Erotica जोरू का गुलाम उर्फ़ जे के जी

[komaalrani]

जोरू का गुलाम भाग 246 ----तीज प्रिंसेज कांटेस्ट पृष्ठ १५३३

अपडेट पोस्टेड, कृपया पढ़ें, लाइक करें और कमेंट जरूर करें

 

[Naina]

update ke har shabd jaise koi khat ho kirdaaro ke... Jaise weh log un khato ko khol ke rakh diye ho pathako ke samaks.... lage Jaise Har ek shabd mein gulaab phool ki khushaboo band ho.
lage ki jaise un mein kuchh pal kirdaaro ki sharaarat ke kaid ho,
in sabhi ko Lekhika ne shabdo jariye bahot achhe se sanjo ke jis tarah se update ko pesh ki, usme weh sarthak rahi....
Aapki dwara likhe gaye shabd sawan ki wo pelhi barsaat hai , jaha kirdaaro ki kaamukta se bhari bhumika jaise apne apme yaadon ka basera ho... aapki lekhni sach mein rachnatmak hai.. aur varnatmaak bhi....jo erotica ko ek alag hi level par le gaye hai....
aise hi likhti rahiye aur apni manoram lekhni se hum readers ka manoranjan karti rahiye...
Let's see what happens next...
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills komaalrani ji

 

[komaalrani]

You really know how to write stories. You leave each part at such a stage that it peaks readers' excitement, curiosity and anticipation of what's going to happen in the next part .. well done again ..

Thanks soooooooo much, dont worry next will be a Mega Update, 3-4 parts together, soon.

 

[komaalrani]

Translation in eng hindi

Thanks so much for gracing the thread, you are welcome

 

[komaalrani]

update ke har shabd jaise koi khat ho kirdaaro ke... Jaise weh log un khato ko khol ke rakh diye ho pathako ke samaks.... lage Jaise Har ek shabd mein gulaab phool ki khushaboo band ho.
lage ki jaise un mein kuchh pal kirdaaro ki sharaarat ke kaid ho,
in sabhi ko Lekhika ne shabdo jariye bahot achhe se sanjo ke jis tarah se update ko pesh ki, usme weh sarthak rahi....
Aapki dwara likhe gaye shabd sawan ki wo pelhi barsaat hai , jaha kirdaaro ki kaamukta se bhari bhumika jaise apne apme yaadon ka basera ho... aapki lekhni sach mein rachnatmak hai.. aur varnatmaak bhi....jo erotica ko ek alag hi level par le gaye hai....
aise hi likhti rahiye aur apni manoram lekhni se hum readers ka manoranjan karti rahiye...
Let's see what happens next...
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills komaalrani ji

you don't appraise story, you pen poetry. you are able to peep beyond mere words and sense the sense and sensuousness'. But more than that you communicate it to readers, magnifying the magic of posts many times. grateful is the writer whose thread you grace with your presence.

Next post on Sunday, a mega update,....

 

[Naina]

you don't appraise story, you pen poetry. you are able to peep beyond mere words and sense the sense and sensuousness'. But more than that you communicate it to readers, magnifying the magic of posts many times. grateful is the writer whose thread you grace with your presence.

Next post on Sunday, a mega update,....

XP ke jamane mein aapse hi ye baatein sikhi hai..... Ki aise revos kaise likh ke pesh ki jaaye..

 

[shirinb10]

XP ke jamane mein aapse hi ye baatein sikhi hai..... Ki aise revos kaise likh ke pesh ki jaaye..

komaalrani Naina I must admit i misssed them there .. never came across those stories .. and i feel i missed the good ones

 

[komaalrani]

XP ke jamane mein aapse hi ye baatein sikhi hai..... Ki aise revos kaise likh ke pesh ki jaaye..

 

[komaalrani]

komaalrani Naina I must admit i misssed them there .. never came across those stories .. and i feel i missed the good ones

thanks so much

 

[komaalrani]

गुड्डी रानी ने खोल दिया , ...

 

[komaalrani]

Next part now