Recent content by Sanju Bhaiya

The Mindlink Experiment

Thanks @Adirshi for praising my story

Thanks @Adirshi bro

Thanks @SANJU ( V. R. ) bhai for reading my story and liking it

Thanks @Mahi Maurya ji kahaani ko pasand karne ke liye aur uspar apna sankshep me review dene ke liye

Thanks Samar bhai Characters zyada rakhne ka mera motive tha taaki end tak suspense bana rahe ki aakhir murder kisne kiya Shaayad sabhi victim characters ke naam nahi bataane chahiye the mujhe. Us se shaayad story itni confusing nahi hoti. Khair koi nahi. Thanks ki aapne story ko padha aur use...

Thanks @Mak for liking the thriller! I see your point about some parts being a bit confusing. I'll keep that in mind. I'm really happy you think the story is great overall. Best of luck to you too!

Thanks @Mak kahaani padhne ke liye aur taareef ke liye Baaki sab se bhi guzaarish hai ki kahaani ko padhe aur reviews de

Thanks for the review bro! I added lots of characters on purpose to keep readers guessing until the end, making sure the story's title makes sense. Thanks for enjoying the suspense, and I really appreciate the 8/10!

Hi guyz Kuch reasons ki wajah se mai is kahaani ko yahaan poora nahi kar paaya Maine is kahaani ko recreate karke 1 short story likhi hai jo maine USC 24 ke entry thread me post kardi hai Ye hai uska link Post in thread '★☆★ XForum | Ultimate Story Contest 2024 ~ Entry Thread ★☆★'...

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Thanks parkas bhai

Update post kar diya hai guyz Padhiye aur badiya reviews dijiye

UPDATE - 6 Sanjay(mann me): kuch der pehle hi maine maama ka offer thukraaya tha lekin fir mujhe kya ho gaya. Wahaan khada hokar maami ko dekhkar mai kyon muthiya raha tha. Kahin maine offer thukra ke galti to nahi kar di. Nahi-nahi koi galti nahi ki hai maine. Sanju beta, ye sab chhod aur...

Paanchwaa update bhi post kar diya hai guyz Padhiye aur pratikriya dijiye Pichle kuch din se dekh raha hoon ki padh bahot log rahe hai lekin comment koi nahi kar raha Aisa mat kariye guyz Please silent banke mat rahiye Aapke comments hi mujhe likhne ki prerna dete hain