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it was a seductive voice ya what you sayin

apart from what i have said the story is intriguing i am loving it I imagine Jasmine from Veerana as Malini :p:

see this"agar aisa hota to aaj mein is maliniji ko nahi dekh raha hota jise mene pehli bar is haweli mein dekha tha " vo malini ko dekhte hue biscuit khane laga. Malini ko apna vo din yaad aa gaya jab vo shadi krke ayi thi aur haweli mein uski pehli subah thi. Vese to naukar the aur kaam karne...

Started reading, thank you for the PDF :hug:The flashback in the original scene just confuses me, every time Malini is getting good you drop a flashback, first of her husband and now her father. hope going forward this gets reduced, i don't dislike it but somehow it just slows down the stuff.

:(

Indian post services is such a lousy thing :angry: haven't received parcel dispatched 15 days ago :wtf:

yahan bhi election hota hai ? doesn't look like it

last election winner on XP :sigh2:

idhar bhi hai wohi id mere paas i think

:yes1:

MumBaekar it was :)

hey thank you both :yay:

https://xforum.live/threads/haweli-the-night-is-dark-completed.632/page-136#post-5091521this one

ruko lemme tell you

ya, btw back to my current thing, Haweli ki pdf hogi kya ?

i guess, but kitna time hua i don't remember it :p:

:buttkick:

hey anyone anyway could I get a PDF of this story that harshit has written Haweli in here ?

arey office trip ya :cry2:

:ecs: :wave: