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thanks brother for liking my story well it is a happy thing to get appriciate in a regional language story and it gives a lot of boost to write a story in our own language and i will keep your suggestion in mind while i writing a story again in odia...Regards OdinchachaWell written story i like your way of of expressing the whole story , but it could be more erotic if you could put some aggressive and erotic sex scene. Anyway I liked your story keep it up. I am also from Odisha , so your story will always get support from me.