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Shivay chauhan

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Char din yun hi beet jate hai in dino me nisha roz shiva se milne aati thi aur veenu use dekh kar jal bhun jati thi magar usne kuch kaha nahi kyuki shiva use hidayat de chuka tha aise hi ek din jab sabhi log shiva ke ward me baithe hue the aaj shiva discharge hone wala tha toh charu shiva se kahti hai .

Charu – shiva kyu na hum log thoda outing kar len .

Shiva uski taraf ajeeb nazron se dekhta hai aur kahta hai

Shiva – tu pagal hai kya .

Aslam – idea bura nahi hai .

Aziz – han toh phir kyu na camping ki jaye .

Shiva – tum log pagal ho gye ho kya abhi bahut se kaam hai jo baki hai aur jaroori bhi koi kahin nahi jayega sab apne apne kaam pe dhyan do.

Tabhi commissioner krishmurti ward me dakhil hote hai unke saath arohi bhi thi .

Commissioner krishmurti – kya baat hai kis baat pe bahas ho rahi hai .

Veenu – dekhiye na uncle hum log outing pe jana chahte hai magar shiva maan hi nahi raha .

Veenu ne kisi masoom bacche ki tarah commissioner krishmurti se shikayat ki

Commissioner krishmurti – mai bhi yahi kahne wala tha ki ye sab toh hota rahega agar kuch pal apni zindagi bhi ji lo .

Commissioner krishmurti ne bhi samarthan dete hue kah .

Arohi – bilkul sir .

Shiva – dekhiye aap chahe jo kahe magr mai kahin nahi jane wala

Shiva ne sapat laheje me apna faisla suna diya ab koi kuch nahi kar sakta tabhi charu nisha ko ishara karti hai toh nisha shiva se kahti hai .

Nisha – chalo na please .

Nisha ne bhi badi ada aur masoomiyat se kaha shiva uski taraf ghoor ke dekhta hai aur kuch der baad kahta hai .

Shiva – theek hai magar sirf 2 din .

Sabhi log khush ho jate hai aur plannig karne lagte hai wahi shiva kinhi gahre khyalon me kho jata hai uske dimaag me kuch chal raha tha kya ye pata nahi magar uske han kahne ki koi wajah jaroor thi .

Wahi dusri taraf rahman apne boss ke samne pareshan khada tha aur ho bhi kyu na uske customers ko delivery jo time pe nahi mil paa rahi thi wo sab rahman ko phone kar kar ke dhnka rahe the rahman ka boss kuch der sochta hai aur kahta hai.

Boss – ek kaam karo market me khabar uda do ki mai 2 din baad yahan aa raha hun aur mera route bhi bata dena .

Rahman – usse kya hoga .

Rahman ka Boss muskurata hai aur kahta hai .

Boss – tum sawal bahut karte ho jo hoga wo samne ayega

Idhar sabhi log camping ki taiyariyon me lage hue sara saman hospital me hi ikattha ho gya tha ek mini bus bhi book ho gyi thi kyuki log jyada tha trip ke liye nisha aur nidhi ne bhi apne ghar se permission le li thi unhone rohan aur anjali ko bhi bula liya tha arohi bhi saath me jaa rahi thi kyu ye pata nahi sabhi log bilkul taiyar jagah ka selection aziz ne kiya tha kyuki use in sab bahut experience hai jab sab kuch taiyar ho jata hai toh deva shiva ke ward me aata hai aur kahta hai .

Deva – shiva sab log ready hai .

Shiva deva ki taraf dekhta hai aur kahta.

Shiva – tumhe kuch ajeeb nahi lag raha ki arohi bhi humare saath ja rahi hai .

Deva – nahi kyu …….. ek minute kahin tumhe uspe shak toh nahi ho raha .

Shiva – nahi magar kuch theek bhi nahi lag raha .

Deva – shiva aaj pahli baar tumhare shabdon ek fikr dekh raha hun

Shiva – nahi fikr nahi bas kuch theek nahi lag raha .

Deva – aisa kuch nahi tu bekar tension le raha hai .

Shiva – han tum theek kah rahe hi chalo chalte hai

Shiva deva je saath ward se nikal jata hai hospital ke bahar ek traveler bus khadi thi shiva bus me dakhil ho jata hai sabhi log baith chuke sari seats full thi veenu aur lucky saath me baithe hue the shiva kuch nahi bolta aur driving seat taraf badh jata hai driving seat par pahle se hi aziz baitha hua shiva aziz se kahta hai .

Shiva – utho mai drive karunga .

Aziz – lekin tumhe rasta nahi pata hoga .

Shiva aziz ki taraf ghoor ke dekhta hai toh aziz ghabra ke kahta .

Aziz – han han mai tumhe batata jaunga

Kah wo uth jata hai aur bagal wali seat pe baith jata shiva driving seat pe baith jata hai aur safar shuru ho jata hai sabhi log haste khelte masti karte hue safar ka maza le rahe the bas shiva hi khamoshi se driving kar raha tha kareeb 6 ghante ke baad bus rukti hai aziz bolta hai .

Aziz – chalo sabhi log utro .

Nidhi – hum pahunch gye kya .

Aziz – nahi yaha se 15 kilomitar paidal chalna hai .

Kah kar aziz utar jata hai uske peeche sabhi log utar jate hai sabhi ladke bus se saman utar lete hai aur nikal padte hai sabse aage aziz chal raha tha uske peeche shiva phir surya aur baki log kuch door chalne ke baad deva shiva se kahta hai .

Deva – kuch ruk ke aram kar lo .

Shiva – kyun .

Shiva ne kuch ajeeb laheje me kaha.

Deva – nahi tum abhi abhi hospital se aye ho na toh ho sakta hai thakaan ho gai .

Shiva – tum pagal toh nahi ho gye .

Aziz – lagta toh aisa hi hai .

Wahi peeche charu nisha ke saath chal rahi thi charu nisha se kahti hai.

Charu – thanks yar tumne ise mana liya warna ye kabhi nahi manta .

Nisha – isme thanks ki kya baat hai mai toh khud chahti thi ki shiva ko kuch dino araam mile aisi zindgi se jisme uski jaan khatre me hi rahti ho .

Tabhi veenu jo un dono se kuch kadam ki doori pe rhi unke paas aake kahti hai.

Veenu – tumhe badi fikr hai shiva .

Veenu ne bade kadwe aur taziya laheje me kaha .

Nisha – kyu na ho akhir pyar hai mera .

Nisha ne muskurate hue jawab diya jisse veenu kuch aur khisiya gai
Wo kuch kahne hi wali thi ki aslam bol pada .

Aslam – kaash meri bhi koi fikr karta .

Toh saath me chal rahi tamanna kahti .

Tamanna – teri fikr karne wala toh koi nahi han foonkne wale hum sab hai .

Tabhi nidhi tez awaz me kahti hai

Nidhi – aur kitni door hai yaar chalte chalte pair dard karne lage .

Toh peeche chal raha surya kahta .

Surya – koi baat pair hi toh dard kar rahe hai tum aisa karo haath ke bal chalo .

Surya ki baat pe sabhi hasne lagte hai tabhi aziz bolta hai .

Aziz – hum pahuch gye




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Samne ka nazara dek kar sabhi ke muh khule ke khule rah jate hai charo taraf hariyali aur mahkate hue phool aur samne 20 feet ki doori pe pahadon se girta hua jharna chidiyon ki manmohak chahchahat mahaul ko aur bhi khoobsurat bana raha tha sabhi log kafi khush the siway shiva ke matlb wo na khush tha aur na hi dukhi wi toh jaisa hamesha rahta hai waisa hi tha wo log hospital se 2 baje nikale the aur ab 5.30 bah rahe the andhera ho raha tha sabhi jyada der na karte hue sabhi apne apne kaam me lag gye sare ladke tent lagane lage ladkiyan unki madad karne lagti hai wahi shiva khamosh jharne ki taraf dekhta hai aur kuch der baad wapas ata hai aur apne bag se wahi wajan dar kulhadi nikalta hai aur deva se kahta .

Shiva – mai ladkiyan lene jungle me ja raha hun .

Kah kar wo jane lagta hai toh nisha use peeche se awaaz deti hai toh shiva ruk jata hai nisha uske paas aati gai aur kahti hai .

Nisha – mai bhi tumhare saath chalungi .

Shiva uski taraf dekhta wahi veenu ne jaise hi nisha ki baat suni uske kaan khade ho gye wo ab shiva ka intzaar kar rahi thi shiva bolta hai .

Shiva – theek hai .

Aur aage Badh jata hai nisha veenu ki taraf dekh kar ek kutil muskan use paas karti hai aur shiva ke peeche peeche chhup jate hai


Veenu jal bhun ke raakh ho jati hai shiva aur nisha jungal me kafi andar aa chuke the toh nisha kahti hai.

Nisha - shiva ye veenu ki problem kya hai .

Shiva apni jeb se cigar nikal kar jalata hai aur kahta hai .

Shiva – kyu kya hua .

Nisha – jab bhi mai tum se baat karti hun ya paas aati toh mujhe aise dekhti hai ki jaise kha jayegi .

Nisha ne banawati gusse se kaha .

Shiva - tum uspe dhyan mat do .

Nisha – dhyan toh sirf tumpe hi rahta hai darling .

Nisha ne bade hi shararti laheje me kaha magar shiva ne koi pratikriya nahi di achanak shiva nisha ka haath pakad kar use peeche kheechta hai nisha shiva ki is harkat pe chauk jati hai nisha kuch bolne ko hoti hai toh shiva use chup rahne ja ishara krta hai aur neeche dekhne ko kahta hai jab nisha neeche dekhti hai toh use kuch nahi dikhta wo phir shiva ki taraf sawaliyan nazron se dekhti hai toh shiva Fusfusa ke kahta haj .

Shiva – dhyan se dekho .

Jab nisha dubara dhyan se dekhti hai toh use ek bahut hi maheen taar dikhai deta hai wo shiva se fusfusa ke Kahti hai .

Nisha – ye kya hai .

Shiva – ye ek trap wire hai yahan kisi ne jaal bicchhaya hai .

Nisha – jal bicchhaya hai magar kyu .

Shiva ye bhi pata chal jayega .

Kah kar shiva ped ki ek 4 feet lambi tahni todta hai lambiaur nisha se kahta hai .

Shiva – peeche hato .

Nisha peeche hat jati hai uske hatte hi shiva wo us trap wire pe rakh ke daba deta hai jaise hi shiva tahni dabata hai us wire ke neeche se ek jaal tezi se bahar aa jata hai ye sab bas kuch seconds me hi hua tha nisha ye sab dekh kar chauk jati hai magar shiva bilkul khamosh tha nisha shiva ke paas jati hai aur kahti hai.

Nisha – shiva ye kya hai .

Shiva- kisi janwar pakadne ke liye yahan jaal bicchhaya hai matalb yahan koi aur bhi hai .

Nisha – kaun

Shiva us jaal ka muaina karta hai toh use kuch aisa nazar ata hai jo use use hairaan kar deta hai .

Shiva – sawal ye nahi ki kaun hai sawal ye hai ki kaise hai .

Nisha – matlb .

Shiva – jab rangers hunting group me tha tab hum log bhi yahi jaal istemaal karye the ye best quality hai aur ye jaal kisi dusre je paas nahi ho skta kyuki ye hum log khud banate the .

Nisha – iska matlb .

Shiva – iska matlb ye hai ki us group ka koi aur member bhi zinda hai .

Nisha – ye kaise ho sakta hai tum toh bol rahe the ki rajendra pawar ne tumahare sare sathiyon ko marwa diya tha toh phir koi zinda kaise bach sakta hai .

Shiva – yahi toh mai bhi soch raha hu.

Tabhi shiva ko ek awaz sunai deti hai shiva nisha se chup rahne ka ishara karta hai aur ahat ki taraf badhta hai wo kuch aage badha hi tha ki achanak uspe koi bayin or se humla kar deta hai shiva kuch door pe girta hai aur turant khud ko sambhale leta hai jisneuske upar humla kiya tha uska chahra kapde se dhaka hua tha magar uski ankhen shiva ko kuch pahchani si lagti hai magar wo shaks bina waqt gawaye shiva pe phir se war karta magar is bar shiva taiyar tha wo turant iske war se bach jata hai phir wo shaks dubara shiva pe war karta hai shiva phir apni jagah se thoda hat jata hai isse wo shaks gusse me aa jata magar shiva is waqt kuch aur hi soch raha tha na jane kyu uske war karne ka tareeqa shiva ko kuch jana pahchana lag raha tha jaise wo pahle bhi is shaks se lad chuka ho aur sabse badi uski ankhen wo shaks shiva pe phir war karta hai is bar uska haath pakad leta hai aur furti se ek ghusa uske pet pe karta hai magar wo shaks turant apne dusre hath se shiva ke war ko block kar deta hai jisse shiva hairan ho jata magar tabhi wo shaks apne pair se shiva ke pair pe war karta hai shiva furti se apna pair hata leta hai ab chaukne ki bari us shaks ki thi wo apni hairani se wapas aya hi tha ki shiva apna sar uske wo zameen pe gir jata hai magar turant uth ke khada ho jata hai aur shiva gaur se dekhne lagta hai shiva bhi use usi nazar se dekhta hai phir kuch der baad wo kahta hai .

Shaks – kaun ho tum .

Usne badi hi kroorata se kaha

Shiva – yahi mai bhi janna chahta hun .

Shiva ne bhi usi andaz me jawab diya wo shaks shiva ki awaz pachan jata hai aur kahta hai .

Shaks – yakeen nahi hota tum shiva ho tum zinda kaise mujhe pahchana .

Wo shaks kah kar apne chahre se kapda hata deta hai shiva bhi use pahchan jata hai

Shiva – David tum zinda ho .

David shiva ki daud kar ata hai aur uske gale mil jata hai shiva bhi use seene se laga leta hai aisa lag raha tha ramayan ka bharat milaap ka scene chal raha ho phir david shiva se alag hota hai aur kahta hai .

David – maine toh suna tha ki mar chuke ho toh phir tum zinda kaise .

David ne hairani aur khushi se pahucha

Shiva – lambi kahani .

Shiva ne bilkul sapat aur sard laheje me jawab diya jisse david hasta hai aur kahta .

David – chahe kuch bhi badal jaye magar shiva nahi badal sakta .




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