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Nice update..Ye rashmi aur Preet kon thi koi bataega... Shayad bhul gaya hu ya ye new character h kyuki mujhe yaad ni aarha ki kisi ka baaaP CM tha.. upar s ye rohit ka chakkar.. ye bi new character h kya ???Well sisters n achi planning Kari h hamare hero ko manane k liye aur iski shuruat...

Going good.. Ye Sakshi yahan bi firki lene m lagi hui h par result jaan kar thodi hadbada gai par agar usko ye pata chalta ki abhi Abhi magic ni kar sakta to pakka sabke samne uski beijjjati karti..kher filahal to sab thek h. Arushi new character h aur lag raha h ki iski aur abhi ki dosti bi...

Very short update.. Updates m scene kitne h ye imp h phir chahe koi usko kitna bi short krke dikha de but aaj k update m bs 2 hi scene tha usme bi 1st wale m bs baap bete ka conversation tha aur 2nd wala town Jane k liye ready hona bs...Also , conversation ko aap smartly likh sakte h taki apko...

Congratulations for new story ...First update m hi family drama shuru krdia .. hamara hero Surya aaya hi tha ghar m itne time baad aur aane k baad hi itna kuch samne aagya....Kher , lagta h next update m aur drama hoga kyuki shayad 7 log enter karne wale surya k nanihal s h .. surya ki maa...

Congratulations for new story ...First update m hi family drama shuru krdia .. hamara hero Surya aaya hi tha ghar m itne time baad aur aane k baad hi itna kuch samne aagya....Kher , lagta h next update m aur drama hoga kyuki shayad 7 log enter karne wale surya k nanihal s h .. surya ki maa...

Nice update.. story m multiple points h jo ek sath chal rahi h jo ki acha lag raha h. Ek taraf adult part h jahn kaki k sath sath target m cousins bi h , dusri taraf 2 aisi ladkia jo special malum pad rahi h ( 1 angrez , 1 ashram wali ) , teesra h lallu k andar supernatural powers hona , chautha...

Very nice.. its not difficult to imagine things here.. I think I know abt some part of story but u have added new elements too..Keep going.. All d best..

Going good..Seems like koi problem jald hi aane wali h aur uska karan hogi ye pooja ... Ye abhi to aise show kar rahi h ki khud gulam ban gai h but ye sab hone s pehle uske dimag m kuch galat bhawna thi.. najane kyu situation aisi hi dikh rahi h ki amit ko pooja hi faswaegi apne chakkar m aur...

UPDATE WILL COME ON SUNDAY ...will start writing very soon ... SORRY FOR BEING LATE ....

KGF jaisi story lag rahi h first update padhne k baad.. although it's not same ..Let's see..

Nice storyline..Last update was nice., Seems like it could be either Ajay or gauri.. if it's Ajay then maybe this will create tension btw Ajay & kamini but if it's gauri then I think the next person lying beneath Amit will be her ..Well abtk story sirf gaon k andar aur Amit k nanihal tk hi...

Interesting... Story thodi complicated h , samajh ni aaraha ki normal story h ya magical element bi h kyuki ab 4th dimension ki baat aagai h to magical hi hoga but natu jaise shaks ka yahan aana samajh s pare h kyuki wo ek normal psychiatrist raha tha apni jindgi m aur ab ek kisaan ki tarah rah...

Very nice update..Kafi sari cheeze hogai is update m...Pehle to vidhi .. usko kidnap Kia Abhishek n aur Abhishek bi komalika dayan ka beta nikla . Inki family problem k chalte sab alag the par Amar hone k chakkar m abishek wapas apni MAA k paas aagya aur apne hi Bhai ki maut ki wajah banne k...

Hello frnds..New Update will come today by 8pm.. Abhi battery down h phone ki to charge hone k baad likhna start karunga isliye time lag jaega।।Stay along।।।।।

Very nice update.Karan Jyoti n aaj ache s planning karke apne nirdosh hone ka saboot khud viraaj aur Maya s dilwa dia . Riya Radha ko fake call karke Jyoti n jaldi bulwa Lia Ghar p jisse unhone khud sari baatein sun li . Waise aur acha hota agar viraaj Maya ki achi khilai pilai bi hoti Jo...

Ye jisne Yash ko khanjar Mara ye koi ladki h measn sudhir lal ka boss b koi ladki hogi aur agar jaisa is ladki n bola h iska mtlb ko Yash Sach m kisi s pyar karta tha aur us ladki ko is ladki n hi marwa dia tha..Ab ye ladki Kon h , waise kuch bi ho bs ye shanayaa na ho galti s bi warna halla...

Nice update...Ranvir ki factory hi Karan n uda di Jahan illegal medicines ka dhanda karta tha ranvir .. Karan n kafi dhyan s kaam kia upar s call karke khud Ranvir ko Bata dia ki ye sab uska Kiya dhara h . Wo baat alag h ki ranvir pehchan ni paya aur agar pehchan b leta to wo vishwash ni karta...

Thanks...I'll try my best to beat myself n Excel as u said...

It's my 2nd account Vj Bhai ..Maine dhyan ni dia aur usse hi comment kardia tha.. as I told u earlier m going to write a story so I started that already and my inspiration is ur story .. so maybe kabi agar confuse hua kisi point par to main apki is story s help lene ki permission chahunga...