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Pta nhi ..

Thnks dost apke beautiful coments k lie... Apne kmi to kuch km ginayi hai...kuch mai btati hu...arushi ki entry wesi nhi hui jesi honi chahiye... Iski entry mujhe villan jesi krni thi...jo mene ki bhi lekin word jada ho gye to bht kuch dlt krna pda. ..murga,murgi ya ya word mistake to pkka hone...

Yadi aisa hai to vakai ye update kabile tareef hai...lekin mai is story ke bare me kuch nhi janti...to ek update pdhne se kya smjh aayega...anyway...ye to apne bta diya ki isme character animal lover hai.. ye achha hai....keep updating @nain11ster sir...

Woww....thats really a good update.... Bhai ko pta bhi nhi ki uske sath uski bahan hai... Or uski biwi ka to kya hi kahna ... Is scene me bht mja aaya or usse jada mja tb aayega jb rahul ko bbi pta hoga... Waiting for more updates.... Good nerration,superb scene,and perfect imagination...

Sir wo ahankar se grasit nhi hai... Ye apke dekhne ka najariya hai... He is very tallanted and respected parson here .. mujhe ye jankar ashcharya ho rha hai ki unhe or unke achhe swabhav ko yha sbbi jante hai ..lekin ap unse agyan kaise rah gye.... Yha kuch hi log hai jo bahut samjhdar or...

Yaadein..... By @SANJU ( V. R. )Wowww...bahut hi khubsurat story thi... I know ao jada story likhte nhi pr jo b likhte ho kmaal likhte ho... Ye story bht hi jada bhavnatmak thi.. Ek college life ki love story..jinme bahut hi jada pyar tha,kuch fmly problms ki vjh se unki shadi nhi ho payi...

dear @Ass licker ji... Apki story bahut achhi chal rhi hai...ykeen maniye mai kabhi running story nhi pdhti,hmesha cmplt hone ke bad hi pdhti hu... But apki story pahli story hai jo mai running pdh rhi hu..bsc its very good...Kisi ko cmnt krna aata hai kisi ko nhi ..kisi ke pas time n...

Kyuki... Inhe hdse jada tareef chahiye...

Line - Strictly Warning I hate such comment like nice update, keep posting, next update please, waiting for next update, bhut shandar update blah blah etc Mention best part in comment box for further update...is line se hm lekhak mahodya ki manodasha ko smjh skte hai ...islie story yhi stop...

Writer ki ek line se uske dimak me chal rhi kashmkash ka pta lg gya...or kashmkash yhi kahti ki ...ab or nhi...😀😀😀

Lekin ab ye kahani aage nhi bdhegi...i know...😀😀😀

Thnks @Mahi Maurya ji... Wese ap shuru se hi kucu jada hi bcha chdhakar tareef karti aayi hai...ye thik nhi hai... Utna bhi khas nhi hoti meri story...ha khamishiya jaroor achhi thi ,tujhme rab dikhta hai pur nhi ho payi...docmo wali...ha wo bhi achhi thi...or rahi prakriti ki baat to ...yes...

Thnks Sanju ji...story mujhe b thik lgi pr arushi ko jaise instroduce krna chahti thi wese nhi kr paayi...arushi ke upr jada high light nhi kr payi...shadbo ki limitaton ne mujhe rok diya ,wrna arushi ki entry hi bahut sahi soch kr rkhi thi mene jo us story ko batter bna sakti thi...khair..ha ye...

Haa ..nature bhi bht achha hai inka...bs copy cat wali adat nhi gyi...hmesa dusre ke coment copy krke as it is likh dete hai...

Parkas...tum nhi sudhroge na...tumhari copy krne ki adat gyi nhi...tumne se coment copy kr liya...anyway thnks ..