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Thnks dost apke beautiful coments k lie... Apne kmi to kuch km ginayi hai...kuch mai btati hu...arushi ki entry wesi nhi hui jesi honi chahiye... Iski entry mujhe villan jesi krni thi...jo mene ki bhi lekin word jada ho gye to bht kuch dlt krna pda. ..murga,murgi ya ya word mistake to pkka hone...

Yadi aisa hai to vakai ye update kabile tareef hai...lekin mai is story ke bare me kuch nhi janti...to ek update pdhne se kya smjh aayega...anyway...ye to apne bta diya ki isme character animal lover hai.. ye achha hai....keep updating @nain11ster sir...

Woww....thats really a good update.... Bhai ko pta bhi nhi ki uske sath uski bahan hai... Or uski biwi ka to kya hi kahna ... Is scene me bht mja aaya or usse jada mja tb aayega jb rahul ko bbi pta hoga... Waiting for more updates.... Good nerration,superb scene,and perfect imagination...

Sir wo ahankar se grasit nhi hai... Ye apke dekhne ka najariya hai... He is very tallanted and respected parson here .. mujhe ye jankar ashcharya ho rha hai ki unhe or unke achhe swabhav ko yha sbbi jante hai ..lekin ap unse agyan kaise rah gye.... Yha kuch hi log hai jo bahut samjhdar or...

Yaadein..... By @SANJU ( V. R. )Wowww...bahut hi khubsurat story thi... I know ao jada story likhte nhi pr jo b likhte ho kmaal likhte ho... Ye story bht hi jada bhavnatmak thi.. Ek college life ki love story..jinme bahut hi jada pyar tha,kuch fmly problms ki vjh se unki shadi nhi ho payi...

dear @Ass licker ji... Apki story bahut achhi chal rhi hai...ykeen maniye mai kabhi running story nhi pdhti,hmesha cmplt hone ke bad hi pdhti hu... But apki story pahli story hai jo mai running pdh rhi hu..bsc its very good...Kisi ko cmnt krna aata hai kisi ko nhi ..kisi ke pas time n...

Kyuki... Inhe hdse jada tareef chahiye...

Line - Strictly Warning I hate such comment like nice update, keep posting, next update please, waiting for next update, bhut shandar update blah blah etc Mention best part in comment box for further update...is line se hm lekhak mahodya ki manodasha ko smjh skte hai ...islie story yhi stop...

Writer ki ek line se uske dimak me chal rhi kashmkash ka pta lg gya...or kashmkash yhi kahti ki ...ab or nhi...😀😀😀

Lekin ab ye kahani aage nhi bdhegi...i know...😀😀😀

Thnks @Mahi Maurya ji... Wese ap shuru se hi kucu jada hi bcha chdhakar tareef karti aayi hai...ye thik nhi hai... Utna bhi khas nhi hoti meri story...ha khamishiya jaroor achhi thi ,tujhme rab dikhta hai pur nhi ho payi...docmo wali...ha wo bhi achhi thi...or rahi prakriti ki baat to ...yes...

Thnks Sanju ji...story mujhe b thik lgi pr arushi ko jaise instroduce krna chahti thi wese nhi kr paayi...arushi ke upr jada high light nhi kr payi...shadbo ki limitaton ne mujhe rok diya ,wrna arushi ki entry hi bahut sahi soch kr rkhi thi mene jo us story ko batter bna sakti thi...khair..ha ye...

Haa ..nature bhi bht achha hai inka...bs copy cat wali adat nhi gyi...hmesa dusre ke coment copy krke as it is likh dete hai...

Parkas...tum nhi sudhroge na...tumhari copy krne ki adat gyi nhi...tumne se coment copy kr liya...anyway thnks ..

Wowww.... story bahut hi achhi hai dost ..bht achha likhte ho...great ...

Thnkss Dost...thnks for reading this story ..arushi ko jada show nhi kr paayi...words limitation...uska kirdar thoda or dikhana tha ye mujhe sbse bdi chuuk lgti hai ..or arushi ka rasta galat tha bhi or nhi bhi,kyuki sahi raasta wo bachpan se istemal krti aarhi thi,kabhi kabhi kuch bate kuch...

चरित्रहीन BY - @Mahi Mauryawow....itna dard kisi ki ladki ke jeevan apne kaise soch liya...khair apke lekhn kla ka to sb loha mante hi hai.... Ek ldki ke jeevan me kitna dard ho sakta hai he apne bht achhe se pesh kiya...mujhe ek baat ajtak smjh nhi aayi ki charitraheen bs ldki hi kyu ldke...

Thanks dost apke review ke lie...ha mujhe pta hai ki narretion kmjor hai...mujhse short story likhi nhi jati...long mai achhe se likh pati hu ..kosis krugi short likhne ki bhi ..thanks...

Ohhh...are...apne name change kr liya...pr kyu..wo achha tha ..