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[Sanjay335]

Bahot hi badhiya update

 

[The Immortal]

Hello, Ladies  & Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 10th, June 2020, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.

Rules Check Karne k Liye Ye Thread Use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread

Entry Post Karne k Liye Ye thread Use Karein :- Entry Thread
Reviews Post Karne K liye Ye thread Use karein :- Reviews Thread
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Xforum Staff..

 

[Boby]

Bahot hi badhiya update

Thnx bhai

 

[Boby]

Bahut hi jabardast update raha.....
Bhai update thoda time se diya karo late update se maja kirkira ho jata hai.... Update time se aaya to shayed aapke reader v kafi badhenge......
Waiting for next.....

Waise to hum do se teen din ke andar hi update de hi dete hae. Fir bhi koshish karege ke update air jaldi de sake

 

[jonny khan]

very nyc updates dear ..!!!!

 

[Yellow Flash]

Nice

 

[Xabhi]

Super update bro

 

[Indian ansari]

awesome update yaarr ______ nxt plzzzz ______

 

[Boby]

awesome update yaarr ______ nxt plzzzz ______

update is on the way

 

[Boby]

UPDATE - 39



Subah deva apni sadhna se free ho kar naha dho kar aa jata hae. aur nashta karne lagta hae jaha DN bhi baethe the.



DN – to deva taiyar hae tu ? chale shahar?



Deva – ji babu ji mae ready hu bas aap nashta khatam kijiye to chalte hae.



Fir dono nashta kar ke RR se shahar ki taraf nikal padte hae. 11 baje tak wo shahar pahuch jate hae. deva apni gadi seedhi bank me lagata hae. aur dono bank me aa jate hae. tabhi waha DN ka dost mil jata hae.



DN – are bhai sundar lal kya haal hae?



SL – are DN babu aap yaha ?



DN – ha bhai kuch paesa jama karna tha aur kuch kaam bhi tha bank me. Tum batao kaesa chal raha hae.



SL – bas sab upar wale ki krapa hae.



DN – inse milo ye hae mera chhota beta deva



Deva aage bad kar unse milta hae



Sl – khush raho aur beta kaese ho aap



Deva – ji thik hu chcha ji. Aap yahi rahte hae?



SL – nahi beta mae to tumahre gaanv ke paas hi rahta hu ***** gaanv me lekin mera yaha bhi ek makan hae. to jab bank ka kam hota hae to aa jata hu aur fir ek do din rukk kar hi gaanv jata hu.



DN – are deva tumhe koi kaam ho to nipta lo ya ghum ke aa jao.



Deva - ji babu ji aap mujhe call kar dijiyega mae aa jauga.



Fir deva bank se nikal kar apni gaadi ke pas jata hae to uske paas ek constable aata hae.



Constable - a suno tumhe mere saath chalna hoga . inspector saab ne bulaya hae.



Deva – inspector saab ne mujhe ? kyu?



C – mujhe nahi pata yaar hum log yaha se nikal rahe the to unhone tumhe bank se nikalte dekha aur mujhe utar diya gadi se ke tumhe lekar thane aa jau. Ab chalo



Deva – ne use bhi gaadi me bitha liya aur gadi thane ki taraf bada di. Man me” ab ye kya nayi musibat aa gayi” chalo thane chal ke use bhi dekhte hae.



Deva thane pahuch jata hae to constable use bahar baetha kar andar cabin me jata hae aur koi 2 min. me aa kar



Constable – jao andar



Deva uth kar andar jata hae to samne dekh kar haeran rah jata hae. samne wala uski haerani ko full enjoy kar raha tha.



Deva – tum ? aur yaha?



………… kyu mere yaha hone me kya haerani hae? mujhe yaha nahi hona chahiye kya?



Deva – are matlab ye to gajab hi surprise hae kaveri. ( ye kaveri aapko yad to hogi hi na? are wahi jisne jyoti ke farm house pe deva ka lund chusa tha sab ke samne. Aa gaya na yaad. V. gud)



Kaveri muskra ke – aesi koi baat nahi deva par tum surprise hue isme mujhe maja aaya.



Deva – tumne bataya nahi tha ke tum yaha police inspector ho



Kaveri dheere se - kaese batati tum to us din sirf mujhe lund chusa ke chale gaye tumne kuch poocha hi nahi.



Deva – ha wo us din halaat hi kuch aese the ki u know………



Kaveri – I know but u was awesome that day.



Deva – aesi koi baat nahi yar . chhodo ye batao mujhe yaha kaese bulaya ?



Kaveri – are kamal karte ho? Tum par najar gayi to tumse milne ka dil chaha aur bula liya.



Itne me constable do cold drinks rakh jata hae.



Kaevri cold drink lete hue– waese maene jyoti se tumhare bare me bahot poocha par shayad tumne use bhi jayda kuch nahi bataya isliye mae bhi nahi jaan payi. To tumne jyoti ko thok hi diya?



Deva bhi cold drink utha leta hae – maene nahi thoka usne khud thukwaya mae to mana kar raha tha.



Kaveri – achcha? Par tum kyu mana kar rahe the she is beautifull and hot yar .



Deva – wo sab to hae hi wo, lekin wo sath me kuwari bhi hae aur thakur ki beti bhi.



Kaveri – to tum thakur se dar rahe the?



Deva – thakur ki maa ka bhosda. Darta to mae uske baap se bhi nahi . mere kahne ka matlab hae ke itne unche gharane ki beti hae jyoti. Shadi se pahle chud jane par uska future spoil ho sakta tha. Isliye mae mana kar raha tha aur koi baat nahi. Par jab jyoti ne hi kaha ke wo sambhal legi. To mae aage bad gaya.



Kaveri – ha aur uski faad di.



Deva – tumhe kaese pata uski fat hi gayi hogi? Tumne uski dekhi kya ?



Kaveri – maene uski chut to nahi dekhi. Lekin tumahra lund dekha hae , dekha kya balki apne mooh me hi sahi par liya hae. aur mae ek shadi shuda aurat hu. To janti hu aesa lund lene me jyoti ki chut ke saath gaand bhi fat gayi hogi. Itna dard hua hoga. Agar uski jagah mae bhi hoti to meri fati hui chut bhi tumahre lund kea age fat jati aur chudi hui chut se bhi tum khoon nikalwa dete.



Deva – tumhe bhi chahiye waesa dard?



Kaveri – maene kaha ne mae shadi shuda hu, upar se police officer bhi. Mujhse flirt kar rahe ho?



Deva – nahi mae ek police officer ke saath flirt bilkul nahi kar raha , ha lekin mae us aurat se jaroor flirt kar raha hu jo apni sari saheliyo ke samne mera lund chusne se khud ko rok nahi payi thi , SHADISHUDA hone ke baad bhi. EK POLICE OFFICER hone ke baad bhi.



Kaveri – smart answer. I m impress. Aur jawab hae ke ha mujhe chahiye tumhara lund apni bur me. Abhi chale mere ghar?



Deva – aur tumahra wo so called pati?



Kaveri - wo abhi apni duty pe hae. wo bhi police me hi hae. raat ko free hoga.



Deva – ek sawal aur mujhse kyu chudwana chahti ho? Kahi tumhara pati………………..



Kaveri – o hello ……… mera pati bhi kafi strong hae. aur hamari sex life bhi bahot achchi hae. ha par uska lund tumhare se aadha hi hoga yani kareeb 5.5” . lekin chodta bahot mast hae mera pati. Mae satisfy bhi ho jati hu har baar.



Deva – fir bachcha?



Kaveri – kya kitabi baate karte ho yar . adult stories jyada padte ho kya XFOUM.LIVE par? Mere pati me koi kharabi nahi hae, wo chodta bhi achcha hae, bachcha hum khud nahi kar rahe hae abhi, aur ha mujhe alag alag lund lene ka showk bhi nahi. Ye sab sex stories me hota hae real me nahi.



Deva – fir mujhse kyu chudna chahti ho?



Kaveri – bas jindagi me pahli baar apne pati ke alava koi achcha laga. Tum diler ho bahadur ho, taqatwar ho, saath hi tumara lund bhi mere pati se bada aur mota hae. to bas dil aa gaya ab dil to kisi ka bhi aa sakta hae na. ha tum na chaho to koi jabardasti nahi karugi mae.



Deva – aesi baat nahi kaveri. Aur mae to yu bi kisi ka dil nahi todta is mamle me. Khas kar khubsurat ladki ka to bilkul nahi.



Dono hasne lagte hae aur fir kaveri apni seat se uth jati hae.



Kaveri lets go deva mere ghar chalte hae.



Deva bi uske peeche cabin se nikalta hae. kaveri use apni gypsy me bithati hae. aur RR ki chabi apne driver ko de kar gadi ko ghar lane ke liiye kah deti hae.



Deva aur kaveri abhi aadhe raste tak hi pahuche the ki kaveri ka cell baj uthta hae.



Kaveri gadi side me laga kar baat karti hae.



Kaveri – jai hind sir.



…………………..



Kaveri – what? Kab?



……………………..



Kaveri – right sir, I will be there.



……………….

Kaveri – ok sir no problem. Mae dekh lugi. Jai hind sir.



Deva – kya hua tum itni pareshan kyu ho gayi.



Kaveri – deva lagta hae hamari kismet me pyar ke pal hae hi nahi.



Deva – hua kya yaar?



Kaveri - check nake pe police ne ek gadi me char atankvadiyo ko trace kar liya. Lekin wo log police ko dekh kar bhagne lage aur bachcho ke ek school me ghus gaye hae. aur waha ki teachers aur bachcho ko bandhak bana liya hae. mujhe waha jana hoga.



Deva – are yar to pareshan kyu hoti ho. Unhe lockup me chhodne ke baad chalege na ghar.



Kaveri -deva bahot serious matter hae. tum majak me le rahe ho.



Deva – don’t worry sweet heart I m here. Chalo pahle unki gaand marte hae. fir tumahri maruga akele me tumhare ghar me usi bed pe jis par tum apne pati se chudti ho.



Kaveri – ok to chalo



Koi 10 min. ki drive ke baad ye log us school ki building ke samne hote hae. Jaha kaveri ke mutabik atankvadi the.



Kaveri aur deva aage jate hae. kaveri loud speekar le kar.



Kaveri – mae yaha ki inspector bol rahi hu. Tum log apne aapko kanoon ke hawale kar do. Varna sab mare jaoge.



Kaveri 2-3 baar same baat repeat karti hae. tabhi 1st floor pe ek atankvaadi bahar aata hae us kea age school ki ek jawan teacher bhi thi.



A – o madam samajh me nahi aata kya? Hum yaha surrender karne nahi aaye. Tum logo ne hame fasaya hae ab tum log hi jaane ka rasta doge. Varna hum to marenge hi yaha moujood 50 bachche aur 10 teacher bhi maerngi. Faisla kar lo. aur ha faisla karne me jyada der mat lagana, yaha ki teachers bahot kadak maal hae , jyada der ki to hum log yahi pe inka rape karna shuru kar dege aur fir unhe maar ke fenkte bhi jayege tumhare samne.



Itna kah kar usne apne sath khadi us young teacher ka bobba badi berahmi se daba diya jisse wo cheekh padi.



Deva – kaveri unki baat man lo.



Kaveri – kaesi baat karte ho deva hum in dhamkiyo se dar ke unhe jane nahi de sakte.



Deva – are jaane kaun de raha hae unhe. Tum bas unhe ha bolo



Kaveri – ruko jara



Kaveri head qtr call laga kar poori baat batati hae. thodi der me us ke paas call aa jata hae. ke unhe jane do baad me dekh lege. Aur agar mouka mile to thok do. Lekin koi casualty nahi chahiye. Apni taraf ke logo ki.



Kaveri – loud speekar me. Hame tumhari shart manjoor hae. neeche gadi khadi hae tum log ja sakte ho koi nahi rokega tum logo ko.



A – madarchod Sali chhinal hame lodu samajhti hae kya? Gadi se jayege hum? Helicopter manga school ki chhat par aur ha ye chhamakchallo madam bhi hamare saath jayegi. Kahi tum log helicopter me bomb na laga do.



Kaveri daant peesti hae aur helicopter ke liye bol deti hae. fir deva aur kaveri chhat pe jate hae. thodi der me helicopter bhi aa jata hae. tabhi chhat pe charo atankvadi aate hae unke haath me AK47 thi aur ek khubsurat teacher bhi thi. Jise wo log ghaseette hue la rahe the bandook ki nok par.



Kaveri – dekho tum log chaho to helicopter ko check kar ke fir usme baetho lekin mae tumhe is teacher ko le jane nahi dugi.



A – tu bhi mast maal hae inspector hae to kya hua chal ise chhod dete hae tu baeth ja aa kar meri god me. Hamari safty bhi ho jayegi aur rasta bhi bahot achche se katega. Waese bhi aaj tak tu kabhi helicopter me nahi chudi hogi. Itna kah kar wo hasne lagte hae. tabhi



Kaveri - A… madar………



Dhay,Dhay, Dhay,Dhay char goli , char scond, char lashe, aur khel khatam.



Kisi ke kuch samajh me aane se pahle moujar wapas kaveri ki kamar se bandhi peti me.



Deva – bahot bhonkte hae madarchod. Chup chaap nikal jate to ab tak asman me hote ab dekho asman ke bhi upar chale gaye na.



Kaveri mooh fade, ankhe fade kabhi lasho ko dekhti , kabhi deva ko, kabhi us lady ko jo unki bandhak thi, use kuch samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha.



Kaveri – ye kaese mare?



Deva – kamal karti ho tumne hi to inhe goli mari.



Kaveri – what the fuckk meri gun to meri kamar se bandhi hui hae. dekho button tak band hae. holster (peti) ka.



Deva – are tumne hi maari hae inhe goliya yakeen na ho to apna moujar check kar lo usme char goliya kam ha eke nahi.



Kaveri furti se apni gun nikal kar dekhti hae to uski aankho me duniya bhar ki haerat nachne lagti hae. mouzar me sachmuch 4 goliya kam thi.



Deva - ab chalogi ya inki lashe bhi hame hi uthani hae? chalo na yar mere lund ka bura hal ho raha hae tumahri gaand dekh dekh kar.



Kaveri pareshan si deva ke saat neeche aane lagti hae. aur neeche aakar poori media aur police walo ko batati hae ke upar charo mare pade hae. unhe utha ke postmartam ke liye bhej do.



Fir kaveri apne seniors ko bhi bata deti hae ke ab wo charo jinda nahi hae.



Sare seniors kaveri ki bahaduri ki tareef karte nahi thakte. Par kaveri ki pareshani khatam nahi hui thi. Wo teji se gadi chalati hui apne ghar aati hae. aur ghar ka tala khol kar andar ghus jati hae. deva bhi saath hi andar ghus jata hae. to kaveri darwaja band kar ke.



Kaveri – deva ye sab kaese kiya tumne mujhe sach janna hae.



Deva – relax jaan ho gaya na sab sahi ab kyu ghabra rahi ho.



Kaveri - but I want to know . kiya kaese tumne ye sab



Deva ne hath badaya to usme kaveri ka mouzar tha usne kaveri ke mathe pe taan diya.



Deva – aese.



Kaveri darke mare kabhi deva ko dekh rahi thi to kabhi apne khali holster ki taraf. Fir usne jaese hi dubara deva ke hath ki taraf dekha to waha kuch nahi tha. Usne jhat se apni kamar pe hath rakh to mouzar fir se waha bandha hua tha.



Deva – speed meri jaan speed aur kuch nahi. Suno jaese hi wo bahan ke lode. Tumhe galiya de kar maja lene lage aur hasne lage unka dhyan ek second ke liye mujhse hata.maene tumahra mouzar nikal ke speed se charo ko shoot kiya us teacher ko bachate hue aur gun wapas tumahri kamar ki belt me dal diya bas.



Kaveri - kya natak hae yar? Agar goli us teacher ko lag jati to? Ya wo log bhi fire kar dete to?



Deva – unki speed itni achchi nahi ke mujh par fire kar sakte aur rahi baat teacher ki to maene goli use bachate hue chalayi thi aur pahli goli usi madarchod ko mari thi jisne teacher ko pakda tha. Aur tumhe chodne ki bat kit hi. Teacher to pahli goli chalte hi safe ho gayi thi.



Kaveri deva tum kamal ho itni gajab ki furti aesi speed. Jab bhi tums milti hu. Na har bar kuch naya jadu chalate ho mujh par.