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AP 316 seriously man i just love you aur haan main vaisa ladka nhi hoon BC
well apun ek science student hai toh apne ko yeh exam vali bakchodi kaafi shi lagti hai exam pressure and all sala dusron ke exams hain aur yeh baat feel karke khushi bahut hoti hai BC
Rbcl.007 bhai aapne toh kuch chodha hi na hai mere review ke liye kyunki aapne ekdum mast vale story ke point aur prediction ko highlight kiya hai well apun dekhta hai phir bhi kya bacha hai apne liye
RJ bhi chahta hai ki AP apna pura potential use kare usse rokne mai kyunki vo murder maje ke liye karta hai aur game khelne ke liye aur iss time AP ke sath game khelne ka chance RJ jaisa villian nhi chodh skta
well iss kidnapping case ke highlight hone ke mujhe 2 reason najar aa rahen hain
1. kisi bade bande ka kidnap hua hai jiss se media aayi (jaisa pehle hi ek reader bhai ne bola)
2. RJ ne kidnap krva kar koi chap chodhi hai tanki AP involve ho halanki 1st vala jyada set hai
story ka awesome part shuru ho gya hai thrill, action, adventure, suspense yeh sab RJ ki aane ki khabar se hi pridict kiye ja skte hain (agar sach mai RJ involve hai toh as RJ apna level na giraya aisa kich karke)
well mja aane vala hai BC
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...MATHUR
well apun ek science student hai toh apne ko yeh exam vali bakchodi kaafi shi lagti hai exam pressure and all sala dusron ke exams hain aur yeh baat feel karke khushi bahut hoti hai BC
Rbcl.007 bhai aapne toh kuch chodha hi na hai mere review ke liye kyunki aapne ekdum mast vale story ke point aur prediction ko highlight kiya hai well apun dekhta hai phir bhi kya bacha hai apne liye
RJ bhi chahta hai ki AP apna pura potential use kare usse rokne mai kyunki vo murder maje ke liye karta hai aur game khelne ke liye aur iss time AP ke sath game khelne ka chance RJ jaisa villian nhi chodh skta
well iss kidnapping case ke highlight hone ke mujhe 2 reason najar aa rahen hain
1. kisi bade bande ka kidnap hua hai jiss se media aayi (jaisa pehle hi ek reader bhai ne bola)
2. RJ ne kidnap krva kar koi chap chodhi hai tanki AP involve ho halanki 1st vala jyada set hai
story ka awesome part shuru ho gya hai thrill, action, adventure, suspense yeh sab RJ ki aane ki khabar se hi pridict kiye ja skte hain (agar sach mai RJ involve hai toh as RJ apna level na giraya aisa kich karke)
well mja aane vala hai BC
KEEP WRITING
KEEP UPDATING
YOUR REGULAR READER
...MATHUR
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Hello, Ladies 
& Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.
Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.
Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.
Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.
Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Siraj Patel
& Gentleman, We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.
Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.
Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.
Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.
Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Siraj Patel
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AP 316 BHAI APUN NE PURA STORY PADALA AB TAK KA MEN
SERIOUSLY YOU JUST AWESOME ROCKING BHIDU
APUN TO JABRA FAN HO GAYA BHAI
KYA KAMAL KI STORY LEKHTE HO BHAI
LAGE RAHO
APUN KO NEXT UDATE KA BE SABRI SE INTEZAR HAI AP BHAI..
SERIOUSLY YOU JUST AWESOME ROCKING BHIDU
APUN TO JABRA FAN HO GAYA BHAI
KYA KAMAL KI STORY LEKHTE HO BHAI
LAGE RAHO
APUN KO NEXT UDATE KA BE SABRI SE INTEZAR HAI AP BHAI..
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Chinta naa Karo bhai kuch skip naa hogaor John k baad half story complete hogi or bhi baaki hai isliye no problem
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