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Shukriya bhai ki aapko meri story achhi lag rahi hai.Bhaii tumne toh just abhi padhna start Kiya h lekin story toh aise start ki h jese bhut experience hoo, na jyda faltu likha na faltu ka drama,,, bahut he alg aur exciting h tumhri story and writing skill ,,,, kafi sari stories pr tumhre comments pdhe h maine,
Update maine likh liya hai dekhte hain kab tak de pata hoon.Waiting for next update.
Thank you brother for supporting....Nice and superb update.....
Chalo koi baat nahi aage se dhyan rakhunga jab dusri koi story likhunga.Good writing
Lakin pehla sex itni asaani sy nahi hona chahiye tha. Uss k liye arjun ko kch effort krvani chahiye thi. Ye tou sb kch arjun ko plate per rakh kr mil gya.
Aur pehli he bar itni achi performance reality sy kch door ha.
Ye mera opinion ha. Nothing wrong with your stroy.
I'll keep reading.
intezaar kar rahe hai next update ka dhalchandarun bhai....Update 57 : The past is very painful.
# Story of Divya and her family.
# Chemistryelements.
# A deadliest poison potassium cyanide.
# Aaj tak ka sabse bada update. Isme ek question diya gaya hai last me yadi aap chahe to uska answer de bhi sakte hain aur nahi bhi aap logo ki marji koi jaruri nahi hai.
Bas pick aur gifs add karne me jitna time lagega.intezaar kar rahe hai next update ka dhalchandarun bhai....
Intzar rahegaUpdate 57 : The past is very painful.
# Story of Divya and her family.
# Chemistryelements.
# A deadliest poison potassium cyanide.
# Aaj tak ka sabse bada update. Isme ek question diya gaya hai last me yadi aap chahe to uska answer de bhi sakte hain aur nahi bhi aap logo ki marji koi jaruri nahi hai.
Wow, such a nice gesture by Akhil. Love youUpdate 8 : Secret of Kajal's happiness
AFTER THE DINNER :in the bedroom of kajal Chachi.
Akhil:kya bat hai sweetie tum bahut khush lag rahi ho do dino se kya bat hai?
Kajal:ye sab humare Arjun ke aane ke karan hua hai.
Chacha:wo bhala kaise dear?
Kajal:kyonki wo mujhe aur Dhruv dono ko as a friend treat karta hai aur to aur aaj hum teeno ne kaphi achhe beautiful moments enjoy kiye.
Akhil chacha : Aur Kiya Kiya tum teeno ne ?
Kajal:jayada kuch nahi sabse pehle movie Gaye, phir wahan se park ghumne uske baad restaurant me lassi pikar Ghar aa gaye.
Akhil:kya tum itna se hi khush ho gayi?
Kajal:no dear dekho na Dhruv ab hamesha Arjun ke hi sath rahne laga hai dono bhai jaise best friend ban gaye hain.
Akhil:sahi kaha tumne sweetheart hamara Arjun aisa hi sabse alag sabse innocence pyar karne wala.
Kajal:yes dear Ghar aakar Maine use emotional hokar gale laga liya tha... badle me usne bhi mujhe gale laga liya aur kahne laga Chachi we are family aur mere galo ko chum liya.
Maine bhi use chum liya to Dhruv kahne laga mumma mujhe bhi kissi chahiye to maine Dhruv ke galo aur lips pe kiss kar liya to Dhruv ,Arjun se kahne laga bhaiya mumma mujhse aapse jayada pyar karti hai mumma ne mujhe galo aur lips dono jagah kissi di.
Akhil : Aage kya hua batao main bhi tumlog ka pyar ke bare me sunkar emotional ho raha hoon.
Kajal:achanak mujhe pata nahi kya hua maine Arjun ke lips par kisskar liya.
Na mujhe kuch samajh aaya na Arjun ko wo bechara to shocked rah gaya aur apne room me chala gaya.
Akhil:koi bat nahi jo hua achha hua dono bhai ko tumne equal treat Kiya isse Arjun bhi yahan jayada khush rahega.
Kajal:kya tumhe bura nahi laga mujhe Arjun ko kiss karna.
Akhil:no dear mujhe kyon bura lagega wo bhi tumhara beta hi hai
Waise tum chaho to Arjun ke sath aage ..........................
Kajal:no baby main is bare me nahi soch sakti kabhi bhi aisa.
Akhil:kyo?
Kajal:kyonki Arjun bahut hi innocent hai.
Akhil:Wahi to main kah raha hoon tum uske sath aage.
Kajal:no dear wo kahin kuch galat na samajh le mere bare me.
Akhil:to kya tum use pyar karne lagi ho?
Kajal:sayad yes.
Akhil:Koi bat nahi dear it's ok phir se tumhe pyar ho hi gaya mere alawa kisi dusre se.
I am happy for both of you.
Kajal:Par kya Arjun meri feeling ko samajh payega.
Akhil: wait jabtak use khud samajh na aaye tum kya chahti ho
Kajal:yes baby main wait karungi use khud hi accept karna hoga aur aage badhna hoga.
Akhil:aur agar wo na samajh paaya to tum kya karogi?
Kajal:phir main bhi uske sath normally rahungi.
Akhil: I hope mere baby ko uska pyar jald mile.
That's it for this episode stay tuned.