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★☆★ Xforum | Ultimate Story Contest 2022 ~ Reviews Thread ★☆★

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"Everything is Binary" by harshit1890

Ye un chuninda stories me se hai.. Jo XF ke USC Ko alag hee level me pahucha deti hai.. Fir baaki story ek taraf aur ye(aisi) story ek taraf.... Really, hats off to u, hariya kaku for writing this:bow:

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Apocalypse through AI is familiar concept, yet... Everything while reading this story felt new and thrilling...

Especially, wo starting ka para, jisme Protagonist ki comp. Related theft yaa fir kahu ki skills kaa narration tha... Wahich pe story ne apun ka dil jeet liya... Baaki sab toh fir bonus tha... Wo part hee ye prove karne ke liye kaafi hai ki Hariya kaku ka writing, narration level kitna rapchik hai....

Fir us laundiya ki entry... Fir wo chudayi... Aaahhhhhhhh:hot: uska role thoda end tak kisi naa kisi way me khichte toh shayad thoda maza aata... 😉😉 wo kya hai ki.. Maal hai toh dhamaal hai😍😜 par kyunki theme kisi purpose ko lekar tha toh... Thrill bahut tha ki aage kya hoga, ab kya hoga...

Halanki ye contest ki first story hai, fir bhi ye kahna अतिश्योक्ति nahi hoga ki, ye story.. Winning story hai... Yadi kisi aur ne is level ko touch kar liya yaa paar kar liya toh alag baat... Aur bahut khushi hogi yadi koyi kar le toh :approve: aisi story padhke... Dil baag baag ho jaata hai lawda :bigboss:

Ending thoda hurry me hua, imo.. Maybe due to word limit or due to hariya bhau's laziness... Dont know 😜

Story shayad loop me close ho gayi.. :hmm: jo bhi ho.. Jaisa ki maine pahle bataya... Story ki starting hee is story ko alag hee level par pahucha di, baaki sab toh bonus tha...

Sabse important baat.. Story kahi bhi mujhe boring nahi lagi.. Aur ye saalo baad shayad aisa hua hai :eek: faltu ka boring dialogues bhi nahi tha... Story maine neend me pahle aadhi padhi, fir hachak se neend se jaag kar baaki ka padha ki lawda mission kya tha...



Waise rating toh karna nahi chahiye.. Fir bhi meri taraf se 8.5/10...
 

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"Everything is Binary" by harshit1890

Ye un chuninda stories me se hai.. Jo XF ke USC Ko alag hee level me pahucha deti hai.. Fir baaki story ek taraf aur ye(aisi) story ek taraf.... Really, hats off to u, hariya kaku for writing this:bow:

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Apocalypse through AI is familiar concept, yet... Everything while reading this story felt new and thrilling...

Especially, wo starting ka para, jisme Protagonist ki comp. Related theft yaa fir kahu ki skills kaa narration tha... Wahich pe story ne apun ka dil jeet liya... Baaki sab toh fir bonus tha... Wo part hee ye prove karne ke liye kaafi hai ki Hariya kaku ka writing, narration level kitna rapchik hai....

Fir us laundiya ki entry... Fir wo chudayi... Aaahhhhhhhh:hot: uska role thoda end tak kisi naa kisi way me khichte toh shayad thoda maza aata... 😉😉 wo kya hai ki.. Maal hai toh dhamaal hai😍😜 par kyunki theme kisi purpose ko lekar tha toh... Thrill bahut tha ki aage kya hoga, ab kya hoga...

Halanki ye contest ki first story hai, fir bhi ye kahna अतिश्योक्ति nahi hoga ki, ye story.. Winning story hai... Yadi kisi aur ne is level ko touch kar liya yaa paar kar liya toh alag baat... Aur bahut khushi hogi yadi koyi kar le toh :approve: aisi story padhke... Dil baag baag ho jaata hai lawda :bigboss:

Ending thoda hurry me hua, imo.. Maybe due to word limit or due to hariya bhau's laziness... Dont know 😜

Story shayad loop me close ho gayi.. :hmm: jo bhi ho.. Jaisa ki maine pahle bataya... Story ki starting hee is story ko alag hee level par pahucha di, baaki sab toh bonus tha...

Sabse important baat.. Story kahi bhi mujhe boring nahi lagi.. Aur ye saalo baad shayad aisa hua hai :eek: faltu ka boring dialogues bhi nahi tha... Story maine neend me pahle aadhi padhi, fir hachak se neend se jaag kar baaki ka padha ki lawda mission kya tha...



Waise rating toh karna nahi chahiye.. Fir bhi meri taraf se 8.5/10...
Thank you gyani bhai.. :bow: Its a pleasure writing something which you will read... Han end pace aur fast tha.. do reason ek word limit dusra machine ke prospective se rakhna pada warna Vikrant samjh jata ki machine chaal chal rahi hai isliye machine ko jo karna tha vo usne 10 minute mein nipta dia :D Thanks for reading... :bow: :bow:
 

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" Everything Is Binary "


Main roz ki tarah hi phising kar raha tha, Yahi kaam tha mera dusron ke article ko bich network se uthana aur usme kuch letter badal kar apne pass rakh lena. Jadatar ye article US, UK, Germny ke hi hote the. Malum tha ger-kanuni hai lekin snooping aur phising karne walon ko pakadna abhi mushkil kaam tha, ache paise bhi mil jaya karte the. Jabse dunia internet par channe lagi thi hum jaison ki amdani mein badhtotri jarur ho gayi thi. Open source operating system ka sabse jada fayda yahi tha ki usme sabut mitane mein asani hoti thi aur secure bhi hoti thi lekin aksar log secure chiz ko chhod wo operating system chhunte the jisme kaam asani se ho jaye isliye mera kaam aur asan ho jaya karta tha. Roz ki tarah aaj bhi meri script chal rahi thi aur UK ke ek article ko snoop karte hue uske kuch letter change karne mein lagi hui thi. Word ke kuch letter badalne par vo word galat ho jata tha lekin yahi samne walle ki demand hoti thi. Aksar mera kaam sirf script chalana hota tha baki main dusre terminal par apna alag kaam karta tha. Abhi bhi wahi kar raha tha ki tabhi meri nazar script par padhi jo ek jagah par halt kar gayi thi.

Halt dekh mene us terminal ko maximize kara aur abhi uska duplicate terminal khol kar check karta utne mein vo chal padi jise dekh mene apna irada badal diya. Ho sakta hai network par kuch time laga ho. Main terminal ko minimize karne hi wala tha ki meri nazar terminal par chal rahi commands ke output par padi jo ki aam-tor wale output se alag thi.

" ye kya chal raha hai " abhi dhayan se dekhna shuru kara hi tha ki kuch data accumulate hone laga. Kuch samajh pata use pehle achanak se screen par blue color ki dots ikhati honi shuru ho gayi aur agle hi pal ek hologram screen par ubhar kar mere samne aa gaya jo ek chehre mein tabdeel ho chuka tha.

" holy shitt... " main achanak se apni seat se uchakte hue piche ki taraf hua. Mene aaj tak aisa kabhi nahi dekha tha, ek pal laga jaise kisi fedral agency ne mujhe pakad liya hai aur ab mere bachne ka koi chance nahi tha kyun ki ab tak to unhone mere system ki har chiz ko read kar liya hoga. " shit.. jaldi se power cable nikalni hogi " dimag mein pehla khayal yahi aya jabki iska koi faiyda nahi tha par sabse pehle wahi karna theek laga. Mene fauran apna CPU aage ki taraf khincha aur power cable nikalne ko hi hua ki CPU ke bagal mein rakhe speaker mein se ek awaz ayi " Don't panic " awaz sunte hi mene CPU ek dum se chhod diya aur piche ki taraf baith gaya.

" I know what are you thinking " Awaz speaker mein se aa rahi thi lekin jo bol raha tha vo koi aur nahi balki screen wala Hologram tha. " Just Stay Calm and listen to me " Us hologram ne dubara bola jise sun na jane kyun main thodi aage ki taraf hua aur Hologram ko dhayan se dekhne laga. Na hi vo chehra mujhe insan ka lag raha tha aur na hi kisi alien ka. Kyun ki ek dafa mujhe ye bhi laga tha ki shayad mere system ko kisi Alien ne kabze mein le liya hai.

" machine jaisa chehra hai " sochte hi uski awaz ayi aur main thoda piche ki taraf ho gaya. Awaz bhi aisi thi mano jaise koi machine ki awaz ho, nahi.. machine hi bol rahi ho. " this is some super tech shit.. " main soch raha tha aur vo kuch bol raha tha isliye dhayan uski taraf laga dia.

" You are going to do some extra-ordinary things in your future days. Not today, not tomorrow but in some years. You will discover some extra-ordinary things which will be used for the betterment for this whole world "

" nahi bhai... main sirf chor hun.. ise jada kuch nahi... " khud se main bola kyun ki ise jada main kuch tha bhi nahi. Bar-bar yahi khayal aa raha tha ki kisi Fedral Agency ne mujhe hack kar liya hai aur ye sab waqt kaat rahe hain taki meri location track kar sakein, ye sab jante hue bhi na jane kyun main us Hologram se nazar hi nahi hata paa raha tha. Because for me, this is the best shit i am seeing in my life.

" I know this is difficult for you to understand but as much as it is important for you, it is more important for this world "

" difficult nahi .. main maan hi kahan raha hun.. ye sab mujhe fasane ki chaal hai.. par samajh nahi aa raha ki jisne bhi ye kiya vo kiya kaise " khud se sawal aur soch mein itna kho raha tha ki ye bholta jaa raha tha ki bas kuch der aur jiske baad main pakda jaunga.

" And I know you are not believing me right now but you will. I am gonna share something with you which will make you believe that you will gonna change this world " Hologram ne bolna band kiya aur uske baad ek ke baad ek file background open honi shuru ho gayi. Kuch hi pal mein meri puri window par alag-alag file khul gayi jise dekhte hi mere peron talle zameen hi khisak gayi aur main chair ke handle ko pakdte hue apni seat se khada hua aur un chizon ko padne ke liye mano screen mein ghus hi gaya tha.

" unbelievable " itna hi bola ki achanak se vo sabhi chizen screen se gayab ho gayi aur Hologram se awaz ate hi wapis ja baitha.

" Don't worry, this is all for you. And now i believe you are satisfied with my message. Please do not share this with anyone " iske baad ek pause aya meri life mein aur us hologram ke bolne par bhi.

" Extracting files now " Hologram ki awaz ayi aur mene dekha ki dusre terminal mein extraction shuru ho gayi jise dekhte hi samajh aa gaya ki ek path par folder ban raha hai jiske andar sab kuch jaa raha hai vo abhi chal hi raha tha ki hologram fir se bola. " And remember Everything Is Binary " usne itna hi kaha aur vo hologram destroy hokar puri screen par dots ke roop mein fial gaya. Hologram ke destroy hone ke baad bhi main screen ko hi ghurta raha jaise lag raha ho ki ab kuch hone wala hai, ab kuch hone wala hai par jab kuch nahi hua aur meri chal rahi script complete hui tab main hosh mein aya. Hosh mein atte hi sabse pehla kaam jo mene kiya vo tha susu. Ghabrahat se itna pressure bana tha ya thodi der pehle piye full glass juice se par susu karke jab aya tab pet se relax hua warna dimag to abhi bhi sann tha.

Jo folder Hologram duara extract hua tha vo ek location par pada tha lekin himmat nahi ho rahi thi ki main use khol kar dekh bhi sakun. Man hi man cha to main raha tha lekin himmat nahi ho rahi thi. Ye lag raha tha ki kuch der mein koi mujhe pakad kar le jayega aur isliye man keh raha tha ki sab kuch tabah kar dun par us hologram ki baat jaise dimag mein stuck kar rahi thi, kyun main apni zindagi ek mazak ke chalte khatam kar raha hun, utha kar le gaya koi to salon sadna padega.

" bhaad mein gayi dunia, sorry hologram bhaiya... nahi ho payega " mene terminal khola aur usme command dali ' rm -rvf /* ' bas enter daba aur khel khatam. Ye ungli enter kyun nahi daba rahi daba.. daba .dabaa.... Main man se puri takat laga kar cheekh raha tha lekin meri ungli ne enter nahi dabaya.

" shit... " mene command wala terminal band kiya aur CPU se Cd eject karke bahar nikali jiske andar meri phising wala sara data tha aur computer ki screen ko switch off kar diya. Fatt bhi rahi thi aur ek alag tarah ka utsah bhi andar paida ho gaya tha. Ab ya to meri fategi tabhi ye utsah khatam hoga ya fir is utsah ko koi maar de to chain milne wala tha. CD ko hath mein pakde main chair par piche ki taraf fel gaya aur hologram ki baat ko sochne laga, kuch der ache se sochne ke baad conclusion aya " do din se kacha nahi badla world kya badlunga.. mujhse nahi ho payega ... " apni jagah se khada hua aur telephone se number dial kiya ' 0-1-2-4-8' number dial karte hi ring jane lagi aur che-sath ring ke baad phone utha.

" hello "

" kaam ho gaya, kab milna hai "

" tumhe sham ko phone karne ko kaha tha. Kaam ke time par phone mat kiya karo "

" Kaam to main hi karta hun tumhara "

" han aur main ghanta bajati hun.. 2 ghante mein milo "

" last wali payment bhi kar dena aaj "

" han ready hai aur jada batein mat kiya karo phone par kitni baar bola hai " phone cut hua to mene bhi phone patak diya. Phone rakhte hi main ubasi lete hue bathroom mein ghusa aur naha dho kar apartment se nikal gaya. Takreeban do ghante ki bus thi aur bus mein baithe kab soya malum hi nahi chala. " Remember Everything Is Binary " achanak se ankh khuli.

" bhaiya tumhara stop aa gaya utarna nahi hai kya " conductor chillaya.

" han han.. utar raha hun.. " bus se utar kar main galiyun se hote hue ek apartment ke samne jaa ruka aur wahan lagi bell bajai. Ek bell bajte hi samne ka kiwad khula aur abhi kuch kehta usne chup rehne ka ishara kar diya. Vo phone par kisi se baat kar rahi thi. Uske darwaja kholte hi main andar aya aur andar waqt mene kundi laga di. Main wahin bistar par baith gaya aur jug se pani pine laga tab tak usne apni baat nipta li.

" lao.. " usne sidhe yahi kaha.

" na dua na salam direct lao.. "

" samay kam hai aaj " vo apne bag se kuch nikalne lagi.

" main to soch kar aya tha ki... " usne meri taraf envelope badaya. " purre hain.. gin lo.. aaj tak ka hissab chuka kar diya hai tumhara, ab jaldi se lao " mene envolpe liya aur CD use pakda di.

" rate badne wala hai " mene paise envolpe se nikal kar dekha.

" acha? kis kushi mein? " vo CD par marker se likhte hue boli " girlfriend bana li jo kharche badh gaye tere? "

" risk badh gaya hai "

" acha .. " vo halka sa tans kaste hue muh khol kar hansi " risk to sadak par bhi hai to kya ab security guard sath rakh kar chalega.. paisa nahi badega "

" yahan main apni jaan jokhim mein dal kar tumhe lakhon kamwata hun aur tum kuch hazar nahi badha sakti "

" hazar badh jayenge par fir vo nahi milega jiski jarurat puri karne ki wajah se tumne han bhari thi ... " vo kamar matkate hue mere najdeek ayi. Bas yahin main fisal jata tha aur uska kaam saste mein kar diya karta tha. Jab vo mere najdeek ayi to mene apne hath uski gardan par rakh diye, short hair ke chalte main uski gardan ki skin ko ache se feel kar sakta tha. Gardan se chatiyun tak aya aur wahan uski skin ko feel karne laga. Na jane kya jadu tha uski skin mein, chutte hi meri pent ke andar ka vajan badh jaya karta tha. Chati par hath ferte hue mene anguthe se uske honton ko dabate hue ragda. Vo bhi madhosh ho gayi thi, use bhi acha lagta tha tabhi to usne mujhe shuruwat mein indirectly offer diya tha iss kaam ko karne ke liye.

" jaldi kar.. kaam se jana hai mujhe bhi " usne mera hath apne seene se hataya aur kurti ko pakad kar apne sharir se alag kar diya. Andar safed color ki bra mein uski halki wheatish color ki skin mujhe suhawani lag rahi thi. Vo meri aaur dekhte hue palti aur mene uski bra ke huk khol diye jise usne turant zameen par gira diya. Salwar ka nada usne khol diya aur penty samet vo niche mere samne nang jhuk kar khadi ho gayi. Main ek pal uski bhari jawani ko dekhne laga jo kai baar dekh chuka tha par jab bhi dekhta aisa lagta pehli dafa dekh raha hun. Chut par halke baal dekh khujli si mach gayi mere sharir mein.

" aa naa.. " usne apni nazar piche ki aur uske chote chote baal ankhon ke aage aa gaye. Main use dekhte hue fauran khada hua, apni belt khol jeans samet kache ko niche kiya aur uske sharir ke nazdeek aa gaya. " thoda rough kario aaj.. " vo boli aur usne table ko kas kar pakad liya. Mene apne lund ko hath se pakda aur uski chut par rakh kar dhakka mara aur dono ke muh se ek sath ' aah-hh ' nikli. Chut itni gli thi ki lund asani se andar ghus gaya aur fir main zor-zor se dhakke lagane laga. Dhakon ki raftar tez thi jaisa usne kaha tha rough.. wahi de raha tha. Vo sisakti hui apna sar uppar niche karne lagi. Table puri tarah se hil rahi thi aur bich bich mein jab main dhakke aur tezi se marta to uska hath table par fisal jata.

" kahan ka gussa nikal raha hai aaj.. aahh.. "

" tune hi to kaha tha rough.. aaj tujhe itna rough chhodunga ki teri chut se bacha mera hi niklega "

" aukad ... hai teri bache paida karne ki aahahhhh... " jab usne aukad ki baat ki to piche se mene uski chutadon par chamat laga di.

" meri aukad ki baat karti hai.. tujhe kya malum main kis kaam ke liye chuna gaya hun.. " main bhi josh mein use pel raha tha aur isme aseem anand aa raha tha. Vaise bhi hum dono chudai bina baton ke karte hi nahi the.

" acha... tujhe.. kaun chunega... uhmm thoda dhire.e..se... " usne dhire bola to mene aur tez dhakke laga diye.

" Hologram ne chunna hai mujhe.. vo bhi is dunia ke liye " maine jaise hi bola vo meri taraf patli aur mujhe dekh zor-zor se hasne lagi vo jitna hansti mere andar utni hi power badh jati use thokne ki jiski wajah se uski chatiyan table se takrane lagi aur per fisalte hue table se ja chipke jo use chubne lage the. " main.. hi is dunia ko badlunga.... " main hanfte hue zor-zor se dhakke lagane laga aur uski siskiyan chekh mein badal gayi, dard aur plessure dono ki. Uske hath ki ungliyan akadne lagi thi aur jaise uske sharir ne uske ras ko bahar nikal fainka aur kuch tez dhakon ke baad mene bhi apna ras uski chut mein udhel diya jise udhelte hi sharir ko aisa laga jaise atma hi chinn gayi ho. Main hafta hua uske uppar pada tha aur mera thuk uski pith par gir kar jama ho chuka tha.

" hahahaha... " jab mene use subah ki hui ghatna batai to vo zor-zor se hasne lagi. Main kapde pehen kar ek kone par khada uski hansi ko dekh raha tha. Usne kapde pehen liye the aur abhi cigratte jalane mein vyast thi. Cigratte jala kar usne uska kasht funka .. " tu.. aur dunia badlega.. hatt salle.. tu sirf dhande ke liye bana hai.. " usne dusra kasht kincha " chori ka dhanda.. tujhe wahi suit karta hai.. usme dimag laga, ye hologram aur dunia ko badalne ka kaam kisi aur ko karne de.. tere baski nahi hai.. samjha.. " vo mujhe dekh rahi thi aur main use ghur raha tha. Har bar mujhe uske chehre ke nain-naksh bade pyare lagte the, choti ankhein, choti naak, patle gulabi honth.. par is samay vo sab bure lag rahe the. Mene use kuch nahi kaha apna envelope uthaya aur wahan se nikal gaya. Nikalte waqt usne jo kaha vo mujhe ache se sunai diya tha " Agla project jaldi dungi, chori karne ke liye, sala chor " vo hansi mere zehen mein thi aur raat bhar rahi jab tak nind nahi aa gayi.

Socha tha kuch karunga aur kiya bhi wahi roz wala kaam, kuch din beet gaye aur main apne wahi schedule main lag gaya. Bas farak itna tha ki pehle is kaam ko karte hue socha nahi karta tha par ab sochne laga tha. Kaam karte hue bar-bar dhayan Hologram, Uski awaz aur vo folder bas yahi aa raha tha. " shit.. " mene current terminal close kiya aur us folder par gaya jo us din hologram se extract hua tha. Mene use double click karke khola, kuch samay laga use kholne mein shayad bahut bada tha, jab tak vo khula nahi bechaini mein mere per hilte rahe. Folder khulte hi mene dekha us mein kafi sari files thi. Kaun si kholo pehle? Itni sari files hai .. Kaun si kholun.. aur kholun bhi ya nahi... raha to ja nahi raha. Dil zoron se dhadak raha tha, mathe par pasina tha, decision to lena hi tha, abhi tak mujhe kuch hua nahi tha jise saaf tha ki mujhe koi pakadne nahi ane wala tha.

" jo hoga dekha jayega " mene faisla liya aur gaur se screen par dekhne laga jiske baad samajh aya ki ek pattern ke tehat hi sari file us order mein ayi hai jis order mein mujhe unhe open karna hai. Mene pehle us file ko open kiya jo us order ki pehli file thi. File ka naam tha ' Journey ' Double click karte hi file open hui aur usme chuppe content se mera parichay ho gaya. Bas ab kya hona tha, jaise kisi chiz ki latt lagti hai mujhe ab latt lag gayi thi. Pehli se dusri, dusri se tisri aur ye ginti badhti chali gayi. Din raat mein tabdeel hoti to raat din mein, kabhi sota to kabhi khata, ghar se bahar sirf jaruri kaam ke liye nikalta. Pratiksha ka kaam bhi side mein karta lekin kabhi-kabhi, use milna to chhod hi chuka tha, uska kiya hua kaam jab bhi dena hota to use bula kar bahar ke bahar hi pakda deta. Vo mere is behaviour ko dekh kar sochti hogi ki us din usne jo mujhe kaha vo mujhe bura laga lekin vo galat thi, usi ki wajah se to maine thani thi, agar us din vo mujhe niche na girati to main uppar uthta hi kyun. Main ab wahi kar raha tha jo us hologram ne kaha tha, jaise uske instruction the sivai ek chiz ke jo usne mujhe mana kia tha is baat ko kisi ko nahi batane wali baat lekin mene pratiksha ko bata di thi. Par use koi farak nahi pada tha, na hi koi kaam ruk raha tha aur na hi samay. Samay ke anusar sab badalne laga, pehle jo computer use karta tha vo badala, dhire-dhire technology ne samay ke sath itni tariki kar li ki jis kaam mein mujhe ghanto lagte the vo chand samay mein hone laga tha. Ankhon par chasma kab chada malum hi nahi chala, umar usi apartment mein badhti chali gayi aur ek dashak guzar gaya. Par main kahan pahuncha tha abhi tak? Shayad kahin nahi ya fir bahut aage.. Sochna chahta tha lekin soch hume hamesha apne kaam se alag kar deti hai isliye main sirf apne kaam par focus karta raha. Pratiksha se sambhand khatam hue arsa ho gaya tha, usne kayi baar contact karne ki kosish ki par mere pas ab uske liye samay nahi tha. Akhri baar jab baat hui thi tab usne yahi bataya tha ki vo kahin bahar settle ho rahi hai, mene tab bhi uske message ka jawab nahi diya tha. Apne kaam mein itna ulajh gaya tha ki mujhe uske alwa kuch dikha nahi. Jaise-jaise vo file ka sequence aage badh raha tha, mere kaam ka roop badalta jaa raha tha. Ab sirf ghar baithe nahi balki bahar nikal kar kuch kaam karne the. Dusre dashak tak atte atte main ab kahin na kahin pehchan mein tha, internet par article chapne lage the. Mashur hua tha? Pata nahi.. parwah nahi thi kyun ki abhi mera kaam baki tha, jo mujhe karne ke liye bataya gaya tha usme abhi samay lagna tha. Akhri charan bacha tha jiske liye jagah badalni thi. Jis kaam ke liye bahar jaya karta tha ab vo pura ho chuka tha, isliye kaam karne ki jagah bhi badali gayi aur dekhte hi dekhte mene apni zindagi ke teen dashak laga diye, zindagi ke 31 saal jiski shuruwat san 2000 se hui thi aur aaj vo din tha.

25 November, 2031

Apni jagah par baitha samne screen par article padh raha tha ki Dimtri ne mera dhayan toda. Dimtri pichle ath salon se mere sath kaam kar raha tha. Main code ko chhod kar lab ka pura setup Dimtri ke hathon mein tha.

" astonishing tech " article par nazar dalte hue vo bola.

" hmm "

" is hydra-power ki energy se pure world ki electricity ki samsya dur ho jayegi vo bhi bina climate ko nuksan pahunchaye, plant start ho gaya? "

" Ha.. kal hi hua hai "

" Ye idea tumhara tha, is article mein tumhe bhi hona chahie tha, tumne apna idea kisi aur ko diya hi kyun "

" zarurat nahi thi dimtri.. tumhe pata hai mera focus kya hai " chasma utar kar main apni jagah se khada hua " and that dream will soon be completed "

" checking logs? " mene dimtri ki taraf dekha jo system check kar raha tha. Vo kuch der screen par hi dekhta raha, main janta tha ki vo kya kahega.

" logs se to yahi lag raha hai ki " Dimtri ne nazar meri taraf ki.

" its getting finalizing ... " meri nazar samne thi, jahan par ek bahut badi screen lagi hui thi.

" tumne puri raat jaag kar kaam khatam kar diya? " Dimtri hairan tha kyun ki abhi do din ka kaam baki tha jise mene pichli raat aur din laga kar pura kar diya tha.

" Chain ki nind ab sirf tab ayegi jab ye start hogi "

" I guess vo nind aaj raat ko hi mil jayegi.. its asking for the password " dimtri ne bola to mere sharir mein excitment ki lehar daud gayi. " give me the hat " main apni jagah par jaa baitha aur dimtri ne mujhe sar par uski banai hui techonogy se lais ek iron hat pehna di jo direct system se connect thi. Dimtri ke pas sirf ek yahi project tha jisko banane mein use char saal lage the. Mana is Hat ka core deisgn mene hi diya tha lekin Hat bana kar use system se jodne ka kaam usi ne kiya tha.

" ok ... i am initiating.. " dimtri ne itna kaha aur button push kar diya. Button ke dabte hi hat ne mere Brain Waves ko read karna shuru kar diya. Ye wo waqt tha jab mujhe sabse jada relax rehna tha kyun ki password koi word nahi tha balki meri brain activity thi jise code ke through binary form mein dala gaya tha jiske baad hi machine access ho sakti thi.

' Process Completed, Password accepted ' system awaz sunte hi mujhe dimtri ki 'yay' sunai di, uski itne salon ki mehnat jo rang layi thi.

" Ok i am shutting down " usne system band kiya aur mene HAT ko hata liya.

" kitna time lagega " mene faura pucha.

" just about time.. " dimtri ne itna hi kaha aur samne wali screen par dekhne laga jiske sath hi meri nazar us taraf gayi. Mere samne chand hi palon mein vo ane wala tha jiski kalpana mene 31 saal pehle ki bhi nahi thi.

' Helo Humans, I am Binary ' system awaz ke sath screen par flash hote hi mere chehre par khushi ki lehar daud ayi.

" we did it.. " dimtri bhi khushi mein chikha.

" Connect binary to the core system " core system se judte hi Binary ke pas vo power aa jati jo aaj tak kisi machine mein nahi thi. Vo dunia ki har information ko grasp karke ek aisa solo system ban jane wala tha jiske pas sari knowledge hone wali thi, yani ki sabhi mind ka ek mind. Ye process bilkul waisa hi hone wala tha jis tarah hum ek dusre se connect the. Connect hone ke liye binary internet, books, mobile phones ke through humans ke mind ko read karke ek evaluation set kar sakta tha jiski probablity 99.9% correct honi wali thi jo aaj tak hume kisi machine ne nahi di thi.

" on it " dimtri ne binary ko core system se connect kar diya aur screen par processing ane laga.

" now we celebrate " mene dimtri se kaha aur apne room ki taraf badha. Aaj mere 31 salon ki mehnat rang layi thi. Jo kabhi socha aur kiya na gaya ho vo mene karke dikhaya tha. Kamre mein pahunch kar mene apni sabse purani wine nikali jo aaj ke liye hi bacha kar rakhi thi. Abhi room se bahar nikal hi raha tha ki meri nazar kamre ke kone par padi jahan mera wahi computer pada tha jiski wajah se in sabki shuruwat hui thi.

" i was about to call you.. " dimtri ne mujhe dekhte hi kaha. " Binary puri shamta se kaam kar rahi hai, har second finotabyte memory store kar raha hai " uske bolte hi main muskuraya aur hum dono ke liye wine glass mein bharne laga.

" Ye sirf machine nahi hai dimtri, ye future hai.. Ye har bitte second sirf knowledge hi grasp nahi karega balki us knowledge se hi apne aap ko self-grow karega jaisa har ek AI karta hai. Aur jab Binary is process ko complete karegi tab hoga hamare pas hamara future. Jab sabhi mind ek jagah ho to tum jante ho ki koi kya kar sakta hai, Binary sirf universe ke bare mein, naye planets aur unpar pahuchne ke bare mein hi nahi batayega balki hum apni information ko kisi bhi samay mein bhej payenge "

" time travel? "

" Sort of dimtri.. Hum khud ko past mein nahi bhej sakte lekin information ko bhej sakte hain. Binary can send any information to any person at a specific time jo bhi hum decide karenge, socho use kitna faiyda hoga, binary hume kya sahi hai aur kya galat ye bata payegi. Uski knowledge se hui calculation ke basis par hum us information ko apne past mein bhej payenge taki ane wale drought, tsunami's aur har tarah ki activites ko control kiya jaa sake "

" this is brilliant, par this will alter the timeline, i thought Binary information collect karke future ki ek sahi prediction de sakta hai, kya tumne time line ke bare mein nahi socha, agar aisa hua to binary ka existence hi nahi rahega "

" Maybe thats what Binary wants, we are scientists dimtri, we are meant to change the world. And we change this through Binary " main scientist bilkul nahi tha par itne salon mein jo mene kiya uske liye science ki knowledge ki kya jarurat thi bas tarika pata hona chahie aur dimtri jaisa koi intelligent insan ka sath.

" then lets celebrate " hum dono ne wine ke glass apas mein khankhaye aur ek hi ghunt mein pi gaye. " well mene tumse bahut waqt se kuch puchna chahta tha, aaj sahi waqt lag raha hai to puchun ? "

" bilkul "

" how did you even build this place.. " dimtri ka sawal sahi tha koi aur hota to shayad pehle hi puch leta ki mene kaise ek barfile pahad ke niche itni badi jagah ka nirman kiya.

" do you remember 2015.. " mene pucha to dimtri sochne laga " vo saal jisme insano ne ek naya Element khoja tha? "

" Xectra "

" exactly "

" par uska ise kya matlab ? " dimtri sochne laga aur jab use samajh aya to vo hairani mein bola " Xectra tumne khoja tha? " vo ek pal chup hua " becha kisko? "

" china "

" China? are you out of your mind.. you sold it to china.. " dimtri ek dum se baukhlaya " tum jante ho ki vo kitna khatarnak element hai aur ye jante hue bhi tumne china ko bech dia? "

" Janta hun dimtri par tum khud batao itne kam samay mein china ke alawa aisi jagah kaun build kar sakta tha? har vo equipment jiski hume jarurat thi vo koi aur nahi de sakta tha isliye mene unhe becha, to build this future "

" but you know "

" i know how dangerous xectra is, Xectra element kisi bhi material, base aur crust ko bhed sakta hai i know this.. its the most powerful element humans has ever founded "

" and it can be a powerful weapon also " dimtri khush nahi tha.

" oh common dimtri.. aisa kuch nahi hoga.. tumne vo article nahi pada.. China ka.. read it.. jisme unhone Xectra element ke zariye ek aisi laser technology banai hai jo earth ki surkasha karegi " dimtri ne itne mein vo article khol liya jiska main jikar kar raha tha.

" China develops a weapon that can detroy any large asteroid "

" dekha, China can also do good, ab socho agar koi asteroid earth ki taraf aya to hum dinasaurs ki tarah lupt nahi honge " jo dimtri keh raha tha vo main tab hi janta tha ki china ko xectra dena bahut bada risk hai lekin mujhe aisa karna tha kyun ki yahi Hologram ke document mein karne ko kaha gaya tha.

" i can't believe them... but .. " abhi dimtri itna hi bol paya ki puri lab mein andhera cha gaya, electricity chali gayi thi. " power backup kyun nahi chal raha " dimtri ko hairani use jada tab hui jab samne screen par Binary ne apna kaam nahi roka. " How is this working... "

" don't worry.. Binary ko isi tarah ke backup ke liye ready kiya hai. Jis minute se ye start hui usne apne liye electricity reserve karni shuru kar di thi, uske liye seperate power backup rakha hai. Par power back kyun nahi chal raha hai vo check karo and connect our core line with binary, hamare system binary handle kar legi " Dimtri ne bilkul waisa hi kiya aur sirf lab ke system on ho gaye. System on hote hi mene binary se pucha " Binary Power Status " lekin binary ne koi response nahi diya. Main kuch check karta use pehle dimtri chillaya.

" you need to see this.. " usne apni screen se window swipe ki jo mere screen par aa gayi " power outrage.. India, China, Bangladesh, Pakistan, all suffers major electric outrage issue " dimtri ka bheja data screen par visibile tha dhire-dhire kakre part of Asia andhkar mein jaa raha tha aur usi tarah baki continents bhi.

" it must be because of the Hydra-Plant they have started in the Pacific ocean " mene dimtri se kaha " Binary Please Check Electric outrage cause " Binary ne is baar bhi koi response nahi diya. Uske response na dene ki wajah khojta use pehle dimtri fir chilla pada.

" fuck... " agli hi pal dimtri apni jagah se aise kahda hua jaise usne kuch bahut bhayanak dekh liya.

" kya hua ? " mere puchne par usne kuch nahi bola aur apne system par kuch kaam karne laga. Mene dubara pucha " what happen dimtri? "

" Power-outrage, ye hydra-plant ki wajah se nahi hai.. " vo meri taraf dekhte hue bola aur apni screen swipe kar di jo mere system par aa gayi " Binary did this " to dimtri yahi pata laga raha tha jiske baad jo mene dekha vo mujhe bhi vishwas nahi hua

" what nonsense ... how could binary.. and why " main dimtri ki baat sun kar jab system par dekhne laga to mere hosh ud gaye kyun ki binary ne sirf electric outrage hi nahi kiya tha balki usne ab " Binary ne core energy ka access kaise liya "

" core energy ? Ye kya hai " Ek ke baad ek aisi batein aa rahi thi jo dimtri nahi janta tha lekin mera dhayan is baat se jada ispar tha ki akhir Binary ne core energy ko use kaise kiya vo bhi bina meri permission diye bina hi. Sirf ek hi rasta tha janne ke liye aur vo tha binary ke core function mein dekhna. Mene wahi kiya lekin jab jab mein us function ka access karta binary mujhe bahar fenk deta " what the fuck is happening "

" Something is wrong, Binary code change kar raha hai " dimtri ne jaise hi kaha main samajh gaya ki usne khud ko permission kaise di. Vo mere likhe code ko re-write kar raha hai. " this is not being told to me.. " Mene bahut socha lekin aisa koi document tha hi nahi jiski madad se main ye rok sakun.

" vikrant.. " usne mera naam pukara vo bhi itni ghabrahat mein jaise kuch anhoni hui ho. " you need to see this " vo fatti ankhon se mujhe ghurne laga. Agle hi pal meri screen ki tasveer badli jispar chalne laga tha " China ne jo laser weapen asteroid tabha karne ke liye banaya tha usko hum sabhi asman mein dekh sakte hain "

" impact? " mene pucha aur screen par flash hone laga, jise mene do bar dekha kyun ki vishwas nahi ho raha tha " Moon "

" how did they.. even have that kind of power... Hydra " meri ankhein khuli ki khuli reh gayi " dimtri, hydra ki power china ke laser plant par kaise pahunch rahi hai check it now " mene pucha jarur par shayad andar hi andar main is baat ko janta tha.

" Its Binary ... Binary hydra ki sari power china ke laser plant ko de rahi hai and that causes power outrage "

" why binary doing this " mene khud se hi ye sawal kiya.

" With that amount of power given to the laser core, it will "

" destroy the moon.. " main apni jagah se khada hua.

" agar moon destory ho gaya to earth survive nahi kar payegi, uski rotation ki speed badh jayegi, maybe if will drift from its place, rise in earth temperature, weaker sea waves, longer days, it will wipe out every species from the planet. We need to close this fucking machine " dimtri chillaya.

" we can't.... "

" we can't? what are you saying? " dimtri ek pal ke liye chup hua.

" tumhe pata hai maine ye jagah kyun chuni " ek pal chup rehne ke baad main bola " kyun ki yahi ek aisi jagah thi jahan se binary earth ke core ke us hisse tak pahuncha jaa sakta tha jahan se vo direct power access kar sakta hai"

" tumne aisa kiya hi kyun? Earth ke core se energy deni ki kya jarurat thi "

" kyun ki yahi mujhe kaha gaya tha karne ko "

" kisne kaha tha? " vo chup hua, meri aur se jawab na ata dekh vo bola " tum keh rahe ho ki humne ek aisi machine banai jo hume hi khatam kar dena chahti hai? "

" i don't know what to do.. its not been told to me.. " main soch raha tha ki ye ho kaise sakta hai. Sab kuch mene wahi kiya jo mujhse kaha gaya tha. Kahin kuch nahi chhoda koi galti nahi ki to fir kaise.

' IN 30 Seconds - Moon will Explode ' Pehli baar tha jab message Binary ki taraf se aya tha. Jise dekhte hi meri sansein bhari ho gayi. Jab insan ke sath vo ho jaye jo usne socha bhi nahi hota toh sabse jada jhatka use tabhi lagta hai.

" we have to do something vikrant, something to shut down this machine.. koi to fail safe hoga " dimtri ne fir mujhse kaha. Main soch raha tha aur jada soch raha tha aur tabhi mujhe dhayan aya ki mene kuch banaya hai.

" backdoor.... " mene apne terminal par kaam karna shuru kiya " i build this backdoor.. jise main Binary ke kisi bhi function ko directly access karke use badal sakta hun and with that help main uske main function ko band kar dunga..

' 15 seconds ' pehli baar kaam karte hue aisa lag raha tha mano sharir se jaan nikal rahi ho. " no no what the fuck... fuckk... "

" kya hua "

" jab bhi backdoor access kar raha hun, malware mera code delete kar de raha hai "

" Everything Is Binary vikrant... "

" i don't know what to do, its not been told to me.. " mene fir wahi dahuraya aur itne mein Binary ne apni screen badli aur moon ke destory hote hi jo image hamari samne ayi usne dil dehla diya. Hamare aur moon ke bich mein distance ki wajah se koi shor ya koi halchal to nahi hui lekin usko millions of debris mein tabdeel hota dekh dimag sann reh gaya. Moon ke tukde uski debris atmosphere mein felh gaye aur dekhte-dekhte kayi satellite uski chapet mein ati chali gayi jiske sath earth par moon ki debris ki shower shuru ho gayi.

" we have destoryed our home by ourslelf " dimtri hatash hote hue bola " this could be .. " dimtri itna hi bola ki system se ek awaz ayi.

' Alert ' is baar alert dimtri ke system se aya tha ' Object Identified, Approximate size 3 KM ' ye sunte hi dimtri ke sath main samajh gaya ki ab khel khatam. " impact " mene pucha.

' Direct Impact of Origin, Himalayas '

" Ye asteroid to hamari hi taraf aa raha hai... " dimtri ne fauran calculation kari aur screen swipe kar di " adhi se jada satellite destroy hone ki wajah se humne is asteroid ko late pick kiya " par wajah ye nahi thi ki satellite ne late pick kiya balki asli wajah mujhe ab samajh ayi thi.

" ab samajh aya ki binary ne aaj ki hi date kyun chuni... kyun ki aaj moon earth ke sabse jada kareeb hai "

' Impact time 4 minute 35 second ' isi ke sath coundown shuru ho gaya aur hamara dhayan tuta.

" I can't believe this, It could be The Last day for us, but why ... Why binary did this.. " Dimtri ab mujhse nahi khud se hi sawal karne laga.

" Because it saw us... " Mene dimtri ki taraf dekhte hue kaha. " It saw us that who we are.. it saw every hate we put towards this planet.. "

" to iska badla planet destory karke nikal rahi hai ye machine "

" No.. it is taking revenge with us... but i don't understand why it has not been told to me " mene fir khud se wahi sawal kiya.

" Kaun vikrant.. tum kabse same chiz bol rahe ho kaun hai vo jisne tumhe nahi bataya "

" Wahi jiske design se mene Binary ko banaya, wahi documents jisne mujhe Hydra-Power ka idea diya, wahi document jisne mujhe bataya ki Xectra element kahan chupa hai.. "

" main kuch samjha nai... " dimtri kaise samjhta jab main hi ab samjha tha aur jaise hi mene samjha, mujhe khud par vishwas hi nahi hua.

" this could not be our last day dimtri.. this could not be.. " mene sabse pehle ye check kiya ki Binary ne abhi kuch der mein kaun-kaun si information bheji thi " tum jante ho ki Binary informations ko past mein bhej sakta hai aur agar main sahi hun to... oh my god... " Mene dimtri ki taraf dekha, " its the Bimary who send me all the information and that hologram.. "

" main kuch samjha nahi.. " dimtri ko kaise malum hota ki jo bhi mene aaj banaya hai vo mene nahi balki mujhe bheji gayi chizon se bana hai. Mene dimtri ko short mein bataya ki kaise 31 saal pehle ek hologram dwara mujhe information mili aur sab document mile jiske jariye hi main aaj uske sath khada hun. Vo meri baat sun kar sadme mein tha jiska hona lazmi tha.

" mujhe tab samajh nahi aya tha lekin samay ke sath mujhe laga ki for the betterment of this world, mujhe ye information 5th dimension se mili hai lekin ab sab kuch dekh kar samajh aa gaya ki information kisi aur ne nahi balki Binary ne bheji thi "

" lekin usne tumhe vo message mein jo batein boli vo kaise... " dimtri ka sawal sahi tha, hologram ki recording mein jo batein thi vo usne kaise bheja, sochte hue dimag ne turant jawab diya.

" my words.. dimtri.. mene har case study ko record kiya.. and for Binary it is just 0 and 1 ... usne mere hi word alag-alag jagah se jodh kar ek message bana kar mujhe bheja.. " main ek pal ke liye sochta raha

" this is a Time Paradox " samjhte hi mene kaha kyun ki ye ek loop tha jiski shuruwat bhi main hi kar raha tha aur ant bhi.

' Impact in 1 minute ' sound alaram hua tab hum dono soch se bahar aye.

" vikrant you need to break this loop... you need to inform 'you' 31 years back.. we don't have much time left " dimtri sahi tha loop ko todna jaruri tha.

" i need to send the information back to me.. but this time it should be in my words.. " main system ko use karne laga, bas ek message karna tha. Message... ' Dont do it, Its a trap ' mene message form karke send kiya aur Binary ki help se bhejne laga lekin nahi hua.

" kya hua " dimtri ne pucha.

" it does not allow me.. it knows...ki hum uske khilaf message bhej rahe hain "

' Impact in 30 seconds '

" vikrant, we dont have much time left... we have to break this loop now " dimtri bol raha tha aur main kaam kar raha tha aur fir mene wahi kiya jo main pehle karta tha.

" pratiksha sahi thi, main chor hun aur usi ke liye bana hun " mene word ke kuch letter ko badal diya jaise main pehle badal kar snooping karta tha bas wahi kiya. After all for binary it will always be 0 and 1 aur jab use 0 aur 1 ka meaning hi samajh nahi ayega to vo mere message ko rokega nahi uske liye vo message khatra nahi rahega. Mene message send kiya aur mera data process mein chala gaya.

'Impact in 10 seconds '

Meri nazar screen par hi thi aur tabhi message aya, " Message accepted, Sending " bas iske baad itni zor se dharti hili ki meri nazron ke samne tez roshni ki wajah dhundla pan cha gaya.

Main roz ki tarah hi phising kar raha tha tabhi meri nazar screen par jam gayi, kuch samajh pata use pehle screen par ek hologram dekh main ghabra kar piche ho gaya jiske baad usne jo bataya use mere hosh ud gaye.

" Remember, Everything Is Binary "

Jabardastt Storyy thiii. Aaj tak aisi story naa padhi. Yehi toh hai aapki lekhni ka jaadu. Iss USC ki pehli story hi itni jabardast nikli hai toh aage pata nhi aur kya kya dikhega. Abhi toh yeh aapki pehli story thi jisne dhamaka kardiya aur baaki writers ke liye ek achha khaasa tension laa diya. Jab 2nd story aap post karoge tab kyaa hogaa.

Puri story ko aapne jis tarah se sajaya hai woh wakai laajawab hai. Vikrant ne ek aisa sapna dekha jo ekdum real jaisa lag raha thaa. Future or past ek saath dikha diya. IT knowledge, Time travel sab kuch dikha iss story mein. Aur saath mein dikha sex ka jalwa.

Jabardast thaa. Aapki second story ka intezaar rahegaa
 
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harshit1890

" End Is Near "
Prime
5,642
8,370
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Jabardastt Storyy thiii. Aaj tak aisi story naa padhi. Yehi toh hai aapki lekhni ka jaadu. Iss USC ki pehli story hi itni jabardast nikli hai toh aage pata nhi aur kya kya dikhega. Abhi toh yeh aapki pehli story thi jisne dhamaka kardiya aur baaki writers ke liye ek achha khaasa tension laa diya. Jab 2nd story aap post karoge tab kyaa hogaa.

Puri story ko aapne jis tarah se sajaya hai woh wakai laajawab hai. Vikrant ne ek aisa sapna dekha jo ekdum real jaisa lag raha thaa. Future or past ek saath dikha diya. IT knowledge, Time travel sab kuch dikha iss story mein. Aur saath mein dikha sex ka jalwa.

Jabardast thaa. Aapki second story ka intezaar rahegaa
Bhai bahut shukriya.. lekin ye pehli aur akhri hai.. :D Bhai tansn nahi ayega kisi ko ... balki motivation hi milegi hume to aise hi mili hai hamesha... Time loop tha bhai.. bar-bar wahi ho raha tha.. Loop tootna jaruri tha vo tutta tb kuch hta... Thanks bhai keep reading.. and post a story :hug:
 

Destiny

Will Change With Time
Prime
3,965
10,660
144
" Everything Is Binary "


Main roz ki tarah hi phising kar raha tha, Yahi kaam tha mera dusron ke article ko bich network se uthana aur usme kuch letter badal kar apne pass rakh lena. Jadatar ye article US, UK, Germny ke hi hote the. Malum tha ger-kanuni hai lekin snooping aur phising karne walon ko pakadna abhi mushkil kaam tha, ache paise bhi mil jaya karte the. Jabse dunia internet par channe lagi thi hum jaison ki amdani mein badhtotri jarur ho gayi thi. Open source operating system ka sabse jada fayda yahi tha ki usme sabut mitane mein asani hoti thi aur secure bhi hoti thi lekin aksar log secure chiz ko chhod wo operating system chhunte the jisme kaam asani se ho jaye isliye mera kaam aur asan ho jaya karta tha. Roz ki tarah aaj bhi meri script chal rahi thi aur UK ke ek article ko snoop karte hue uske kuch letter change karne mein lagi hui thi. Word ke kuch letter badalne par vo word galat ho jata tha lekin yahi samne walle ki demand hoti thi. Aksar mera kaam sirf script chalana hota tha baki main dusre terminal par apna alag kaam karta tha. Abhi bhi wahi kar raha tha ki tabhi meri nazar script par padhi jo ek jagah par halt kar gayi thi.

Halt dekh mene us terminal ko maximize kara aur abhi uska duplicate terminal khol kar check karta utne mein vo chal padi jise dekh mene apna irada badal diya. Ho sakta hai network par kuch time laga ho. Main terminal ko minimize karne hi wala tha ki meri nazar terminal par chal rahi commands ke output par padi jo ki aam-tor wale output se alag thi.

" ye kya chal raha hai " abhi dhayan se dekhna shuru kara hi tha ki kuch data accumulate hone laga. Kuch samajh pata use pehle achanak se screen par blue color ki dots ikhati honi shuru ho gayi aur agle hi pal ek hologram screen par ubhar kar mere samne aa gaya jo ek chehre mein tabdeel ho chuka tha.

" holy shitt... " main achanak se apni seat se uchakte hue piche ki taraf hua. Mene aaj tak aisa kabhi nahi dekha tha, ek pal laga jaise kisi fedral agency ne mujhe pakad liya hai aur ab mere bachne ka koi chance nahi tha kyun ki ab tak to unhone mere system ki har chiz ko read kar liya hoga. " shit.. jaldi se power cable nikalni hogi " dimag mein pehla khayal yahi aya jabki iska koi faiyda nahi tha par sabse pehle wahi karna theek laga. Mene fauran apna CPU aage ki taraf khincha aur power cable nikalne ko hi hua ki CPU ke bagal mein rakhe speaker mein se ek awaz ayi " Don't panic " awaz sunte hi mene CPU ek dum se chhod diya aur piche ki taraf baith gaya.

" I know what are you thinking " Awaz speaker mein se aa rahi thi lekin jo bol raha tha vo koi aur nahi balki screen wala Hologram tha. " Just Stay Calm and listen to me " Us hologram ne dubara bola jise sun na jane kyun main thodi aage ki taraf hua aur Hologram ko dhayan se dekhne laga. Na hi vo chehra mujhe insan ka lag raha tha aur na hi kisi alien ka. Kyun ki ek dafa mujhe ye bhi laga tha ki shayad mere system ko kisi Alien ne kabze mein le liya hai.

" machine jaisa chehra hai " sochte hi uski awaz ayi aur main thoda piche ki taraf ho gaya. Awaz bhi aisi thi mano jaise koi machine ki awaz ho, nahi.. machine hi bol rahi ho. " this is some super tech shit.. " main soch raha tha aur vo kuch bol raha tha isliye dhayan uski taraf laga dia.

" You are going to do some extra-ordinary things in your future days. Not today, not tomorrow but in some years. You will discover some extra-ordinary things which will be used for the betterment for this whole world "

" nahi bhai... main sirf chor hun.. ise jada kuch nahi... " khud se main bola kyun ki ise jada main kuch tha bhi nahi. Bar-bar yahi khayal aa raha tha ki kisi Fedral Agency ne mujhe hack kar liya hai aur ye sab waqt kaat rahe hain taki meri location track kar sakein, ye sab jante hue bhi na jane kyun main us Hologram se nazar hi nahi hata paa raha tha. Because for me, this is the best shit i am seeing in my life.

" I know this is difficult for you to understand but as much as it is important for you, it is more important for this world "

" difficult nahi .. main maan hi kahan raha hun.. ye sab mujhe fasane ki chaal hai.. par samajh nahi aa raha ki jisne bhi ye kiya vo kiya kaise " khud se sawal aur soch mein itna kho raha tha ki ye bholta jaa raha tha ki bas kuch der aur jiske baad main pakda jaunga.

" And I know you are not believing me right now but you will. I am gonna share something with you which will make you believe that you will gonna change this world " Hologram ne bolna band kiya aur uske baad ek ke baad ek file background open honi shuru ho gayi. Kuch hi pal mein meri puri window par alag-alag file khul gayi jise dekhte hi mere peron talle zameen hi khisak gayi aur main chair ke handle ko pakdte hue apni seat se khada hua aur un chizon ko padne ke liye mano screen mein ghus hi gaya tha.

" unbelievable " itna hi bola ki achanak se vo sabhi chizen screen se gayab ho gayi aur Hologram se awaz ate hi wapis ja baitha.

" Don't worry, this is all for you. And now i believe you are satisfied with my message. Please do not share this with anyone " iske baad ek pause aya meri life mein aur us hologram ke bolne par bhi.

" Extracting files now " Hologram ki awaz ayi aur mene dekha ki dusre terminal mein extraction shuru ho gayi jise dekhte hi samajh aa gaya ki ek path par folder ban raha hai jiske andar sab kuch jaa raha hai vo abhi chal hi raha tha ki hologram fir se bola. " And remember Everything Is Binary " usne itna hi kaha aur vo hologram destroy hokar puri screen par dots ke roop mein fial gaya. Hologram ke destroy hone ke baad bhi main screen ko hi ghurta raha jaise lag raha ho ki ab kuch hone wala hai, ab kuch hone wala hai par jab kuch nahi hua aur meri chal rahi script complete hui tab main hosh mein aya. Hosh mein atte hi sabse pehla kaam jo mene kiya vo tha susu. Ghabrahat se itna pressure bana tha ya thodi der pehle piye full glass juice se par susu karke jab aya tab pet se relax hua warna dimag to abhi bhi sann tha.

Jo folder Hologram duara extract hua tha vo ek location par pada tha lekin himmat nahi ho rahi thi ki main use khol kar dekh bhi sakun. Man hi man cha to main raha tha lekin himmat nahi ho rahi thi. Ye lag raha tha ki kuch der mein koi mujhe pakad kar le jayega aur isliye man keh raha tha ki sab kuch tabah kar dun par us hologram ki baat jaise dimag mein stuck kar rahi thi, kyun main apni zindagi ek mazak ke chalte khatam kar raha hun, utha kar le gaya koi to salon sadna padega.

" bhaad mein gayi dunia, sorry hologram bhaiya... nahi ho payega " mene terminal khola aur usme command dali ' rm -rvf /* ' bas enter daba aur khel khatam. Ye ungli enter kyun nahi daba rahi daba.. daba .dabaa.... Main man se puri takat laga kar cheekh raha tha lekin meri ungli ne enter nahi dabaya.

" shit... " mene command wala terminal band kiya aur CPU se Cd eject karke bahar nikali jiske andar meri phising wala sara data tha aur computer ki screen ko switch off kar diya. Fatt bhi rahi thi aur ek alag tarah ka utsah bhi andar paida ho gaya tha. Ab ya to meri fategi tabhi ye utsah khatam hoga ya fir is utsah ko koi maar de to chain milne wala tha. CD ko hath mein pakde main chair par piche ki taraf fel gaya aur hologram ki baat ko sochne laga, kuch der ache se sochne ke baad conclusion aya " do din se kacha nahi badla world kya badlunga.. mujhse nahi ho payega ... " apni jagah se khada hua aur telephone se number dial kiya ' 0-1-2-4-8' number dial karte hi ring jane lagi aur che-sath ring ke baad phone utha.

" hello "

" kaam ho gaya, kab milna hai "

" tumhe sham ko phone karne ko kaha tha. Kaam ke time par phone mat kiya karo "

" Kaam to main hi karta hun tumhara "

" han aur main ghanta bajati hun.. 2 ghante mein milo "

" last wali payment bhi kar dena aaj "

" han ready hai aur jada batein mat kiya karo phone par kitni baar bola hai " phone cut hua to mene bhi phone patak diya. Phone rakhte hi main ubasi lete hue bathroom mein ghusa aur naha dho kar apartment se nikal gaya. Takreeban do ghante ki bus thi aur bus mein baithe kab soya malum hi nahi chala. " Remember Everything Is Binary " achanak se ankh khuli.

" bhaiya tumhara stop aa gaya utarna nahi hai kya " conductor chillaya.

" han han.. utar raha hun.. " bus se utar kar main galiyun se hote hue ek apartment ke samne jaa ruka aur wahan lagi bell bajai. Ek bell bajte hi samne ka kiwad khula aur abhi kuch kehta usne chup rehne ka ishara kar diya. Vo phone par kisi se baat kar rahi thi. Uske darwaja kholte hi main andar aya aur andar waqt mene kundi laga di. Main wahin bistar par baith gaya aur jug se pani pine laga tab tak usne apni baat nipta li.

" lao.. " usne sidhe yahi kaha.

" na dua na salam direct lao.. "

" samay kam hai aaj " vo apne bag se kuch nikalne lagi.

" main to soch kar aya tha ki... " usne meri taraf envelope badaya. " purre hain.. gin lo.. aaj tak ka hissab chuka kar diya hai tumhara, ab jaldi se lao " mene envolpe liya aur CD use pakda di.

" rate badne wala hai " mene paise envolpe se nikal kar dekha.

" acha? kis kushi mein? " vo CD par marker se likhte hue boli " girlfriend bana li jo kharche badh gaye tere? "

" risk badh gaya hai "

" acha .. " vo halka sa tans kaste hue muh khol kar hansi " risk to sadak par bhi hai to kya ab security guard sath rakh kar chalega.. paisa nahi badega "

" yahan main apni jaan jokhim mein dal kar tumhe lakhon kamwata hun aur tum kuch hazar nahi badha sakti "

" hazar badh jayenge par fir vo nahi milega jiski jarurat puri karne ki wajah se tumne han bhari thi ... " vo kamar matkate hue mere najdeek ayi. Bas yahin main fisal jata tha aur uska kaam saste mein kar diya karta tha. Jab vo mere najdeek ayi to mene apne hath uski gardan par rakh diye, short hair ke chalte main uski gardan ki skin ko ache se feel kar sakta tha. Gardan se chatiyun tak aya aur wahan uski skin ko feel karne laga. Na jane kya jadu tha uski skin mein, chutte hi meri pent ke andar ka vajan badh jaya karta tha. Chati par hath ferte hue mene anguthe se uske honton ko dabate hue ragda. Vo bhi madhosh ho gayi thi, use bhi acha lagta tha tabhi to usne mujhe shuruwat mein indirectly offer diya tha iss kaam ko karne ke liye.

" jaldi kar.. kaam se jana hai mujhe bhi " usne mera hath apne seene se hataya aur kurti ko pakad kar apne sharir se alag kar diya. Andar safed color ki bra mein uski halki wheatish color ki skin mujhe suhawani lag rahi thi. Vo meri aaur dekhte hue palti aur mene uski bra ke huk khol diye jise usne turant zameen par gira diya. Salwar ka nada usne khol diya aur penty samet vo niche mere samne nang jhuk kar khadi ho gayi. Main ek pal uski bhari jawani ko dekhne laga jo kai baar dekh chuka tha par jab bhi dekhta aisa lagta pehli dafa dekh raha hun. Chut par halke baal dekh khujli si mach gayi mere sharir mein.

" aa naa.. " usne apni nazar piche ki aur uske chote chote baal ankhon ke aage aa gaye. Main use dekhte hue fauran khada hua, apni belt khol jeans samet kache ko niche kiya aur uske sharir ke nazdeek aa gaya. " thoda rough kario aaj.. " vo boli aur usne table ko kas kar pakad liya. Mene apne lund ko hath se pakda aur uski chut par rakh kar dhakka mara aur dono ke muh se ek sath ' aah-hh ' nikli. Chut itni gli thi ki lund asani se andar ghus gaya aur fir main zor-zor se dhakke lagane laga. Dhakon ki raftar tez thi jaisa usne kaha tha rough.. wahi de raha tha. Vo sisakti hui apna sar uppar niche karne lagi. Table puri tarah se hil rahi thi aur bich bich mein jab main dhakke aur tezi se marta to uska hath table par fisal jata.

" kahan ka gussa nikal raha hai aaj.. aahh.. "

" tune hi to kaha tha rough.. aaj tujhe itna rough chhodunga ki teri chut se bacha mera hi niklega "

" aukad ... hai teri bache paida karne ki aahahhhh... " jab usne aukad ki baat ki to piche se mene uski chutadon par chamat laga di.

" meri aukad ki baat karti hai.. tujhe kya malum main kis kaam ke liye chuna gaya hun.. " main bhi josh mein use pel raha tha aur isme aseem anand aa raha tha. Vaise bhi hum dono chudai bina baton ke karte hi nahi the.

" acha... tujhe.. kaun chunega... uhmm thoda dhire.e..se... " usne dhire bola to mene aur tez dhakke laga diye.

" Hologram ne chunna hai mujhe.. vo bhi is dunia ke liye " maine jaise hi bola vo meri taraf patli aur mujhe dekh zor-zor se hasne lagi vo jitna hansti mere andar utni hi power badh jati use thokne ki jiski wajah se uski chatiyan table se takrane lagi aur per fisalte hue table se ja chipke jo use chubne lage the. " main.. hi is dunia ko badlunga.... " main hanfte hue zor-zor se dhakke lagane laga aur uski siskiyan chekh mein badal gayi, dard aur plessure dono ki. Uske hath ki ungliyan akadne lagi thi aur jaise uske sharir ne uske ras ko bahar nikal fainka aur kuch tez dhakon ke baad mene bhi apna ras uski chut mein udhel diya jise udhelte hi sharir ko aisa laga jaise atma hi chinn gayi ho. Main hafta hua uske uppar pada tha aur mera thuk uski pith par gir kar jama ho chuka tha.

" hahahaha... " jab mene use subah ki hui ghatna batai to vo zor-zor se hasne lagi. Main kapde pehen kar ek kone par khada uski hansi ko dekh raha tha. Usne kapde pehen liye the aur abhi cigratte jalane mein vyast thi. Cigratte jala kar usne uska kasht funka .. " tu.. aur dunia badlega.. hatt salle.. tu sirf dhande ke liye bana hai.. " usne dusra kasht kincha " chori ka dhanda.. tujhe wahi suit karta hai.. usme dimag laga, ye hologram aur dunia ko badalne ka kaam kisi aur ko karne de.. tere baski nahi hai.. samjha.. " vo mujhe dekh rahi thi aur main use ghur raha tha. Har bar mujhe uske chehre ke nain-naksh bade pyare lagte the, choti ankhein, choti naak, patle gulabi honth.. par is samay vo sab bure lag rahe the. Mene use kuch nahi kaha apna envelope uthaya aur wahan se nikal gaya. Nikalte waqt usne jo kaha vo mujhe ache se sunai diya tha " Agla project jaldi dungi, chori karne ke liye, sala chor " vo hansi mere zehen mein thi aur raat bhar rahi jab tak nind nahi aa gayi.

Socha tha kuch karunga aur kiya bhi wahi roz wala kaam, kuch din beet gaye aur main apne wahi schedule main lag gaya. Bas farak itna tha ki pehle is kaam ko karte hue socha nahi karta tha par ab sochne laga tha. Kaam karte hue bar-bar dhayan Hologram, Uski awaz aur vo folder bas yahi aa raha tha. " shit.. " mene current terminal close kiya aur us folder par gaya jo us din hologram se extract hua tha. Mene use double click karke khola, kuch samay laga use kholne mein shayad bahut bada tha, jab tak vo khula nahi bechaini mein mere per hilte rahe. Folder khulte hi mene dekha us mein kafi sari files thi. Kaun si kholo pehle? Itni sari files hai .. Kaun si kholun.. aur kholun bhi ya nahi... raha to ja nahi raha. Dil zoron se dhadak raha tha, mathe par pasina tha, decision to lena hi tha, abhi tak mujhe kuch hua nahi tha jise saaf tha ki mujhe koi pakadne nahi ane wala tha.

" jo hoga dekha jayega " mene faisla liya aur gaur se screen par dekhne laga jiske baad samajh aya ki ek pattern ke tehat hi sari file us order mein ayi hai jis order mein mujhe unhe open karna hai. Mene pehle us file ko open kiya jo us order ki pehli file thi. File ka naam tha ' Journey ' Double click karte hi file open hui aur usme chuppe content se mera parichay ho gaya. Bas ab kya hona tha, jaise kisi chiz ki latt lagti hai mujhe ab latt lag gayi thi. Pehli se dusri, dusri se tisri aur ye ginti badhti chali gayi. Din raat mein tabdeel hoti to raat din mein, kabhi sota to kabhi khata, ghar se bahar sirf jaruri kaam ke liye nikalta. Pratiksha ka kaam bhi side mein karta lekin kabhi-kabhi, use milna to chhod hi chuka tha, uska kiya hua kaam jab bhi dena hota to use bula kar bahar ke bahar hi pakda deta. Vo mere is behaviour ko dekh kar sochti hogi ki us din usne jo mujhe kaha vo mujhe bura laga lekin vo galat thi, usi ki wajah se to maine thani thi, agar us din vo mujhe niche na girati to main uppar uthta hi kyun. Main ab wahi kar raha tha jo us hologram ne kaha tha, jaise uske instruction the sivai ek chiz ke jo usne mujhe mana kia tha is baat ko kisi ko nahi batane wali baat lekin mene pratiksha ko bata di thi. Par use koi farak nahi pada tha, na hi koi kaam ruk raha tha aur na hi samay. Samay ke anusar sab badalne laga, pehle jo computer use karta tha vo badala, dhire-dhire technology ne samay ke sath itni tariki kar li ki jis kaam mein mujhe ghanto lagte the vo chand samay mein hone laga tha. Ankhon par chasma kab chada malum hi nahi chala, umar usi apartment mein badhti chali gayi aur ek dashak guzar gaya. Par main kahan pahuncha tha abhi tak? Shayad kahin nahi ya fir bahut aage.. Sochna chahta tha lekin soch hume hamesha apne kaam se alag kar deti hai isliye main sirf apne kaam par focus karta raha. Pratiksha se sambhand khatam hue arsa ho gaya tha, usne kayi baar contact karne ki kosish ki par mere pas ab uske liye samay nahi tha. Akhri baar jab baat hui thi tab usne yahi bataya tha ki vo kahin bahar settle ho rahi hai, mene tab bhi uske message ka jawab nahi diya tha. Apne kaam mein itna ulajh gaya tha ki mujhe uske alwa kuch dikha nahi. Jaise-jaise vo file ka sequence aage badh raha tha, mere kaam ka roop badalta jaa raha tha. Ab sirf ghar baithe nahi balki bahar nikal kar kuch kaam karne the. Dusre dashak tak atte atte main ab kahin na kahin pehchan mein tha, internet par article chapne lage the. Mashur hua tha? Pata nahi.. parwah nahi thi kyun ki abhi mera kaam baki tha, jo mujhe karne ke liye bataya gaya tha usme abhi samay lagna tha. Akhri charan bacha tha jiske liye jagah badalni thi. Jis kaam ke liye bahar jaya karta tha ab vo pura ho chuka tha, isliye kaam karne ki jagah bhi badali gayi aur dekhte hi dekhte mene apni zindagi ke teen dashak laga diye, zindagi ke 31 saal jiski shuruwat san 2000 se hui thi aur aaj vo din tha.

25 November, 2031

Apni jagah par baitha samne screen par article padh raha tha ki Dimtri ne mera dhayan toda. Dimtri pichle ath salon se mere sath kaam kar raha tha. Main code ko chhod kar lab ka pura setup Dimtri ke hathon mein tha.

" astonishing tech " article par nazar dalte hue vo bola.

" hmm "

" is hydra-power ki energy se pure world ki electricity ki samsya dur ho jayegi vo bhi bina climate ko nuksan pahunchaye, plant start ho gaya? "

" Ha.. kal hi hua hai "

" Ye idea tumhara tha, is article mein tumhe bhi hona chahie tha, tumne apna idea kisi aur ko diya hi kyun "

" zarurat nahi thi dimtri.. tumhe pata hai mera focus kya hai " chasma utar kar main apni jagah se khada hua " and that dream will soon be completed "

" checking logs? " mene dimtri ki taraf dekha jo system check kar raha tha. Vo kuch der screen par hi dekhta raha, main janta tha ki vo kya kahega.

" logs se to yahi lag raha hai ki " Dimtri ne nazar meri taraf ki.

" its getting finalizing ... " meri nazar samne thi, jahan par ek bahut badi screen lagi hui thi.

" tumne puri raat jaag kar kaam khatam kar diya? " Dimtri hairan tha kyun ki abhi do din ka kaam baki tha jise mene pichli raat aur din laga kar pura kar diya tha.

" Chain ki nind ab sirf tab ayegi jab ye start hogi "

" I guess vo nind aaj raat ko hi mil jayegi.. its asking for the password " dimtri ne bola to mere sharir mein excitment ki lehar daud gayi. " give me the hat " main apni jagah par jaa baitha aur dimtri ne mujhe sar par uski banai hui techonogy se lais ek iron hat pehna di jo direct system se connect thi. Dimtri ke pas sirf ek yahi project tha jisko banane mein use char saal lage the. Mana is Hat ka core deisgn mene hi diya tha lekin Hat bana kar use system se jodne ka kaam usi ne kiya tha.

" ok ... i am initiating.. " dimtri ne itna kaha aur button push kar diya. Button ke dabte hi hat ne mere Brain Waves ko read karna shuru kar diya. Ye wo waqt tha jab mujhe sabse jada relax rehna tha kyun ki password koi word nahi tha balki meri brain activity thi jise code ke through binary form mein dala gaya tha jiske baad hi machine access ho sakti thi.

' Process Completed, Password accepted ' system awaz sunte hi mujhe dimtri ki 'yay' sunai di, uski itne salon ki mehnat jo rang layi thi.

" Ok i am shutting down " usne system band kiya aur mene HAT ko hata liya.

" kitna time lagega " mene faura pucha.

" just about time.. " dimtri ne itna hi kaha aur samne wali screen par dekhne laga jiske sath hi meri nazar us taraf gayi. Mere samne chand hi palon mein vo ane wala tha jiski kalpana mene 31 saal pehle ki bhi nahi thi.

' Helo Humans, I am Binary ' system awaz ke sath screen par flash hote hi mere chehre par khushi ki lehar daud ayi.

" we did it.. " dimtri bhi khushi mein chikha.

" Connect binary to the core system " core system se judte hi Binary ke pas vo power aa jati jo aaj tak kisi machine mein nahi thi. Vo dunia ki har information ko grasp karke ek aisa solo system ban jane wala tha jiske pas sari knowledge hone wali thi, yani ki sabhi mind ka ek mind. Ye process bilkul waisa hi hone wala tha jis tarah hum ek dusre se connect the. Connect hone ke liye binary internet, books, mobile phones ke through humans ke mind ko read karke ek evaluation set kar sakta tha jiski probablity 99.9% correct honi wali thi jo aaj tak hume kisi machine ne nahi di thi.

" on it " dimtri ne binary ko core system se connect kar diya aur screen par processing ane laga.

" now we celebrate " mene dimtri se kaha aur apne room ki taraf badha. Aaj mere 31 salon ki mehnat rang layi thi. Jo kabhi socha aur kiya na gaya ho vo mene karke dikhaya tha. Kamre mein pahunch kar mene apni sabse purani wine nikali jo aaj ke liye hi bacha kar rakhi thi. Abhi room se bahar nikal hi raha tha ki meri nazar kamre ke kone par padi jahan mera wahi computer pada tha jiski wajah se in sabki shuruwat hui thi.

" i was about to call you.. " dimtri ne mujhe dekhte hi kaha. " Binary puri shamta se kaam kar rahi hai, har second finotabyte memory store kar raha hai " uske bolte hi main muskuraya aur hum dono ke liye wine glass mein bharne laga.

" Ye sirf machine nahi hai dimtri, ye future hai.. Ye har bitte second sirf knowledge hi grasp nahi karega balki us knowledge se hi apne aap ko self-grow karega jaisa har ek AI karta hai. Aur jab Binary is process ko complete karegi tab hoga hamare pas hamara future. Jab sabhi mind ek jagah ho to tum jante ho ki koi kya kar sakta hai, Binary sirf universe ke bare mein, naye planets aur unpar pahuchne ke bare mein hi nahi batayega balki hum apni information ko kisi bhi samay mein bhej payenge "

" time travel? "

" Sort of dimtri.. Hum khud ko past mein nahi bhej sakte lekin information ko bhej sakte hain. Binary can send any information to any person at a specific time jo bhi hum decide karenge, socho use kitna faiyda hoga, binary hume kya sahi hai aur kya galat ye bata payegi. Uski knowledge se hui calculation ke basis par hum us information ko apne past mein bhej payenge taki ane wale drought, tsunami's aur har tarah ki activites ko control kiya jaa sake "

" this is brilliant, par this will alter the timeline, i thought Binary information collect karke future ki ek sahi prediction de sakta hai, kya tumne time line ke bare mein nahi socha, agar aisa hua to binary ka existence hi nahi rahega "

" Maybe thats what Binary wants, we are scientists dimtri, we are meant to change the world. And we change this through Binary " main scientist bilkul nahi tha par itne salon mein jo mene kiya uske liye science ki knowledge ki kya jarurat thi bas tarika pata hona chahie aur dimtri jaisa koi intelligent insan ka sath.

" then lets celebrate " hum dono ne wine ke glass apas mein khankhaye aur ek hi ghunt mein pi gaye. " well mene tumse bahut waqt se kuch puchna chahta tha, aaj sahi waqt lag raha hai to puchun ? "

" bilkul "

" how did you even build this place.. " dimtri ka sawal sahi tha koi aur hota to shayad pehle hi puch leta ki mene kaise ek barfile pahad ke niche itni badi jagah ka nirman kiya.

" do you remember 2015.. " mene pucha to dimtri sochne laga " vo saal jisme insano ne ek naya Element khoja tha? "

" Xectra "

" exactly "

" par uska ise kya matlab ? " dimtri sochne laga aur jab use samajh aya to vo hairani mein bola " Xectra tumne khoja tha? " vo ek pal chup hua " becha kisko? "

" china "

" China? are you out of your mind.. you sold it to china.. " dimtri ek dum se baukhlaya " tum jante ho ki vo kitna khatarnak element hai aur ye jante hue bhi tumne china ko bech dia? "

" Janta hun dimtri par tum khud batao itne kam samay mein china ke alawa aisi jagah kaun build kar sakta tha? har vo equipment jiski hume jarurat thi vo koi aur nahi de sakta tha isliye mene unhe becha, to build this future "

" but you know "

" i know how dangerous xectra is, Xectra element kisi bhi material, base aur crust ko bhed sakta hai i know this.. its the most powerful element humans has ever founded "

" and it can be a powerful weapon also " dimtri khush nahi tha.

" oh common dimtri.. aisa kuch nahi hoga.. tumne vo article nahi pada.. China ka.. read it.. jisme unhone Xectra element ke zariye ek aisi laser technology banai hai jo earth ki surkasha karegi " dimtri ne itne mein vo article khol liya jiska main jikar kar raha tha.

" China develops a weapon that can detroy any large asteroid "

" dekha, China can also do good, ab socho agar koi asteroid earth ki taraf aya to hum dinasaurs ki tarah lupt nahi honge " jo dimtri keh raha tha vo main tab hi janta tha ki china ko xectra dena bahut bada risk hai lekin mujhe aisa karna tha kyun ki yahi Hologram ke document mein karne ko kaha gaya tha.

" i can't believe them... but .. " abhi dimtri itna hi bol paya ki puri lab mein andhera cha gaya, electricity chali gayi thi. " power backup kyun nahi chal raha " dimtri ko hairani use jada tab hui jab samne screen par Binary ne apna kaam nahi roka. " How is this working... "

" don't worry.. Binary ko isi tarah ke backup ke liye ready kiya hai. Jis minute se ye start hui usne apne liye electricity reserve karni shuru kar di thi, uske liye seperate power backup rakha hai. Par power back kyun nahi chal raha hai vo check karo and connect our core line with binary, hamare system binary handle kar legi " Dimtri ne bilkul waisa hi kiya aur sirf lab ke system on ho gaye. System on hote hi mene binary se pucha " Binary Power Status " lekin binary ne koi response nahi diya. Main kuch check karta use pehle dimtri chillaya.

" you need to see this.. " usne apni screen se window swipe ki jo mere screen par aa gayi " power outrage.. India, China, Bangladesh, Pakistan, all suffers major electric outrage issue " dimtri ka bheja data screen par visibile tha dhire-dhire kakre part of Asia andhkar mein jaa raha tha aur usi tarah baki continents bhi.

" it must be because of the Hydra-Plant they have started in the Pacific ocean " mene dimtri se kaha " Binary Please Check Electric outrage cause " Binary ne is baar bhi koi response nahi diya. Uske response na dene ki wajah khojta use pehle dimtri fir chilla pada.

" fuck... " agli hi pal dimtri apni jagah se aise kahda hua jaise usne kuch bahut bhayanak dekh liya.

" kya hua ? " mere puchne par usne kuch nahi bola aur apne system par kuch kaam karne laga. Mene dubara pucha " what happen dimtri? "

" Power-outrage, ye hydra-plant ki wajah se nahi hai.. " vo meri taraf dekhte hue bola aur apni screen swipe kar di jo mere system par aa gayi " Binary did this " to dimtri yahi pata laga raha tha jiske baad jo mene dekha vo mujhe bhi vishwas nahi hua

" what nonsense ... how could binary.. and why " main dimtri ki baat sun kar jab system par dekhne laga to mere hosh ud gaye kyun ki binary ne sirf electric outrage hi nahi kiya tha balki usne ab " Binary ne core energy ka access kaise liya "

" core energy ? Ye kya hai " Ek ke baad ek aisi batein aa rahi thi jo dimtri nahi janta tha lekin mera dhayan is baat se jada ispar tha ki akhir Binary ne core energy ko use kaise kiya vo bhi bina meri permission diye bina hi. Sirf ek hi rasta tha janne ke liye aur vo tha binary ke core function mein dekhna. Mene wahi kiya lekin jab jab mein us function ka access karta binary mujhe bahar fenk deta " what the fuck is happening "

" Something is wrong, Binary code change kar raha hai " dimtri ne jaise hi kaha main samajh gaya ki usne khud ko permission kaise di. Vo mere likhe code ko re-write kar raha hai. " this is not being told to me.. " Mene bahut socha lekin aisa koi document tha hi nahi jiski madad se main ye rok sakun.

" vikrant.. " usne mera naam pukara vo bhi itni ghabrahat mein jaise kuch anhoni hui ho. " you need to see this " vo fatti ankhon se mujhe ghurne laga. Agle hi pal meri screen ki tasveer badli jispar chalne laga tha " China ne jo laser weapen asteroid tabha karne ke liye banaya tha usko hum sabhi asman mein dekh sakte hain "

" impact? " mene pucha aur screen par flash hone laga, jise mene do bar dekha kyun ki vishwas nahi ho raha tha " Moon "

" how did they.. even have that kind of power... Hydra " meri ankhein khuli ki khuli reh gayi " dimtri, hydra ki power china ke laser plant par kaise pahunch rahi hai check it now " mene pucha jarur par shayad andar hi andar main is baat ko janta tha.

" Its Binary ... Binary hydra ki sari power china ke laser plant ko de rahi hai and that causes power outrage "

" why binary doing this " mene khud se hi ye sawal kiya.

" With that amount of power given to the laser core, it will "

" destroy the moon.. " main apni jagah se khada hua.

" agar moon destory ho gaya to earth survive nahi kar payegi, uski rotation ki speed badh jayegi, maybe if will drift from its place, rise in earth temperature, weaker sea waves, longer days, it will wipe out every species from the planet. We need to close this fucking machine " dimtri chillaya.

" we can't.... "

" we can't? what are you saying? " dimtri ek pal ke liye chup hua.

" tumhe pata hai maine ye jagah kyun chuni " ek pal chup rehne ke baad main bola " kyun ki yahi ek aisi jagah thi jahan se binary earth ke core ke us hisse tak pahuncha jaa sakta tha jahan se vo direct power access kar sakta hai"

" tumne aisa kiya hi kyun? Earth ke core se energy deni ki kya jarurat thi "

" kyun ki yahi mujhe kaha gaya tha karne ko "

" kisne kaha tha? " vo chup hua, meri aur se jawab na ata dekh vo bola " tum keh rahe ho ki humne ek aisi machine banai jo hume hi khatam kar dena chahti hai? "

" i don't know what to do.. its not been told to me.. " main soch raha tha ki ye ho kaise sakta hai. Sab kuch mene wahi kiya jo mujhse kaha gaya tha. Kahin kuch nahi chhoda koi galti nahi ki to fir kaise.

' IN 30 Seconds - Moon will Explode ' Pehli baar tha jab message Binary ki taraf se aya tha. Jise dekhte hi meri sansein bhari ho gayi. Jab insan ke sath vo ho jaye jo usne socha bhi nahi hota toh sabse jada jhatka use tabhi lagta hai.

" we have to do something vikrant, something to shut down this machine.. koi to fail safe hoga " dimtri ne fir mujhse kaha. Main soch raha tha aur jada soch raha tha aur tabhi mujhe dhayan aya ki mene kuch banaya hai.

" backdoor.... " mene apne terminal par kaam karna shuru kiya " i build this backdoor.. jise main Binary ke kisi bhi function ko directly access karke use badal sakta hun and with that help main uske main function ko band kar dunga..

' 15 seconds ' pehli baar kaam karte hue aisa lag raha tha mano sharir se jaan nikal rahi ho. " no no what the fuck... fuckk... "

" kya hua "

" jab bhi backdoor access kar raha hun, malware mera code delete kar de raha hai "

" Everything Is Binary vikrant... "

" i don't know what to do, its not been told to me.. " mene fir wahi dahuraya aur itne mein Binary ne apni screen badli aur moon ke destory hote hi jo image hamari samne ayi usne dil dehla diya. Hamare aur moon ke bich mein distance ki wajah se koi shor ya koi halchal to nahi hui lekin usko millions of debris mein tabdeel hota dekh dimag sann reh gaya. Moon ke tukde uski debris atmosphere mein felh gaye aur dekhte-dekhte kayi satellite uski chapet mein ati chali gayi jiske sath earth par moon ki debris ki shower shuru ho gayi.

" we have destoryed our home by ourslelf " dimtri hatash hote hue bola " this could be .. " dimtri itna hi bola ki system se ek awaz ayi.

' Alert ' is baar alert dimtri ke system se aya tha ' Object Identified, Approximate size 3 KM ' ye sunte hi dimtri ke sath main samajh gaya ki ab khel khatam. " impact " mene pucha.

' Direct Impact of Origin, Himalayas '

" Ye asteroid to hamari hi taraf aa raha hai... " dimtri ne fauran calculation kari aur screen swipe kar di " adhi se jada satellite destroy hone ki wajah se humne is asteroid ko late pick kiya " par wajah ye nahi thi ki satellite ne late pick kiya balki asli wajah mujhe ab samajh ayi thi.

" ab samajh aya ki binary ne aaj ki hi date kyun chuni... kyun ki aaj moon earth ke sabse jada kareeb hai "

' Impact time 4 minute 35 second ' isi ke sath coundown shuru ho gaya aur hamara dhayan tuta.

" I can't believe this, It could be The Last day for us, but why ... Why binary did this.. " Dimtri ab mujhse nahi khud se hi sawal karne laga.

" Because it saw us... " Mene dimtri ki taraf dekhte hue kaha. " It saw us that who we are.. it saw every hate we put towards this planet.. "

" to iska badla planet destory karke nikal rahi hai ye machine "

" No.. it is taking revenge with us... but i don't understand why it has not been told to me " mene fir khud se wahi sawal kiya.

" Kaun vikrant.. tum kabse same chiz bol rahe ho kaun hai vo jisne tumhe nahi bataya "

" Wahi jiske design se mene Binary ko banaya, wahi documents jisne mujhe Hydra-Power ka idea diya, wahi document jisne mujhe bataya ki Xectra element kahan chupa hai.. "

" main kuch samjha nai... " dimtri kaise samjhta jab main hi ab samjha tha aur jaise hi mene samjha, mujhe khud par vishwas hi nahi hua.

" this could not be our last day dimtri.. this could not be.. " mene sabse pehle ye check kiya ki Binary ne abhi kuch der mein kaun-kaun si information bheji thi " tum jante ho ki Binary informations ko past mein bhej sakta hai aur agar main sahi hun to... oh my god... " Mene dimtri ki taraf dekha, " its the Bimary who send me all the information and that hologram.. "

" main kuch samjha nahi.. " dimtri ko kaise malum hota ki jo bhi mene aaj banaya hai vo mene nahi balki mujhe bheji gayi chizon se bana hai. Mene dimtri ko short mein bataya ki kaise 31 saal pehle ek hologram dwara mujhe information mili aur sab document mile jiske jariye hi main aaj uske sath khada hun. Vo meri baat sun kar sadme mein tha jiska hona lazmi tha.

" mujhe tab samajh nahi aya tha lekin samay ke sath mujhe laga ki for the betterment of this world, mujhe ye information 5th dimension se mili hai lekin ab sab kuch dekh kar samajh aa gaya ki information kisi aur ne nahi balki Binary ne bheji thi "

" lekin usne tumhe vo message mein jo batein boli vo kaise... " dimtri ka sawal sahi tha, hologram ki recording mein jo batein thi vo usne kaise bheja, sochte hue dimag ne turant jawab diya.

" my words.. dimtri.. mene har case study ko record kiya.. and for Binary it is just 0 and 1 ... usne mere hi word alag-alag jagah se jodh kar ek message bana kar mujhe bheja.. " main ek pal ke liye sochta raha

" this is a Time Paradox " samjhte hi mene kaha kyun ki ye ek loop tha jiski shuruwat bhi main hi kar raha tha aur ant bhi.

' Impact in 1 minute ' sound alaram hua tab hum dono soch se bahar aye.

" vikrant you need to break this loop... you need to inform 'you' 31 years back.. we don't have much time left " dimtri sahi tha loop ko todna jaruri tha.

" i need to send the information back to me.. but this time it should be in my words.. " main system ko use karne laga, bas ek message karna tha. Message... ' Dont do it, Its a trap ' mene message form karke send kiya aur Binary ki help se bhejne laga lekin nahi hua.

" kya hua " dimtri ne pucha.

" it does not allow me.. it knows...ki hum uske khilaf message bhej rahe hain "

' Impact in 30 seconds '

" vikrant, we dont have much time left... we have to break this loop now " dimtri bol raha tha aur main kaam kar raha tha aur fir mene wahi kiya jo main pehle karta tha.

" pratiksha sahi thi, main chor hun aur usi ke liye bana hun " mene word ke kuch letter ko badal diya jaise main pehle badal kar snooping karta tha bas wahi kiya. After all for binary it will always be 0 and 1 aur jab use 0 aur 1 ka meaning hi samajh nahi ayega to vo mere message ko rokega nahi uske liye vo message khatra nahi rahega. Mene message send kiya aur mera data process mein chala gaya.

'Impact in 10 seconds '

Meri nazar screen par hi thi aur tabhi message aya, " Message accepted, Sending " bas iske baad itni zor se dharti hili ki meri nazron ke samne tez roshni ki wajah dhundla pan cha gaya.

Main roz ki tarah hi phising kar raha tha tabhi meri nazar screen par jam gayi, kuch samajh pata use pehle screen par ek hologram dekh main ghabra kar piche ho gaya jiske baad usne jo bataya use mere hosh ud gaye.

" Remember, Everything Is Binary "

Ek adbhut rachnakar ne aisi racha pesh kiya jo funtasy par adharit tha. Vartamaan aur. Bhavishy kaal dono ka misran kiya gaya. Sath hi sex ka ek chota sa drugs wala dose bhi diya. Bainary kuch bhi kar sakta hai. Jo bainary ne karke dikhaya.

Ise jyadaa mujh jaisa nausikhiye me ksamta nehi ki ek adbhut rachnakar ki rachna par tippdi kar sakhu.

Adbhut atulniya lekhan kaushal:applause::applause::applause:
 

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Ek adbhut rachnakar ne aisi racha pesh kiya jo funtasy par adharit tha. Vartamaan aur. Bhavishy kaal dono ka misran kiya gaya. Sath hi sex ka ek chota sa drugs wala dose bhi diya. Bainary kuch bhi kar sakta hai. Jo bainary ne karke dikhaya.

Ise jyadaa mujh jaisa nausikhiye me ksamta nehi ki ek adbhut rachnakar ki rachna par tippdi kar sakhu.

Adbhut atulniya lekhan kaushal:applause::applause::applause:
Thank you so much bhai :hug: keep reading.. :dost:
 

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harshit1890 :dost:
I want to thank you wholeheartedly for participating in this contest and entertaining us with such a beautiful story.

The concept of the story is completely different I've not read such a story till date, dialogues and story line are very well written which makes story better. From start to finish everything was measured and written in the right way means nothing was added that looks silly. Yes there are some things I didn't understand but everything else was great.

The protagonist of the story gets caught in the maze of time due to which the same things happen again and again that's why it is necessary to break this loop but in my opinion he could not get out of it even in the end. Everything was exciting stories like this make me happy.
 

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Main station pahuchne me kafi late ho chuka tha, bus dua kar raha tha ki train na ayi ho, main jaise hi station k platform pahucha train k horn ki awaz sunai di, train chal di thi. Main daud kar train me chad gaya aur apne coach jo ki 3rd AC tha usme pahuch gya. Raat ka time tha to main apni seat pe let gya aur pet already bhara tha to ankh lag gyi.

Der raat meri ankh khuli, main dekh k hairan rah gya train poori khali thi, train kisi jungle me thi aur lights bhi band thi, mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ki ye train khali kaise ho gyi aur jungle me kaha ruk gyi. Main seat se utha aur train se bahar nikla to pata chala train ka koi ata pata nahi tha, bus ek coach jisme main baitha tha vo jungle k virane me ek purani abandoned patri pe tha. Dar k mare dil tezi se dhadakne laga. Baki ki train, mere coach k Baki log kahan gaye, main yahan kaise aa gya, ye sub sawal mere dimag me kaundh rahe the, ek pal to mujhe laga ki ye zaroor koi bura sapna hai, maine apne chikuti kaati, ye koi sapna nahi tha ye hakikat hi thi. Fir mujhe ahsas hua ki kisi ne mujhe koi nasheela padarth sungha k mera sara saman hadap liya hai akyuki mera bag mobile and purse wagahra gayab tha. Par mera saman le k hi jana tha to le jate mujhe virane me iss abandoned train me, sunsan jungle me kyu chhod gaye ye samajh nahi aa raha tha.

Iss jungle me raat me dahshat ka mahaul tha, kab koi jungli janwar ya chor daku mujhe maar de koi bharosa nahi tha. Main bahar ek disha me chalna laga, fir maine socha wapas coach me jaa k dhundhta hu Shayad mera purse ya mobile wahan mil jaye kisi cabin me, main wapis coach pe jane k liye muda hi tha ki mujhe kutto k bhaukne ki awaz ayi aur jangli kutto k dar se maine wapas coach me jaa k mobile lene ka irada chhoda. Dar k mare main wapas uss disha me tez tez bhagne laga. Kuchh der to laga ki pichhe kutte aa rahe hain, par meri pichhe mud k dekhne ki himmat nahi hui. Main bhagta raha, thodi der baad kutto k bhaukne ki awaze bhi ana band ho gyi. Ab main hafne laga aur jungle me koi aabadi nazar nahi aa rahi thi. Main thoda ruka aur ab tez tez kadmo se chalne laga kyuk ab aur bhagne ki himmat nahi thi mujhme. Thodi der baad main jungle k kinare pahuch gya aur ek road pe nikla jo sunsan thi. Road k dusri taraf khet tho aur ek taraf yani jidhar se main aya tha jungle. Road sunsan thi aur koi bhi waahan guzarta nahi dikh raha tha, maine jeb tatoli jeb me purse bhi nahi tha, purse bhi coach me hi chhut gya tha. Maine socha agar jeb pe aise hote to kisi commercial gaadi me chad jata ab paise nahi hain free me hi kisi se lift leni padegi. Main sadak pe hi khada raha thodi der, kafi der baad ek car dikhai di maine hath dikhaya par car nahi ruki. Zahir si baat hai sunsan me ek ajnabi k hath dikhane pe car kaun rokega. Aise hi adhe ghante se zyada waqt beet gya is dauran kai car nikli par kisi ne car nahi roki. Main nirash hoke sadak pe kinare baith gya sir jhuka k. Thodi der baad maine notice kiya ki ek car mere paas aa k ruki, main khada hua, dekha car me ek lady baithi thi 25-30 saal ki.

“Aap sadak pe aise baithe hain? Theek to hain ya koi takleef ha?” Us lady ne puchha.

Main socha ki usko train se jungle me pahuchne wali baat bataunga to ye mujhe nashedi ya paagal samajhlegi aur tab shayad meri help na kare, mujhe ise aisa kuchh batana hoga jispe ye yakeen kar sake. Ye soch k maine usse kaha

“Ji mera naam Aman hai, vo meri train chhut gyi hai, actually train jungle me ruki thi main bahar nikla thoda tahalne k liye aage nikal aya aur achanak se train chal di jab tak main train pahuchta train jaa chuki thi, main akela safar kar raha tha train me koi janne wala hota to vo chain khich k train rok leta, mera mobile, purse, sara saman train me hi chhut gya hai”

“Ohh rail line toh I guess yahan se 4-5 km door hogi, aap wahan se paidal aa rahe hain, aiye baithiye.” Usne ye kah k door khola car ka aur main car me sawar ho gaya. Main aage baitha aur tab mujhe ahsas hua ki car me pichhe koi aur bhi baitha hai, koi young ladka tha pichhe baithe, uske halke halke kharrate ki awaz aa rahi thi.

“Ji madad k liye shukriya” maine kaha.

“Main Sneha Pichhe jo so raha hai vo mera chhota bhai Rohit hai, hum dono ek function se laut rahe hain. To apko apne kisi janne wale ka number yaad hai? Agar ho to unse baat kar k apni location bata dijiye ki abhi aap Ramnagar district me hain.” Us lady ne kaha.

Ye sun k maine jawab diya “nahi mujhe koi bhi mobile number nahi yaad hai, bus apna number mujhe yaad hai uspe call kar k dekh lijiye shayad kisi ko mila ho to vo safe rakhe ho mera phone”

Aur maine use apna number bataya jispe usne call kiya par phone switch off aya yani jis kisi ko bhi mera bag aur phone mile the uski wapas karne ki mansha nahi thi.

She said: “Ohh Aman apka number utha nahi aur ab apko dusre kisi janne wale ka number bhi nahi maloom. Aisa karte hain main apko auto rikshaw stand tak chhod deti hu aur kiraye k paise de deti hu taki aap wahan se rail station aur station se wapas apne ghar ya kisi janne wale k paas pahuch saken.”

Ye kahte hue Sneha ne kuchh note purse se nikal kar mujhe diye.

Meri ankho me ansu aa gye the, mujhe ummid nahi thi koi anjan meri help karega, par insaniyat abhi bhi zinda hai.

Me : “Ji bahot bahot shukriya, agar apko aitraz na ho aap apna ya apne bhai ka koi contact number de dijiye jab main apni manzil pahuch jaunga main apko paise lauta dunga.”


Sneha: “Are uski koi zarurat nahi hai, par haan ek contact number main apna aapko de deti hu agar koi problem aye to call kar k bata dijiyega, nahi to safely pahuch jaiyega to bata dijiyega.”


Me: “Thank you again apka sneha, jab main road pe pahucha tha to maine kai cars ko hath deke rokne ki kosish ki thi par koi nahi ruki thi, ant me main nirash ho kar road kinare baith gaya, aap ne car rokne ka risk liye aur meri madad ki main dua karta hu ishwar se, Upar wala apko tarakki de.”


Sneha: “Are bus shukriya ki ab koi zarurat nahi hai, haan aise me help karne me risk to hota hai, par apko aise baithe dekh mujhe feel hua ki shayad apko such me help ki madad ki zaroorat hai aur aapse baat kar k clear ho gya tha ki aapko wakai me madad ki zarurat thi.”

Tabhi pichhe se awaz aayi “What the hell didi ye admi kaun hai.”

Ye 19-20 saal ka Rohit tha Sneha ka Chhota bhai tha jo pichhe baitha so raha tha aur achanak se jaga aur aage ek admi ko baithe dekh ghabra gaya shayad.

Rohit ki awaz sun k Sneha ne usko jawab diya.

“Ohh rohit tum jag gaye are ghabrao nahi ye Aman hain, inka sara saman including Mobile train me chhut gaya, ye train rukne par train se kuchh minutes k kiye nikle the aur train chal di, to ab inke paas kuchh bhi nhi hai even koi contact number bhi nahi yaad hai siwaye apne khud k phone k aur inka phone switched off aa raha hai."

Aman (me): "Hello Rohit."

Rohit: "Hello aman! Sorry main sote se achanak jaga tha to chauk gaya tha."


Khair mujhe sneha se puchhne pe time pata chala ki raat ya balki kahen subah me 2 baje se upar ho chuka tha. Ab humari car kai km chal chuki thi aur akhirkar sunsan rasta khatam hua aur car ek kasbe k paas se guzri kuchh aabadi nazar aane lagi halaki der raat ka time hone ki wajah se sannata hi pasra hua tha makaan zaroor dikh rahe the par koi bhi shakhs sadak pe nazar nahi aa raha tha, khair hum ek auto rikshaw stand k paas pahuche jahan Sneha ko mujhe drop karna tha. Khair maine Sneha se vida liya aur usko ek baar aur shurkiya bol kar main uski car se utar gaya.

Main auto rickshaw stand pe pahucha jahan itni raat ka samay hone k kaaran aur chhota mota kasba k nazdik hone k kaaran 2 auto khade hi nazar aa rahe the. Main auto k paas gaya to ek auto lock the aur koi driver nahi tha dusre auto me driver auto k andar so raha tha.


Mujhe uski nind se jagane me thodi hichak mahsoos hui main thodi der wahi khada raha. Thodi der baad wahan ek aur Auto wala aya, shayad vo kisi sawari ko chhod k aa raha tha kyuki auto khali tha. Mujhe khada dekh k usne mujhe puchha "kahan jana hai bhayya aapko, itni raat me aap yahan kaise, itni raat ko to koi sawari nahi milti main khud yaha auto khada kar k sone aya tha kyuki ghar mera kafi door hain yahan se par apko kahi jana ho to bataiye chhod deta hu"

Me "vo actually mera naam Aman hai mera phone kahi gayab hai aur train se main galti se yahan utar gaya bich me jungle me train rukne pe, mujhe train se Delhi tak jana tha"

He "ohh to aise karta hu apko Ramnagar k Railway station chhod deta hu wahan se apko Delhi ki koi na koi train mi hi jayegi."

Me "theek hai aap mujhe Railway station pe chhod do."

Aur main uske auto pe sawar ho gaya. Khair usne bataya ki uska naam Manoj hai aur railway station tak ka rasta thoda lamba hai to main aur auto driver manoj baate bhi karne lage raste me.

Manoj (auto driver) : "to yahan tak kaise pahuche sir aap."

Me: "Vo ek car me ek ladki aur uska bhai tha unhone lift di thi"

Manoj: "Oh….achha ajeeb baat hai kuchh din pahle ek accident hua tha usi route pe jahan ki aap bata rahe hain uss accident me ek ladki aur uska chhota bhai mare gaye the truck se hua tha accident santro car thi white color ki"

Ye sun k main sann ho gaya kyuki Sneha ki car bhi white thi. Mujhe laga kahi ye auto wala faltu me mujhe dara to nahi raha hai. Par maine socha isne to mujhe Sneha ki car me baithte ya utarte dekha bhi nahi, Balki ye to sneha k mujhe drop karne k kafi der baad mujhe mila. Maine himmat kar k usse puchha.

"Hmm...ajeeb sanyog hai, waise jo log mare the unke naam bata sakte ho kya?"

Driver Manoj: "are sahab ab naam kahan yaad rahenge vo to main wahan se uss din guzar raha tha to accident se damage santro car khud maine dekhi thi jise police kisi tarah raste se hata rahi thi accident k baad, isiliye yaad hai mujhe color."

Me : "kahi ladki kaa naam Sneha to nahi tha?"

He : "kahe dara rahe ho sahab ab koi mara hua shakhs thodi lift dega apko, unko car bhi white santro thi kya?"

Me "yes"

Ye sun k uss auto driver manoj ke expression ek dum badal gaye vo ghabraya hua dikhne laga, usne kisi ko phone milaya. Aur phone pe baat karye hue kaha "haa bhai sorry itni raat ko phone kar raha hu koi serious baat nahi bus vo accident hua tha pichhle month to vo ladki ka kya naam tha?"

Jawab sun k meri taraf dekhte hue usne kaha "achha sneha naam tha"

Me "Aur bhai kaa naam?"

Manoj "haa bhai vo ladki k bhai ka naam?...........achha Rohit"

Ye sun k mere dil ki dhadkane tez ho gayin, how can this be possible? No way they were alive. Sneha ne even mujhe apna number bhi diya tha. Yahi sub main sochne laga. Yahi Manoj phone pe baat kar chuka tha.

He "to uske bhai ka naam bhi Rohit tha kya jisne apko lift di thi?"

Me "yes"

He "hm...ab jo hua so hua ab mujhe dar lag raha hai to abhi ispe charcha ab aur nahi karte hain main apko station chhod deta hu, fir main sidha jaunga apne ghar."

Me "dekho main tumhe dara nahi raha par dar to mujhe lag raha hai tum jiske accident ki baat kar rahe ho usne mujhe lift di lift hi nahi paise bhi diye aur apna phone number bhi diya hai"

Ye bol k main apni jeb tatolne laga ki vo rupay aur vo parchi jisme sneha ne mujhe apna number likh k diya tha vo main driver ko dikha saku. Par meri dono hi jebe khali thi. Ab samajh gaya zaroor mera ghost encounter hua tha. Khair maine manoj se puchha "waise kisse baat kar rahe the tum"

Manoj "are sahab vo local police me hain mere ek janne wala night duty lagti hai unki accident k baad vo bhi wahan pahuche the to isliye maine phone se unse info li, dost hai vo police wala mera."

Tabhi manoj ka phone baja, usi police wale ka phone tha jiske bare me manoj baat kar raha tha, iss baar phone receive kar k Manoj ne speaker pe laga diya, taki baat mujhe bhi sunai pade.

Vo police wala on phone : "haa kya hua Manoj koi bhoot voot to nahi dekh liya? Aur sala tum daru to peete nahi ho kahi aaj pee to nahi li? Itni raat me auto chala rahe ho 3 se upar ho gaya main bhi ab night duty khatam kar k jaa raha hu tum bhi ab so jaao."

Manoj "haa bhai sawari chhod k ab ghar hi jaunga"

Police man "ok waise main dara nahi raha par raat me thoda sambhal k rahiyo, kuchh din pahle ek car wale ko bhoot dikh gaya tha"

Manoj "bhoot? Kiska bhoot? Wahi accident wali ladki Sneha ka?"

Police man: "are nahi re….koi admi tha 30 k aas paas ka uska bhoot, uss admi ki maut kai saal pahle hui thi train accident me yahi apne jile me, par saal bhar ho gaya hai shayad uss accident ko."

Manoj "achha k...kya naam tha uss admi ka ko accident me mara tha….mera matlab rail accident me?"

Police "abe tu naam aise puchhta hai jaise mujhe rata hua ho, aur rail accident me ek nahi kareeb 30 se zyada log mare the bogi k patri se utarne ke kaaran par uss ghata ko saal bhaar ho gaya hai, vo admi bhi un 30 me se ek tha jo mare the, ruk hold kar phone me dekh k batata hu uska kya naa tha jiska bhoot dikhne ki ghatna hui thi……………...haan vo... Aman…Aman Kumar naam tha uska…."

Uss police wale ne Phone pe itna hi kaha tha ki manoj behosh ho gaya aur auto aniyantrit ho k sadak kinare jaa k ek ped se takrayi………...
Superbbb Storyyy

Starting mein laga Aman ke saath koi bhootiya ghatna ghatt gayi hai. Jo ki aaj ke samay mein hona possible nhi hai. Par jaisa starting mein dikhaa. Aman train mein ekdum akela hogyaa. Uski train ekdum beech jungle mein pahonch gayi.

Uska Sneha aur Rohit ke saath mulakat. Phir dono ka Aman ko auto stand chornaa. Baad mein unndono ka bhoot nikalna aur last mein khud Aman ka bhoot nikalna. Yeh sab kahani ka ek jabardast twist thaa.

Aur shayad jo aapne dikhaya ke Aman train mein akela jungle ke beech tha woh shayad Aman ki aatma hi thi. Aur usse bhi nhi pata tha ke woh marr chuka hai. Aur isiliye usse train mein aur koi nhi dikhaa.

Sneha aur Rohit ne bhi uski madad isiliye ki kyoki Aman khud ek aatma hai. Par bechara Manoj woh bina matlab ke inn aatmao ke jhaal mein fhas gaya aur auto jo ped se takraayi hai usse shayad Manoj ki bhi maut hogyi ho aur ab woh bhi Aman Sneha aur Rohit ki tarah iss khel mein shamil hogya ho.

Khairr yeh ek mini horror story thi jisse padhke maza aagaya. Aisi hi ek aur story ka intezaar rahega par dusre prefix mein.
 
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Purwa our geeta


Chalo ab tum dono dudh pikar so jaao koi badmashi nahi samjhe ek aurat apne beta raja our beti rani se kahti hai

dono thik hai mammy kahte hai our phir dono us aurat ko kiss kar dete hai jo aurat bhi dono ko kiss kar ke room se nikal jati hai

bhaiya mujhe abhi nind nahi aa rahi hai koi geet gaa kar sunao na rani apne bhai se kahti hai

mujhse koi geet weet nahi aata gudiya ayesa karte hai ham nani ke room main chalte hai nani hi hameh koi kahani sunayengi raja kahta hai

jo rani bhi maan jati hai our phir dono bhai bahan apni nanii ke room main chale jate hai

Jab dono apni nani ki room main jate hai to dekhte hai unki nani bhi abhi jaag rahi hai to dono apni nani ke upar kud padete hai haste hua

are bachhon abhi tak tum dono soye nahi kya baat hai unki nani kahti hai nani

abhi ham dono ko nind nahi aa rahi hai please koi kahani sunai na please nani please phir ham sone chale jayenge rani badi hi masumiyat se kahti hai

jo nani muskura padti hai

thik hai chalo sath main tum dono bhi let jaao aaj main tum dono ko ek kahani sunati huin nani kahti hai

ye kahani hai Ek ladki ki jiska naam tha purw
a

Ek din tv par news chal rahi hoti hai ki teen aadmi ki kisi ne khun kar diya hai wah teen log gaaon ke rahne wale thakur the our wah log sahar main rahne lage the unke abhi sahar main aaye hua kuch hi din hua the magar kisi ne unka khun kar diya tha jo sahar main bahut hangama macha hua tha har news par bas unki hi bate chal rahi hoti hai our reporter log police ko iska zimmedar maan rahe the jo us khuni ko abhi tak pakad nahi pai thi

wahi police station main ek ladki aati hai our apne siniyar ke office main chali jati hai our slut karti hai

achha hua kiran tum jald hi aa gayi police wala kahta hai

kiran ye raha fail ... jo isme sari jankari hai pahle ek police wala kaam kar raha tha magar wah ab tak khuni ka koi pata nahi kar paya hai upar se bahut pareshan kar rahe hai bade adhikari log q ke marne wale thakur the our unke bahut upar tak pahunch bhi thi usne kuch dost log jald se jald khuni ko pakadne ke mang kar rahe hai is liye maine tumeh khas is khuni ka pata lagane ke liye hi yeha bolaya hai mujhe tum par pura yekin hai tum jald hi khuni ka pata laga logi .. police wala kahta hai

thank you sir main aap ko niras nahi karungi main jitna jald khuni ko pakadne ki koshish karungi kiran kahti hai our fail lekar chali jati hai

kiran ek achhi police wali thi ab tak kai khuni ko pakad chuki thi jo kiran kuch hi dino main apna bada mokam hasil kar chuki thi

20 din baad

raat ho rahi hoti hai our ek aurat apne bed par so rahi hoti hai magar us din us aurat ko nind hi nahi aa rahi hoti raat bhi us din bahut lambi ho gayi thi our wah aurat bed par sone ki kosis kar rahi thi magar use nind nahi aa rahi thi

wah aurat sahar ki sabse amir aadami ki biwi thi madhu Singh our us aurat ka pati ka naam tha Ranjit Singh jo us sahar ka sabse amir aadami tha uska karobar dur desh main bhi faila hua tha

our un dono ki ek pari jaisi beti thi jiska naam tha geeta

magar nani aap ne bola ye purwa ki kahani hai phir ye geeta kaun hai geeta naam to mammy ka bhi hai

abhi koi kuch nahi bolega chup hokar kahani suno phir main sab bata .. nani kahti hai t

o dono bachhe bhi haa main gardan hila dete hai

Wah aurat raat main thik se so nahi pati hai our subah ke 6 : AM hote hi wah aurat apne bed se uth kar abhi bathroom jane hi wali hoti hai ki uska phone bajne lagta hai to wah aurat jakar apna phone uthati hai

hello kaun bol raha hai aurat bina phone ka numbar dekhe hi kahti hai

hello mem main rameshwari hospital se bol raha huin kya aap ki beti ka naam geeta hai dusri tarf se ek aadami ki aawaz aati hai

apni beti ka naam sun kar aurat thodi ghabra jati our aurat usse bhi kahi jayada ghabra jati hai ki uski beti geeta hospital main kaise hai kya ho gaya hai meri beti ko aurat darte hua kahti hai

haa meri beti ka naam geeta hai kya hua hai meri beti ko aap ke pass meri beti ki phone kaise hai kaha hai meri beti aurat pareshan hote hua bolti

aap ki beti ki abhi elaaj chal raha hai aap hospital main aa jaiye udhar se aadami bolta hai

aurat ko badi hairani bhi hoti hai uski beti sahar main kaise hai wah to kal subah main hi apne dost ke sath dusre sahar gayi thi phir meri beti geeta itane subah subah sahar main kaise aai aurat sochte hua usi waqt apne kapde pahan kar ghar se nikal jati hai our raste main apne pati ko phone kar deti hai

jab aurat hospital main jati hai to dekhti hai hospital ke charon tarf police ka pahara laga hua hai our reporters ki bhid lagi hui hai wah aurat jaldi se hospital main jane hi wali hoti hai ki ek police wala aurat ko hospital ke bahar hi rok deta hai

mem aap andar nahi jaa sakti hai police wala kahta hai

Meri beti andar hai hato mere aage se aurat kah kar jane lagti hai ki pichhe se phir se wah police wala aurat ka hanth pakad leta hai jo aurat ko bahut gussa aata hai

our usi waqt aurat ghum kar ek tappad maar deti hai police wale ko jo tappad ki aawaz gunj jati hai aurat ka gussa dekh kar wah sabhi reporter bhi thode pichhe hat jate hai aurat se

teri to tune police wale par hanth kaise uthayi sali bol kar police wala aurat ko marne hi wala hota hai ke ek aawaz uski kaano main sunai deti hai

kosis bhi mat karna uneh marne ki pichhe se uske siniyar ki aawaz aata hai jo wah police wala sp hota hai ... aawaz sun kar hi police wala ruk jata hai

aurat us police wale ko gusse se dekhne lagti hai

bhabhi ji use manf kar dijiye abhi wah naya aaya hai aap ko janta nahi hai warna ayesi galti nahi karta sp kahta hai our aurat ko sath lekar hospital main chala jata hai to pata chalta hai abhi uski beti ki elaaj chal rahi hai our kaphi buri halat hai jo aurat sun kar bahut dukhi hoti hai our usse bhi kahi jayada aurat ko gussa bhi aata hai

q ki uski ek hi beti thi jise ek rajkumari ki tarh rakhti thi wah uski har khawahish jald puri kar deti thi magar wah aaj zindgi our maut ke bich lad rahi thi

meri beti ki ye halat kisne kiya hai main use jaan se mar dungi jiski bhi wajah se meri beti hospital main aai hai meri beti to dusre sahar gayi hui thi phir hotal main kaise pahunch gayi Zarur meri beti ka sath kuch bura hua hai ... Aurat roti hui kahti hai

kuch ghante bit jane ke baad i.c.o se Dr bahar nikalta hai

Dr ko dekh kar aurat Uske pass bhagati hai

Dr kaisi hai meri bachhi kya hua hai meri beti ko ... aurat roti hui kahti hai

dekhiye abhi aap ki beti thik hai magar kabhi khun bah jane se abhi wah behosh hai kab tak hosh aayega main bata nahi sakta huin ...Dr kahta hai

jab aurat sunti hai ki uski beti ka kaphi khun bah chuka hai our wah behosh hai to aurat ka sar chakra jata hai our wah aurat bhi wahi par gir jati hai

phir jaldi se aurat ko lekar room main chala jata hai Dr ke sath sp

kuch hi waqt main hospital ke bahar ek gadi akar rukti hai our usme ek aadami niklta aadmi ke gadi se nikalte hi sare midia wale gher lete hai magar jaldi se waha police wale aa jate hai jo sabhi ko waha se hata dete hai phir wah aadmi hospital main chala jata hai

meri beti ki ayesi halat kaise hui kisne mara hai meri beti ko kya wah pakada gaya hai main use apne hanthon se marunga bolo kaha hai wah pakada gaya hai to ... aadmi bahut gusse main kahta hai

Ranjit please abhi sant ho ja yaar wah abhi tak pakda nahi gaya hai main geeta beti ke bare main sun kar hi yeha aa gaya geeta beti bhi ab thik hai bas kuch waqt main hosh main aa jayegi ... Sp kahta hai

meri beti to apne dost ke sath dusre sahar main gayi thi phir meri beti yeha kaise aai yekinn koi kidneping kar ke lekar gaya hoga kaun hai mujhe pata chal jaye bas use kahi se bhi dhundh ke main apne hantho se marunga
... Ranjit Singh gusse main kahta hai

wahi har news par sirf our sirf geeta our us hotal main hui teen khun ke hi bare main bate ho rahi hoti hai our kuch news par geeta ko hi khuni bol rahe the to kuch news par geeta ki kidnapping ki baate kar rahe hote hai har news par sabhi apne apne banaye hua khayali baate kar rahe the magar kisi ko bhi hakikat main pata nahi tha akhir hua kya tha us hotal main our waha geeta kaise gayi thi q ke geeta subah hi apni maa se bol kar gayi thi wah apne dost ke sath dusre sahar ghumne jaa rahi hai phir geeta us hotal main kaise gayi our geeta ne khun kiya hai to wah phir itani buri halat main q hai bahut se sawal chal rahe the sabhi ke dimag main magar kisi ke pass bhi koi jawab nahi tha

hello kiran kaha par ho tum abhi tak aai q nahi police station ... Sp tension main kahta hai

sir main raste main hi huin bas kuch waqt main pahunchati huin udhar se kiran phone pe kahti hai

thik hai jitna jaldi ho aane ki koshish karo ... Sp kahta hai

Medam aap kaha rah gayi thi sir aap ka kab se intezar kar rahe hai Kiran jaise hi police station aati hai hawaldar bol padta hai kiran thik hai Bolte hua andar chali jati hai

kiran jaldi batao kya pata chala kisne mara hai un 3 aadmi our geeta ko mujhe bahut tension ho raha hai ... Sp kahta hai

sir sayad un teeno ko geeta urf purwa ne hi mari hai .... kiran kahti hai

kya bakwas kar rahi ho tum janti ho geeta singh kaun hai sahar ke sabse bade aadami Ranjit Singh ki beti hai our tum geeta ko purwa q bol rahi ho .... Sp thoda gusse main kahta hai q ke Ranjit Singh Sp ka bahut achha dost tha our dono bhai jaisa ek dusre ko mante the jo kiran uske dost ki beti ko katil bol rahi thi

sir main yeha aap ke bolane par hi aai huin us katil ko pakadne ke liye our main kab se is kes par kaam kar rahi huin par mujhe kuch nahi pata chal raha tha to maine phir se suru se start kiye ... to main sabse pahle us hotal main gayi jis hotal main teen logo ka khun hua tha mujhe us hotal main bahut hi ajib baat pata chali jo mujhe pareshan karne lagi .... kiran kahti hai

Kaun si baat pareshan karne lagi mujhe thik se batao .. Sp kahta hai

sir main us hotal ki cctv camera cheak kar rahi thi jo hotal ke har jagah ka cctv camera us din band pra hua tha jo bahut ajib bat thi tabhi meri nazar bahar ke cctv camera par gayi jo cctv camera thik hotal ke samne laga hua tha our maine us cctv camera ko nikal kar dekhne lagi mujhe itana to pata chal gaya tha koi to sabut Zarur mujhe milegi our jab main cctv footage dekh rahi thi tabhi mujhe ek ladki hital se niklti hui dikhi jo raat ke 2 :27 minat par hotal se nikal rahi thi us ladki ka chehra to nahi dikha magar jab maine usi waqt hotal ke manejar se us ladki ke bare main puchha to manejar bhi us ladki ke bare main kuch nahi bata paya q ki us ladki ki chehra nahi dikh rahi thi

maine usi waqt manejar se boli us din ki puri list cheak karo kaun raat main ruka tha our kaun subah main gaya our kaun rah gaya tha hotal main

koi 20 minat ke baad manejar ne ek ladki ke bare main bataya jo din ke 3 : PM ko hotal main aai thi our raat ko ruki bhi thi magar wah subah se sham tak hone ke baad bhi hotal se nahi nikli thi jo mujhe sakh hua kahi wah raat main jane wali ladki wahi to nahi is liye maine us ladki ki jankari mangi manejar se

manejar ne bataya ki uska naam purwa hai our wah rahne wali hai mangal pure ki our uske maa ka naam padma our baap ka naam raam singh main purwa ki photo lekar hotal se nikal gayi

main mangal pur gaon main jane hi wali thi ke mujhe aap ka phone aa gaya our aap bole mujhe geeta ki birthday party main aane ko main geeta ki birthday party main aai thi tabhi maine geeta ko dekhi jo geeta ki sakal bilkul purwa se milti thi mujhe to laga geeta hi purwa hai magar main yekin nahi kar payi q ki sakal to mil rahi thi magar baki sab alag thi geeta sahar ki ek amir baap ki beti thi wahi purwa gaaon ki rahne wali thi our dono ki maa baap ka naam bhi alag alag tha jo maine geeta par jayada dhayan nahi diya

main agle hi din mangal pur ke liye nikal gayi mujhe waha pata chala kai sall pahle hi purwa our uske maa baap our ek bahan mar chuki hai un sab ki maut kaise hui ye pata nahi chala

sir main to ek waqt ke liye khush ho gayi thi sun kar ki purwa ko main pakad lungi magar purwa ki maut ki khabar sun kar main bahut hi hairan our pareshan ho gayi thi

main sochne lagi jab purwa mar chuki hai to phir hotal main wah ladki kaun thi mujhe kuch samjh main nahi aa raha tha main phir se usi jagah pahunch gayi thi jaha se suru kiya tha

phir mujhe geeta ki yaad aai our main geeta par nazer rakhne lagi magar mujhe geeta

our aaj jab main hotal main gayi to pata chala aaj bhi hotal main purwa hi gayi thi geeta nahi jo mujhe rajister se pata chali hai our sir kal bhi us hotal ki cctv camera kharab thi magar aaj purwa urf geeta us room main jakhmi mili un do lasho ke pass jisse saaf pata chalta hai un dono ko geeta ne hi mara hai magar geeta ki ayesi halat kisne kiya pata nahi hai magar sir phir bhi bahut se sawal abhi adhura rah gaye hai

agar geeta un logon ko jaan se maar diya hai lekin q

our geeta apna id purwa naam se q istemal kar rahi hai

purwa our geeta ka kya rista hai

Ye sare sawal ka jawab geeta hi de sakti hai ya phir geeta ke maa baap .... Kiran kahti hai

kiran abhi ham geeta ko khuni nahi maan sakte hai mana ki geeta hotal main purwa naam se gayi thi magar geeta ne un sabhi ko mara hai koi sabut nahi hai hamhare pas our ham geeta ko pakad bhi lenge to geeta ye bol kar bach jayegi ki use kisi ne kidneping kiya hai pahle hameh geeta ke khilaf koi badi sabut chahiye jo sabit ho sake ki geeta hi un sabhi ka khun ki hai Sp kahta hai ... Sp ko abhi bhi kiran ke baat par puri tarah yekin nahi ho raha tha ye Sp yekin nahi karna chahata tha q ke geeta uske bhai jaise dost ki beti thi jo Sp bina koi thosh sabut ke bina kuch nahi karna chahata tha

sir mujhe phir geeta ki room ki talashi leni hogi sayad kuch ayesa mil jaye jo ham geeta ko khuni sabit kar sake our phir mujhe geeta ki maa baap se bhi baat karni hogi kya wah log kabhi mangal pur gaye hai agar wah log mangal pur gaye hai to yekinn geeta purwa ko janti hogi sayad geeta ke maa baap Ko bhi kuch pata ho ... Kiran kahti hai

chalo hospital main hi chalte hai geeta ko bhi hosh aaya gaya hai Sp kahta hai our dono hospital ke liye nikal jate hai

geeta hosh main aa chuki hoti hai geeta ki abhi bhi halat bahut kharab hoti hai jagah jagah se geeta ka jism kata hua hota hai our geeta ke sar bhi phata hua hota hai lekin geeta apni maa ke samne muskurane ki natak kar rahi hoti hai taki uski maa dukhi na ho

tabhi waha Sp our kiran chale jate hai

ab kaisi hai meri sherni beti .. Sp kahta hai

jo geeta muskura kar thik huin main sar hila deti hai

Sp geeta se phir puchhne lagta hai wah hotal main kaise gayi

geeta batati hai use wah apni dost nita ke sath dusre sahar gayi hui thi our ate hua uski gadi kharab ho gayi thi jo geeta our nita ne ek gadi wale se lift mangi jo gadi wale ne lift diya magar us gadi main kuch log pahle se baithe hua the hameh pyas lagi thi to gadi wale se pani mang kar ham dono ne piya ..pani pine ke baad meri aankhe band ho gayi our jab meri aankhen khuli to main hotal ke room main thi our us hotal ke room main 3 se 4 aadmi the our sharab pi rahe the tabhi mujhe apne jism par dard mahsus hui our maine apni jism ko dekhi to mujhe rona aa gaya meri jism kata hua tha meri jism se khun bah rahi thi our wah log has rahe the mujhe dekh kar q ki main us waqt sirf bra our penty main thi main bahut dar gayi thi main jaldi se room se bhagane lagi ke un gundon ne mujhe phir se pakad liya our mere sath jabardasti karne lage main phir bhi room se bhagane ki koshish kar rahi thi tabhi mujhe ek aadmi ne diwar se lada diya our meri aankhen band ho gayi phir kya hua mujhe kuch yaad nahi wah sabhi bahut darinde insan the jo meri jism ko is tarah kat kar has rahe the aunkal meri dost nita kaha hai ... geeta bata kar puchhti hai

geeta ki baat sun kar uski maa ke aankhon main aansu aa jate hai ki itane bura hua uski beti ke sath

wahi kiran geeta ko ajib nazar se dekh rahi thi jaise kiran ko geeta ki baat par yekin hi na hua

beti abhi tumhari dost nita ka pata nahi hai ham jald hi use dhundh lenge .... sp kahta hai

our phir Sp kiran ko sath lekar room se nikal padta hai

sir mujhe nahi lagata geeta jo bhi bata rahi hai wah sach hai q ke maine khud rajister dekhi thi jo purwa ke naam se geeta ne khud room book kiya hai phir wah log kaise lekar ja sakte hai geeta ne ye khud se kahani banai hai our geeta agar sach bol rahi hai to phir un logon ko kisne mara hai .. kiran kahti hai

ab to sachhai kya hai geeta ki dost nita hi bata sakti hai tum jaldi se nita ke ghar jaao our pata karo nita kaha hai agar geeta sach bol rahi hai to nita bhi abhi mosibat main hogi main nita ko achhi tarah se janta huin wah bahut achhi ladki hai wah hameh sachhai Zarur bata degi .... Sp kahta hai

tabhi hospital main ek ladki ko kuch log lekar bhagate hui aate hai jo bahut hi jayada jakhmi hoti hai wah ladki jaise hi Sp ke pass se gujrti hai Sp ka hanth pakad leti hai tabhi Sp ki nazar ladki pe padti hai

nita kya hua tumeh kisne kiya hai ayesi halat tumhari Sp kahta hai

aunkal geeta

nita bas itana hi bolti hai ki uski aankhen band ho jati hai

to jaldi se nita ko lekar i.c.o main bhagte hai our nita ka elaaj hone lagta hai nita ki halat dekh kar Sp ko bahut dukh hota hai

sayad geeta sahi bol rahi thi nita ke sath bhi kuch bura hua hai Sp kahta hai wahi phir

Sp geeta ki maa ko bhi bata deta hai kuch der main nita ke maa baap bhi aa jate hai

nita ko agale din hosh aata hai our phir nita sp ko wahi batati hai jo geeta ne bataya hota hai jo Sp ko geeta ki baat par yekin ho jata hai

idhar kiran ko kuch samjh main nahi aata hai wah kya kare q ke kiran ko pura yekin tha ke geeta ne hi khun kiya hai our geeta our purwa ek hi hai kiran khuni ka talash to kar rahi thi magar kiran geeta ki maa se har waqt milti rahti thi our geeta ke bare main har waqt kuch na kuch puchhti rahti thi

tabhi ek din geeta ki maa ne ayesi baat batai ki kiran ka sar hi chakra gaya

geeta ki maa ne kiran ko bataya ki geeta jab 10 sall ki thi tabhi geeta ka accident ho gaya tha our us hospital ke Dr ne geeta mar gayi hai ayesa bol diya tha main to bahut dukhi ho gayi thi our main apni beti ko pakad kar sirf roti hi jaa rahi thi phir meri tadap our aansu dekh kar bhagwan ko mujhpe tars aata gaya our meri geeta beti ne apni aankhe khol kar mujhe maa pukari us din mujhe phir se maa banne ki khushi mahsus hui thi

aunty geeta ka accident kaha par hui thi our geeta ka elaaj kis hospital main hui thi ... kiran ne puchha

geeta ki accident mere gaaon main hua tha mangal pur main our wahi ke hospital main geeta ka elaaj ho raha tha

mangal pur ka naam sun kar kiran ko purwa ki yaad aa jati hai our kiran ko yehi samay thik lagta hai purwa ke bare main bhi puchh lene ka

aunty us gaaon main mere ek aunkal rahate the sayad unka naam raam singh tha kya aap uneh janti thi ... Kiran kahti hai

kya baat kar rahi hai beti raam singh bhaiya ko kaun nahi janta hai us gaaon har bachha uneh janta tha magar afsos kisi kamine insan ne unke sath unki pure parivar ko maar diya wah din main kabhi nahi bholi sakti huin jab main apni geeta beti ke liye ro ro kar tadap rahi thi tabhi raam singh bhai hospital main aaye apni beti purwa ko lekar wah khud jakhmi the our unki beti purwa bhi bahut jakhmi thi uski sanshe ruk ruk kar chal rahi thi raam singh bhai to hospital main aane ke baad hi apna dam tod diya magar purwa ki shanshe chal rahi thi meri hi beti ke bagal wali bed par purwa ka elaaj hone laga tha magar purwa ki bahut khun bah chuki thi our hospital main khun nahi tha Dr sahar se khun lane ke liye apne sathi ko bheja magar khun aane ke pahle hi purwa ne bhi dam tod diya main hospital main dono bachhi ke liye bhag bhag kar ro rahi thi tabhi meri geeta ne mujhe maa pukari jo mujhe bahut bahut khushi hui magar raam singh bhai our purwa ke liye bahut dukh hua maine hi unke pure parivar ki antim sanskar kiya tha geeta ke papa ke sath

aunty kya geeta purwa ko janti thi kiran kahti hai

Nahi beti geeta our purwa ek dusre ko nahi janti thi q ke geeta jab badi tabhi hi main gaon main gayi thi kiran our kuch nahi puchhti hai our apne police station aa jati

Kiran ke dimag main bahut kuch chalne lagta hai our sochne lagti hai pahle geeta ki maut hona our phir purwa ka hospital main aana phir purwa ke marte hi geeta ka zinda hone geeta hotal main jati hai our purwa ki hi id istemal karti hai our us hotal main khun ho jata hai akhir geeta purwa ki id q istemal kar rahi our aunty ke batane se to pata chal raha hai geeta our purwa ek dusre ko janti bhi nahi hai

ye sab kiran ko bahut pareshan karne lagta hai kiran phir se us gaaon mangal pur main jati hai our kiran gaaon ke ek jayada agg wale aadmi ko dekhne lagti hai tabhi use ek aadmi dikhai deta hai jo apne ghar ke bahar nirash hokar baitha hota hai kiran bhi uske pass chali jati hai

aunkal thoda pani milega kya bahut pyas lagi hai kiran kahti hai

wah aadmi kiran ko dekhta hai phir ghar main aane ko bolta hai kiran bhi ghar main chali jati

kiran jab ghar main jati hai to har jagah dekhti hai wah ghar mati ka hota hai tabhi kiran ki nazar ek photo par padti hai jo us photo main 5 loog hota hai 2 ladkiyan our 1 aurat 1 aadmi our pass main baitha hua wah aadmi jiske ghar main kiran hoti hai abhi kiran photo ko dekh hi rahi hoti hai ki wah aadmi pani our chini kiran ko deta hai kiran bhi chini ke sath pani pi leti hai

aunkal wah photo bahut achhi hai kiski hai our aap niche q baithe hua hai kiran kahti hai

magar aadmi kuch nahi bolta hai to kiran jane lagti hai tabhi wah aadmi kiran ka hanth pakad leta hai to kiran ruk jati hai

main ek bhoj lekar kab se dho raha jo mujhe har waqt pareshan karta rahata hai main tumeh ek sachhai batana chahta huin mujhe pata hai tum wahi janna chahti ho maine tumeh us din bhi dekha tha pichhe hua magar maine tumeh nahi bataya magar mujhe kuch din bad hi pata chala wah sabhi bhi mar gaya hai to mujhe ab kisi ka dar nahi hai ye mere Malik raam singh our unki patni malti hai our wah dono ladki purwa our puja hai

mere malik bahut achhe aadmi the har kisi ki madad karte the gaaon main kisi ke sath bhi jayadti nahi hone dete the magar gaaon ke kuch loog the jo mere malik se jalte the q ke Malik ke wajah se gaaon ke log khushali jiwan jine lage the our sabhi malik ko bhagwan ki tarah manne lage the wahi kuch loog din ba din gussa hote hi jaa rahe the q ke unke pas jo gaaon ke logon ka khet girwi padi hui thi wah gaaon wale apne mehant se kama kar unke yeha se apne khet chhadwa rahe the is liye wah loog our paise jayada mangane lage jo gaaon wale Malik ko akar bata dete the our Malik phir jakar chhodwa lete the wah malik ke samne to kuch nahi kahte the magar wah gusse ka ghut pikar rah jate the

Ek raat main jab malik ke haveli jaa raha tha tabhi mujhe malik bhagte hua dikhai diya main unke pichhe jane ko hua ke tabhi dekha haveli se wah thakur log bhi nikal rahe hai our unke hanth main gun our talwar hai wah log jaise hi haveli se nikale main haveli main chala gaya to dekha Malkin zameen par nangi halat main giri hui hai main jaldi se malkin ke upar unki saree dal diya phir Malkin ki shanshe cheak ki to malkhan mar chuki thi tabhi mujhe puja par nazer padi main puja ke pas bhaga magar puja bhi mar chuki thi mere aankhon se aansu girne laga main phir malik ke pichhe bhaga magar malik mujhe kahi nahi mile our subah pata chala malik our purwa beti bhi mar chuki hai main police ke pass jana chahta tha magar nahi gaya maine janta tha police ke pass jane se koi fayada nahi hone wala hai wah loog mere bhi parivar wale ko maar denge main chup rah gaya aadmi bol kar chup ho gaya

aunkal aap un sabhi ka naam bata sakte hai kisne purwa our uske parivar ka khun kiya

un 5 kamino ka naam lakhan singh vikram singh Rajendr singh baldev thakur our Ajay Thakur ye naam tha un sabhi ka

kiran our koi sawal nahi ki us aadmi se our phir sahar main aa gayi kiran yeha aane ke baad fail main naam dekhti hai to un sabhi ka wahi naam hota hai jo ab kiran ko ek bar phir se geeta par sakh hone lagta hai ye kah sakte hai kiran ko pura yekin ho jata hai geeta ki katil hai is liye kiran ke dimag main ek idea aata hai ....kiran ran dusre din geeta ke ghar jati hai our geeta ki maa ko sari baat bata deti hai ki geeta ne hi wah 5 aadami ko mari hai our ye bhi batati hai ke mujhe sakh hai aap ki beti geeta nahi purwa hai

kiran ki baat sun kar geeta ki maa bahut hairan ho jati hai ye kaise ho sakta hai q ki geeta ki maa akhir yekin kare to kaise kare q ki wah janti thi wah unki beti geeta hai

kiran beti ye kaisa majak kar rahi ho wah meri beti geeta hai purwa nahi geeta ki maa kahti hai

aunty aap ko yekin nahi ho raha na main abhi yekin dila deti huin kiran kahti hai

tabhi geeta apni room se nikal kar kichen ki tarf ja rahi hoti hai

purwa ek coffee mere liye bhi bana dene kiran itana bolti hai ki geeta palat kar bol padti hai

thik hai didi

jab geeta ko ahsas hota hai ki wah purwa pukarne par boli to geeta ye soch kar dar jati hai ki ab wah pakadi jayegi

mujhe sakh to ho gaya tha tum geeta nahi purwa ho magar jab aunty ne bataya ki us hospital main purwa ki maut ho gayi thi our uske baad hi geeta ne apni aankhen kholi ye to chamtkar ho gaya hoga aunty ke liye jo sach bhi tha magar aunty ko nahi pata tha ab wah geeta nahi purwa hai jo geeta ki jism main sama chuki hai tabhi to geeta ne ek purwa ke naam se ek id banai our logon ka khun karne lagi .... kiran kahti hai

maine kisi nirdosh ko nahi mara wah sabhi meri maa didi papa ke katil the un darindon ne meri aankhon ke samane maa didi ko maar diya our mujhe our papa ko bhi talwar se maar diya phir papa mujhe lekar bhag gaye magar meri jism se itana khun bah chuka tha ke main marne wali thi main apni jism chhod kar jane wali thi magar maa ko rote dekh mujhe bahut taklif hui maine geeta ki jism main jane ka faisala kiya mujhe yekin nahi tha main geeta ki jism main sama kar zinda ho sakti huin magar main zinda ho gayi thi our maa bhi bahut khush ho gayi thi geeta kahti hai jo uski maa geeta ko roti hui gale laga leti hai

tabhi maine soch liya ek din un sabhi ko jaan se maar dungi our usme meri dost nita ne meri madd ki sabse pahle maine apni ek id banai apne purwa naam se mujhe jayada pareshani nahi hui bas paise jayede main pahle hotal ke ek bandey ko apne sath mila leti thi paise dekar jo unki aukat se jayada hoti thi our badale main chhoti se kaam kahti thi karne ko jo wah aasani se kar dete the

magar mujhe ek baat samjh main nahi aai tum us din jakhmi kaise ho gayi thi phir baad main nita bhi hospital main jakhmi hokar aai thi jo Sp sir our mujhe bhi tumhari baato par yekin ho gaya tha ....kiran kahti hai

wah bhi plan ka hi hissa tha nita se maine bol diya tha main subah tak tumse nahi mili to samjhle mujhe kuch ho gaya hai our tum police station main jakar report likhwa dene ye boli thi maine nita se

magar us din nita ko jaise hi mere bare main pata chala wah police station hi jaa rahi thi tabhi uska accident ho gaya jo nita ke liye mujhe bura to laga magar mere liye achha ho gaya tha our maine hospital ke ek ladke ko 5 lakh dene ka wada kiya our badale main ek letar likh kar nita ko dene ko boli jab nita hosh main ho jo wah ladka maan gaya our phir maine jo bhi baat aap dono ko batai thi wahi likh kar nita ko de diya jo nita ne wahi jawab aap dono ko diya ... geeta kahti hai

geeta ki bat sun kar kiran muskura padti hai mujhe yekin hai ab geeta geeta hi ban kar rahegi phir kabhi purwa nahi banegi kiran bolti hai jo geeta muskura padti hai our kiran phir chali jati

phir geeta ki ek din shadi ho jati hai our geeta ki do bahut saitan bachhe hote hai jinka naam hota hai raja our rani nani kahti hai

nani ye maa ki hi kahani thi na raja kahta hai jo nani muskura padti hai

our phir raja our rani apne room main sone chale jate hai our nani bhi apne room main so jati hai
Storyy toh jabardasttt haiii

Madhu ne apni hi beti kahani apne naati aur naatin ko sunayi. Ke kaise purwa ke saath anaay hua. Aur usne marke bhi apna badla liya. Bhale hi usne Geeta ke shareer ko use kiya.

Par ek baat bahot hi jyaada ajeeb hai. Chotte bachho ko raat mein aisi kahani kaun sunata hai. Jisme balatkaar ke kuch scenes the murder the saath mein aatma wala khel bhi thaa. Agar woh bachhe naa hoke baalik hote toh thikk thaa. Par bachho ke saamne Balatkaar jaise kahani bolna yeh galat laga.

Baaki story kaafi interesting thi. Thrill ka achha khaasa mishran tha. Maza aaya padhke. Sirf woh bachhon ke saamne balatkaar wala part bura thaa.
 
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