Baal bachche Wale ho Gaye hai ... Ab romance unki jindagi se chala gaya , romantic kahani kya khak likhenge..😂😂😂

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कहानी - पूर्वाग्रह और पाठक कहानीकार - @SANJU ( V. R. ) शब्द प्रयोग शानदार तरीके से किया आपने ।।।।सही लिखा की एक पाठक अपने ही पूर्वाग्रह से दूषित हो गया , और कोई भी कहानी और चुटकुला तक नही लिख पाने के कारण वो रचनाकार के रचना के साथ वो न्याय नही कर पाया है , जो उनको मिलना चाहिए ।।।।अति उत्तम...

Story :- 24 ghante Writer - @SANJU ( V. R. ) Review - Jeet pyar me Hara hua ek ladaka , aur gharwalo se thukaraya hua...gam bhulane ke liye samudrari yatra ka chunav Kiya....pyar me piyakkad ban Gaya hai , mujhe ye samajh nhi aata ye pine se gum bhulata nhi hai to log pite kyo hai....khaair...

Story :- yeh baarishai Writer - @Aagasthya Review - story ek teenage wali pyar par based hai... barish ke wakt hua mulakat , suyesh aur kritika ke bich ek dosti ka rishta kayam kar diya , aur suyesh ka ek tarfa payar bhi ....story simplicity ko lekar chalti hai na extra drama na jyada bakwas...

COVID se Bach Gaya tha ...bcz yamraj busy the kahi aur 😂😂😂

Story: rage writer : @Aagasthya Review - English language me likhi gayi ye story writer ko America ka dalal hone ka sabut pesh karti hai😂😂😂... Majak tha.. ye ek bewafa aurat ke karan hone wale tabah jindgiyo ki kahani hai... Sarah ko kisi aur ke sath bate karte , akele me chhup ke milte ...

Story name : the last apology : a tale of friendship and regrets Writer : @Aagasthya Review :- story theme badhiya hai ...yup hostel ke shuruwati din kuchh waise hi sabke gujarte hai....achanak se hi akela ho jate ladake....lekin iss vyastha me sudhar ki koi gunjaish nhi hai.... hostel jate...

Are nhi Bhai story Puri likho bhale hi 200 - 300 update ho jaye ....hame bhi lambi story hi padhane me maja aata hai....short story me bahut sari adhuri si rah jati hai...so kam se kam 150 + update to hona hi chahiye

Writer mahoday isse mast romantic story banana ...ha thoda sa sex scene dalna ho to dalna nhi to mat dalna ...bas aise hi romance ke naye naye kisse likhana..... Agar badhiya likh Gaye romance to ye bhi story KOI TO ROK LO (wo bhi incest hai heroine mausi ki ladaki thi usme bhi)ke barabar pahuch...

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