Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

[Vickey1211]

Mast update h bhai maza a gya

 

[Loveshuda111]

Bhai aapka hr update bhut hi jhakass rhta h
Khass krke aapne is khani ko emotionally rakhte hue fantasy ki taraf mod diya h gajab lga
Us story ke bhi readers khus ho jaayenge

Karan or jyoti ka pyar bhut hi achhe tarike se aapne dikhaya h

Bachhe ki bali de di apne bete ko bachane ke keliye

Khair e baat to aaye din news me rhti h

 

[Jitu kumar]

Awesome update bhai,
aakhir kar mv ka naam malum chal hi gaya, uska naam kaalbhanu hai aur usne aghora se mla aur commissioner ko aaj hi bulakar bali dilwane ke liye kaha tha,
vahi dusri taraf kfd aghora dwara chhote bachche ki bali dene ke kaaran kafi krodhit hai lekin vo niyati ke chakra ko todkar use dandit nhi kar sakte hai,
vahi dusri or karan ke pass raat me aakhir kaun baithi hui thi ?
aur shivani bhi dono bhai bahan ke sath rukha vyavahar kar rhi hai,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

 

[Monkey D. Dragon]

update 1
very emotional & lovely update bro
these bro & sis's bonding is very strong
hope it will be their plus point to getting them close to each other
why is their parents avoiding them
what Happened in the past
let's see what happens next

 

[Monkey D. Dragon]

update 2
very traumatic update bro
2nd mummy's happy B day turned sady day for karan-jyoti
cause of Papa's anger
some illogical situation
he beat the crap about Karan although they didn't give a damn about karan-jyoti
but for my surprise don't they have any relatives at all cause there were no mention of them
if they were their or in the story why didn't they help karan-jyoti in their hard times
so much sufferings for them
let's see will they able to get over with it
or their parents are gonna become normal one day or not

 

[Monkey D. Dragon]

update 3
good one bro
taking care of Karan expresses her love
let's what's gonna happen

 

[Monkey D. Dragon]

update 4
nice update bro
some conspiracy happened
looks like it is far more big than my thoughts
let's see what happened in the past with them will they able to relize it or not
if they then what step will they take to make things right
Nice creation bro

 

[Monkey D. Dragon]

update 5
lovely update bro
so karan-jyoti are coming closer to each other
although they didn't know it
hope they realize it soon
let's see when it will be revealed

 

[Monkey D. Dragon]

update 6
traumatic+lovely update bro
some brotherly love shown for Jyoti
and expressing how much love they have for each other
and it's pure love
so the flash back is revealing after all
it's a flashback of karan-jyoti's angle
and I think the truth is hidden by their father
let's see what that was
and what they saw now

 

[Monkey D. Dragon]

update 7
congrats on your first update
nice writing skills
looks it will be turning off the story
action was good
so new sis's name is Radha
and she's got a mother
hope she's mother of Karan-jyoti
let's see what happens next
keep it up