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Mat padho bhaiya? Koi jabardasti hai Kya?

This deserves to be continued. Too good.

Chubhne wali baat mat likho Bhai. Update aa jayega. Dheeraj rakhiye.

Aapne kitni story likhi aaj tak? Is tarah ka comment karna zaroori hai?

Good progress. Looking forward to next update full night suhagrat of shabu darling. Kaka to rond daalega apni main randi ko! 😁♥️

Aapke passion aur deep engagement with the story ki mai respect karta hu sir. It is such a wonderful character study, ek ek kirdar apni chhaap chhod jata hai. Koi Deepa ka fan, koi ravi ka, koi ravi k birah me jalti anju ka. Stay engaged and enjoy the ride. We are all co-passengers

Been there, done that. 😁

Sahi hai, par kuchh to Kam Umar ki immaturity hai, aur kuchh ye bhi ki jitni aurten us ki life me Hain wo sabhi kisi na kisi air se bewafai Kar k Ravi se chudwa leti Hain. Phir Deepika ka khud ka past Ravi ko disturb karta hai, kyuki use pata hai Deepika ka Gupta chapter, aur shuru me ajnbi k...

Killer story boss!!

Vidya is upanyas ka ek alag hi anokha character hai. Mast gadrayi hui hastini kaya, hawas se bhari, ek number tharki bina kisi lihaaj k. Sharm aur jhijhak, bilkul bhi nahi. Jo chahiye wo chahiye, bas. Chudasi full, aur Jawan lund ki shaukeen. Devar ho ya naukar ya phir bhanja, mauka nahi...

Deepika me jo kashish aap ne create ki hai, wo Kahani me sabhi aur aurato par bhari padti hai, jab ki sab ek se ek dilfareb sundariyaan hain. The dialog is so natural and specially the nuance between how women and men communicate. Just masterful ♥️👏👏👏

Boss update Bhai!!! Relatability ke master ho aap.

@Flymovers777 happy new year bhai. I feel your challenge. The story seems to be in a rut, where ravi can keep randomly banging the different women in his orbit, but there is no scope for any meaningful long term relationship because he is just too young. In the current format and theme story can...

Good start. Suggest using simpler words suited to a man with limited education. Great atmosphere building. Looking forward to the next chapters

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