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Absolutely, well described. Thanks

Very well said brother. This story infact is beyond just naughty convos as it progresses

Thank you ALL very much for the positive feedback! I will try my best to continue on the buildup.Next update is tomorrow. I will try to give update 2 and 3 within same day.

Update 1 - INTRODUCTIONKahaani hai ek khaandaan ki jo Bhopal ke ek ameeron ki colony mein rehtay hain. Yeh log ameer hai, lekin inke sarbarah aur diggaj raeeson ki list mein shumaar honay ka khwaab dikhtay hain. Aaiye kahaani shuruaat karnay se pehlay mukhyay kirdaaron se roobaroo hotay hain...

I have a small request to those who have read the original storyPlease reply in my inbox only, if you feel so.What were the best parts or best updates of the original story jo ki bohot ziada memorable rahay?

Thank you all for your warm welcome and wishes.

Ammi (Shaila Khan) ki Secrets!Hi all pehli kahaani liknay jaa raha hu.Restarting a story that was a hit on another website forum and left incomplete on this forum by the original writer who is my buddy.This is not a CLEAN COPY PASTE!There are CHANGES from the beginning, especially start...

writer wapis online nahi aya hai 8 february se, kisko puuchay jaa rahau ho update ke liye

Itna potential tha is story mein, itni jaldi khatm kardiya Although credit to writer that he actually bothered to finish story Kyunki sab tou adhura chor detay hain Bus yeh bohot jaldi anth kardiI will probably later redo it later myself

Keep the pace slow as you have so far.....haule haule

Writer February 8 se online bhi nhi aya hai

Kindof would have been new, if he hadnt confessed his love so fast....thora dheeraj rakh kar , situations ke.mutabiq karta....more kinky, erotica possible

Love the direction, the plot unfolding, character developement.... Keep it coming shanti ji....

Ultra erotic Thanks for comeback Grand update

Yes, keep writing, the flow and reader engagement is strong now

Good update

Good plot The amount of scene and dialogue you have written in whole goa trip so far has been very enticing But i wish this whole scenario happened before their first fuck..... the seduction, the boldness, its like cooking an epic dish before eatingAnyways....lagay raho.... looking forward for...

Well written, superb devopement... thora small update... but its amazing Thanks

Looking forward for update

Super plot direction