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Agli update ki partiksha rahegi mitr.
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jis tarah readers ko har story me naye updates ki ichha aur prateeksha rahti hae usi tarah har writer ko comments ka intjar isse pata chalta hae ke usne kaha galti ki. aage kaese badhna hae. aese me ye kahna shayad poori tarah sahi nahi hoga ke hum comments ke liye story likh rahe hae. ha comments ka intjar hae aur rahega har update ke baad. aur aapki baat ka bura manne wali koi baat nahi. kyu ki baat achhi ho ya buri baat to karo yar. silent readers waese bhi hajaro hote hae. kuchh hi bande aese milte hae jo comments karte hae to unse hi ummid hae aur unse hi request bhi. to hamare comments mangne pe aap log bura na mane. isi bahane hum aap logo se direct baat to karte hae na. story ke saath bane rahe.
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UPDATE – 68
Deva aur poonam jaese hi haweli pahuchta hae. samne mala bathi thi.
Mala – are aao deva is samay kaese rasta bhul gaye yaha ka.
Deva – bas thakurain mae to is waqt apni bahan se milne aaya hu.
Mala achhi bat hae. par aate raha karo aur to ab yaha koi aata jata nahi . waese ye kaun hae?
Deva – ye hae meri jindagi. Meri jaan. Meri hone wali patni. Poonam inhi ke saath mera rishta tay hua
Mala – bahot sundar hae. bhagwan tum dono ki Jodi sada banaye rakhe.
Tabhi waha channo aa jati hae.
Channo - are bhaiya aap?
Deva – ha channo aaj mae tumahre liye do surprise laya hu.
Channo - are wah to dijiye
Deva – pahli surprise to tumhare samne hi hae inhe tumse khas milane laya hu. Ye hae tumhari honewali bhabhi. Aur poonam ye hae meri bahan channo
Channo aur poonam khushi se daud kar ek duje ke gale milti hae.
Channo – bhaiya meri bhabhi to bahot bahot sunder hae kisi rajkumari ki jaesi.
Deva – ha sahi pahchana ye rajkumari hi hae mere dil ki nagri ki. Bas ab inhe maharani banana hae.
Sab deva ki baat pe hasne lagte hae
Channo- bhaiya ye surprise to itna achha tha ke ab koi aur surprise inki jagah le hi nahi sakta.
Deva – lekin dusra bhi hae
Channo - to dijiye
Fir deva uske liye laye hue saman ke packets de deta hae itna sara saman kapde dekh ke channo ki ankho me aansu aa jate hae aur wo daud kar deva ke seene se lag ke rone lagti hae.
Deva – kya hua pagli ro kyu rahi hae.
Channo - bhaiya in sab ki kya jarurat thi. Mujhe aap mil gaye to sab mil gaya mujhe ye sab nahi chahiye.
Deva – to mujhe kyu kah rahi hae apni honewali bhabhi se bol de ye sab wahi layi hae. tu kya samajhti hae mujhe ye sab lena aata hae? are ye to poonam hi layi ye kah kar ki pahli baar apni nand se khali haath kaese milu.
Channo palat ke poonam ke gale lag jati hae. – bhabhi aapne ye sab kyu kiya?
Poonam - are rajkumari ki nanad aese kaese rah sakti hae. wo bhi to rajkumariyo ke jaese rahegi na. isliye ab koi sawal jawab nahi bas ye sab tere liye hae ise rakho. Ye koi khaerat nahi balki Ye huq hae tumhara apne bhai par Aur bhabhi par.
Channo poonam se gale lagi ro rahi thi aur poonam use shant karne lagti hae. thodi der ke baad
Deva – ok channo ab hame chalna chahiye bahot der ho gayi hae teri bhabhi ko bhi unke ghar chhodna hae varna meri hone wali sasu maa pareshan hogi na. fir aauga bye
Fir deva aur poonam haweli se nikal kar poonam ke ghar aate hae. aur poonam gadi se utarne lagti hae to deva use pakad ke fir se gale laga leta hae aur uske hotho ko chum leta hae fir poonam bhi andar jane lagti hae
Deva – 12 baje chalna hae tilism nagri taiyar rahna meri jaan.
Poonam - ok love mae taiyar rahugi.
Fir deva apne ghar aata hae. aur seedha basement me jata hae. jaha pe is waqt koi nahi tha. To deva aankhe band kar ke shalaka se bat karta hae.
Deva - kaha ho shalaka?
Shalaka – gurum ke saath hi hu. Thodi der hui hae target practice khatam kiye hue.
Deva – kaesa lag raha hae.
Shalaka - achha lag raha hae. aap kaha hae?
Deva – basement me.
Shalaka – hum sab abhi aate hae.
Deva – ok aajao tumse kuch jaroori bate bhi karni hae.
Fir deva wapas normal hokar baeth jata hae. aur apna system on kar deta hae. jisme sabse pahle wo mails check karta hae. usme kaveri ne gang ki poori detail bhej di thi. Fir deva marriage beuro ki detail check karta hae jisme deva ne jin jin ko select kiya tha sab ke jawab aa gaye the. Deva sab ke reply padh raha tha tabhi waha gurum , shalaka aur nagarjun aa jate hae.
Gurum – kya ho raha hae. bhai.
Deva – aao gurum. Maene tumhara kaam kar diya hae.
Gurum - kaun sa kam deva?
Deva aur poonam jaese hi haweli pahuchta hae. samne mala bathi thi.
Mala – are aao deva is samay kaese rasta bhul gaye yaha ka.
Deva – bas thakurain mae to is waqt apni bahan se milne aaya hu.
Mala achhi bat hae. par aate raha karo aur to ab yaha koi aata jata nahi . waese ye kaun hae?
Deva – ye hae meri jindagi. Meri jaan. Meri hone wali patni. Poonam inhi ke saath mera rishta tay hua
Mala – bahot sundar hae. bhagwan tum dono ki Jodi sada banaye rakhe.
Tabhi waha channo aa jati hae.
Channo - are bhaiya aap?
Deva – ha channo aaj mae tumahre liye do surprise laya hu.
Channo - are wah to dijiye
Deva – pahli surprise to tumhare samne hi hae inhe tumse khas milane laya hu. Ye hae tumhari honewali bhabhi. Aur poonam ye hae meri bahan channo
Channo aur poonam khushi se daud kar ek duje ke gale milti hae.
Channo – bhaiya meri bhabhi to bahot bahot sunder hae kisi rajkumari ki jaesi.
Deva – ha sahi pahchana ye rajkumari hi hae mere dil ki nagri ki. Bas ab inhe maharani banana hae.
Sab deva ki baat pe hasne lagte hae
Channo- bhaiya ye surprise to itna achha tha ke ab koi aur surprise inki jagah le hi nahi sakta.
Deva – lekin dusra bhi hae
Channo - to dijiye
Fir deva uske liye laye hue saman ke packets de deta hae itna sara saman kapde dekh ke channo ki ankho me aansu aa jate hae aur wo daud kar deva ke seene se lag ke rone lagti hae.
Deva – kya hua pagli ro kyu rahi hae.
Channo - bhaiya in sab ki kya jarurat thi. Mujhe aap mil gaye to sab mil gaya mujhe ye sab nahi chahiye.
Deva – to mujhe kyu kah rahi hae apni honewali bhabhi se bol de ye sab wahi layi hae. tu kya samajhti hae mujhe ye sab lena aata hae? are ye to poonam hi layi ye kah kar ki pahli baar apni nand se khali haath kaese milu.
Channo palat ke poonam ke gale lag jati hae. – bhabhi aapne ye sab kyu kiya?
Poonam - are rajkumari ki nanad aese kaese rah sakti hae. wo bhi to rajkumariyo ke jaese rahegi na. isliye ab koi sawal jawab nahi bas ye sab tere liye hae ise rakho. Ye koi khaerat nahi balki Ye huq hae tumhara apne bhai par Aur bhabhi par.
Channo poonam se gale lagi ro rahi thi aur poonam use shant karne lagti hae. thodi der ke baad
Deva – ok channo ab hame chalna chahiye bahot der ho gayi hae teri bhabhi ko bhi unke ghar chhodna hae varna meri hone wali sasu maa pareshan hogi na. fir aauga bye
Fir deva aur poonam haweli se nikal kar poonam ke ghar aate hae. aur poonam gadi se utarne lagti hae to deva use pakad ke fir se gale laga leta hae aur uske hotho ko chum leta hae fir poonam bhi andar jane lagti hae
Deva – 12 baje chalna hae tilism nagri taiyar rahna meri jaan.
Poonam - ok love mae taiyar rahugi.
Fir deva apne ghar aata hae. aur seedha basement me jata hae. jaha pe is waqt koi nahi tha. To deva aankhe band kar ke shalaka se bat karta hae.
Deva - kaha ho shalaka?
Shalaka – gurum ke saath hi hu. Thodi der hui hae target practice khatam kiye hue.
Deva – kaesa lag raha hae.
Shalaka - achha lag raha hae. aap kaha hae?
Deva – basement me.
Shalaka – hum sab abhi aate hae.
Deva – ok aajao tumse kuch jaroori bate bhi karni hae.
Fir deva wapas normal hokar baeth jata hae. aur apna system on kar deta hae. jisme sabse pahle wo mails check karta hae. usme kaveri ne gang ki poori detail bhej di thi. Fir deva marriage beuro ki detail check karta hae jisme deva ne jin jin ko select kiya tha sab ke jawab aa gaye the. Deva sab ke reply padh raha tha tabhi waha gurum , shalaka aur nagarjun aa jate hae.
Gurum – kya ho raha hae. bhai.
Deva – aao gurum. Maene tumhara kaam kar diya hae.
Gurum - kaun sa kam deva?
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Nice update bro
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Super fantastic update bhai
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Amazing mind blowing updates bhai maza aa gaya.
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thanx bhai
