Tum toh Bhai dil par le gaye aur rahi baat galti ki toh woh aapko story padhkar nazar aa hi jaati hai , kai baar logical aur sensible bilkul nahin lagti ..... Par phir bhi phadtey hain ki next update mei kya hoga ....
Mein khud kareeb 10 saal se story reader hoon .... Meine aachey badey se badey forum par story padhi hai aur unko bandh hotey bhi dekha hai .... Par story agar koi bhi likhta hai toh uska apna view ya attitude hota hai aur doosra koi tokey to kabhi aacha nahi lagta ..... Par meine kayi story sirf 2 page ki padhi woh aachi lagi aur kabhi 40 page ki bhi nahi acchi lagi ....
Rahi baat correction ki pichley update ki galtiyan toh bhai agla update likhna muskil ho jaata ....
Last mei apni story ke promotion ki baat karta hun ..... Mein saand story poori 3 din mei padh daali kaisey ??? .... story mei mujhey bhi ek do loophole lagey par story bahot hi jabardast and energetic hai ..... Meri story toh abhi shuru hi huyi hai ..... Bhai abhi toh mein shuru bhi nahi hua ..... aap jaroor padhna agar aachi na bhi lagey ....
Par promotion mei kya dikkat hai jab Bhutan(dmahi) India(Anand) ko promote karta hai toh mein bhi kar sakta hun...
Bhai modiji jaa rahey hai Trump ko promote karney????
Sorry if I offend you please accept my sincere apologies ...
read my latest update 19 part 3 (A) and (B)...
Angrakshak Parvivar Ka .........MAHI
https://xforum.live/threads/incest-angrakshak-parvivar-ka-mahi.3758/page-89
Dil pe nahi lunga to kya pagle tune kaha hi tha aisa ki tum acchi likh sakte ho...
Mai kisi bhi writer ko discourage nhi karta...
xb aur xforum pe bhi dekh lo...
Jada dar mere yaha pe jhagde isi wajah se hote hi ki koi writer ki tang khiche ya koi use discourage kare...
Mai uska jawab ussi lang mai deta hun...
Galti nikalna ya point nikalane ka matlab discourage karna kabhi nhi hota...
Aur rahi baat story padhane ki to bhi padh lenge pahle kucch hadh tak complte bhi to karo...