Recent content by Mr-Z

And obviously who is Pari is the biggest dhamaka in the next updates seems like it will be a huge kaboom. May be with the takeover of Veers body ab shayad kuch system ki hakeekat b khulay kay system actually hay kya.

Simply marvellous, and last update kay end main I was thinking kay kameena mara gaya. Wow kya amazing update di hay bahi. Last update main aik bat meray mind main a rahi thi kay may b wo 2nd system holder Jaw long ka slave ho jisay Black magic ya Dark card say slave banaya ho Jaw long nay. But...

Itnay saray SYSTEM HOLDERS wowwwww. Maza a gaya bhai simply marvellous. Jaw long kay marnay pa who will get the rewards veer or Avaa or they will share the rewards same like when crimson died.

Bhai simply marvellous. I had goosebumps while reading. Kamal bhai kamal.

Asad bhai phr say dhoka 😂😂😂😂

Writer mahoday story didi ki chinta say shuru hoe thi or ab to readers chinta main par gaey hain Jay ho kya raha hay 😂😂😂😂. Plz mind nahi karna just joke tha plz continue.

Amazing update bro lagta hay system k features Jo bhalay hi kch sec k liay unlock howay k bad purana Aarav ki jhalak b nazar ae gi. Waiting for the next update.

Ye to galat hay pehlay wali stories ki tarah is story pa b bs kch updates day k gaeb. Story k shuru main to bht bari bari batain ki aesa nhi hoga ye wali poori hogi.

Zabardast bht hi ala maza a gaya. Or Kya zabardast entry dali gay shadow ki.

Madarchod vansh isi monter ka Lund iski but bund main dal do gando maderchod.

Hero to bht fattu hay. Par mazay ki story hay waiting for the twist

Us k bad dharam ki awaz ae or Manish bed say nechay gir gaya or Manish nend say jag gaya kahani khatam

Zabardast update. Writer bhai ab apnay hero ki real family ki traf bi story ka rukh karo thora us traf story thora slow hay.

Yar bhai plz bura nhi manna abhi tak is story main kch b nahi howa siwaey bakchodi k idr gaya udr gaya gari main gaya Idr ghooma udr ghooma or update khatam.