Recent content by Devilakky

Bhai words hi ni chhodte ho mind m update k level ko define krne k liye... Completely insane! Aur apna b level ni h apke update p review dene ka...

Writer ab is forum p ni h.... Maybe 1 saal pehle chhod k chale gye forum

Dear writer, M ek silent reader hu achi story p koi review ni de pata qki muje story writing ka 'W' b ni ata to ap jese bde aur kushal lekhak ki rachna k liye mera koi b tippani krna muje uchit ni lgta, M fir b yhi kahunga k apki y story bht hi achi h, mene kayi chinese donghua dkhi h y wali b...

Dear Harry Sir, Fr s apki story pr akar bht acha lga...but plz ap bura na maniye review na dene ka, as a reader hmesha update ki bhookh bdti hi rhti h..but jb update late ate h to gussa b ata h qki kirdar b tb tk dimag s nikalne lgte h so ek trh s kahe k interest loose hone lgta h story m but...

Dear VJ sir, M apki rachna ka silent reader hu qki muje review dena ni ata ya y kahu k ap jese lekhak ki lekhni pr mere jese kisi ka (jise story writing ka na to S ka pta h na hi W ka) koi tippani krna justify ni h... But is story k end pdne k bd ruka hi ni jara h kuch bolne s..itna kahunga k...

Dear writer, Starting m to lga k ultron agya jarvis ko marne but esa hua ni apne acha scene dikhaya h yaha pr, aur m y puchna chata hu k y story jo apne start ki h y last story k kitne time bad s shuru hoti h jese apne last story dil dosti revenge k 5 saal bad ka period dikhaya h jisme bache hue...

Dear writer, Bht hi mst story likhi h apne aur kal k marne wale episode s ab tk to ek dum khtarnak wala thrill bna raha aur jis tarike s apne senoy ka character dikhaya wo to alag hi level ta mtlb kayi bar uske character k samne hero aur sare positive character bewkuf lg rahe te bole to ek dum...

Dear Writer, Ab tk ki story ka jawab ni h bht hi mst h 3 din s day night read krra hu lockdown ki wjh s phle Dil dosti revenge aur ab y wali story...ATI UTTAM, PARAM ANAND KI PRAPTI HO RAHI H, Bs kayi jgh esa feel hota h k bat kuch jami ni jese Aarav ka rescue mission hi le lo surya super flash...

Bhai y update gazab ta ek dum orignal maza agya....jwab nhi apka

Dear writer, Muje review k bare m jda to ni pta bt itna kahunga k apne IRON MAN, CAPTION AMERICA-CIVILWAR, FAST N FURIOUS 7, MISSION IMPOSSIBLE 5, JAMES BOND, HOBBS N SHOW, THE FLASH aur kayi movies ka touch apni ek hi story m dia, ksm s maza agya jb b hm esi movies dkhte h to lgta h k yr thoda...

Neha ka plan kuch aur hi lgra h use akki pr vishwas h k wo koi na koi jugaad kr lega verna wo kiran ko na bachati y kh k ki hotel akki ka h aur usne hotel staff ki complaint k chalte sunil k bambu krwa dia wo sidhe sidhe kh deti k akki kiran sb mile hue h, jb usne akki ko maare jane ki bat apne...

Thanks for rply bhai Apka phla reason justified h k mahadev ne naina s chhupaya h to kuch to wjh hogi. Bt y dusra reason dumdar ni lgra h bhai qki naina ko b kaha pta ta k uski maa jinda h infact jb tk uske baba ne ni btaya k wo unki ni kisi aur ki beti h tb tk to use b ni pta ta agr wo bina...

Bhai akhirkar itne wqt k bd y din aa hi gya, phle to m y kahunga k apne bht sunder tarike s ab tak ki puri story likhi jis trh s story k start m ise criticise kia jara ta usse kahi jda view is story ko mile so congratulations for that... personally meri b y one of the favourite stories m s ek h...

Bhai ksm s starting mst h khaskar maa s jo conversation dikhaya h gzb comedy h bt ek bat...y k..yaar tmhe koi dusra nam ni mila hero ka LALLU really......LALLU...bhai hero ki agr beijjati krni ho to use LALLU bol do ksm s katayi Chutiya nam h...! No offense plz, it really hurt..!!

Bhai y kya tha...?? Y anshu ka character laye kaha s ho, sala rahul k bina jane hi uski life ki sbse bdi 2 problm dur kr di aur use pta b ni chala aur confidence level ka to khna hi kya uska, itne bde bde kand aur ek chapat na khaya, aur sb ese ready ho jate h jese hypnotherapy krwai ho... awesome!