abhinav ne ne uske maathe ko choomte hue kaha, "ab so jao, good night, sweet dreams."


Pari ko Abhinav ke ghar mein rehte hue ab lagabhag 2 hafte bit chuke the, lekin uske parivaar ka koi pata nahi chala. Lekin Abhinav ko is baat se koi fark nahi pada. Use Pari ka saath accha lagta tha. Lekin Sheetal ki naarazgi badhati ja rahi thi.


Ek shaam, Abhinav ke darwaje ki ghanti baji. Usne darwaja khola to saamne Sheetal khadi thi. Woh ek sundar si dress pehen kar taiyyar hui thi.


“Tum phone kyu nahi utha rahe the?” Sheetal ne gusse se kaha.


Abhinav ne phone check kiya to silent par tha. Sheetal ke 12 missed calls pade hue the.


“I am sorry phone silent par tha,” Abhinav ne kaha, “Waise tum itni taiyyar hokar kaha ja rahi ho?”


“Aaj shaam tum mujhe candlelight dinner par le jaane waale the! Bhool gaye?” Sheetal ne gusse mein chillate hue kaha.


“I am so sorry Sheetal,” Abhinav ne kaha, “Darasal, Pari ko subah se bukhar tha isliye main uski dekhbhaal kar raha tha, isiliye mujhe yaad nahi raha. I am really sorry.”


Yeh baat sunte hi Sheetal ne apna aapa kho diya. “Pata nahi is pagal ladki ke peeche aise kya deewane hue ho ki apne mangetar ke saath plan ki hui date bhool gaye.”


“I am really sorry Sheetal,” Abhinav ne shanti se jawab diya, “Lekin sirf ek baar, keval ek baar, apne baare mein sochna band karo aur Pari ke baare mein socho ki woh kaisa mahasoos kar rahi hogi. Aur woh yahan jyada dinon tak nahi rahne wali hai."


"Uske baare mein kya sochna hai? Na shakal hai na akal hai is randi ke paas aur mere mard pe doore daal rahi hai," Sheetal Pari par chillai.


Pari uska gussa dekh kar dar gai aur phoot-phoot kar rone lagi. Usne Abhinav ki or dekha aur kaha, "Pari... sorry.."


Abhinav ne use gale lagaya aur use dilasa dene ki koshish ki. "Mat ro sweetie, tumhe sorry kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai, yeh tumhari galti nahi hai."


"Uski galti nahi?" Sheetal chillai, "Jis tarah se tum uski parwah karate ho, mujhe lagta hai ki shayad yeh bacha tumhara hai ... tumne is mandbuddhi randi ko chod kar pregnant kar diya aur ab usse pyaar ho gaya."


"Bas Sheetal!" Abhinav chillaaya, "Is bechari ladki ko apna naam tak nahi pata, isko yeh bhi nahi pata ki uske saath kya ho raha hai..woh bas itna jaanti hai ki woh bahut dard mein hai... yeh sharm ki baat hai ki tum use samajhne ki koshish bhi nahi kar rahi ho. Mujhe sach mein lagta tha ki tumhare seene mein dil hai, main sach mein tumhe pyar karta tha Sheetal, maine socha tha ki main tumhare saath sab kuchh saajha kar sakta hoon, ... maine socha tha ki tum mujh par vishwas karogi, mujhe lagta tha ki is lachar ladki ke liye tumhare dil mein bhi pyaar hoga...aur yahaan tum kitani gandi baatein kar rahi ho...mujhe khushi hai ki main tumhara yeh roop bhi dekh saka... main ab tumse koi baat nahi karna chahta. Bas chali jao Sheetal."


Sheetal chali gai. Pari abhi bhi uski baanhon mein kaanp rahi thi. Woh bahut dari hui thi. "Please mujhe saza nahi dena...bahut dard…saza nahi…" usne darr se kaampte hue bola.


Abhinav ne uski aankhon mein dekha. Woh keval bhay aur laachaari dekh sakta tha. ‘Koi rakshas hi hogi jo itni pyari ladki ko saza dega’ usne socha.


Mansik roop se vikshipt man jo apna naam tak yaad nahi rakh sakta, saza yaad rakhta hai...kitni dardanaak thi uski kahaani? Usne use apni baahon mein utha liya aur bistar par le gaya. Woh uske bagal mein baitha raha jab tak woh so nahi gai.


Abhinav ki nazar uske drawing book par padi jo uske bistar ke paas padi thi. Usne woh drawing book khola to hairan reh gaya. Kuch bhayank se drawing bana rakhe the uspe Pari ne crayon se. Sabse pahle drawing mein qabar mein ek mrit ladki thi jis ke sir mein chaakoo phansa hua tha aur ek aadami qabar ke upar ek ped pe lage hue fande se latak raha tha aur paas mein khada ek bachcha bebas hokar dekh raha tha. Doosre drawing mein ek teddy bear tha jiske chaaron taraf khoon laga tha. Ek chitr mein bina naakhoonon vaala ek kata hua haath dikhaya gaya. Ek andhere kue ki drawing thi jisme bahut saare bachhe doobte hue dikhai de rahe the, ek ladki drawing thi jiski skin poori tarah se nili thi, ek chitr mein ek pinjare ke andar tooti pankhudiyon wala ek phool tha, agli drawing mein raakshasi praaniyon se ghiri ek tooti hui gudiya dikh rahi thi, aur ek panna poori tarah se kaale rang se ranga gaya tha. Abhinav in chitron ka arth jaan na chahta tha, Pari un drawings ke maadhyam se kuch kehne ki koshish kar rahi thi, lekin kuchh bhi spasht nahi tha.


Agle din Abhinav ko police ka phone aaya. Police waalon ko pata chal gaya hai ki Pari kahan se aayi hai. Woh ek mental hospital tha. Abhinav police aur Pari ke saath wahan pahuch gaya. Jagah ko pehachante hi Pari chikhane-chillaane lagi, lekin karmachaariyon ne jaldi se us par kaaboo pa liya aur use le gaye.


"Yahaan panjikrt uska naam Ragini hai," wahan ke psychiatrist ne police ko bataaya. "use ek anaathaalay se yahaan bheja gaya tha. Woh bahut hinsak bacchi thi aur aksar doosre bachchon ko chot pahunchati thi. Woh “Intermittent Explosive Disorder” se pidit hai, woh jyadatar samay shaant rehti hai lekin jab uttejit hoti hai to woh bahut khataranaak ho sakati hai."


"Kya bakwas hai yeh!" Abhinav ne gusse me kaha, "Woh theek se bol bhi nahi sakti aur aap kah rahe hain ki woh khatarnak hai? Sabase pahale yeh bataiye, uski is halat ke liye kaun jimmedar hai? main chahata hoon ki us kamine ko abhi giraftaar kiya jaye!"


"Mujhe afsos hai ki us vyakti ka pata lagana mushkil hai. Woh yahan ka aadmi nahi ho sakta kyonki Ragini ek saal pahale yahaan se bhaag gayi thi. Yeh rahi police mein darj ki gayi report ki copy. Humne use khojne ki bahut koshish ki lekin uska kuch pata nahi chala, koi nahi jaanata ki woh is dauran kahan thi. Ho sakta hai ki us dauran kisi ne uske saath zabardasti ki ho, sirf Ragini hi hume bata sakti hai ki vaastav mein uske saath kya hua tha," doctor ne kaha.


Achanak, ek aadami ke jor se chikhne ki aawaz aayi. Khatarnak roop se ghaayal ek staff zameen par gira pada tha. Sabhi log use dekhane ke liye pahunche. Pari ke haath mein jang lagi kil thi, jisase usne us aadami ki aankh fod di thi. Woh gusse se kaamp rahi thi, uski aankhen khoon se laal thi. Pari ki is hinsak harakat ko dekhkar Abhinav hairan reh gaya. Jaise hi Pari ne Abhinav ko dekha, woh shaant ho gayi gai aur phoot-phoot kar rone lagi. Usne khoon se lathapath kil ko gira diya aur Abhinav ke paas daudi aur use kasakar gale laga liya.


"Pari ko yahan mat chhodo ...bahut buri jagah ..." usne aansoo bahaate hue bhikh maangi.


Abhinav ne dari hui Pari ko gale laga liya. Use doctor ki baaton ki parwah nahi thi, usne jo dekha us par vishwas bhi nahi kiya...use sirf apni Pari, uski maasoomiyat aur pavitrata par vishwas tha.


"Humein ab jaana chaahiye, Mr. Abhinav," Police Inspector ne kaha, "Woh maanasik roop se bimaar hai, use ab isi hospital mein rehna hoga."


"Main use yahan nahi chhod sakata...main chahta hoon ki woh mere saath rahe.." Abhinav ne kaha.


"Mujhe khed hai, lekin adaalat aapko use ghar le jaane ki anumati nahi degi kyon ki woh khataranaak roop se bimaar hai. Woh samaaj ke liye khatra hai. use yahaan rehna chaahiye aur ilaaj karaana chaahie. Halanki aap usse milne aa sakte hain," Inspector ne Abhinav ko samjhaya.


Bhaari man se Abhinav ne Pari ko jaane diya. Jaise hi woh jaane ke liye muda, woh jor se chillai aur use kas ke gale lagaya.


"Please mat jao..." Pari gidgidate hue boli. Uski pakad itani mazboot thi ki uske naakhoon Abhinav ki tvacha mein dhas kar khoon nikalne laga. Lekin Abhinav mehasoos kar sakata tha ki Pari ka dard usse kahin adhik tivr tha. Woh wahin sthir aur avaak khada raha aur hospital ke karmachaariyon ne Pari ko khinch kar Abhinav se alag kar liya. Jab woh apni poori taakat ke saath sangharsh kar rahi thi to Abhinav ne ne bas ashrupoorn nazron se use dekha.


Ek nurse ne Pari ko injection lagaya aur woh behosh ho gati. Us mental hospital mein kayi pinjare the jahaan paagalon ko jaanavaron ki tarah rakha jaata tha. Un pinjaron mein se ek mein uski Pari behosh padi thi. Uske haath aur pair zanjeer mein jakde hue the taaki woh khud ko ya kisi aur ko chot na pahuncha sake. Woh bahut maasoom lag rahi thi. Abhinav ne ashru bhari nigaahon se uski or dekha. Uske dil maan hi nahi raha tha ki Pari kisi ko chhot pahuncha sakti hai. Lekin uske paas wahan se jaane ke alawa koi chara nahi tha. Woh apni car mein baitha aur bhaari man se wahan se chala gaya.


Mental hospital mein jab injection ka asar chala gaya, Pari ne bechain hokar Abhinav ka naam pukaarane lagi. Magar woh anjaan thi is baat se ke kitne log us par buri nazar banaye hue the.


Darwaja khula aur 2 adami uski cell mein ghuse. Woh achaanak shaant ho gayi.


"Pari kyu ro rahi hai?" woh log haste hue bole, "Pari ko Abhinav ke paas jaana hai?”


Pari dar se kaamp rahi thi. Lekin woh Abhinav ke paas jaana chahti thi. Unse haan mein sir hilaya. "Hum tumhe uske paas le chalenge, chalo hamare saath chup chaap aao."


Pari donon aadmiyon ke saath chup chap chal di.


Ve use sidhiyon se niche ek andheri jagah mein le gaye. Pari andhere se nahi darati thi, use isaki aadat thi. un logon mein se ek ne achaanak use piche se pakad liya aur uske munh ko jor se daba diya taaki woh chilla na sake. Woh keval kamajor roop se virodh kar sakati thi, woh bahut thaki hui thi. Unme se ek aadmi ne use farsh par leta diya aur uske saath zabardasti karne laga. Pari ke paas ladane ya chikhane ki takat hi nahi bachi thi. Uski garbhaavastha ne use kamjor bana diya tha. Usne bas apani aankhen band kar aur Abhinav ke baare mein sochne lagi, Abhinav ke saath bitae samay ki khoobasoorat yaadein shaayad uske jivan ke ekamaatr khoobasoorat pal the.

Abhinav ka khayal aate hi usme mann mein ek umeed jaag uthi. Pari apni poori takat se phir ladhne lagi. Use paas pada ek lohke ka sariya mila. Usne woh uthakar us aadmi ke sar pe de mara. Usne itni takat se maara ki woh aadmi wahin mar gaya. Phir bhi pari ne us aadmi ke mrit sharir par itne vaar kiye ki ab uska chehra tak pechana nahi jaa raha tha. Phir Pari gusse se doosre aadmi ki ooar badhi. Uska hinsak roop dekh kar doosra aadmi gharbra kar wahan se bhag gaya.


Pari bahar nikalne ka raasta khojne lagi. Us hospital ki ke chaaron or ghana jangal tha. Lekin woh bina dare, raat ke andhere mein jungle ki taraf chal padi. Achanak tej barish hone lagi aur Pari baarish mein poori tarah bheeg gayi, lekin Abhinav tak pahunchne ke liye woh kuch bhi seh sakti thi, kisi bhi haalaat se ladh sakti thi. Abhinav shaayad woh ekamaatr aadami jisane kabhi use pyaar diya. Raat ka andhera gehrata gaya aur thand badhti gayi, lekin Pari Abhinav ka naam chillaate hue baarish mein chalati rahi.


Abhinav abhi bhi tez baarish mein apni gaadi chala raha tha. Woh Pari ko bhool nahi pa raha tha. Uske dil ne baar-baar Pari ke baare mein suni hui har baat par vishvaas karane se inakaar kar diya. Bechaari ladki...anaathaalay mein pali-badhi... kya uska parivar kabhi tha? Kya kuch bura hua unke saath? Ya shaayad uska parivaar ne use bojh samajhkar kahin chhod diya…Abhinav ko shak tha ki anaathaalay mein uski thik se dekhabhaal bhi ki gayi ya nahi, aur phir mental hospital - uske jaisi pyari si ladki ke liye itani darawni jagah .


Pari ke baare mein sabhi alag alag kahaniya bun rahe the, lekin Abhinav ne keval us kahaani par vishwas kiya jo Pari ke sharir par ghav ke nishaan aur uski aankhon ki maasoomiyat ne batayi thi. Pari ne jo drawing banaye the, ve ab use samajh mein aa rahe the, woh use apni dardanaak kahaani batane ki koshish kar rahi thi. Ek ladki jis par itne julm hue, jise maara pita gaya, bhookha rakha gaya hai aur zabardasti ki gayi, usse pratikriya karane ka bhi haq nahi hai? Uske gusse ko “Intermittent Explosive Disorder” keh ke kharij kar dena kitna krur hai!


Abhinav ne apne gusse par kaaboo paane ke liye sangharsh kiya. Woh yeh soch kar sihar utha ki Pari ka us mental hospital mein kya haal hoga. Abhinav apne dil ki gaharai use woh saara pyaar aur dekhabhaal dena chaahata tha jiski woh hakadaar thi, lekin woh asahaay tha. Unse apne dil mein ek dardnaak khalipan mehsoon kiya. Usne apni bebasi ko kosa, aur shaayad apne zindagi mein pehali baar woh apne bhagavaan se naaraaj tha.


Pari usi bhagavaan se bhikh maang rahi thi ki woh use Abhinav ke paas le jae lekin shaayad uski aavaaj itani kamajor thi ki unke kaanon tak nahi pahunch saki. Pari ab itni thak chuki thi ki, woh gili mitti par gir gai, kamajor aur bhookhi, thand mein kaampti hui, phir bhi Abhinav ka naam leti rahi. Woh uske pyaar, uske saath ke liye bahut tarasti rahi, lekin berehem thand ne dhire-dhire uski jaan le li.

Pari jaisa naam vaisa hi masoom aaur bholi abhinav ko pari ki aankho me dhikha. Sirf dikha hi nehi saath rahkar mahsus bhi kiya.

Akaki jivan jine ka dard sirf vohi samjh sakta hai jisne jiya ho. Abhinav jiya tha isliye ahsas kar paya ki ekaki jivan jine ki pidha kya hota hai.

Samjh ke kurroopit hone ka bada hi manoram dress darsaya gaya ek masoom ladki pari ne na jane kitna kuch jhel na jaane kiti padtadnaye use diya gaya. Aor chup chap pari sahti re rahi jab virod karne lagi to usske virod ko bimari ka naam de diyaa gaya.

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Pari jaisa naam vaisa hi masoom aaur bholi abhinav ko pari ki aankho me dhikha. Sirf dikha hi nehi saath rahkar mahsus bhi kiya.

Akaki jivan jine ka dard sirf vohi samjh sakta hai jisne jiya ho. Abhinav jiya tha isliye ahsas kar paya ki ekaki jivan jine ki pidha kya hota hai.

Samjh ke kurroopit hone ka bada hi manoram dress darsaya gaya ek masoom ladki pari ne na jane kitna kuch jhel na jaane kiti padtadnaye use diya gaya. Aor chup chap pari sahti re rahi jab virod karne lagi to usske virod ko bimari ka naam de diyaa gaya.

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Buree Qismat! Phir bhi too milee​

Prabhuuuu…

Kya moosibat hai abhi abhi market se aaya. Aate hi phir se bulava aa gaya. Ghar me chhota hona bhi kisi majadur se kam nehi bas paise nehi milta baki sabhi kam sirf do waqt ka khaana de'kar karwa liya jata hai.

"Prabhuuu kaha rah gaya ek baar bulane se sunai nahi aata"

"Aaya didi bas ek minute ruko."

Ittephaak ya buree qismat se mai iss ghar me paida ho gaya. Pida hua vo badi baat nahi insaan to kahi par, kisi bhi ghar me paida ho sakta hai. par mera kissa doosra hai. Mai Ghar me sabse chota hoon to jo bhi mujhe bulata hai. oopar wale ki tarah turant hi unka kalyan karne ke liye prakat hona padhta hai. To didi ne bulaya aor mujhe prakat hona hi pada.

"Ha didi bolo kuch kaam tha jo apne inte respect de'kar bulaya."

Didi...respect aor tujheee! Bata kya kar raha tha phir se game khelne lag gaya tha. Bulau ma ko maaaa….

Mai turant action me aaya aur didi ke muhn par hath rakh'kar muhn band kar diya phir bola...kya karti ho phir se peetwana chahti ho. Aabhi aabhi market se aaya hoon do pal chain se baith bhi nahi paya ki aap'ne bula liya.

Umhuuu umhuuu ki kuch aawaj aaya to dekha didi kuch bolna chahti hai par muhn to band hai. Bina muhn khole kuch bol nehi sakti thi. Vaise muhn band hi theek hai muhn khulte hi na jaane kya kya bol de agar nehi khola to meri samat aani tay hai. Maa ko kaun see ulti sidhi patti padha'kar meri peetai ka pura pura bandobast kar degi. Isliye majboor ho'kar muhn se haath hatana hi pada haath hatate hi

Didi...tune mere muhn par haath kaise rakha ruk abhi maa se sikayat karti hoon phir dekh lena maa tera kya haal karti hai.

Didi ki baat sun mujhe maa ki peetai yaad aa gayi baap re chappal jhadu bartan jo bhi haath ke paas mila use se meri dhunai suru, maa ki aprtim dhunai yaad aate hi chal beta pakad le didi ke pavo aagar nehi khani hai ma se dhunai. Kud se bol'kar didi ka pavo pakad liya phir bola sorry didi aage se aisa nehi karunga aap maa ko mat batao.

Mera barah baja hua sakal dekh didi khilkhila kar hans diya. Unko hasnste dekh mai samjh gaya, aaj ke liya bala tal gaya. Bas itna hi khafi tha mere bujhe chehre ko phool ki tarah khilane ke liye. Didi ke dekha dekhi mai bhi muskura diya. Didi ko na jane kiya sujha unhone mere style se kadhe aur shine karte huye balo par haath phera phir kichan ki aor chal diya.

Mai seer jhatak'kar bikhre balo ko sahi kiya phir uthkar khada ho gaya. Mera khada hona bhi kisi apriy ghatna se kam nahi maa room se bahar aa rahi thi mujhe khada dekh maa boli...Khada rahne ke alawa tera koyi kaam nehi hai ja kuch kaam kar le nnikammmm.

Sala meri koyi ijjat hi nehi hai. sabhi kaam mai hi karu aor nikamma bhi mai hi kahlaun. Khair jo bhi ho yehi sach hai. Maa ki aawaj sun didi ek katori le kitchen se bahar aayi. Didi ke Haath me katori dekhte hi mera haath aap'ne aap pet par pahuch gaya phir mai pet ko sahlane laga. Bhukh badi joro se laga tha. Subha se kuch khaya peeya nehi bas sabhi ka kalyan kiye jaa raha hoon.

Didi paas aa'kar boli...le prabhu ja tommy ko dhudh de'kar aa.

"Kyaaaa? Sabhi kaam prabhu kare aor doodh tommy piye. Bhala ye kya baat huyi?"

Maa...tujhse jayada kaam tommy karta hai. Din Raat ghar ki rakhbali karta hai. aur tu ghode bech'kar sota hai. Ja jaldi se tommy ko doodh de'khar aa nahi to...shashiii jhadu la to jara.

Bas jhadu ka naam lena hi mere liye kaphi tha turant doodh ki katori liya phir chal pada tommy ki dene, tommy ke paas pahucha to tommy mujhe aise ghurne laga jaise mai haddi ka tukda hoon. kabhi bhi mujhe lapak le phir mera boti boti noch dale. Kahir doodh ki katori samne rakte hi tommy jeebh ko muhn ke charo aor phira'kar chapaddd chapaddd aawajo ki sama bandh diya. Ye dekh mai bola...pee pee ji bhar'ke pee yahan baithe baithe subha se na jane kitni katori doodh pi gaya hoga. ek mai hoon subha se kaam pe kaam kiye ja raha hoon kisi ne roti tak ko na puchha.

Mera bolna shayad tummy ko pasand nehi aaya. Ghunnn ghunnn ghurrane laga. Ye dekha mai bola...ab kya tu bhi maa se sikayat kar mujhe pitwana chahta hai.

Mere bolte hi tummy bhaunnn bhaunnn bhaukne laga. mai seer par pair rakh'kar bhaga seedha room me jakar rooka. Do teen gahri sans liya phir darwaja band kar baith gaya. Kuch der baitha raha jab kisi ki koyi ahat nahi hua. Mai samajh gaya tommy ki sikayat kisi ke kano tak nehi pucha bas phir karna kya tha mobile uthaya aur insta par hoty hoty ladkiyo ki reels dekhne lag gaya.

Singal banda kar bhi kya sakta hai. Khud ki hai nahi isliye dusre ki itam dekh dekh kar man bahla leta hoon par lagta hai aaj qismat kisee gahre khadde me jakar, dubak'kar baith gaya. Suru ke kuch reels mast aaya uske bad ool jhulul reels aane lag gaya. Jise dekh'kar mera matha hi binna gaya isliye insta ko quit kar diya.

Khali baithna mujhe gawara nahi time pass karne ke liye kuch na kuch karna hi tha to game open kiya vohi game jisne na jane kitno ke raato ki nind ooda rakha hai na jane kitno ke deen ka chain chhin rakha hai. Na jaane kitne lovers ka breakup karba diya aur singal banda is ummid se khelta hai ki koyi rendom team mate mile jo ladki hon phir use impress karke dost bana le.

Mai bhi isi ummid se game start kiya par meri buri qismat kaho ya ittephaak mere sabhi team mate ladka hi nikla. Khair jo bhi ho inhi team mate ke saath game khelna hi tha. To safe jagah dekh'kar ek roof top par ootra ootarte hi jo najara dikha meri to bachhe hi khila gaya. Aisa laga pura server mere paas hi land kar gaya. Barhaal jo bhi ho phataphat gun dhundhne lag gaya. Par buri qismat yahan bhi picha na chhoda jis ghar me gaya bas katta aur short gun hi haath laga.

Man hi man ji bhar ke krfton ko gali diya bc game me itne shandaar ghar bana diya kuch jayada guns rakhne me tumhare jeb par dhanka pad raha tha ya phir mere se hi kuch khas dosti hai. Barhaal jo bhi mila usi se panga lena theek samjha ek aadh ki peti banakar usse loot pura kar lunga ye soch'kar enimi dhundhne lag gaya.

Enimi milte hi, jaise hi shoot karne wala tha. Mobile ka ringtone "mera babu mera sona" baaj ootha aur mai sadme me chala gaya hua to hua kiya. Man kiya mobile ko patak doon par aisa nahi kar paya kyuki nukshan mera hi ho jata bada haath paov jod'kar mobile liya tha. Nikamma jo tha.

Kahir ring baj'kar apne aap Cut gaya. phir samne jo dikha vo dekh'kar call karne wale par bahut gussa aaya kyuki jiski peti mai banana chahta tha. Vo hi mera peti bana'kar chala gaya. Ek baar dubara call aaya mai bhadak kar call receive kiya phir bola...sale villan game kelte waqt hi tujhe phone karna hota hai kuch der rook nahi sakta tha.

"Mera naam villan nehi bilaal hai kam se kam mera naam to theek se liya kar. Sale mujhe sapna nehi aaya tha ki too game khel raha hai."

"Bol kis liye phone kiya"

Bilaal...are ek party me jana hai. Saath me chal de akele janne ka man nehi kar raha hai.

Party ki sunte hi mera man kaha khaanaaaa dawake khaunga phir jeebh ko hoto par phira'kar bola...kab jaana hai.

Bilaal...rady ho ja mai thodi der me tere ghar par aata hoon.

"Theek hai jaldi aa aor sun chaurahe par hi milna ghar aaya to maa aur didi ko bad me pata chlega tummy ko pahle khabar ho jayega phir mere saath dusri party enjoy karna."

Bilaal...na mujhe vo praty enjoy nahi karna chal rakhta hoon too chaurahe par mil.

Phone rakh'kar mai mast party look me taiyar hua deo veo mara phir chupke se room se nikl'kar bahar aaya mujhe dek'har tummy bhaukne lag gaya jab tak maa aur didi Room se nikal'kar aati tab tak mai ghar se bahar nikal gaya.

Kuch hi waqt me chauraha par pahuch gaya. Thodi der mujhe wait karna pada tab bilaal aaya aate hi mai bhadka...mai kab se wait kar raha hoon. tu aab aa raha hai. Itna let kyu kiya?

Bilaal...are are bhadak kyu raha hai chal jaldee baith nehi to aor let ho jayenge.

Bilaal ke kahte hi mai bike par oochhal kar baith gaya thoda saa balance dagmagaya par bilaal ne samhal liya

mere sapno ki rani kab aagi

Chali aa aa too chali aa. …

Dhun gungunate huye chal diya. Bilaal mera besura gana sun bola…itna besura gana gayega na to rani nahi bhoot aayega phir uske saath bhoot bhoot khelana khiii khiii…

Kar hasne laga mai ek thapli jama'kar bola… sale dekh lio jis din meri qismat chamkegi us din sach me ek rani hi mere life me aayegi.

Bilaal…han han dekh loonga kaun si rani aati hai. Khiii khiii

Dost bhi mera mazak ooda raha tha kahne ko kuch bacha nahi to chup chap baitha raha. Kuch waqt bad ek jagah ham pahuche vahan ka najara bada hi sandaar tha. Har taraf raunak hi raunak dikh raha tha. Ladke to the par unhe dekh kaun rahe the sabhi ki najre bas tadak buadk kapde pahen'kar aayi huyi ladkio par thi.

Mai bhi un chalti phirti raunak ko dekh'ne se khud ko kab tak bacha kar rakh pata. Meri bhi nazre un par teek gaya.

Bilaal…are ladki bad me tad lena chal pahle gift de'kar aate hai.

"Are Tu ja na mujhe dikh rahi nazaro ka maja lene de. "

Mai nazaro ka lupt lene lag gaya. Mujhe vahan khada khada bahut waqt ho chuka tha. Par bilaal abhi tak nahi aaya. To mai man hi man use gali diya phir dhundhne chal diya. Charo taraf bhid hi bhid tha. Log jhund me khade ho baton me masgul khaane peene ka lupt lene me lage huye the. Ek jhund ko jaise hi par kiya vaise hi kisi se takra gaya.

"Upsss maaf karna meri vajah se aap'ke kapde kharab ho gaya"

jab khubrurat ladki samne khadi hon aur adaye dikha'kar maafi mang raha hon. Tab Kapde kaun dekhta hai? Meri nazre uske chahre par jam sa gaya. kya bol rahi thi mujhe sunayi hi nehi de raha tha bas uske larajte huye hont jo bolne se hil rahi thi. Vohi dikh raha tha. Bolte huye galo par dimpal aa rahe the jo pal pal mere dhadkano ko bada raha tha. Aankho ki disa ko thoda sa badlakar uski ankho me dekha hay ye nashili aankhe jise dekh mujhe nasha sa hone lag gaya. Nashe me jhumte huye mai najro ko niche le jane laga. Skin tight top me chhupi uske bhugol par najar padte hi mera itihas hil gaya phir hona kya tha hoto par jeebh phira diya.

Ek do bar jeebh phiraya hi tha ki mujhe kapdo ke andar jalan sa mahsus hua. Phir meri tandra tuta. Tandra tute hi khaulti najro se dekhti huyi ladki mujhe dikha. Uski najro me mujhe lakho angare dikhne laga isliye mai uski najro ka samna na kar saka turnt palko ko jhapka'kar najre niche kar seer jhuka liya.

"Kudh ki najar me gir jana pade aisi harkat karte hi kyu hon"

Itna bol ladki palt kar chali gayi. Mujhme itna sa bhi himmat nehi hua ki najar oothakar ek bar ladki ko dekh paun bas man hi man khud ko gali diya…bc jahan amol palekar bana tha vahan shakti kapoor banne ki kya jarurat thi. Acha mauka tha ladki se jaan pahchan bannane ka vo mauka bhi gawa diya. Aisi giri huyi harkate karta raha to jindgi bhar singal hi rahega. Too to singal hi marega.

Khud ko gali diya par mujhe chain nehi mila man kah raha tha ja'kar ladki se maafi mangna chahiye par itni bhid me dhundhu to dhundhu kaha kuch der khada khada sochta raha phir ek disha ko chal diya. Ghum ghum kar pura pandal chhan dala par ladki kahi dikhi nehi, hatas ho'kar ek kone me khada ho gaya phir idhar udhar seer ghuma kar dekhne laga jo bhi chahra dikhta man me ek dhachka sa lagta shayad yehi vo ladki hai par hota koyi aur. Kuch der khada raha phir bilaal mere pas aaya.

Bilaal…Tu yahan kya kar raha hai? tujhe bola tha vahan khada rahna par nahi tere to paar nikal aaya. Tujhe dhundhte dhundhte pura pandal hi naap dala. Chal yaar khaana khaa kar ghar chlte hai.

Khaana khaane ka man to kar nahi raha tha par iss ummid me khaana khane chal diya shayad vo ladki kahi dikh jaye. Vahan bhi vo ladki nahi dikhi to bujhe man se khaana khaya phir ghar ko chal diya ye soch'kar kabhi rah chlte mil gayi to maafi mang lunga.

Din aayi gayi ho gayi. Din par din bitne laga uss din ki bate mere jehan me dhundhla ho gaya. Apne jindgi ko jeene me mast ho vahi roj maa aur didi ki dant sunna kabhi kabhi peet bhi jana. City se bahar gaya hua tha. Abhi abhi ghar lauta, room me ja'kar rest karne laga hi tha. Prabhuuuuu ki ek tez aawaj mujhe sunayi diya.

Kya musibat hai ghar aate hi suru ho gaye na jane mere se inko kya musibat hai ek pal bhi chain se rahne nehi dete khud se itna hi bola thi ki phir se

"Prabhuuuu jaldi aa nahi to mai aayi to teri khair nehi"

Aaya mammi itna bola phir turant unke samne prakat hua mere prakat hote hi maa boli…alsi kahi ka ghar aate hi sone chal diya ye list le aur market se saman lekar aa.

"Kya mammi do pal to chain le lene do aabhi abhi safar karke aaya hoon thoda rest kar lene do phir ja'kar le aunga. "

Maa…jaldi ja saman le'kar aa jayada waqt nehi lagega phir rest kar lena.

Bhujhe man se maa ke haath se list liya bahar aa'kar bike liya phir chal diya. Chaurahe tak pahucha to dekha bilaal mujhe haath de'kar rukne ka ishara kar raha tha. Mere rukte hi bilaal bola…kab aaya! kaha ja raha hai?

"Yaar abhi abhi aaya hoon aur maa ne list thama diya. market ja raha hoon tu chal raha hai. Chalta to acha hota. "

Bilaal…kuch khilane peelane ka intejam ho to saath chal sakta hoon.

"Bina riswat ke tujhse koyi kaam nehi hota chal khila dunga jo khaana chahega."

Bas phir kiya bilaal oochual kar bike me baith gaya phir dono yaar chal pade. Kuch hi dur gaya tha ki samne se pura hujum aata hua dikha ye dekh mai bike ko side me rok diya. Kuch waqt ruka raha par bhid hai ki khatm hone ka naam nehi le raha tha. Sabhi ke haath me banner aur chote chote jhande the. Unhe dekh bilaal bola…sala election ka date final hua nehi ki suru ho gaya inka drama. Chal kisi aor raste se chlte hai na jane inka drama kitni der tak chlega.

Gussa mujhe bhi aa raha tha sabse jayada maa par gussa aa raha tha. Par duswari ye thi maa ko gali nahi de sakta tha. Gusse ko majburan thuk ke saath nigal gaya. Kuch hi dur Aage ek gali tha mai uss gali se ho'kar jaane ki soch'kar bike ghuma liya phir gali ki aor chal diya. Gali tak pagucha to dekha gali ka rasta band tha aur do teen police wale khade the ye dekh mera gusa high ho gaya aur bola…sala aaj hi ye din dekhna tha maa bhi thodi der rook nehi sakti thi thodi der rook jati too kya ho jata. bewajah mujhe pareshan na hona padta.

Bilaal…are ye rasta bhi band sala aaj ho kya raha hai? Highway neta logo ne band kar diya aur gali par police walo ne kabja jama liya. Chal yaar koyi aur rasta dekhte hai nehi to ghar chal baad me aa'kar jo bhi saman lena hai le jana.

"Bina saman liye ghar gaya to maa jhadu maar maar ke mere body me jitne mail jama hai saf kar degi. "

Bilaal…khiii khiii sala tu bhi na qismat me chhed le'kar paida hua hai. aaj tere saath aa'kar mai bhi phas gaya chal kisi aor raste se chalte hai.

Bilaal ki hansi mujhe aor jaydaa gussa dila raha tha. Man kar raha tha bike se utar'kar bilaal ko ache se dhaun. Par aisa kar na saka jaisa bhi hai mera dost hai. Kahi isko peet diya to ye chala jayega phir mujhe akele samano ko le jana padega. Isliye bas thuk ka ghut peekar rah gaya. aor bike ko ghuma diya. Kuch dur ja'kar ek gali dikha us gali se hokar chal diya.

Gali ka aakhri sira main road par nikal raha tha. Mai gusse me tha to jyada dhyaan nehi diya bina left right dekhe bike ko road par chada diya. Mere right side se ek scooty aa rahi thi. Achanak mujhe dekh'kar scooty chalane wali said se niklna chahiy par achanak handle modhne ki vajah se disbalence ho'kar gir gayi aur khisatte huye ham se thoda dur ja'kar rook gayi ye dekh bilaal bola…are kya karta hai aise koyi bike ko road par lata hai.

Maine koyi jabaw nehi diya bike ka stend lagaya aur utar'kar uss ladki ki aur chal diya. Shyad ladki ko kuch jayada hi chot lagi thi isliye heel dol nehi rahi thi. Mai uske paas gaya usko dekha to chehra jana pahchana laga par abhi sochne ka time mere paas nehi tha. Kyuki uski naak se khun bah rahi thi aur seer par helmet bhi nehi tha. Mujhe laga helmet na hone ke karan girne se seer me chot lagi hai jisse behosh ho gayi hogi. To mai bola…bilaal jaldi se bike le'kar aa inhe hospital le'kar jana hai.

Bilaal phauran bike mere paas laya mai ladki ko bich me bitha piche baith gaya aur bilaal bike chalte huye bola…sale tere vajah se aaj iss ladki ka accident hua dekh kar nehi chala sakta tha. Bina dekhe bike aise road par laya jaise tere baap ka rode hon.

"Are too chup chap bike tej chala jitna dantna hai bad me dant lena."

Mera naam prabhu hai par mujhe prabhu se dua mangna pad raha tha. Mere vajah se is ladki ko kuch na ho varna ek masoom ki jaan ki kimat mai chuka nehi phunga. Ladki behosh thi to seer bar bar idhar oodhar ho rhi thi. Isliye uske seer ko upar ki aor kar mere kandhe se tika liya. Meri nazar uske chehre par gaya to uske chehre ko gaur se dekhne laga.

Uska chehra dekh'kar mujhe dhyaan aaya ki ye to vohi ladki hai jisse mai party me mila tha. Mujhe isse mafi mangna tha. Aaj meli bhi to mere vajah se accident ho gaya. Bas phir kiya mai khud ko koshne laga. Qismat ko dosh dene lag gaya. aaj mujhe laga sach me meri qismat bahut bura hai. Meri qismat bura na hota to aaj aisa na hota. Khud ko aur qismat ko koste huye hospital pahucha. Accident case tha to doctor police ko bulane ko kahne laga.

Police bulane ki bat sun'kar mai daar gaya phir bola…sir police bulana jaruri hai.

Doctor…police to bulana hi padega aap reception par ja'kar kuch paise jama karba dijiye police ko phone mai kar deta hoon.

Doctor ne police ko phone kar diya phir ladki ko ilaaz ke liye le gaya. Unke jate hi mai bilaal se bola…tere paas kitne paise pade hai.

Bilaal…paise to mere paas nehi hai par atm pada hai shyaad 10 12 hajar rupay pade honge.

"Jitne hai ja nikal'kar la, mera bhi atm le ja jitna pada hai nikal lana. "

Mera atm aur password bilaal ko diya bilaal chala gaya Phir mai reception par ja'kar khada ho gaya. Kuch der me bilaal aaya reception par pahuch'kar paise jama kiya. form bharte samay mera number le liya gaya phir mai aur bilaal vahi rakhi kursi par baith gaye. Kuch waqt me police wale aaye reception par gaye puchhne par reception wali ne hamari aor ishara kar diya. Police wala mera paas aaya phir mujhse bola…bahut acha kiya jo accident dekh'kar bhi muh nehi moda tumhara naam kiya hai.

"Sir mera naam prabhu hai"

Police…waha naam prabhu aor kaam bhi prabhu jaisa kiya.

Police wala itna puchh'kar vaha khada ho gaya mujhe der ho raha tha. Saman lekar Ghar bhi jana tha aor jayda der hua to naa jaane kita kuch sunna padega isliye bola

"Sir aab mai ja sakta hoon"

Police…jao par jaane se pahle apna number de jana jarurat padi to phone kar dunga.

"Sir mane reception par apna number de diya hai aap bhi le lo"

Police…tum jana chaho to ja sakte hoon jarurat padi to reception se number le'kar phone kar dunga.

Mai ja hi raha tha ki police wala mujhe bula'kar bola…kya tum accident kaise hua bata sakte ho.

accident mere galti se hua. par mai ye baat bata'kar kisi juamele me nehi phasna chahta tha isliye jhuth bol diya. Phir hospital ke bathroom ki aor chal diya mere T-shirt par kahi kahi khoon laga tha to T-shirt utar'kar dhoya phir ache se nichod'kar pahan liya. Thoda ajeeb lag raha tha par kisi tarah bardast kiya. Market pahuch kar bache kuche paise se saman liya phir ghar pahuch gaya.

Ghar der se pahucha to maa ne achi khasi class le liya par mai bina kuch jabab talab kiye chup chap room me chala gaya. Sham ko ek phere phir se hospital gaya reception me puch'kar ladki ko dekhne gaya par itni himmat bhi nehi jhuta paya ki room ke andar ja'kar ladki ko dekhu. Ladki ko hosh aa chuka tha. Uske parivar wale uske saath tha. ye dekh mere dil ko thoda tasali mila par aprad bodh se mai ab bhi ghira hua tha.

Kuch waqt tak bahar se hi ladki ko dekhta raha phir ghar ko chal diya. Ladki ek hafte tak hospital me rahi. Mai roj do time use dekhne gaya jitna use dekhta utna hi aor dekhne ka maan karta na jane kaun si khumari mujhpar chad raha tha. Bas bar bar use dekhne ka man karta uski aankhen muje uski aor khichta par mai khud ko rok leta jab vo baat karte huye muskura deti to automatically mere lavo par bhi muskiraht aa jata. Uska muskurana mujhe itna acha laga ki mai chupke se uski muskurati huyi ek pic click kar liya.

In ek hafte me mai na jane kiti bar use yaad kiya. Barhal use hospital se jis din chuti mila mai us din bhi use dekhne gaya bas itna soch'kar ki aaj ke bad phir kabhi usse mulakaat nehi hoga. Jab tak vo apne family walo ke saath chali nehi gayi tab tak mai use dekhta raha. Jab vo chali gayi tab mai bhi ghar ko chal diya. Mai ja to raha tha par mujhe aisa lag raha tha jaise mai kuch chod'kar ja raha hoon kya chod'kar ja raha hoon mujhe samjh nehi aa raha tha.

Ghar pahucha ghar par bhi maan nehi lag raha tha. Aaj na game khelne ka maan kar raha tha na hi reels dekhne ka man kar raha tha bas chup chap room me shok pada ho aisa chehra bana'kar baitha hua tha. Aise hi do din bita tesre din sham ko mai chhaat par tahlte huye uski photo dekh raha tha usi waqt mera ringtone "mera babu mera sona" Baja ye dhun sunkar mere chehre par automatically ek mand mand muskan aa gaya. Numbar unknown tha isliye recive nehi kiya. Ek bar phir se usi numbar se phone aaya iss bar call receive kiya aur bola…hello kaun?

"Ji mai khishi…"

Uski baat ko bich me kat kar mai bola…ji mai kisi khushi ko nehi janta. Shayad apne galat number dial kar diya hoga.

Khushi...Nehi jante to mujhe hospital kyu pahuchaya tha. Chalo acha kiya mujhe hospital phuchaya par ek baar bhi dekhne nehi aaye mai jinda hoon ki mar gayi.

Uski baate sunkar mere samjh me aa gaya ye vohi ladki hai jise mai hospital pahuchaya tha aab mujhse sikayat kar rahi hai mai use dekhne kyu nehi gaya. Par mere liye ye baat important nehi tha khuch important tha to vo ye ki mai abhi use yaad kar raha tha aur usne khud hi phone kar diya. Bas mere lavo paar aisa muskan aaya jo kabhi khatm hi na ho phir mai us pal ko yaad karne laga jab mai hospital me chhup chhup'kar use dekha karta tha. Mai un yado me khoya tha isliye bola kuch nahi to khushi dubara boli…yaad aa gaya to teek hai nehi aaya to kal milte hai shayad dekh'kar yaad aa jaye.

Mai bolna to kuch aor chahta tha par mere muh se khuch aor nikla

"Bolo kab aur kaha milna hai."

Usse milne ki utavlapan dekh'kar shayaad use hasne par majbur kiya hoga. Vo hasi ki nehi uski awaz too nehi aaya. Mai sour hoon vo man hi man hasa to hoga. Par jo bhi ho usne mujhe kaha aur kab milna hai time aur adress bata diya phir kal milne ko bolkar call kat kar diya.

Mai khushi ke maare pagal hua ja raha tha. Kal usse milna hai bas dua kar raha tha meri qismat kal bura na ho varna phir pichle dino jaisa kuch anhoni ho jayega. Yehi dua karte huye khushi khushi din bit gaya.

Agle din samay se mai uske diye adress par pahucha to dekha vo ek cafeteriya tha. Use dekh'kar maine phone kiya to vo boli mai andar hoon aa jao. Mai andar gaya kone ke ek table par khushi baithi thi. Mujhe dekh'kar muskura diya. Mai to uske isi muskurahat ka kayal tha to mai bhi muskurate huye uske paas ja'kar baith gaya aur pucha…kaise ho khishi

Khushi…khush hoon aur chahk rahi hoon na yakin ho to tumhare samne baithi hoon.khud hi dekh lo Par tumse thoda naraj hoon.

"Ha janta hoon tumhari narjgi bad me dur karunga. Usse pahle party wale din jo harkate kiya tha uske liye mujhe maaf kar do sorry soory."

Khushi…maafi to tumne us din hi mang liya tha jab tum ne mujhe gusse me dekh kar najre jhuka liya tha. Bas mujhse kah nehi paye the aaj kaha hai to mai tumhe maaf kar deti hoon.

"Tum nehi janti us din mafi mangne ke liye tumhe kitna dhundha par tum nehi mili tum ja chuki thi."

Kushi…uss din ke liye maaf kar diya lekin uske bad jo kiya uske liye maaf nehi karungi. Mujhe hospital pahuchaya paise bhi diye par ek bar bhi dekhne nehi aaye.

"Maaf bhi mat karna kyuki tumhara accident mere hi karan hua tha to mai tumhe hospital kaise na pahuchta."

Khushi…kyaaaa to vo bike wala tum hi ho jiske karan mai hospital pahuchi. Gussa to tum paar bahuth aa raha hai par kar nehi sakti kyuki tumne khud hi mujhe hospital pahuchya tha tumhare jagah koyi aor hota to shayad mujhe vaise hi chod'kar bhag jata.

"Gussa karo chaho to mujhe thappad bhi maro mai bura nehi manuga kyuki maine karam hi aisa kiya tha."

Khushi…gussa to karungi par iss vajah se nehi ki tumhare karan mera accident hua balki iss karan, tumhare vajah se mera accident hua aor tum ek baar bhi dekhne nehi aaye.

"Khushi tum ye mat socho ki mai tumhe dekhne nehi aaya. Roj tumhe dekhne aata tha bas tumhare samne aane ka himmat nehi jhuta paya dur se hi dekh'kar chala jata tha."

Meri bate sun khushi boli khuch nehi bas muskura diya. Badle me mai bhi muskura diya phir hamne coffee ordar kiya. coffee pite huye bahut sari bate kiya. Coffee khatm hone ke bad bhi bate karte rahe. isi bich mere man me kai bar ek bat kaundhi par puchne me jhijhak raha tha. cafeteriya se jate waqt bahar aa'kar himmat jhutakar mai phuch hi liya.

"Khushi tum bura na mano to kya mai tumhe phone kar sakta hoon. Jaydaa nehi kabhi kabhi jab man karega."

Khushi…are baba mai kyu bura mane lagi jab tumhara man kare phone kar lena par roj roj nehi kabhi kabhi samjhe.

Khushi itna bol muskura diya. Mai vajah na janna chaha na samjhna chaha. Dono bye bol apne apne ghar chale aaye phir suru hua gossip ka silsila mai use fb par friend request bheja jo usne accept kar liya. Insta par flow kiya. Suru suru me use hafte me ek baar call kiya phir dheere dheere call karne ke dino me kami aati gayi. Hafte ke jagah har tisre deen call karne laga kuch deeno tak aisa chala phir roj call karne laga. Suru suru me rojana call karne me mai jhijhka par jab khushi ki aor se koyi aitraj na jataya gaya to meri jhijhak khatm ho gaya. Mai jab bhi use call karta khushi, khushi khushi mujhse bat karne lagi. Ab to ek adat sa ho gaya bina ek pal bat kiye chain na milta vaise hi haal khushi ka tha.

Kisi karan vas kabhi use call nehi kar pata to call karte hi sikayto ki jhadi si laga deti. Mai uski bato se samjh gaya ki kahi na kahi khushi bhi mujhse pyaar karne lagi thi. Jankari hote huye bhi mai use propose karne me daar raha tha. Kai bar usse milne gaya uske birthday par gift bhi diya mere birthday par usne bhi mujhe gift diya itna kuch hone ke bad bhi mai himmat nehi jhuta pata ki use propose karu, kahi na kahi mere man me ek daar sa tha usne mana kar diya to mai kya karunga.

Hamare bich ye sab chal raha tha ki ek din news paper me ek news chhapa usme likha tha. Ek ladka ek ladki se pyaar karta tha. Ladke ka pyaar ek tarafa tha. jab ladki ki shadi ho rahi thi. ladka ye bardast nehi kar paya aur shaadi ke mandap me pahuch kar ladki ko goli maar diya. Jab tak vahan maujud log ladke ko pakadta tab tak ladke ne khud ko bhi goli mar lee.

Ye news padhte hi mai andar hi andar kanp utha phir socha khushi agar mujhse dur chali gayi to mera kiya hoga kiya mai uske bina ji paunga. To mujhe andar se aavaj aaya nehi mai uske bina nehi rah pagunga na hi use kisi ke sath dekh pahunga. Tab maine phir khud se saval kiya to kya mai us ladke ki tarah khushi ko jaan se maar dunga.

Meri aantaramta ne mujhe jabav diya phir ye kaisa pyaar jab khud ki hatho use marna pade jise jaan se jayada chahaa uski jaan kaise le sakta hai. Aise hi khud se bate karta raha. ant me ye phaisla liya chaye khushi ha kaye ya na mujhe khushi ko propose karna hi chahiye.

Ye phaisla kar agle din khushi ko phone kar ek cafeteria me bulaya waqt aisa chuna jab cafeteria me bhid kam ho. Waqt par taiyar ho ek gulab ka phool liya aor chal diya. Gulaab ko maine astin ke andar chhupa diya taki khushi dekh na le. Jab mai cafeteria pahucha to dekha khushi pahle se vaha aa chuki thi. Khushi ko vaha dekh mai uske paas gaya paas pahuchte hi pahle to khushi muskurai phir boli…mai kab se wait kar rahi hoon. tum ab aa rahe ho.

Mai Baitha phir bola…maine jyada der kaha kiya tum hi jaldi aa gayi.

Khushi…achaaa mai jaldi aa gayi khud der se aaye ho belem mujh kar rahe ho.

"Achaaa babaaa theek hai manta hoon mai der se aaya ab khush."

Khushi…ha khush ab bolo mujhe kyu bulaya tha.

"Khushi mai tumse jo kahna chahta hoon uske liye mujhe himmat jhutane me bahut time lag gaya. Par aaj mai than kar aaya hoon tumhe kah kar hi rahunga.

Mai baat karte samay chupke se astin khol'kar gulab ko haath me le liya. khushi kuch bolti usse pahle gulab ko aankhe band kar uske samne karke bola…khushi mai tumse bahuth pyaar karta hoon aaj se nehi bahut pahle se shayad jis din tumhe pahli baar partiy me dekha tha. I Love You.

I love you bol to diya par meri dhadkane bahut tez gati se chal raha tha. Mai sirf dua kar raha tha khushi khuch bhi bole par no na bole par yahan to kuch aur hi chal raha tha, khushi kuch boli nehi mai wait karta raha par mujhe koyi ahat na mila mujhe laga khushi naraj ho'kar chali gayi hogi. Ye baat mere dimag me aate hi mere aankho se do bund neer ke bah nikla. bujhe maan se aankhe kholkar dekha. Aankhe khulte hi jo mujhe dikha use dekh mere khushi ka thikana na raha. Khushi mere samne bina hile dule kohni ko table par rakh'kar Haath par chehra tikaye mand mand muskurate huye mujhe dekh rahi thi.

Mere aankhe kholte hi khushi boli…abhi jo bola kuli ankho se mere aankho me dekhte huye bolo.

ek bar aor kahi huyi bato ko dauhraya tab khushi mere haath se gulab liya aur boli…I love You too! budhu mai kab se iss din ka wait kar rahi thi ki tum kab mujhe propose karo par tum ho ki propose kar hi nehi rahe the.

Mai uth'kar khushi ke pass gaya. use uthak'kar hug kar liya. Mujhe kitni shaanti mili mai kah nehi sakta. Khair jo bhi jaise bhi hua qismat bura tha na jane kitna ghatiya khel qismat ne mere saath khela, buree Qismat hote huye bhi mera pahla pyaar mujhe mil gaya. Jiske liye na jane kab se mai wait kar raha tha.
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THE END​

Mast Story thiii

Iss Prabhu ki kismat thi ke kyaa thi. Harbaar fhasta raha. Aur gharwalo ne toh bechare ka jeena haram kardiya tha. Bechaare ko 2 pal chain se baithne tak nhi dete. Ghar ke kutte ki jyaada izzat thi par bechare prabhu ki nhi thi.

Par aakhir mein bechare ki kismat chamki. Usko uska pehla pyaar mila. Bhale hi pehla pyaar ko usne hospital pahonchaya.
Par agar story aage badhti toh kya Prabhu ki buri kismat usko khushi ke saath khush rehne deti yaa phir kuch aur hi kand hota.

Khairr story toh mast thi. Narration bhi mast tha padhte padhte hasi bhi aarahi thi. Next story ka intezaar rahega.

 

[Destiny]

Mast Story thiii

Iss Prabhu ki kismat thi ke kyaa thi. Harbaar fhasta raha. Aur gharwalo ne toh bechare ka jeena haram kardiya tha. Bechaare ko 2 pal chain se baithne tak nhi dete. Ghar ke kutte ki jyaada izzat thi par bechare prabhu ki nhi thi.

Par aakhir mein bechare ki kismat chamki. Usko uska pehla pyaar mila. Bhale hi pehla pyaar ko usne hospital pahonchaya.
Par agar story aage badhti toh kya Prabhu ki buri kismat usko khushi ke saath khush rehne deti yaa phir kuch aur hi kand hota.

Khairr story toh mast thi. Narration bhi mast tha padhte padhte hasi bhi aarahi thi. Next story ka intezaar rahega.

Tarifo ke liye bahut bahut shukriya

Jaisi bhi thi prabhu ki qismat thi jaisa prabhu ne uske qismat me likha tha vaisa hi ghata.

Story aage badti to prabhu khushi ke saath kitna khush rahta ye to prabhu hi jane.

Agli story ke bare me abhi khuch socha nehi hai koyi acha sa polot bana to pakka 25 February tak post kar dunga

 

[Jaguaar]

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Story - Ehsaas
Writer- Baban​

Raat ke 2 baaj rahe hai abhi. Akela baitha hoon apney balcony mein. Thandee hawa mujhey chukar jaa rahi hai bar bar. Charotaraf sirf shaanti... Koi awaz nahi.. Bus kabhi kabhi kuttey ki bhowkney ki awaz aa rahi hai. Aajke newspaper ka ek column Bahut dhyaan se par raha tha aur beech beech mein has bhi raha tha main. Ekbaar asmaan ke taraf bhi dekha. Subah ka safed rang ko jaise kisiney kaley chaddar se dhak diya hai. Beech beech ke ched se halki halki roshni jagmaga rahi hai. Chair pe baithey baithey kisi ka intezar kartey huye main raat ka woh nazara dekhne mein khoya hua tha. Kab aaogi tum? Aaj itna der kyun ho raha hai tumhe?

Mera aur tumhara woh pehla mulaqat main aaj bhi nahi bhool sakta. Kaun bolega yeh jo ladka chair pe baithey tumhara intezar kar raha hai.... Jo ek darpok, shaant swavab ka ladka hai usiko ekdin tumney galat samjhi thi. Woh thappar ki goonj aaj bhi sunaai deti hai. Tumney socha tha ke main tumhe irritate kar raha tha.... Pagli thi ek number ki. Lekin ekdin tumhe galti ka ehsaas hua aur tumney maafi bhi mangi thi. Lekin jo bhi ho... Woh thappar hi jaise mere liye ek alag dard ban gaya tha. Aur woh dard kab chahaat mein badal gaya pata hi nahi chala mujhey. Aakhir ekdin tumney bhi dosti ka haat baraya aur maine bhi. Aaj bhi humari woh dosti atoot hai. Balki yeh bolna sahi hoga ke woh dosti aur gehri hui hai har ek din. Main yahi sab soch mein duba hua hoon ke tabhi-

- To yahan hain janab?

Peechey mudkey dekha toh Maya mere peehey hi thi. Main muskurake bola- haa ji... Main toh bahut der se aapka intezar kar raha hu... Lekin aap kahan thi madam? Aaj itni der ho gayi? Maya bhi muskuraakey merey paas akaar baith gayi. Mere bahut paas. Uski woh asadharan roop jaise merey purey balcony ko aur roshan karne lagi. Ab koi andhera nahi, sirf ujala charo taraf.

Maine kahan- tumharey baarein mein hi soch raha tha.

Maya- accha?

Main- hummm... Actually... Humarey barein mein... So... Aaj itna late kaise ho gayi?

Maya mujhey dekhtey huye boli- main toh bahut peheley hi aa gayi thi.

Main hairan ho gaya. Poocha- toh? Abtak kahan thi? Yaha aayi kyu nahi?

Maya muskuraake boli - tumhey dur se dekh rahi thi.

Main- dursey? Kyun? Roz toh mujhey aise paas se dekhti ho... Toh aaj durse kyu?

Apni mayabi aankhon ko ab mujhsey churaakey boli- dekh rahi thi... Apney sabsey kareeb ke insaan ko dur se kaisa lagtaa hai? Tumnne kabhi mujhey dur se nahi dekha?

Main haskar bola- haaa.... Kayi baar.... Jab pehlibaar tumne sataaak karkey thappar mara tha.... Usdin ke baad har roz chup chup ke tumhe dur se dekhta tha.... Jab tum muskuraake doston se baat karne mein mashgul rehti thi... Tab bhi dur se tumnhe dekhta tha..... Jab hum dost baney aur tum class mein mera intezaar karti thi... Tab bhi tumhe dur se dekhta tha. Aaj bhi jab tum soyi rehti ho.... Tab dur se tumko dekhta hoon. Sochta hoon kabhi kabhi ke paas chala jau tumharey.... Lekin tum aaney hi nahi deti.... Mujhey rokti kyun ho tumharey paas aaney se?

Maya ne apna sar merey kandhey pe rakh diya. Roshni ke saath ek madhosh kar dene wali ek sugandh aa rahi hai maya ke jism se. Kahan milta hai aisa sugandh wali perfume? Pata nahi mujhey... Its heavenly beautiful.

Asmaan ke taraf hum dono hi dekh rahe hai. Raat ke andherey wali asmaan mein jaise koi ek nakhun ka tukda kisisney rakh diya hai. Kitna ujjal hai woh nakhun.... Kya usiko chaand kehetey hai? Toh baaki ka ansh kahan gaya? Sirf itna hi kyu dikh raha hai.... Shayad baaki ka ansh andherey ne apney undar samaa liya hai.

- accha? Chaand male hai ya female? Maine poocha maya se. Maya hairaan hokar mujhey dekhkar boli - kya matlab?

Main- kuch log kehetey hai chanda mama.. Toh koi khetey hai chandrama.... Kaunsa sahi hai?

Maya muskurake boli - chand sirf chaand hai... Hum kyu uskey astitva ko lekar zyada janne ki koshish karu? Sab kuch samajh pana asaan nahi.... Kabhi kabhi bahut mushkil hota hai.... Kabhi kabhi sabkuch samajhna chahiye bhi nahi. Kuch baat anjaana rehna hai sahi hota hai. Chand mard ya aurat jo bhi ho.... Woh hai... Kya yahi bari baat nahi? Sab sawal ka jawab mat dhoondo.

Main maya ke taraf dekhkar bola- iska jawab bhi tumney nahi diya...... Jaise us sawal ka jawab bhi nahi deti.

- please Tanmay.... Mat poocho woh firse....

Main chup ho gaya. Firsey hum dono chup.... Charo taraf shaanti. Dursey raat keerey ki awaz aa rahi hai. Kuttey ki aaaaauuuuuuuuu awaz bhi kabhi kabhi sunaai de rahi hai. Lekin mujhey bilkul darr nahi lag raha. Pehley raat mein bahut darr lagta tha... Akeley mein... Lekin ab nahi lagta. Raat ko mummy papa dadaji sab so jaaney ke baad main yaha aakar akeley baithta hu. Maya bhi akaar baithti hai mere paas. Hum dono baat kartey huye ek dusrey mein kho jaatey hai... Lekin sirf baat karne ke liye hi nahi..... Ek aur kaam bhi hota hai hum dono ka.... Woh kaam ko karna bhi zaruri hai.

Maine maya ke taraf dekhkar poocha - Maya? Tumhey thand nahi lagta kya?

Maya apna sar idhar udhar hilakey Nahi ka ishara karkey merey taraf dekhkar boli- tumhe thandi lag rahi hai... Haina? Jhoot mat bolna....

Main muskurake- haa... Thoda thoda.. Waise... Tum agar chaho toh thandee kam ho sakti hai... Jaanti ho na kaise?

Maya mujhey halka sa mukka markey boli - badmaash.... Hamesha shararat ghumta hai deemag mein haina?

Maya ka yeh sharmila roop jab bhi dekhta hoon.... Mujhey ajeeb sa uttejna hota hai.... Ismein koi hawas nahi hai... Sirf ek pyar chupa hota hai. Uski har ek muskaan, uska sparsh merey dil ka dhadkan aur badaa deta hai. Shayad isiliye kyunki merey pyaar mein koi jhoot nahi hai..... Dilse nikla hua ek ehsaas hai. Usdin bhi is ladki se mohabbat thi.... Aaj bhi hai.... Hamesha rahegi.

Usko pyar bhari nigaahon se dekh raha hoon dekhkar Maya boli- mujhey aise maat dekho Tanmay....

Main- mujhey galat mat samjho Maya.... Main tumhey galat nazar se nahi dekh raha tha.

Maya- tumhe woh bataane ki zarurat nahi Tanmay.... Main tumhey jaanti hoon... Shayad tumse bhi zyada.

Main- toh mujhey dekhney ko manaa kyu kiya?

Maya - woh pyaar bhari nigaah main sahen nahi kar pata.. Harbaar kamzor par jataa hoon..... Aise mat dekho mujhey

Main - sorry...... Main yeh nahi kar sakta... Tumhey dekhna bandh nahi kar sakta... Main aise hi tumhe dekhta tha.... Main aise hi tumhe dekhunga.

Maya haskar boli - dekhunga... Matlab future... Accha yeh vabishya kya hai?
Ek anjana rahasya... Jisko bartaman mein hum sirf soch saktey hai.... Us future ke liye hum aajse plan kar saktey hai.... Lekin bus yahi tak.... Uske ilawa humarey haat mein kuch nahi hota. Humara plan humara iccha... Humara yakeen bus aajtak hai... Kal kisiko pata nahi.

Main- baat toh sahi kahaan maya.... Toh humarey haat mein kya hai?

Maya boli - aaj... Yeh samay... Yeh pal.... Bus itna hi.

Main sar hilakey bola - uhu..... Mere paas iskey ilawa bhi kuch aur hai

Maya- kya?

Maya ko pyar se apney taraf kheeckey uske sar pe pyaar se kiss karkey maine kahaan- tum... Tum ho merey paas.... Hamesha ke liye.... Kal... Aaj bhi... Aur agey bhi.

Maya ke aankhon mein aansu aa gaye. Mujhey pakar ke merey kandhey pe sar rakh diya. Mai uske muh apney taraf karkey uski khoobsurat chehrey ko dekhne laga. Mayabi woh aankhein, gulab jaise honth, resham se zulfein. Achanak ek gaana yaad aaya mujhey-
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Nind bhee lut lee, chain bhee le liya
Aap kaa, aap ke pyar kaa shukriya
Aap se hai hame yeh gila, o piya
Jan kyun chhod dee, le liya jab jiya
Ham aap me kuchh hogaya,
Kuchh mil gaya, kuchh kho gaya
Jo chahe tum isse man lo,
Lekin suno yeh jan lo
Ham tumpe marte hain
Ham tumpe marte hain​

Hum dono apney banayi hui choti si kalpanik duniya mein jaise kho gaye. Us duniya ke undar ke hum do prani tab pyaar mein dubey huye. Bus..... Humara ekant ka samay... Bus hum dono.... Aur koi nahi wahan.

Maya mujhey boli- ab so jao.... Mujhey bhi jana hai... Mera kaam baaki hai.

Main- jaana zaruri hai?

Maya hairan hokar boli - kyu luch rahey ho aaj? Ekdin tumne bhi toh rotey huye bola tha iskey aakhir tak tum merey sath rahogey.... Iska anth dekhkar rahogey... Toh aaj yeh sawal kyu?

Main - darr lagta hai maya.... Nahi apney liye nahi..... Tumharey liye. Is jung mein lartey lartey kahin tumbhi na badal jao.

Maya - chinta maat karo Tanmay..... Badalney ke liye aur kuch bhi baaki nahi hai mujhmey..... Jo bhi tha tum peheley hi badal chukey ho. Peheley mujhme sirf aag thi.... Ab pyaar bhi hai. Kitna ajeeb haina? 2 opposite power eksath merey under present hai. Ek taraf nafrat.... Dusri taraf pyaar. Ghabrao mat.... Bus aakhri kaam baaki hai... Jo aaj khatam ho jayega. Woh nafraat bhi khatam ho jatega.... Fir.... Bus pyaar hi rahega mere under. Is jung mein hun hi jeeteengey. Lo ab aankh bandh karo... Mujhey aoney paas aane do.... Tumharey aur paas aaney do.... Tumharey under aaney do.... Dono atma ko milney do....... So jao.... So jao..... So jao.....

Do jism jaise ek ho Gaye. Uskey baad mujhey kuch yaad nahi. Bus neend.... Gehri neend mein dub gaya main. Neend jab toota tab main apney kamrey mein tha. Merey chaati pe sar rakhkey Maya soyi hui. Uski thandi haat mere baalon se khel rahi hai.

Isbaar kaise kiya Maya? Maine poocha

Maya ke aankhein bandh thi. Waise hi muskuraakey boli - peheley uskey pet mein chaku daal diya... Khoon hi khoon.... Fir bar bar chaku ke war se khatam kar diya uska jeevan.... Uskey us ghinona ang ko bhi kaat dala..... Woh layaak nahi us body part ka. Bar bar mujhse maafi maang raha tha kaminaa... Lekin uska jiv bhi.....

Bus..... Bus Maya bus...!! Aur kuch nahi sunna hai mujhey!! Ufffff main aur kuch nahi sun sakta maya..... Chup ho jao...!!

Maya chup ho gayi. Aur kuch nahi bola usney. Sirf soyi rahi mere upar. Thodi der baad uskey poocha - kyu tum mujhse darrtey ho Tanmay?

Main- nahi.... Thoda sa bhi nahi.... Kyu daru? Apney pyaar se koi darrta thodi hai? Main darrta tha tumharey under ke us aag se... Us nafraat se.. Kahin woh aag tumhein bhi badal na de... Ekdin woh aag merey under bhi tha..... Aaj woh thanda ho gaya.....aakhri kamina bhi aaj khatam ho gaya..... Do ko toh pehley hi khatam kar diya tha humney.... Aj aakri haramzada bhi khatam. Ab baaki raha sirf pyaar... Usi ko apnaakey jee lengey baaki ke samay.

Maya hasney lagi.... Maine poocha - has kyu rahi ho maya?

Maya- nahi kuch nahi.... Bus woh jee lengey sunkar hasi aa gayi. Jeena kya hota hai? Heartbeat chalna? Uskey bina bhi kya hum jee nahhi saktey? Main toh jee rahi hu.... Bina dhadkan ke.

Main- aaj jab sab khatam ho gaya hai.... Toh woh sawal poocho? Please aaj jawab dena tum..... Main bhi toh ek aadmi hu..... Ek admi ke jism mein jojo hota hai... Woh sab merey under bhi hai.... Jaise un kamino ke jism mein tha... Toh tum mujhey unsey alag kaise dekhti ho.....

Maya mujhey dekhtey huye kathor awaz mein boli - kabhi bhi aisa mat bolna tum..... Khudko un janwaron se compare kaise kar saktey ho tum? Arey kahan tum aur kahan woh ghinoney keerey!! Haa tum bhi ek mard ho..... Ek admi... Lekin tumharey under ka mard pyaar karna janta hai, izzat karna janta hai.... Lekin un kamino ke under sirf jism ja bhookh tha.... Hawas... Sirf hawas...... Tum mujhey apna pyaar samajhtey ho..... Aur un logo ke liye main bus ek khilona.... Raat ka shikaar thi... Aaj main hi unka shikaar karkey aayi. Un logon ke liye aurat ko nasht karna... Uskey izzat se khelna hi mardaani ki nishani thi.... Isliye un sab ke us nishaani ko... Us body part ko sharir se alag kar diya kaat ke!! Lekin tumharey jism mein jo ansh hai woh pyar karna janta hai Tanmay.... Tumharey under jo uttejana hai usmein koi gandagi nagi hai.... Pyar ka ek charam roop hota hai milan...... Humara milan utna hi pavitra tha jitna humari dosti. Tumney hamesha mujhey pyar kiya hai. Aaj bhi kartey ho... Kaal bhi kartey thei. Ek mard ek aurat ke liye jitna akarshit hota hai woh tumharey under bhi tha... Lekin usmein bhi kitna pyar chupa tha main jaanti hu. Agar woh pyar saccha nahi hota toh usdin tum rotey nahi..... Merey us shaant aur hamesha ke liye soya hua jism ko waise dekhkar fut futkey rotey nahi.... Usdin tumhey rota hua dekhkar mujhey kitna dard ho raha tha main hi jaanti hu.... Utna dard toh shayad jab woh 3 shaitan mujhey khatam kar rahe thei tab bhi nahi hua tha.

Mere chaati pe kiss karkey Maya boli - sabkuch humarey soch pe nirvar karta hai Tanmay.... Hum kya choose karengey? Kiska paksh lengey... Kamvasna se kamzor hokar usko apney upar charney dekar.... Insaniyaat bhoolkey dusrey jism ke sath khelengey aur hawas ka shikar banayengey..... Ya fir khud ka parwa naa kartey huye dusrey kisi ka zindagi ko rakshya karengey..... Nasha dono mein hai.... Ek nasha barbaad karta hai... Toh dusra abaad. Ek tabah karta hai... Dusra nayi zindagi deta hai. Ab kis nasha ko hum chunengey teh hum par hai. Jitna bhi bara lalaach ho.... Agar hum khudko control kar paaye toh har lalaach ko hum muh tod jawab de saktey hai..... Unko dikha saktey hai pyaar ki taqaat kya hoti hai. Is pyaar ki shakti ko main jaanti hu... Dekho na.... Ab mujh mein sirf ek hi ehsaaas bacha hua hai..... Pyaar. Yeh maya ab ek hi chehra pehechanti hai.... Tumko. Main zinda na hokar bhi zinda hoon... Tumharey under. Tumney mujhey zinda rakkha hai. Ekdin maine tumhey galat samjha tha.... Aaj janti hoon tum mujhey kitna chahtey ho..... Lekin.....lekin aaj shayaad bahut der ho gayi.


Maine Maya ke haat ko chumkey bola- nahi Maya.... Kuch deri nahi hui hai. Har pyaar ka pariksha jismaani hona chahiye aisa kisney bola hai? Humarey is pariksha mein hum puri tarah safal huye hai. Isliye toh hum aaj dur hokey bhi kitney paas hai. Ab aise hi hamesha mere paas rehena... Bus aur kuch nahi chahiye mujhey. Woh din bhi ayega jab koi bhi jismaani bandhan nahi rehega.... Usko tod ke main bhi tumhari tarah mukt ho jaunga.... Tab main bhi puri tarah tumhare jaise ho jaunga.... Hum ek ho jayengey... Lekin tab tak..... Mere paas rehena... Hum jeeyengey ek dusrey ke liye.

Maya ke aankh mein khusi ke ansu the. Mere chaati pe sar rakhkey shaanti se so gayi woh. Main bhi Maya ke nangi.... Khoon se latpat jism ko chadaar se dhak diya aur pakar ke so gaya. Is jism ko jin logoney nasht kiya tha.. Aaj woh sab ke sab khatam ho gaye. Jism ka matlab kiskey liye kya hota hai mujhey nahi malum, main sirf itna janta hu mujhey pakar ke jo ladki nischint hokar so rahi hai... Woh sabse pavitra hai. Ek muskaan khil utha merey chehre par.... Aj... Phir se woh pyaar ka ehsaas ho raha hai. Tujhko class mein pehlibaar dekhke jagey thei mere armaan... Aaj.....Main woh chaand jiska tere bin na koi aasmaan.

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THE END​

Jabardast Kahani thi.

Kahani ke starting mein laga Tanmay aur Maya dono premi hai. Phir laga dono pati patni hai. Par jaise jaise kahani aage badhi waise waise twist aata gaya.

3 aadmiyon ne Maya ka balatkar karle usse maardiya tha. Jiska badla liya gaya unhe maarke. Tanmay ne Maya se is kadar pyaar kiya hai ke Maya marr ke bhi uske paas zinda hai. Aur yeh pyaar jismani nhi ruhani tha. Tabhi toh marne ke baad bhi Maya ki rooh Tanmay ke andar zinda hai.

Bahot achha laga yeh story padhke. Aapki agli story ka intezaar rahegaa.

 

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Jabardast Kahani thi.

Kahani ke starting mein laga Tanmay aur Maya dono premi hai. Phir laga dono pati patni hai. Par jaise jaise kahani aage badhi waise waise twist aata gaya.

3 aadmiyon ne Maya ka balatkar karle usse maardiya tha. Jiska badla liya gaya unhe maarke. Tanmay ne Maya se is kadar pyaar kiya hai ke Maya marr ke bhi uske paas zinda hai. Aur yeh pyaar jismani nhi ruhani tha. Tabhi toh marne ke baad bhi Maya ki rooh Tanmay ke andar zinda hai.

Bahot achha laga yeh story padhke. Aapki agli story ka intezaar rahegaa.

Thank you ji.... Aapko itna accha lagaa janke bahut khusi hui...... Agli story ka toh pata nahi lekin... Chahunga aap jaise aur bhi pathak merey is story ko parey ❤

 

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Sangeeta Maurya ji ne bilkul satik varnan kiya hai yha ke halaton ka... Mujhe bhut accha lga jis tarah aapne apne shabdo mein baat rakhi... Bhut acche se vyangya kiya hai aapne yha ke niyamo par... Kyunki ye sach hai... Or hmesha se aisa hota aaya hai... Or aaj bhi ho rha hai... Bilkul satik varnan or bhut sundar vyangya

 

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Rita Ki Adhuri Life


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Rita aur Rahul dono first cousin the aur college ma sath padte the ek dosre ka ghar ana jana laga rehta tha college ka kam sath ma karte the aur sath ma college ate jate the kab unki dosti pyar ma badal gai pata hi nahi chala uske baad ek dosre k itne close howe first time dono ne sex ka maza ek sath liya yaani ek dosre ki Virginity thodne ka time dono ne khud hi dekha ab fir luckily dono ne apne parents ko razi kiya aur shadi karli dono k parents achche paise wale the aur dono Dubai ma reh chuke the Rita hamesha se apni family k sath rahi isliye uska kabhi bhi akelapan feel nahi kiya.

Rita ki graduation complete nahi howi unfortunately kyuk shadi jaldi ho gai but Rahul ne master kiya shadi k baad aur shadi k ek saal baad hi Rahul ko Dubai ma ek achchi Job mili aur woh Rita Rahul k parents k sath Mumbai ma rehne laagi sath ma uske parents bhi the isliye uska time guzar raha tha but Bhagwan ko kuch aur hi manzoor tha aur Rita k Parents ki death ho gai Rita iss dunya ma ek akeli reh gai kyuk uske koi bhai behan nahi the aur fir Rita ko Rahul k parents ka pyar mila but Rita ki life ma shayed kuch aur hi lekha tha aur unki bhi car accident ma death ho gai aur Rita ek dafa fir akeli ho gai .

Rahul jab parents ko Alvidaa karne aya aur fir se job pe jane laaga tuo Rita ne Rahul ko bola muhje bhi sath le jao ab ma yaha akele kese rahongi but Rahul bola abhi meri job set nahi howi wait karlo try karo honey akele rehne ki baas thode time ki baat hai Ab Rita ki life ma akelapan tuo tha hi aur Pati k naa hone se ab koi aisa bhi nahi tha jiske sath uska time pass tuo ho kuch time k baad jo badi kami Rita ki life ane lagi jo shadishuda Aurat ki sabse badi zarorat hai woh hai sex kehte hain jab aap ek dafa sex ka maza le lete ho tuo fir maan aur bhi machalta hai aur karne ko uske baad Rita ki life ki sabse badi yahi kami rahi uska reaction yahi howa Rita porn movies, adults stories dekhne lagi aur social media pe logo se baat hone lagi aur jab aap baat hoti hai stranger se tuo dosti pe hoti aur fir yahi howa Rita ki dosti howi 2 3 ladkon se jo usko nahi pata tha uske neighbor ma hi rehte the aur usko khubsurati k ashiq the jiska Rita ko nahi pata tha As usual jo hota hai baat karne k baad sharing hoti hai baten photos ab kyuk Rita ki life ma badi kami thi sex tuo Rita yahi soch k apni nude Pics bhi share kar di.

Ab hamari society ma jo mostly hota hai ek akeli aurat k sath wahi howa usko us nude pics pe blackmailed karna shuru howa ab akeli aurat apni izzat bachne k liye unki demands ko pura karne lagi kabhi paise kabhi new mobile aur zabardasti milna lastly jab Rita ki bardasht ki limit khatam howi tuo Rita ne apne Pati ko sab pata hi diya kya karti kab taak tension leti ab Rahul ko ana pada wapas apni biwi k pass aur police case bana aur lastly ek badi amount dekh k jaan chuti aur Rita ko le k Dubai agaya.

Rita ki life ma ek bar fir se kuch khushiyan ayi aur usko dobara mila sex ka maza but unfortunately woh bhi kuch din k liya tha shayed kyuk ek raat Rita ka hubby usko bola honey muhje business karne ka chance mila hai UK ma apne friend k sath aur muhje jana hoga Rita ne bola but Rahul ma akeli kese rahongi ab muhjse nahi raha jata fir ek kam karte hain muhje pregnant kar do fir
Rahul abhi nahi darling muhje kuch karne do tumhare liye apne liye aur bacho k liye future achcha ho aur ek khubsurat luxury life ho isliye tuo ma itni hard work kar raha hon aur ek bar fir woh Rita ko chhod k chala Rita ko sex ki aag ma jala k ab saal ma ek dafa ata hai aur Rita ki usi Adhuri life ma Jee rahi hai .

Rita isi jaali howi life ma Jee rahi thi fir ek din uske hubby ka phone aya uska business partner apna ek office open kar raha hai Dubai ma aur ham ne socha hai tum kab tak akeli rahongi tuo kyu naa tum us chote se office ka look after karo Rita ko bhi ye acha laga tuo usne Yes bol diya aur kuch dino baad office open howa aur Rita uska care karne lagi aur business achcha hota gaya aur fir business k kuch bade cleint ki mulaqat Rita se howi aur woh Rita k jism k diwane howe aur Rita jo phele hi apni jism ki aag ma Jaal rahi uske close hoti gai aur unho ne Rita k jism ko pane k liye apni dolat aur Jhote pyar ko use kiya kabhi Rita ko shopping, parties, Gold aur luxury items dete rehte the aur Rita k achche dost ban gaye aur finally unho ne Rita k sath bed share kiya kyuk unka pata chal gaya ek Pyasi aurat k life ma yahi kami hai apna kam poora karne k baad unho ne bhi Rita ko apne haal pe chhod diya aur aaj bhi Rita apni Adhuri life ma Jee rahi hai pata nahi kab uski life ka ye adhura Pan khatam hoga ....
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Nice Storyyy.

Ek akeli aurat jo sex ki aag mein jal rahi ho usko akele chorne se kyaa hota hai yeh baat Rita ne saaf darsha di.

Rita ne apni hawas ke chalte ek bahot badi galti kardi thi jo usne apne nangi tasveere unn padosiyon ko bhej di. Par yaha Rahul daatt deni hogi. Usne apni patni ka saath diyaa. Agar woh chahta toh Rita ko iss kaand ke baad chorr bhi sakta tha par usne aisa nhi kiya. Par isme kahi na kahi galti Rahul ki bhi hai. Usne apni patni ko akela chorr diya. Agar woh aisa na karta toh shayad Rita ki aisi halat naa hoti.

Par last mein Rita ne apni hawas ki aag ke chalte kisi aur ka bistar bhi garam kardiya par uske baad bhi Rita kr jeevan mein adhurapan hi raha. Unnlogo ne bhi uske jism ka maza lekar chorr diya.

Aur isi tarah Rita ek adhuri life hi jeene lagi. Khairr agli story ka intezaar rahegaa.