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Boby

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Gopal – deva ek kam karo tum gadi rok do mae abhi aata hu. Aur tumhe ghar pe hi milta hu.



Deva – lekin aap kaha chal diye abhi raat me?

Sudha bhabhi to lagta hai Aaj kafi aage Jane vali hai or yha DN bhi apni 2nd suhagraat mnane vale hai
Dekhte hai kaise manage karega Deva Jyoti ki bhi to Abhi suhagraat hai
Sandar update bhai Ye gopal ko kya hua Jo Bich raste me hi utar gya Lagta hai sudha ne setting kr rakhi hai pahle se apne pati ko busy rakhne ki
Bhai suhagrat to sabki hogi lekin sabki dikhayenge to adventure trip aur do teen update peeche jayega. So dekhte hae aage
 

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Bahut iccha hai is kahani ko padhne ki lekin hinglish ki wajah se abhi tak nahin padhi …

mitr isko kabhi devnagiri main likho toh jarur batana…. Iska title dekh kar laga tha ki aap isko Hindi/devnagri main likhoge …

aapko bahut bahut shubh kamnayen is khani ke liye
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Anuj bhai aap ke vicharo ke liye dhanyavaad. Pahle bhi aesi dimand aayi thi lekin devnagiri sabko samajh nahi aati isiliye hinglish me likhi. So pls aap ise padhe I hope u like it
 

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Deva – chalo bhai vijay aur jyoti tum logo ki shadi to ho gayi. Ab kya vichar hae?



Kaveri – what do u mean deva? are yar jyoti ki shadi hui hae kisi 5 star hotel me lunch to banta hae apna.



Deva – ye sahi kaha aur ye party jyoti ki tarf se hogi . kyu jyoti?



Jyoti – ha kyu nahi . aaj mujhe meri manjil tak pahuchne ka rasta mila hae. to us khushi me party to mae hi dugi



Kaveri – what manjil jyoti?



Jyoti – are mera matlab hae ki jindagi me mujhe meri har manjil tak le jane wala hum safar jo mila hae



Kaveri - ohhh aesa? ha ye bhi hae. chalo ab hum Singhal hotel chalte hae wahi khana khayege. Jyoti vijay aap dono meri gadi me aaiye aur deva you please follow me



Deva – always madam



Deva ki baat par Sab hasne lagte hae. aur fir unki gadiya ek dusre ke peeche chalne lagti hae. deva ki gadi me



Mala – deva koi lafda to nahi hoga na ye vijay double cross to nahi karega na?



Deva – nahi wo aesa kuch nahi karega



Kamini – aur kiya to?



Deva – kiya to bhugtega, waese uske sign kiye hue stamp hamare pas hi hae. jara si bhi gadbad hoti dikhi to divorce milne me ek din bhi nahi lagega don’t worry.



Rati – lekin deva divorce hone me bhi samay lagta hae aese kaese ho jayega aur jab tak hoga tab tak isne koi gadbad ki to?



Deva – meri jaan yu to court marriage me bhi samay lagta hae par dekho subah vijay tumhare samne aaya aur dopahar tak shadi hui ke nahi. Mera yakeen karo meri pahuch ka andaza nahi tum logo ko . agar mae chahu to 1 ghante ke andar divorce ho jaye wo bhi abhi ke abhi.



Mala – tum par hi to yakeen hae. varna hum to kahi ke nahi rahte ye jyoti to tumhare hi bachho ki maa banne ki jid pakad ke baethi thi. ab uska rasta to banana hi tha. Chalo tum hi sambhalna .



Kamini – waese ye shadi ka natak kitne din ka hae?



Deva – jab tak jyoti ka dil aur god bachho se na bhar jaye. Jab jyoti aur bachhe nahi chahegi to pati ki jarurat khatam ho jayegi fir isse divorce bhi mil jayega. Aur mere hisab se ye silsila 3-4 sal me khatm hoga. Kyu ki jyoti bol kuchh bhi le lekin do se jyada bachhe nahi chahegi aur do bachhe itne samay me aram se mil jayege use.



Rati – mujhe to lagta hae ke ek hi sal me do bachhe ho jayege jaese tum dono ki speed hae.



Is se fir sab hans padte hae



Deva – idea bura nahi hae. agar judwa hi ho gaye to agle hi sal divorce karwa dege.



Itne me ye log hotel pahuch jate hae. aur fir wahi jyoti ko kaveri chhedti rahti hae. aur inka lunch bhi shuru hoi jata hae. aur lunch ke baad



Deva – kaveri tum sham ko apne husband ke saath gaanv aa rahi ho na



Kaveri – kyu?



Deva – jyoti ka reception hae bhai



Kaveri – lekin mere husband to out of town hae varna abhi na lati kya?



Deva – fir to dikkat ho jayegi tum akeli sham ko kaese niklogi?



Kaveri – koi baat nahi abhi to maene shadi bhi attend kar li aur party bhi. To fir kabhi mil lege.



Jyoti – nahi fir kabhi kyu? Mae kya roj reception rakhugi? Tu abhi chal rahi hae hamare saath.



Kaveri – lekin abhi mae kaese tu samajh na yar



Itne me deva thoda door jakar kisi se baat karta hae aur wapas aa kar.



Deva – chalo yar time kharab mat karo gaanv pahuchna hae ya nahi?



Jyoti – kamal karte ho deva yaha kaveri ki problem hae aur tum aese baat kar rahe ho?



Deva – are dear kaveri ki hi baat ki maene abhi DIG saab se. un se maeen iski chhutti le li hae. ab kaveri abhi isi waqt hamare saath ja rahi hae khush?



Jyoti uchhal padti hae baki sab bhi khush the lekin kaveri herat se deva ko dekh rahi thi



Kaveri – deva tum sach me hamari soch se bhi jyada tej ho tumne sir se baat bhi kar li?



Deva – ha madam ab driver baniye jyoti ki aur le chaliye ise gaanv .



Kaveri muskrati hui apni gadi ki taraf jati hae aur peeche ka gate khol kar apn sir jhuka kar



Kaveri – aaiye dulhan madam aur dulhe raja aapka driver hajir hae gadi ke sath



Sab wapas gadiyo me baeth jate hae aur chal padte hae gaanv ki taraf. Udhar gaanv me nagarjun aur shalaka ki taiyraiya ho chuki thi. nilam bhi jyoti ka select kiya hua dress waha rakh chuki thi. aur poonam ne bhi sab ko invite kar diya tha to sabhi taiyar hone me lage the. Jab deva and party gaanv pahuche tab tak sare gaanv me baat fail gayi thi ke jyoti ki shadi ho gayi hae. deva, mala, kamini, rati aur channo ko haweli chhod ke apne ghar aa jata hae. aur apne kamre me jakar taiyar hota hae. ke tabhi fakeer baba waha aa jate hae.



Dev – pranam baba



FB – jeete raho dev



Dev – baba aapne aaj kaese kasht kiya?



FB – dev, swarn mani hasil karne ke safar pe nikalne ka samay najdeek hi hae tumahre grah is baat ki taraf ishara kar rahe hae tumhe ab rawana hona chahiye.



Dev – jaesi aagya baba aapke mutabik hame kab jana hae?



FB – jald se jald dev kyu ki aghori bhi apni taraf se prayas tej kar chuka hae. halaki wo abhi tumse bahot door hae is daud me. Lekin kahi uski doori ko halke me le liya to wo kab aage nikal jayega tumhe



Dev – thik hae baba hum kal hi nikalte hae.



FB – thik hae dev mae kal rat ko tumhare kamre me yahi miluga tum baki sabko yahi bula lena. Aur yahi se tum logo ka safar shuru ho jayega. Is safar me bahot mushkile hae dev isiliye apna aur apne sathiyo ka dhyan rakhna tum char hi jaoge. Matlab tum, poonam, rudra aur nilam.



Isilye baki sab ko tum sambhal lena.ab mae chalta hu.



Fir fakeer baba adrashya ho jate hae. aur deva soch me doob jata hae ke kis ko kaese set karna chahiye. Thodi der me hi plan bana ke dev waha se nikalta hae aur neeche aa kar apni maa ke kamre me jata hae to darwaje pe hi ruk jata hae kyu ke andar…..



Savitri – ssssseeeeooooffffffffooo chhodiye na party ke liye der ho rahi hae



DN – ari bhagyawan galti teri hi hae bina kapdo ke band kamre me mere samne aese ghumogi to mae to pakad hi luga na ab aa jao jaldi se





Savitri – ji nahi koi jarurat nahi hae abhi apne is khambhe ko kabu me rakhiye bachhe bhi taiyar ho chuke hoge raat ko karna jo bhi karna hae.



DN – thik hae fir aaj waha chhoti thakurain suhagrat manayegi idhar hum dono ki bhi suhagrat hogi kyu ke tum bhi to dulhan jaesi hi lagogi taiyar hone ke baad. Bas wapas aakar ghunghat nikal ke bistar pe baeth jana tumhari saree bhi mae khud nialuga jaese suhagrat me nikali thi



Savitri – oooooooooooohhhhhhhhhmmmmmaaa mere dooodhh to chhodiye kitna maslege. Aaaaaahhhhh poore lal kar diye daba daba ke dekho.



Fir deva darwaja khatkhata deta hae



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Naik

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Fir deva darwaja khatkhata deta hae……………



To andar se 5 minut ke baad darwaja khulta hae. samne DN hi tha savitri bathroom me bhag gayi thi nangi hi.



DN – are deva beta tum taiyar ho gaye.



Deva – ji babu ji aap aur maa taiyar nahi hue abhi?



DN – mae to taiyar hi hu bas teri maa hi der kar rahi hae.



Deva man me – aap unhe taiyar hone de to wo hogi na



Dea – thik hae babu ji mae hall me hu jaldi aaiye der ho jayegi



DN – bas hum abhi aate hae tum baetho.



Deva hall me aa kar baeth jata hae. to thodi der me waha diya raghu aur payal aa jate hae taiyar ho kar aur fir koi 15 minut baad savitri aur DN bhi aa jatre hae. savitri sach me kisi dulhan ki tarah taiyar hui thi lal saree gale me mangalsutra aur sone ka haar, maang me sindoor hatho me lal chudiya kaanch ki aur sath me sone ki chudiya aur kangan kaan me bade bade sone ke jhumke nak me hire ki chamchamati hui long. Poori ki poori dulhan hi lag rahi thi. jise deva ji bhar ke dekhta hae aur man hi man muskra deta hae kyu ki uska pallu halka sa ek taraf ki chuchi se hata hua tha aur wo chuchi abhi bhi laal lag rahi thi



Jab savitri deva ki najro ka peecha karti hui apni laal padi chuchi ko dekhti hae to Sharma jati hae





Deva man me – aaj to maa khud suhagrat ke liye taiyar hui hae bhala babu ji bhi khud ko kaese sambhale.



SD – chalo bhi deva kab tak dekhte rahoge



Ye sun deva bhi muskra deta hae aur Fir sabhi log gadi me baeth jate hae aur padma kaki ke ghar pahuchte hae jaha rudra pahle se scorpio le kar khada hi tha.



Deva – kya hua driver saab aapki sawari nahi aayi ab tak



Rudra – sala ab samajh me aaya ye driver log itne boukhlaye kyu rahte hae har waqt . abe itna intjar koi karega to boukhlayega hi na. kitna time lagati hae ladies log.



Deva – abe chup kar mae dekhta hu.



Fir deva andar ko jata hae aur jaese hi pahle kamre ka darwaja khol kar. Andar ghusta hae samne hi sudha khadi thi sirf bra penty me usi bra penty me jo deva ne lekar di thi. ek sangmarmar ki murat ki tarah wo deva ki taraf dekh rahi thi. khule baal gale me mangalsutra aur mathe pe sindoor hotho pe lipistic. Hatho me chudiya. Kano me jhumke lekin tan pe sirf mahroon colour ki bra penty wo bhi transparent. Dono ek duje me khoye the . ke tabhi bahar se kisi awaz pe inka dhyan tootta hae.



Sudha bina sharmaye deva ki taraf aage badti hae.



Sudha – ab dekh hi liya hae mujhe is bra penty me to bata bhi dijiye kaesi lag rahi hu mae aapke is gift set me?



Deva uske gaal ko sahlate hue – tum to waese bhi gajab ki sundar ho. Ha ye bra penty tumahre tan pe bahot achhi lag rahi hae. mohtaj ye hae tumhari, tum inki mohtaj nahi. Waese tum behad haseen lag rahi ho. Itna kah kar deva halke se sudha ke hotho pe hoth rakh kar un par halka sa chum leta hae .



Tabhi fir se bahar se awaz aati hae to deva bahar nikal jata hae. aur awaz lagata hae



Deva – poonam, nilam kaha ho yar tum log?



Thodi der ke baad dusre kamre ka darwaja khol kar poonam aur nilam nikalti hae. jo ki swarg ki apsaraye lag rahi thi. deva unhi me khoya hua tha ka side wale room se padma nikal ke aati hae wo bhi behad haseen lag rahi thi umar ka koi nishan nahi tha us pe



Deva man me – ye sari ladies to aaj kahar hi dha rahi hae. hamara kya hoga?



Poonam – kuchh nahi hoga ab chaliye.



Deva – kya?



Poonam haste hue – maene kaha ab koi der nahi hogi chalo bhi ya hame yahi khadi kar ke dekhte rahoge?



Deva – lekin gopal bhaiya aur bhabhi abhi nahi aaye.



Padma are gopal kisi kam se gaya hae. ye dono baad me aa jayege. Tum chalo hame der ho rahi hae.



Deva – ok, sudha bhabhi mae aapko lene ke liye aata hu thodi der me bhaiya aaye to unhe taiyar kar dena jaldi.



Sudha andar se - ji thik hae.



Fir bahar gadi me sab baeth jate hae aur pahuchte hae haweli me. Jaha poora gaanv hi umad pada tha aesi party thi aesi decoration jo gaanv walo ne thakuro ki shadi me bhi pahle kabhi nahi dekhi thi jo ab jyoti thakur ke reception me dekh rahe the. Sabhi behad khush the.



Ye sari ladies to be-dhadak haweli me ghus jati hae aur haweli ki aurato se milti hae. deva aur rudra bahar hi khade the tabhi unhe nagarjun aur shalaka bhi mil jate hae jo taiyar ho chuke the.



Deva – kya baat hae aap dono taiyar bhi ho gaye?



Shalaka – are aap to baat hi mat karo humse



Deva – kyu bhai aesa kya gunah kiya maene?



Shalaka kamar pe hath rakh kar ladne ke andaj me gusse se – samjha kya hae aapne mujhe mae koi caterror hu jab dekho shadi me decoration ka theka mujhe aur nagarjun ko de dete ho?



Deva – are yar tum dono perfect ho is kam ke liye isiliye deta hu na waese bhi sath kam karne se tumhe fayda hi hua hae. bolo hua hae ya nahi ?



Shalaka deva ki ankho me dekhti hae aur Sharma ke deva ke seene se lag jati hae. udhar nagarjun bhi Sharma jata hae.



Rudra - are waah ye kab hua yar pata hi nahi chala?



Tabhi waha poonam aati hae



Poonam – are ye Sali jija me kya ho raha hea? Aur ye aese Sharma kyu rahi hae meri bahna?



Deva – wo isiliye meri dharam patni ji kyu ki ab ye badi ho gayi hae. ise bhi iska nagarjun mil gaya hae



Poonam khushi se - sachhhiiiii are wah maja aa gaya. Badhai ho bahna.



Shalaka fir poonam ke gale lag jati hae. aur sab unki bate karne lagte hae



Tabhi padma deva ko bulati hae to deva un se hat ke padma ke pas jata hae



Deva – ha kaki kya hua?



Padma - wo bahu ka call aaya tha unhe lene ke liye kisi ko bhej doge ?



Deva – ohhhh mae to apni bato me bhul hi gaya tha mae khud chala jata hu.



Padma - thik hae. tabhi use gopal najar aata hae.



Deva - are gopal bhaiya aap log aa gaye kya? mae to aa hi raha tha lene abhi kaki ne bataya .



Gopal – nahi deva wo mae to taiyar ho ke kisi kam se chala gaya tha. Aur waha se seedha yahi aaya hu. Shayad sudha ghar pe hi hogi.



Deva – ok to chalo use le aate hae.



Gopal - ha chalo



Fir deva aur gopal dono hi bahar nikalte hae aur gadi me baeth jate hae aur gopal ke ghar ki taraf chal padte hae. thoda aage jane ke baad



Gopal – deva ek kam karo tum gadi rok do mae abhi aata hu. Aur tumhe ghar pe hi milta hu.



Deva – lekin aap kaha chal diye abhi raat me?
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Deva – chalo bhai vijay aur jyoti tum logo ki shadi to ho gayi. Ab kya vichar hae?



Kaveri – what do u mean deva? are yar jyoti ki shadi hui hae kisi 5 star hotel me lunch to banta hae apna.



Deva – ye sahi kaha aur ye party jyoti ki tarf se hogi . kyu jyoti?



Jyoti – ha kyu nahi . aaj mujhe meri manjil tak pahuchne ka rasta mila hae. to us khushi me party to mae hi dugi



Kaveri – what manjil jyoti?



Jyoti – are mera matlab hae ki jindagi me mujhe meri har manjil tak le jane wala hum safar jo mila hae



Kaveri - ohhh aesa? ha ye bhi hae. chalo ab hum Singhal hotel chalte hae wahi khana khayege. Jyoti vijay aap dono meri gadi me aaiye aur deva you please follow me



Deva – always madam



Deva ki baat par Sab hasne lagte hae. aur fir unki gadiya ek dusre ke peeche chalne lagti hae. deva ki gadi me



Mala – deva koi lafda to nahi hoga na ye vijay double cross to nahi karega na?



Deva – nahi wo aesa kuch nahi karega



Kamini – aur kiya to?



Deva – kiya to bhugtega, waese uske sign kiye hue stamp hamare pas hi hae. jara si bhi gadbad hoti dikhi to divorce milne me ek din bhi nahi lagega don’t worry.



Rati – lekin deva divorce hone me bhi samay lagta hae aese kaese ho jayega aur jab tak hoga tab tak isne koi gadbad ki to?



Deva – meri jaan yu to court marriage me bhi samay lagta hae par dekho subah vijay tumhare samne aaya aur dopahar tak shadi hui ke nahi. Mera yakeen karo meri pahuch ka andaza nahi tum logo ko . agar mae chahu to 1 ghante ke andar divorce ho jaye wo bhi abhi ke abhi.



Mala – tum par hi to yakeen hae. varna hum to kahi ke nahi rahte ye jyoti to tumhare hi bachho ki maa banne ki jid pakad ke baethi thi. ab uska rasta to banana hi tha. Chalo tum hi sambhalna .



Kamini – waese ye shadi ka natak kitne din ka hae?



Deva – jab tak jyoti ka dil aur god bachho se na bhar jaye. Jab jyoti aur bachhe nahi chahegi to pati ki jarurat khatam ho jayegi fir isse divorce bhi mil jayega. Aur mere hisab se ye silsila 3-4 sal me khatm hoga. Kyu ki jyoti bol kuchh bhi le lekin do se jyada bachhe nahi chahegi aur do bachhe itne samay me aram se mil jayege use.



Rati – mujhe to lagta hae ke ek hi sal me do bachhe ho jayege jaese tum dono ki speed hae.



Is se fir sab hans padte hae



Deva – idea bura nahi hae. agar judwa hi ho gaye to agle hi sal divorce karwa dege.



Itne me ye log hotel pahuch jate hae. aur fir wahi jyoti ko kaveri chhedti rahti hae. aur inka lunch bhi shuru hoi jata hae. aur lunch ke baad



Deva – kaveri tum sham ko apne husband ke saath gaanv aa rahi ho na



Kaveri – kyu?



Deva – jyoti ka reception hae bhai



Kaveri – lekin mere husband to out of town hae varna abhi na lati kya?



Deva – fir to dikkat ho jayegi tum akeli sham ko kaese niklogi?



Kaveri – koi baat nahi abhi to maene shadi bhi attend kar li aur party bhi. To fir kabhi mil lege.



Jyoti – nahi fir kabhi kyu? Mae kya roj reception rakhugi? Tu abhi chal rahi hae hamare saath.



Kaveri – lekin abhi mae kaese tu samajh na yar



Itne me deva thoda door jakar kisi se baat karta hae aur wapas aa kar.



Deva – chalo yar time kharab mat karo gaanv pahuchna hae ya nahi?



Jyoti – kamal karte ho deva yaha kaveri ki problem hae aur tum aese baat kar rahe ho?



Deva – are dear kaveri ki hi baat ki maene abhi DIG saab se. un se maeen iski chhutti le li hae. ab kaveri abhi isi waqt hamare saath ja rahi hae khush?



Jyoti uchhal padti hae baki sab bhi khush the lekin kaveri herat se deva ko dekh rahi thi



Kaveri – deva tum sach me hamari soch se bhi jyada tej ho tumne sir se baat bhi kar li?



Deva – ha madam ab driver baniye jyoti ki aur le chaliye ise gaanv .



Kaveri muskrati hui apni gadi ki taraf jati hae aur peeche ka gate khol kar apn sir jhuka kar



Kaveri – aaiye dulhan madam aur dulhe raja aapka driver hajir hae gadi ke sath



Sab wapas gadiyo me baeth jate hae aur chal padte hae gaanv ki taraf. Udhar gaanv me nagarjun aur shalaka ki taiyraiya ho chuki thi. nilam bhi jyoti ka select kiya hua dress waha rakh chuki thi. aur poonam ne bhi sab ko invite kar diya tha to sabhi taiyar hone me lage the. Jab deva and party gaanv pahuche tab tak sare gaanv me baat fail gayi thi ke jyoti ki shadi ho gayi hae. deva, mala, kamini, rati aur channo ko haweli chhod ke apne ghar aa jata hae. aur apne kamre me jakar taiyar hota hae. ke tabhi fakeer baba waha aa jate hae.



Dev – pranam baba



FB – jeete raho dev



Dev – baba aapne aaj kaese kasht kiya?



FB – dev, swarn mani hasil karne ke safar pe nikalne ka samay najdeek hi hae tumahre grah is baat ki taraf ishara kar rahe hae tumhe ab rawana hona chahiye.



Dev – jaesi aagya baba aapke mutabik hame kab jana hae?



FB – jald se jald dev kyu ki aghori bhi apni taraf se prayas tej kar chuka hae. halaki wo abhi tumse bahot door hae is daud me. Lekin kahi uski doori ko halke me le liya to wo kab aage nikal jayega tumhe



Dev – thik hae baba hum kal hi nikalte hae.



FB – thik hae dev mae kal rat ko tumhare kamre me yahi miluga tum baki sabko yahi bula lena. Aur yahi se tum logo ka safar shuru ho jayega. Is safar me bahot mushkile hae dev isiliye apna aur apne sathiyo ka dhyan rakhna tum char hi jaoge. Matlab tum, poonam, rudra aur nilam.



Isilye baki sab ko tum sambhal lena.ab mae chalta hu.



Fir fakeer baba adrashya ho jate hae. aur deva soch me doob jata hae ke kis ko kaese set karna chahiye. Thodi der me hi plan bana ke dev waha se nikalta hae aur neeche aa kar apni maa ke kamre me jata hae to darwaje pe hi ruk jata hae kyu ke andar…..



Savitri – ssssseeeeooooffffffffooo chhodiye na party ke liye der ho rahi hae



DN – ari bhagyawan galti teri hi hae bina kapdo ke band kamre me mere samne aese ghumogi to mae to pakad hi luga na ab aa jao jaldi se





Savitri – ji nahi koi jarurat nahi hae abhi apne is khambhe ko kabu me rakhiye bachhe bhi taiyar ho chuke hoge raat ko karna jo bhi karna hae.



DN – thik hae fir aaj waha chhoti thakurain suhagrat manayegi idhar hum dono ki bhi suhagrat hogi kyu ke tum bhi to dulhan jaesi hi lagogi taiyar hone ke baad. Bas wapas aakar ghunghat nikal ke bistar pe baeth jana tumhari saree bhi mae khud nialuga jaese suhagrat me nikali thi



Savitri – oooooooooooohhhhhhhhhmmmmmaaa mere dooodhh to chhodiye kitna maslege. Aaaaaahhhhh poore lal kar diye daba daba ke dekho.



Fir deva darwaja khatkhata deta hae



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aane wale updates me aap log ke sath shuru hoga dev and team ka wahi adventure trip Jiska jikra kai baar ho chuka hae aur jiska intjar bhi besabri se tha. to naye safar pe chalne ko taiyar ho jaiye ye safar ek aesa safar hoga jo aap logo ne ab tak kisi story me nahi padha hoga. kyu ki is adventure trip ko maene kai bar likha mitaya fir se likha aur apni koshish ki hae ki ise behtar nahi behtareen banau aur jo vaada aap logo se kiya tha ke ye safar aap logo ko full maja dega. wahi maja aur intrest aap logo ko mile hamne ye safar abhi poora to nahi likha hae lekin is ki shuruat aur iska plan bahot dino se ban raha tha mind me aur ab wo samay aa gaya hae ke is lock down ke time me dev apne sathiyo ke saath is adventure toor pe aapko le ja sakta hae. to taiyr ho jaiye is romanchank aur khatarnak safar ke liye. apni raay jaroor dete rahiyega jo ke is safar ko aur romanchak banaye.

seee you friends be safe bye
Ok bhai
Intjaar rahega
 

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दोस्तो आप सबका बहोत बहोत धन्यवाद क्यों कि आप सब के सहयोग से हमारी पहली ही स्टोरी के 300 पेज पूरे हुए है। जिन्होंने अपने अपने रिव्यू दिए उनका भी धन्यवाद और जो साइलेन्ट रीडर है उनका भी धन्यवाद। आप सब अपना सहयोग और साथ इसी तरह बनाये रखियेगा। क्यों कि ये स्टोरी हुम् अधूरी नही छोड़ने वाले।
Shukriya mitr
Aapko bhi ish khubsurat katha ke 300 pazes pure hone ki bahut bahut badhai dost
 

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UPDATE - 13

Fir deva darwaja khatkhata deta hae……………



To andar se 5 minut ke baad darwaja khulta hae. samne DN hi tha savitri bathroom me bhag gayi thi nangi hi.



DN – are deva beta tum taiyar ho gaye.



Deva – ji babu ji aap aur maa taiyar nahi hue abhi?



DN – mae to taiyar hi hu bas teri maa hi der kar rahi hae.



Deva man me – aap unhe taiyar hone de to wo hogi na



Dea – thik hae babu ji mae hall me hu jaldi aaiye der ho jayegi



DN – bas hum abhi aate hae tum baetho.



Deva hall me aa kar baeth jata hae. to thodi der me waha diya raghu aur payal aa jate hae taiyar ho kar aur fir koi 15 minut baad savitri aur DN bhi aa jatre hae. savitri sach me kisi dulhan ki tarah taiyar hui thi lal saree gale me mangalsutra aur sone ka haar, maang me sindoor hatho me lal chudiya kaanch ki aur sath me sone ki chudiya aur kangan kaan me bade bade sone ke jhumke nak me hire ki chamchamati hui long. Poori ki poori dulhan hi lag rahi thi. jise deva ji bhar ke dekhta hae aur man hi man muskra deta hae kyu ki uska pallu halka sa ek taraf ki chuchi se hata hua tha aur wo chuchi abhi bhi laal lag rahi thi



Jab savitri deva ki najro ka peecha karti hui apni laal padi chuchi ko dekhti hae to Sharma jati hae





Deva man me – aaj to maa khud suhagrat ke liye taiyar hui hae bhala babu ji bhi khud ko kaese sambhale.



SD – chalo bhi deva kab tak dekhte rahoge



Ye sun deva bhi muskra deta hae aur Fir sabhi log gadi me baeth jate hae aur padma kaki ke ghar pahuchte hae jaha rudra pahle se scorpio le kar khada hi tha.



Deva – kya hua driver saab aapki sawari nahi aayi ab tak



Rudra – sala ab samajh me aaya ye driver log itne boukhlaye kyu rahte hae har waqt . abe itna intjar koi karega to boukhlayega hi na. kitna time lagati hae ladies log.



Deva – abe chup kar mae dekhta hu.



Fir deva andar ko jata hae aur jaese hi pahle kamre ka darwaja khol kar. Andar ghusta hae samne hi sudha khadi thi sirf bra penty me usi bra penty me jo deva ne lekar di thi. ek sangmarmar ki murat ki tarah wo deva ki taraf dekh rahi thi. khule baal gale me mangalsutra aur mathe pe sindoor hotho pe lipistic. Hatho me chudiya. Kano me jhumke lekin tan pe sirf mahroon colour ki bra penty wo bhi transparent. Dono ek duje me khoye the . ke tabhi bahar se kisi awaz pe inka dhyan tootta hae.



Sudha bina sharmaye deva ki taraf aage badti hae.



Sudha – ab dekh hi liya hae mujhe is bra penty me to bata bhi dijiye kaesi lag rahi hu mae aapke is gift set me?



Deva uske gaal ko sahlate hue – tum to waese bhi gajab ki sundar ho. Ha ye bra penty tumahre tan pe bahot achhi lag rahi hae. mohtaj ye hae tumhari, tum inki mohtaj nahi. Waese tum behad haseen lag rahi ho. Itna kah kar deva halke se sudha ke hotho pe hoth rakh kar un par halka sa chum leta hae .



Tabhi fir se bahar se awaz aati hae to deva bahar nikal jata hae. aur awaz lagata hae



Deva – poonam, nilam kaha ho yar tum log?



Thodi der ke baad dusre kamre ka darwaja khol kar poonam aur nilam nikalti hae. jo ki swarg ki apsaraye lag rahi thi. deva unhi me khoya hua tha ka side wale room se padma nikal ke aati hae wo bhi behad haseen lag rahi thi umar ka koi nishan nahi tha us pe



Deva man me – ye sari ladies to aaj kahar hi dha rahi hae. hamara kya hoga?



Poonam – kuchh nahi hoga ab chaliye.



Deva – kya?



Poonam haste hue – maene kaha ab koi der nahi hogi chalo bhi ya hame yahi khadi kar ke dekhte rahoge?



Deva – lekin gopal bhaiya aur bhabhi abhi nahi aaye.



Padma are gopal kisi kam se gaya hae. ye dono baad me aa jayege. Tum chalo hame der ho rahi hae.



Deva – ok, sudha bhabhi mae aapko lene ke liye aata hu thodi der me bhaiya aaye to unhe taiyar kar dena jaldi.



Sudha andar se - ji thik hae.



Fir bahar gadi me sab baeth jate hae aur pahuchte hae haweli me. Jaha poora gaanv hi umad pada tha aesi party thi aesi decoration jo gaanv walo ne thakuro ki shadi me bhi pahle kabhi nahi dekhi thi jo ab jyoti thakur ke reception me dekh rahe the. Sabhi behad khush the.



Ye sari ladies to be-dhadak haweli me ghus jati hae aur haweli ki aurato se milti hae. deva aur rudra bahar hi khade the tabhi unhe nagarjun aur shalaka bhi mil jate hae jo taiyar ho chuke the.



Deva – kya baat hae aap dono taiyar bhi ho gaye?



Shalaka – are aap to baat hi mat karo humse



Deva – kyu bhai aesa kya gunah kiya maene?



Shalaka kamar pe hath rakh kar ladne ke andaj me gusse se – samjha kya hae aapne mujhe mae koi caterror hu jab dekho shadi me decoration ka theka mujhe aur nagarjun ko de dete ho?



Deva – are yar tum dono perfect ho is kam ke liye isiliye deta hu na waese bhi sath kam karne se tumhe fayda hi hua hae. bolo hua hae ya nahi ?



Shalaka deva ki ankho me dekhti hae aur Sharma ke deva ke seene se lag jati hae. udhar nagarjun bhi Sharma jata hae.



Rudra - are waah ye kab hua yar pata hi nahi chala?



Tabhi waha poonam aati hae



Poonam – are ye Sali jija me kya ho raha hea? Aur ye aese Sharma kyu rahi hae meri bahna?



Deva – wo isiliye meri dharam patni ji kyu ki ab ye badi ho gayi hae. ise bhi iska nagarjun mil gaya hae



Poonam khushi se - sachhhiiiii are wah maja aa gaya. Badhai ho bahna.



Shalaka fir poonam ke gale lag jati hae. aur sab unki bate karne lagte hae



Tabhi padma deva ko bulati hae to deva un se hat ke padma ke pas jata hae



Deva – ha kaki kya hua?



Padma - wo bahu ka call aaya tha unhe lene ke liye kisi ko bhej doge ?



Deva – ohhhh mae to apni bato me bhul hi gaya tha mae khud chala jata hu.



Padma - thik hae. tabhi use gopal najar aata hae.



Deva - are gopal bhaiya aap log aa gaye kya? mae to aa hi raha tha lene abhi kaki ne bataya .



Gopal – nahi deva wo mae to taiyar ho ke kisi kam se chala gaya tha. Aur waha se seedha yahi aaya hu. Shayad sudha ghar pe hi hogi.



Deva – ok to chalo use le aate hae.



Gopal - ha chalo



Fir deva aur gopal dono hi bahar nikalte hae aur gadi me baeth jate hae aur gopal ke ghar ki taraf chal padte hae. thoda aage jane ke baad



Gopal – deva ek kam karo tum gadi rok do mae abhi aata hu. Aur tumhe ghar pe hi milta hu.



Deva – lekin aap kaha chal diye abhi raat me?
Nice update mitr
 
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