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Fantasy इच्छाधारी देव

Raj

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UPDATE 25



Fir dusre din taiyar ho kar dev poonam aur shalaka ghumne nikal jate hae bholenath ke mandir jaha unhe rudra aur nilam milte hae.

Rudra – rajkumari ji ye hae meri nilam aur nilam ye hae tilism nagri ki rajkumari poonam aur shalaka.

Teeno gale milti hae.tab nilam

……. Rajkumari ji aapka intjar to sabse jayada dev bhaiya ne kiya hae aapko dekha to ab samajh aaya ke ye itne bechain kyu the, aap sach me bahot sundar hae aur hamare dev bhaiya ki jeevan saathi banne ke poore gun hae aap me.

Poonam – pahli baat to ye ke tum hame poonam hi kahogi rajkumari nahi aur rahi baat intjar ki to humne bhi utna hi intjar kiya hae nilam. Ek ladki ho ke tum ye asani se samajh sakti ho. Ke jise chaho yadi wo hi najro se door ho to kaesa mahsus hota hae.

Nilam - to poonam der kis baat ki aap ke mata pita bhi yahi hae aur tum bhi yaha aayi ho to yahi rah jao shahnai bhi bajwa hi dete hae. Rudra ko waese bhi bahot jaldi hae. jalebi khane ki.

Ye baat sun kar poonam shalaka aur neelam hasne lagti hae.

Rudra - jalebi? Kaun si jalebi? Kaha ki jalebi?

Neelam - aap chup hi raho. Mere kahne ka matlab hae aapko badi jaldi hae shadi ka laddu khane ki.

Poonam muskra ke – chahte to hum bhi yahi hae lekin nilam ye itna aasan nahi hoga. Kyu ki ab tak hamare bado ke beech ye baat hui nahi hae. to fir kaese ho sakta hae. shayad usme samay lagega abhi. Par ha agar dev chahege to mae aaugi jarorr yahi.

Shalaka – dev kyu nahi chahege ab ?kya wo likh kar de us ki to aankhe hi bata rahi hae ki unka bas chale to abhi fere kar le tumhare saath. unhe bhi jalebi khane ka bada man kar raha hae.kyu dev?

Sab log hasne lagte hae.

Ab Rudra aur dev bhi samajh gaye the ke ye kis JALEBI ki baat kar rahi hae teeno.

Rudra - achcha aaj ke karyakram shuru hone wale hae. to chaliye sab log mahal chalte hae.

Fir pancho mahal aa jate hae jaha sab unka hi intjar kar rahe the. Us ke baad kha pee ke sab log nikal jate hae khel mahotsav ke liye jaha aaj kai tarah ke naach gaane ka karyakram tha. Waha in ke pahuchte hi karyakram shuru hota hae jo ke kareeb 4-5 hjante chalta hae aur surya ke dhalne par karyakram smapte hota hae.

Fir sab log wapas mahal aa jate hae. aur bato ka daur shuru ho jata hae

BS – sumant dev ji wo us mantrik ka pata chala kya jisne aap par hamla kiya tha?

SD – ha hamne pata kiya tha. Lekin use pakad nahi paye kyu ke us mantrik ke paas bhi kai sari shaktiya hae. jo uski raksha kar rahi hae. filhal wo kahi gayab hae. par wo palat kar war jaroor karega. Aese log shant nahi baethte.

Dev – maharaj kya aap use pakadne ka koi rasta bata sakte hae?

SD - nahi dev use pakadne ka filhal koi rasta nahi hae. use tabhi pakad payege jab wo samne ho.

Rudra – kshama chahuga maharaj lekin ye to khatre ki baat hae yadi usne achanak hamla kiya ya kabhi aap apne rajya me na ho tab usne hamla kiya to pareshani ho jayegi.

SD - hame bhi yahi chinta hae.

BS – chinta mat kijiyie maharaj ishwar ki krapa rahi to aesa kuch nahi hoga. Baki kal hum swayam kulguru se baat kar ke is samasya ka koi samadhan bhi nikalte hae. kyu ki ab wo aap ke saath saath hamara bhi dushman hae. aur usne dev ko bhi dhamki di thi to hal to mil kar nikalna hi padega.

SD – thik hae bhairav singh ji kal hi KG se baat kijiye dekhiye yadi wo koi hal bata sake to bahot behtar hoga.

Fir sab sone chale jaate hae.

Dusra din muqable ka din tha. Jisme talwar baji ka mukabla hone wala tha. Roj ki tarah sab waha pahuchte hae. pahle to kai yodhdha aate hae aur ladne lagte hae. kareeb do ghante baad un me ek shresht yoddha ka joda nikalta hae. jo puri tarah naqab ke peeche the. Un dono ka chehra dikhayi nahi de raha tha.

BS – adbhut aap dono ne kamal kar diya hum aapko vijeta ghoshit karte hae Aur uphar denge.

Yoddha - aese nahi maharaj pahle mae yaha baethe sekdo logo se poochna chahta hu ki hae koi jo hum dono ka muqabla kar sake? Yadi koi nahi to hi hum dono aap ke pass aa kar puruskar sweekar karege.

BS – tum vijayi hue ho hum bhi chahege tum puraskar le kar jao yu lalkar ke to tum haar bhi sakte ho.

Yodhdha - koi baat nahi maharaj yadi hum haar bhi jaye to mujhe gum nahi hoga lekin is tarah mae inam nahi le sakta mujhe kshama kare.

Tabhi dev upar se neeche chalang lagata hae. uski peeth pe do talware fasi hui thi.

Yoddha - aap to rajkumar hae. kahi aap mujhse haar na jaye

Dev – uski chinta tum mat karo.

Y – lekin hum jode me hae

Dev – to mera mitra rudra bhi mere saath hae

Dev ne itna hi kaha tha ke upar se rudra kood padta hae

Y – kya tumhara mitra ek stri se ladega?

Dev dekhta hae ke us ke saath Jodi me stri thi.

Dev – koi baat nahi mera mitra nahi ladega aur na hi mae in pe war karuga. Ha ye chahe to mujh par war kar sakti hae. mae sirf inhe rokuga aur war sirf tum par karuga tumhare harte hi ye bhi haar jayegi.

Y – kya yaha itni badi sabha me koi aesi yuvti nahi jo maidan me talwar chala sake? kya yaha ki striya sirf chudiya hi pahnna janti hae? payal ki jhankar hi sunti hae? kya unme itna sahas nahi ke wo talwar le kar maidan me utar sake? Kya yaha sab yuvtiya aur striya khel dekhne aayi hae? agar aesa hae dev singh to mujhe tumahri baat manjur hae. aa maidan me……………

Tabhi bijli ki teji se dev ke baju me kud ke aa jati hae poonam is waqt uski peeth pe bhi talware lagi hui thi. Aur dono jangho pe khanjar.

Poonam – yodha tumne ek galti ki maharaj ki baat na maan ke, dusri galti ki dev singh ki baat na maan ke aur teesri sabse badi galti ki yaha ki striyo ko lalkar ke. Ab kisi galti ke liye tum nahi bachoge. Kyu ke mae dev ke saath hu aur is baar hum dono pe tum dono waar karoge koi bhi kisi pe bhi war kar sakta hae. koi stri purush ka bhed bhav nahi.

Tabhi bigul bajta hae aur charo ki talware aapas me takrati hae. charo bahot hi furti se lad rahe the. Yodha 1 ne dev pe hamla kiya jise dev badi hi khubsurti se bacha gaya lekin jaha dev ghum ke pahucha to peeche se yodha 2 ne dev ki peeth pe talwar se war kar diya dev samne hi dekh raha tha lekin poonam ne apni talwa dev ki peeth pe rakh di jisse Y2 ka war ruk gaya itne me poonam ne Y2 ko ek laat mari aur uske sir ka nishana bana ke war kiya jise usne apni ek talwar se roka aur dusri talwar poonam ke pet me ghusani chahi lekin poonam karwat le kar ghum gayi aur apni kohni ka bharpoor war uske sir pe kiya to wo ladkhadati hui neeche girne lagi par apni talwar jameen se laga ke khud ko girne se rok liya

Idhar dev ke upar Y1 teji se hamle kar raha tha aur dev sirf hamle rok raha tha.abhi dev ne ek bhi war nahi kiya tha.

Is samay dev aur poonam ladte ladte ek duje se peeth chipka ke khade apne apne samne ke yodhao se lad rahe the achanak dev aur poonam ne kalabaji khai aur un dono se door ho gaye dev ne baeth kar apne hath milaye jis pe poonam chadi aur dev ne use uchhal diya jisse poonam udti hui Y 2 ke sir pe ek kick dekar jameen pe khadi ho gayi Y 2 bhar bhara ke neeche giri aur tilmila ke apni dono talwar ek poonam ki taraf aur ek dev ki taraf fenk di poonam abhi sambhal nahi payi thi lekin dev ne dekh liya

Dev ne apni ek talwar poonm ki taraf khinch mari aur apni taraf aati hui talwar ko ek tej war se kata to wo talwar do tukde ho gayi aur deva ki fenki hui talwar seedhi jakar poonam ke pet ke pas pahuchi usi samay Y2 ki fenki talwar bhi waha tak pahuchi lekin dev ki talwar ki wajah se tootkar neeche gir padi idhar Y2 ne poonam ki taraf daud lagayi to poonam ne wahi se high jump lekar apni dono tange failai aur Y2 ki garden pe sawar ho kar halka sa mod diya jisse Y2 apne hosh kho baethi aur jameen pe gir padi to poonam uske sir pe talwr rakh kar shan se khadi ho gayi

Udhar y1 ne dev pe dono talwaro se hamle shuru kiye dev apni ek talwar se uska jawabi hamla de raha tha Y1 ne dev pe fir se hamla kiya dev ne poori taqat se uske war ko roka aur jawabi hamla kiya jisse Y1 ki ek talwar toot gayi idhra poonam ka dhyan dev par tha ke achanak se neeche leti hui Y2 ne poonam ko ek dhakka mara aur poonam ke neeche girte hi us ki taraf chalang laga di wo apni talwar poonam ke pet me ghusa dena chahti thi idhar dev bhi Y 1 ke hamle se neeche jameen pe tha to Y1 ne bhi dev pe talwar se hamla kiya dono hi Yodha ne dev aur poonam ko jameen pe lita diya tha aur un par talwar ka war kar diya tha lekin poonam aur dev ne apni apni talwar se wo war roke hue the ke tabhi dono ne apne pratidwandi ke pet pe laat rakh kar apne sir ke upar se uchal diya jisse dono yodha ke hatho se talwar nikalgayi aur wo door ja gire idhar poonam aur dev furti se jump kar ke uthe aur ek unchi chalang laga kar apni apni talwar unki garden pe laga di. To dono hi yodhao ne hath upar kar diye aur atmasamarpan kiya.

Tabhi maharaj BS ne rukne ka ishra kiya.

Charo uth kar khade hue.

BS – is muqable me yuraj dev singh aur rajkumari poonam ki Jodi vijayi hui.

Aur yodha kyu ki tum pahle din bhar ki ladayi me jeete hue the isliye aaj ka puruskar tum dono ko diya jata hae. rajkumar aur rajkumari ka puraskar inhe baad me mil jayega. Khel samapti ki ghoshna ho jati hae.

Isi trah din par din nikalne lage or roj pratiyogitaye hoti kabhi khel kood hoti. Kareeb ek hafta isme nikal gaya. Aur khel samapt ho gaya.

Rat ke samay bhojan ke baad jab sab log ekattha hue to.

SD – bhairav singh ji hum sab ka to man lag gaya hae yaha aapne bahot achcha kiya jo hame yaha bulwa liya bahot anand aaya. Ab to khel bhi samapt ho chuke hae to krapya ab hame jane ki ijajat dijiyie jisse ki kal subah hum yaha se apni nagri taraf prasthan kare.

BS - maharaj aapne hamara aatithya sweekar kar ke hamara maan badaya hae. aur in bachchiyo ke saath rahte hue to hame hamara pariwar poora lagne laga. Aapse ek vinti hae.

SD – aesa na kahe maharaj aap aadesh de skate hae.

BS – nahi sumant dev ji aadesh ka to prashna hi nahi uthta. Balki hum to aapse aaj ek daan ke abhilashi hae.

SD – ye kaesi baate kar rahe hae mitra bhala mae aur aapko daan me kuch du ye to sambhav hi nahi hae.

BS – sambhav hae mitra kyu ke mangne wale se hamesha dene wala hi bada kahlata hae. aaj hum aapse aapke jivan ki sabse anmol dharohar daan me mangte hae. kya aap apne jigar ka tukda apni beti poonam ka haath dev ke hatho me denge? Kya aap hame apni kanya daan karenge hamare dev ke liye.

SD – mitra aapne to hamare mooh ki baat chhin li. Dev jaesa damad paakar to mae khud sansar ka sabse bhagyawan vyakti ban jauga. Aapne meri beti ko is layak samjha ye aap logo ka badappan hi hae. aaj se poonam aap hi ki beti hui. dev ki hui maharaj.

BS – nahi mitra badappan hamara nahi balki aapne hame ye phool si bachchi dekar hame dhanya kar diya badappan to aapka hae. aap log taiyariya kijiye hum aaj se do din baad hi inka rishta pakka karne ke liye aapki nagri me aayege.

SD – jaroor mitra hame aapka intjar rahega.

BS – to dev aur beti poonam us din jo aap logo ne dono nagro ki shan banaye rakhi aur talwarbaji ke muqable me jeet hasil ki thi us. Ke inam swaroop hum aap dono ko aapka rishta tohfe me dete hae. aap log yu hi sada ek duje ka saath nibhana har kathinai me. Aur dono kulo ka maan bhi banaye rakhna. Hamara aashirwad aap dono ke saath hae.

Poonam aur dev aage badh kar pahle bhairav singh ke pair chhute hae, fir sumant dev ke.

BS - sada saoubhagyavati raho beti., khush raho beta

Fir poonam aur dev rani neelmani ke paer chhune lagti hae to rani dono ko pakad ke seene se laga leti hae.– nahi mere bchcho tum dono ki jagah hamare dil me hae. aur poonam beti tune to mujhe aaj sampoorna kar diya mere pas beti ki hi kami thi aaj tere aane se wo kami bhi poori ho gayi.

Fir dono rani kaushalya ke bhi paer chhu kar aashirwad lete hae.

Fir sab log mooh mitha karte hae aur thodi der baato ke baad sone chale jate hae.

Dusre din subah poonam aur dev jitney khush the utne hi door jane ki wajah se udas bhi the. Maharaj bhairav singh aur rani nilmani khoob sare tohfe de kar poonam ko vida karte hae Fir sumant dev apne pariwar ke saath tilism nagri ki or chale jate hae.

Rudra ko bhi ye pata chal chuka tha ke dev ka rishta bhi pakka ho gaya hae. to apne gharwalo ke saath jakar nilam se rishta pakka kar ke aata hae . aur unhe bata deta hae. uski shadi aur dev ki shadi ek saath hogi.

Mahal me Rudra nilam ke saath aata hae aur rani nilmani se nilam ko milwata hae

MN– are wah rudra meri ye bahu bhi behad khubsurat hae mae aaj bahot khush hu aaj mujhe meri do bahue mil gayi

Rudra – abhi kaha mili hae rani maa

MN – tu chupo kar nahi mili to mil jayegi aakhir mere samne to aa gayi na dono mae bahot khush hu beta tum dono ke liye.

Rudra - dev maene apne sasural walo se kah diya hae ke meri shadi usi din hogi jis din dev ki hogi to ab tu jyada der mat karna yaar.

MN. – tu chinta mat kar rudra mae apni dono bahuo ko saath hi laugi aesa ho sakta hae ke mera ek beta baetha rahe aur dusra shadi kar le. Ye to tujhe nilam mil gayi nahi mili hoti to mae dev ki bhi shadi nahi karwati jab tak tere liye dulhan na dhundh leti. Tum dono to meri ankho ke tare ho.

Achha kal chalna hae. Dev ka rishta pakka karne tilism nagri. To time se aajana tum dono bhi.

Rudra – kya kal? Lekin kal to mujhe nilam ke mata pita ke saath shiv ji ke bade wale mandir jana hae. unhe bol chuka hu mae. Chalo achcha hua aapne bata diya unhe mana kar deta hu bad me jayege mandir.

MN – bilkul nahi bado ko mana nahi karte tu ja aur mandir ho kar aa. Waese bhi ye to yu hi opcharikta hae beta. Sab kuch to tere samne tay ho hi gaya hae. aur shadi ki tareekh bhi hum unhe baad me batayege. Tu rahne de kal hum log ho kar aate hae.

Rudra – lekin rani maa dev akela mere bina?

Dev – abe pagal hae kya mae koi yuddh pe nahi ja raha tu chinta mat kar.

Rudra - thik hae dev lekin jaldi milna bhai tere bina mera dil nahi lagega. Pata nahi kyu mera dil nahi maan raha hae.

Dev – aaj tu aesa kyu bol raha hae bhai. Waese tere bina mera bhi dil nahi lagega mae jaldi hi aauga aur jaroor auga.

Dev aur rudra gale milte hae par anjane hi rudra aur dev dono ki aankhe bhar aati hae.

Fir rudra chala jata hae nilam ko lekar aur dev bhi sone chala jata hae kal ke haseen sapne dekhte hue.

Dusre din dev aur us ke mata pita apne kuch sevako, dasiyo aur kuch sainiko ke saath nikal padte hae tilism nagri ki or. Rasta to kuch hi ghanto ka tha lekin dev ke liye mano sadiyo ka lag raha tha us ke man me is waqt poonam ki hi yade thi aur ankho me uska muskrata, sharmata chehra. Jaese tease kar ke wo safar bhi khatam hota hae. aur sab log raja sumant dev ke raj mahal me pahuchte hae jaha un sab ka bhavya swagat kiya jata hae .

SD – maharaj aaj aap ke aur maharani ji ke kadam is nagri me pahli baar pade hae. ye tilism nagri to dhanya ho gayi.

BS – aesi koi baat nahi sumant dev ji. Ye to hamara soubhagya hae ke hum yaha aaye aur aapke mehman hone ka gaurav hame mila.

Dono raniya bhi ek duje se gale milti hae. aur maharani kaushalya rani nilmani ko apne kaksh me le jati hae. jaha unki aapsi bate chlau ho jati hae.

idhar dev raja sumant dev aur bhairav singh ke paas hi baetha tha aaj use rudra ka na hona akhar raha tha. Par wo khush bhi tha us ke liye kyu ki ek tarah se dono dosto ka rishta ek hi din tay hone ja raha tha.

Lekin dev ko abhi poonam bhi nahi dikh rahi thi isliye wo kafi akelapan mahsus kar raha tha.
 
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Vickey1211

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Bhai ye maene bhi socha tha lekin ho nahi paya kyu ke usme samay jyada lag raha tha. Yaha post karne se pahle maene hindi me hi start ki thi story apne system par. Lekin samay jyada lagta dekh kar english font me likh di.
Bhai singlish(English font) mai hi likho
Bohat se readers h jinhe Hindi nhi aati
Aage Bhai aapki marji
 
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