Fantasy इच्छाधारी देव

[Boby]

Nice update bhai

Thanks Shanu Bro

 

[Sadhu baba]

kuchh gyan to pathako ka bhi kam aayega na bhai ab padhne wale lakho likhne wala ek to aesi galtiya ho jaye to i think koi badi bat nahi hae na? waese aapne sahi shabd chune . badhai ke patra hae aap. aur hamari galti batane ke liye bhi aapka dhanyavaad. isse ye to sabit hota hae Sadhu ji ke aapne story dhayn se padhi hae varna itni chhoti si bat ko aap pin point nahi kar pate. so thank you. bas isi tarah sath bane rahiye.

Hahaha haan sahi kaha aapne as usual hamari adat hay, waise toh kai chooti galtiya hay par itni badi nahi ki usko kaha jaye,yeh wala toh sirf is liyea bataya ki logon ki gyan (knowledge) ke liyea, bahut se log hay jinko yeh pata nahi hota or uska bhe karan hay, jo cheej hum kam istemal ya shayed he dekhte hay rooj mara ki jindagi main uske bare main jankari na hona lazmi hay,par kuch cheeje rooj istemal karne par bhi hum un par dhayan nahi dete jayse ki feete wale joote(shoes) ke feeton ko english main kya kahte hay, toh yeh hamara sirf yun readers ke liyea tha jinko pata nahi.

 

[Boby]

Ye Kaveri ka pati kahin galat tau nahi hai kabhi bhi sath nahi hota hamesha out of town hota hai aur ab ladki ke sath rangreliyan mana raha hai. Kahi ye double cross na kare.

thank you for your review bhai

 

[Boby]

Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar update bhai
Dono team nikal chuki apne apne mission per dekhte aage kia kia hota h insabke saath
Zaberdast shaandaar

sure bhai ye dekhna aap sab ke liye sach me rochak hoga thanks for your review

 

[Boby]

Update bro jald do

ha bhai aaj aayega new update may be.

 

[Boby]

Hahaha haan sahi kaha aapne as usual hamari adat hay, waise toh kai chooti galtiya hay par itni badi nahi ki usko kaha jaye,yeh wala toh sirf is liyea bataya ki logon ki gyan (knowledge) ke liyea, bahut se log hay jinko yeh pata nahi hota or uska bhe karan hay, jo cheej hum kam istemal ya shayed he dekhte hay rooj mara ki jindagi main uske bare main jankari na hona lazmi hay,par kuch cheeje rooj istemal karne par bhi hum un par dhayan nahi dete jayse ki feete wale joote(shoes) ke feeton ko english main kya kahte hay, toh yeh hamara sirf yun readers ke liyea tha jinko pata nahi.

Sahi Kaha Bhai aapne. wel thanks for your comment

 

[Bhimsen]

Kab tak yeh intejar karna hoga
Karne ko to bhut se karam hai
Bhai mere,Aap ki kahani se dill
Juda hai, In aakhon ko aap ki
Kahani ka hi intejar hai
Kaheta hai aapki lekhansaile
Ki kab didar hoga bhai




Waiting

 

[Boby]

superbb update bro

Thanks bro

 

[Boby]

Kab tak yeh intejar karna hoga
Karne ko to bhut se karam hai
Bhai mere,Aap ki kahani se dill
Juda hai, In aakhon ko aap ki
Kahani ka hi intejar hai
Kaheta hai aapki lekhansaile
Ki kab didar hoga bhai




Waiting

Ohhho kya bat hae bhai shandar likh diya aapne to. Isi bat pe aaj sham ko update milega aap sabko

 

[Naik]

Agle update ka intizar h bhai