Ohhhh thank you bhai aapne jo b kaha us ke liye thnx aur agar yaha mera pariwar ban chuka hae to mae apne is pariwar ka dil b nahi toduga. Na hi is kahani ko adhura chhoduga. Aap sab hamara sath dege ye jan k achha laga. Aur aap ke in shabdo ne thoda soch me bhi dal diya hame. Kyu k ab hame ek cheptor pe mehnat jyada karni padegi aur wo hoga deva ka adventure trip. Usme maene kuch bhumika banai thi mind me lekin mujhe soch ke hi maja nahi aa raha tha. Mae usme bahot kuchh add karna chahta tha lekin samajh nahi pa raha tha . Ab aap ke shbdo ne hame data diya ki sochna to padega wo b gahrai se. Kyu k poori kahani ek taraf aur wo adventure ek taraf hoga ye vada karte hae. aap sab us adventure ki duniya ko bahot jyada pasand kare aesi mae koshish karuga likhne ki. Aap sab ke pyar ka shukriyaBoby Bhai ap bilkul chinta mat kariye..Hum itni asani se apka saath chhodne wale nahin..Yahan apka ek chhota sa family ban chuka hai par jo apka asli family hai uska bhi dhyan rakha karo..Hum apko kabhi bhi pressurize nahin karenge..Ap jab bhi free honge tab update dena..sirf itna request hai ki kabhi adhura mat chhodna..Bas agar update dene me late ho raha hai to reason bata dijiye hum wait kar lenge..Ap ek bahut hi achha writer hai aur hume entertainment ka bharpoor tadka de rahe hain isiliye hum apke abhari hain![]()
Mai smjh sakta hu bhai......
Har kisi ki personal life hoti hai. Koi story likhna asan nhi hota hai. Story likhne k lye creative mind hona chahiye. Mujhme itni chamta nhi hai ki mai koi story likhu. Ek bar mai apni fav. Story jo kisi or site pe padha tha use kuch correction kar k yaha post kar raha tha. Wo v mai nhi kar paya uske baad se kavi kosis v nhi ki. Story likhne k lye mujhe pata hai kitni dimag lagani padti hai or kisi update ko tyar karne mai kitna tym lagta hai....
Mai online story kai salo se regular padh raha hu or ab adat ye ho gai hai ki jab tak night mai kam se kam 3-4 update padh na lu neend hi nhi aati hai. Ye ek addiction k jaisa ho gaya hai. Or is site pe kuch hi aise writer hai jiska regular update aata hai jisko mai read karta hu. Maine ne bahut sare running story try kiya hai but wo v same hota hai late update. Jis story ka update regular aata hai uska story hi pasand nhi aata hai...
Isly ab mai completed story padhne laga hu. Lekin us story ko padhne mai wo khusi nhi milti hai jo running story pe sab k sath aata hai......
apki story mujhe bahut pasand aaya. Jiske karan mai chah k v apke story se dur nhi ho paa raha hu. Yaha aise bahut sare story hai jise maine aadhe hi padh k chor diya hai regular update late hone k karan bina writter ko inform kiye. Ye apki story ka hi kamal hai jo mai aapse bar bar request kar raha hu update ki..... Aap kahte hai 2 din mai update kar dete hai mujhe aisa nhi lagta hai. Kavi kavi to shayed apka update 4-5 dino tak v nhi aate hai. Apke peecle update Wednesday ko aaya tha last update apka Monday ko. 5 days ka gap ho gaya..... 2 din k gap se mujhe koi problem nahi hai. But aanischit samay k gap se thodi dikkat ho jat hai. Ho sake to aap apne last update k ant mai date notice kar de ki kab tak next update aayega. Is se reader ko thodi kam pareshani hogi baar baar thread pe aa k update check nhi karna padega. Baar Baar thread pe aane se hi problem hoti....... And thanks again for this beautiful story.....
Thanks boby bhai.....Aap ke views jan kar achha laga. Aur hum aapke abhari hae kyu ke chahne wale badi mushkil se milte hae isiliye mae apne kisi reader ko khona mahi chahta. Aapse bat kar ke achha laga. Maea apko batana chahuga ke pichle updates me der hui kyu k kuch family problem chal rahi thi aese me likhne ka mood hi nahi ban raha tha. Aur copy paste ki mujhe aadat nahi. Baki hum aapki bat ka dhyan rakhege . Date dena possible nahi hota kisi b writer ke liye kyu ke yadi vade pe update nahi de paye to apni hi bat se mukarna kahlayega. Par hum 2 se 3 din me update dete rahege. Aap sath mat chhodiye. Story me aapko aage bahot kuch milega. Abhi to adventure shuru hona hae .
Story complete jaroor hogi it's promise. Lekin abhi to startup hae abhi bahot aage tak chalna hae. Abhi bahot kuchh hona hae jo readers soch b nahi paye aesa bahot kuch. So wait and watchYeh story bahut hi hot chal rahi hey. Ise jarur complete kijiye.?
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