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yaar tumhen active dekh kar khayal uth rahen hain SAFAR ko pura karne ke liye, lekin pata nahi ab likhne ka dil hi nahi karta, jab se pacemaker laga hai bahut kuch badal gaya hai :)

wo anokha hai ...lekin tum jayada anokhi ho :applause:

:claps: :welcome: back

good beginning of next part

badi khatarnak ho :esc:

awesome after a long time have read a good story, awaiting for completion. :applause:

Shayad na hi likh paaun, Doctor ne koi bhi kaam karne ke liye mana kar diya hai, both physical and mental, aur likhne mein stress hota hai, heart condition aur kharab ho gayi hai, dekhte hain aage kya hota hai

bahut khub

awesome

sorry, jab bhi check kiya tha ruki hui thi ab aage bad chuki hai, maine socha main aage badaun, par ab piche hat jaaunga

sorry got confused with other story

Safar ek badi bhavnatmak kahani hai, vahan tak pahunchne mein mujhe waqt lagega, tab tak kyun na kuch halka fulka likh khud ko ravan kar lun. Ye kahani kisi aur ne likhi thi, fir yahan ise cnp kiya gaya lekin vahin tak ruk gayi, to agar aap logon ki izazat ho ise aage ka roop dun?

Ek chota sa prayas fir se likhne ka. ye kahani original writer ne jahan tak likhi thi vo cnp ho chuki hai. https://xforum.live/threads/mummy-ki-chudai-vasna.78626/ prayas hai aage badane ka

agla update shayad hi kabhi aaye kyunki kahani original writer ne yahan tak hi likhi thi

samapt nahi kaho, ye bolo jab waqt milega tab fir dhamake dar re-entry hogi

shukriya dost. par as writer thoda waqt lagega

awesome har ek ki bhavna, khas kar Sonali ki bhavna ka bakhubi chitran kiya hai :)

abhi jinda hun to jee lene do aati barsat mein pee lene do:) kuch to gadbad hai is masum dil ke saath, dehte hain agle hafte doc kya kehta hai

bahut khub

bahut achcha likh rahe ho bhai