Fantasy इच्छाधारी देव

[Boby]

so guys aaj wo shuru hone ja raha hae jiska intjar mere regular readers ko tab se hae jab se maene us scene ka nam liya tha. yani adventure trip khatarnak hadso se bhara hua safar. ek taraf jaha dev, poonam, rudra aur nilam ka safar aaj shuru hoga wahi gurum and team bhi shahar pahuch gayi hae kaveri ke pas aur anna ke khilaf bhi aaj hi wo log jung ka elan karege. so ab koi time pas nahi sirf aap logo ke liye har kadam pe is kahani ke hadse hi hae. please read, enjoy and give review ASAP. aur wo bhi dil khol kar. aur agar adventure trip me maja na aaye to bata dijiyega. waese hamari yahi koshish hae ke aap sab ko full to maja aaye.
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[Boby]

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[Bhimsen]

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[Naik]

Intizar kar rahe h bhai update ka

 

[Boby]

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[Kumar 3465]

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[Boby]

Update - 126



Deva dheere se uthta hae. aur apna clone taiyar kar deta hae aur use ishara karta hae. to wo clone nanga hi diya ke bagal me so jata hae. fir deva ready ho kar. Rudra ke pas jata hae jaha wo aur nilam baethe bate kar rahe the. Wo dono bhi apna clone waha chhod ke nikal jate hae. ghar se aur basement me aa jate hae. deva ankhe band kar poonam ko yad karta hae. to poonam bhi aa jati hae. apna clone ghar me chhod ke. Fir ye charo waha baeth ke bate karne lagte hae thodi hi der me waha fakeer baba aa jate hae. aur charo ko dekh kar unke chehre pe muskan aa jati hae.



FB - To aakhir wo samay aa hi gaya tum sab taiyar ho na apne is safar ke liye?



Sabhi log unhe pranam karte hae.



FB – bachho tum charo ko ek sath yu to kai bar dekha hae pahle abhi aur is janam me bhi lekin aaj dekh kar khushi kuchh jyada hi ho rahi hae. kyu ki aaj tum charo apne purane adhure chhode kam ko pura karne ja rahe ho ishwar tum sab ki sahayta kare…………



……….. mae tum charo ko abhi jaha chhod raha hu. Waha ke bad wo manchitra hi tumahri shayta karega. Lekin is beech tumhe kai sare khatro ka samna karna padega. Kadam kadam pe khatre hoge. Tilismi jaal faila hoga, jisse koi jinda nahi bach sakta. Aur ye sari rukawte us swarn mani ki raksha ke liye hae. to tum log samajh hi sakte ho ki rukawte mamuli to nahi hogi.



…….Lekin is manchitra me tumhe kuch chhote marg bhi milege. Jisme musibat to jyada hogi lekin safar chhota ho sakta hae. dusri taraf rasta lamba aur musibate kam. Faisla tum charo ko karna hoga ke kaha se jana hae.



Dev – baba ye musibate kis ki banayi hui hae?



FB – MAHAKAL ha dev wo mahakal hae jo ye sab taiyar kar ke baetha hae. lekin wo is dharti ke mahakal se poori tarah alag hae. isiliye usse raham ki ummid mat rakhna bas naam ek hae lekin dono hi ek duje se bilkul alag. Isiliye nam ke dhokhe me mat aa jana. Yaha ke mahakal daya ke sagar ahe. Shakti ke prateek hae to wo maha dhokhebaz hae kadm kadam pe tumahre liye usne mout ka jaal bichhaya hae. us mahakal ke bare me tum wahi ja kar janoge. ab tum charo mere samne khade ho jao.



Deva, poonam, nilam, rudra charo line se khade ho jate hae to fakeer baba unke samne mantra padh ke apna hath unke samne kar dete hae. jisse charo ki veshbhusha badal jati hae. ab charo ke badan pe kargo pent thi jiski kai sari jebe hoti hae. charo ke sir pe gol topi, upar badan pe white tshirt jisme dev aur rudra ka muscles wala badan to jhalak hi raha tha lekin poonam aur nilam ki chuchiya bhi kamal ki ubhar ke dikh rahi thi. t shirts itni patli thi ke agar wo geeli ho jaye to poora seena dikhne lage. Fakeer baba fir se mantra padhte hae. aur ye charo basement se gayab ho kar ek registan me prakat hote hae. jaha din nikla hi tha abhi. Jabki unke ghar pe rat ke 12 baje the.



Jaese hi charo apni ankhe kholte hae to unhe door tak faila hua registan aur upar neela asman najar aa raha tha. Unke kandho pe ab bag bhi the. Jisme khane peene ka saman tha. Aur rudra ke kandhe pe jo bag tha usme perashoot wala tent ka bag tha. Jise khol kar do tent alag alag ban sake. Rat gujarne ke liye.



Rudra – are sala ye kaha fenk diya hame Fakeer Baba ne.



Deva – ye hamari manjil ki seedi ka pahla paydan hae rudra. Ya yuk ah lo ke hum bas pahle paydan ke samne hi khade hae abhi is pe chadna hae. to aage ke raste ka pata chalega.



Rudra – abe pahla paydan hae to mae kya karu yaha to aate hi sala badan jhulasne laga.



Deva – ha to ja pahle naha ke aa ghar se fir dubara aa jana hum aage ja rahe hae.



Rudra – abe hat gayi hae kya ? mae nahi jane wala tum sab ko chhod ke. Aur waese hi tent mere hi pas hae rat ko pareshan ho jaoge.



Nilam - kitnaa ulajhte ho aapas me ab chalo bhi aage. Ya yahi khade rahna hae?



Rudra – tu kahe to mae aage kya aag me bhi chalne ko taiyar hu meri jaan.



Poonam – o mr. aashiq chup chap chalo



Rudra ek dam shant ho ke - ji bhabhi chaliye.



Sab us ki halat dekh ke hasne lagte hae.



Deva – mera khayal hae chalne se pahle ye naksha dekh lena chahiye. Ke jana kis taraf hae. mujhe yakeen hae baba ne hame kahi bhi nahi bheja hoga. Jarur ye Zero point hi hoga ab yaha se badhna hae to side dekh le pahle?



Rudra - ha bhai nikal le map usi ka sahara hae varna to ye sahara registan hame nigal hi jayega. Sala koi unth bhi nahi hae yaha to. Jis pe baeth kar ye registan par kare.



Deva naksha nikalta hae aur use samne karke dekhne lagta hae aur samajhne ki koshish karta hae. lekin bahot der sir khapane ke bad bhi use kuchh samajh nahi aa raha tha. To rudra dekhne lagta hae. use ye bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha ke sala naksha seedha kaha se hae.



Tabhi poonam naksha apni taraf kar ke dekhne lagti hae. aur nilam bhi sath hi jhuk kar naksha dekhne lagti hae. tabhi poonam aur nilam ki ankhe milti hae to dono muskrane lagti hae.



Poonam ek jagah ungli rakh kar – dekho dev hum is waqt yaha khade hae. kyu ki is samay surya is nakshe me thik wahi dikh raha hae jaha is waqt hae.



Nilam - aur dusri bat dev bhaiya aapne jo kaha hum Zero point pe hoge wo bhi sahi hi hae. kyu ki jaha poonam ne bataya ke hum khade hae us hisab se agar aap nakshe me dekhe to hum real me Zero point pe hi hae.



Rudra – are deviyo lekin jana kis taraf hae.



Deva – naksha apni taraf karke thodi der dekhta hae aur uske bhi chehre pe muskan aa jati hae. hame is taraf chalna hae ye nishan bane hi hue hae aur yaha se agar hum chalna shuru karege to hame aage jungle milega. Jabki kisi dusri taraf koi jungle nahi hae sirf registan hi hae. bahot door tak .



Rudra – hmmmm aur uske aage kaha jana hae?



Dev – abe yar pahle ye safar to shuru kar. Sab abhi kaese pata chalega. Chal aage utha apna tent ka thela. Pata nahi ye jungle kitni door hoga. Chalna shuru karo bahot der ho gayi yahi khade khade.



Udhar Shahar me me bhi gurum nagarjun shalaka aur channo kaveri ke pas pahuch chuke the. Aur kaveri ne unke hisab se dinner ready kar diya tha. Un logo ne kaveri ke ghar pe hi dinner kiya . abhi wo log table pe hi the ke kaveri ka cell phone bajne laga.



Kaveri – excuseme mere husband ka call hae mae abhi aati hu.



Gurum - carefull



Kaveri - I know



Kaveri – ha janeman bolo kaese yad kiya?



Kaveri ka pati (K P) – bas tumahri yad aa gayi kya kar rahi ho?



Kaveri – bas yar wo bataya tha na ek mission pe jana hae to apni team ke saath abhi ghar pe hi hu aur hum thodi der me nikalne wale hae.



KP – lekin tumne bataya nahi kis mission pe ja rahi ho?



Kaveri – are kal bata dugi na top secret hae.



KP – yar pati se kaesa secret?



Kaveri – hum dept. ke rules to nahi tod sakte na isme pati patni ki bat kaha se aayi? Bas itna jan lo ki aaj anna ka band bajega. Aur ye kis ke saath ho (peeche se kisi lady ki siskari aur …. Dheere karo ..na..sun ke kaveri ne kaha)



KP – are wo.. wo.. kuchh nahi ek jagah raid mari thi to usme kuch ladkiya pakdi gayi hae unhe hi pakad ke hawaldar bitha raha hae tum to janti ho sab Sali randiya hae aesi hi awaze nikal ke bahkane ki koshish karti hae. par anna ka band kaese bajega?



Kaveri - kyu ki usi ki marne ja rahi hu.



KP – anna pe attack karne ja rahi ho?



Kaveri – ha aur tum danda ghusao unki gand me sari awaze band ho jayegi mae hoti to in randiyo ki achhi thukai karti



KP – tum chinta mat karo meri jan danda hi ghusayege ab aur thukai bhi karuga chalo rakhta hu..tum jara bach ke rahna is attack me tumhe na ho kuchh. (…..sssseee aaahhhh aram se……aaah kato mat.uuummmmmhhhh)





Kaveri – ha ok. Aur phone cut jata hae.



Kaveri ko mahsus ho jata hae ke uska pati kisi aurat ke saath hae bistar par lekin wo apna dimag jhatak deti hae.



Kaveri wapas team ke pas aati hae aur thodi der ke discussion ke baad coffy pee kar wo sab log taiyar hone lagte hae. kaveri apni police ki uniform pahanne chali jati hae aur idhar kaveri ke jate hi sab apne apne magic se ninja commando ki dress me aa jate hae ful arms less ho kar ready ho jate hae. thodi der ke baad kaveri jaese hi bahar aati hae in sab ko dekh kar chonk jati hae.

NEXT UPDATE - 127

 

[Boby]

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[Raja maurya]

Update - 126



Deva dheere se uthta hae. aur apna clone taiyar kar deta hae aur use ishara karta hae. to wo clone nanga hi diya ke bagal me so jata hae. fir deva ready ho kar. Rudra ke pas jata hae jaha wo aur nilam baethe bate kar rahe the. Wo dono bhi apna clone waha chhod ke nikal jate hae. ghar se aur basement me aa jate hae. deva ankhe band kar poonam ko yad karta hae. to poonam bhi aa jati hae. apna clone ghar me chhod ke. Fir ye charo waha baeth ke bate karne lagte hae thodi hi der me waha fakeer baba aa jate hae. aur charo ko dekh kar unke chehre pe muskan aa jati hae.



FB - To aakhir wo samay aa hi gaya tum sab taiyar ho na apne is safar ke liye?



Sabhi log unhe pranam karte hae.



FB – bachho tum charo ko ek sath yu to kai bar dekha hae pahle abhi aur is janam me bhi lekin aaj dekh kar khushi kuchh jyada hi ho rahi hae. kyu ki aaj tum charo apne purane adhure chhode kam ko pura karne ja rahe ho ishwar tum sab ki sahayta kare…………



……….. mae tum charo ko abhi jaha chhod raha hu. Waha ke bad wo manchitra hi tumahri shayta karega. Lekin is beech tumhe kai sare khatro ka samna karna padega. Kadam kadam pe khatre hoge. Tilismi jaal faila hoga, jisse koi jinda nahi bach sakta. Aur ye sari rukawte us swarn mani ki raksha ke liye hae. to tum log samajh hi sakte ho ki rukawte mamuli to nahi hogi.



…….Lekin is manchitra me tumhe kuch chhote marg bhi milege. Jisme musibat to jyada hogi lekin safar chhota ho sakta hae. dusri taraf rasta lamba aur musibate kam. Faisla tum charo ko karna hoga ke kaha se jana hae.



Dev – baba ye musibate kis ki banayi hui hae?



FB – MAHAKAL ha dev wo mahakal hae jo ye sab taiyar kar ke baetha hae. lekin wo is dharti ke mahakal se poori tarah alag hae. isiliye usse raham ki ummid mat rakhna bas naam ek hae lekin dono hi ek duje se bilkul alag. Isiliye nam ke dhokhe me mat aa jana. Yaha ke mahakal daya ke sagar ahe. Shakti ke prateek hae to wo maha dhokhebaz hae kadm kadam pe tumahre liye usne mout ka jaal bichhaya hae. us mahakal ke bare me tum wahi ja kar janoge. ab tum charo mere samne khade ho jao.



Deva, poonam, nilam, rudra charo line se khade ho jate hae to fakeer baba unke samne mantra padh ke apna hath unke samne kar dete hae. jisse charo ki veshbhusha badal jati hae. ab charo ke badan pe kargo pent thi jiski kai sari jebe hoti hae. charo ke sir pe gol topi, upar badan pe white tshirt jisme dev aur rudra ka muscles wala badan to jhalak hi raha tha lekin poonam aur nilam ki chuchiya bhi kamal ki ubhar ke dikh rahi thi. t shirts itni patli thi ke agar wo geeli ho jaye to poora seena dikhne lage. Fakeer baba fir se mantra padhte hae. aur ye charo basement se gayab ho kar ek registan me prakat hote hae. jaha din nikla hi tha abhi. Jabki unke ghar pe rat ke 12 baje the.



Jaese hi charo apni ankhe kholte hae to unhe door tak faila hua registan aur upar neela asman najar aa raha tha. Unke kandho pe ab bag bhi the. Jisme khane peene ka saman tha. Aur rudra ke kandhe pe jo bag tha usme perashoot wala tent ka bag tha. Jise khol kar do tent alag alag ban sake. Rat gujarne ke liye.



Rudra – are sala ye kaha fenk diya hame Fakeer Baba ne.



Deva – ye hamari manjil ki seedi ka pahla paydan hae rudra. Ya yuk ah lo ke hum bas pahle paydan ke samne hi khade hae abhi is pe chadna hae. to aage ke raste ka pata chalega.



Rudra – abe pahla paydan hae to mae kya karu yaha to aate hi sala badan jhulasne laga.



Deva – ha to ja pahle naha ke aa ghar se fir dubara aa jana hum aage ja rahe hae.



Rudra – abe hat gayi hae kya ? mae nahi jane wala tum sab ko chhod ke. Aur waese hi tent mere hi pas hae rat ko pareshan ho jaoge.



Nilam - kitnaa ulajhte ho aapas me ab chalo bhi aage. Ya yahi khade rahna hae?



Rudra – tu kahe to mae aage kya aag me bhi chalne ko taiyar hu meri jaan.



Poonam – o mr. aashiq chup chap chalo



Rudra ek dam shant ho ke - ji bhabhi chaliye.



Sab us ki halat dekh ke hasne lagte hae.



Deva – mera khayal hae chalne se pahle ye naksha dekh lena chahiye. Ke jana kis taraf hae. mujhe yakeen hae baba ne hame kahi bhi nahi bheja hoga. Jarur ye Zero point hi hoga ab yaha se badhna hae to side dekh le pahle?



Rudra - ha bhai nikal le map usi ka sahara hae varna to ye sahara registan hame nigal hi jayega. Sala koi unth bhi nahi hae yaha to. Jis pe baeth kar ye registan par kare.



Deva naksha nikalta hae aur use samne karke dekhne lagta hae aur samajhne ki koshish karta hae. lekin bahot der sir khapane ke bad bhi use kuchh samajh nahi aa raha tha. To rudra dekhne lagta hae. use ye bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha ke sala naksha seedha kaha se hae.



Tabhi poonam naksha apni taraf kar ke dekhne lagti hae. aur nilam bhi sath hi jhuk kar naksha dekhne lagti hae. tabhi poonam aur nilam ki ankhe milti hae to dono muskrane lagti hae.



Poonam ek jagah ungli rakh kar – dekho dev hum is waqt yaha khade hae. kyu ki is samay surya is nakshe me thik wahi dikh raha hae jaha is waqt hae.



Nilam - aur dusri bat dev bhaiya aapne jo kaha hum Zero point pe hoge wo bhi sahi hi hae. kyu ki jaha poonam ne bataya ke hum khade hae us hisab se agar aap nakshe me dekhe to hum real me Zero point pe hi hae.



Rudra – are deviyo lekin jana kis taraf hae.



Deva – naksha apni taraf karke thodi der dekhta hae aur uske bhi chehre pe muskan aa jati hae. hame is taraf chalna hae ye nishan bane hi hue hae aur yaha se agar hum chalna shuru karege to hame aage jungle milega. Jabki kisi dusri taraf koi jungle nahi hae sirf registan hi hae. bahot door tak .



Rudra – hmmmm aur uske aage kaha jana hae?



Dev – abe yar pahle ye safar to shuru kar. Sab abhi kaese pata chalega. Chal aage utha apna tent ka thela. Pata nahi ye jungle kitni door hoga. Chalna shuru karo bahot der ho gayi yahi khade khade.



Udhar Shahar me me bhi gurum nagarjun shalaka aur channo kaveri ke pas pahuch chuke the. Aur kaveri ne unke hisab se dinner ready kar diya tha. Un logo ne kaveri ke ghar pe hi dinner kiya . abhi wo log table pe hi the ke kaveri ka cell phone bajne laga.



Kaveri – excuseme mere husband ka call hae mae abhi aati hu.



Gurum - carefull



Kaveri - I know



Kaveri – ha janeman bolo kaese yad kiya?



Kaveri ka pati (K P) – bas tumahri yad aa gayi kya kar rahi ho?



Kaveri – bas yar wo bataya tha na ek mission pe jana hae to apni team ke saath abhi ghar pe hi hu aur hum thodi der me nikalne wale hae.



KP – lekin tumne bataya nahi kis mission pe ja rahi ho?



Kaveri – are kal bata dugi na top secret hae.



KP – yar pati se kaesa secret?



Kaveri – hum dept. ke rules to nahi tod sakte na isme pati patni ki bat kaha se aayi? Bas itna jan lo ki aaj anna ka band bajega. Aur ye kis ke saath ho (peeche se kisi lady ki siskari aur …. Dheere karo ..na..sun ke kaveri ne kaha)



KP – are wo.. wo.. kuchh nahi ek jagah raid mari thi to usme kuch ladkiya pakdi gayi hae unhe hi pakad ke hawaldar bitha raha hae tum to janti ho sab Sali randiya hae aesi hi awaze nikal ke bahkane ki koshish karti hae. par anna ka band kaese bajega?



Kaveri - kyu ki usi ki marne ja rahi hu.



KP – anna pe attack karne ja rahi ho?



Kaveri – ha aur tum danda ghusao unki gand me sari awaze band ho jayegi mae hoti to in randiyo ki achhi thukai karti



KP – tum chinta mat karo meri jan danda hi ghusayege ab aur thukai bhi karuga chalo rakhta hu..tum jara bach ke rahna is attack me tumhe na ho kuchh. (…..sssseee aaahhhh aram se……aaah kato mat.uuummmmmhhhh)





Kaveri – ha ok. Aur phone cut jata hae.



Kaveri ko mahsus ho jata hae ke uska pati kisi aurat ke saath hae bistar par lekin wo apna dimag jhatak deti hae.



Kaveri wapas team ke pas aati hae aur thodi der ke discussion ke baad coffy pee kar wo sab log taiyar hone lagte hae. kaveri apni police ki uniform pahanne chali jati hae aur idhar kaveri ke jate hi sab apne apne magic se ninja commando ki dress me aa jate hae ful arms less ho kar ready ho jate hae. thodi der ke baad kaveri jaese hi bahar aati hae in sab ko dekh kar chonk jati hae.

NEXT UPDATE - 127

Nice update Bhai to honge dhamake maza ayega dekhte hai

 

[bantoo]

Nice update