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Radha ki kismat achhi hai. Jhoota gussa dikhayegi par us se tharak sambhlegi nahi, aur mauka bhi hai, make me. Ravi gusse me karega to vaise hi double maza aayega kyunki Deepa ki bhadaas nikalega Radha Mami ke gudaaz makhmali badan par. Radha k puraane gile shikwe ek hi raat me poore saaf ho...

Kahani fast speed pakad gayi hai. Ye ravi ki mom ki chot ka kuchh gadbad lag Raha hai. Kavita ki Shaadi me ab aur der hogi, lagta hai.

ये pregnant हो गई तो रवि भैया की बत्ती लग जायेगी। बदनामी तो होगी ही, दीपिका रिजेक्ट कर देगी वो ज्यादा problem हो जायेगा। Interesting situation बनती लग रही है!

Brilliant, Bhai! Long time fan ♥️🙏

Take as much time as you need bro. Family is everything.

Really nice. Please keep going. You have a great narrative style.

Great start. Keep it going. Very promising premise.

Very exciting premise. Have a good feeling about this story

Really quite good. Hope you continue.

Wonderful! 👍😊 jitni tareef ki Jaye kum hai!

Very nice. Good to see you back and getting in rhythm. Strength to you , 🙏♥️

Sad news Bhai. Condolences to you and family. Prayers for the departed soul.

Very nicely written. Sentimental phase of the story.

Bahut badhiya likhte ho bhai. Great description of raw sex between ravi and sunita. Although in real life nobody should switch from backside to front without cleaning first, because really bad and life threatening Urinary Tract Infection will be guaranteed, but in fantasy it is very exciting and...

@Flymovers777 bahut badhiya updates. Loving this phase of the story. Bas aap ye negative log se faltu kyu ulajhte ho. Kutte bhaunkte hain, aadat se majboor. Writing is a very personal thing. Ultimately harek writer apne khud k liye likhta hai. Please continue. Story is genuinely brilliant and...

@Flymovers777 bhai, story bahut sahi jaa rahi hai. Aap ka observation ghazab hai, ki kisi bhi situation me log kis tarah react karte hain. Kis tarah alag alag log ek hi ghatna ko alag tarah se lete hain. Isi liye kahaani kalpana kam sur kisi ki aap beeti jyada lagti hai. Ekdam sajeev chitran...

Love it bhai. Bilkul sahi kaha aapne. Kisi bhi mard ki galati ki saja yahi honi chahiye ki us k ghar parivar ki begunah mahilaon ki izzat utaar lo. Asli mardangi to yahi hai. Mard k gunah ki bharpai begunah aurat par zulm kar k, use prataadna de kar aur sareaam abroo loot kar hi karni chahiye...

Bhai @Flymovers777 ji, really wonderful story. Story kya, novel hai poora. I'm on pg 437, aur bas lagta hai padhta jau. Aap situation bhut achhi create krte ho. Us se bhi zyada aap dialog k master ho ekdam. Characters k beech baatcheet ko is trh likhna ki real aur natural lage, ye bhut mushkil...

Bhai @Flymovers777 ji, really wonderful story. Story kya, novel hai poora. I'm on pg 437, aur bas lagta hai padhta jau. Aap situation bhut achhi create krte ho. Us se bhi zyada aap dialog k master ho ekdam. Characters k beech baatcheet ko is trh likhna ki real aur natural lage, ye bhut mushkil...

_________ मुझे एक बात बहुत अजीब लगती है इस site पर, कि readers story को कम पढते हैं और अपनी राय ज्यादा देते हैं, कि ये करवाओ या फिर ऐसा मत करना etc. अच्छी भली situation बन गई थी गुड्डू वाली पर एक भाई ने stay order ले लिया कि गुड्डू से मत करना। story changed. Same way, पहले लेखक ने प्लान बताया...