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Fantasy Antariksh Ka Badshah Shan

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Awesome update bhaiji.maja agaya
 

Mathur

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nice one bhai ji

aar yan paar hi kar diya SHAN ne well aisa hi socha tha kyunki uske DADA ji naha dho kar piche pad gye they uske aur yeh shi time rha mere khyal se batane ke liye kyunki VILLIAN ki taraf se bande aayi ja rhe hain unko bhi handle karna hai toh yeh shi hai

well dekhte hain NANA ko kaise face karta hai SHAN yeh scene interesting hoga

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...MATHUR
 
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Hayaan

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Pancho ka Asli roop lenw se to A6 ko khabar ho gayi hogi ab to....

Shaan to thaan liya ki ab apne bare mein Poore Parivar ko batayega....?

dekhte hai aage kya hota hai...
waiting for next

Update 13
Shan…HUSNAAAAAAA
Shan ne chilla kar kaha jis se husna hosh mea gai or is ke power wapis is me samma gai
Sare audience shan ko daikne lage
Husna ne b apne pati ko daikha jis ke ankho me usse gussa nazar ayya
Husna kissi se baat kiye bagair stage se uttar gai or rest room ke taraf chale gai
Stage se utarne ke waja se husna disqualify ho gai or survi ko is competition ka winner declare kar diya gaya
Jis se priya or survi dono bht kush thi likin dono ko andaza go gaya tha ke husna ko harana in ke bas ke baat nhi thi agar biswa g inne awaz na dete
Competition khatam hone ke baad shan or uske charo patnian husna ka canteen me wait kar rahe the tori dair baad wo a gai sar neche kiye howe
Shan…kya howa aisa sar neche q kiya howa hai
Husna…ap mujh se naraz hai
Shan…wo q bala
Husna…wo competition me
Shan…us ko rehne do wo to bas tume hosh me lane ke liye tha ta ke kuch galat na kar do me bilkul b naraz nhi ho
Husna(khush hote howe)…ap mujh se naraz nhi hai
Shan…bilkul b nhi
Or husna shan ke gale lag gai
Shan…are husna ye college hai hamara bedroom nhi
Husna sharma ke un se alag ho jati hai acha hai kisi ka dihan nhi tha in pe
Tabhi survi or priya canteen me a gai survi ne mobile kaan se lagaya howa tha
Survi…haan dadu yahi hai
Dada g……….
Survi…g dadu me keh daite ho
Phr phone band kar diya
Shan…han survi kya howa
Survi….wo biswa g dada g ne aj ap ko ap ke pore pariwar ke sath dinner pe invite kiya hai
Shan…aise achanak
Survi…ye to me b nhi janti bas unno ne ap ko batane ko kaha hai
Shan…thek hai hum ponch jai ge and congrats compitition jeetne ke liye
Survi…thanks likin me janti ho agar husna g stage se na utarte to mera jeetna namumkin he tha
Us ke baat pe hum sab muskura diye
Shan…chalo thek hai raat ko mulakat ho ge
Us ke baad priya or survi nikal gai hume b or koi kaam nhi tha is liye hum b nikal gai apne ghar
AB DAIKHTE HAI A6 KO
A6 india ponch gaya tha or shan ko dondne ke liye mara mara phr raha tha abbi thak na to usse koi energy signal milla tha or na khud diya tha
Usse pata tha agar is ke location ka usse pata chal gaya to ye b zinda nhi bache ga
Abbi A6 ik resturant me baitha tha ke tabhi usse bht zyada white energy mehsoos howe us ne jaldi se apni ankhain band ke or us energy ke location ko lock karne ke koshish karne laga
Wo bht kareeb ponch gaya tha ke white energy ka signal milna band ho gaya
Likin A6 ab khush tha itne dino baad usse kuch safalta mile the exact location to pata nhi chal paya likin jitna nazdeek ponch gaya tha ab wo waha apne search shuru kar sakta tha
Or nikal gaya Shan ke sheher ke taraf ik normal insan ke tarah wo A2 ke tarah josh se nhi hosh se kaam lene wala banda tha wo apne ap ko bilkul b zahir nhi karna chahta tha
(Ye husna ke energy the jo gusse ke waja se release ho gai the jo A6 ne mehsoos ke)
BACK TO HERO
Sham thak sab ready ho gai the victor uncle kob shan ne chalne ko manna liya
Isse tarah rossy aunty or mariya ko chalne ko kaha us ke ranio ne to chalna he tha
Sab tayar ho ke haal me ponch gai
Victor…biswa beta mera jana mujhe sahi nhi lag raha
Shan…are uncle unno ne he kaha hai ke pore family ke sath anne ko is liye ap sath chal rahe hai
Phr sab bare gari me nikal gai dada g ke ghar ke taraf
Tori dair me sab waha ponch gai guard ne shan ko daikh ke darwaza khol diya or shan gari le ke sedha andar chala gaya
Jaha in ko welcome karne ke liye pora pariwar kara tha darwaze par
Shan or us ke patnian pehle nikle is ke baad mariya rossy aunty or akhir me victor uncle nikle
Victor uncle ko daikte he sare pariwar walo ke honto ke muskurahat gaib ho gai likin mere waja se wo kuch keh na sake
Dada g…ao biswa beta kaise ho or ye itni kubsurat bachya khon hai
Me ne dada g or dadi ke pair chuwe aj me ne b aar ya paar ka faisla kar liya tha is liye sach sach batane ka faisla kiya
Shan...me sab ka introduction karwa daita ho
Ye hai victor uncle mere mom dad ke friend
Ye hai rossy aunty victor uncle ke wife
Ye hai Mariya in ke beti
Or ye hai Sona,Sital,Swarna,Sonam or Husna ye pancho meri patnian hai
Mera itna kehna tha sare pariwar ke ankhain bahir anne ko howe
Sab…KYAAAAAAA
Phr sab se pehle dada g hosh me aye
Dada g…kya ap sach keh rahe hai beta
Shan…g dada g bala is me me jhoot q bolo ga
Dada g…chalo andar chal ke batain karte hai
Phr hum sab haal me ja ke bait gai
Dadi…beta ap ne panch shadiyan ke hai
Shan…g dadi
Priya…likin college me to ap ne in sab ko as a friend introduce karwaya hai
Shan…haan q k me sab ka markaze nigah nhi banna chahta tha is liye
Abbi thak srf me he bhol raha tha baki sab khamosh the
Vijay or Suraj b ye sun ke hang ho gai the ke meri panch patnian hai
Alok…waise biswa beta himmat hai tumare yaha hum ik nhi sambhal pate tum panch panch ko sambhal rahe ho
Chacha ke is baat pe sab hans pare or chachi unne goriyan dalne lage
Likin mahol me tanao khatam ho gaya tha
Dada…beta tum in ko kaise jante ho
Dada g ka ishara victor uncle ke taraf tha jo khamosh ik taraf bete howe the
Shan…dada g ye mere mom dad ke close friend hai
Dadi…ap ke mommy papa se yaad ayya picle bar hamare baat adhori reh gai the
Shan…haan dadi ik emergency ho gai the is liye jana para
Dadi…chalo aj koi emergency nhi hai aj bata do
Shan…thek hai dadi mere pita ka naam jay or mere mom ka naam renu hai
Itna sunte he sab ke ankain pati ke pati reh gai the me ne apni baat jari rakhi
Shan…mere mom dad ke moot space me black hole ke waja se howe jab ye sab howa us waqt me apni maa ke khokh me tha or pata nhi kaise me us black hole se zinda bach gaya or kisi or greh pe ponch gaya
Meri batain sun kar sab beyaqeeni se mujhe daikhne lage
Ye natural tha q k jo me ne bataya us par koi b asani se vishwas nhi kar sakta
Dada g…ye kaise momkin hai or agar dusre greh pe ponch gai the to tum yaha kaise ponche or agar kisi tarah ponch b gai to tume kaise pata ke ye tumare parents ke friend hai
Shan…meri mom ke waja se un ke yadain mujh me samaye howe hai unne ke waja se mujhe pata chala ke mere zarorat hai yaha pe is liye me yaha chala ayya or victor uncle ka mujhe is liye pata hai q k mere maa ne in ka chahra mere dimagh me daal diya tha ye un ke friend hai ye inno ne he mujhe bataya
Ganga…beta ye kaise bacho wali kahani tum suna rahe ho kya hum tujhe koi anparh gawar lagte hai ke tumari is tarah ke kahai pe vishwas kar le ge
Un ke baat sun ke me hans para
Shan…bilkul b nhi or me ne us din he kaha tha ke ap mere baat pe vishwas nhi kare ge or na mujhe ap ko viswas dilane ke koi zarorat hai ap ne agar manna hai to thek warna na manne kya fark parta hai me apni life g raha ho ap apni me sirf apne pariwar ko ik bar daikna chahta tha that’s it
Mariya…biswa jo keh raha hai wo sab sach hai q ke hum ne wo kuch daikha hai jis par koi b vishwas nhi kar sakta
Victor…me to khud isra ka head ho likin us din jab wo sab daikha to mujhe samjh ayya ke me to abbi kuch b nhi janta
Pehle bhar mariya or victor uncle ne koi baat ke
Dadi…likin beta tumari ye patnian to hamare darti ke hai or kisi se shadi koi ik do din me to nhi ho jati
Dadi ke baat pe me or meri patnian muskura utte
Sona…nhi dadi hum pancho is greh ke nhi hai mere baba shera ko he ye jungle me mile the or mere baba ne he in ke parwarish ke hai hamare pore greh pe in ke prajati ka in ke siwa koi nhi tha or me inne bachpan se he chahti the or mere baba ne meri shadi in se karwa de
Sital…me in ke dosri patni ho me kya ho wo ap ke wehim o guma me b nhi ho sakta likin mujhe jab yudh me haraya to me b inne apna maan beti or inno ne mujhe b patni ka haq or rutba diya
Swarna…me ho swarna desh ke rajkumari or in ke tesri patni jab inno ne sital ko haraya or hamare desh ko sital ke ges o gazab se bachaya tab me b apna dil har beti or in ke samne shadi ka prastaw rakha inno ne mera faisla sona or sital ke hath me rakh diya ke agar wo dono mujhe kabool kare ge tab he ye mujh se shadi kare ge
Sonam…mera naam sonam hai me in sab me sab se choti ho or mera batane laik kuch hai nhi is liye me chup raho ge
Us ke baat pe humare honto pe muskurahat cha gai
Husna…mera naam husna hai in ke pancvi patni or me husna desh ke malika ho hamare desh me sirf ortain rehte hai or mard hamare gulam hote hai hamare desh me jab ghulamo ke sankya kaam howi to hamne swarna desh pe hamla kar diya likin ye khud yudhbomi me apne sainoko ke pass ponche or kaha ke jung se sirf jani nuksan ho ga agar me ne in ko hara diya to jitne sainik in ke peche kare hai wo sab in ke ghulam ho jai ge or agar me haar gai to mujhe in ke ghulmi kobool karne ho ge apne taqat ke gamand me ne ye shart maan le or jab in ke sath yudh shuru howa to mujhe pata chala ke in ke samne to me kuch b nhi us ke baad inno ne mujhe gulam na swekar kar ke apni patni ka darja diya
Shan…or me ho swarna desh ka maharaaj SHAN
Hum sab apni baat pori kar ke khamosh ho gai or mere parowar wale hang ho ke hamari batain sun rahe the wo ab b statue ke tarah baite howe the
Kuch dair baad dada g hosh me aye
Dada g…ye batai jo ap sab ne batai hai ye sunne me zaroor ache lagti hai likin practically impossible hai or ap pancho to hum jaise he dikte hai
Sona…nhi hum aise nhi dikte humare nasal ke log yaha pe nhi pai jate aisa hulya is liye rakha hai ta ke hum ap jaise dikke
Dadi…to phr tum sab dikti kaise ho
Dadi ke kehne ke baad me ne apna hath age kiya or pancho apne asli roop me a gai
Shan…ye hai in ka asli roop or ye wo roop hai jo me ne in ko diya hai
Me ne phr hath gomaya or sab phr se darti wale roop me a gai
Ganga…biswa kya tum jadoo jante ho
Shan…nhi mere pass kuch unnatural powers hai do jin hai jo mere har baat mante hai
Alok…kyaaa jin b hote hai q ke aj thak sirf suna hai
Shan…Tamal Salaka samne ao
Tabhi tamal or salaka waha prakht ho gai
Tamal or Salaka…hukum malik
Shan…ye dono jin hai
Sab ke dono ko daikhte he fat gai
Shan…tum dono jao
Shan ke itna bolte he wo dono phr adrishye ho gai
Us ke baad kisi ke pass kuch bolne ko tha he nhi tab dadi ko khyal ayya
Dadi…jao khana lagao bache bhoke ho ge
Tabhi ghar ke oratain harkat me a gai or khana table par laga diya sab ne mil kar dinner kiya or sab se ijazat le ke nikal gai or wo sab haal me phr baith gai
Dadi…kya abbi jo hum ne suna or daikha wo sach tha
Dada g…me b wahi soch raha ho likin dimagh ye sab tasleem nhi kar raha
Alok…likin pita g apne ankho daikha kaise jutla de
Survi…or wo sital ka kya tha jo us ne kaha ke me jo ho wo hum sab ke wehem o goma me b nhi ho sakta
Suraj…ik baat hai usse hum se kuch chahye to nhi q k us ka apna busniess hai jo aj india me bht ache position me hai
Vijay…exactly us ke bato ko hum jhoot mane ya sach usse kuch farak nhi partha wo ik bht ache zindagi guzar raha hai or us ne ye b kaha ke wo ik bhar bas apne pore pariwar ko daikhna chahta tha
Dada g…agar us ke rago me hamara khoon hai to phr usse hamare sath rehna ho ga likin us ke bato ke poshte kaise ho
Dadi…likin mera dil keh raha hai ke wo sach keh raha hai
Dada g…thek hai daikhte hai
Back to Hero
Victor…beta ye kaha ja rahe ho ye rasta to hamare ghar nhi jata
Shan…janta ho uncle ab apne nana g ke ghar ja raha ho
Rossy…likin un ke ghar q wo to tume jante b nhi
Shan…wo janne mujhe isse liye ja raha ho

AJ KE LIYE ITNA HE DOSTO
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Badshah Khan

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Awesome update bhai
Dada ji ke family ke samne to pora sach rakhdiya shan ne ab dekhte hai nana ke pariwar ke samne kaise rakhta hai
A6 kaha tak pata laga pata hai shan ke bare mai
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