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Thanks Samar bhai
Characters zyada rakhne ka mera motive tha taaki end tak suspense bana rahe ki aakhir murder kisne kiya
Shaayad sabhi victim characters ke naam nahi bataane chahiye the mujhe. Us se shaayad story itni confusing nahi hoti.
Khair koi nahi.
Thanks ki aapne story ko padha aur use...
Thanks @Mak for liking the thriller! I see your point about some parts being a bit confusing. I'll keep that in mind. I'm really happy you think the story is great overall.
Best of luck to you too!
Thanks for the review bro!
I added lots of characters on purpose to keep readers guessing until the end, making sure the story's title makes sense.
Thanks for enjoying the suspense, and I really appreciate the 8/10!
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Kuch reasons ki wajah se mai is kahaani ko yahaan poora nahi kar paaya
Maine is kahaani ko recreate karke 1 short story likhi hai jo maine USC 24 ke entry thread me post kardi hai
Ye hai uska link
Post in thread '★☆★ XForum | Ultimate Story Contest 2024 ~ Entry Thread ★☆★'...
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