Recent content by TheInvincible

Hi @gamblerboy First of all i appreciate your efforts in creating this wonderful story. But please dont mind as i will cut the crap and directly come to the point. You have given this story theme as adultery which will never be possible wrt directness as compared to other stories. The reason is...

Hehe!!!! I cant take the names unfortunately as it will against the policy. 😄 And thanks for ur confirmation that u wont leave this story in middle.

And also my feedback given at that tument i just want people to by happy and don’t seen

@RagVi Singh First of all thanks for tyring to write a wonderful story, it reslly means a lot for us us as readers. But i just want to highlight my concern on one one thing. I am afraid that this wonderful story which has a lot of options to continue may move to an incomplete story ad we as a...

Bhai spoiler ka besabri intezaar rahega.. Ummid hai esha n dipu k beech ki nazdikiyaan vistaar se likhi jayengi taaki parhne me maza aaye. Baaki as usual dhaasu update diya h aapne….

Bahot hi shaandaar update bhai..

Let the writer take their own time to write story. They write stories for us readers so please support them.

Bhai sorry to ask u in this thread. Is pyaar ko kya naam du wali story q close kar di aapne?? Itna accha update aa ra tha us story pe. 😑

Bhot hi lajawab update bhai. 😍

Awesome update bhai. Maza aa gaya

@bhabhi69 please give update. Atleast 2 updates in a week. Kahani bhot slow ho gayi h.

Nice n amazing update @ARTICUNO bhai. Waise Esha ka v koi scene daliye hero k saath agar chances ho sakte hai toh

@bhabhi69 Aaj update aane k chances h kya?? It's 3rd day today.

Awesome update bro. Madam k dusri chudai v behoshi ho gayi. Bas ab dekhna h k madam ko jab hosh aayega toh unka kya reaction hoga. Aur intezaar rahega jab madam k hosh me chudai hogi aur jab unka orgasm hoga. Avi tak dono chudai me unka orgasm ni hua h. Kaafi strong lagti h madam toh. 😄

Bro 3am ka jo time h wo kal raat 10 baje se likha hua h. N what I added in comment was my personal feeling abt the way this story is currently going. Also whatever I told writer was with due respect. Agar aapko v apni feeling share karni h is story k bare me toh aap writer to bol sakte ho.