AssNova
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Adhbut Evam lajawaab kahani hai !!
Kahani ki ghatnaye kaafi realistic hain jo ki ek alag hi maza deta hai , shuru ke kuch updates padhe , bahot hi detailed writing hai aapki , maja aa gaya padh ke
aur devnagri me kisi kamukh story ka maza to aur badh jata hai , Halaki abhi thodhi adventure aur thrill ki kami hai is story me , rajesh ki school/college life bhi jyada show nhi ho rhi
but erotic scenes lajawaab hain , aas paas ki aurton se accha agar pariwar ki relatives hoti to aur jyada maza aata , jaise ki sagi chachi ya taai , ummed hai ye kahani abhi aage bahot saare characters laayegi , aur sabse main Maa ke saath seduction dhire dhire chalta rhe .
-------keep up the good work and keep updating----------------
Kahani ki ghatnaye kaafi realistic hain jo ki ek alag hi maza deta hai , shuru ke kuch updates padhe , bahot hi detailed writing hai aapki , maja aa gaya padh ke
aur devnagri me kisi kamukh story ka maza to aur badh jata hai , Halaki abhi thodhi adventure aur thrill ki kami hai is story me , rajesh ki school/college life bhi jyada show nhi ho rhi
but erotic scenes lajawaab hain , aas paas ki aurton se accha agar pariwar ki relatives hoti to aur jyada maza aata , jaise ki sagi chachi ya taai , ummed hai ye kahani abhi aage bahot saare characters laayegi , aur sabse main Maa ke saath seduction dhire dhire chalta rhe .
-------keep up the good work and keep updating----------------