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Notebook

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So beautiful update....
Sirf pyar se bhara hua....
Jiya ki toh pyar mein haal hi behaal hai.....
Lekin last mein atom bomb phod diya... :D
:thanks: for the update
Pyar bhi hoga aur bomb bhi asardar hoga :D . Kitne ajib halat ho gaye hain na Jiya ke liye . Kaise react karegi wo bhai ? Any guess ? Thanks for reading :yo:
 
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Mbindas

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Bhai kya kahu ab ham sirf ek reader hai zyada gor se update nahi dekhte hai bhai par bohot hi romantic or last me bomber update diya hai.
 

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Bahot romantic update hai bhai. Jiss tarike se aap ne Jiya ki ghabrahat aur usski sharm o hayaa ko bayaan kiya hai wo mujhe bahot passand aya. Khaas kar do baar aap ne usski badalte rangat ka jiss tarah zikr kiya wo taarife kaabil hai.
Tarun aur Jiya ke beech ka chota sa vaartaalaab bhi kaafi romantic laga par turant kabaab mein haddi aakar ek bomb ki tarah girr pada to ab zaahir hai ke Jiya kuch aur hi samjhegi.
Superb update.
Ziada delay mat marna update dene mein varna readers ko follow karne ki jo maza ata hai nah wo tut jata hai, feeka par jata hai, peeche ke update ko wapas check karna padta hai k kia hua tha iss se pehle. Eisi kahani ko jald se jald update karna chahiye hota hai.
Thanks and keep going :thumbup:

Bhai aap writer kamal ke ho or isme koi shaq nahi par aap dusre writers ke update par bhi bohot hi gaur se read karte ho or unhone jo feelings update me dali hai use bhi kafi gaur se dekhte ho bhai. Manna padega :adore::adore:
 

Aakash.

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It is not so easy to understand love and the same is happening with Jiya, she does not understand anything but upon seeing Jiya it seems that she is very happy to see Tarun. Love has begun and who is that clueless girl. Left the story in suspense again today.
Today's update was very good, you are writing very well, now let's see what happens next. Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...:heart:


Notebook bro, first tell us that you post an update so late, we all wait impatiently and get upset when the update doesn't come...
 
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Casinar

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Bhai aap writer kamal ke ho or isme koi shaq nahi par aap dusre writers ke update par bhi bohot hi gaur se read karte ho or unhone jo feelings update me dali hai use bhi kafi gaur se dekhte ho bhai. Manna padega :adore::adore:

shukriya Bindas bhai ke aap ko mera gehraayi se padhna passand aya :D

Veise kehta chalun ke mujhe aap ki signature wali baat bahut passand aayi phoolon aur mali wale :D
 
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shukriya Bindas bhai ke aap ko mera gehraayi se padhna passand aya :D

Veise kehta chalun ke mujhe aap ki signature wali baat bahut passand aayi phoolon aur mali wale :D

Bohot bohot shukriya bhai jo aapko hamara signature pasand aaya.
 

Notebook

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Bahot romantic update hai bhai. Jiss tarike se aap ne Jiya ki ghabrahat aur usski sharm o hayaa ko bayaan kiya hai wo mujhe bahot passand aya. Khaas kar do baar aap ne usski badalte rangat ka jiss tarah zikr kiya wo taarife kaabil hai.
Tarun aur Jiya ke beech ka chota sa vaartaalaab bhi kaafi romantic laga par turant kabaab mein haddi aakar ek bomb ki tarah girr pada to ab zaahir hai ke Jiya kuch aur hi samjhegi.
Superb update.
Ziada delay mat karna update dene mein varna readers ko follow karne ki jo maza ata hai nah wo tut jata hai, feeka par jata hai, peeche ke update ko wapas check karna padta hai k kia hua tha iss se pehle. Eisi kahani ko jald se jald update karna chahiye hota hai.
Thanks and keep going :thumbup:
Update pasand karne ke liye shukriya bhai , poori koshish rahegi ki abb gap na ho baki aap to jante hi hain jimmedariyon ka bojh :( khair agla update sham tak . Thanks for reading bhai :yo:
 
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Last wali ladki ne aakar toh dhamaal hi macha diya, hamesa kuch na kuch twist rahta hi hai aapke update me, jabardast pyar bhari update
Thanks for reading bhai :yo:
Last update wali ladki ka bomb beasar hoga agar dono ke darmiyan yakeen hoga . Khair filhal to apni relationship ke liye dono hi soch rahe hain ki " ye ishq to nahi hai "
 
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