wow! anther 5 stars update
invisible New Member 92 57 33 Sep 21, 2019 #314 Great story! Great theme! great writing! and great plot.
F Fallon Member 145 94 43 Sep 22, 2019 #316 Ekdom lajawab kahaani! Bahut badhiya vichaar ko se aap is kahaani likha, bahut khoob.
J JACK Member 191 97 43 Sep 22, 2019 #319 Ekdom lajawab kahaani! Bahut hi majedar aur masaladar theme